Merge branch 'Patch7' of https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame into NioP7

game/screens.rpy

@@ -442,7 +442,20 @@ image bonus_flash:
     pause 0.133
     repeat 4
 
-screen bonus_chapter_button():
+
+image template_black_m = Composite(
+    (511, 129),
+    (6, 5), Crop((0, 0, 511-12, 129-12), Solid("#000000", width=2, height=2)),
+    (0, 0), "gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png",
+    (0, 0), "gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png"
+)
+
+image template_black:
+    "template_black_m"
+    matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0, 0, 0)))
+    alpha 0.8
+
+screen bonus_chapter_button(f="gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png"):
 #("gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png", "Bonus Chapters", ShowMenu("ex_ch_menu"))
     button:
         xmaximum 500
@@ -454,7 +467,7 @@ screen bonus_chapter_button():
                 add "bonus_flash" xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5 zoom 1 xanchor 0 xcenter 0.5 ycenter 0.5
                 $ persistent.old_endings = persistent.endings
             else:
-                add "gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png" xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5 zoom 1 xanchor 0 xcenter 0.5 ycenter 0.5
+                add f xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5 zoom 1 xanchor 0 xcenter 0.5 ycenter 0.5
             text "Bonus Chapters" xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5 xanchor 0.5
 
 # label_functions is [ [ "label", function() ], [ "foobar", foobar() ], .. ]
@@ -473,15 +486,18 @@ screen main_menu():
     ## This ensures that any other menu screen is replaced.
     tag menu
 
-    style_prefix "main_menu"
 
-    add gui.main_menu_background
+    if renpy.seen_image("big ending"):
+        style_prefix "main_menu_ex"
+        add "big ending"
+    else:
+        style_prefix "main_menu"
+        add gui.main_menu_background
 
+        ## This empty frame darkens the main menu.
+        frame:
+            pass
 
-    ## This empty frame darkens the main menu.
-    frame:
-                #text "You have unlocked all bonus chapters!"
-        pass
     if persistent.old_endings != persistent.endings:
         fixed:
             xalign 0.125
@@ -508,15 +524,26 @@ screen main_menu():
         spacing 10
         xpos 1885
         ypos 1130
-        use main_menu_button("gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png", "Start", Start())
-        use bonus_chapter_button()
-        use main_menu_buttons("gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png",
-            [
-                [ "Load", ShowMenu("load") ],
-                [ "Options", ShowMenu("preferences") ],
-                [ "Extras", ShowMenu("extras") ], \
-                [ "Quit", Quit(confirm=not main_menu) ]
-            ] )
+        if renpy.seen_image('big ending'):
+            use main_menu_button("template_black", "Start", Start())
+            use bonus_chapter_button("template_black")
+            use main_menu_buttons("template_black",
+                [
+                    [ "Load", ShowMenu("load") ],
+                    [ "Options", ShowMenu("preferences") ],
+                    [ "Extras", ShowMenu("extras") ], \
+                    [ "Quit", Quit(confirm=not main_menu) ]
+                ] )
+        else:
+            use main_menu_button("gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png", "Start", Start())
+            use bonus_chapter_button()
+            use main_menu_buttons("gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png",
+                [
+                    [ "Load", ShowMenu("load") ],
+                    [ "Options", ShowMenu("preferences") ],
+                    [ "Extras", ShowMenu("extras") ], \
+                    [ "Quit", Quit(confirm=not main_menu) ]
+                ] )
         on "show" action renpy.start_predict_screen("cg_gallery")
 
 style main_menu_frame is empty
@@ -547,9 +574,25 @@ style main_menu_text:
 style main_menu_title:
     properties gui.text_properties("title")
 
+style main_menu_ex is main_menu
+style main_menu_ex_vbox is main_menu_vbox
+style main_menu_ex_text is main_menu_text
+style main_menu_ex_frame is main_menu_frame
+
+#style main_menu_ex_button:
+#color "#222"
+#background "gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png"
+#xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5 zoom 1 xanchor 0 xcenter 0.5 ycenter 0.5
+
+#style main_menu_ex_button:
+#color "#222"
+
+
+
 #style main_menu_version:
 #    properties gui.text_properties("version")
 
+# style
 
 ## Game Menu screen ############################################################
 ##
@@ -1216,7 +1259,7 @@ screen extrasnavigation():
     vbox:
         spacing 10
         xpos 1885
-        ypos 1130
+        ypos 1120
         use main_menu_buttons("gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png",
             [
                 [ "Help", ShowMenu("help") ],

game/script.rpy

@@ -189,6 +189,7 @@ image anond neutral flip = im.Flip("anon/ending sets/anond neutral.png", horizon
 image anon prom neutral flip = im.Flip("anon/prom set/anon prom neutral.png", horizontal=True)
 image anon prom blacklight neutral flip = im.Flip("anon/Other/anon prom blacklight neutral.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang neutral flip = im.Flip("fang/basic set/fang neutral.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang blacklight neutral flip = im.Flip("fang/blacklight/fang blacklight neutral.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang a prom neutral flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang a prom neutral.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang d prom neutral flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang d prom neutral.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang d neutral flip = im.Flip("fang/future sets/fang d neutral.png", horizontal=True)
@@ -222,15 +223,19 @@ image fang angry flip = im.Flip("fang/basic set/fang angry.png", horizontal=True
 image fang very angry flip = im.Flip("fang/emotive set/fang very angry.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang ultra angry flip = im.Flip("fang/emotive set/fang ultra angry.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang a prom angry flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang a prom angry.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang c prom angry flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang c prom angry.png", horizontal=True)
 image naomi angry flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi angry.png", horizontal=True)
 image naomi prom angry flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi prom angry.png", horizontal=True)
 image rosa angry flip = im.Flip("rosa/rosa angry.png", horizontal=True)
 image naser angry flip = im.Flip("naser/naser angry.png", horizontal=True)
+image naser prom angry flip = im.Flip("naser/naser prom angry.png", horizontal=True)
 image trish angry flip = im.Flip("trish/trish angry.png", horizontal=True)
 image trish prom angry flip = im.Flip("trish/trish prom angry.png", horizontal=True)
 image trish fury flip = im.Flip("trish/trish fury.png", horizontal=True)
+image trish fury point flip = im.Flip("trish/trish fury point.png", horizontal=True)
 image reed angry flip = im.Flip("reed/reed angry.png", horizontal=True)
 image stella mad flip =  im.Flip("stella/stella mad.png", horizontal=True)
+image anon pissed flip =  im.Flip("anon/base set/anon pissed.png", horizontal=True)
 
 #very angry flips
 image anon angry flip = im.Flip("anon/emotive set/anon angry.png", horizontal=True)
@@ -274,16 +279,21 @@ image fang prom d shocked flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang d prom shock.png",
 image fang c prom shocked flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang c prom shock.png", horizontal=True)
 
 #considering flips
+image anon considering flip = im.Flip("anon/base set/anon considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang considering flip = im.Flip("fang/basic set/fang considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang a prom considering flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang a prom considering.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang c prom considering flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang c prom considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image reed considering flip = im.Flip("reed/reed considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image naser considering flip = im.Flip("naser/naser considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image naomi considering flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi considering.png", horizontal=True)
+image naomi prom considering flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi prom considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image rosa considering flip = im.Flip("rosa/rosa considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image trish considering flip = im.Flip("trish/trish considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image stella considering flip = im.Flip("stella/stella considering.png", horizontal=True)
+image stella prom considering flip = im.Flip("stella/stella prom considering.png", horizontal=True)
 
 #happy flips
+image fang blacklight happy flip = im.Flip("fang/blacklight/fang blacklight happy.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang happy flip = im.Flip("fang/basic set/fang happy.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang a prom happy flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang a prom happy.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang d prom happy flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang d prom happy.png", horizontal=True)
@@ -321,6 +331,7 @@ image reed explanatory flip = im.Flip("reed/reed explanatory.png", horizontal=Tr
 image trish explanatory flip = im.Flip("trish/trish explanatory.png", horizontal=True)
 image reed future explanatory flip = im.Flip("reed/reed future explanatory.png", horizontal=True)
 image stella explanatory flip = im.Flip("stella/stella explanatory.png", horizontal=True)
+image stella prom explanatory flip = im.Flip("stella/stella prom explanatory.png", horizontal=True)
 image naser explanatory flip = im.Flip("naser/naser explanatory.png", horizontal=True)
 image naomi explanatory flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi explanatory.png", horizontal=True)
 
@@ -336,6 +347,7 @@ image naser unimpressed flip = im.Flip("naser/naser unimpressed.png", horizontal
 image naser prom unimpressed flip = im.Flip("naser/naser prom unimpressed.png", horizontal=True)
 image trish unimpressed flip = im.Flip("trish/trish unimpressed.png", horizontal=True)
 image naomi unimpressed flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi unimpressed.png", horizontal=True)
+image naomi prom unimpressed flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi prom unimpressed.png", horizontal=True)
 image stella unimpressed flip = im.Flip("stella/stella unimpressed.png", horizontal=True)
 image trish future unimpressed flip = im.Flip("trish/trish future unimpressed.png", horizontal=True)
 image fangdad unimpressed flip = im.Flip("fangparents/fangdad unimpressed.png", horizontal=True)
@@ -359,6 +371,7 @@ image trish indignant flip = im.Flip("trish/trish indignant.png", horizontal=Tru
 #surprised flip
 image fang surprised flip = im.Flip("fang/basic set/fang surprised.png", horizontal=True)
 image trish surprised flip = im.Flip("trish/trish surprised.png", horizontal=True)
+image trish prom surprised flip = im.Flip("trish/trish prom surprised.png", horizontal=True)
 image naser surprised flip = im.Flip("naser/naser surprised.png", horizontal=True)
 
 #other flips
@@ -377,6 +390,7 @@ image farnsworth flip = im.Flip("other/farnsworth.png", horizontal=True)
 image carldelewski flip = im.Flip("other/carldelewski.png", horizontal=True)
 image fangdad unimpressed flip = im.Flip("fangparents/fangdad unimpressed.png", horizontal=True)
 image naser handout flip = im.Flip("naser/naser handout.png", horizontal=True)
+image stella prom uh flip = im.Flip("stella/stella prom uh.png", horizontal=True)
 #b's
 image naomi keikaku flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi keikaku.png", horizontal=True)
 image anon shrug flip = im.Flip("anon/emotive set/anon shrug.png", horizontal=True)
@@ -388,6 +402,8 @@ image fang anguish flip = im.Flip("fang/emotive set/fang anguish.png", horizonta
 image fang embarass flip = im.Flip("fang/emotive set/fang embarass.png", horizontal=True)
 #n's
 image fang adorable flip = im.Flip("fang/emotive set/fang adorable.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang c prom surprised flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang c prom surprised.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang c prom hiding flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang c prom hiding.png", horizontal=True)
 
 # trish fam flips
 image chondra neutral flip = im.Flip("trishfam/chondra neutral.png", horizontal=True)
@@ -404,6 +420,8 @@ image trevor awe flip = im.Flip("trishfam/trevor awe.png", horizontal=True)
 
 # scene flips
 image moes pizza mirrored = im.Flip("images/backgrounds/moes pizza.jpg", horizontal=True)
+image hallway mirrored = im.Flip("images/backgrounds/hallway.jpg", horizontal=True)
+image prom mirrored = im.Flip("images/backgrounds/prom.jpg", horizontal=True)
 
 # vfx
 image black = "#000"
@@ -439,6 +457,7 @@ image amberpendant6veryhappy = 'images/other/amberpendant6veryhappy.png'
 image amberpendant7earcover = 'images/other/amberpendant7earcover.png'
 image amberpendant4shock = 'images/other/amberpendant4shock.png'
 image chillicheesefries = 'images/other/chilli cheese fries.png'
+image chillicheesefries_hack = 'images/other/chilli cheese fries.png'
 image ccf_rstain = 'images/other/rstain base set for composites.png'
 image ccf_lstain = 'images/other/lstain base set for composites.png'
 
@@ -465,10 +484,16 @@ image naser rstained neutral = Composite(
    (0, 0), "ccf_rstain"
 )
 
+image naser rstained surprised = Composite(
+   (1412, 1500),
+   (0, 0), "naser surprised",
+   (15, 1), "ccf_rstain"
+)
+
 image naser rstained shocked = Composite(
    (1412, 1500),
    (0, 0), "naser shocked",
-   (-40, -20), "ccf_rstain"
+   (-50, -25), "ccf_rstain"
 )
 
 image naser rstained explanatory = Composite(
@@ -492,6 +517,13 @@ image naser fullystained unimpressed = Composite(
    (-175, 0), "ccf_lstain"
 )
 
+image naser fullystained neutral = Composite(
+   (1412, 1500),
+   (0, 0), "naser neutral",
+   (0, 0), "ccf_rstain",
+   (-175, 0), "ccf_lstain"
+)
+
 image naser fullystained surprised = Composite(
    (1412, 1500),
    (0, 0), "naser surprised",
@@ -520,11 +552,18 @@ image naser fullystained considering = Composite(
    (-175, 0), "ccf_lstain"
 )
 
+image naser fullystained angry = Composite(
+   (1412, 1500),
+   (0, 0), "naser angry",
+   (0, 0), "ccf_rstain",
+   (-175, 0), "ccf_lstain"
+)
+
 image naser fullystained shocked = Composite(
    (1412, 1500),
    (0, 0), "naser shocked",
    (-280, -20), "ccf_lstain",
-   (-40, -20), "ccf_rstain"
+   (-50, -25), "ccf_rstain"
 )
 
 # TODO: these should be defined in a much more concise way e.g `fangp happy`, the extra tags are very cumbersome and unnecessary
@@ -583,6 +622,27 @@ image fang nonxmas pendant angry = Composite(
    (0, 0), "amberpendant"
 )
 
+image fang pangry flip = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (1412, 1500),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("fang/basic set/fang angry.png", horizontal=True),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("images/other/amberpendant1.png", horizontal=True)
+)
+
+image fang punimpressed flip = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (1412, 1500),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("fang/basic set/fang unimpressed.png", horizontal=True),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("images/other/amberpendant1.png", horizontal=True)
+)
+
+image fang pconsidering flip = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (1412, 1500),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("fang/basic set/fang considering.png", horizontal=True),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("images/other/amberpendant1.png", horizontal=True)
+)
+
 image fang nonxmas pendant neutral = Composite(
    # (1412, 1500),
    (1412, 1500),
@@ -655,6 +715,12 @@ image fang pbird happy flip = Composite(
    (0, 0), im.Flip("images/other/amberpendant1.png", horizontal=True)
 )
 
+image stella_hack = Composite(
+   # (847, 1500),
+   (847, 1500),
+   (0, 0), "stella shock"
+)
+
 #phone gallery effect
 
 image anoninsideship = "images/other/phonegallery/anoninsideship.png"
@@ -722,13 +788,18 @@ image anon grin flip = im.Flip('images/anon/base set/anon grin.png', horizontal=
 image tracy neutral flip = im.Flip('images/tracy/tracy neutral.png', horizontal=True)
 image tracy tease flip = im.Flip('images/tracy/tracy tease.png', horizontal=True)
 image tracy unimpressed flip = im.Flip('images/tracy/tracy unimpressed.png', horizontal=True)
+image tracy uh flip = im.Flip('images/tracy/tracy uh.png', horizontal=True)
 # image anon ohshit flip = im.Flip('images/anon/base set/anon ohshit.png', horizontal=True)
 
 #extra chapters other images
 image home fang night blurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 2.0)
-image home fang night lessblurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 1.5)
-image home fang night barelyblurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 0.5)
+image home fang night lessblurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 1.0)
+#image home fang night barelyblurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 0.5)
 image d01_blur = im.Blur('images/cgs/d01.jpg', 1.5)
+image anon prom blurred = im.Flip(im.Blur('images/anon/prom set/anon prom neutral.png', 2.0), horizontal=True)
+image anon prom lessblurred = im.Flip(im.Blur('images/anon/prom set/anon prom neutral.png', 1.0), horizontal=True)
+image fang prom blurred = im.Blur('images/fang/prom sets/fang c prom neutral.png', 2.0)
+image fang prom lessblurred = im.Blur('images/fang/prom sets/fang c prom neutral.png', 1.0)
 
