actually remove pauses from roof scene bits that I forgot fuck my life

game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy

@@ -3063,7 +3063,7 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     F "Whose the-{w=.4} {nw}"
     show fang neutral flip
-    extend "Anon?{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} What’s with the guitar?"
+    extend "Anon?{cps=*.1}...{/cps} What’s with the guitar?"
 
     "Fang is sitting atop the stair enclosure looking down at me."
     pause .5
@@ -3075,7 +3075,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     with dissolve
     pause 1
 
-    A "Mr. Jingo’s hall pass.{w=.4} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} kinda need help with sheet music again."
+    A "Mr. Jingo’s hall pass.{w=.4} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} kinda need help with sheet music again."
 
     show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Wow. You really suck at music."
@@ -3202,7 +3202,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     F "How much harder do I have to try to get people to notice me!"
 
     show fang:
-        easein_quart 1 xalign 0.5
+        easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.5
     "Her fist crashes down on the floor."
 
     show fang ultra angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -3240,11 +3240,11 @@ label chapter_5:
     pause .5
 
     F "Why can’t I be popular like him?"
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
 
     show fang:
         easein 0.5 xalign 0.5
-    show fang very sad flip with dissolve
+    show fang very sad flip with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
     "Fang deflates completely.{w=.6} All her anger gone, replaced with melancholy."
@@ -3394,10 +3394,9 @@ label chapter_5:
     show fang hiding with dissolve
 
     F "‘Am I who I say I am?’{w=.5} Maybe?{w=.5} Not really{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-
-    show fang anguish with Dissolve(.25)
     pause .5
 
+    show fang anguish with dissolve
     F "The other half I’m daydreaming of being something special."
 
     F "That I’m different from everyone.{w=.5} Above them{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I know more than them."
@@ -3632,7 +3631,7 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     A "But why? And why alone?"
 
-    F "To think. Maybe to throw myself a pity party. I do this every year."
+    F "To think.{w=.4} Maybe to throw myself a pity party.{w=.4} I do this every year."
 
     A "Up here?"
 
@@ -3804,7 +3803,7 @@ label chapter_5:
         "I should say something."
         pause .5
 
-        A "You’re feeling helpless,{w=.4} right?"
+        A "You’re feeling helpless, right?"
 
         A "Like you don’t matter?"
         pause .5
@@ -3849,7 +3848,7 @@ label chapter_5:
         F "What?"
         pause .5
 
-        A "I’m your friend too,{w=.4} right?"
+        A "I’m your friend too, right?"
 
         A "I don’t think you’re a burden."
         pause .5
@@ -3875,10 +3874,10 @@ label chapter_5:
 
         "She looks to me with tears streaming down her cheek."
 
-        A "Even if you don’t see it,{w=.5} you’re still you."
+        A "Even if you don’t see it, you’re still you."
         pause .5
 
-        A "The Fang I know likes music,{w=.4} bad movies,{w=.4} and doesn’t take crap from any adults."
+        A "The Fang I know likes music, bad movies, and doesn’t take crap from any adults."
 
         A "Am I right?"
         pause .5
@@ -3906,7 +3905,7 @@ label chapter_5:
         F "I just can’t."
         pause .5
 
-        A "You have support from me and Naser,{w=.4} right?"
+        A "You have support from me and Naser, right?"
 
         F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
         pause .5
@@ -3931,33 +3930,35 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     A "You’re in a pretty bad spot right now."
 
-    A "Self-improvement is hard,{w=.5} but there’s nothing to be gained without sacrifice,{w=.4} right?"
+    A "Self-improvement is hard, but there’s nothing to be gained without sacrifice, right?"
     pause .5
 
     "Fang gives a slight nod."
 
-    A "You need to step out from your comfort zone more often,{w=.4} even if you think there’s no time."
+    A "You need to step out from your comfort zone more often, even if you think there’s no time."
 
-    A "There’s no harm in diversifying,{w=.4} right?"
+    A "There’s no harm in diversifying, right?"
     pause .5
 
     "Fang looks away from the coastline and to me."
 
-    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I don’t know.{w=.5} Maybe you’re right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I don’t know.{w=.4} Maybe you’re right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     A "You could also try harder to get along with Naser."
+    pause .5
 
     A "I guarantee there’s not that much in the way between you two."
     pause .5
 
-    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You’ll be there to support me,{w=.4} right?"
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You’ll be there to support me, right?"
 
     A "Sure."
     pause .5
 
     show fang very sad with dissolve
     pause .5
+
     F "I don’t know if I’m strong enough to do all that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
@@ -3986,9 +3987,10 @@ label chapter_5:
     pause .5
 
     F "Thank you."
-    pause 1
+    pause 1.5
 
     "We sit in silence for a few minutes."
+    pause .5
 
     "{cps=*.1}..{/cps}"
 
@@ -3997,7 +3999,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     "{cps=*.1}....{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    "Eventually,{w=.4} she lets go."
+    "Eventually, she lets go."
     pause .5
 
     hide fanganonhug
@@ -4013,7 +4015,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     show fang neutral with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    "Fang’s breathing is evening out,{w=.4} and she looks far more composed now."
+    "Fang’s breathing is evening out, and she looks far more composed now."
 
 
     label postFangAndAnonTalk: