From dadc8d5b4b0d9a8099a532d935ebe22b360a90ce Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Wed, 6 Oct 2021 20:30:01 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] prune pauses from ch2 --- .../1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy | 53 +- game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy | 1006 +++++++++-------- 2 files changed, 589 insertions(+), 470 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy index 5fd77e5..74d0a5f 100644 --- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy +++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy @@ -185,7 +185,10 @@ label chapter_1: "O-oh yeah.{w=0.4} She's staring at me{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" - "...with that look.{w=0.4} {cps=*0.4}Fucking hell.{/cps}" + "...with that look." + + "{cps=*0.4}Fucking hell.{/cps}" + pause .5 "Has she never seen a human in her life?" pause .5 @@ -345,14 +348,14 @@ label chapter_1: show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve - "The force is enough for my feet to get under me,{w=0.4} stumbling back up to stand before the pair of strangers." + "The force is enough for my feet to get under me, stumbling back up to stand before the pair of strangers." "It also felt like enough force to pull my arm out of its socket." show anon neutral at acenter# pause .5 - A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} 'Sup?" + A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} 'Sup?" Nas "You're Anon, yeah?" @@ -372,6 +375,7 @@ label chapter_1: N "Where are my manners!{fast} My name is Naomi, student council president and your guide." N "It’s my sincere pleasure to make your acquaintance Anon!" + pause .5 Nas "We’re your welcoming committee." @@ -397,7 +401,7 @@ label chapter_1: show naomi neutral at sleft with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp) pause 0.5 - "{i}\"Volcano High and You:{w=0.5} A New Beginning to Adulthood.\"{/i}" + "{i}\"Volcano High and You:{w=0.4} A New Beginning to Adulthood.\"{/i}" "The title alone makes me gag." @@ -549,8 +553,8 @@ label chapter_1: "Naomi grabs my hand and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause 0.5 - stop music fadeout 2 - "..." + stop music fadeout 3 + "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}" play ambient 'audio/effects/alarmAirraidSiren.ogg' pause 0.5 @@ -585,6 +589,7 @@ label chapter_1: pause .5 "SHE ALREADY HAS A BOYFRIEND DOESN’T SHE?" + pause .5 "WAIT" @@ -600,7 +605,7 @@ label chapter_1: hide dimmer_darker with dissolve pause .25 - "Okay,{w=.3} okay.{w=.5} Just stay silent and don’t make a mess of things." + "Okay, okay. Just stay silent and don’t make a mess of things." show anon: easeout 1.0 xalign 0.001 @@ -629,12 +634,12 @@ label chapter_1: with Dissolve(1.5) pause .5 - N "Here we are Anon.{w=0.4} Principal Spears should be able to help with your money situation." + N "Here we are Anon. Principal Spears should be able to help with your money situation." pause .5 "Huwhat." - "Oh.{w=0.4} Right." + "Oh. Right." show naomi neutral with dissolve @@ -762,7 +767,7 @@ label chapter_1: show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve - "The artificial ring of a bell blares from a speaker on the wall.{w=0.5} With it everyone waits as the teacher finally enters the room and shuts the door." + "The artificial ring of a bell blares from a speaker on the wall. With it everyone waits as the teacher finally enters the room and shuts the door." show jinflip at sleft with Dissolve(1) pause .5 @@ -772,7 +777,7 @@ label chapter_1: "What" - Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun{w=0.25} puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu{/cps}" + Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu{/cps}" pause 0.5 "Naomi coughs and makes a subtle nod up." @@ -810,7 +815,11 @@ label chapter_1: A "I don’t really have any hobbies." pause .5 - "I wanted to flee.{w} Hide away.{w} Anything to avoid those judging eyes." + "I wanted to flee." + + "Hide away." + + "Anything to avoid those judging eyes." pause .5 N "{cps=*0.5}What was your old school like?{/cps}" @@ -823,11 +832,13 @@ label chapter_1: show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(1) - "My throat clenches.{w} I think back again to it all." + "My throat clenches. I think back again to it all." - A "Uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.4} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}" + A "Uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}" - "There’s whispers now.{w} The hushed tones, silenced snickers, blending with the everpresent stares." + "There’s whispers now." + + "The hushed tones, silenced snickers, blending with the everpresent stares." "My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it. See the cold chill racing over me." @@ -934,7 +945,7 @@ label chapter_1: pause 0.75 show naser explanatory with Dissolve(0.15) - Nas "Whoa there!{w=0.5} Nearly dropped your food Anon." + Nas "Whoa there!{w=0.4} Nearly dropped your food Anon." show naser happy show anon neutral flip @@ -990,9 +1001,9 @@ label chapter_1: pause .25 repeat - N "SO!{w=0.5} What do you think of Volcano High!{w=0.3} How about your classes?{w=0.3} You seem-" + N "SO!{w=0.4} What do you think of Volcano High!{w=0.3} How about your classes?{w=0.3} You seem-" - "I just nod along,{w=0.3} starting to not pay attention." + "I just nod along, starting to not pay attention." show naomi neutral flip at sright with ease @@ -1095,7 +1106,9 @@ label chapter_1: "My stomach roils at the V-word." - A "{cps=*0.25}Maaaaybe{/cps} another time, sorry.{w=0.4} So about that concert Naser?" + A "{cps=*0.25}Maaaaybe{/cps} another time, sorry." + + A "So about that concert Naser?" show naomi sad flip with dissolve pause 0.5 @@ -1141,7 +1154,7 @@ label chapter_1: show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(0.25) - N "{cps=*0.3}Oh dear.{/cps}{w=0.6} Naser why don’t you split your sandwich with him?" + N "{cps=*0.3}Oh dear.{/cps}{w=0.4} Naser why don’t you split your sandwich with him?" show naser annoyed flip with Dissolve(0.25) diff --git a/game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy b/game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy index e801a5c..3c54827 100644 --- a/game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy +++ b/game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@ label chapter_2: - scene room anon dark with fade - + scene room anon dark with Dissolve(2) "{cps=*0.2}-- Two Days Later --{/cps}" - pause .6 + pause .5 "Alarm is off" + pause .5 "You know the drill." @@ -14,35 +14,42 @@ label chapter_2: "Combat roll,{fast} head butt,{w=.3} victory screech." with vpunch "Breakfast,{w=.3} shitposting,{w=.3} clothes." + pause .5 - show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve + show anon neutral at acenter with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 "I’m pretty good at this." "I think I’ve finally found a decent routine for the rest of the year." - "I might have to go easy on the shitposting though,{w=.4} yesterday I might have over indulged{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "I might have to go easy on the shitposting though, yesterday I might have over indulged{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 "But{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "I’ve succeeded in turning invisible,{w=.4} not completely but so far I’m happy." + "I’ve succeeded in turning invisible, not completely but so far I’m happy." - "Even the stupid stuff with Naser seems settled,{w=.4} I can just cruise through schooling and shitpost in the evening." + "Even the stupid stuff with Naser seems settled, I can just cruise through schooling and shitpost in the evening." pause .5 "Perfection." pause .5 - "Day four out of however many days are left in the year.{w=.5} So far so good." + "Day four out of however many days are left in the year. So far so good." + pause .5 - play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorLoop.ogg' fadein 2 - scene skinrow with fade - "It’s a bit of a walk,{w=.4} so I get my phone out and start posting on a shitty imageboard." + play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorLoop.ogg' fadein 3 + scene skinrow with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 + + "It’s a bit of a walk, so I get my phone out and start posting on a shitty imageboard." + pause .5 show anonphone at center with easeinbottom - "Baiting people into replying to my posts isn’t the most rewarding of hobbies,{w=.4} but it passes the time." + "Baiting people into replying to my posts isn’t the most rewarding of hobbies, but it passes the time." pause .5 A "{color=#78FF65}>Meteor dodgers{/color}{w=.3}{nw}" @@ -53,14 +60,17 @@ label chapter_2: "That oughtta get a few." pause .5 - "Just before I hit the reply button,{w=.3} I sense the air behind me turn warmer.{w=.5} A few wildflowers growing in the cracks of the sidewalk bloom in seconds." + "Just before I hit the reply button, I sense the air behind me turn warmer." + + "A few wildflowers growing in the cracks of the sidewalk bloom in seconds." hide anonphone with easeoutbottom - scene black with fade + scene black with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' - "{i}She’s here.{/i}" + "She’s here." scene outside school show anon neutral at aright @@ -89,31 +99,29 @@ label chapter_2: A "Good morning." pause .5 - A "Don’t you walk with Naser to school?{w=.5} Where is he?" + A "Don’t you walk with Naser to school? Where is he?" show naomi sad with dissolve + N "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}He went early today to help set up another student event." - N "{cps=*.1}...{/cps} He went early today to help set up another student event." - - A "Oh.{w=0.4} He’s certainly someone you can count on for that." + A "Oh. He’s certainly someone you can count on for that." show naomi happy with dissolve - - N "He really is!{w=0.4} I’m so proud of him!" + N "He really is! I’m so proud of him!" + pause .5 A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show naomi neutral with dissolve - - N "Umm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Anon,{w=.4} have you seen our lovely award-winning school gardens yet?" + N "Umm{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Anon, have you seen our lovely award-winning school gardens yet?" A "Gardens win awards?" - N "They do!{w=.4} Come on,{w=.3} I’ll show you." + N "They do! Come on, I’ll show you." show naomi: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.65 - A "Actually,{w=0.3} wait,{w=0.3} {cps=*.4}I don’t really wan-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}" + A "Actually, wait,{w=0.3} {cps=*.4}I don’t really wan-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}" show anon: easein_quad 1 xalign 0.5 @@ -125,8 +133,8 @@ label chapter_2: with dissolve pause .7 - scene black with fade - "Naomi grabs my hand again and when I come to,{w=.4} we’re already there." + scene black with Dissolve(1) + "Naomi grabs my hand again and when I come to, we’re already there." pause .5 scene flower garden @@ -135,7 +143,7 @@ label chapter_2: yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5 with Dissolve(1.5) - N "And here they are,{w=.4} our school’s flowerbeds!" + N "And here they are, our school’s flowerbeds!" show naomi explanatory flip N "Aren’t they just magnificent?" @@ -145,14 +153,15 @@ label chapter_2: A "{cps=*0.6}Please stop dragging me by the hand.{/cps}" pause .5 - "She is right though,{w=.4} the gardens here are absolutely stunning." + "She is right though, the gardens here are absolutely stunning." - "I can’t tell what’s more colorful,{w=.5} the bushes of flowers,{w=.4} or the students that tend to them." + "I can’t tell what’s more colorful, the bushes of flowers, or the students that tend to them." pause .5 - A "Yeah,{w=.4} the gardeners here do a great job." + A "Yeah, the gardeners here do a great job." - N "Hm?