rework ch3 Anon runs into Stella

game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 label chapter_3:
 
-    # SCENE 1 - Weapons of mass distraction
+    # CH 3 SCENE 1 - Weapons of mass distraction
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' fadein 1
     scene black with fade
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ label chapter_3:
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    # SCENE 2 - I can't believe Naser is fucking dead
+    # CH 3 SCENE 2 - I can't believe Naser is fucking dead
 
     play music 'audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg' fadein 2
     scene cafeteria
@@ -690,89 +690,154 @@ label chapter_3:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    # SCENE 3 - Steganography
+    # CH 3 SCENE 3 - Steganography
 
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 2
     scene hallway with fade
-    "After dropping Naser at the nurse and leaving before Naomi could argue with her about staying, the lunch bell rings."
+    pause .5
-    "With music at the ass end of the campus I have to sprint through the halls."
-    "Fuck today, I avoided gym class for a reason."
 
+    "After dropping Naser at the nurse and leaving before Naomi could argue with her about staying,{w=.4} the lunch bell rings."
+
+    "With music at the ass end of the campus I have to sprint through the halls."
+
+    "Fuck today,{w=.4} I avoided gym class for a reason."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Halfway to Music class,{w=.4} I slam into somebody and tumble to the floor."
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' 
+    scene black with Fade(.1, 0, .25, color="#fff")
+    pause .5
+    play sound 'audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg'
+    pause 1
+
+    A "Augh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg'
 
-    "Halfway to Music class, I slam into somebody and tumble to the floor."
+    scene hallway 
-    scene black
+    show stella neutral:
-    A "Augh..."
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.25
+    with Dissolve(3)
+    pause .5
 
-    scene hallway with fade
+    unknown "{cps=*.2}You...{/cps}"
-    show stella neutral at stleft with dissolve
 
-    unknown "You…"
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' 
+    A "AH!" with vpunch
 
-    A "AH!"
+    "Sorry,{w=.3} sorry sorry!"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Sorry, sorry sorry!"
+    show anon neutral flip:
+        alpha 0
+        yalign -0.2 xalign 0.75
+    show anon:
+        easein 0.5 yalign 0.1 alpha 1
 
-    show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
+    "I get up from the floor and look at the stego who bumped into me.{w=.5} The plates on her back twitch as she looks me up and down."
 
-    "I get up from the floor and look at the stego who bumped into me. The plates on her back twitch as she looks me up and down."
+    unknown "{cps=*.3}Judgement{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    unknown "Judgement…"
+    show anon:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.8
+    pause .75
 
     "A chill rolls over me."
 
-    show stella considering
+    show stella:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.35
+    show stella considering with Dissolve(.25)
+    unknown "Karma?{w=.6} No.{w=.6} No,{w=.4} maybe second chance?"
 
-    unknown "Karma? No. No, maybe second chance?"
+    "She draws closer,{w=.4} a contemplative expression on her face."
 
-    "She draws closer, a contemplative expression on her face."
+    show stella explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
-
+    unknown "Ah,{w=.4} I see now."
-    show stella explanatory
+    show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25)
-
+    pause .25
-    unknown "Ah, I see now."
 
     A "What?"
 
     unknown "You’ve important choices to come."
 
-    A "I do? Wait back up what the fuck are you talking about?"
+    A "I do?{w=.5} Wait back up{w=.2} what the fuck are you talking about?"
 
     unknown "This."
+    pause .25
 
-    "She reaches toward my chest, plucking something off of it. She holds it up for me to see it’s some oversized playing card."
+    play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
+    show stella:
+        easein_cubic 0.35 xalign 0.425
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.35
+    pause .75
+
+    "She reaches toward my chest,{w=.4} plucking something off of it.{w=.6} She holds it up for me to see it’s some oversized playing card."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Still lost."
+    pause .25
 
-    unknown "It’s you. Your card. You are on the precipice of a great ordeal. Many difficult points of divergence and contention are coming your way. Reflect on them."
+    show stella explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
+    unknown "It’s you.{w=.6} Your card.{w=.6} You are on the precipice of a great ordeal.{w=.6} Many difficult points of divergence and contention are coming your way.{w=.6} Reflect on them."
+    show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    "I think about asking the green weirdo to make sense, but the bell is about to ring."
+    "I think about asking the green weirdo to make sense,{w=.4} but the bell is about to ring."
 
-    A "Yeah, thanks, sure. Sorry, gotta dash."
+    A "Yeah,{w=.3} thanks,{w=.3} sure.{w=.4} Sorry,{w=.1} gotta dash."
-    show classroom at scenter with dissolve
+    pause .25
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
 
+    show anon behind stella:
+        easeout 1 xalign 0.0
+    pause .5
+    hide anon with dissolve
+    show stella considering with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
 
-    show bandroom
+    # CH 3 SCENE 4 - It's almost Shakespearean
+
+    stop music fadeout 2
+    scene bandroom with Fade(1,0,1)
+
+    "I slam into the band room door just as the late bell trills,{w=.4} panting and sweaty."
 
-    "I slam into the band room door just as the late bell trills, panting and sweaty."
     show jingo at sleft with dissolve
+
     jingo "Good timing, Mr. Mous. Just in time for free period."
+
     "What…"
+
     jingo "Take up anything you like and have fun."
+
     "The teacher then took to his extremely lavish loveseat, threw on a pair of headphones and blacked out."
-    hide jingo with fade
+
+    hide jingo with dissolve
+
     "I looked at the scattered instruments, left alone for whatever reason."
+
     "Dent looking brass and cracked woodwinds. Even a bass with a missing string."
+
     "Wow. I feel like that right about now."
+
     "I reach for one at random, taking a wooden… thing…"
+
     "It looks like an oak tree made love to an eggplant and this is the aborted monstrosity in Mexico."
+
     "Whatever, I melt into my chair and pull out my phone. Seems a majority of my classmates have a similar idea."
+
     "I’ve some shitposting to do."
+
     "Let’s see…"
-    show anonphone with moveintop
+
-    #phone overlay with Elliot Raptor, and the text ‘he made some valid points :^)’
+    show anonphone with easeinbottom
+
+    # TODO: phone overlay with Elliot Raptor, and the text ‘he made some valid points :^)’
+
     "Ah yes, perfect. Click post aaaand now to wait."
-    hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
+    
+    hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
     "Nefarious deed for the day done, I look around the room out of boredom."
     "Oh fuck no."
     "Fang has a weapon of mass hearing loss."