rework ch11D

game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy

@@ -3,98 +3,57 @@ label chapter_11D:
     #le inconsistant indention has arrived
     #le wrong move indent slut
     
-    play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    show fang:
-    "About fifteen minutes into the assignment, the two of us are just about done."
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
-
-    "We’re making surprisingly good time."
-
-    F "Uhm… and you said that the electrons hold the negative charge, right?"
-
-    A "Yeah, yeah."
-
-    F "Can’t imagine when I’d be using this crap in real life."
-
-    A "You never know, you might shrink one day."
-
-    show fang happy behind anon with dissolve
-
-    F "Yeah, and you might stop pretending you’re livestreaming on Yousnoot."
-
-    A "As far as you know I might be giving you incorrect answers, you know."
-
-    F "Mhm, sure."
-
-    "The teacher is making his rounds checking on the students and gets to our desks."
-    show farnsworth at sright with moveinleft
-    Drf "Hello, Anon. Fang."
-
-    Drf "Are you two getting along well?"
-
-    AnonAndFang "Yes, Mister Fernsworth."
-
-    Drf "Great to hear."
-
-    Drf "You know, I’m real proud of you two."
-
-    Drf "I remember at the start of the year you were at each other's' throats."
-
-    Drf "And now look at you!"
-
-    "The two of us cringe."
-
-    A "Uhh… Yeah, thanks."
-
-    Drf "At any rate, you two understand the material, right?"
-
-    A "Oh yeah, Fang and I are fine."
-
-    A "I was just helping them with a few problems."
-
-    "Phew, remembered it this time."
-
-    Drf "Good, good."
-
-    Drf "I won’t keep you any longer then."
-
-    hide farnsworth with moveoutleft
-
-    "Fernsworth meanders to pester the next few students."
-
-    A "Anyways, where were we?"
-
     show fang happy flip with dissolve
 
     "I turn back to Fang and her mischievous grin."
+    pause .5
 
     A "What?"
 
     "Her grin only grows."
+    pause .5
 
     A "What?! What’s with the look?"
 
-    "She shakes her head and holds up her wrist."
+    "She shakes her head and covers her mouth."
 
-    A "Uh… it’s ten thirty-seven? Why is that funny?"
+    A "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} did I say something funny?"
 
     F "Anon you ignorant slut."
 
-    F "Notice something missing?"
+    F "Notice something about me? Anything at all?"
+    pause .5
 
-    A "...Why do you have feathers on your elbows anyway?"
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Why do you have feathers on your elbows anyway?"
 
-    F "Gawd! No! I’m not enbie, Anon."
+    F "Gawd! No! I’m not actually enbie, Anon."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Oh… Still, why do you have feathers on your elbows?"
+    "What? Oh! 'She'."
+
+    A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} still, why do you have feathers on your elbows?"
 
     "Fang rolls her eyes and digs her feathered elbow into my side."
+    show fang:
+        easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
+    show fang happy with Dissolve(.15)
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    pause .5
 
     A "Alright alright, I get it."
 
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05
     A "Just joking around."
 
     F "Shame your jokes suck."
 
     "We chuckle together."
+    pause .5
 
     A "So, like, I can say you’re my girlfriend now?"
 
@@ -104,13 +63,15 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     "The blush becomes contagious and I find myself looking back at the worksheet."
 
-    "... Girlfriend…"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Girlfriend{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Suddenly I’m feeling squeamish all over again."
+    pause .5
 
-    "I mean, we went on dates before, but she’s never straight up said she’s my girlfriend…"
+    "I mean, we went on dates before, but she’s never straight up said she’s my girlfriend{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Now I’m on the spot."
+    pause .5
 
     "It only makes sense that I ask her to prom, right?"
 
@@ -121,6 +82,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
     A "Hey, Fang, you-"
 
     F "We’re going to prom together, right?"
+    pause .5
 
     A "O-oh, yeah. Totally."
 
@@ -131,6 +93,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
     A "I mean, only with you?"
 
     F "Yes or no, dork."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Yes."
 
@@ -138,8 +101,19 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     A "Like plucking feathers."
 
-    "She playfully elbows me again."
+    show fang:
+        easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
+    pause .15
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    pause .5
 
+    "She playfully elbows me again."
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05
     "I think I get the feathers on the elbow thing now, because those things fucking dig in. Ow."
 
     F "Do you even have something to wear?"
@@ -156,8 +130,11 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     A "You actually gonna wear a dress?"
 
-    F "I’ve got this sick looking dress shirt…"
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
+    F "I’ve got this sick looking dress shirt{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
+    show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Naaaah, shirts suck."
 
     A "Wings again?"
@@ -165,13 +142,25 @@ label chapter_11D:
     F "Wings again. At least I can wear a backless dress."
 
