timing tweaks

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "The idea of ‘marine layer’ is new to me,{w=0.4} but I do understand morning mist."
 
-    "This was like it, except infinitely more shitty."
+    "This was like it,{w=0.2} except infinitely more shitty."
 
     "The heavy fog makes navigating to my new school more difficult as I fail to see anything five feet in front of me."
 
@@ -87,6 +87,8 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     A "Perfect setting for a horror game.{w=0.5} Or maybe a shitty WAD."
 
+    pause 0.5
+
     "The attempt at humouring myself just made me feel more alone."
 
     show anonphone with dissolve
@@ -159,9 +161,9 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Everyone that has looked at me like that never proved to be anything more than an asshole."
 
-    "Like I'M the anomaly here.{w=0.7} She's just as dumb and insufferable as the rest of them."
+    "Like I'M the anomaly here.{w=0.6} She's just as dumb and insufferable as the rest of them."
 
-    "She’s probably no better than me,{w=0.4} miss \"my snout is so big I can land a plane on it\"."
+    "She’s probably no better than me,{w=0.3} miss \"my snout is so big I can land a plane on it\"."
 
     "Go back to your friends."
 
@@ -173,16 +175,16 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Huh.{w} She did.{w} I feel like I should say something."
 
+    pause 1
+
     "I notice that all this time my knees were weak and my arms were heavy."
 
     "My feet carry me over the soggy grass as I look for somewhere else to be."
 
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    stop sound
-    stop audio
-
     "On the side of the building is where I find sanctuary"
 
+    stop music fadeout 1.0
+
     scene garden
     show anon neutral flip at scenter
     with fade
@@ -203,6 +205,8 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show anon sad flip with dissolve
 
+    pause 0.5
+
     "Head in my hands I can fully understand what I’ve done now."
 
     "Six months in a new school."
@@ -221,8 +225,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "{i}{cps=*0.3}I don’t care which.{/cps}{/i}"
     
-    window hide
+    pause 1
-    pause 0.5
 
     show naomi silo at sleft
     show naser silo at sright
@@ -345,11 +348,14 @@ label chapter_1:
         xalign 0.05 yalign 0.1
     with MoveTransition(0.75, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
 
+    show naomi:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.02
+
     "Naser pulls her into a hug and nudges his muzzle against hers.{w=0.6} Is that how dinos kiss?"
 
     hide naser 
     show anon neutral 
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(0.75)
 
     "He leaves,{w=0.3} running quickly to assist with the heavy sound equipment."
 
@@ -385,11 +391,12 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "I pull the folded up sheet from my pocket and hand it to her.{w=0.6} She unfolds it delicately and scans the page thoroughly."
 
-    show naomi happy
+    show naomi happy with Dissolve(.2)
 
     N "Oh my gosh!{w=0.6} We share a home room Anon!"
 
-    show naomi neutral with dissolve
+    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause 0.5
 
     "{cps=*0.4}Oh wonderful.{/cps}"
 
@@ -418,18 +425,21 @@ label chapter_1:
     show jinflip at sleft with dissolve
 
     Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Ohayo gozaimasu curassu.{w=0.7} Tudei yu habu e niu curassu-meito tsu Borukeino Hai{/cps}"
+    pause 0.6
 
     "What"
 
     Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun{w=0.25} puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Naomi coughs and makes a subtle nod up."
 
     stop music fadeout 1.0
+    pause 0.8
 
     "OH!"
 
-    "I stood from my seat and faced the class.{w=0.6} Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns.{w} I inhale deep,{w=0.4} willing my erratic heart to slow."
+    "I stood from my seat and faced the class.{w=0.5} Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns.{w} I inhale deep,{w=0.3} willing my erratic heart to slow."
 
     show anon neutral flip at acenter
     show jinflip behind anon:
@@ -448,26 +458,28 @@ label chapter_1:
     A "I don’t really have any hobbies."
 
     "I wanted to flee.{w} Hide away.{w} Anything to avoid those judging eyes."
+    pause .5
 
     N "{cps=*0.4}Why did you transfer here?{/cps}"
 
     show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(1)
 
-    "My throat clenches.{w=0.5} It’s an innocent question.{w=0.6} But I think back again to it all."
+    "My throat clenches.{w} It’s an innocent question.{w=0.5} But I think back again to it all."
 
     A "uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.4} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
 
-    "There’s whispers now.{w=0.75} The hushed tones,{w=0.3} silenced snickers,{w=0.3} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me."
+    "There’s whispers now.{w} The hushed tones,{w=0.4} silenced snickers,{w=0.4} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me."
 
     show dimmer_darker behind anon, jinflip with dissolve
 
     Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun,{w=0.5} yuu du natto habu tsu ansaa zattu{/cps}"
 
     hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(0.25)
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "His words snap me out of my trance.{w=0.6} Only Naomi was looking at me.{w=0.6} The rest were preoccupied."
+    "His words snap me out of my trance.{w=0.5} Only Naomi was looking at me.{w=0.4} The rest were preoccupied."
 
-    "Either talking about their winter break.{w=0.5} Or catching up on sleep."
+    "Either talking about their winter break.{w=0.4} Or catching up on sleep."
 
     "They’ve all been ignoring me the entire time."
 
