From 4968733d1d19df928e13bf80725545968aee2f5a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Seth M. Price" Date: Mon, 27 May 2024 19:45:12 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Replace select hyphens with em dashes Hyphens were kept as-is for same-word stuttering and section titles. --- .../1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy | 64 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 32 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy index c8c8b17..c5dcbf3 100644 --- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy +++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy @@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ label chapter_1: "Wait, hold on{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" - "Carnivore line, Filet Mignon-{w=.4} what the fuck is wrong with this school?!" + "Carnivore line, Filet Mignon—{w=.4}what the fuck is wrong with this school?!" pause .5 A "Is there a soup kitchen or something around here?" @@ -594,7 +594,7 @@ label chapter_1: "The absolute last thing I want to be doing is asking for handouts{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "{cps=*0.35}Actually,{w=.4} I-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}" + A "{cps=*0.35}Actually,{w=.4} I—{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}" window hide Dissolve(0.001) window auto @@ -733,7 +733,7 @@ label chapter_1: pause .65 play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' - unknown "-THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU MEAN I HAVE TO CLEAN UP AFTER?!" with vpunch # Fang + unknown "—THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU MEAN I HAVE TO CLEAN UP AFTER?!" with vpunch # Fang show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(1) @@ -1116,7 +1116,7 @@ label chapter_1: N "How about your classes?{w=0.3}{nw}" - N "You seem-{w=0.3}{nw}" + N "You seem—{w=0.3}{nw}" "I just nod along, starting to not pay attention." @@ -1167,7 +1167,7 @@ label chapter_1: "Naomi is starting to look disappointed I’m only picking up on Naser’s interjections." - Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow, there’s going to be free refreshments at my si--{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" + Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow, there’s going to be free refreshments at my si—{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" show naser considering flip with Dissolve(0.25) pause 0.5 @@ -1244,7 +1244,7 @@ label chapter_1: Nas "The kind you listen to." - A "Wh-{w=0.3} Well what genre?" + A "Wh—{w=0.3} Well what genre?" show naser considering flip with dissolve Nas "The good kind?" @@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@ label chapter_1: show naser considering with dissolve Nas "It is." - Nas "Like, I know sh-{w=0.4} THEY care{w=0.4} but Fang doesn’t even wanna be around me." + Nas "Like, I know sh—{w=0.4}THEY care{w=0.4} but Fang doesn’t even wanna be around me." A "{cps=*0.25}Hmmm.{/cps}" stop music fadeout 6 @@ -1546,7 +1546,7 @@ label chapter_1: "A month? That explains that disaster of a jacket." pause .5 - A "So about the actual show-" + A "So about the actual show—" Nas "I’ll check on them. Be right back." @@ -1566,13 +1566,13 @@ label chapter_1: show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve - unknown "{cps=*0.6}-nother shitshow-{/cps}" + unknown "{cps=*0.6}—nother shitshow—{/cps}" - unknown "{cps=*0.6}She’s so stupid-{/cps}" + unknown "{cps=*0.6}She’s so stupid—{/cps}" - unknown "{cps=*0.6}-they even bother?{/cps}" + unknown "{cps=*0.6}—they even bother?{/cps}" - unknown "{cps=*0.6}Bunch of losers-{/cps}" + unknown "{cps=*0.6}Bunch of losers—{/cps}" pause .5 hide dimmer_light with dissolve @@ -1675,7 +1675,7 @@ label chapter_1: pause 0.5 - Nas "Fa-{w=0.6}{nw}" + Nas "Fa—{w=0.6}{nw}" show anon: easein_quart 1 xalign 0.8 @@ -1686,7 +1686,7 @@ label chapter_1: "The voice on the other end is loud and shrill." pause .5 - Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I-{w=0.5}{nw}" + Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I—{w=0.5}{nw}" show anon: easein_quart 1 xalign 0.9 @@ -1696,7 +1696,7 @@ label chapter_1: "He holds the phone away from his ear to save his eardrum." pause .5 - Nas "Okay okay I-" + Nas "Okay okay I—" pause .5 "The call ends and Naser sags." @@ -1772,7 +1772,7 @@ label chapter_1: "That must be Naser’s sister." pause .5 - A "Wh-" + A "Wh—" "Then why the whole confusion over her sex? For fuck’s sake." @@ -2076,7 +2076,7 @@ label chapter_1: "Naser, who’s been a