{w=.5} Oh,{w=.3} yeah,{w=.3} you can thank the gardening club for that." + N "Hm?{w=.4} Oh, yeah, you can thank the gardening club for that." + pause .5 "Naomi guides me through the gardens,{w=.4} occasionally giving tour trivia." @@ -164,8 +173,10 @@ label chapter_2: show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) show naomi explanatory - N "And here’s where the freshmen planted flower seeds at the start of the school year,{w=.5} by the end they’ll bloom wonderfully{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show naomi neutral + N "And here’s where the freshmen planted flower seeds at the start of the school year!" + + N "By the end they’ll bloom wonderfully{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) N "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}" @@ -178,17 +189,19 @@ label chapter_2: "Is she coming onto me?" pause .5 - "I want to ask if she’s upset about something,{w=.4} but is that even right of me to do?" + "I want to ask if she’s upset about something, but is that even right of me to do?" pause .5 menu: "Ask what’s up": - + + pause .5 jump .naomiWhatsUp "Not my place to pry": + pause .5 jump .naomiNotMyPlace label .naomiWhatsUp: @@ -197,21 +210,22 @@ label chapter_2: N "Hm?" - A "Something’s bothering you,{w=0.4} right?" + A "Something’s bothering you, right?" + pause .5 - N "Not really{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} A bit,{w=.3} I guess{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + N "Not really{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} A bit, I guess{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 jump .naomiStressMerge label .naomiNotMyPlace: - "Nah,{w=0.4} I don’t know her that well." + "Nah, I don’t know her that well." "If it’s something personal Naser can help her with it." pause .5 - N "I’m sorry,{w=.4} I’ve been a bit stressed lately,{w=.2} Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + N "I’m sorry, I’ve been a bit stressed lately, Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" jump .naomiStressMerge @@ -221,80 +235,84 @@ label chapter_2: A "Something wrong with him?" - N "No,{w=.3} nothing’s wrong{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + N "No, nothing’s wrong{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - N "It’s more that he worries a bit too much for that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} sister{w=.2} of his." + N "It’s more that he worries a bit too much for that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} sister of his." - N "Oftentimes when I’m with him,{w=.3} he’s anxious about something she’s done." + N "Oftentimes when I’m with him, he’s anxious about something she’s done." - N "I’d just like him to relax about it a bit more,{w=.3} I suppose." - pause .6 + N "I’d just like him to relax about it a bit more, I suppose." + pause .5 N "Is that selfish of me to say?" pause .5 A "I mean{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "I’ve never had a girlfriend,{w=.3} but I imagine that it’d be a bit inconsiderate to constantly be worried in front of her." + A "I’ve never had a girlfriend, but I imagine that it’d be a bit inconsiderate to constantly be worried in front of her." A "I dunno." - "Naomi nods her head a bit,{w=.4} staring at her shoes." + "Naomi nods her head a bit, staring at her shoes." + pause .5 - N "Sorry,{w=.4} I just wanted to share with someone." + N "Sorry, I just wanted to share with someone." - N "Guess I ended up doing the same thing I’m complaining about here,{w=.4} huh?" + N "Guess I ended up doing the same thing I’m complaining about here, huh?" A "Don’t sweat it." pause.5 show naomi shocked: - easein 0.15 xalign 0.15 + easein_quart 1 xalign 0.15 "She checks her phone and jumps a bit." - N "Oh!{w=.4} I’m going to be late!" + N "Oh! I’m going to be late!" N "I still need to check in at the front desk{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show naomi considering with dissolve - N "Really sorry,{w=.2} Anon,{w=.3} but the tour will have to end here." + N "Really sorry, Anon, but the tour will have to end here." - A "It was fine,{w=.4} hopefully it just doesn’t make my allergies flare." + A "It was fine, hopefully it just doesn’t make my allergies flare." show naomi neutral: easeout 0.75 xalign 0.75 pause 0.25 hide naomi with dissolve - stop music fadeout 2 + stop music fadeout 4 "She waves and runs off to a side door." "I should be getting to homeroom soon, too." - play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1.5 + play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 3 scene hallway show anon neutral flip at aright - with fade + with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 "I push open the usual side entrance I take and enter the hallway that’s starting to become familiar now." + pause .5 - "Still occasionally glancing at the room numbers just to make absolute sure,{w=.4} I noticed someone in the countercurrent walking past." + "Still occasionally glancing at the room numbers just to make absolute sure, I noticed someone in the countercurrent walking past." - stop ambient fadeout 1 + stop ambient fadeout 3 play music "audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg" fadein 1.0 show fang considering with Dissolve(2): xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0 - pause .5 + pause 1 "It was one of the bass players from the concert two days ago." - "Naser said she was his sister,{w=.4} right?" + "Naser said she was his sister, right?" + pause .5 - "Glancing at her for a moment,{w=.4} the expression on her face sort of reminds me of something." + "Glancing at her for a moment, the expression on her face sort of reminds me of something." - "It was probably just leftover embarrassment from the concert,{w=.4} but she seemed to have a lost look on her face." + "It was probably just leftover embarrassment from the concert, but she seemed to have a lost look on her face." "Or maybe it was confusion." @@ -305,13 +323,14 @@ label chapter_2: "I can't help but think that that must be how I looked on my first day." - "But it was my first day of school,{w=.4} she had been going here all year." + "But it was my first day of school, she had been going here all year." "What's her excuse then?" + pause .5 - "Either way,{w=.4} doesn’t look like she recognizes me." + "Either way, doesn’t look like she recognizes me." - "Objective one out of whatever of the current year is accomplished then,{w=.4} next one is memorizing the class schedule." + "Objective one out of whatever of the current year is accomplished then, next one is memorizing the class schedule." "And that says it’s home room in fifteen minutes." pause .5 @@ -320,14 +339,14 @@ label chapter_2: "{i}*shudder*{/i}" - "She’s just too{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} too {i}sweet{/i}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} and like...{w=.4} Obnoxious{cps=*.1}...{/cps} " + "She’s just too{cps=*.1}...{/cps}too {i}sweet{/i}{cps=*.1}...{/cps} and like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} obnoxious{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "Ugh,{w=.4} I can’t find the right way to put it,{w=.3} but she feels so...{w=.3} movie-like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Ugh, I can’t find the right way to put it, but she feels so{cps=*.1}...{/cps} movie-like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Like an act." pause .5 - "Day four,{w=.2} Anon.{w=.4} Day four." + "Day four, Anon. Day four." pause .5 "What the hell?" @@ -337,12 +356,12 @@ label chapter_2: "Is she a junkie?" show fang: - easein_quad 1.0 xalign 0.5 + ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5 pause 1 show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) show anon: - easein_quart .5 xalign 1.05 + easein_quart 1 xalign 1.05 pause .25 "OH GOD DON’T COME ANY CLOSER." @@ -350,7 +369,7 @@ label chapter_2: "I DON’T WANNA GET SHANKED BY A JUNKIE PTERODACTYL." pause .5 - F "You{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4}uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2}SKINNIE." + F "You{cps=*.1}...{/cps}uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2}SKINNIE." A "Y{w=.2}-yeah?" @@ -366,36 +385,38 @@ label chapter_2: A "Dinosaurs?" - show fang neutral - F "No!{w=.5} Yellow hoodie,{w=.2} red hair,{w=.2} pink tail,{w=.2} hair buns{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) + F "No!{w=.4} Yellow hoodie, red hair, pink tail, hair buns{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 A "Are you describing one person?" - F "What?{w=.5} No!" + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) + F "What? No!" F "it’s multiple!" pause .5 - A "They’re dinosaurs though,{w=.3} right?" + A "They’re dinosaurs though, right?" - show fang angry + show fang angry with Dissolve(.25) F "WHAT?" A "I don’t know where they went!" + stop music fadeout 4 show fang unimpressed with dissolve - F "{cps=*.5}uuuuuuughhhhhh{/cps}" - - stop music fadeout 2.5 + F "{cps=*.4}uuuuuuughhhhhh{/cps}" + pause .5 show fang: easeout 0.75 xalign 2.1 pause 0.25 hide fang with dissolve - pause .5 + pause 1 - "And just like that,{w=.4} she’s gone." + "And just like that, she’s gone." + pause .5 play music "audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg" fadein 1.0 @@ -404,7 +425,7 @@ label chapter_2: "I call them poison pheromones." pause .5 - "But it is relieving that she didn’t recognize me.{w=.5} Guess Naser didn’t tell her." + "But it is relieving that she didn’t recognize me. Guess Naser didn’t tell her." stop music fadeout 0.69 play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg' @@ -417,45 +438,52 @@ label chapter_2: "My class with Naomi." pause .5 - "If there is a Jurassic God,{w=.4} please make Naomi miss home room today." + "If there is a Jurassic God, please make Naomi miss home room today." stop music fadeout 2 stop sound fadeout 1 - scene black with fade + scene black with Dissolve(1.5) "I’ll even offer a goat sacrifice!" - "..." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 - play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' fadein 1 + play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' fadein 3 scene science class show anon neutral: yalign 0.1 xalign 0.2 - with fade + with Dissolve(1.5) + pause .5 - "The day passes uneventfully until fourth period,{w=0.4} Science Class." + "The day passes uneventfully until fourth period, Science Class." "I find a seat near the back of the room and watch the clock hands tick down the remaining few seconds to the bell." - "Right before the tone,{w=.2} one last student rushes in,{w=.4} out of breath." + "Right before the tone, one last student rushes in, out of breath." pause .5 - "Oh,{w=.4} it's that girl again.{w=.5} I guess we shared a period or two on the first day and I just didn't notice." + "Oh, it's that girl again. I guess we shared a period or two on the first day and I just didn't notice." - "She strides across the room,{w=.4} taking her seat without a word." + "She strides across the room, taking her seat without a word." + pause .5 - "Strangely,{w=.3} nobody seems to acknowledge her.{w=0.5} Not even a sneer or chuckle." + "Strangely, nobody seems to acknowledge her. Not even a sneer or chuckle." - "That’s odd.