@@ -476,12 +488,14 @@ label chapter_1:
     with ease
 
     Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Puriizu retaano tsu yo shiito,{w=0.3} Anon-kun.{w=0.5} {i}Hai{/i},{w=0.3} nao curassu-{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "{cps=*0.4}That was nothing like my Japanese animes.{/cps}"
+    "{cps=*0.5}That was nothing like my Japanese animes.{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     hide anon neutral with dissolve
 
-    "Mr. Tsuki continued on,{w=0.4} drawing what little attention there was to himself.{w=0.6} I sat down,{w=0.3} finally feeling the blood that had caught in my legs rush up,{w=0.3} leaving me lightheaded."
+    "Mr. Tsuki continued on,{w=0.3} drawing what little attention there was to himself.{w} I sat down,{w=0.4} finally feeling the blood that had caught in my legs rush up,{w=0.2} leaving me lightheaded."
 
     hide jinflip with dissolve
 
@@ -503,16 +517,17 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Eventually,{w=0.4} lunch comes around."
 
-    "I don’t have the lunch card yet,{w=0.4} so I settle for a pseudopizza."
+    "I don’t have a lunch card yet,{w=0.3} so I settle for the pseudopizza."
 
     "The kind that becomes a viable weapon if you leave it alone for ten minutes."
 
-    "No time to waste after exiting the line, I scan the lunchroom for an open seat."
+    "No time to waste after exiting the line,{w=0.2} I scan the lunchroom for an open seat."
 
     "I thought I had found a decent spot in the corner when disaster struck."
 
     stop ambient fadeout 0.25
 
+    # TODO: SFX of some kind
     show naser neutral behind anon with easeinleft:
         xalign -0.6 yalign 0.1
     show anon fear:
@@ -533,11 +548,11 @@ label chapter_1:
     play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
 
     show anon sad flip behind naser with Dissolve(0.25)
-    pause 0.5
+    pause 0.8
     show naser explanatory
     with Dissolve(0.25)
 
-    Nas "Whoa there!{w=0.7} Nearly dropped your food Anon."
+    Nas "Whoa there!{w=0.6} Nearly dropped your food Anon."
 
     show naser happy 
     show anon neutral flip
@@ -555,7 +570,8 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "I swear to all that is good and holy."
 
-    show naser happy with dissolve
+    show naser happy with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause 0.5
 
     Nas "Wanna sit with us?"
 
@@ -642,7 +658,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Naomi is starting to look disappointed I’m only picking up on Naser’s interjections"
 
-    Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow,{w=0.4} there’s going to be free refreshments at my si--{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow,{w=0.3} there’s going to be free refreshments at my si--{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show naser considering flip with Dissolve(0.25)
     pause 0.75
@@ -768,6 +784,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     scene black with fade
 
     "{cps=*0.2}--After school--{/cps}"
+    pause 0.8
 
     "My classes after lunch were the same as before it."
 
@@ -805,6 +822,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "Fang:{fast} Is the pizza here?"
 
     "Fang:{fast} You can have a slice"
+    pause 0.75
 
     "Fang:{fast} But after that you{w=0.1} {cps=*0.15}GTFO{w=0.3} FWR{/cps}"
 
@@ -822,7 +840,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "Nah.{w=0.6} Fucked wing retard.{w=0.7} Fang’s words,{w=0.3} not mine."
 
-    A "Is your uh{cps=*0.05}...{/cps} sibling{w=0.4} always like this?"
+    A "Is your uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} sibling{w=0.4} always like this?"
 
     Nas "{cps=*0.4}Fang’s{/cps}{cps=*0.1}....{/cps}"
 
@@ -833,6 +851,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     Nas "Well um{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Nas "I mean,{w=0.4} kinda?"
+    pause 0.75
 
     A "Glad I’m an only child."
 
@@ -915,7 +934,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show spears neutral
 
-    Sp "Now,{w=0.2} go enjoy the show."
+    Sp "Now,{w=0.3} go enjoy the show."
 
     A "Yes sir."
 
@@ -936,7 +955,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show naser happy
 
-    Nas "You can take a couple boxes after,{w=0.2} Anon.{w=0.6} That should help ya out."
+    Nas "You can take a couple boxes after,{w=0.1} Anon.{w=0.6} That should help ya out."
 
     A "Who the hell got all these anyway?"
 
@@ -972,7 +991,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     # show anon neutral flip at sleft with move
     # show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
 
-    "I lean against the wall, chewing bits of supreme and observing the rest of the crowd."
+    "I lean against the wall,{w=0.2} chewing bits of supreme and observing the rest of the crowd."
 
     show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve
 
@@ -994,11 +1013,11 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     stop ambient fadeout 3.0
 
-    "The crowd moves in, though I hang back so I can talk with Naser."
+    "The crowd moves in,{w=0.3} though I hang back so I can talk with Naser."
 
     show naser neutral at ncenter with dissolve
 
-    A "What’s with them,{w=0.2} Naser?"
+    A "What’s with them,{w=0.1} Naser?"
 
     Nas "What do you mean?"
 
@@ -1042,14 +1061,12 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naser angry with Dissolve(0.25)
 
     Nas "{cps=*0.5}I brought them here so Fang has an audience.{/cps}"
-    window hide
-    stop music
 
-    pause 0.5
+    stop music
+    pause 1
 
     A "Oh."
 
-    window hide
     pause 1
 
     show naser considering with dissolve