diff --git a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy index 1b57a8b..152f9c1 100644 --- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy +++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ label chapter_1: "The idea of ‘marine layer’ is new to me,{w=0.4} but I do understand morning mist." - "This was like it, except infinitely more shitty." + "This was like it,{w=0.2} except infinitely more shitty." "The heavy fog makes navigating to my new school more difficult as I fail to see anything five feet in front of me." @@ -87,6 +87,8 @@ label chapter_1: A "Perfect setting for a horror game.{w=0.5} Or maybe a shitty WAD." + pause 0.5 + "The attempt at humouring myself just made me feel more alone." show anonphone with dissolve @@ -159,9 +161,9 @@ label chapter_1: "Everyone that has looked at me like that never proved to be anything more than an asshole." - "Like I'M the anomaly here.{w=0.7} She's just as dumb and insufferable as the rest of them." + "Like I'M the anomaly here.{w=0.6} She's just as dumb and insufferable as the rest of them." - "She’s probably no better than me,{w=0.4} miss \"my snout is so big I can land a plane on it\"." + "She’s probably no better than me,{w=0.3} miss \"my snout is so big I can land a plane on it\"." "Go back to your friends." @@ -173,16 +175,16 @@ label chapter_1: "Huh.{w} She did.{w} I feel like I should say something." + pause 1 + "I notice that all this time my knees were weak and my arms were heavy." "My feet carry me over the soggy grass as I look for somewhere else to be." - stop music fadeout 1.0 - stop sound - stop audio - "On the side of the building is where I find sanctuary" + stop music fadeout 1.0 + scene garden show anon neutral flip at scenter with fade @@ -203,6 +205,8 @@ label chapter_1: show anon sad flip with dissolve + pause 0.5 + "Head in my hands I can fully understand what I’ve done now." "Six months in a new school." @@ -221,8 +225,7 @@ label chapter_1: "{i}{cps=*0.3}I don’t care which.{/cps}{/i}" - window hide - pause 0.5 + pause 1 show naomi silo at sleft show naser silo at sright @@ -345,11 +348,14 @@ label chapter_1: xalign 0.05 yalign 0.1 with MoveTransition(0.75, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp) + show naomi: + easein 0.5 xalign 0.02 + "Naser pulls her into a hug and nudges his muzzle against hers.{w=0.6} Is that how dinos kiss?" hide naser show anon neutral - with dissolve + with Dissolve(0.75) "He leaves,{w=0.3} running quickly to assist with the heavy sound equipment." @@ -385,11 +391,12 @@ label chapter_1: "I pull the folded up sheet from my pocket and hand it to her.{w=0.6} She unfolds it delicately and scans the page thoroughly." - show naomi happy + show naomi happy with Dissolve(.2) N "Oh my gosh!{w=0.6} We share a home room Anon!" - show naomi neutral with dissolve + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause 0.5 "{cps=*0.4}Oh wonderful.{/cps}" @@ -418,18 +425,21 @@ label chapter_1: show jinflip at sleft with dissolve Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Ohayo gozaimasu curassu.{w=0.7} Tudei yu habu e niu curassu-meito tsu Borukeino Hai{/cps}" + pause 0.6 "What" Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun{w=0.25} puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu{/cps}" + pause 0.5 "Naomi coughs and makes a subtle nod up." stop music fadeout 1.0 + pause 0.8 "OH!" - "I stood from my seat and faced the class.{w=0.6} Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns.{w} I inhale deep,{w=0.4} willing my erratic heart to slow." + "I stood from my seat and faced the class.{w=0.5} Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns.{w} I inhale deep,{w=0.3} willing my erratic heart to slow." show anon neutral flip at acenter show jinflip behind anon: @@ -448,26 +458,28 @@ label chapter_1: A "I don’t really have any hobbies." "I wanted to flee.{w} Hide away.{w} Anything to avoid those judging eyes." + pause .5 N "{cps=*0.4}Why did you transfer here?{/cps}" show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(1) - "My throat clenches.{w=0.5} It’s an innocent question.{w=0.6} But I think back again to it all." + "My throat clenches.{w} It’s an innocent question.{w=0.5} But I think back again to it all." A "uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.4} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}" - "There’s whispers now.{w=0.75} The hushed tones,{w=0.3} silenced snickers,{w=0.3} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me." + "There’s whispers now.{w} The hushed tones,{w=0.4} silenced snickers,{w=0.4} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me." show dimmer_darker behind anon, jinflip with dissolve Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun,{w=0.5} yuu du natto habu tsu ansaa zattu{/cps}" hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(0.25) + pause 0.5 - "His words snap me out of my trance.{w=0.6} Only Naomi was looking at me.{w=0.6} The rest were preoccupied." + "His words snap me out of my trance.{w=0.5} Only Naomi was looking at me.