{w=0.4} Given how many people were there that night,{w=0.3} you’d expect at least a couple of snickers." + "That’s odd." + + "Given how many people were there that night, you’d expect at least a couple of snickers." - "But there she was,{w=0.4} being completely left alone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} Or ignored." + "But there she was, being completely left alone{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Or ignored." + pause .5 "Seems almost worse than getting laughed at." - stop music fadeout 2 + stop music fadeout 4 pause .5 - "The lingering chatter in the room dies out as the teacher stands from his desk,{w=0.4} moving to the front of the room." + "The lingering chatter in the room dies out as the teacher stands from his desk, moving to the front of the room." + pause .5 show farnsworth at sright with Dissolve(1) Drf "Good news everyone!" @@ -463,11 +491,12 @@ label chapter_2: Drf "Today we'll be having a lab on magnetic fields." Drf "Find a partner and get prepared." - + pause .5 hide farnsworth with dissolve + pause .5 - play music 'audio/OST/Many Such Cases of Being So True.ogg' volume .8 - show dimmer_light behind anon with Dissolve(1) + play music 'audio/OST/Many Such Cases of Being So True.ogg' volume .8 fadein 2 + show dimmer_light behind anon with Dissolve(.5) "My heart sunk as those dreaded words passed my ears." pause .5 @@ -475,16 +504,16 @@ label chapter_2: "\"Find a partner.\"" pause .5 - "I know it’s pointless,{w=0.3} but I at least have to try.{w=0.4} Maybe someone was out sick." + "I know it’s pointless, but I at least have to try. Maybe someone was out sick." - "With my luck though,{w=0.3} I’ll probably just end up with that fossil of a teacher." + "With my luck though, I’ll probably just end up with that fossil of a teacher." pause .5 "With everyone else already starting on the assignment I resign myself to working twice as hard." show farnsworth at sright with dissolve - Drf "Hurry up Mr. Anon,{w=0.4} your partner is waiting for you" + Drf "Hurry up Mr. Anon, your partner is waiting for you" stop music fadeout 1.0 hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(1) pause .5 @@ -494,9 +523,10 @@ label chapter_2: Drf "Very well." - Drf "Fang,{w=.3} if you would be so kind to sit next to your new partner." + Drf "Fang, if you would be so kind to sit next to your new partner." hide farnsworth with dissolve + pause .5 "I sat in momentary confusion as someone took the seat next to mine." @@ -504,10 +534,11 @@ label chapter_2: xalign -0.6 yalign 0.0 pause .75 - #--not brazil, Forced text speedup through the following 4 lines - - show dimmer_darker behind anon, fang with Fade(.1, 0, .25, color="#fff") - play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' + show white: + alpha 1 + easein_cubic 1 alpha 0 + show dimmer_darker behind anon, fang + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigPunch.ogg' play ambient "audio/effects/alarmSirenLoop.ogg" "{cps=*2}SPAGHETTI ALERT!!{w=0.6} SPAGHETTI ALERT!!{/cps}" with vpunch @@ -525,21 +556,21 @@ label chapter_2: F "‘Sup." pause .5 - A "Thanks,{w=0.4} you too." + A "Thanks, you too." play ambient "audio/effects/alarmSirenLoop.ogg" fadein 0.69 pause .1 # This was the best I could come up with. Not ideal, but it feels the most immediate given the limitation show dimmer_darker behind anon, fang with Dissolve(0.1) - "SHIT!{w=.6} RECOVERY MANEUVERS NOW!" + "SHIT! RECOVERY MANEUVERS NOW!" stop ambient fadeout 0.69 hide dimmer_darker with dissolve pause .5 - A "I mean,{w=.3} hey.{w=.4} Not much.{w=.4} You?" + A "I mean, hey. Not much. You?" pause .5 # TODO: cheesy success jingle @@ -549,41 +580,45 @@ label chapter_2: "CHAD RECOVERY SUCCESSFUL" pause .5 - F "None of your business.{w=.5} Just do the damn assignment and don’t bother me." + F "None of your business. Just do the damn assignment and don’t bother me." - A "O{w=.1}-oh.{w=.4} You upset right now or something?" + A "O-oh. You upset right now or something?" show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) - F "What was your first fuckin’ clue.{w=.5} Last time I’ll say it,{w=.4} just do the assignment and don’t.{w=.4} Bother.{w=.4} Me." + F "What was your first fuckin’ clue." + + "Last time I’ll say it, just do the assignment and don’t.{w=.4} Bother.{w=.4} Me." pause .5 - "Okay!{w=.4} Got to keep coolheaded." + "Okay! Got to keep coolheaded." pause .5 - A "So this assignment,{w=.2} then." + A "So this assignment, then." + pause .5 - scene black with fade + scene black with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 "With that we open our books and start on trying to decipher who Lorentz is and why his force is magnetic." - "Things are going well for the first few questions,{w=.4} I remember a bit of it from that one time I tried to make a railgun." + "Things are going well for the first few questions, I remember a bit of it from that one time I tried to make a railgun." + pause .5 scene science class show anon neutral: yalign 0.1 xalign 0.2 show fang neutral: xalign -0.6 yalign 0.0 - with fade - - pause 1 + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 show farnsworth at sright with dissolve Drf "How are you two doing so far?" show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) - F "We're{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fine,{w=0.3} Dr. Fernsworth." + F "We're{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fine, Dr. Fernsworth." - Drf "I see,{w=.4} and you Anon?" + Drf "I see, and you Anon?" A "Yeah what she said." pause .5 @@ -591,7 +626,7 @@ label chapter_2: stop music fadeout 2.5 show farnsworth behind fang: - easein_quart 0.8 xalign 1.1 + easein_quart 1 xalign 1.1 show farnsworth concerned with Dissolve(.25) show fang angry with Dissolve(1) @@ -606,7 +641,7 @@ label chapter_2: "Oh." show anon: - easein_quad 1.0 xalign 0.45 + easein_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.45 pause 1 Drf "Oh dear" @@ -650,13 +685,13 @@ label chapter_2: F "Well?!" show anon: - easein_quad .7 xalign 0.55 + easein_quart 1 xalign 0.55 A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "I can’t bring myself to say anything!!" - F "Oh,{w=.4} OH,{w=.5} so that’s how it’s going to be,{w=.2} huh?!" + F "Oh,{w=.4} OH,{w=.4} so that’s how it’s going to be, huh?!" Drf "Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -665,12 +700,12 @@ label chapter_2: F "YOU THINK YOU CAN JUST SPIT IN MY FACE AND THEN-{w=.4} AND THEN GIVE ME THE COLD SHOULDER?!" show fang: - linear 0.045 xalign -0.305 + linear 0.045 xalign -0.300 linear 0.045 xalign -0.295 repeat - pause .7 + pause .5 - F "{cps=*.3}I’LL HAVE YOU KNOW-{/cps}{w=0.25}{nw}" + F "{cps=*.3}I’LL HAVE YOU KNOW-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}" stop music fadeout 0.1 play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickSuperPunch.ogg' @@ -679,7 +714,7 @@ label chapter_2: show fang shocked: xalign -0.3 show farnsworth concerned: - easein_elastic 1 xalign 1.0 + easein_elastic 1.3 xalign 1.0 Drf "{b}FANG{/b}.{nw}" with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff") extend "" with vpunch @@ -691,19 +726,23 @@ label chapter_2: pause .5 "It feels like the world just stopped." + pause .5 "All eyes are on Fang." "And in Fangs’ eyes I see something flash briefly." - "Judging by those exaggerated movements and the eloquent speech,{w=.4} this is something Fang had been practicing." + "Judging by those exaggerated movements and the eloquent speech, this is something Fang had been practicing." + pause .5 "This was supposed to be a big moment where she stopped an evil bigot and the whole class would clap." + pause .5 "In all her planning and practice Fang had made one crucial error." - pause 0.8 + pause 1 - "{cps=*.5}Nobody cared.{/cps}" + "Nobody cared." + pause .5 play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 1 hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(1) @@ -711,52 +750,57 @@ label chapter_2: Drf "Please consider stepping into the hall for a moment." - show fang angry with Dissolve(1) + show fang sad with Dissolve(1) pause .5 show fang behind anon, farnsworth: easeout 0.75 xalign 1.6 pause 0.25 hide fang with dissolve - "Sh-{w=.5} Fang{w=0.4} is quick to exit the room.{w=.6} Dr. Fernsworth turns a sympathetic look towards me." + "Sh-{w=.4} Fang is quick to exit the room." + + "Dr. Fernsworth turns a sympathetic look towards me." - show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve - - Drf "Forgive them,{w=.2} Anon,{w=.5} you must understand that Fang is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Experiencing issues." + Drf "Forgive them, Anon, you must understand that Fang is{cps=*.1}...{/cps} experiencing issues." pause .5 show farnsworth concerned: - easein .75 xalign 1.15 + easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.3 pause .5 - hide farnsworth with Dissolve(1) + hide farnsworth with dissolve pause .5 "What the fuck just happened{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" + pause .5 - "Well,{w=.3} she blew up at me when I called her a she{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Well, she blew up at me when I called her a she{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "She was already upset about something before{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 - stop ambient fadeout 1 - scene black with fade + stop ambient fadeout 3 + scene black with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 "She was upset before because of the concert the other day?" "Looks like I just pushed her over the edge." + pause .5 play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' fadein 1 scene science class show anon neutral: yalign 0.1 xalign 0.2 - with fade - pause .6 + with Dissolve(1.5) + pause .5 show fang sad flip at sright with Dissolve(2) pause .5 "After a few moments Fang comes back in and sits down without a word." + pause .5 show fang sad flip: - easein_quad 1.5 xalign -0.6 + ease_cubic 1.5 xalign -0.6 pause 1.15 show fang sad with dissolve pause 1.2 @@ -764,14 +808,14 @@ label chapter_2: F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Sorry." pause .5 - A "Uh,{w=.4} don’t worry about it." + A "Uh, don’t worry about it." pause .5 "." - ".." + "{cps=*.05}..{/cps}" - "..." + "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}" show anon: easein 1 xalign 0.25 @@ -779,9 +823,10 @@ label chapter_2: show anon neutral flip with dissolve pause .5 - "Now that I think about it,{w=.5} something’s off." + "Now that I think about it, something’s off." + pause .5 - "Fang claims to not be male or female,{w=.4} but the clothes she’s wearing are clearly provocative." + "Fang claims to not be male or female, but the clothes she’s wearing are clearly provocative." "It’s almost like she’s showing off her femininity." pause .5 @@ -791,26 +836,30 @@ label chapter_2: "Why would someone be wearing revealing clothes in contradiction to their identity{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" "It’s almost like they’re just looking for attent-" + pause .5 - "Then suddenly,{w=.4} it hits me.{w=.6} I recall memories of a slightly younger Anon,{w=.4} running around school with a cape,{w=.4} pilot goggles{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Then suddenly, it hits me." + + "I recall memories of a slightly younger Anon, running around school with a cape, pilot goggles{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}And three plastic katanas." + pause .5 "That was a quick way to get sent to the principal's office." show fang angry with dissolve F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Are you even listening to me?!" - A "Dowhatnow?{w=.4} Wasn’t paying attention." + A "Dowhatnow? Wasn’t paying attention." show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) - F "Yeah,{w=.3} I could tell." + F "Yeah, I could tell." "She mutters as she turns back to the assignment." - pause .75 + pause .5 show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) - F "Uh{cps=*.1}....