 #image fangroomfuture = "images/backgrounds/fangroomfuture.png"
 #image livingroomdayalt = "images/backgrounds/livingroomdayalt.png"
@@ -964,34 +1035,34 @@ layeredimage layeredanonphone:
 
       attribute shitpost_elliotwait:
          "elliot_raptor_wait"
-      
+
       attribute fang_hey:
          "msg_fang_hey"
-      
+
       attribute fang_about_earlier:
          "msg_fang_about_earlier"
-      
+
       attribute fang_thanks:
          "msg_fang_thanks"
 
-      attribute fang_for_like_hanging_out: 
+      attribute fang_for_like_hanging_out:
          "msg_fang_for_like_hanging_out"
-      
+
       attribute fang_and_sorry_about_dad:
          "msg_fang_and_sorry_about_dad"
-      
-      attribute fang_typing_first: 
+
+      attribute fang_typing_first:
          "fang_typing_1"
-      
+
       attribute fang_about_that_song:
          "msg_fang_about_that_song"
-      
+
       attribute fang_typing_second:
          "fang_typing_2"
-      
+
       attribute fang_so_like_how_about_we:
          "msg_fang_so_like_how_about_we"
-      
+
       attribute anon_sure:
          "msg_anon_sure"
 

game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy

@@ -3254,7 +3254,7 @@ label chapter_11:
 
         show fang surprised
         show moe neutral flip:
-            yalign 0.0 xalign 1.7
+            yalign 0.1 xalign 1.7
         show moe:
             easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3
         with dissolve
@@ -3816,7 +3816,7 @@ label chapter_11:
         # show rosa neutral flip:
         #     yalign 0.2 xalign 0.9
         show moe neutral flip:
-            yalign 0.0 xalign 1.75
+            yalign 0.1 xalign 1.75
         with Dissolve(1)
         pause .5
 
@@ -4332,7 +4332,7 @@ label chapter_11:
             easeout 0.75 xalign 1.3
         pause .25
         hide reed with dissolve
-        
+
         scene hallway with fade
 
         "Reed is chasing close behind only a few feet behind me."
@@ -4362,7 +4362,7 @@ label chapter_11:
         window hide
         window auto
         pause .5
-        
+
         $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.1, 'music')
         $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0.1, 'ambient')
         pause .5

game/script/11C.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-but-she-tells-him-she's-okay-with-being-called-a-girl.rpy

@@ -300,8 +300,6 @@ label chapter_11C:
     pause .5
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    window hide
-    window auto
     pause .5
 
     return

game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
     #Announcing a Show | Golden
     #le inconsistant indention has arrived
     #le wrong move indent slut
-    
+
     show fang:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
     show fang happy flip with dissolve
@@ -81,6 +81,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     A "Hey, Fang, you-"
 
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
     F "We’re going to prom together, right?"
     pause .5
 
@@ -200,14 +201,26 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 2
     scene hallway
+    with Dissolve(1.0)
+#with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+
     show fang happy:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.0
+        xalign -1.2
+        yalign 0.0
+        ease_cubic 3.0 xalign 1.0
     show anon neutral:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.4
-    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
-    
+        xalign -1.4
+        yalign 0.1
+        ease_cubic 3.0 xalign 0.4
+    with dissolve
+#with easeinleft # Fade(1, 0, 1)
+
     "We walk through the hall together, at least until we have to split to our separate classes."
 
+    show fang:
+        xalign 1.0
+    show anon:
+        xalign 0.4
     show anon shrug with Dissolve(.25)
     A "Hey wait, you did the word search bit this time, right?"
 
@@ -230,16 +243,18 @@ label chapter_11D:
     window auto
 
     show anon:
-        easein 1 xalign 0.55
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55
     show fang:
         easein 1 xalign 1.2
-    with None
-    show spears neutral:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
     show spears:
-        easein 1 xalign 0.0
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.8
+        xalign -0.8
+        easein 1.5 xalign 0.0
+    with None
+    pause 0.0001
     show anon neutral flip behind fang
     show fang surprised flip
+    show spears neutral
     with dissolve
     pause 1
 
@@ -250,6 +265,8 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     Sp "Fang, I was planning on asking you during your next class, but since I found you here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
+
     Sp "I’m embarrassed to say we’re missing one event slot during prom. Scheduling error."
 
     Sp "And your teacher, Mr Jingo, recommended you for your musical talents."
@@ -280,12 +297,12 @@ label chapter_11D:
     pause .5
 
     show spears:
-        easeout 1.2 xalign -0.9
-    pause .2
+        easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign -0.9
     show spears happy flip with dissolve
+    pause .2
     hide spears with dissolve
     pause .5
-    
+
     show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Shit, now I really need to get a good dress."
 
@@ -346,11 +363,13 @@ label chapter_11D:
     window auto
 
     show fang:
-        easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign 2.0
-    pause .2
+        yalign 0.0
+        xalign 1.2
+        easeout_cubic 1.4 xalign 2.4
     show fang happy with dissolve
+    pause .4
     hide fang with dissolve
-    pause .5
+    pause .25
 
     show anon grin with dissolve
     "I feel my lips spread into a grin. It’s kind of weird to think of it, but I’m actually excited for prom."
@@ -369,4 +388,4 @@ label chapter_11D:
     window auto
     pause .5
 
-    return
+    return

game/script/12.5C.prom-night-intro.rpy

@@ -111,9 +111,14 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
     Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
 
     "He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     stop music fadeout 4
     pause .5
 
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
+
     scene home fang night
     show anon prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
@@ -121,7 +126,7 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3
     show naomi prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
-    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
     "Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
@@ -306,6 +311,7 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show naser prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
@@ -313,45 +319,53 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
     show naomi prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show anon prom unimpressed flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
     show naomi prom happy flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show anon prom grin flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
     show naser prom happy flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show fangdad happy flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
     show anon prom shock flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show fangmom unimpressed:
         yalign 0.0 xalign -0.2
@@ -359,12 +373,14 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
     show fangdad neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 1.0
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show anon prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
@@ -372,12 +388,14 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
     show fangmom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.6
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show fangmom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign -0.15
@@ -389,13 +407,18 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
     show naomi prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 1.05
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg'
     pause .275
-    scene black with Fade(.1, 1, 2, color="#fff")
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
+    scene black
+    show white
+    pause 1
+    hide white with Dissolve(2)
 
     "Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
 

game/script/12.5D.prom-night-intro.rpy

@@ -111,9 +111,14 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
     Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
 
     "He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     stop music fadeout 4
     pause .5
 
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
+
     scene home fang night
     show anon prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
@@ -121,7 +126,7 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3
     show naomi prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
-    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
     "Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
@@ -306,6 +311,7 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show naser prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
@@ -313,45 +319,53 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
     show naomi prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show anon prom unimpressed flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
     show naomi prom happy flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show anon prom grin flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
     show naser prom happy flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show fangdad happy flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
     show anon prom shock flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show fangmom unimpressed:
         yalign 0.0 xalign -0.2
@@ -359,12 +373,14 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
     show fangdad neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 1.0
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show anon prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
@@ -372,12 +388,14 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
     show fangmom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.6
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
     scene home fang night
     show fangmom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign -0.15
@@ -389,13 +407,18 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
     show naomi prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 1.05
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(.4)
 
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg'
     pause .275
-    scene black with Fade(.1, 1, 2, color="#fff")
+    show white with Dissolve(.1)
+    scene black
+    show white
+    pause 1
+    hide white with Dissolve(2)
 
     "Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
 

game/script/12C.anon-fang-lovey-dovey.rpy

@@ -1,32 +1,45 @@
 label chapter_12C:
-    scene room anon night with fade
     stop music fadeout 1.0
-    play music "audio/OST/its_footloose_now.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    "Later at my hovel of a home…"
 
-    show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
+    "Later at my hovel of a home…"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    play music "audio/OST/its_footloose_now.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    scene room anon night
+    show anon neutral at aleft
+    show fang neutral flip at sright
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Almost finished."
-
-    show fang neutral flip at sright with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "I wish I could get some help for the other periods, this took way too long."
-
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve
     Lucy "Fuck, man. Trish keeps staring at me during class expecting me to talk to her, I gotta avoid Reed and Stella now because they're always around her too, it's agonizing!"
 
     Lucy "I keep having these dreams where she mans up and I'm forced to talk to her again! They feel more like nightmares now!"
-
-    Lucy "Rosa is too busy to help{w=0.2} - with the exercises, I mean - but I hope the camping trip will be fun."
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
+    Lucy "Rosa is too busy to help - with the exercises, I mean - but I hope the camping trip will be fun."
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Well it's done. All of it."
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
 
     Lucy "Thanks, Anon. You're a pretty cool guy."
 
     A "No problem, I just like helping you, I guess."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "...and without asking for anything in return."
-
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
     Lucy "..."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
     hide fang
     hide anon
     show kissu1
@@ -34,8 +47,8 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     Lucy "You're so good to me."
 
-    A "Thanks. F-{w=0.3} Lucy."
-
+    A "Thanks. F- Lucy."
+    pause 0.5
     Lucy "Is there nothing you really want from me?"
 
     A "You mean repay? I don't know, things are too good now, though."
@@ -48,50 +61,65 @@ label chapter_12C:
     pause 0.5
     "I'm sweating profusely."
 
-    Lucy "Or maybe...{w=0.4}a kiss?"
+    Lucy "Or maybe{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}a kiss?"
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Kiss?{w=0.1} With that huge snoot?"
 
     Lucy "Why? Are you afraid? Have you never kissed a dinosaur before?"
 
     A "No?"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Not even a human girl?"
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "{cps=*0.5}Uhhh...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "So I'm your first?{w=0.2} That's exciting."
 
     A "This is so weird, I don't know how I'm feeling right now. Don't you feel weird too?"
 
     Lucy "I've kissed shorter snouts, yours can't be that different."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Uh...{w=0.3}look Anon, if it doesn't work out..."
 
-    Lucy "...It won't change anything.{w=0.3} Right?"
+    Lucy "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}It won't change anything.{w=0.3} Right?"
 
     A "Promise?"
 
     Lucy "Of course I promise! Get over here you fucking pussy!"
 
     A "O-okay."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "I won't bite, though I've never had human before..."
 
-    A "Okay, here it goes..."
-    scene black with fade
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    "..."
+    A "Okay, here it goes{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+    stop music fadeout 2.0
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Well?"
 
     Lucy "T-that’s just the lips!"
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "T-the tongue, come on."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "What are you doing?!"
 
@@ -102,8 +130,10 @@ label chapter_12C:
     A "Wait, {i}you{/i} open wide now."
 
     Lucy "That’s even sillier."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "*glug*{w=0.2} *hack*{w=0.2} *urk*"
 
@@ -113,29 +143,37 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     A "Shit sorry sorry sorr-"
 
-    Lucy "No no. It’s fine.{w=0.2} Let me think."
+    Lucy "No no. It’s fine. Let me think."
 
     Lucy "Let’s try the other one again."
 
     A "O-okay…"
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Don’t open as *mnph*...{w=0.4} wide."
+    Lucy "Don’t open as *mnph*... wide."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Wait…"
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Tilt to the side… like this."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "I don’t know…{w=0.2} I’ll probably never get the hang of this."
 
@@ -148,20 +186,24 @@ label chapter_12C:
     A "Bullshit."
 
     Lucy "Seriously, here."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Don’t be shy now…"
 
     A "Lucy."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     scene room anon day
     show kissu2
-    with fade
+    with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
     Lucy "See? Getting better."
@@ -169,11 +211,16 @@ label chapter_12C:
     A "Mmm…"
 
     Lucy "I can feel your heart beating. It’s so loud."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    scene black with fade
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+    
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
     A "Y-yeah,{w=0.2} same."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     #Let's all go Campin
     #stop music fadeout 1.0
@@ -187,10 +234,13 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "Rosa doesn’t force me to help anymore, but I still frequently lend a hand."
 
     "Just earlier today Lucy and I were planting some hydrangeas that were set to bloom in just a few weeks."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
 
     scene campsite
     show anon neutral at acenter
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(1)
 
     "And now I’m setting up a pair of tents."
 
@@ -201,9 +251,15 @@ label chapter_12C:
     window auto
     pause .5
 
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
+    show white with Dissolve(0.25):
+        alpha 0.5
+
     show flashbacktitlecard
     show grain_effect
-    with dissolve
+    hide white
+    with Dissolve(0.25)
     pause 3.0
     scene sepiagarden
     show grain_effect 
@@ -216,6 +272,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "{i}Stella’s chattering with me about the esoteric while the school delinquents get the Orwellian treatment from Rosa, who swaps between helping Fang plant some kind of exotic flower I don’t know and barking orders.{/i}"
 
     "{i}I understand maybe a third of what Stella’s saying and mostly just nod along.{/i}"
+    pause .5
 
     St "{i}-nights really important because the moon will be in perfect alignment for my divinations.{/i}"
 
@@ -229,20 +286,27 @@ label chapter_12C:
     St "{i}It’s a very important night for me, Anon.{/i}"
 
     St "{i}I feel as though my divinations will be at their best under it’s crimson glow.{/i}"
+    pause .5
 
     A "{i}But camping?{/i}"
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show sepiastella neutral flip
+    show sepiarosa neutral flip behind grain_effect:
+        xalign 1.9
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.4
+    with dissolve
 
-    show sepiastella neutral flip with dissolve 
-    show sepiarosa neutral flip behind grain_effect at sright with easeinright:
-        xalign 1.4
     Ro "{i}Oh, yes!{/i}"
  
     Ro "{i}My backyard is very big. Long bus ride to school.{/i}"
 
     Ro "{i}But I see the stars at night so well, so Stella has slumber parties often!{/i}"
+    pause 0.5
 
-    show sepiafang happy behind grain_effect at sleft with easeinleft:
-        xalign -0.55
+    show sepiafang happy behind grain_effect with dissolve:
+        xalign -1.0
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.55
 
     Lucy "{i}Anon! We should go to!{/i}"
 
@@ -250,14 +314,15 @@ label chapter_12C:
     A "{i}Wait what why?{/i}"
 
     Lucy "{i}We can go stargazing Anon. Just imagine it.{/i}"
-
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "{i}But camping? Can’t we just-{/i}"
 
-    show sepiafang sad:
-        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign -0.1
-    show sepiaanon concerned flip with dissolve
+    show sepiafang:
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign -0.2
+    show sepiafang sad with dissolve
     Lucy "{i}C’mon Anon. Don’t you want to watch the stars together with me?{/i}"
+    show sepiaanon concerned flip with dissolve
 
     "{i}Lucy’s pleading eyes lock onto mine.{/i}"
 
@@ -277,49 +342,82 @@ label chapter_12C:
     with dissolve
     pause 3.0
 
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
+
     scene campsite
     show anon neutral at acenter
-    with fade
+    with Dissolve(1)
 
     "Finally I manage to get a post to stick into the soft soil."
 
     "One down. Nineteen to go."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Ugh, and now Lucy’s gonna use those cute sad eyes whenever she wants something."
 
     "And no alone time with her, since all the girls are working at the grill."
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
 
     A "Hey, you guys aren’t just making dinner with that gross herbivore meat, right?"
 
     Ro "Of course! I’m always prepared to serve guests."
+    pause 0.5
 
     St "Wait, which ones were which again?"
+    pause 0.5
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.55
+    A "Wha- If I bite into even a single bug your cards are going into the campfire."
 
-    A "Wha-{w=0.2} If I bite into even a single bug your cards are going into the campfire."
-
-    Ro "Hey! Camping is supposed to be relaxing!{w=0.2} Relax!"
+    Ro "Hey! Camping is supposed to be relaxing! Relax!"
 
     Ro "Also, when you’re done with the tents you need to start the campfire."
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Wait, why me?"
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Rosa and Stella flinch and exchange glances."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    St "Just… figured you’d know, is all."
+    St "Just{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} figured you’d know, is all."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    A "Why would I{cps=*0.5}...{/cps} Hey!"
+    A "Why would I{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{nw}"
+    show anon:
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.5
+    show anon pissed flip
+    extend " Hey!"
 
     St "The principal fits the bill so well."
 
     Ro "Guess that’s just him."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Come on, quit teasing him."
 
     Lucy "Who cares if he hasn’t evolved to fire yet?"
     stop music fadeout 1.0
+    pause 0.5
 
     "I trip into the tent and tear the whole thing down."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
+    show anon shocked flip with Dissolve(.1):
+        yanchor 0.2
+        easeout_quad .5 rotate 90 yalign -0.01
+    pause .1
+    hide anon with Dissolve(.25)
+    play sound 'audio/effects/anonGardenFall.ogg'
+    with vpunch
+
+    pause 1
     play music "audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
     "By the time I get both of the tents standing, the sun is nearing the horizon."
 
