Replace select hyphens with em dashes

Hyphens were kept as-is for same-word stuttering
and section titles.
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Seth M. Price 2024-05-27 19:45:12 -04:00
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@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Wait, hold on{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
"Carnivore line, Filet Mignon-{w=.4} what the fuck is wrong with this school?!"
"Carnivore line, Filet Mignon—{w=.4}what the fuck is wrong with this school?!"
pause .5
A "Is there a soup kitchen or something around here?"
@ -594,7 +594,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"The absolute last thing I want to be doing is asking for handouts{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "{cps=*0.35}Actually,{w=.4} I-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}"
A "{cps=*0.35}Actually,{w=.4} I{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}"
window hide Dissolve(0.001)
window auto
@ -733,7 +733,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pause .65
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
unknown "-THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU MEAN I HAVE TO CLEAN UP AFTER?!" with vpunch # Fang
unknown "THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU MEAN I HAVE TO CLEAN UP AFTER?!" with vpunch # Fang
show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(1)
@ -1116,7 +1116,7 @@ label chapter_1:
N "How about your classes?{w=0.3}{nw}"
N "You seem-{w=0.3}{nw}"
N "You seem{w=0.3}{nw}"
"I just nod along, starting to not pay attention."
@ -1167,7 +1167,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Naomi is starting to look disappointed Im only picking up on Nasers interjections."
Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow, theres going to be free refreshments at my si--{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow, theres going to be free refreshments at my si{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
show naser considering flip with Dissolve(0.25)
pause 0.5
@ -1244,7 +1244,7 @@ label chapter_1:
Nas "The kind you listen to."
A "Wh-{w=0.3} Well what genre?"
A "Wh{w=0.3} Well what genre?"
show naser considering flip with dissolve
Nas "The good kind?"
@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show naser considering with dissolve
Nas "It is."
Nas "Like, I know sh-{w=0.4} THEY care{w=0.4} but Fang doesnt even wanna be around me."
Nas "Like, I know sh—{w=0.4}THEY care{w=0.4} but Fang doesnt even wanna be around me."
A "{cps=*0.25}Hmmm.{/cps}"
stop music fadeout 6
@ -1546,7 +1546,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"A month? That explains that disaster of a jacket."
pause .5
A "So about the actual show-"
A "So about the actual show"
Nas "Ill check on them. Be right back."
@ -1566,13 +1566,13 @@ label chapter_1:
show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve
unknown "{cps=*0.6}-nother shitshow-{/cps}"
unknown "{cps=*0.6}—nother shitshow—{/cps}"
unknown "{cps=*0.6}Shes so stupid-{/cps}"
unknown "{cps=*0.6}Shes so stupid{/cps}"
unknown "{cps=*0.6}-they even bother?{/cps}"
unknown "{cps=*0.6}they even bother?{/cps}"
unknown "{cps=*0.6}Bunch of losers-{/cps}"
unknown "{cps=*0.6}Bunch of losers{/cps}"
pause .5
hide dimmer_light with dissolve
@ -1675,7 +1675,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pause 0.5
Nas "Fa-{w=0.6}{nw}"
Nas "Fa{w=0.6}{nw}"
show anon:
easein_quart 1 xalign 0.8
@ -1686,7 +1686,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"The voice on the other end is loud and shrill."
pause .5
Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I-{w=0.5}{nw}"
Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I{w=0.5}{nw}"
show anon:
easein_quart 1 xalign 0.9
@ -1696,7 +1696,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"He holds the phone away from his ear to save his eardrum."
pause .5
Nas "Okay okay I-"
Nas "Okay okay I"
pause .5
"The call ends and Naser sags."
@ -1772,7 +1772,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"That must be Nasers sister."
pause .5
A "Wh-"
A "Wh"
"Then why the whole confusion over her sex? For fucks sake."
@ -2076,7 +2076,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Naser, whos been a bro."
pause .5
"Nasers Sis-"
"Nasers Sis"
stop music fadeout 3
pause 0.5
@ -2128,7 +2128,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Finally, I lean out of bed and turn the alarm clock off."
