prune pauses from ch2

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -185,7 +185,10 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "O-oh yeah.{w=0.4} She's staring at me{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "...with that look.{w=0.4} {cps=*0.4}Fucking hell.{/cps}"
+    "...with that look."
+    
+    "{cps=*0.4}Fucking hell.{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     "Has she never seen a human in her life?"
     pause .5
@@ -345,14 +348,14 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
 
-    "The force is enough for my feet to get under me,{w=0.4} stumbling back up to stand before the pair of strangers."
+    "The force is enough for my feet to get under me, stumbling back up to stand before the pair of strangers."
 
     "It also felt like enough force to pull my arm out of its socket."
 
     show anon neutral at acenter#
     pause .5
 
-    A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} 'Sup?"
+    A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} 'Sup?"
 
     Nas "You're Anon, yeah?"
 
@@ -372,6 +375,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     N "Where are my manners!{fast} My name is Naomi, student council president and your guide."
     
     N "It’s my sincere pleasure to make your acquaintance Anon!"
+    pause .5
 
     Nas "We’re your welcoming committee."
 
@@ -397,7 +401,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naomi neutral at sleft with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
     pause 0.5
 
-    "{i}\"Volcano High and You:{w=0.5} A New Beginning to Adulthood.\"{/i}"
+    "{i}\"Volcano High and You:{w=0.4} A New Beginning to Adulthood.\"{/i}"
 
     "The title alone makes me gag."
     
@@ -549,8 +553,8 @@ label chapter_1:
     "Naomi grabs my hand and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    stop music fadeout 2
-    "..."
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
     play ambient 'audio/effects/alarmAirraidSiren.ogg'
     pause 0.5
 
@@ -585,6 +589,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause .5
 
     "SHE ALREADY HAS A BOYFRIEND DOESN’T SHE?"
+    pause .5
 
     "WAIT"
 
@@ -600,7 +605,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     hide dimmer_darker with dissolve
     pause .25
 
-    "Okay,{w=.3} okay.{w=.5} Just stay silent and don’t make a mess of things."
+    "Okay, okay. Just stay silent and don’t make a mess of things."
 
     show anon:
         easeout 1.0 xalign 0.001
@@ -629,12 +634,12 @@ label chapter_1:
     with Dissolve(1.5)
     pause .5
 
-    N "Here we are Anon.{w=0.4} Principal Spears should be able to help with your money situation."
+    N "Here we are Anon. Principal Spears should be able to help with your money situation."
     pause .5
 
     "Huwhat."
 
-    "Oh.{w=0.4} Right."
+    "Oh. Right."
 
     show naomi neutral with dissolve
 
@@ -762,7 +767,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
 
-    "The artificial ring of a bell blares from a speaker on the wall.{w=0.5} With it everyone waits as the teacher finally enters the room and shuts the door."
+    "The artificial ring of a bell blares from a speaker on the wall. With it everyone waits as the teacher finally enters the room and shuts the door."
 
     show jinflip at sleft with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
@@ -772,7 +777,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "What"
 
-    Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun{w=0.25} puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu{/cps}"
+    Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
     "Naomi coughs and makes a subtle nod up."
@@ -810,7 +815,11 @@ label chapter_1:
     A "I don’t really have any hobbies."
     pause .5
 
-    "I wanted to flee.{w} Hide away.{w} Anything to avoid those judging eyes."
+    "I wanted to flee."
+    
+    "Hide away."
+    
+    "Anything to avoid those judging eyes."
     pause .5
 
     N "{cps=*0.5}What was your old school like?{/cps}"
@@ -823,11 +832,13 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(1)
 
-    "My throat clenches.{w} I think back again to it all."
+    "My throat clenches. I think back again to it all."
 
-    A "Uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.4} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
+    A "Uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
 
-    "There’s whispers now.{w} The hushed tones, silenced snickers, blending with the everpresent stares."
+    "There’s whispers now."
+    
+    "The hushed tones, silenced snickers, blending with the everpresent stares."
 
     "My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it. See the cold chill racing over me."
 
@@ -934,7 +945,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 0.75
 
     show naser explanatory with Dissolve(0.15)
-    Nas "Whoa there!{w=0.5} Nearly dropped your food Anon."
+    Nas "Whoa there!{w=0.4} Nearly dropped your food Anon."
 
     show naser happy
     show anon neutral flip
@@ -990,9 +1001,9 @@ label chapter_1:
         pause .25
         repeat
 
-    N "SO!{w=0.5} What do you think of Volcano High!{w=0.3} How about your classes?{w=0.3} You seem-"
+    N "SO!{w=0.4} What do you think of Volcano High!{w=0.3} How about your classes?{w=0.3} You seem-"
 
-    "I just nod along,{w=0.3} starting to not pay attention."
+    "I just nod along, starting to not pay attention."
 
     show naomi neutral flip at sright with ease
 
@@ -1095,7 +1106,9 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "My stomach roils at the V-word."
 
-    A "{cps=*0.25}Maaaaybe{/cps} another time, sorry.{w=0.4} So about that concert Naser?"
+    A "{cps=*0.25}Maaaaybe{/cps} another time, sorry." 
+    
+    A "So about that concert Naser?"
 
     show naomi sad flip with dissolve
     pause 0.5
@@ -1141,7 +1154,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(0.25)
 
-    N "{cps=*0.3}Oh dear.{/cps}{w=0.6} Naser why don’t you split your sandwich with him?"
+    N "{cps=*0.3}Oh dear.{/cps}{w=0.4} Naser why don’t you split your sandwich with him?"
 
     show naser annoyed flip with Dissolve(0.25)