{/cps}{w=.2} You’ve been staring at me for the past 5 minutes.{w=.4} Freak." + F "Uh{cps=*.1}....{/cps}{w=.2} You’ve been staring at me for the past 5 minutes. Freak." show anon neutral with dissolve: show anon: @@ -838,35 +887,36 @@ label chapter_2: "Doesn’t seem like it’s something she wants to hear right now." - A "So um,{w=.5} your Naser’s sister,{w=.3} right?" + A "So um, your Naser’s sister, right?" show fang angry with Dissolve(.25) - F "SIB{w=0.3}-ling." + F "SIB-ling." - A "R{w=.1}-right.{w=.3} Sorry." + A "R{w=.1}-right. Sorry." F "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}" - - show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) + show fang neutral with dissolve "There’s a brief pause until Fang speaks up again." pause .5 - F "Yes.{w=.55} Naser’s my baby brother,{w=.4} why do you ask?" + F "Yes. Naser’s my baby brother, why do you ask?" - A "I was just curious,{w=.4} Naser has been helping me settle into the school." + A "I was just curious, Naser has been helping me settle into the school." - F "Of course he did. {w=.5}{nw}" + F "Of course he did. {w=.4}{nw}" show fang unimpressed extend "{size=-10}Just wish he’d keep out of my fuckin’ business for two seconds.{/size}" + pause .5 - A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Sure." + A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Sure." + pause .5 - "Actually,{w=.4} thinking about Naser{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Actually, thinking about Naser{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - N "{i}\"It’s more that he worries a bit too much for that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} sister{w=0.2} of his.\"{/i}" + N "{i}\"It’s more that he worries a bit too much for that{cps=*.1}...{/cps} sister of his.\"{/i}" - N "{i}\"Oftentimes when I’m with him,{w=.4} he’s anxious about something she’s done.\"{/i}" + N "{i}\"Oftentimes when I’m with him, he’s anxious about something she’s done.\"{/i}" pause .5 A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}He told me about what happened the other day." @@ -874,13 +924,13 @@ label chapter_2: A "Sorry to hear something like that happened to you and your band." show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) - F "..." + F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) F "What do you care?" pause .5 - A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Dunno." + A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} dunno." "Suddenly my shoes seem more interesting than the conversation at hand." pause .5 @@ -901,13 +951,14 @@ label chapter_2: "The rest of the period passed between continued small talk with Fang." "She seemed to be controlling the conversation though." + pause .5 - "When the bell rings,{w=.4} Fang whips out her phone and immediately starts tapping away." + "When the bell rings, Fang whips out her phone and immediately starts tapping away." show anon: - easein 0.8 xalign 0.45 + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45 pause .5 - show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + show anon neutral flip with dissolve pause .25 A "You going to your next class?" @@ -916,22 +967,22 @@ label chapter_2: F "Who cares about being late?" show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - A "Fair.{w=.4} See you then." - - show fang: - easeout 1 xalign 1.1 - pause 0.45 - hide fang with dissolve + A "Fair. See you then." "She lazily waves a hand at me and I make my way to my next class." + stop music fadeout 5 + pause .5 - stop music fadeout 2 - scene black with fade - "Unfortunately,{w=.4} fifth period is mathematics." + scene black with Dissolve(1.5) + pause .5 + + "Unfortunately, fifth period is mathematics." + pause .5 scene classroom - with fade + with Dissolve(1.5) + pause .5 "I’m barely keeping myself awake while Mr. Carlesiidewski is giving a lecture on the inverse of tangents." pause .5 @@ -940,10 +991,9 @@ label chapter_2: play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' carl "ANON!" with vpunch - "I sit ramrod straight at the direct address." - carl "Are you frickin’ listening?{w=.4} Come finish this frickin’ problem on the frickin’ board." + carl "Are you frickin’ listening? Come finish this frickin’ problem on the frickin’ board." pause .5 "Just one social disaster after another today." @@ -952,9 +1002,9 @@ label chapter_2: show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve - "Hesitantly,{w=.3} I slide out of my chair and trundle my way to the whiteboard,{w=.4} trying to decipher the runes I'm expected to make sense of." + "Hesitantly, I slide out of my chair and trundle my way to the whiteboard, trying to decipher the runes I'm expected to make sense of." - play music 'audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg' fadein 2 + play music 'audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg' fadein 3 show anon: easeout_quart .75 xalign 0.5 pause .75 @@ -963,8 +1013,9 @@ label chapter_2: "Only I never made it to the whiteboard." "Three rows down and my foot catches on a loose backpack strap in the isle." - hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(.15) + show dimmer_light: + easein_cubic 0.5 alpha 0 play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg' show anon shocked flip with Dissolve(.1): yanchor 0.2 @@ -974,20 +1025,23 @@ label chapter_2: play sound "audio/effects/anonDeskSlam.ogg" with vpunch + hide dimmer_light + pause .5 "Luckily I fell sideways and there was a cold hard desk in the way to catch my fall." pause .5 - "To the chuckles of the rest of the class,{w=.4} I look up from my final resting place to see a massive pink and white muzzle." + "To the chuckles of the rest of the class, I look up from my final resting place to see a massive pink and white muzzle." pause .5 Re "Dude." - "Like a deer caught in headlights,{w=.4} I can only stare and wait for him to continue." + "Like a deer caught in headlights, I can only stare and wait for him to continue." + pause .5 Re "{cps=*.6}You’re on my desk man{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "My senses return to me,{w=.2} and I quickly get up,{w=.4} picking up and returning the pencil that flew to the floor in a flurry of apologies." + "My senses return to me, and I quickly get up, picking up and returning the pencil that flew to the floor in a flurry of apologies." "Then I recognise just whose desk I fell on." @@ -996,50 +1050,55 @@ label chapter_2: "Don’t I just have the luck of the devil?" pause .5 - "Giving one last apology,{w=.4} I head to the front of the room to solve the whiteboard problem." + "Giving one last apology, I head to the front of the room to solve the whiteboard problem." pause .5 "I tried solving the problem to the best of my ability." "Still took a solid two minutes." + + "After circling my answer, I look expectantly at Mr. Carlesiidewski who gives a nod." + + "Finally turning around to return to my seat, I freeze." + + "Right there in the front row is the last member of the band, Trish." pause .5 - "After circling my answer,{w=.4} I look expectantly at Mr. Carlesiidewski who gives a nod." - - "Finally turning around to return to my seat,{w=.4} I freeze." - - "Right there in the front row is the last member of the band,{w=.4} Trish." - "I stumble back to my desk." show carldelewski at scenter with dissolve "Mr. Carlesiidewski gives each row a stack of papers to pass back." - carl "Alright,{w=.4} here’s the frickin’ homework covering today’s lesson.{w=.5} Use page two-seventy-nine.{w=.4} I’ll give you the last{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + carl "Alright, here’s the frickin’ homework covering today’s lesson. Use page two-seventy-nine." + + carl "I’ll give you the last{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" carl "Fifteen frickin’ minutes of class to work with your frickin’ peers." + pause .5 hide carldelewski with dissolve - "Mr. Carlesiidewski returns to his desk and pulls out a math book with a monthly romance novel crudely stuffed inside it.{w=.5} With a very detailed centerfold,{w=0.3} by the way he turned it sideways." + "Mr. Carlesiidewski returns to his desk and pulls out a math book with a monthly romance novel crudely stuffed inside it." + + "With a very detailed centerfold, by the way he turned it sideways." pause .5 - "Looking ahead to Reed’s desk,{w=.4} he’s been joined by Trish who's trying to get him to get started." + "Looking ahead to Reed’s desk, he’s been joined by Trish who's trying to get him to get started." "I think I can feel their eyes following me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - "Back at my desk,{w=.4} I glance over the math sheet." + "Back at my desk, I glance over the math sheet." - "Page two-seventy-nine,{w=.4} right?" + "Page two-seventy-nine, right?" "Looks like I finally get to use that phonebook of a math textbook." pause .5 "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Where is it?" - "I open my backpack,{w=.4} and instead of my math textbook..." + "I open my backpack, and instead of my math textbook{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" stop music fadeout 1 show dimmer_light with Dissolve(.25) @@ -1049,9 +1108,13 @@ label chapter_2: extend "is the Saturnia Collectors Edition Art-book I splurged on yesterday." pause .5 - "I’m frozen.{w} Can’t move an inch." + "I’m frozen." - "Did I grab the wrong book this morning?{w=.5} Is someone playing a sick joke?" + "Can’t move an inch." + + "Did I grab the wrong book this morning?" + + "Is someone playing a sick joke?" pause .5 play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' @@ -1060,14 +1123,14 @@ label chapter_2: "Something bounces off my head and lands on my desk." - play music 'audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg' fadein 2 + play music 'audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg' fadein 4 hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(.25) - "It’s enough to snap me back to reality and I shove my backpack under my desk,{w=.4} furiously zipping it." + "It’s enough to snap me back to reality and I shove my backpack under my desk, furiously zipping it." "On my desk is a balled-up wad of paper." - "Oh great.{w=.4} I was hoping to avoid these chain notes." + "Oh great. I was hoping to avoid these chain notes." "I unfurl the ball to read the note." pause .5 @@ -1077,7 +1140,7 @@ label chapter_2: "I look up and see the purple one waving me over." pause .5 - "Fuck.{fast}" + "Fuck." pause .5 "Grabbing my stuff I shuffle over slowly to the duo." @@ -1097,24 +1160,24 @@ label chapter_2: pause .5 show trish explanatory flip - T "See?{w=.4} He’s my class partner so I look out for him." + T "See? He’s my class partner so I look out for him." - T "How are YOU looking out for your class partner,{w=.4} Anon?" + T "How are YOU looking out for your class partner, Anon?" - T "Enforcing the social contract,{w=.4} having good conduct and mutual respect so you can leave class and go on with your life?" - show trish neutral flip + T "Enforcing the social contract, having good conduct and mutual respect so you can leave class and go on with your life?" + show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - A "Uh{cps=*.1}....{/cps}{w=.3} What’s this about?" + A "Uh{cps=*.1}....{/cps} what’s this about?" show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "A certain friend of mine is partnered with you in Science,{w=.4} right?" + T "A certain friend of mine is partnered with you in Science, right?" pause .5 "Wait.