rework ch11B

game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy

@@ -5186,7 +5186,7 @@ label chapter_11:
 
         Drf "Are you two getting along well?"
 
-        AnonAndFang "Yes, Mister Fernsworth."
+        AnonAndFang "Yes, Doctor Fernsworth."
 
         Drf "Great to hear."
         pause .5

game/script/11B.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-and-she's-smug-about-it.rpy

@@ -1,76 +1,31 @@
 label chapter_11B:
     #>>doomer | Announcing Nothing Important
-    play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    stop music fadeout 4
-    "About fifteen minutes into the assignment, the two of us are just about done."
 
-    "We’re making surprisingly good time."
+    pause .5
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
-    F "Uhm… and you said that the electrons hold the negative charge, right?"
-
-    A "Yeah, yeah."
-
-    F "Can’t imagine when I’d be using this crap in real life."
-
-    A "You never know, you might shrink one day."
-
-    F "Yeah, and you might stop pretending you’re livestreaming on Yousnoot."
-
-    A "As far as you know I might be giving you incorrect answers, you know."
-
-    F "Mhm, sure."
-
-    "The teacher is making his rounds checking on the students and gets to our desks."
-    show farnsworth flip at sleft with moveinleft
-    Drf "Hello, Anon. Fang."
-    show anon neutral flip at acenter with dissolve
-    Drf "Are you two getting along well?"
-
-    AnonAndFang "Yes, Mister Fernsworth."
-
-    Drf "Great to hear."
-
-    Drf "You know, I’m real proud of you two."
-
-    Drf "I remember at the start of the year you were at each other's' throats."
-
-    Drf "And now look at you!"
-
-    "The two of us cringe."
-
-    A "Uhh… Yeah, thanks."
-
-    Drf "At any rate, you two understand the material, right?"
-
-    A "Oh yeah, Fang and I are fine."
-
-    A "I was just helping them with a few problems."
-    hide fang neutral
-    show fang happy flip at sright
-    "Phew, remembered it this time."
-
-    Drf "Good, good."
-
-    Drf "I won’t keep you any longer then."
-
-    "Fernsworth meanders to pester the next few students."
-    hide farnsworth flip
-    show farnsworth
-    hide farnsworth with moveoutleft
-    A "Anyways, where were we?"
-    show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
     "I turn back to see Fang giving me a raised eyebrow and a smug grin."
 
-    F "So…"
+    F "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     A "Hm?"
 
-    "Fang's eyebrow rise and fall faster and faster."
+    play music 'audio/ost/fuck you i like to shitpost.ogg' fadein 1
+
+    "Fang's eyebrows rise and fall faster and faster."
 
     "as if she's trying to send a message in morse code."
+    pause .5
 
     "Wait wha-"
 
     F "Heh. See, you can learn, Anon."
+    pause .5
 
     "Oh."
 
@@ -78,96 +33,138 @@ label chapter_11B:
 
     "Oh god she’s still on about that?!"
 
-    "...She does seem pretty serious about it."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}She does seem pretty serious about it."
 
-    "We’ve been friends long enough…"
+    "We’ve been friends long enough{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I guess it’s the least I can do to start going along with it."
+    pause .5
 
     F "I didn’t realize you were Pan, Anon."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Pan? Wait, what does a Raptor William’s movie have to do with this?"
 
+    show fang:
+        easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
+    pause .15
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
     F "No, dummy! You’re Pansexual!"
 
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05
     A "I’m sorry, what?"
 
     F "You’re Pan!"
 
     F "That means you’re willing to date people regardless of identity!"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Do I come off as that desperate…?"
+    "Do I come off as that desperate{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
 
     #I knew someone who would say shit like this and it was a great pain ~ Programnon
+    # B: pics or it didn't happen
     F "I’m an enbie, you recognize me, we’re dating, therefore you are Pan!"
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang deserves a gold medal at the mental gymnastic olympics."
 
     "Even the French would give that routine a ten outta ten."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Aaaaanyways…."
+    "Aaaaanyways{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "Mumblin’ again."
 
-    A "...Prom! You uh.. Wanna actually like… go? Together?"
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Prom! You uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} wanna actually like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} go? Together?"
 
     "Ugh, which is worse, the panny stuff or prom?"
 
-    F "mmmm… naaaaah."
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45
+    show fang considering flip with dissolve
+    F "Mmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps} naaaaah."
 
-    F "Prom is like… so lame, ya know?"
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Prom is like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} so lame, ya know?"
 
     A "O-oh. Yeah, I get ya. Not to mention a waste of money."
 
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Yeah. Money better spent on actual good stuff."
 
     A "Like carfe?"
+    pause .5
 
     "In the distance I can hear Reed rebuffing my attempt to try his product."
 
     F "Yeah. And booze."
 
     A "Yeah totally. Like, prom cash is way better spent on fun stuff like liquor."
+    pause .5
 
+    show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "In fact, we totally should."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Should what?"
 
     F "Have our own prom! Just the two of us! With booze!"
 
     "I consider the idea for a moment."
+    pause .5
 
     "Just Fang, me and a few dozen cans of beer somewhere."
-
+    pause .5
+    
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    show anon grin with Dissolve(.25)
     A "Fuck yeah!"
 
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
     F "Fuck yeah!"
 
     Drf "Quiet down, you in the back."
-
+    
+    show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
     A "Oops."
+    pause .5
 
+    show anon concerned with Dissolve(.25)
     A "Crap, the assignment!"
 
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "You’re still worried about that?"
 
     "I flip the page over to reveal the second half, which we only have about ten minutes to finish."
 
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "It’s just the one assignment, and there’s already no way you can finish, right?"
 
+    show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Just relax, take a break now and then."
 
     "I worriedly glance at the page again."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Maybe she’s... they’re right."
+    "Maybe she’s{cps=*.1}...{/cps} they’re right."
 
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
     A "Alright, sure."
 
-    scene black with fade
+    stop music fadeout 4
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    pause .5
+
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
     "The two of us continue making plans up to the bell, and I toss the paper out when I leave."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
     return

game/script/11C.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-but-she-tells-him-she's-okay-with-being-called-a-girl.rpy

@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ label chapter_11C:
 
     show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Lucy "Sounds like a second date."
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
 
     stop music fadeout 4
     scene black with Dissolve(1)