     "My back already hurts from setting everything up."
@@ -327,8 +425,20 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "Luckily Lucy carries around a lighter for her cigarettes so I was able to start a small fire."
 
     "I slump on one of the logs around the firepit and try to massage my shoulders."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    scene campsite
+    show anon neutral:
+        xalign 0.0
+    with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+
     show rosa neutral flip with dissolve:
-        xalign 1.2
+        xalign 1.5
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.0
+
     Ro "Hello, An-on."
 
     A "Oh, is the food ready?"
@@ -336,6 +446,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     Ro "Stella and Lucy are getting some plates to use."
 
     Ro "Just taking a seat for a minute."
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Thanks for inviting Lucy and I to camp back here."
 
@@ -344,89 +455,163 @@ label chapter_12C:
     Ro "Although normally I struggle with making the tents stand."
 
     Ro "So really I must thank you for setting it up for me!"
+    pause 0.5
+    show anon shrug with dissolve
 
     A "Oh, uh, it was nothing."
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
 
     "Stella calls out from the back door to Rosa’s house."
+    show rosa considering with dissolve
 
     "She’s returning with Lucy, both holding extra utensils and snack foods."
+    show rosa neutral with dissolve
 
     "Rosa waves them over."
-    show stella neutral:
-        xalign -0.1
-    show fang neutral behind stella:
-        xpos -0.05
-    with easeinleft
-    show anon neutral flip at acenter with dissolve
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.2
+    show rosa behind anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.2
+    pause 0.0001
+    show stella neutral flip:
+        xalign 1.4
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.0
+    show fang neutral flip behind stella:
+        xalign 2.0 yalign 0.0
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.0
+    with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+
     stop music fadeout 3.0
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 2
+
     Ro "I never pictured Fang coming over."
 
     Ro "Lucy really is lucky to have you."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Stella struggles to separate the false shish kebabs from the real meat before handing me a plate."
-
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
     "Lucy gets that look in her eye and snatches the bigger one right off."
+    pause 0.5
 
     St "Eventide draws near. I believe it best we sojourn from the fated ones, Rosa. My scrying glass awaits."
     
     pause 0.5
+    show fang neutral behind rosa
+    show rosa considering
+    with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+
     "What."
-    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+
     Lucy "Er, what? I don’t speak… whatever the fuck that was."
+    show rosa neutral
+    show stella sad flip
+    with dissolve
 
     Ro "*giggle* I believe Stella means that the sun is setting and we need to go set up her telescope."
-
+    pause 0.5
     A "Then why didn’t she just say that?"
-
+    pause 0.5
     "Rosa and Stella take their plates of imposter kebabs and start walking to the other end of Rosa’s yard."
-    show fang neutral with dissolve
-    
-    play music "audio/OST/middle_of_nowhere.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    hide rosa
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show rosa:
+        easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.5
+    show stella:
+        easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.7
+    show stella neutral with dissolve
+    pause 0.3
     hide stella
+    hide rosa
     with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+
+    play music "audio/OST/middle_of_nowhere.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
 
     "Fang shrugs at me and starts devouring her food."
 
     "With nothing to do but wait for night time I also begin to remove kebab."
+    show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve
 
     Lucy "Bleh. I think Stella undercooked this. Gimme some of yours."
 
     A "No way, you have your own."
-
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
     Lucy "Well I want yours too. You’re supposed to share with your girlfriend."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Damn her and her filthy ptero-logic."
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "{cps=*0.65}Fiiiiiiiiine{/cps}. You can have a bite."
 
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.15
+
     "I hold out the meat on a stick for her."
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
 
     "She grins wickedly."
 
     "I realize my mistake as I watch her maw widen and engulf the entirety of my kebab."
+    pause 0.25
+    show fang:
+        easeout_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.8 yalign -0.2
+        easein_back 1 xalign 0.9 yalign 0.0
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Once she pulls away I’m left holding a crispy yet clean wooden stick."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Mmmm… {w=0.4}Stolen food is the best food."
+    Lucy "Mmmm{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} Stolen food is the best food."
 
-    show fang happy with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Well that was uncalled for."
 
     Lucy "Here, take the gross one."
 
     "Lucy hands over her undercooked kebab."
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
+    show anon considering with dissolve
 
     A "Whatever, I like it rare anyways."
 
     Lucy "You should be thanking me, then."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.35
+    pause 0.25
+    show fang happy with dissolve
 
     "She leans her head into my shoulder."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Yuck, this really was undercooked."
 
     "I hold the stick over the fire to char a bit more."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "That’s just going to burn the outside."
 
@@ -435,164 +620,232 @@ label chapter_12C:
     Lucy "Did Rosa bring any?"
 
     A "Think so. Save your kebab stick for them."
-
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
     Lucy "Think I’d rather use a regular stick off the ground than get a greasy marshmallow."
 
     A "Heh."
 
-    pause 0.5
+    show fang happy with dissolve
     "Lucy and I listen to the crackling of the fire for a few minutes."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Somewhere in the distance I hear Stella yelling at Rosa about leaving the telescope cap on."
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
 
-    Lucy "..."
+    Lucy "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Rosa said earlier that I’m lucky to have you."
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "You feel lucky? I’m thinking it’s the other way around."
 
     Lucy "I do."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Rosa was right, I wouldn’t have thought about going camping back in first semester."
 
     Lucy "Guess I really have been changing a lot."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "... Your kebab’s on fire."
 
-    A "Huh-{w=0.3} Shit!"
+    show anon ohshit with dissolve
+    A "Huh- Shit!"
 
     "I blow out the now burnt chunks of meat."
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
 
     A "Uhhh… Flambe?"
+    show fang happy with dissolve
 
     "Lucy snorts."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Chewing down on this, it’s not the worst thing I’ve eaten."
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Still want a piece?"
 
     "She just holds her mouth open."
 
     "I put the stick in biting range and she gnaws the chunk off."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Yeah, It’s not undercooked anymore. That’s for certain."
 
     A "Looks like I poured jet fuel on it."
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show fang:
+        easein_back 1 xalign 0.3 yalign -0.05
 
     "Lucy leans back into her arms staring up at the night sky."
 
     "I finish off the stick and join her."
+    show anon:
+        easein_back 1 xalign 0.05 yalign -0.05
+    pause 1
 
     "Stella was right, the stars look great out here."
 
     "Reminds me of home."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "The stars do?"
 
     A "Hm? Oh. Yeah, there wasn’t a lot of light pollution around Rock Bottom."
 
     A "In the brief time I was in scouts, I got to look at the constellations a bit."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Name a few."
 
     A "I don’t remember now, this was like a decade ago."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    A "...{w=0.3} Orion’s belt?"
+    A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}Orion’s belt?"
 
     Lucy "Anyone can name Orion’s belt."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    A "Uh… big spoon and lil spoon?"
+    A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} big spoon and lil spoon?"
 
     Lucy "You mean the dippers?"
 
     A "Also yes."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Lucy hums and scoots close enough so I can wrap an arm around her shoulder."
 
     "Her head leans on my shoulder and I can’t help but smile."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Something like this, then?"
 
     A "Eh, close enough."
 
     A "I think you can see Mars too, it’s supposed to be the red one."
+    show fang considering with dissolve
 
-    Lucy "Uh… I think that’s the moon, Anon."
+    Lucy "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} I think that’s the moon, Anon."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "It’s been a while, okay? Cut your boyfriend some slack."
+    show fang happy with dissolve
 
     "I feel her head shake as she withholds a snicker for my sake."
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Still managed to get my badge though."
 
     Lucy "Aren’t you the big strong man."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    A "...{w=0.3} Fuck it. A compliment’s a compliment."
+    A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}Fuck it. A compliment’s a compliment."
 
     "We gaze up at the night sky in companionable silence."
+    pause 0.5
 
+    show fang:
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.4 yalign 0.0
+    show fang surprised
     Lucy "Oh! Look!"
 
     "Lucy points to the sky at a shooting star."
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Well hey, you got a wish?"
+    show fang considering with dissolve
 
     Lucy "That’s not a shooting star, dork."
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.35 yalign -0.05
+    show fang happy with dissolve
 
     A "It isn’t?"
 
     "I look again."
 
     "The star is joined by several smaller dots trailing behind, in the sky for only an instant before disappearing over the other horizon."
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Whoa, a meteor shower."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Stella’s incomprehensible excited gibberish breaches our ears."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Lucy lays down on her back to get a better view."
 
     "A little dirt on my clothes is worth the moment."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "Man, being here with Lucy, after such a wonderful night…"
+    "Man, being here with Lucy, after such a wonderful night{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I feel like no matter what, everything’s going to be just fine."
-    Lucy "...I feel the same."
+    pause 0.5
+
+    Lucy "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}I feel the same."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "I’m just going to start biting my tongue."
 
     Lucy "Thank you for being here with me, Anon."
 
-    A "I mean… {w=0.3}This was all you. And Rosa and Stella too."
+    A "I mean{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} This was all you. And Rosa and Stella too."
+    show fang considering with dissolve
 
-    Lucy "No, you big dweeb… {w=0.3}I mean…"
+    Lucy "No, you big dweeb{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} {nw}"
+    show fang neutral
+    extend "I mean{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    show fang sad with dissolve
 
     Lucy "You’ve always been there for me even when I was so mean to you."
 
-    Lucy "I don’t know what kind of road I was going down when you met me, but…"
+    Lucy "I don’t know what kind of road I was going down when you met me, but{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "But I know it wasn’t a good place to be. I don’t know where I was going to end up if I never found you."
 
     Lucy "You saved me, Anon. And I’ll always be grateful for that."
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.4 yalign 0.0
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
 
     "She sits up and looks down to me with that warm smile of hers."
 
-    "Hearing her put it that way…"
+    "Hearing her put it that way{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Maybe I did ‘fix’ Lucy after all."
 
     "She seems so happy with how things are, it doesn’t matter if it was all part of someone’s stupid plan."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Lucy’s fingers dance across my cheek."
 
-    "Slowly,{w=0.4} slowly,{w=0.4} ever so slowly."
+    "Slowly, slowly, ever so slowly."
 
     "Her eyes lid as she leans forward, her head tilting and her mouth opening slowly."
 
     "It’s taken a month for us to figure this out, but now that we’ve had practice…"
 
     "I raise myself up, my own mouth meeting her’s in a slow and soft connection."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.1 yalign -0.025
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.25 yalign -0.025
+    show black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Her tongue slides along mine and this time she manages not to gag me with it."
 
@@ -600,27 +853,46 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     "And it’s utter bliss as we savor each other’s lips."
 
-    "And while I would stay like this forever if I could."
+    "And while I would stay like this forever if I could{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Air is very much a necessity for life."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "We separate just as slowly as when we connected."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
 
+    show fang:
+        xalign 0.4 yalign 0.0
+    show anon:
+        xalign 0.05 yalign -0.05
+    hide black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
     "Lucy’s eyes open as she smiles impishly at me."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "I love you."
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "Yeah.{w=0.3} Me too."
+    "Yeah. Me too."
+    pause 0.5
+    show fang:
+        easein_back 1 xalign 0.35 yalign -0.05
+    show fang happy with dissolve
 
     "She giggles and lays down. Her head resting on my shoulder and her wing becoming a blanket as we look back to the stars."
 
     "We stay laying a while longer, keeping the red moon company."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
 
     stop music fadeout 3.0
     scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
-    pause .5
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 1

game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 label chapter_12D:
     #Let's all go to the Aquarium
-    scene black with fade
-    pause 3
+    scene black
+    pause 2.5
 
     play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "Every day after school for the next few weeks I would join Fang to help her practice."
@@ -50,36 +50,100 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "Looking through one of the map kiosks, I try to make a mental plan for the trip."
 
-    show anon neutral at aleft
-    show fang neutral at sright
+    show fang neutral at scenter:
+    show anon neutral at aleft:
+        xalign 0.1
     with dissolve
 
-    A "Uhh… {w=0.2}They got exhibits for the deep sea, the gulf of Mexico, the dopefish, tropical reefs…"
+    A "Uhh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} {w=0.2}They got exhibits for the deep sea, the gulf of Mexico, the dopefish, tropical reefs{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "... Eenie{w=0.15} meanie{w=0.15} mini-"
+    A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}Eenie{w=0.15} meanie{w=0.15} mini-"
 
     F "Really?"
 
     A "Sea turtles it is."
 
+    show fang:
+        pause .6
+        "fang happy" with dissolve
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.4
+    show anon:
+        easeout_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.225 #0.35
+        pause .1
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.175 #0.725
+
     "I take Fang’s hand and lead her through the lobby into the chamber labeled ‘Sea Turtle Conservatory’."
 
-    scene aquariumexhibit with fade
+    show fang:
+        #"fang happy"
+        xalign 0.4
+        ease_cubic 3.1 xalign 1.65+1.8+0.6
+    show fang happy
+    show anon:
+        xalign 0.175
+        ease_cubic 3.1 xalign 1.85+0.5 #0.725
 
-    F "Anon, are you sure you want to spend the day here? If you wanted to go to the mall or somethin- {cps=*2.0}omigawd.{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    pause 1.5
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    scene aquariumexhibit with dissolve
+
+
+    show fang happy:
+        xalign -1.8
+        ease_cubic 2.4 xalign 0.625
+        pause .1
+        "fang very happy" with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.680
+    show anon neutral:
+        xalign -1.8
+        ease_cubic 2.412 xalign 0.225 #0.625
+
+    pause .2
+
+    F "Anon, are you sure you want to spend the day here? {w=.2} If you wanted to go to the mall or somethin- {cps=*2.0}omigawd.{/cps}"
 
     "A little sea turtle swims out of hiding in the tank right in front of us."
 
+    show fang:
+        "fang very happy"
+        "fang adorable" with dissolve
+        block:
+            parallel:
+                easeout_cubic 0.05 yalign -0.04
+                ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
+                ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
+            parallel:
+                pause 0.12
+                ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.8
+                ease_cubic 1.2 xalign 1.8
+#pause 0.0001
+    show fang adorable with dissolve
+
     "Immediately Fang breaks free of my arm and presses against the glass."
 
     F "Look at these cute little shits, I love them!"
 
-    show fang adorable at sleft 
-    show anon neutral at aright
-    with dissolve 
+    show fang adorable at sleft:
+        xalign 1.8
+        "fang adorable" with dissolve
+        easeout_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.04
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
+    show anon:
+        xalign 0.225
 
     A "Yeah, I see them."
 
+    show fang adorable:
+        yalign 0.0
+
+    show anon neutral:
+        ease_cubic 1.95 xalign 0.87
+
     "I peer into the tank and see a few more hatchlings bob out of the decorative grass."
 
     "The hype becomes contagious and I find myself pressed against the glass as well."
@@ -90,6 +154,8 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     A "Come on Fang, there’s more stuff to see."
 
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve
+
     F "{cps=*0.75}Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnno{/cps}."
 
     A "There’s more here than just those baby turtles, you know."
@@ -98,43 +164,60 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     A "You’re just going to stay here all day then?"
 
-    F "Yyyeeeep."
+    F "{cps=*0.75}NYyyeeeep.{/cps}"
+
+    show fang happy with dissolve
 
     A "What’ll you do for lunch?"
 
     F "Bring me something from the cafe."
 
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+
     A "Allright, here I am going off without you."
 
-    A "Oh look, a Dumbo Octopus."
+    show anon:
+        "anon neutral flip"
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.7
+        pause .2
+        "anon grin flip" with dissolve
+
+    A "{w=.5}Oh look, {w=.5} a Dumbo Octopus."
 
     F "{cps=*2.0}Whereisit?{/cps}"
 
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
+
     "In a snap Fang’s moved from pressing her face against the turtle tank to pressing it against the octopus tank."
 
-    scene aquariumexhibit
-    show fang happy at sleft:
-        yalign 0.0 xcenter 0.4
+    #scene aquariumexhibit
+    #intentional ghost / meteor walk
+    show fang happy flip:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.1
     with dissolve
-    
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+
     #confirmed that fang has autism
     Attendant "Ma’am, please refrain from-"
 
-    show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve #at sleft
+    show fang adorable flip at sleft with dissolve# at sleft
 
     F "{cps=*1.5}OmigoshAnonlookatit.{/cps}"
 
     F "It’s like a living egg yolk with button eyes."
 