     "I cup my chin and try to picture the dress."
+    pause .5
 
-    "The heat"
+    "The heat creeping up my face tells Fang exactly what I’m thinking."
 
+    show anon grin with dissolve
     "I grin and nod approvingly."
 
+    show fang:
+        easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
+    pause .15
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    pause .5
     "And earn a third elbow to my side."
 
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
     A "Wait, hold on."
 
     A "Do you still go by Fang, at least?"
@@ -182,6 +171,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     F "Taking it one step at a time, you know?"
 
+    show fang considering with dissolve
     F "There’s only about ten minutes left of class, are we gonna have enough time to finish the assignment?"
 
     A "Shit, yeah. Forgot."
@@ -190,109 +180,178 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     A "It’s gonna be close though."
 
+    show fang:
+        easein_back 1 xalign 0.35
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
+
     "Fang scoots her chair closer to me."
 
     F "No time to waste then, yeah?"
 
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    pause .5
+
     "Splitting the questions between us, Fang and I are able to finish the assignment seconds before the bell."
 
     "Somehow."
+    pause .5
+
+    play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 2
+    scene hallway
+    show fang happy:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.0
+    show anon neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.4
+    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
     
-    play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "We walk through the hall together, at least until we have to split to our separate classes."
 
-    scene hallway with dissolve
+    show anon shrug with Dissolve(.25)
-    show anon neutral at aleft
-    show fang happy at scenter
-
     A "Hey wait, you did the word search bit this time, right?"
 
     A "I thought you said you were terrible at those?"
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
 
     F "And you’ve believed me up to this point."
+    pause .5
 
     A "I feel used."
 
     F "That’s because I used you."
+    pause .5
 
     A "I’ll get you fo-"
 
     Sp "Ah, Fang! There you are, a moment please."
 
+
+    show anon:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.55
+    show fang:
+        easein 1 xalign 1.2
+    with None
+    show spears neutral:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
+    show spears:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.0
+    show anon neutral flip behind fang
+    show fang surprised flip
+    with dissolve
+    pause 1
+
     "We turn to see Principal Spears trailing behind us."
+    pause .5
 
     F "Yes?"
 
-    show spears neutral flip at sright with dissolve
+    Sp "Fang, I was planning on asking you during your next class, but since I found you here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-
-    Sp "Fang, I was planning on asking you during your next class, but since I found you here…"
 
     Sp "I’m embarrassed to say we’re missing one event slot during prom. Scheduling error."
 
     Sp "And your teacher, Mr Jingo, recommended you for your musical talents."
+    pause .5
 
     Sp "I’m not asking you to make your decision right now, but if you’d consider helping out by performing a musical number or two that would help monumentally."
+    pause .5
 
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
     F "Oh!"
 
     A "Fang’s going to play for the school?"
 
     Sp "If Fang agrees to."
 
-    F "Well, uh… Sure!"
+    F "Well, uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Sure!"
 
     F "Yeah, I’d love to do some songs for prom."
 
+    show spears happy with Dissolve(.25)
     Sp "Fantastic news, Fang. When you can, please swing by the office."
 
     F "Thank you, Principal Spears. I’ll come after school today."
 
     "Spears nods and heads off."
+    pause .5
 
-    hide spears with moveoutright
+    show spears:
+        easeout 1.2 xalign -0.9
+    pause .2
+    show spears happy flip with dissolve
+    hide spears with dissolve
+    pause .5
     
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Shit, now I really need to get a good dress."
 
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
     A "I thought you had one?"
 
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "A party dress isn’t a performance dress!"
 
     F "It’s like- you know what I mean."
 
     A "I guess?"
+    pause .5
 
     A "You don’t seem as excited as last time you got somewhere to play."
 
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve
     F "I know, I mean... last time I had a whole band to play with."
+    pause .5
 
     A "You sure you’ll be alright playing solo?"
 
+    show fang considering flip with dissolve
     F "Probably."
 
-    F "I’ll also need to practice a lot more…"
+    F "I’ll also need to practice a lot more{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
     F "You’ll help me, right?"
 
     A "Of course."
 
     A "As long as you don’t need me up on stage with you."
 
+    show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "I’m trying to keep the crowd from throwing things this time around, actually."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Bite me."
 
     F "Speaking of. I’ll see you at lunch, right?"
 
     A "Yeah, of course."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang behind anon:
+        easein_back 1 yalign 0.14 xalign 0.8
+        easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang pecks me on the cheek and starts down the hall to her next class."
 
-    hide fang neutral with moveoutright
+    show fang:
+        easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign 2.0
+    pause .2
+    show fang happy with dissolve
+    hide fang with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
+    show anon grin with dissolve
     "I feel my lips spread into a grin. It’s kind of weird to think of it, but I’m actually excited for prom."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    pause .5
+
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
     "Man, I hope dad’s suit has actually been to the cleaner, I don’t wanna disappoint."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     return