"I have a good forty-five minutes before I need to be at school - and it takes twenty to walk."
"I have a good forty-five minutes before I need to be at schooland it takes twenty to walk."
"That leaves twenty-five minutes to get ready."
@ -2221,7 +2221,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"I found another entrance at the side of the school that has less students on it. The less the merrier."
pause .5
"I check my clock once again - Im early. Fucking hell. Should have shitposted a bit more."
"I check my clock once againIm early. Fucking hell. Should have shitposted a bit more."
stop music fadeout 1
pause 1
@ -2333,10 +2333,10 @@ label chapter_1:
xalign 1.3
with Dissolve(1.5)
unknown "{cps=*0.4}-SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!{/cps}" #trish
unknown "{cps=*0.4}SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!{/cps}" #trish
show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
Nas "Wait, Trish, you dont understand-!"
Nas "Wait, Trish, you dont understand!"
show trish:
easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 0.075
@ -2416,7 +2416,7 @@ label chapter_1:
T "LIAR!!"
Nas "I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-"
Nas "I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience"
T "WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?!?"
@ -2741,7 +2741,7 @@ label chapter_1:
unknown "Dont worry man, it happens to new students all the time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
A "Wha-?"
A "Wha?"
"Some pink raptor smelling of very heavily burnt grass surprises me."
pause .5
@ -2749,7 +2749,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show reed happy with Dissolve(.25)
unknown "If youre looking for the office youre gonna wanna go thataway."
A "Oh-{w=0.3} thanks."
A "Oh{w=0.3} thanks."
show reed neutral with dissolve
unknown "Yeah, no problem, man{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
@ -3030,7 +3030,7 @@ label chapter_1:
stop sound fadeout 2
$ renpy.music.set_volume(1.0, 2, 'music')
Sp "-dismissed Naomi."
Sp "dismissed Naomi."
Sp "And just to be absolutely clear, Anon did ask you for this, correct?"
@ -3062,7 +3062,7 @@ label chapter_1:
ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
N "{cps=*0.5}Dont hesitate to ask if you have any other prob-{/cps}{nw}"
N "{cps=*0.5}Dont hesitate to ask if you have any other prob{/cps}{nw}"
Sp "You may leave now, Naomi."
@ -3153,7 +3153,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"But where would Naser be hanging out about now?"
"Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.4} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
"Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.4} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
stop ambient fadeout 2
play music 'audio/ost/Fuck You I Like To Ignore Problems.ogg'
@ -3315,7 +3315,7 @@ label chapter_1:
Nas "Weird guy."
pause .5
A "Uh,{w=0.4} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.7}I actually wanted to talk to-{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
A "Uh,{w=0.4} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.7}I actually wanted to talk to{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
$ renpy.music.set_volume(0.2, 0.05, "music")
#pause 0.1
@ -3458,7 +3458,7 @@ label chapter_1:
# A small variation is needed here because Anon only hears the first line if he finds Naser before meeting Spears.
if late_to_spears:
Nas "{i}{cps=*.7}I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-{/cps}{/i}"
Nas "{i}{cps=*.7}I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience{/cps}{/i}"
else:
@ -3491,7 +3491,7 @@ label chapter_1:
A "{cps=*.4}Yyyyeeeaaaaah...{/cps}"
show naomi explanatory flip
N "But all those sugars! All that is bad for your health, Anon. This schools vegan options-"
N "But all those sugars! All that is bad for your health, Anon. This schools vegan options"
"I tune her out with the help of a crunchy sugar cookie."
show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
@ -3509,10 +3509,10 @@ label chapter_1:
pause 0.5
show naser neutral flip
Nas "Huhwha-{w=0.6}{nw}"
Nas "Huhwha{w=0.6}{nw}"
show naser:
easein_quad 0.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.75
Nas "Huhwha-{fast} OH! Anon, whats up?"
Nas "Huhwha{fast} OH! Anon, whats up?"
A "Not much. And you?"