-    A "Is that the first analogy you can think of…?"
-    
+    A "Is that the first analogy you can think of{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}?"
+
     #Fang has the zoomies
     F "And what’s over there? Are those seahorses{cps=*1.5} holy crap I have to take a video of this.{/cps}"
+
     window hide
     window auto
+    hide anon with dissolve
 
+    scene aquariumexhibit
 
-    
+    show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve #at sleft
     #new method
     show fang:
         # yalign 0.0 xcenter 0.4
@@ -149,7 +232,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
                 linear 0.25 xzoom -1.0
             parallel:
                 ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.8 ypos 0.1 xpos -0.2
-        pause 1.0  
+        pause 1.0
         ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.4 xpos 0.0 ypos 0.3
         pause 1.0
         block:
@@ -165,34 +248,36 @@ label chapter_12D:
     pause 2.0
     "I shrug apologetically at the attendant who has given up entirely."
 
-
     "But watching Fang zoom between the exhibits to gush over each oddly cute sea animal was just too much."
 
     "Subtly my phone finds its way into my jacket pocket, already set to record."
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show anonphone at scenter with dissolve # moveinbottom
+    #show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom
+    show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom #cursed
 
     "She’ll probably kill me if she found out."
     hide fang adorable with dissolve
     "But it’d be a good death."
     pause 0.5
     "Wait, where’d she go?"
+
+    #hide anonphone with dissolve
     window hide
     window auto
+    hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
 
-    hide anonphone with dissolve #moveoutbottom
+    pause .25
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+    scene stingray pool with dissolve
 
-    scene aquarium with fade
-    show fang happy at sleft with dissolve
     "I round the corner to see the next room has a large group of school children hovering over a stingray touch tank."
     "That is, a large group of school children and Fang, towering above the rest."
 
     "She does have the act down though."
 
-    scene stingray pool with dissolve
-
     A "Oh, cool, a stingray pool."
 
     A "You plan on touching one?"
@@ -233,7 +318,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     A "You alright?"
 
-    F "Yeah, no, it’s just… You were right about them being slimy."
+    F "Yeah, no, it’s just{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} You were right about them being slimy."
 
     A "Well, I have yet to hear of a dry fish."
 
@@ -241,11 +326,13 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "After a few more rounds of rays, Fang decides she’s had enough."
 
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+    scene aquarium
 
-    scene aquarium 
     show anon neutral at aleft
     show fang happy flip at sright
-    with fade
+    with dissolve
     A "See, that wasn’t terrible, right?"
 
     A "Actually, you got all your fingers right?"
@@ -258,17 +345,19 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     show fang neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    F "So uh…"
+    F "So uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "Which exhibit are we checking next?"
 
     "I check the aquarium pamphlet to see where we haven’t been yet."
 
-    A "Well… if we go outside we can see the dolphin pools. That way it loops back through the deep sea exhibits."
+    A "Well... if we go outside we can see the dolphin pools. That way it loops back through the deep sea exhibits."
 
     "With Fang in agreement I lead her towards the exit marked with a large dolphin sign."
     stop music fadeout 3
 
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause 0.75
     scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
 
     "Upon exiting the building my nose is assaulted by a mix of salty air and the smell of raw fish."
@@ -276,7 +365,6 @@ label chapter_12D:
     "Somehow it’s even fishier than inside the aquarium."
     play music "audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
-
     show fang happy at sleft
     show anon neutral flip at aright
     with dissolve
@@ -291,7 +379,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     F "Would you jump through a hoola hoop for me if I had treats?"
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I notice the trainer has traded the hoop for a large brush and is getting one of the dolphins to open its mouth."
 
@@ -301,49 +389,90 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "She raises an eyebrow for a second and then realizes."
 
+    #god elbow worse than her standing jab? lmao
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
+    show fang:
+        "fang angry" with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 1.0
+        parallel:
+            easein_cubic 0.9 xalign 0.3
+        parallel:
+            block:
+                pause 1.1
+                "fang embarass" with dissolve
+                pause 1.4
+                "fang sad" with dissolve
+
+    show anon:
+        pause .62
+        ease_cubic 0.25 xalign 1.02
+        ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 1.0
+
     "An elbow jams into my shoulder and her other hand covers her snout."
 
+    pause .5
+
     A "So that’s how you brush your teeth!"
 
     show fang considering with dissolve
 
-    F "...I don’t need someone to bribe me at least."
+    F "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}I don’t need someone to bribe me at least."
 
     A "Well if you ever need help I’m sure I can get them to lend me one of those brushes."
 
-    show fang neutral with dissolve
+    show fang angry with dissolve
+    show fang:
+        "fang angry" with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.0
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.5
+        "fang neutral" with dissolve
+
+    show anon:
+        pause .5
+        "anon ohshit flip" #
+        ease_cubic 0.25 xalign 1.1
+        "anon neutral flip" with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 1.0
 
     "And that gets me a jab to the ribs this time."
 
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+
     A "Oh come on, you have to admit they look a bit like you..."
 
     F "Ehh, I don’t see it."
 
     "The dolphin beside her nods in agreement."
 
-    "...Right then…"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Right then{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    show fang happy at sleft with dissolve
+    show fang happy with dissolve
 
     A "So, how bout we hit the last spot and then go grab our own lunch?"
 
     A "Unless you want to have some tuna with your clone there."
 
+    show fang considering with dissolve
+
     "Fang rolls her eyes at that."
 
     "Her dolphin duplicate did too."
 
     A "You’re fucking with me,{w=0.2} aren’t you."
 
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
+
     F "What’re you talking about?"
 
     "Fang’s aquatic doppelganger makes a laugh-like chirping and finally swims away."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "So Deep Sea then!"
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
+
+    pause .5
 
     "We leave the dolphin pen, following signs back towards the building."
 
@@ -353,7 +482,9 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "Oh, I didn’t realize they had one of these."
 
-    scene aquariumtube with fade
+    pause .25
+
+    scene aquariumtube with dissolve
 
     "From within the glass walkway we’re surrounded by a myriad of colorful marine life swimming around us."
     show fang surprised at sright
@@ -368,13 +499,23 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     F "Recording what?"
 
+    #show fang  flip with dissolve
     show fang neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    A "The uh…{w=0.3} {cps=*2.0}The shark!{/cps} Yeah, that cool looking shark over there!"
+    A "The uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} {cps=*2.0}The shark!{/cps} Yeah, that cool looking shark over there!"
+
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
 
     "I point to the shark that’s currently lazing about, casually drifting by the walkway."
 
-    show fang adorable with dissolve
+    show anon:
+        pause .4
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.5
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
+
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 1.1 xalign -0.3
+    show fang adorable flip with dissolve
 
     "Fang turns to gush at the shark, giving me the opportunity to quickly stop my phone and see that my battery is near dead and storage near full."
 
@@ -388,58 +529,83 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     A "Hm?"
 
-    F "The lights…"
+    F "The lights{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Oh! Nah, the room is dark because the things inside aren’t used to light."
 
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
+
     F "O-oh."
 
-    A "Wait…{w=0.2} are you sca-"
+    show anon flip with dissolve
 
-    F "No! I just…{w=0.2} Wasn’t expecting it, is all."
+    A "Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} are you sca-"
 
-    show anon neutral at aleft:
-        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5
+    show fang sad with dissolve
+
+    F "No! I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} Wasn’t expecting it, is all."
+
+    show anon neutral:
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.39
+        ease_cubic 0.65 xalign 0.45
+        "anon face happy" with dissolve
+    show fang:
+#pause 1.2
+        pause 0.95
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign -0.19
+        "fang happy" with dissolve
 
     "I offer her my hand."
-    
 
     "Despite her claim otherwise I can feel how tense she is by how her fingernails dig into my hand."
+
+    show anon:
+        "anon face happy"
+        ease_cubic 1.8 xalign 2.8
+    show fang:
+        "fang happy"
+        ease_cubic 1.8 xalign 3.6
+
+    pause .5
     stop music fadeout 2
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
+
     "I lead her into the darkened room, what little light there is coming from the various animals within."
     play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
 
     "The aquariums within are packed with bioluminescent jellyfish, illuminating the darkened room with an ethereal glow."
-    scene jellyfishroom with fade
+    scene jellyfishroom with dissolve
 
-    F "Whoa. This is…"
+    F "Whoa. This is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Beautiful."
 
-    F "Yeah…{w=0.3} that…"
+    F "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I wasn’t referring to the exhibit."
 
     "Fang’s grip on my hand eases, and her fingers work to intertwine with mine."
 
     "With what little light there is I can make out Fang’s smile."
+
     "My eyes have adjusted enough that I can see Fang’s eyes locked onto mine, the gossamer light making them glow."
+
     "My lips press softly onto Fang’s beak-end in a chaste peck."
 
     F "Eep!"
+
     F "Oi! G-give me a warning next time!"
 
-    A "Mmmm… Naaaah."
+    A "Mmmm{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} Naaaah."
 
     "I laugh even as her hip bumps me roughly."
 
     "Our interlocked fingers prevent her from using her preferred elbow tactic."
 
-    A "So…{w=0.2} had fun?"
+    A "So{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.05} had fun?"
 
-    F "Mmmm… {w=0.2}Maaaaybe…"
+    F "Mmmm{cps=*0.12}...{/cps}{w=0.05}Maaaaybe{cps=*0.12}...{/cps}"
 
     F "I’ll say yes if you delete that recording."
 
@@ -451,6 +617,8 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "She glowers."
 
+    pause .5
+
     A "Feel rested?"
 
     F "A bit. I’ll feel even more rested after some lunch though."
@@ -458,9 +626,9 @@ label chapter_12D:
     A "Sounds like a plan."
     window hide
     window auto
-    pause .5
+    pause .25
 
-    scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
+    scene aquariumoutside with Dissolve(1.25)
     pause .5
     "The rest of our rest day was spent just relaxing on the pier."
 
@@ -471,7 +639,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
     "And a very relaxed girlfriend."
 
     "Overall,{w=0.2} mission successful."
-    
+
     pause 0.5
     "Except the sunburn."
 
@@ -479,9 +647,9 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     stop music fadeout 3.0
     scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
-    pause .5
+    #pause .5
 
-    "..."
+    #"{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 1

game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy

@@ -60,7 +60,10 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     N "Oh, Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    N "That’s an{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Interesting outfit you’re wearing."
+    N "That’s an{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{nw}" 
+    show naomi prom considering
+    extend "Interesting outfit you’re wearing."
+    show naomi prom unimpressed with dissolve
 
     "Naomi side-eyes me a dagger."
 
@@ -129,14 +132,14 @@ label chapter_13A:
     window auto
     pause .5
 
-
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
     scene kitchen
     show dimmer_lighter
     show anon prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
     show naomi prom angry:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.0
-    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    with Dissolve(1)
     pause 1
 
     "She gives me a death stare for what seems like a solid minute before she begins yelling at me."
@@ -185,6 +188,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     show anon:
         pause .75
         easein_back 1 xalign 0.65
+    show naomi prom unimpressed with dissolve
     "Naomi sighs and walks away, shoving into my shoulder on the way out, completely disregarding my presence."
 
     show anon prom neutral with dissolve
@@ -246,7 +250,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "Naomi’s leaned against a wall next to the entry to that hall."
 
-    show naomi prom angry flip with dissolve
+    show naomi prom unimpressed flip with dissolve
     "She turns to me, with an expression of very intently restrained rage on her face."
 
     "Did I really do this, Naomi?"
@@ -259,6 +263,8 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     show fang a prom considering with dissolve
     "Fang looked ready to set her house on fire until she caught me in the corner of her eye."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     stop music fadeout 4
@@ -274,6 +280,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .2
     hide anon
     hide fang
+    show naomi prom considering flip
     with dissolve
 
     "Without a word she grabbed me by the wrist and dragged me through the front door, guitar in her other hand."
@@ -282,12 +289,13 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 3
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
     scene home fang outside night
     show fang a prom considering:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
     show anon prom neutral:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
-    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
     F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}’mme call a taxi or something."
@@ -304,7 +312,8 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     stop ambient fadeout 4
-    scene taxi night with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    scene taxi night with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
     D "Ay, it’s my favorite couple again! How’s the leg, skinnie?"
@@ -366,12 +375,14 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 3
+    play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdMurmurLoop.ogg' fadein 3
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
     scene outside school night
     show fang a prom neutral:
         yalign 0.0 xalign -0.1
     show anon prom neutral:
         yalign 0.1 xalign -0.25
-    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
     "Eventually the cab pulls up to the school gymnasium, illuminated by the celebratory decorative string lights."
@@ -400,6 +411,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     stop ambient fadeout 4
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 4
     play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
 
     show fang:
@@ -452,7 +464,8 @@ label chapter_13A:
     hide anon with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    scene prom with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    scene prom with Dissolve(1)
     "The two of us go up to the entrance, the room filled with seniors, strobe lights and a very suspicious smelling fog."
 
     show reed sunglasses flip:
@@ -501,6 +514,8 @@ label chapter_13A:
     window auto
     pause .5
 
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
     scene bandroom
     show fang a prom neutral:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9
@@ -510,15 +525,24 @@ label chapter_13A:
         yalign 0.1 xalign -0.6
     show trish prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
-    with fade
+    with Dissolve(1)
     "We hauled ass to Mr.Jingo’s room, where the band had stored their gear."
 
     "Reed’s drumset was in pieces and I helped him reassemble it while Trish and Fang tuned their guitars."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     stop music
     play sound 'audio/effects/stringsnap.ogg' # CC0
-    "{i}*TWANG*{/i}"
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.88
+    show fang a prom shock
+    show trish prom surprised flip
+
+    pause 1
+
+    #"{i}*TWANG*{/i}"
 
     show fang:
         easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.0
@@ -608,13 +632,15 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "I didn’t even want to be here in the first place, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "But I’m following Moe’s advice and supporting Fang, right?"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     play music "audio/effects/promChatterLoop2.ogg" fadein 3
     scene prom
     show anon prom neutral:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
-    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    with Dissolve(2)
 
     "The music slams into me as I reenter the room, grating on my ears and thrumming roughly in my chest."
 
@@ -790,7 +816,9 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     Sp "{cps=*.3}Naaaaaser aaaaand Naaaaoooomiiiiii!{/cps}"
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 1
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/crowdCheerLoop.ogg' fadein 1
+    play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 2
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.4, 0, 'ambient1')
     "He tosses the paper over his shoulder and yanks out the crowns from a pocket inside his jacket."
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -822,6 +850,9 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "Spears offers the crowns to Naomi, who puts the larger one on Naser’s crest to droop off, and then dons the tiara{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "The whole moment is picturesque, just like Naomi wanted."
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 4
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 4, 'ambient1')
     pause .5
 
     show naomi prom happy flip with dissolve
@@ -839,7 +870,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show naomi prom neutral flip with dissolve
+    show naomi prom unimpressed flip with dissolve
     pause .5
 
     show naomi:
@@ -893,7 +924,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "And then Fang comes on with her bass as well."
 
     pause .5
-    stop ambient fadeout 3
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 3
     play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1.0
     pause .5
 
@@ -964,11 +995,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
     scene prom fang freak out a ending with Dissolve(1)
 
     "Fang stays a moment longer, the despair on her face manifesting through hot streams of tears."
-    window hide
-    window auto
-    pause 1
-
-    scene prom with fade
     pause .5
 
     "She turns to leave as well, trying to maintain a calm composure."
@@ -977,6 +1003,12 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     "It splashes against her head, drenching her suit in red dye and making her smash onto the floor."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 1
+
+    scene prom with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
     "A few more food articles follow while Fang scrambles to get up."
 