{w=.4} Oh!" A "You mean Fang?" - T "They just messaged me before class,{w=.4} said they had to be partnered with a skinnie bigot -{w=.5} then proceeded to show them." + T "They just messaged me before class, said they had to be partnered with a skinnie bigot - then proceeded to show them." show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25) T "I had a feeling you’d be him." @@ -1122,20 +1185,20 @@ label chapter_2: "Am I gonna have to tolerate humiliation from these meteor dodgers too?" - "My head is starting to hurt.{w=.4} Hopefully we can just get started on these math exercises." + "My head is starting to hurt. Hopefully we can just get started on these math exercises." pause .5 - A "Yeah,{w=.3} that was me.{w=.4} I apologized,{w=.1} though." + A "Yeah, that was me. I apologized, though." show trish happy flip with Dissolve(.25) T "I know and I appreciate it." - T "I’m Trish and this is Reed.{w=.4} We’re Fang’s best friends." + T "I’m Trish and this is Reed. We’re Fang’s best friends." A "Uh-huh." show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "What about you?{w=.4} Now you tell us about yourself." + T "What about you? Now you tell us about yourself." pause .5 $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.75, 'music') @@ -1148,22 +1211,26 @@ label chapter_2: "RED ALERT." pause .5 - "There is no way I’m telling anyone,{w=.4} especially {i}these{/i} people." + "There is no way I’m telling anyone, especially {i}these{/i} people." "And if they find out where I was a few days ago{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1.5, 'music') hide dimmer_light with dissolve - A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} I’m Anon and I’m a human.{w=.4} I got here Monday." + A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} I’m Anon and I’m a human. I got here Monday." + pause .5 A "That’s all." pause .25 show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "We know that.{w=.5} We want to know where you’re from,{w=.4} what you've been doing since you got here,{w=.4} if you have any friends{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + T "We know that." + + T "We want to know where you’re from, what you've been doing since you got here, if you have any friends{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "I{w=.1}-I’ve been doing nothing.{w=.4} I don’t really care about friends." + A "I{w=.1}-I’ve been doing nothing. I don’t really care about friends." pause .5 "She doesn’t look very convinced by that answer." @@ -1172,37 +1239,43 @@ label chapter_2: pause .5 show reed explanatory flip - Re "You know that Naser dude,{w=.3} right{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" + Re "You know that Naser dude, right{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" show reed neutral flip show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Hey{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Yeah,{w=.2} I saw you with that slut Naomi earlier,{w=.2} too{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + T "Hey{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Yeah, I saw you with that slut Naomi earlier, too{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Trish squints her eyes at me." - A "T{w=.2}-they were my welcoming committee,{w=.4} they helped me with getting settled,{w=.3} nothing besides that." + A "T{w=.2}-they were my welcoming committee, they helped me with getting settled, nothing besides that." show trish explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "{cps=*.4}Riiiiight.{/cps}{w=.4} Didn’t Naser or Naomi invite you to anything{cps=*.4}{w=.3}...or...{/cps}?" + T "{cps=*.4}Riiiiight.{/cps} Didn’t Naser or Naomi invite you to anything{cps=*.4}... or...{/cps}?" show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - A "No.{w=.4} I don’t remember.{w=.4} I’ve been trying to get them off my back.{w=.5} But w-{w=0.1}why you ask?" + A "No. I don’t remember." + + A "I’ve been trying to get them off my back. But w-why you ask?" + + T "We had a concert last week, Naser and Naomi invited a whole bunch of assholes to ruin it." show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "We had a concert last week,{w=.4} Naser and Naomi invited a whole bunch of assholes to ruin it.{w=.6} Suppose if we had seen a human in that crowd we would remember,{w=.4} right?" + T "Suppose if we had seen a human in that crowd we would remember, right?" - A "Y{w=.2}-yeah.{w=.4} {cps=*.2}Haha.{/cps}" + A "Y-yeah. {cps=*.2}Haha.{/cps}" - A "I{w=.1}-I mean,{w=.3} concert?" + show anon shrug with Dissolve(.25) + A "I{w=.1}-I mean, concert?" show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .5 + show anon neutral with dissolve "I don’t think they invited me here to solve math problems." pause .5 show trish explanatory flip - T "We have a band.{w=.4} I’m the lead bassist,{w=.3} Fang’s the vocalist and secondary bass,{w=.3} and Reed is the drummer." + T "We have a band. I’m the lead bassist, Fang’s the vocalist and secondary bass, and Reed is the drummer." show trish neutral flip show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.2) @@ -1212,40 +1285,47 @@ label chapter_2: show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25) T "He just comes up with the funny song titles." - A "Uhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}that’s very neat!{w=.4} Would love to listen to your band someday." + A "Uhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}that’s very neat! Would love to listen to your band someday." show anon: - easein 0.5 xalign -0.1 + easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.1 "I drag my chair backwards and clumsily rise from my seat" - A "It was great meeting you guys,{w=.4} I’ll be going back to my desk,{w=.2} though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "It was great meeting you guys, I’ll be going back to my desk, though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Wait,{w=.4} I’m not done with you yet." + T "Wait, I’m not done with you yet." + pause .5 - A "What?{w=.5} I really should get started on the homework{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" + A "What? I really should get started on the homework{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" show trish: - easein 0.5 xalign 0.95 + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.95 pause .5 T "It’s important.{w=.4} Look at me." "She has a very serious look on her face." + pause .5 - "She’s not saying anything,{w=.4} her glaring through the back of my skull makes me think she means business." + "She’s not saying anything, her glaring through the back of my skull makes me think she means business." - T "Fang is happy.{w=.5} They found something about themself they finally like,{w=.4} and I helped them through a dark time.{w=.6} They made up their mind." + T "Fang is happy." + + T "They found something about themself they finally like, and I helped them through a dark time. They made up their mind." pause .5 "They?{w=.4} Themself?{w=.4} No wonder Naser seemed so confused by this." - T "They don’t need people in their life that might hurt or confuse them.{w=.5} They have us,{w=.4} and the band.{w=.6} We’re trying to make it for ourselves." + T "They don’t need people in their life that might hurt or confuse them." + + T "They have us, and the band. We’re trying to make it for ourselves." + pause .5 - A "O{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}kay?" + A "O{cps=*.1}...{/cps}kay?" - T "I look out for them because I care for them.{w=.5} They’ve been hurting because of those dicks,{w=.4} I’m doing my part in assuring them." + T "I look out for them because I care for them. They’ve been hurting because of those dicks, I’m doing my part in assuring them." "Was that what I saw her doing earlier?" @@ -1254,21 +1334,22 @@ label chapter_2: A "I don’t understand." - T "My point is,{w=.4} don’t upset Fang." + T "My point is, don’t upset Fang." pause .5 "I just wanted to solve math problems." - A "I,{w=.3} er{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} yes,{w=.2} ma’am." + A "I, er{cps=*.1}...{/cps} yes, ma’am." show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) "Once again she’s just glaring at me." - "Fucking hell my stupid legs,{w=.3} stop shaking." + "Fucking hell my stupid legs, stop shaking." + pause .5 "I’ll take this opportunity." - A "Uh...{w=.3} thank you for the lesson,{w=.2} Trish.{w=.4} I’ll keep that in mind.{w=.3} See ya." + A "Uh... thank you for the lesson, Trish. I’ll keep that in mind. See ya." show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 @@ -1277,20 +1358,19 @@ label chapter_2: Re "Wait man-{w=.4} you want this?" show reed neutral flip: - easein_quart 1.2 xalign 0.75 + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.75 pause .5 "Reed holds out a sheet of paper." pause .5 - "Wait,{w=.4} it’s a copy of the homework assignment-" + "Wait, it’s a copy of the homework assignment-" "And it’s complete?!" - A "Hold on,{w=.4} I thought {i}you{/i} were the one needing help?" + A "Hold on, I thought {i}you{/i} were the one needing help?" - - Re "{cps=*.2}Shhhh,{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" + Re "{cps=*.2}Shhhh,{/cps}{nw}" show reed considering flip # TODO: confident edit (explanatory mouth, considering eyes) if acceptable Re "Shhhh,{fast} the friend of my friend who’s the friend that helps me is also my friend too." pause .7 @@ -1299,20 +1379,21 @@ label chapter_2: pause .65 show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - Re "You’re sharp,{w=.3} Anon.{w=.5} Razor sharp.{w=.6} Friends?" + Re "You’re sharp, Anon.{w=.4} Razor sharp." + + Re "Friends?" show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg' - stop music + stop music fadeout 1 pause 2 - "The bell announces lunchtime,{w=.4} and the rest of the students collectively rise and start shuffling out the door." + "The bell announces lunchtime, and the rest of the students collectively rise and start shuffling out the door." - play music 'audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg' fadein 1 stop sound fadeout 1.0 - A "Lunch hour,{w=.4} been a blast talking to you guys." + A "Lunch hour, been a blast talking to you guys." show anon: easeout 1 xalign 1.8 @@ -1325,7 +1406,7 @@ label chapter_2: show trish considering flip with dissolve - "I swiftly snatch up the backpack by my leg,{w=.4} flashing an earnest sympathetic smile at them -{w=.6} or at least I thought it was one." + "I swiftly snatch up the backpack by my leg, flashing an earnest sympathetic smile at them - or at least I thought it was one." stop music fadeout 3 play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1.5 @@ -1334,19 +1415,19 @@ label chapter_2: "As I power walk out of the classroom I swear I caught a glimpse of Reed waving goodbye." - "A shame I have other places to be.{w=.5} Namely away from the pissed off midget." + "A shame I have other places to be. Namely away from the pissed off midget." - "Sorry man,{w=.4} you seem like a good guy.{w=.5} But with that tiny tyrant?" + "Sorry man, you seem like a good guy. But with that tiny tyrant?" pause .5 "Not in this lifetime." - "That was the worst fucking experience in a long while.{w=.5} Almost as bad as actually dealing with Fang in class." + "That was the worst fucking experience in a long while. Almost as bad as actually dealing with Fang in class." pause .5 "Here I was thinking I could be invisible for the rest of the year." - "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}And now I have classmates talking about me behind my back on their phones,{w=.4} probably for the rest of the school year." