From c62ba3eb3c11747603c3059b13515187f47c8b03 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Sun, 29 Aug 2021 22:17:33 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework ch11B --- .../11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy | 2 +- ...ronouns-right,-and-she's-smug-about-it.rpy | 139 +++++++++--------- ...im-she's-okay-with-being-called-a-girl.rpy | 2 +- 3 files changed, 70 insertions(+), 73 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy b/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy index 0f75f63..f0223f6 100644 --- a/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy +++ b/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy @@ -5186,7 +5186,7 @@ label chapter_11: Drf "Are you two getting along well?" - AnonAndFang "Yes, Mister Fernsworth." + AnonAndFang "Yes, Doctor Fernsworth." Drf "Great to hear." pause .5 diff --git a/game/script/11B.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-and-she's-smug-about-it.rpy b/game/script/11B.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-and-she's-smug-about-it.rpy index a0d3509..5e57562 100644 --- a/game/script/11B.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-and-she's-smug-about-it.rpy +++ b/game/script/11B.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-and-she's-smug-about-it.rpy @@ -1,76 +1,31 @@ label chapter_11B: #>>doomer | Announcing Nothing Important - play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0 - "About fifteen minutes into the assignment, the two of us are just about done." + stop music fadeout 4 - "We’re making surprisingly good time." + pause .5 + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5 + show fang happy flip with dissolve + pause .5 - F "Uhm… and you said that the electrons hold the negative charge, right?" - - A "Yeah, yeah." - - F "Can’t imagine when I’d be using this crap in real life." - - A "You never know, you might shrink one day." - - F "Yeah, and you might stop pretending you’re livestreaming on Yousnoot." - - A "As far as you know I might be giving you incorrect answers, you know." - - F "Mhm, sure." - - "The teacher is making his rounds checking on the students and gets to our desks." - show farnsworth flip at sleft with moveinleft - Drf "Hello, Anon. Fang." - show anon neutral flip at acenter with dissolve - Drf "Are you two getting along well?" - - AnonAndFang "Yes, Mister Fernsworth." - - Drf "Great to hear." - - Drf "You know, I’m real proud of you two." - - Drf "I remember at the start of the year you were at each other's' throats." - - Drf "And now look at you!" - - "The two of us cringe." - - A "Uhh… Yeah, thanks." - - Drf "At any rate, you two understand the material, right?" - - A "Oh yeah, Fang and I are fine." - - A "I was just helping them with a few problems." - hide fang neutral - show fang happy flip at sright - "Phew, remembered it this time." - - Drf "Good, good." - - Drf "I won’t keep you any longer then." - - "Fernsworth meanders to pester the next few students." - hide farnsworth flip - show farnsworth - hide farnsworth with moveoutleft - A "Anyways, where were we?" - show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve "I turn back to see Fang giving me a raised eyebrow and a smug grin." - F "So…" + F "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 A "Hm?" - "Fang's eyebrow rise and fall faster and faster." + play music 'audio/ost/fuck you i like to shitpost.ogg' fadein 1 + + "Fang's eyebrows rise and fall faster and faster." "as if she's trying to send a message in morse code." + pause .5 "Wait wha-" F "Heh. See, you can learn, Anon." + pause .5 "Oh." @@ -78,96 +33,138 @@ label chapter_11B: "Oh god she’s still on about that?!" - "...She does seem pretty serious about it." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}She does seem pretty serious about it." - "We’ve been friends long enough…" + "We’ve been friends long enough{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "I guess it’s the least I can do to start going along with it." + pause .5 F "I didn’t realize you were Pan, Anon." + pause .5 A "Pan? Wait, what does a Raptor William’s movie have to do with this?" + show fang: + easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35 + ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4 + pause .15 + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 F "No, dummy! You’re Pansexual!" + show anon: + ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05 A "I’m sorry, what?" F "You’re Pan!" F "That means you’re willing to date people regardless of identity!" + pause .5 - "Do I come off as that desperate…?" + "Do I come off as that desperate{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" #I knew someone who would say shit like this and it was a great pain ~ Programnon + # B: pics or it didn't happen F "I’m an enbie, you recognize me, we’re dating, therefore you are Pan!" + pause .5 "Fang deserves a gold medal at the mental gymnastic olympics." "Even the French would give that routine a ten outta ten." + pause .5 - "Aaaaanyways…." + "Aaaaanyways{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" F "Mumblin’ again." - A "...Prom! You uh.. Wanna actually like… go? Together?" + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Prom! You uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} wanna actually like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} go? Together?" "Ugh, which is worse, the panny stuff or prom?" - F "mmmm… naaaaah." + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45 + show fang considering flip with dissolve + F "Mmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps} naaaaah." - F "Prom is like… so lame, ya know?" + show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "Prom is like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} so lame, ya know?" A "O-oh. Yeah, I get ya. Not to mention a waste of money." + show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) F "Yeah. Money better spent on actual good stuff." A "Like carfe?" + pause .5 "In the distance I can hear Reed rebuffing my attempt to try his product." F "Yeah. And booze." A "Yeah totally. Like, prom cash is way better spent on fun stuff like liquor." + pause .5 + show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25) F "In fact, we totally should." + pause .5 A "Should what?" F "Have our own prom! Just the two of us! With booze!" "I consider the idea for a moment." + pause .5 "Just Fang, me and a few dozen cans of beer somewhere." - + pause .5 + + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 + show anon grin with Dissolve(.25) A "Fuck yeah!" + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5 F "Fuck yeah!" Drf "Quiet down, you in the back." - + + show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) A "Oops." + pause .5 + show anon concerned with Dissolve(.25) A "Crap, the assignment!" + show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) F "You’re still worried about that?" "I flip the page over to reveal the second half, which we only have about ten minutes to finish." + show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) F "It’s just the one assignment, and there’s already no way you can finish, right?" + show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25) F "Just relax, take a break now and then." "I worriedly glance at the page again." + pause .5 - "Maybe she’s... they’re right." + "Maybe she’s{cps=*.1}...{/cps} they’re right." + show anon neutral with dissolve A "Alright, sure." - scene black with fade - stop music fadeout 1.0 + stop music fadeout 4 + pause .5 + + scene black with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 "The two of us continue making plans up to the bell, and I toss the paper out when I leave." - "..." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause 1 return \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/game/script/11C.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-but-she-tells-him-she's-okay-with-being-called-a-girl.rpy b/game/script/11C.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-but-she-tells-him-she's-okay-with-being-called-a-girl.rpy index 31dbbde..b45a6ea 100644 --- a/game/script/11C.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-but-she-tells-him-she's-okay-with-being-called-a-girl.rpy +++ b/game/script/11C.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-but-she-tells-him-she's-okay-with-being-called-a-girl.rpy @@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ label chapter_11C: show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25) Lucy "Sounds like a second date." - pause .5 + pause 1 stop music fadeout 4 scene black with Dissolve(1)