@@ -1068,6 +1100,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     show trish:
         easein_quart 1.5 xalign 0.65
+    show trish prom surprised flip with dissolve
     T "I, whu-"
 
     A "I don’t care, I need to find Fang. Now."

game/script/14A.KO_OP-ending.rpy

@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
-image fangfog = im.Blur(im.MatrixColor("fang/emotive set/fang anguish.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), 1.5)
 image red = "#ff0000"
 
 label chapter_14A:
@@ -723,11 +722,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0, 'ambient1') #policeSirenReverbLoop
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient3')
-    scene roof fog
-    show fangfog:
-        yanchor 0.5 xanchor 0.5
-        ypos 0.6 xpos 0.5
-        alpha 0.25 zoom 0.25
+    scene roofshooter
 
     play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 5 volume 0.7
     play ambient3 "audio/effects/radioChatterLoop.ogg" fadein 5 volume 0.3
@@ -817,7 +812,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     hide red
     with Dissolve(0.4)
     hide fang flash blurred with Dissolve(2)
-    pause 2
+    pause 3
 
     A "{i}ARGH!{/i}"
     pause .5
@@ -828,18 +823,19 @@ label chapter_14A:
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient3')
 
     "Hot, searing pain."
-
+    pause .5
     "My left leg crumples under me."
     pause 1
 
     "As I fall I see Fang’s beautiful amber eyes."
+    pause .5
 
     "They’re red and puffy, with makeup-less tears running freely down her cheeks."
-    stop sound fadeout 5
+    stop sound fadeout 4
 
     window hide
     window auto
-    pause 1
+    pause 1.5
 
     play audio 'audio/effects/shooterWitnessed.ogg' volume 0.6
     play ambient1 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' volume 0.05 fadein 2
@@ -1175,7 +1171,11 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause 2
 
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
+    A "{i}Fang!{/i}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 1
 
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient1')
     scene shooterroof:
@@ -1183,20 +1183,25 @@ label chapter_14A:
         #xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
         #zoom 1.12
     with Dissolve(3)
-    stop ambient1
-    pause 1
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient1')
 
-    "She jumps."
-    pause .5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg' volume 0.2 fadein 2
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1.5, 'ambient1')
+    pause 0.5
 
-    A "{i}Fang!{/i}"
+    #"She jumps."
+    #pause .5
 
-    window hide
-    window auto
     play sound 'audio/effects/shooterFangJumps.ogg' volume 0.7
+
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.6, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.6, 'ambient')
     pause 6
 
+    stop ambient
+    stop ambient1
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
+
     "I can’t look over."
     pause .5
 
@@ -1305,15 +1310,23 @@ label chapter_14A:
     stop ambient fadeout 5
     play ambient1 "audio/effects/drizzleLoop.ogg" fadein 3
     play ambient2 "audio/effects/windLightLoop.ogg" fadein 3
-    scene a15 with Fade(2, .5, 2)
+
+    scene black with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 0.5
+    scene a15 with Dissolve(2)
     pause 2
 
     "The alternations of footsteps and the crutch make me feel more mechanical than human."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Then again, that may be true regardless of having a crutch."
-
     window hide
     window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 5
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.3, 4, 'ambient')
+    scene a14 with Dissolve(2)
     pause 2
 
     "The two graves are right next to each other."
@@ -1376,14 +1389,14 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     stop ambient1 fadeout 10
     stop ambient2 fadeout 20
-    play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 20
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 20, 'ambient')
 
     "{i}{cps=*.3}Don’t leave me alone.{/cps}{/i}"
     pause 1
 
     "I just feel completely and utterly and hopelessly alone."
 
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 6, 'ambient1')
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 3
@@ -1412,7 +1425,8 @@ label chapter_14A:
     $ quick_menu = False
     window hide
 
-    stop ambient fadeout 20
+    stop ambient fadeout 25
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 25, 'ambient')
 
     pause 7
 
@@ -1427,4 +1441,5 @@ label chapter_14A:
     scene black with Dissolve(17.0)
     pause 5
 
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
     return

game/script/14C.good-ending.rpy

@@ -9,25 +9,25 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "Volcaldera Bluffs. {w=0.2}New duty station.{w=0.2} Recruiting teens to suffer just like I did."
 
-    "Good times, good times."
+    "Good times,{w=0.1} good times."
 
     show anonc neutral at aleft with dissolve
     "With my rucksack on my back and a cheap rolling case at my side I make my way down to my old stomping ground for some cheap living."
 
-    "Three years. I wonder if Lucy still lives here."
+    "Three years.{w=0.2} I wonder if Lucy still lives here."
 
-    "There’s new buildings in the Galleria. Not to mention it’s gotten even more labyrinthine."
+    "There’s new buildings in the Galleria.{w=0.2} Not to mention it’s gotten even more labyrinthine."
 
     "The sun reflecting off the mirror polished windows are baking me alive in my JDUs."
 
-    "Thinking back, I think there’s a park nearby that has a decent vending machine."
+    "Thinking back,{w=0.1} I think there’s a park nearby that has a decent vending machine."
 
     show anonc neutral at aleft
     with dissolve
 
     "Mentally retracing my steps from my senior year I manage to find the park."
 
-    "Looks like they’re holding some kind of festival, with all the booths set up and tyranno tykes running around."
+    "Looks like they’re holding some kind of festival,{w=0.1} with all the booths set up and tyranno tykes running around."
 
     "There’s an unoccupied picnic bench, miraculously, so I set my heavy bags carrying my entire life down and pop open my water bottle."
 
@@ -47,6 +47,8 @@ label chapter_14C:
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     Lucy "Anon?"
 
+    pause .2
+
     "Hm?"
 
     "I look up to see a pterodactyl in a floral print dress running full tilt towards me."
@@ -74,15 +76,16 @@ label chapter_14C:
     pause 0.5
     A "Lucy..?"
 
+    #move fang slightly closer
     scene park fair
     show fang c happy flip at scenter
-    show anonc neutral at aleft
-    with fade
+    show anonc shock at aleft
+    with dissolve
 
     Lucy "You remembered our promise!"
 
     "Right. Right."
-    "Yeah, the promise…"
+    "Yeah, the promise{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     # "..."
 
@@ -111,53 +114,60 @@ label chapter_14C:
     # "{i}It's settled, then.{/i}"
 
     stop music fadeout 1.0
+    show anonc happy with dissolve
 
-    A "That I’d come back and be with you. How could I forget?"
+    A "That I’d come back and be with you.{w=0.22} How could I forget?"
 
     play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
     "I finally have a chance to take Lucy in."
 
-    "Gone is the halter top, torn jeans, and spiky hornband."
+    "Gone is the halter top,{w=0.03} torn jeans,{w=0.02} and spiky hornband."
 
-    "In their place, a simple golden sun dress and a large red ribbon tied around her head crest, looking for the world like a pair of red bunny ears."
+    "In their place,{w=0.1} a simple golden sun dress and a large red ribbon tied around her head crest, looking for the world like a pair of red bunny ears."
 
-    "Her hands remain on my shoulders, and I can see that she’s checking me out now."
+    # todo
+    "Her hands remain on my shoulders,{w=.25} and I can see that she’s checking me out now."
 
-    "I’m proud to say I’m no longer a lanklet, especially with how my uniform blouse’s rolled up sleeves feel like they’re cutting off the blood flow to my hands."
+    "I’m proud to say I’m no longer a lanklet,{w=.15} especially with how my uniform blouse’s rolled up sleeves feel like they’re cutting off the blood flow to my hands."
 
     Lucy "You’ve really changed since I last saw you, Anon!"
 
     Lucy "I’m so glad you’re safe after all these years!"
 
-    Lucy "I got so worried for you, what if something happened overseas…"
+    Lucy "I got so worried for you,{w=0.1} what if something happened overseas{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    Lucy "What if you got lost or hurt..."
+    Lucy "What if you got lost or hurt{cps=*.125}...{/cps}"
 
-    Lucy "What if you never returned at all…"
+    Lucy "What if you never returned at all{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "Hey, have more faith in me."
+    A "Hey,{w=.05} have more faith in me."
 
-    A "I still got all my limbs, right?"
+    show anonc considering with dissolve
+    A "I still got all my limbs,{w=.1} right?"
 
     A "I didn’t get bruised too bad."
 
-    A "Like uhh, remember that time I fell down the stairs?"
+    A "Like uhh,{w=.1} remember that time I fell down the stairs?"
 
-    A "I’m pretty indestructible, yeah?"
+    show anonc happy with dissolve
+    A "I’m pretty indestructible,{w=0.1} yeah?"
 
-    "...Maybe I’ll wait before showing her my scars."
+    "{cps=*.2}...{/cps}Maybe I’ll wait before showing her my scars."
 
     Lucy "Wow, you’re pretty amazing…"
 
+    show anonc neutral with dissolve
     A "What’ve you been up to?"
 
     Lucy "Oh, I got my Associates and then-"
 
-    unknown "MIIIISSSS LUCCYYYYYYYY!!!"
+    unknown "{cps=*.5}MIIIISSSS LUCCYYYYYYYY!!!{/cps}"
 
     "Fang shrugs."
 
+    show fang c happy with dissolve
+
     Lucy "And then this."
 
     "A little T-rex runs up to the table."
@@ -172,6 +182,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Vince "Tell him it’s not true!!"
 
+    show anonc happy with dissolve
     A "Tell him that his mom has a secret daddy she doesn’t tell anyone about."
 
     Lucy "Anon!"
@@ -180,13 +191,19 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "Oh no you don’t."
 
-    Lucy "JARED, GET OVER HERE."
+    Lucy "JARED,{w=.2} GET OVER HERE."
 
-    hide fang c happy flip with dissolve
+    show fang c:
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 1.30
+    pause .5
+    hide fang with dissolve
+    show anonc neutral with dissolve
 
     "After clearing up the squabble, Lucy slumps over the picnic table again."
 
-    show fang c happy flip at scenter with dissolve
+    show fang c happy flip with dissolve:
+        xalign 1.30
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5
 
     A "Want me to get you a water bottle or something?"
 
@@ -196,13 +213,13 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "So today they’re letting the local schools have a field trip here free of charge."
 
-    A "... Need another chaperone?"
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Need another chaperone?"
 
     Lucy "I’d love to, but parents get really upset about this sort of thing."
 
     Lucy "You have to be qualified and certified to look after these guys."
 
-    A "Oi naehd a choild moindin’ loicence, yeh? Pray-ay bonkahs, yeh."
+    A "Oi naehd a choild moindin’ loicence, yeh?{w=.2} Pray-ay bonkahs, yeh."
 
     "I chuckle aloud at my own silly accent. Lucy’s giggles echo my mirth."
     stop music fadeout 1.0
@@ -211,13 +228,22 @@ label chapter_14C:
     play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
     show fang c sad4 flip with dissolve
 
-    Lucy "You’re really back…"
+    Lucy "You’re really back{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.225
+#ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.4
+    show anonc:
+        pause .3
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign -0.004
+        ease_cubic 0.45 xalign 0.001
+    show anonc happy with dissolve
 
     "Her arms wrap around me tightly, as if afraid I’ll disappear at any moment."
 
     "My hand rubs comforting circles across her back, soothing her."
 
-    A "Yeah. I’m back, Lucy."
+    A "Yeah.{w=.2} I’m back, Lucy."
 
     A "I’m surprised you waited for me here."
 
@@ -225,32 +251,43 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "We stay embraced in the hot sun for just a moment longer before I let go again."
 
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.44
+        "fang c happy" with dissolve
+        pause .2
+        ease_cubic 0.55 xalign 0.65
+
 
     "Lucy’s gaze lingers on the children, her eyebrows knit together in contemplation."
-    show fang c happy flip with dissolve
+
+    pause .75
+
     Lucy "Look at them, Anon."
 
     "Fang points toward the kids screaming and falling over each other."
 
     Lucy "We were all like this at some point."
 
+    show anonc considering with dissolve
     A "Stupid?"
 
-    Lucy "Yeah- no, I mean careless.{w=0.2} Innocent."
+    Lucy "Yeah-{w=.1} no, I mean careless.{w=0.2} Innocent."
 
+    show anonc neutral with dissolve
     A "Suppose we were."
 
+    show fang c sad with dissolve
     "She lets out a sigh."
 
-    Lucy "One day they’re gonna start thinking and doing all the wrong things we thought and did when we were teenagers..."
+    Lucy "One day they’re gonna start thinking and doing all the wrong things we thought and did when we were teenagers{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    Lucy "I wish I could stop it from happening. They're perfect just like this."
+    Lucy "I wish I could stop it from happening.{w=.3} They're perfect just like this."
 
     A "Kids can be, mean to each other."
 
-    Lucy "But not cruel.{w=0.4} The world makes them cruel."
+    Lucy "But not cruel.{w=0.35} The world makes them cruel."
 
-    Lucy "Until then...{w=0.3}they're free. We gotta protect their freedom. Save them from our mistakes."
+    Lucy "Until then{cps=*.1}...{/cps} they're free. We gotta protect their freedom. Save them from our mistakes."
 
     "That’s quite a statement to hear from her."
 
@@ -260,13 +297,28 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "I'm glad to see you're doing good. How’s everyone else?"
 
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.70
+    show fang c shocked flip with dissolve
+
     Lucy "Everyone else?"
 
-    A "Y’know, Naser, Trish, Naomi, Reed, all those guys?"
+    show anonc considering with dissolve
+    A "Y’know, Naser,{w=.05} Trish, Naomi, Reed, all those guys?"
 
-    Lucy "Oh!{w=0.3} Naser went to medical school..."
+    show anonc neutral with dissolve
+    Lucy "Oh!{w=0.3} Naser went to medical school{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    show anonc sad with dissolve #PAIN
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.75
+    show fang c sad3 flip with dissolve
     "She closes her eyes as though trying to recall a lost memory."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.60
+    show fang c sad flip with dissolve
 
     Lucy "I haven’t seen Naomi, though."
 
@@ -275,11 +327,14 @@ label chapter_14C:
     Lucy "Haven't seen them since either."
 
     pause 0.5
+    show fang c happy flip with dissolve
+
     Lucy "But you’re here now!"
 
     Lucy "And now that you’re back, I’m never letting you go again."
 
-    A "I’m not going anywhere… {w=0.3}Sweet Tooth."
+    show anonc neutral with dissolve
+    A "I’m not going anywhere{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Sweet Tooth."
 
     "Lucy rolls her eyes."
 
@@ -303,7 +358,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "I kinda blame you for that development."
 
-    Lucy "Ha{w=0.3}, I made you care about people."
+    Lucy "Ha,{w=0.3} I made you care about people."
 
     A "You did."
 
@@ -317,19 +372,28 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "Yeah, and we could go and check Volcano High again, for old time's sake."
 
-    show fang sad3 flip with dissolve
+    show fang c sad3 flip with dissolve
 
     "She freezes for a second."
 
     Lucy "I-I’d rather not Volcano High.{w=0.3} Too many bad memories."
 
-    scene black with fade
+    show fang c sad with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    show fang:
+       ease_cubic 0.85 xalign 1.4
+    show fang c happy with dissolve
+
+    pause .5
+    hide fang with dissolve
 
     "Lucy ended up getting the rest of the day off from her supervisors, I was surprised by how understanding they were once they saw me."
 
-    scene park fair with fade
-    show fang c happy flip at scenter with dissolve
-    show anonc neutral at aleft with dissolve
+    show fang c happy flip with dissolve:
+        yalign 0.0
+        xalign 1.50
+        ease_cubic 0.99 xalign 0.65
+    #show anonc neutral at aleft with dissolve
 
     Lucy "They said I deserve it after a hard day's work."
 
@@ -337,26 +401,26 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "Not at all! {w=0.3}Truth be told, Anon. I love doing what I do."
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    scene c04 with fade
+    scene c04 with dissolve
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     play ambient "audio/effects/beachLoop2.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "Catching up with Lucy was the happiest I felt in years, the memories came rushing back as we walked under the hot sun."
 
     A "So you don’t know at all how Reed and Trish are doing?"
 
-    Lucy "OH! {w=0.3}...When was the last time I spoke with them…?"
+    Lucy "OH! {w=0.2}{cps=*.175}...{/cps}When was the last time I spoke with them{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
 
     A "Hope Trish is alright, the two of you were friends for the longest time."
 
-    Lucy "I guess I… {w=0.3}Didn’t feel the need to see them again?"
+    Lucy "I guess I{cps=*.15}...{/cps} {w=0.1}Didn’t feel the need to see them again?"
 
     Lucy "Looking back, they were terrible influences."
 
-    A "I guess so..."
+    A "I guess so{cps=*.125}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
     A "And Stella and Rosa?"
 
@@ -364,7 +428,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "Seems weird, considering Rosa was of such help to us."
 
-    Lucy "Don't get me wrong, Anon. I love what Rosa did for me, Naser and you, but I guess I...{w=0.3}just didn't need to see her anymore."
+    Lucy "Don't get me wrong, Anon. I love what Rosa did for me, Naser and you, but I guess I{cps=*.175}...{/cps}{w=0.1}just didn't need to see her anymore."
 
     Lucy "I didn't want to see anyone else, for that matter."
 
@@ -376,21 +440,21 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "I don't want to."
 
-    "The scenery here seems familiar..."
+    "The scenery here seems familiar{cps=*.125}...{/cps}"
 
     "Oh, this is my old path to school. Maybe I will get to see it after all."
 
-    Lucy "L-let's turn away. {w=0.3}To Moe's, or somewhere."
+    Lucy "L-{w=.05}let's turn away. {w=0.25}To Moe's, or somewhere."
 
     A "Aww, I wanted to see the school again though."
 
-    Lucy "NO, Anon."
+    Lucy "NO,{w=.5} Anon."
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Lucy "Seems like we just repeat each other, I get upset over nothing, and I apologize."
 