{w=0.4} The rest were preoccupied." - "Either talking about their winter break.{w=0.5} Or catching up on sleep." + "Either talking about their winter break.{w=0.4} Or catching up on sleep." "They’ve all been ignoring me the entire time." @@ -476,12 +488,14 @@ label chapter_1: with ease Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Puriizu retaano tsu yo shiito,{w=0.3} Anon-kun.{w=0.5} {i}Hai{/i},{w=0.3} nao curassu-{/cps}" + pause 0.5 - "{cps=*0.4}That was nothing like my Japanese animes.{/cps}" + "{cps=*0.5}That was nothing like my Japanese animes.{/cps}" + pause 0.5 hide anon neutral with dissolve - "Mr. Tsuki continued on,{w=0.4} drawing what little attention there was to himself.{w=0.6} I sat down,{w=0.3} finally feeling the blood that had caught in my legs rush up,{w=0.3} leaving me lightheaded." + "Mr. Tsuki continued on,{w=0.3} drawing what little attention there was to himself.{w} I sat down,{w=0.4} finally feeling the blood that had caught in my legs rush up,{w=0.2} leaving me lightheaded." hide jinflip with dissolve @@ -503,16 +517,17 @@ label chapter_1: "Eventually,{w=0.4} lunch comes around." - "I don’t have the lunch card yet,{w=0.4} so I settle for a pseudopizza." + "I don’t have a lunch card yet,{w=0.3} so I settle for the pseudopizza." "The kind that becomes a viable weapon if you leave it alone for ten minutes." - "No time to waste after exiting the line, I scan the lunchroom for an open seat." + "No time to waste after exiting the line,{w=0.2} I scan the lunchroom for an open seat." "I thought I had found a decent spot in the corner when disaster struck." stop ambient fadeout 0.25 + # TODO: SFX of some kind show naser neutral behind anon with easeinleft: xalign -0.6 yalign 0.1 show anon fear: @@ -533,11 +548,11 @@ label chapter_1: play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 0.5 show anon sad flip behind naser with Dissolve(0.25) - pause 0.5 + pause 0.8 show naser explanatory with Dissolve(0.25) - Nas "Whoa there!{w=0.7} Nearly dropped your food Anon." + Nas "Whoa there!{w=0.6} Nearly dropped your food Anon." show naser happy show anon neutral flip @@ -555,7 +570,8 @@ label chapter_1: "I swear to all that is good and holy." - show naser happy with dissolve + show naser happy with Dissolve(.25) + pause 0.5 Nas "Wanna sit with us?" @@ -642,7 +658,7 @@ label chapter_1: "Naomi is starting to look disappointed I’m only picking up on Naser’s interjections" - Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow,{w=0.4} there’s going to be free refreshments at my si--{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" + Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow,{w=0.3} there’s going to be free refreshments at my si--{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" show naser considering flip with Dissolve(0.25) pause 0.75 @@ -768,6 +784,7 @@ label chapter_1: scene black with fade "{cps=*0.2}--After school--{/cps}" + pause 0.8 "My classes after lunch were the same as before it." @@ -805,6 +822,7 @@ label chapter_1: "Fang:{fast} Is the pizza here?" "Fang:{fast} You can have a slice" + pause 0.75 "Fang:{fast} But after that you{w=0.1} {cps=*0.15}GTFO{w=0.3} FWR{/cps}" @@ -822,7 +840,7 @@ label chapter_1: Nas "Nah.{w=0.6} Fucked wing retard.{w=0.7} Fang’s words,{w=0.3} not mine." - A "Is your uh{cps=*0.05}...{/cps} sibling{w=0.4} always like this?" + A "Is your uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} sibling{w=0.4} always like this?" Nas "{cps=*0.4}Fang’s{/cps}{cps=*0.1}....{/cps}" @@ -833,6 +851,7 @@ label chapter_1: Nas "Well um{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" Nas "I mean,{w=0.4} kinda?" + pause 0.75 A "Glad I’m an only child." @@ -915,7 +934,7 @@ label chapter_1: show spears neutral - Sp "Now,{w=0.2} go enjoy the show." + Sp "Now,{w=0.3} go enjoy the show." A "Yes sir." @@ -936,7 +955,7 @@ label chapter_1: show naser happy - Nas "You can take a couple boxes after,{w=0.2} Anon.{w=0.6} That should help ya out." + Nas "You can take a couple boxes after,{w=0.1} Anon.{w=0.6} That should help ya out." A "Who the hell got all these anyway?" @@ -972,7 +991,7 @@ label chapter_1: # show anon neutral flip at sleft with move # show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve - "I lean against the wall, chewing bits of supreme and observing the rest of the crowd." + "I lean against the wall,{w=0.2} chewing bits of supreme and observing the rest of the crowd." show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve @@ -994,11 +1013,11 @@ label chapter_1: stop ambient fadeout 3.0 - "The crowd moves in, though I hang back so I can talk with Naser." + "The crowd moves in,{w=0.3} though I hang back so I can talk with Naser." show naser neutral at ncenter with dissolve - A "What’s with them,{w=0.2} Naser?" + A "What’s with them,{w=0.1} Naser?" Nas "What do you mean?" @@ -1042,14 +1061,12 @@ label chapter_1: show naser angry with Dissolve(0.25) Nas "{cps=*0.5}I brought them here so Fang has an audience.{/cps}" - window hide - stop music - pause 0.5 + stop music + pause 1 A "Oh." - window hide pause 1 show naser considering with dissolve