more ch1 tweaks

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -59,15 +59,15 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     menu:
         "Reply to the obvious shill thread":
-          "I replied to the obvious shill thread"
+            pass
 
         "Bait the obvious underaged poster":
-          "I baited as underage B&"
+            pass
 
 
     "The thread goes 404 right as I'm ready to post my well thought-out reply."
 
-    "Better hide my phone before someone sees fit to take it from me,{w=0.4} the only human around town.{w=0.4} I think."
+    "Better hide my phone before someone sees fit to take it from me, the only human around town. I think."
     window hide
 
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.8, 8, 'ambient')
@@ -211,7 +211,12 @@ label chapter_1:
     scene fangtalkingwithtrish with Dissolve(1.5)
     pause 1
 
-    "Huh.{w} She did.{w} I feel like I should say something."
+    "Huh."
+    
+    "She did."
+    pause .5
+
+    "I feel like I should say something."
     play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
     pause 1
 
@@ -265,7 +270,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "And this is my life now for the next year. I think back to my old man’s ultimatum."
 
-    "{i}Once the lease is done,Anon, either college or the service.{/i}"
+    "{i}Once the lease is done, Anon, either college or the service.{/i}"
 
     "{i}{cps=*0.35}I don’t care which.{/cps}{/i}"
     pause 1
@@ -281,7 +286,9 @@ label chapter_1:
     unknown "{cps=*0.5}Would you happen to be Anon?{/cps}" #Naomi
 
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve
-    "I look up.{w=.5} The bench broke down."
+    "I look up." 
+    
+    "The bench broke down."
 
     show naomi silo shocked:
         easein_quart 0.5 xalign -0.05