-    Lucy "Sorry, I just… {w=0.3}don't want to remember Volcano High, I just…"
+    Lucy "Sorry, I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.1}don't want to remember Volcano High, I just{cps=*.125}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.3
     Lucy "I did too much dumb stuff there, you know?"
 
@@ -398,9 +462,9 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "Moe’s is fine, too. I do want to see how that fossil is doing."
 
-    Lucy "Er,{w=0.2} actually, Moe retired! He sold his franchise."
+    Lucy "Er,{w=0.2} actually, Moe retired!{w=0.25} He sold his franchise."
 
-    A "Oh. Well, we can still go check it out."
+    A "Oh.{w=0.3} Well, we can still go check it out."
 
     stop ambient fadeout 2
 
@@ -410,11 +474,16 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "It took a while to get there, getting to be nearly five when we arrived at Moe's, we ordered our usual and picked a table."
 
+    pause .25
+    scene moes pizza with dissolve
 
-    show anonc neutral at aleft
+    show anonc neutral at aleft:
+        xalign 0.2
     show fang c happy flip at sright
     with dissolve
 
+    pause .25
+
     "I can see the old piano in my peripheral vision."
 
     A "I’ve been asking so much about what you’re doing now, but what happened while I was away?"
@@ -426,11 +495,11 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "I tried improving myself, like, really tried."
 
-    Lucy "But things kept getting difficult. For a while I gave up."
+    Lucy "But things kept getting difficult.{w=0.2} For a while I gave up."
 
     Lucy "There were times I’d cry. I would think back to when you were here and miss you so much."
 
-    Lucy "I...{w=0.3}don't wanna worry you with the details of what I did during that time, but…"
+    Lucy "I{cps=*.175}...{/cps}{w=0.1}don't wanna worry you with the details of what I did during that time, but…"
 
     Lucy "I guess I realized something."
 
@@ -444,17 +513,17 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "I didn't want to make my family sad anymore, so I just did what I've always should have done and learned to love them, to thank them for all they did for me."
 
-    A "So you kept playing? I'd love to see what else you've composed over the years. I'm sure it's great."
+    A "So you kept playing?{w=0.1} I'd love to see what else you've composed over the years. I'm sure it's great."
 
     show fang c sad2 flip with dissolve
 
-    Lucy "No...{w=0.3}I just gave that up."
+    Lucy "No{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1}I just gave that up."
 
-    A "What?{w=0.2} Really?{w=0.1} It was such a huge part of you!"
+    A "What?{w=0.175} Really?{w=0.125} It was such a huge part of you!"
 
     show fang c sad3 flip with dissolve
 
-    Lucy "I didn't need it anymore, plus it reminded me too much of Trish, I've put away the instruments somewhere and never played anything ever again."
+    Lucy "I didn't need it anymore, plus it reminded me too much of Trish,{w=0.2} I've put away the instruments somewhere and never played anything ever again."
 
     A "Then what have you been doing all these years?"
 
@@ -462,7 +531,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "Dad needed help with a charity event, he bought food and he needed me to help him carry it around since Naser was away in college."
 
-    Lucy "I thought it was just going to be a boring evening with a bunch of brats, but I saw something..."
+    Lucy "I thought it was just going to be a boring evening with a bunch of brats, but I saw something{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Lucy "I saw the children, they ran around me, they offered me toys to play with, I joined them."
 
@@ -476,9 +545,9 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "THAT would be hilarious."
 
-    Lucy "But yeah, I enjoyed my time with the children so much...{w=0.3}I asked around in my church and eventually I got a gig dealing with preschoolers."
+    Lucy "But yeah, I enjoyed my time with the children so much{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.15}I asked around in my church and eventually I got a gig dealing with preschoolers."
 
-    "She looks so happy right now. I feel like I would ruin the mood to bring up Trish, Reed and the others again."
+    "She looks so happy right now.{w=0.2} I feel like I would ruin the mood to bring up Trish, Reed and the others again."
 
     A "Y’know, part of me expected you to forget about the whole promise."
 
@@ -508,11 +577,11 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "You think they’d let us play it?"
 
-    Lucy "I don't know, it's probably out of tune..."
+    Lucy "I don't know, it's probably out of tune{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Might be worth a shot, come on."
 
-    Lucy "But you can't play..."
+    Lucy "But you can't play{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Then {i}you{/i} play."
     stop music fadeout 10.0
@@ -528,7 +597,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "She retracts herself."
 
-    Lucy "I haven't played in a long time...{w=0.3}I don't know if I can still do it."
+    Lucy "I haven't played in a long time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2}I don't know if I can still do it."
 
     A "I bet you still remember how to do it."
 
@@ -548,7 +617,9 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "I know."
 
-    play music 'audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Piano.ogg' fadein 3.0
+    play music 'audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Piano.ogg' fadein 2.5
+
+    pause 3.0
 
     Lucy "Remember this?"
 
@@ -558,28 +629,31 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "Ha!{w=0.3} I still got it!"
 
-    Lucy "I always thought of this melody when I thought about you..."
+    Lucy "I always thought of this melody when I thought about you{cps=*.2}...{/cps}"
 
-    Lucy "Guess I never forgot how to do it. Thought I'd be rusty with the piano."
+    Lucy "Guess I never forgot how to do it.{w=.1} Thought I'd be rusty with the piano."
 
     A "You play beautifully."
 
-    Lucy "...Thank you..."
+    Lucy "{cps=*.15}...{/cps}Thank you{cps=*.3}...{/cps}"
     stop music fadeout 1.0
 
     "I sit closer to Lucy, she rests her head on my shoulder. Her hands are still resting on the keys, eager to play again."
     play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 1.0
     A "You shouldn't have abandoned music."
 
-    Lucy "..."
+    Lucy "{cps=*.175}...{/cps}"
 
     "We talked about what we would do now, especially since it was getting dark outside and the street lights were coming on."
 
     "We walked our way back to where we started, near the park."
+
+    pause .75
+
     scene park night
     show anonc neutral at aleft
     show fang c sad flip at sright
-    with fade
+    with Dissolve(1.0)
 
     Lucy "I don't know, Anon!{w=0.2} It's just so WEIRD!{w=0.2} A music teacher?"
 
@@ -609,7 +683,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "Lucy stirs. She doesn’t like the idea."
 
-    Lucy "Anon...{w=0.3}please don't ask me to do that.{w=0.3} I'm not ready."
+    Lucy "Anon{cps=*.125}...{/cps}{w=0.13}please don't ask me to do that.{w=0.3} I'm not ready."
 
     A "How are you not ready?"
 
@@ -621,6 +695,8 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "I'm still broken, Anon."
 
+    pause 1.0
+
     Lucy "I’ve even started preening again because I had no one, but remembering I promised you and Naser I wouldn't do it anymore hurt even more so."
 
     Lucy "But that was years ago. I swear, I tried getting better."
@@ -629,7 +705,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "I'm the one sighing this time."
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Lucy "You wanted me to live my own life, be this great person you wanted me to be, yet I'm here doing menial church tasks and dealing with children."
 
@@ -683,6 +759,11 @@ label chapter_14C:
     A "...Alright then. My motel isn’t too far from here."
     play ambient "audio/effects/apartmentLoop.ogg" fadein 5.0
     stop music fadeout 5
+
+    scene black with dissolve
+
+    pause .75
+
     scene apartment morning with dissolve
 
     "I wasn’t kidding when I said I had a lot to unpack."
@@ -703,13 +784,13 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "A peace shattered by my stomach demanding sustenance loudly."
 
-    A "Mmm… {w=0.3}How about we get some breakfast? My treat."
+    A "Mmm{cps=*.15}...{/cps}{w=0.13}How about we get some breakfast?{w=0.1} My treat."
 
     Lucy "A breakfast date sounds nice."
 
     Lucy "Say, how about we invite my family. I’m sure mom would love to see you again."
 
-    "Probably would, too. However…"
+    "Probably would, too. However{cps=*.175}...{/cps}"
 
     A "I’d rather spend it with just you, Lucy."
 
@@ -725,7 +806,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "I'll tell them first! Get them hyped to see you!"
 
-    A "That would be great. So...{w=0.3}tomorrow then?"
+    A "That would be great. So{cps=*.125}...{/cps}{w=0.1} tomorrow then?"
 
     Lucy "Tomorrow, yes."
     stop ambient fadeout 1.0
@@ -737,7 +818,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     window auto
 
     show c09 with dissolve
-    pause 1
+    pause 1.25
 
     A "Urgh-- {w=0.3}it's ok, Lucy."
 
@@ -745,20 +826,25 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "You don't need to be alone, you know."
 
-    Lucy "I'm so glad you're here. I missed you."
+    Lucy "I'm so glad you're here.{w=.2} I missed you."
 
     A "I missed you too, Lucy."
 
-    "Though I miss the old Fang, I'm elated. I love you, Lucy."
+    "Though I miss the old Fang, I'm elated.{w=.4} I love you,{w=.1} Lucy."
+
+    pause 2.0
 
     $ quick_menu = False
+    scene black with fade
+    pause .5
+
     window hide
-    scene e3of4 with fade
+    scene e3of4 with dissolve
     stop sound fadeout 15.0
     pause 16
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 2, 'sound')
-    scene black with fade
-    pause 1
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause 1.0
     stop sound
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'sound')
     return

game/script/14D.gold-ending.rpy

@@ -84,9 +84,9 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Hey Reed, what’s happening?"
 
-    A "You seem to certainly have uh…{w=0.2} changed."
+    A "You seem to certainly have uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} changed."
 
-    A "Why do you look like uh…{w=0.2} I don’t want to sound rude or anything, but…"
+    A "Why do you look like uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I don’t want to sound rude or anything, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "You look homeless, Reed."
 
@@ -98,22 +98,22 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     Re "What’d you say, man?"
 
-    A "What?{w=0.2} Nothing. No idea what you’re talking about."
+    A "What?{w=0.2} Nothing.{w=0.1} No idea what you’re talking about."
 
     A "So, how did you get to become the 'richest raptor in the world'?"
 
     Re "You wouldn’t believe it, man!"
 
-    Re "See, it all started with…"
+    Re "See, it all started with{cps=*.12}...{/cps}"
 
     "Reed proceeds to run his mouth off about a bunch of gibberish."
 
     "I cannot understand anything he's saying."
 
     "I think I heard ‘pharmaceutical business’ at one point?"
-    pause 0.3
+    pause 0.2
 
-    Re "...and then I was brought here by the birds, dude."
+    Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}and then I was brought here by the birds, dude."
 
     Re "So what’ve you been up to, man?"
 
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "It’s not as exciting as your story, honestly."
 
-    A "I just went off to college, got my bachelor’s, and now I’m just a sound engineer."
+    A "I just went off to college,{w=.1} got my bachelor’s,{w=.1} and now I’m just a sound engineer."
 
     Re "Sounds pretty sweet, dude."
     show reed future neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -136,7 +136,8 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "Definitely,{w=0.2} I need some air conditioning."
 
     "We quickly moved along to the gymnasium."
-    scene reunion with fade
+    pause .2
+    scene reunion with dissolve
     A "Man, it really hasn’t changed. Takes me back."
     show anond neutral at aleft
     show reed future explanatory flip at rright:
@@ -150,8 +151,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "No, didn’t know I had to."
 
     "Reed gestures to the sign-in table."
-    scene reunion with fade
-    show anond neutral at aleft with easeinleft
+
+    scene black with dissolve
+    scene reunion with dissolve
+
+    show anond neutral:
+        yalign 0.1
+        xalign -1.20
+        ease_cubic 2.1 xalign 0.3
     "The clerk is crouched behind the table sorting through a box."
 
     "I go over to write in my John Hancock and the person behind the counter stands up."
@@ -159,11 +166,19 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "My nose is assaulted by the pheronomes of perfumes that probably cost more than a years' salary."
 
     show naomi future at sright with dissolve
+    show naomi:
+        pause .1
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.12
+        ease_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
+
     N "Oh!"
 
-    N "Anon, you made it!"
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.85
 
-    A "Yeah, I did."
+    N "Anon,{w=.1} you made it!"
+
+    A "Yeah,{w=.1} I did."
 
     A "Life been treating you well?"
 
@@ -173,7 +188,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Real shame about his last presidential run."
 
-    N "Oh, he got over it."
+    N "Oh,{w=.1} he got over it."
 
     N "There’s always 2028!"
 
@@ -187,7 +202,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     N "No, I lost touch with him about three years ago."
 
-    A "Oh, sorry. How about work, then?"
+    A "Oh, sorry.{w=.2} How about work, then?"
 
     N "I haven’t been working, mostly staying back at home and looking after the kids."
 
@@ -205,19 +220,31 @@ label chapter_14D:
     stop music fadeout 3
     play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdInteriorLoop.ogg' fadein 3
 
+    scene black with Dissolve(0.5)
+    pause 1.0
     scene reunion
-    show anond neutral at aleft
-    show reed future neutral flip at rcenter
-    with fade
+    show reed future neutral:
+        xalign 0.0
+        yalign 0.1
+    show anond neutral:
+        yalign 0.1
+        xalign -0.3
+    with dissolve
     "I go rejoin Reed and we enter the gymnasium together."
 
     "The setup is rather similar to that prom night all those years ago, albeit without the foreign decor."
 
     "Young men and women mingle with small drinks and party foods across the floor."
 
-    Re "Man, those look good. Come over here, I’ll get you a drink, on me."
+    Re "Man, those look good.{w=.15} Come over here, I’ll get you a drink, on me."
 
-    "I follow him over to the minibar. Trish is sitting in one of the seats, huddled over an empty glass."
+    show anond:
+        pause .15
+        ease_cubic 0.90 xalign 0.05
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.85 xalign 0.25
+
+    "I follow him over to the minibar.{w=.15} Trish is sitting in one of the seats, huddled over an empty glass."
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -225,13 +252,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
     stop ambient fadeout 1
     play music "audio/OST/Ramo de Rosas.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
-    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.75
+    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed:
+        xalign 2.3
+        easein_cubic 2.0 xalign 1.25
     pause .5
 
     "Rosa is pouring drinks for the few other drunkards when she spots us approach."
 
-    Ro "Oh! An-on, it is great to see you after all this time!"
+    Ro "Oh!{w=0.2} An-on, it is great to see you after all this time!"
 
     Ro "Please, sit and talk awhile!"
 
@@ -239,19 +267,21 @@ label chapter_14D:
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show reed future at rright:
-        xalign 1.5
+    show anond:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign -0.1
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.15
     show rosa future flip at sright:
-        xalign 1.0
-    with ease
-    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 1.35
+    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter with dissolve:
+        xalign 0.75
     pause .5
 
     "She looks up from her sulking and her face lights up at the sight of us."
 
-    T "Anon! It’s been years!"
+    T "Anon!{w=0.3} It’s been years!"
 
-    A "Trish, Rosa, glad we found you here!"
+    A "Trish, Rosa,{w=0.2} glad we found you here!"
 
     Re "Come on man, we’ve been texting this whole time."
 
@@ -275,7 +305,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Rosa instinctively rubs her own horn."
 
-    A "H-hollow?"
+    A "H-{w=0.2}hollow?"
 
     T "Of course, I even got in contact with a sculptor and figured out how to make them whistle in the wind!"
 
@@ -295,7 +325,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     T "It’s not even that bloody, I only hire the best."
 
-    A "B-bloody?"
+    A "B-{w=0.2}bloody?"
 
     T "What, never had a piercing before? Same thing."
 
@@ -309,12 +339,25 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "I look up to see the one person I’m most anxious and excited to talk with again approaching."
 
     play music "audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    show anond neutral flip with ease:
-        xalign 0.1
     A "Fang! You’re here!"
-    show fang d shock with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.7
-    F "Wha- {w=0.2}I- {w=0.2}dammit Anon, I told you to stop calling me that!"
+    show fang d shock:
+        xalign -2.2
+        easein_cubic 0.89 xalign -0.65
+    show anond:
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.15
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.725
+    show rosa:
+        ease_cubic 0.65 xalign 1.45
+    show trish:
+        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.875
+    with None
+
+    pause 0.0001
+    show reed future neutral flip with dissolve
+    show anond neutral flip with dissolve
+
+    F "Wha-{w=0.2} I-{w=0.2} dammit Anon,{w=0.2} I told you to stop calling me that!"
 
     Re "Isn’t that the name Lucy used back in senior year?"
 
@@ -332,7 +375,8 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
-    scene d03 with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
+    scene d03 with dissolve
 
     Re "C’mon, get over here. I’ll order us all another watchamacallit of drinks. It’s on me, the richest raptor in the {cps=*0.3}woooorld{/cps}!"
 
@@ -354,7 +398,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "I feel like we’re missing someone."
 