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}And now I have classmates talking about me behind my back on their phones, probably for the rest of the school year." pause .5 "At least it’s the best period of the day now." @@ -1364,27 +1445,28 @@ label chapter_2: "I duck into a corner and rip the backpack open." - "What should have been my lunch card,{w=.3} binders,{w=.3} and {cps=*.25}horrendously{/cps} embarrassing art book{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "What should have been my lunch card, binders, and {cps=*.25}horrendously{/cps} embarrassing art book{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + stop ambient fadeout 2 + play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Ignore Problems.ogg' fadein 1 show dimmer_light with dissolve - stop ambient fadeout 1 - play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Ignore Problems.ogg' - "Was instead a half dozen glass flasks,{w=.4} bags full of{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} something,{w=.5} and all sorts of machinery I didn’t recognize." + "Was instead a half dozen glass flasks, bags full of{cps=*.1}...{/cps} something, and all sorts of machinery I didn’t recognize." + pause .5 - "Someone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} someone else has my backpack{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} and that book." + "Someone{cps=*.1}...{/cps} someone else has my backpack{cps=*.1}...{/cps} and that book." "If they see{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" hide dimmer_light with dissolve - A "..." + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "This backpack{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "It's from the Reed guy,{w=.3} I’ll bet." + "It's from the Reed guy, I’ll bet." - "When I rushed out of class..." + "When I rushed out of class{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' @@ -1398,16 +1480,18 @@ label chapter_2: "Think you can even get a bit of cash for reporting stuff like this." pause .5 - "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What am I thinking?" + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What am I {i}thinking{/i}?" "Any amount of money is NOT worth my power level being revealed." - "I can't ruin my life.{w=.6} Not again." + "I can't ruin my life." + + "Not again." "Especially not with these losers." pause .5 - "A half-hour until lunch period ends.{w=.4} Good." + "A half-hour until lunch period ends. Good." "I need to find Reed." @@ -1415,19 +1499,20 @@ label chapter_2: "{i}Fuck.{/i}" - "Maybe he’s getting his lunch now.{w=.4} Cafeteria then." + "Maybe he’s getting his lunch now. Cafeteria then." + pause .5 scene cafeteria with fade - "I sprint through the school hallways,{w=.3} already familiar with the layout,{w=.3} looking for the drug dealer." + "I sprint through the school hallways, already familiar with the layout, looking for the drug dealer." - "The colorful crowd in the lunch line makes it difficult to pick Reed out,{w=.3} so I have to carefully scan the room." + "The colorful crowd in the lunch line makes it difficult to pick Reed out, so I have to carefully scan the room." show reed neutral with Dissolve(1): yalign 0.1 xalign 0.6 - "I finally spot the pink raptor at the end of the queue,{w=.4} tray in hand and incriminating evidence on his back." + "I finally spot the pink raptor at the end of the queue, tray in hand and incriminating evidence on his back." "The world must be fucking with me since {b}I’m{/b} the one currently carrying a mini-cartel in a backpack." pause .5 @@ -1449,45 +1534,45 @@ label chapter_2: pause .5 show reed explanatory flip - Re "What up,{w=.2} my guy?" + Re "What up, my guy?" show reed neutral flip pause .5 A "I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "I give the backpack a bump,{w=.4} causing all the dubious glassware within to clink." + "I give the backpack a bump, causing all the dubious glassware within to clink." - A "Think you got my backpack,{w=.2} Reed." + A "Think you got my backpack, Reed." pause .7 Re "Huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Was wonderin’ why this felt lighter." show reed: - easein 0.5 xalign 0.9 + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9 "He holds out my backpack to me." - Re "‘Ere ya go,{w=.2} man." + Re "‘Ere ya go, man." pause .5 show reed: - easein 0.5 xalign 0.98 + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.98 pause .75 - "We trade backpacks,{w=.4} I’m careful to hand his over while simultaneously examining mine still within his grip." + "We trade backpacks, I’m careful to hand his over while simultaneously examining mine still within his grip." "It doesn’t look like he opened it at all but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 # TODO: this music plays for a long time, mix it up with something else? stop ambient fadeout 1.0 - play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' + play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1 A "{cps=*.25}Thank fuck...{/cps}" pause .75 show reed explanatory flip - Re "Why’re you so worried bout the bag,{w=.3} man?" + Re "Why’re you so worried bout the bag, man?" show reed neutral flip "{cps=*.3}Shitfuckfuckfuckfuck.{/cps}" @@ -1497,7 +1582,7 @@ label chapter_2: "Don’tbringuptheartbook." pause .5 - "Think you dumbfuck,{w=.4} there’s gotta be something you can say-" + "Think you dumbfuck, there’s gotta be something you can say-" pause .5 "Naomi I owe you a fruit basket!" @@ -1509,7 +1594,7 @@ label chapter_2: Re "Oh.{w=.65}{nw}" show reed shocked flip - Re "Oh.{fast} Oh!{w=0.5} Oh fuck,{w=0.2} dude I’m sorry to hear that." + Re "Oh.{fast} Oh!{w=0.5} Oh fuck, dude I’m sorry to hear that." pause .5 "What." @@ -1517,57 +1602,61 @@ label chapter_2: Re "New kid in school AND you need the lunch card?" show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - Re "Do you like,{w=.4} wanna hang with us?{w=.5} You look like the lonely type." + Re "Do you like, wanna hang with us? You look like the lonely type." pause .5 "FUCK{w=.25} no." - A "{cps=*.3}Naaaaah,{/cps}{w=0.3} I’ll be good.{w=.5} {cps=*.5}I just needed my-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}" + A "{cps=*.3}Naaaaah,{/cps} I’ll be good.{w} {cps=*.5}I just needed my-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}" show reed explanatory flip - Re "Come on bro,{w=.4} I’ll introduce you to the whole band." + Re "Come on bro, I’ll introduce you to the whole band." show reed neutral flip A "{cps=*.4}You don’t have to-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" show reed considering flip - Re "Y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} reward your good deed with a good deed." + Re "Y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps} reward your good deed with a good deed." pause .5 A "What." show reed neutral flip - Re "I’ll like,{w=.4} be your first friend,{w=.2} Anon." + Re "I’ll like, be your first friend, Anon." A "What." show reed explanatory flip - Re "{cps=*.3}Yeeaah{/cps},{w=.2} man." - show reed neutral flip + Re "{cps=*.3}Yeeaah{/cps}, man." + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - A "I appreciate it,{w=.4} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show anon shrug with Dissolve(.25) + A "I appreciate it, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps} y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - Re "You worried about Trish,{w=.2} bro?" + Re "You worried about Trish, bro?" + show anon neutral with dissolve A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - Re "Yeaah,{w=.3} she can be a bit rough,{w=.4} but she’s great." + Re "Yeaah, she can be a bit rough, but she’s great." A "Isn’t she on a crusade to assault everyone that laughed at your concert?" - Re "Oh yeah,{w=.4} she does that sometimes,{w=.4} don’t worry about it." + Re "Oh yeah, she does that sometimes, don’t worry about it." + pause .5 A "Hrmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" Re "‘s fine for you to be worried." - Re "You’ll see,{w=.3} she’s plenty nice." + Re "You’ll see, she’s plenty nice." + pause .5 "Maybe I was a bit quick to judge{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show reed explanatory flip + show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) Re "See,{w=.2} there’s Trish now." - show reed neutral flip + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) show anon: easein 1 xalign -0.05 @@ -1583,16 +1672,16 @@ label chapter_2: pause .5 show trish explanatory flip - T "Hey,{w=.3} Reed." + T "Hey, Reed." show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Sorry,{w=.4} gonna have to return that crowbar a bit later than I promised." + T "Sorry, gonna have to return that crowbar a bit later than I promised." T "Also, I got vengeance on another one of those jerks." show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .5 - A "Those aren’t{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} related,{w=.4} right?" + A "Those aren’t{cps=*.1}...{/cps} related, right?" show trish smug flip T "Who’s asking?" @@ -1602,36 +1691,38 @@ label chapter_2: "I need to get out of here.{fast}" hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(.2) - A "Well Reed,{w=.4} thank you for talking,{w=.4} {cps=*.4}I’ll just be on my wa-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" + A "Well Reed, thank you for talking{w}, {cps=*.4}I’ll just be on my wa-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" show reed explanatory flip - Re "{cps=*.25}Hooollld{/cps} on man,{w=.5} Trish just got here." + Re "{cps=*.25}Hooollld{/cps} on man, Trish just got here." show reed neutral flip show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Reed,{w=.4} what’s all this about?" + T "Reed, what’s all this about?" Re "Anon here and I had a little{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} mix-up?" show reed explanatory flip - Re "Anyways,{w=.3} he was a total bro about it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Re "Anyways, he was a total bro about it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show reed considering flip - Re "And he’s like,{w=.4} super poor and stuff." + show reed considering flip with Dissolve(.25) + Re "And he’s like, super poor and stuff." pause .5 show trish explanatory flip T "How poor?" - show trish neutral flip - + + show trish neutral flip show reed neutral flip + with Dissolve(.25) + Re "Y’know that lunch card thing they advertise on the school brochures?" pause .5 show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.2) T "Bull." - Re "Show her,{w=.2} Anon." + Re "Show her, Anon." pause .5 A "I’d rather not{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -1640,25 +1731,28 @@ label chapter_2: T "Oh my goodness you poor soul." show reed considering flip - Re "Literally,{w=.3} even." + Re "Literally, even." show trish surprised flip show reed neutral flip with dissolve - Re "So I figured,{w=.4} why not be a bro back to him?" + Re "So I figured, why not be a bro back to him?" show reed explanatory flip Re "Like uhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" Re "Be his legit welcome committee." - show reed neutral flip + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 - A "I appreciate the thought,{w=.3} but uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I should really be going right about{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} now,{w=.4} bye." + A "I appreciate the thought, but uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + A "I should really be going right about{cps=*.1}...{/cps} now, bye." show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - pause .5 show trish happy flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Oh,{w=.3} Fang,{w=.5} what took you so long today?" + T "Oh, Fang, what took you so long today?" + pause .5 show anon: easein 1 xalign .35 #-0.05 @@ -1682,20 +1776,20 @@ label chapter_2: show fang shocked show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "Yo.{w=.2} Wait,{w=.5} is that Anon?{w=.6} What’s {i}he{/i} doing here?" + F "Yo. Wait, is that Anon?