bro." pause .5 - "Naser’s Sis-" + "Naser’s Sis—" stop music fadeout 3 pause 0.5 @@ -2128,7 +2128,7 @@ label chapter_1: "Finally, I lean out of bed and turn the alarm clock off." - "I have a good forty-five minutes before I need to be at school - and it takes twenty to walk." + "I have a good forty-five minutes before I need to be at school—and it takes twenty to walk." "That leaves twenty-five minutes to get ready." @@ -2221,7 +2221,7 @@ label chapter_1: "I found another entrance at the side of the school that has less students on it. The less the merrier." pause .5 - "I check my clock once again - I’m early. Fucking hell. Should have shitposted a bit more." + "I check my clock once again—I’m early. Fucking hell. Should have shitposted a bit more." stop music fadeout 1 pause 1 @@ -2333,10 +2333,10 @@ label chapter_1: xalign 1.3 with Dissolve(1.5) - unknown "{cps=*0.4}-SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!{/cps}" #trish + unknown "{cps=*0.4}—SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!{/cps}" #trish show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "Wait, Trish, you don’t understand-!" + Nas "Wait, Trish, you don’t understand—!" show trish: easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 0.075 @@ -2416,7 +2416,7 @@ label chapter_1: T "LIAR!!" - Nas "I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-" + Nas "I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience—" T "WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?!?" @@ -2741,7 +2741,7 @@ label chapter_1: unknown "Don’t worry man, it happens to new students all the time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25) - A "Wha-?" + A "Wha—?" "Some pink raptor smelling of very heavily burnt grass surprises me." pause .5 @@ -2749,7 +2749,7 @@ label chapter_1: show reed happy with Dissolve(.25) unknown "If you’re looking for the office you’re gonna wanna go thataway." - A "Oh-{w=0.3} thanks." + A "Oh—{w=0.3} thanks." show reed neutral with dissolve unknown "Yeah, no problem, man{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" @@ -3030,7 +3030,7 @@ label chapter_1: stop sound fadeout 2 $ renpy.music.set_volume(1.0, 2, 'music') - Sp "-dismissed Naomi." + Sp "—dismissed Naomi." Sp "And just to be absolutely clear, Anon did ask you for this, correct?" @@ -3062,7 +3062,7 @@ label chapter_1: ease 0.25 yalign 0.05 ease 0.25 yalign 0.0 - N "{cps=*0.5}Don’t hesitate to ask if you have any other prob-{/cps}{nw}" + N "{cps=*0.5}Don’t hesitate to ask if you have any other prob—{/cps}{nw}" Sp "You may leave now, Naomi." @@ -3153,7 +3153,7 @@ label chapter_1: "But where would Naser be hanging out about now?" - "Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.4} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" + "Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.4} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa—{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" stop ambient fadeout 2 play music 'audio/ost/Fuck You I Like To Ignore Problems.ogg' @@ -3315,7 +3315,7 @@ label chapter_1: Nas "Weird guy." pause .5 - A "Uh,{w=0.4} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.7}I actually wanted to talk to-{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}" + A "Uh,{w=0.4} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.7}I actually wanted to talk to—{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}" $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.2, 0.05, "music") #pause 0.1 @@ -3458,7 +3458,7 @@ label chapter_1: # A small variation is needed here because Anon only hears the first line if he finds Naser before meeting Spears. if late_to_spears: - Nas "{i}{cps=*.7}I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-{/cps}{/i}" + Nas "{i}{cps=*.7}I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience—{/cps}{/i}" else: @@ -3491,7 +3491,7 @@ label chapter_1: A "{cps=*.4}Yyyyeeeaaaaah...{/cps}" show naomi explanatory flip - N "But all those sugars! All that is bad for your health, Anon. This school’s vegan options-" + N "But all those sugars! All that is bad for your health, Anon. This school’s vegan options—" "I tune her out with the help of a crunchy sugar cookie." show naomi neutral flip with dissolve @@ -3509,10 +3509,10 @@ label chapter_1: pause 0.5 show naser neutral flip - Nas "Huhwha-{w=0.6}{nw}" + Nas "Huhwha—{w=0.6}{nw}" show naser: easein_quad 0.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.75 - Nas "Huhwha-{fast} OH! Anon, what’s up?" + Nas "Huhwha—{fast} OH! Anon, what’s up?" A "Not much. And you?"