-    A "Where’s Spears? I could have sworn he would be here."
+    A "Where’s Spears?{w=.1} I could have sworn he would be here."
 
     Re "Nah man, he’s gone. I saw him on TV the other day, though."
 
@@ -364,7 +408,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     Re "He’s built a reputation for his gimmick of wrecking a car every ad he does."
 
-    A "I…{w=0.3} I see."
+    A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I see."
 
     "Oh god I thought that was a joke about slamming people into cars."
 
@@ -375,8 +419,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
     show anond neutral at aleft
     show reed future neutral flip at rcenter:
         xalign 0.6
-    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter:
-        xalign 0.8
+    show trish future neutral at tcenter:
+        xalign 0.75
+    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed:
+        xalign 1.3
     with dissolve
     "She goes up onstage and tests the microphone, getting everyone’s attention."
 
@@ -390,29 +436,25 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "She puts the mic back on its stand and jumps offstage."
 
-    show fang d happy with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.7
-
     "Reed pats my shoulder."
 
     Re "You got a ride home, man?"
 
     A "I can walk, but thanks."
 
-    show fang d happy flip with dissolve:
-     xalign -0.7
-    # pause 0.2
-    hide fang d happy flip with easeoutleft
+    show fang d happy:
+        xalign -2.2
+        easein_cubic 1.11 xalign -0.65
     "Lucy returns to the minibar, where Rosa is waiting with the last of the alcohol."
 
     T "There it is."
-    show rosa future flip at sright with easeinright:
-        xalign 1.3
-    show fang d happy with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.7
+
+    show trish future neutral flip with dissolve
 
     Re "Alright, great seeing you guys. I’ll bounce."
 
+    show trish future smug flip with dissolve
+
     T "We should all meet again for lunch sometime!"
 
     A "Yeah, absolutely. It’s been forever since I’ve been in town, would love to get a tour of what’s new."
@@ -431,7 +473,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     T "See you guys."
     hide trish with dissolve
-    Ro "Come visit me too, An-on. Stella and I would love to have you."
+    Ro "Come visit me too, An-on.{w=.1} Stella and I would love to have you."
 
     hide rosa with dissolve
 
@@ -445,10 +487,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
     N "Oh, don’t worry about it! It was nice getting to act like a class representative again."
 
     show naomi future flip at sright with dissolve
-    hide naomi future with easeoutright
+    show naomi:
+        easeout_cubic 1.0 xalign 2.75
+
     "The Plastic Persimmon waves and lets the door swing closed with an echoing *clang*."
 
-    A "Sooo… {w=0.3}Just the two of us…"
+    hide naomi
+
+    A "Sooo{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.1}Just the two of us{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "Damn you Anon and damn you Bill Withers."
 
@@ -458,7 +504,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Lucy holds up a plastic bag that *clink*s with each shake."
 
-    F "I was gonna offer you the last of these… {w=0.3}Buuuut…"
+    F "I was gonna offer you the last of these{cps=*.12}...{/cps} Buuuut{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Hey now, let’s not let those go to waste."
 
@@ -466,11 +512,11 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Rooftop?"
 
-    F "Rooftop. {w=0.3}Now."
+    F "Rooftop.{w=0.3} Now."
 
     "She leads the way through the darkened school hallways and stairwell."
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
 
     "I can picture all the old posters from my time here along the walls."
 
@@ -478,9 +524,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
     stop music fadeout 3.0
     play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     label kino:
-    scene roof night with fade
+    scene roof night with dissolve
     show fang d neutral at sleft
-    show anond neutral flip at sright
+    show anond neutral flip at sright:
+        xalign 0.8
     "The door is booted open and the night air has finally cooled down to something breathable now."
 
     "I turn to the ladder on the side of the stair enclosure and climb up."
@@ -492,11 +539,11 @@ label chapter_14D:
     play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "And with the stars above and no moon I would say the view is picturesque."
 
-    F "Oi, you gonna hog the drinks?"
+    F "Oi,{w=.1} you gonna hog the drinks?"
 
     "I take out a pair of bottles, using one to pop the cap off the other."
 
-    F "Show-off. They’re twist-offs, ya know."
+    F "Show-off.{w=.2} They’re twist-offs, ya know."
 
     "To prove her point she takes the capped one and simply twists it’s top off."
 
@@ -504,7 +551,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     show fang d happy with dissolve
 
-    F "Pfffft. Anyways."
+    F "Pfffft.{w=0.2} Anyways."
 
     A "A toast!"
 
@@ -518,7 +565,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Oh?"
 
-    "I’m already handing her a second bottle, knowing that she’ll finish her first with her next chug."
+    "I’m already handing her a second bottle,{w=.1} knowing that she’ll finish her first with her next chug."
 
     A "I guess you’ve been busy."
 
@@ -526,7 +573,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Dealing with teens is a fuckin’ nightmare."
 
-    F "There’s this one brat, Kenny. The little shit has broken two trumpets already."
+    F "There’s this one brat, Kenny.{w=.15} The little shit has broken two trumpets already."
 
     A "Can’t be that bad."
 
@@ -534,7 +581,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Lucy’s rant went on for what felt like an hour."
 
-    "Though judging by the pile of beer bottles, it couldn’t have been more than twenty minutes."
+    "Though judging by the pile of beer bottles,{w=.1} it couldn’t have been more than twenty minutes."
 
     F "-at the fucking dance of all places."
 
@@ -548,13 +595,23 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Bullshit."
 
-    A "For real! You were just as bad!"
+    A "For real!{w=.1} You were just as bad!"
 
+    #still -ob
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.55
+        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.0
+    pause .3
+    show anond:
+        pause .02
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.82
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.8
     "Lucy’s elbow finds it’s familiar spot in my side."
 
+
     F "Nuh uh."
 
-    A "Yeah huh.{w=0.4} Faaaaang."
+    A "Yeah huh.{w=0.2} {cps=*.5}Faaaaang.{/cps}"
 
     "She groans and hides her face in her knees."
 
@@ -562,20 +619,20 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Trish."
 
-    F "Mrrrr… {w=0.3}Okay, so maybe we were that bad."
+    F "Mrrrr{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} Okay, so maybe we were that bad."
 
     A "That’s life for ya."
 
     "She sighs and relaxes. Her legs stretch forward and she leans back on her arms."
 
-    F "Yeah…"
+    F "Yeah{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "That’s life…"
+    F "That’s life{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     "I mimic her pose and find myself staring at the small dots spreading across the night sky."
     stop music fadeout 5.0
 
-    A "Teacher at your alma mater. Wasn’t really expecting that, ya know."
+    A "Teacher at your alma mater.{w=.25} Wasn’t really expecting that, ya know."
 
     F "And you as a sound engineer?{w=0.3} Pffft, I figured you’d be making a sexbot or something."
 
@@ -585,23 +642,23 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     play music "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Demo.ogg" fadein 1.0
     stop ambient fadeout 5
-    A "Hey, Lucy…"
+    A "Hey, Lucy{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I keep my eyes on the stars, even when Lucy turns to look at me."
 
     "I can feel heat creep across my face."
 
-    A "I got a contract with a studio here. I’m thinking…"
+    A "I got a contract with a studio here. I’m thinking{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Since I’ll be here for a good while, how about we get some dinner sometime."
 
-    A "Y’know…{w=0.3} together…"
+    A "Y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} together{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     "I look at Lucy at last."
 
     "Her face is turned back to the sky, but there’s a dusting of pink across her cheeks."
 
-    F "I would…{w=0.3} I totally would, Anon…"
+    F "I would{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} I totally would, Anon{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     F "But I’ve got work like you wouldn’t believe."
     show fang d neutral with dissolve
@@ -635,7 +692,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "I know."
     #play music
     play music 'audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Live.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    scene d04b with fade
+    scene d04b with dissolve
 
     "That didn’t stop Lucy from shuffling closer until our legs were pressed together."
 
@@ -651,7 +708,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Thanks, now my face is forever stuck in a cringe, Anon."
 
-    A "...Way to ruin the moment Fang."
+    A "{cps=*.2}...{/cps}Way to ruin the moment Fang."
 
     F "You ruined it first with your mumbling."
 
@@ -660,7 +717,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     F "You ruined it, you fix it."
 
     A "Fine I will."
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
     "My hand cups her cheek gently."
 
     "Lucy smiles and leans in."
@@ -668,11 +725,15 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "Ah, I missed this feeling."
 
     "Our lips meld together as we embrace just like we were teens again."
+
     $ quick_menu = False
+    scene black with fade
+    pause .5
+
     window hide
-    scene e4of4 with fade
+    scene e4of4 with Dissolve(1.0)
     stop music fadeout 15.0
     pause 16
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with Dissolve(1.0)
     pause 1
     return

game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy

@@ -110,9 +110,11 @@ label chapter_4:
     Nas "Naomi, please stop memorizing the schedules of the new students."
 
     show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
-    N "Sorry, it's necessary for record keeping."
+    N "Sorry, but I did help Anon pick his electives."
     pause .5
 
+    "Why did I ever agree to padding out my credits with a new subject, I should have taken pre-ancient history or some shit."
+
     "Naomi places a finger on her chin{w=.15}(?){w=.15} for a moment and stares into space."
 
     "Suddenly, her face lights up."
@@ -356,7 +358,10 @@ label chapter_4:
 
     show trish happy flip
     pause 0.5
-
+    show vvurm_drama_poster at acenter:
+        yalign 0.2
+    with wipeup
+    pause 1.0
     T "This! Tada!{w=.4} Our first poster!"
 
     window hide
@@ -371,7 +376,7 @@ label chapter_4:
         rotate 10
         xalign 0.5 yalign 0.15
     pause
-    
+
     show fang surprised behind mask2 with Dissolve(.25)
 
     transform rollup_vertical:

game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy

@@ -311,7 +311,17 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     "Not that he gave me much of a choice."
 
-    Sp "Alright, I’m sure you’re all familiar with Rosa, she’ll be supervising you for campus beautification today."
+    Sp "You can thank Naomi that you got off with campus beautification."
+
+    Sp "She was quite adamant that it would be more constructive than homeroom detention."
+
+    "Again?!"
+
+    "God damn it, first my schedule and the lunch card and now this?"
+
+    "Can’t she just leave me alone already."
+
+    Sp "Alright, I’m sure you’re all familiar with Rosa, she’ll be supervising today."
 
     Sp "If I hear a bad word from her about any of you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5

game/script/x10-raymbas-observations.rpy

@@ -1,3 +1,78 @@
+
+#high res flip - i hate this
+image anon neutral megatex flip = im.Flip("highres/anon neutral megatex.png", horizontal=True)
+image anon shrug megatex flip = im.Flip("highres/anon shrug megatex.png", horizontal=True)
+image anond neutral megatex flip = im.Flip("highres/anond neutral megatex.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang neutral megatex flip = im.Flip("highres/fang neutral megatex.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang flip off happy megatex flip = im.Flip("highres/fang flip off happy megatex.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang very sad megatex flip = im.Flip("highres/fang very sad megatex.png", horizontal=True)
+image naomi neutral megatex flip = im.Flip("highres/naomi neutral megatex.png", horizontal=True)
+
+"""
+    show fang pbird happy flip with dissolve
+    show fang pneutral flip with Dissolve(1)
+"""
+#pENdant - wait what the fuck there's PBIRD AND FLIP OFF?
+
+image fang pneutral megatex = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (2683, 2850),
+   (0, 0), "highres/fang neutral megatex.png",
+   (0, 0), "highres/amberpendant1 megatex.png"
+)
+image fang pbird happy megatex = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (2683, 2850),
+   (0, 0), "highres/fang flip off happy megatex.png",
+   (0, 0), "highres/amberpendant1 megatex.png"
+)
+image fang pneutral megatex flip = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (2683, 2850),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/fang neutral megatex.png", horizontal=True),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/amberpendant1 megatex.png", horizontal=True)
+)
+image fang pbird happy megatex flip = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (2683, 2850),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/fang flip off happy megatex.png", horizontal=True),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/amberpendant1 megatex.png", horizontal=True)
+)
+
+#bluralt
+image anon neutral blur flip = im.Flip("highres/bluralt/anon neutral blur.png", horizontal=True)
+image anon shrug blur flip = im.Flip("highres/bluralt/anon shrug blur.png", horizontal=True)
+image anond neutral blur flip = im.Flip("highres/bluralt/anond neutral blur.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang neutral blur flip = im.Flip("highres/bluralt/fang neutral blur.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang flip off happy blur flip = im.Flip("highres/bluralt/fang flip off happy blur.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang very sad blur flip = im.Flip("highres/bluralt/fang very sad blur.png", horizontal=True)
+image naomi neutral blur flip = im.Flip("highres/bluralt/naomi neutral blur.png", horizontal=True)
+
+image fang pneutral blur = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (2683, 2850),
+   (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/fang neutral blur.png",
+   (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.png"
+)
+image fang pbird happy blur = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (2683, 2850),
+   (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/fang flip off happy blur.png",
+   (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.png"
+)
+image fang pneutral blur flip = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (2683, 2850),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/fang neutral blur.png", horizontal=True),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.png", horizontal=True)
+)
+image fang pbird happy blur flip = Composite(
+   # (1412, 1500),
+   (2683, 2850),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/fang flip off happy blur.png", horizontal=True),
+   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.png", horizontal=True)
+)
+
 image raymba2 flip = im.Flip("raymba/raymba2.png", horizontal=True)
 image raymba4 flip = im.Flip("raymba/raymba4.png", horizontal=True)
 image raymbashadow flip = im.Flip("raymba/raymbashadow.png", horizontal=True)
@@ -10,7 +85,7 @@ transform raymbatransform:
     xcenter 0.6 ycenter 0.385 zoom 0.5
 
 label chapter_x10:
-    
+
     window hide
     stop music fadeout(3)
     scene black with Dissolve(2)
@@ -18,11 +93,11 @@ label chapter_x10:
 
     play music 'audio/ost/dino destiny reader.ogg'
     pause 1
-    "Statement:{w=.4} My current designation is RAYmba." 
+    "Statement:{w=.4} My current designation is RAYmba."
 
-    "I was manufactured in a factory in the year 201M2020." 
+    "I was manufactured in a factory in the year 201M2020."
 
-    "It is currently 201M2027, and I am playing with my current owner." 
+    "It is currently 201M2027, and I am playing with my current owner."
     pause .5
 
     scene carpet
@@ -63,19 +138,22 @@ label chapter_x10:
 
     play music 'audio/ost/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 3
     scene little troodon:
-        blur 5 zoom 1.5 xoffset -600 yoffset -300
-    show fritatta:
-        xcenter 0.8 yalign 0.4 zoom 2
-        blur 5
-    show fang neutral:
-        xcenter 0.3 yalign 0.45 zoom 2
-        blur 5
-    show anon neutral:
-        xcenter 0.0 yalign 0.5 zoom 2
-        blur 5
+        zoom 1.5 xoffset -600 yoffset -300
+
+#image fangfog = im.Blur(im.MatrixColor("fang/emotive set/fang anguish.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), 1.5)
+    show fritatta megatex unblur:
+        xcenter 0.8 yalign 0.4 xsize 1135*2 ysize 1500*2
+    show fang neutral megatex unblur:
+        xcenter 0.3 yalign 0.45 xsize 1412*2 ysize 1500*2
+    show anon neutral megatex unblur:
+        #xcenter 0.0 yalign 0.5 zoom 2
+        xcenter 0.0 yalign 0.5
+        xsize 1061*2 ysize 1500*2
+
     with Fade(1, 0, 1, color='#fff')
     pause 1
 
+
     "Observation:{w=.4} I am pulled from the darkness and placed on a brightly lit surface."
 
     "My sensors indicate that this unit is currently being displayed for potential sale."
@@ -152,9 +230,9 @@ label chapter_x10:
     play music 'audio/ost/the hunt for more (you)s.ogg' fadein 3 noloop
     scene room anon day:
         blur 8 zoom 1.5 xoffset -100 yoffset -400
-    show anon neutral:
-        xcenter 0.2 yalign 0.5 zoom 2
-        blur 5
+    show anon neutral blur:
+        #xcenter 0.2 yalign 0.5 zoom 2
+        xcenter 0.2 yalign 0.5 xsize 1061*2 ysize 1500*2
     show raymbabox
     show raymba1:
         xcenter 0.6 ycenter 0.385 zoom 0.5
@@ -177,7 +255,9 @@ label chapter_x10:
     A "Naaaah. They aren’t really a thing anymore."
     show anon:
         ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.1
-    show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(1)
+    show anon neutral blur flip with Dissolve(1)
+#show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(1)
+
     A "Hmmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
@@ -207,7 +287,7 @@ label chapter_x10:
 
     "Observation conclusion:{w=.4} Current owner has a strange fondness for inanimate objects."
     pause .5
-    
+
     "Notation made, continuing memory review."
 