{w=.4} What’s {i}he{/i} doing here?" - "No,{w=.3} it’s the other new human transfer student with the dress sense of Rex Luthor." + "No, it’s the other new human transfer student with the dress sense of Rex Luthor." show fang surprised with Dissolve(.75) pause .5 - A "{cps=*.4}Heeeey{/cps} Fang.{w=.5} Good to see ya again.{w} {cps=*.35}Well lunch is almost over so I’ll-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" + A "{cps=*.4}Heeeey{/cps} Fang. Good to see ya again.{w} {cps=*.35}Well lunch is almost over so I’ll-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" show reed considering flip Re "He’s poor." show trish indignant flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Like,{w=.3} super poor!" + T "Like, super poor!" pause .5 show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) @@ -1712,7 +1806,7 @@ label chapter_2: pause .5 show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) - F "Wow.{w=.5} That is hilariously depressing." + F "Wow. That is hilariously depressing." show dimmer_light behind anon, trish, reed, fang show anon sad flip @@ -1723,15 +1817,15 @@ label chapter_2: with dissolve show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) - F "Anyways,{w=.4} that doesn’t answer my question of why the skinnie loser is here." + F "Anyways, that doesn’t answer my question of why the skinnie loser is here." show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25) - Re "Man,{w=.4} Anon’s like a total bro an’ I’m his {i}first{/i} friend an’ we’re gonna be Rock Ring buddies for the rest of the school year!" + Re "Man, Anon’s like a total bro an’ I’m his {i}first{/i} friend an’ we’re gonna be Rock Ring buddies for the rest of the school year!" show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - Re "Then like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} he’ll be my business partner an’ we’ll sell enough goods to get half the country high an’ like,{w=.6} fuck narcs and fuck the IRS too." - show reed neutral flip - pause .6 + Re "Then like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} he’ll be my business partner an’ we’ll sell enough goods to get half the country high an’ like, fuck narcs and fuck the IRS too." + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -1744,15 +1838,14 @@ label chapter_2: T "The morons swapped backpacks and now they’re best friends or something." - A "Yeah.{w=.3} That.{w} And now{w=.2} {cps=*.4}I’m gonna go grab my lunch so-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" + A "Yeah. That.{w} And now{w=.2} {cps=*.4}I’m gonna go grab my lunch so-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" show reed explanatory flip Re "We can all grab some together." - show reed neutral flip - pause .25 + show reed neutral flip show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "{cps=*.4}...Well,{/cps}{w=.4} Reed {i}is{/i} a good judge of character{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + T "{cps=*.4}...Well,{/cps} Reed {i}is{/i} a good judge of character{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) F "Is he?" @@ -1760,11 +1853,11 @@ label chapter_2: show trish neutral flip show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) - A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Didn’t you already grab your lunch,{w=.3} Reed?" + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Didn’t you already grab your lunch, Reed?" show reed explanatory flip - Re "Yeah.{w=.5} I want seconds,{w=.1} man." - show reed neutral flip + Re "Yeah.{w=.4} I want seconds, man." + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) "What." @@ -1772,27 +1865,30 @@ label chapter_2: pause .5 show anon: - easein_quart 0.6 xalign 0.25 + easein_quart 1 xalign 0.25 pause .4 A "When did you-{w=.5} {i}How{/i}?!" show reed explanatory flip - Re "Come on,{w=.15} man,{w=.4} I’ve got a mean case of munchies." - show reed neutral flip + Re "Come on, man, I’ve got a mean case of munchies." + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .5 # TODO: mix up the music a bit here? Something a bit more chill? + stop music fadeout 6 + scene black with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 - scene black with fade + "I end up walking to get food with Trish, Reed and Fang." - "I end up walking to get food with Trish,{w=.2} Reed{w=.2} and Fang." - - "Every time I consider ditching them,{w=.4} Reed says or does something to keep me with the band." + "Every time I consider ditching them, Reed says or does something to keep me with the band." pause .5 "Fuck my life." + pause .5 + play music 'audio/ost/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 3 scene cafeteria show reed neutral: yalign 0.1 xalign -0.45 @@ -1802,24 +1898,25 @@ label chapter_2: yalign 0 xalign 0.67 show fang neutral behind trish: yalign 0 xalign 1.67 - with fade + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 - "I’m able to hold the makings of a conversation with Reed,{w=.4} but it feels like I’m talking to space." + "I’m able to hold the makings of a conversation with Reed, but it feels like I’m talking to space." - "Trish was listening in while we made our way to the lunch room,{w=.4} but was more focused on her talk with Fang." + "Trish was listening in while we made our way to the lunch room, but was more focused on her talk with Fang." show dimmer_lighter behind trish, fang show trish neutral show fang unimpressed with dissolve - F "What do you mean my halter top is ‘out’ right now?{w=.5} I haven’t noticed a difference." + F "What do you mean my halter top is ‘out’ right now? I haven’t noticed a difference." show trish explanatory with Dissolve(.25) - T "I’m telling you,{w=.4} the next thing is going to be leotards." + T "I’m telling you, the next thing is going to be leotards." show trish neutral show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "No,{w=.3} fuck that.{w=.5} I would never wear something that retarded." + F "No, fuck that. I would never wear something that retarded." hide dimmer_lighter with dissolve @@ -1831,33 +1928,31 @@ label chapter_2: Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{nw}" show reed explanatory - Re "...{fast}So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} You play videogames,{w=.3} right?" - show reed neutral + Re "...{fast}So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You play videogames, right?" + show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25) - A "Yeah,{w=.3} I got a couple consoles and a toaster of a PC." + A "Yeah, I got a couple consoles and a toaster of a PC." Re "Only Xrox{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Battle Saurs is sick{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "Pachystation has a better lineup overall." show reed considering - Re "But like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Stony-games are all lame{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} like,{w=.3} just movies lame{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Re "But like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Stony-games are all lame{cps=*.1}...{/cps} like, just movies lame{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "You can’t prove that." show reed happy with Dissolve(.25) Re "I can." - show reed neutral - show anon neutral flip - with Dissolve(.25) + show anon neutral flip with dissolve A "Huh?" - show reed explanatory + show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.25) Re "Get your phone out man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Look up {cps=*.4}'{color=#78FF65}LW_S9znpklI{/color}'..{/cps}" - show reed neutral - pause .5 + show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 A "How did you say that out loud?" @@ -1867,6 +1962,7 @@ label chapter_2: "What’s the harm?" A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 menu: @@ -1875,30 +1971,31 @@ label chapter_2: $ webbrowser.open('https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LW_S9znpklI') pause 5 - "What on earth...?" + "What on earth{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" Re "Pretty hilarious right?" - "What is this,{w=.4} a shitty Netstix cartoon knock off?" + "What is this, a shitty Netstix cartoon knock off?" - A "It’s funny in a way,{w=.3} yeah." + A "It’s funny in a way, yeah." jump .PostCheckLinkOut "Save it for later": - + + pause .5 "I'll save this one for when I get home." label .PostCheckLinkOut: show reed explanatory - Re "Xrox is better anyways,{w=.4} you see the whole lineup they had prepared for{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Re "Xrox is better anyways, you see the whole lineup they had prepared for{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Reed delves into his rant about console differences." pause .5 - "I thought he was just an airhead,{w=.4} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "I thought he was just an airhead, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "I totally can’t get a read on this guy." @@ -1906,20 +2003,21 @@ label chapter_2: hide dimmer_lighter with dissolve - F "Well,{w=.3} anyways." + F "Well, anyways." show anon neutral show fang considering - with Dissolve(.25) + with dissolve pause .25 F "The lunch lines aren’t going to get any shorter." F "We should hurry and pick one." - stop music fadeout 3 - play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCafeteriaLoop.ogg' fadein 2 - scene black with fade + stop music fadeout 4 + play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCafeteriaLoop.ogg' fadein 4 + scene black with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 # TODO: are the gang in the lunch queue, or is this after? This line conflicts with subsequent dialogue "Once we all got our food, we all stand around chatting a bit more outside the line." @@ -1927,6 +2025,7 @@ label chapter_2: "Trish and Fang babble to each other about their daily activities all through the lunch line." "Reed on the other hand has pulled out a tablet from his backpack to show me something." + pause .5 scene cafeteria show anon neutral: @@ -1937,16 +2036,16 @@ label chapter_2: xalign 0.95 yalign 0.0 show trish neutral flip: xalign 1.125 yalign 0.0 - with fade + with Dissolve(1) pause .5 show reed explanatory flip - Re "So like,{w=.4} y’know we got a band,{w=.2} yeah?" - show reed neutral flip + Re "So like, y’know we got a band, yeah?" + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - A "Er,{w=.3} yeah.{w=.5} Trish brought it up earlier and all." + A "Er, yeah. Trish brought it up earlier and all." - Re "Check it.{w=.4} I’ve been recording our practices." + Re "Check it. I’ve been recording our practices." show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) "Fang and Trish both look at me expectantly." @@ -1954,12 +2053,12 @@ label chapter_2: "Fuckshitfuckokay you can do this." pause .5 - A "Cool,{w=.3} lemme see." + A "Cool, lemme see." pause .5 play music 'audio/OST/The (audiophile edition).ogg' with vpunch - pause .6 + pause 1 "Even through the poor recording quality I can see and hear just how atrocious the band is." @@ -1969,16 +2068,17 @@ label chapter_2: F "W{w=.2}-well?" show trish happy flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "We’re great,{w=.3} right Anon?" + T "We’re great, right Anon?" - A "It’s uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} certainly original." + A "It’s uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} certainly original." show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "I know,{w=.2} right?" + T "I know, right?" - A "But like,{w=.4} why two basses?" + A "But like, why two basses?" + pause .5 - "Fang glances at me from the side.{w=.5} Weird." + "Fang glances at me from the side. Weird." show trish happy flip with Dissolve(.25) T "It’s our style!" @@ -1986,7 +2086,7 @@ label chapter_2: A "I{w=.2}-I see." - "What do I say here?{w=.4} I can only give feedback on games I haven’t played,{w=.4} not music!" + "What do I say here? I can only give feedback on games I haven’t played, not music!" pause .5 menu: @@ -2008,19 +2108,19 @@ label chapter_2: $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.02, 'music') show reed shocked flip: - easein 0.5 xalign 0.54 + easein_quart 1 xalign 0.54 show fang surprised flip: - easein 0.5 xalign 0.99 + easein_quart 1 xalign 0.99 show trish surprised flip: - easein 0.5 xalign 1.155 - # TODO: all three look at anon with surprise + easein_quart 1 xalign 1.155 pause .5 stop ambient stop music "The three stop in their tracks and look back at me." + pause .5 "Think I messed up." - pause .6 + pause .5 show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) F "How could you tell?" @@ -2032,20 +2132,20 @@ label chapter_2: show trish neutral flip show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - Re "Jeez man,{w=.4} you got the ears of a bat?" + Re "Jeez man, you got the ears of a bat?" show reed neutral flip pause .5 - A "Uhh,{w=.4} just something I picked up." + A "Uhh, just something I picked up." pause .5 - F "I didn’t know you knew about that sort of thing,{w=.2} Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "I didn’t know you knew about that sort of thing, Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed explanatory flip - Re "Yo,{w=.2} next time we have a concert{cps=*.1}... {/cps}{w=.5}{nw}" + Re "Yo, next time we have a concert{cps=*.1}... {/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg' show reed happy flip - extend "You gotta come along." + extend "you gotta come along." show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) @@ -2054,26 +2154,27 @@ label chapter_2: show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) "Trish glowers at me warily." - T "I dunno,{w=.4} maybe if he actually talked about himself for once." + T "I dunno, maybe if he actually talked about himself for once." "Nope,{w=.3} nuh uh,{w=.3} no way,{w=.3} abort!" show reed explanatory flip - Re "Yeah,{w=.1} man,{w=.4} go ahead.{w=.5} None of us are judgin’.{w=.5} I’m not at least." + Re "Yeah, man, go ahead. None of us are judgin’. I’m not at least." show reed neutral flip - show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + show fang neutral flip + with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 A "Well{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 show reed shocked flip: - easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.65#0.54 + easein_quart 1 xalign 0.65#0.54 show fang surprised flip: - easein_quart 0.5 xalign 1.15#0.99 + easein_quart 1 xalign 1.15#0.99 show trish neutral flip: - easein_quart 0.5 xalign 1.25#1.155 - FRT "Ohfuck.{w=.4} Sorry Anon,{w=.2} we gotta bail." + easein_quart 1 xalign 1.25#1.155 + FRT "Ohfuck.{w=.4} Sorry Anon, we gotta bail." play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg' show reed: @@ -2101,6 +2202,7 @@ label chapter_2: show anon: easein_quad 0.5 xalign 0.1 A "Huh?{w=.2} Where-" + pause .5 "They’re already gone." pause .5 @@ -2134,19 +2236,19 @@ label chapter_2: show anon neutral flip with dissolve - "I turn around to see Naser and Naomi approaching,{w=.4} food in hand." + "I turn around to see Naser and Naomi approaching, food in hand." show naomi explanatory - N "I knew I’d find you here with the others,{w=.2} Anon!" + N "I knew I’d find you here with the others, Anon!" - N "Shame they ran off,{w=.4} why do they do that?" + N "Shame they ran off, why do they do that?" show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) - "Her shrill goody goody sugary voice is piercing through the chatter of the lunchroom,{w=.4} I don’t wanna reply if it means hearing more of her voice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Her shrill goody goody sugary voice is piercing through the chatter of the lunchroom, I don’t wanna reply if it means hearing more of her voice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - N "Wasn't that Naser's sister?{w=.4} How wonderful that you're making friends,{w=.2} Anon!" + N "Wasn't that Naser's sister? How wonderful that you're making friends, Anon!" - N "Tell me everything!{w=.4} What were you and Fang talking about?" + N "Tell me everything! What were you and Fang talking about?" show naomi explanatory: ease 0.25 yalign 0.05 @@ -2154,15 +2256,15 @@ label chapter_2: N "I wanna know all about it!" show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) - "Oh help me,{w=.1} God.{w=.4} I just can’t catch a break." + "Oh help me, God. I just can’t catch a break." "I just want to go home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "But there's still half a day to go{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - Nas "Hey Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} you uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} seem kinda low energy, {w=.4}{nw}" + Nas "Hey Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps} you uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}" show naser unimpressed - extend "are you alright?" + extend "seem kinda low energy, are you alright?" show dimmer_light behind anon with Dissolve(.25) @@ -2175,20 +2277,20 @@ label chapter_2: show naser neutral show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25) - N "{cps=*.3}Aaaww,{/cps}{w=.4} he's just thrilled to make new friends!" + N "{cps=*.3}Aaaww,{/cps} he's just thrilled to make new friends!" show naser happy - Nas "Yeah man,{w=.3} good on you.{w=.4} You’re quite the extrovert!" + Nas "Yeah man, good on you. You’re quite the extrovert!" pause .5 - "I’m mentally screaming,{w=.4} I swear I just want to get out and never come back." + "I’m mentally screaming, I swear I just want to get out and never come back." show naomi neutral show naser neutral with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Was that really my sibling you were hanging with?" - A "Fang and her friends,{w=.3} yeah.{w=.5} Strange group,{w=.2} I know." + A "Fang and her friends, yeah. Strange group, I know." show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25) N "I'll say." @@ -2198,7 +2300,7 @@ label chapter_2: show naser considering extend "they’re{w=.2} not that bad once you get to know them." - A "Colorful folk,{w=.3} I know." + A "Colorful folk, I know." show naser neutral with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} no{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I mean -THEY-{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -2208,40 +2310,40 @@ label chapter_2: show naser unimpressed Nas "Fang!" - A "Uh-huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} sure hope so.{w=.4} Seems I’m going to be her lab partner for the rest of the year." + A "Uh-huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} sure hope so. Seems I’m going to be her lab partner for the rest of the year." show naser neutral Nas "Whoa." - show naomi considering + show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25) "Naomi pauses for a second." pause .5 - Nas "Honestly.{w=.4} They’re just going through a phase man." + Nas "Honestly. They’re just going through a phase man." A "That phase include rants about non-binarism?" show naser sad with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "*sigh*{w=.4} Fang hit you with that too?" + Nas "*sigh* Fang hit you with that too?" show naomi explanatory with Dissolve(.25) - N "What a great opportunity for real friendship Anon!{w=.5} I’m so happy for you!" + N "What a great opportunity for real friendship Anon! I’m so happy for you!" show naomi neutral show naser considering with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 - Nas "...?" + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" show anon: - easein 0.5 xalign 0.95 + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.95 - A "...?" + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" - N "If there’s anything Fang needs in these trying times,{w=.4} it’s a new friend to talk to!" + N "If there’s anything Fang needs in these trying times, it’s a new friend to talk to!" pause .5 - A "{cps=*.3}Uuuuuh,{/cps}{w=.4} I don’t know about that,{w=.4} you know how they is,{w=.2} right?" + A "{cps=*.3}Uuuuuh,{/cps} I don’t know about that, you know how they is, right?" show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25) N "I would love it if you tried! {w=.5}{nw}" @@ -2255,7 +2357,9 @@ label chapter_2: show naser: easein 0.5 xalign 0.2 show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "Whoa,{w=.4} calm down,{w=.1} boo.{w=.5} That’s not how it works{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} and I don’t think{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Nas "Whoa, calm down, boo." + + Nas "That’s not how it works{cps=*.1}...{/cps} and I don’t think{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg' stop music fadeout 1 @@ -2264,7 +2368,7 @@ label chapter_2: show naser considering flip show naomi neutral with dissolve - "The bell’s loud sound rings on our ears" + "The bell’s loud sound rings on our ears." "A rush of relief and dopamine overcome me." pause .5 @@ -2276,54 +2380,56 @@ label chapter_2: play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 1 show naser neutral with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "Uhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} we’ll talk later,{w=.2} Anon.{w=.5} I’ll have to keep my eye on you,{w=.2} though." + Nas "Uhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} we’ll talk later, Anon. I’ll have to keep my eye on you, though." show naomi: easein 0.5 xalign 0.05 - N "Don’t worry, Naser.{w=.4} I know Anon is of good character!" + N "Don’t worry, Naser. I know Anon is of good character!" pause .5 "What is she talking about?" pause .5 - "You know what,{w=.4} it don’t matter.{w=.6} Nonathiss matters." + "You know what, it don’t matter.{w=.4} Nonathiss matters." pause .5 "Only useful thing I learned all day." pause .5 - A "Uhhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I guess I’ll have to go now,{w=.4} see you around." + A "Uhhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I guess I’ll have to go now, see you around." pause .5 - "Be a little nicer,{w=.2} Anon" + "Be a little nicer, Anon" show anon happy flip with Dissolve(.25) - A "Ask if you need anything,{w=.4} I’ll help you out." - show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + A "Ask if you need anything, I’ll help you out." + show anon neutral flip with dissolve - show naomi explanatory - N "Oh I’ll hold you on that one! {w=.5}{nw}" - show naomi happy - extend "Just you wait,{w=.4} {cps=*.4}hahahahahah!{/cps}" + show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25) + N "Oh I’ll hold you on that one! Just you wait, {cps=*.4}hahahahahah!{/cps}" + pause .5 - "Nice.{w=.4} Now you’ll never get them off your back.{w=.5} Congratulations." + "Nice. Now you’ll never get them off your back. Congratulations." show naomi neutral show naser happy - with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "Hey,{w=.4} take it easy, man!" + with dissolve + Nas "Hey, take it easy, man!" - N "Come Naser!{w=.4} We have a busy day today!" + N "Come Naser! We have a busy day today!" show naser considering with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "Oh,{w=.2} sure." - - stop music fadeout 3 - stop ambient fadeout 2 - scene black with fade + Nas "Oh, sure." A "See ya." + pause .5 - "..." + stop music fadeout 3 + stop ambient fadeout 3 + scene black with Dissolve(1.5) + pause .5 + + "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}" + pause .5 return