     "3{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
@@ -273,9 +353,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
     A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Two or three will do."
     pause .5
 
-    show fang neutral behind raymbabox:
-        xcenter -0.5 yalign 0.45 zoom 2
-        blur 5
+    show fang neutral blur behind raymbabox:
+        xcenter -0.5 yalign 0.45 xsize 1412*2 ysize 1500*2
     show fang:
         easein_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.3
     with dissolve
@@ -299,7 +378,7 @@ label chapter_x10:
     pause 3.5
 
     stop music fadeout 6
-    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(1)
+    show fang neutral blur flip with Dissolve(1)
     F "You are such a dweeb, Anon."
     pause 1
 
@@ -325,7 +404,7 @@ label chapter_x10:
     "2{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
 
     "1{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}"
-    scene black 
+    scene black
     pause 1.5
 
     "Current day:{w=.4} Thursday."
@@ -334,16 +413,18 @@ label chapter_x10:
 
     "Current location:{w=.4} Owners domicile."
     pause .5
-    
+
     play music 'audio/ost/its_footloose_now.ogg' fadein 4
     scene room anon day:
         blur 8 zoom 1.5 xoffset -100 yoffset -400
-    show anon neutral:
-        xcenter 0.2 yalign 0.5 zoom 2
-        blur 5
-    show fang neutral flip:
-        xcenter 0.8 yalign 0.45 zoom 2
-        blur 5
+    show anon neutral blur:
+        xzoom 1.0
+        xcenter 0.2 yalign 0.5
+        xsize 1061*2 ysize 1500*2
+    show fang neutral blur:
+        xzoom -1.0
+        xcenter 0.8 yalign 0.45
+        xsize 1412*2 ysize 1500*2
     show raymbabox
     show raymba2:
         xcenter 0.6 ycenter 0.385 zoom 0.5
@@ -357,9 +438,10 @@ label chapter_x10:
 
     "One such object he lays out on the floor."
 
-    show anon shrug with dissolve
+    show anon shrug blur with dissolve
+
     A "See? It really ties the room together."
-    show anon neutral with dissolve
+    show anon neutral blur with dissolve
 
     "Owner has opened another of the boxes he brought in, laid the contents on top."
 
@@ -379,19 +461,20 @@ label chapter_x10:
     "Confirmed.{w=.4} Response to new unit designated ‘Mark 2’."
     pause .5
 
-    show anon:
+    show anon neutral blur:
         easeout_cubic 1 xpos 1.5
         block:
             pause 2
-            "anon neutral flip"
+            "anon neutral blur flip"
             easein_cubic 0.5 xpos 0.9
             pause 1
             easeout_cubic 0.5 xpos -0.5
-            
+
     show fang:
         pause 1
         ease_cubic 0.5 xpos 0.3
-        "fang neutral" with dissolve
+        "fang neutral blur" with dissolve
+        xzoom 1.0
         pause 1
         easeout_cubic 0.75 xpos 1.5
 
@@ -476,12 +559,14 @@ label chapter_x10:
     play music 'audio/ost/appreciating her company.ogg' fadein 4
     scene fangroom:
         blur 8 zoom 1.5 xoffset -900 yoffset -400
-    show anon neutral flip:
-        xcenter 0.8 yalign 0.5 zoom 2
-        blur 5
-    show fang neutral:
-        xcenter 0.2 yalign 0.45 zoom 2
-        blur 5
+    show anon neutral blur:
+        xzoom -1.0
+        xcenter 0.8 yalign 0.5 #zoom 2
+        xsize 1061*2 ysize 1500*2
+    show fang neutral blur:
+        xzoom 1.0
+        xcenter 0.2 yalign 0.45 #zoom 2
+        xsize 1412*2 ysize 1500*2
     show raymbabox
     show raymba2:
         xcenter 0.6 ycenter 0.385 zoom 0.5
@@ -507,20 +592,19 @@ label chapter_x10:
     "Response from Mark 2:{w=.4} Observation noted.{w=.4} Current owner and ‘Fang’ are currently in need of repair.{w=.4} Conclusion:{w=.4} will ensure that this unit’s new owner receives necessary repairs."
     pause .5
 
-    show anon:
+    show anon neutral blur:
         ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.75
     A "Well{cps=*.1}...{/cps} This is it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show fang:
         ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.25
-    pause .5
-    show fang very sad with Dissolve(1)
+    show fang very sad blur with Dissolve(1)
     F "Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     A "Hey, it’s only a few years.{w=.4} And it’s not like we won’t talk."
 
-    show fang neutral with Dissolve(1)
+    show fang neutral blur with Dissolve(1)
     F "I know. And I know I said a break and all{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
     show anon:
@@ -528,7 +612,7 @@ label chapter_x10:
     show fang:
         ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.4
     pause .5
-    show fang adorable with dissolve
+    show fang adorable blur  with dissolve
     pause 1
 
     "Observation:{w=.4} Current owner and ‘Fang’ appear to be attempting to clean each other’s brush units again."
@@ -594,7 +678,7 @@ label chapter_x10:
 
     "Owner’s guest is an unknown variable, one this unit does not feel secure around."
 
-    "Unit cannot pinpoint reason for breach in security with ocular sensors due to the obscurity of the current location." 
+    "Unit cannot pinpoint reason for breach in security with ocular sensors due to the obscurity of the current location."
     pause .5
 
     "This is highly unusual.{w=.4} Will log into this unit’s memory bank for later evaluation."
@@ -612,9 +696,9 @@ label chapter_x10:
 
     N "What’s this in the box over here?"
 
-    show naomi neutral behind raymbabox:
-        xcenter -0.5 yalign 0.45 zoom 2
-        blur 5 
+    show naomi neutral blur behind raymbabox:
+        xcenter -0.5 yalign 0.45 #zoom 2
+        xsize 1036*2 ysize 1500*2
     show naomi:
         easein_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.25
     pause 1.5
@@ -624,8 +708,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
     F "Hey, don’t touch him. That’s RAYmba, I’m keeping him safe for a while."
 
     show fang pneutral flip behind raymbabox:
-        xcenter 1.5 yalign 0.45 zoom 2
-        blur 5 
+        xcenter 1.5 yalign 0.45 # zoom 2
+        xsize 1412*2 ysize 1500*2
     show fang:
         easein_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.75
     pause .5
@@ -655,17 +739,17 @@ label chapter_x10:
     show naomi:
         easeout_cubic 1.5 xpos -0.5
     pause .5
-    show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
+    show naomi neutral blur flip with dissolve
     pause .5
 
     "Observation:{w=.4} Unknown guest has left the room."
     pause .5
 
-    show fang pbird happy flip with dissolve
+    show fang pbird happy blur flip with dissolve
 
     stop music fadeout 6
     F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Bitch{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    show fang pneutral flip with Dissolve(1)
+    show fang pneutral blur flip with Dissolve(1)
 
     "Unknown guest designation confirmed."
     pause 1
@@ -726,7 +810,7 @@ label chapter_x10:
     show anonpet:
         ypos -0.4
         parallel:
-            easein_cubic 0.9 ypos 0.0 
+            easein_cubic 0.9 ypos 0.0
         parallel:
             ease_cubic 2 xpos -0.125
         parallel:
@@ -748,9 +832,10 @@ label chapter_x10:
 
     F "There’s the flakes in a little cup next to the box there."
 
-    show anond neutral behind raymbabox:
-        xcenter -0.5 yalign 0.5 zoom 2
-        blur 5
+    show anond neutral blur behind raymbabox:
+        xcenter -0.5 yalign 0.5# zoom 2
+        xsize 1061*2 ysize 1500*2
+
     show anond:
         easein_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.25
     pause 1.5
@@ -823,7 +908,7 @@ label chapter_x10:
         ypos -1.0
     show keys:
         easein_back 0.75 ypos -0.15
-    
+
     show raymba4s:
         pause .3
         easein_cubic 0.25 ypos 0.4
@@ -919,9 +1004,9 @@ label chapter_x10:
     show raymbashadow as footshadow behind raymba4s:
         ypos -0.7 xcenter 0.05 blur 3
         easein_cubic 1 xpos 0.1
-    show anond neutral behind raymba4s:
-        xcenter 0.05 yanchor 1.0 ypos 0.85 zoom 3.5
-        blur 5
+    show anond neutral blur behind raymba4s:
+        xcenter 0.05 yanchor 1.0 ypos 0.85 # zoom 3.5
+        xsize 1061*3.5 ysize 1500*3.5
         easein_cubic 1 xpos 0.1
     with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
@@ -933,7 +1018,7 @@ label chapter_x10:
     pause .5
 
     "Owner is picked up slowly.{w=.4} ‘Anon’ sits next to me and lowers a limb to make contact."
-    
+
     show anonpet:
         ypos -0.5
         easein_cubic 1.5 ypos 0.0 xpos -0.06
@@ -952,6 +1037,21 @@ label chapter_x10:
     stop music fadeout 6
     "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
 
-    pause 4
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
-    return
+    image big blending = Composite(
+        (1920, 1080),
+        (0, 0), "big ending",
+        (0, 1080-126), "the ending"
+    )
+
+    scene big ending with Dissolve(1)
+    scene big blending with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 6
+
+    scene black with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 2
+
+
+    return

game/script/x3-PTA-meeting.rpy

@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@ label chapter_x3:
         ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.8
 
     show farnsworth:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
-        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
+        easein_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.1
+        easeout_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
     Drf "Huhwha. Oh! Why are you in my attic?"
 
     window hide
@@ -74,7 +74,8 @@ label chapter_x3:
 
     show farnsworth:
         ease_cubic 2.25 xalign 0.625
-        easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.35
+        easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign 0.4
+        easein_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.35
 
     pause 2.95
     show spears:
@@ -101,8 +102,8 @@ label chapter_x3:
     show farnsworth behind fangmom with dissolve
 
     show jingo flip:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
-        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
+        easein_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
+        easeout_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
     jingo "Yes I am the music head."
 
     show fangmom:
@@ -110,8 +111,6 @@ label chapter_x3:
     pause .5
 
     FM "And I am the parent ambassador."
-    window hide
-    window auto
 
     show fangmom:
         ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.3
@@ -119,8 +118,6 @@ label chapter_x3:
     pause 0.3
     show fangmom neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    pause .5
-
     Sp "Now, onto the subject of this meeting."
 
     show spears:
@@ -168,11 +165,8 @@ label chapter_x3:
     unknown "YOU HAVE NO PROOF THAT MY EUGENE WAS INVOLVED!"
     show carldelewski with dissolve
 
-    Sp "If we could foc-"
+    Sp "If we could foc-{w=.5}{nw}"
 
-    show fangmom:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.2
-        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
     FM "Now now. I think we really should address the parents’ concerns, sir."
 
     unknown "YEAH! Like who let an {i}APE{/i} be around my precious Megan!"
@@ -273,8 +267,10 @@ label chapter_x3:
 
     pause 1
 
+    #Who the hell decided that jin shouldn't have a consistent naming scheme
     show jinflip behind spears at scenter:
         xalign 0.5
+    hide jin
     with dissolve
     pause 0.5
 
@@ -290,14 +286,14 @@ label chapter_x3:
     pause 0.5
 
     show carldelewski:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
-        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
+        easein_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.1
+        easeout_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
         ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.8
     carl "I KNEWS YOU WERE FAKIN’ IT!"
 
 
     show jinflip:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.3
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.3
     Tsuki "Aye habbu no curue watto yo meano."
     window hide
     window auto

game/script/x8-naomi-tribulations.rpy

@@ -124,8 +124,8 @@ label chapter_x8:
     N "Naser, please, you’ve seemed troubled the entire day. What’s wrong?"
 
     show naomi neutral
-    hide naser
     show naser explanatory flip at nright with dissolve:
+        "naser explanatory flip"
         xalign 1.6
     Nas "Nothing! Nothing at all Naomi!"
 
@@ -168,7 +168,8 @@ label chapter_x8:
     Nas "I mean, I wanted to tell you sooner but-"
 
     N "I understand, Naser. After all, you always have the best ideas."
-    show naomi sad at turnaround
+    show naomi sad flip with dissolve
+    pause .2
 
     hide naomi with easeoutleft
 
@@ -196,6 +197,10 @@ label chapter_x8:
 
     "Been the model girlfriend, right?"
 
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.4
+        pause .4
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.3
     "I carry myself down the driveway, trying to hold my thoughts together."
 
     "Spring is about over, but it’s cold."
@@ -204,6 +209,12 @@ label chapter_x8:
 
     "Everything was going wonderfully, but now it’s come shattering down."
 
+    show naomi sad flip:
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.1
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.8 yalign -0.4
+            ease_cubic 1.2 yalign -0.5
     "When I reach the curb I crumple into my knees."
 
     "I can’t even focus on a single calamitous thought with so many firing through me."

game/script/x9-naomi-tribulations.rpy

@@ -1,5 +1,9 @@
 
 label chapter_x9:
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     #Naomi Arc Three
     play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 2.0
     scene livingroomdayalt
@@ -29,8 +33,11 @@ label chapter_x9:
     show fang nonxmas pendant considering with dissolve
     show naser sad flip with dissolve
     "Think Lucy, Think! How do you unfuck this fuck-up?"
-    show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve:
+
+    show fang:
         xzoom -1.0
+        ease_cubic 1.2 xalign -0.8
+    show fang nonxmas pendant angry
     "I look out the window and watch as Naomi continues wailing."
 
     "Even though I despise the idea, Naomi needs someone to be there for her and support her now more than ever."
@@ -38,8 +45,10 @@ label chapter_x9:
     "With the thought of what I’m about to do, I realize just how much Anon had really done for me."
 
     "But god damn it, I really don’t want to{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
-    show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed with dissolve:
+    show fang:
         xzoom 1.0
+        ease_cubic 1.1 xalign -0.4
+    show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed with dissolve
     stop music fadeout 5.0
     "I turn back to face my brother, who looks like he wants to jump from our house’s roof."
 
@@ -50,7 +59,14 @@ label chapter_x9:
     "Naser nods and takes up the broom Naomi set aside, distracting himself by sweeping up the rest of the trash on the floor."
 
     show naser sad flip:
-        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5
+        ease_cubic 2.0 xalign 0.5
+        pause .8
+        block:
+            pause .4
+            ease_cubic 1.2 xalign 0.5
+            pause .2
+            ease_cubic 1.2 xalign 0.6
+            repeat
 
     "Easy part done."
 
@@ -58,8 +74,6 @@ label chapter_x9:
         xzoom -1.0
     pause 1.0
     hide fang with easeoutleft
-    show naser sad flip:
-        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.6
 
     "I take a calming sigh and walk out the door to the wailing idiot trying to wake up the whole neighborhood."
 
@@ -112,11 +126,15 @@ label chapter_x9:
 
     "Somehow, her sobbing gets louder, to the point that I feel my ears start to ring. Any louder, and she’s going to give me tinnitus."
 
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.23 xalign 0.45
     show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve
-    F "NAOMI! Get a FUCKING grip!"
+    with vpunch
+    F "NAOMI!{w=0.2} Get a FUCKING grip!"
 
     show naomi sad at sleft with dissolve:
         yalign -0.5
+
     "Naomi finally looks up to me with a tear-stained face."
 
     N "A break{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{w=1.0} N-Naser s-said he{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=1.0}he wants to take a break!"
@@ -129,10 +147,26 @@ label chapter_x9:
     F "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}And?"
 
 
-    show naomi angry with dissolve:
-        ypos 0.5 xalign -0.4
-        ease_cubic 0.2 rotate -15
-        ease_cubic 1.0 rotate 0 yalign 0.2
+    show naomi angry with dissolve
+    show naomi:
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.15
+            ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.08
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.37
+
+        block:
+            parallel:
+                ease_cubic 0.12 yalign 0.065
+                ease_cubic 0.12 yalign 0.055
+            parallel:
+                ease_cubic 0.14 xalign 0.39
+                ease_cubic 0.14 xalign 0.4
+            repeat
+
+    show fang:
+        pause .23
+        ease_cubic 0.33 xalign 0.85
 
 
     "Naomi, who had still been lying on her knees up to this point, scowls at me with a face full of fire and fury before rising to her feet."
@@ -142,10 +176,28 @@ label chapter_x9:
 
     N "Naser and I are the perfect couple!"
 
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.132 xalign 0.39
+        ease_cubic 0.132 xalign 0.4
+        repeat
+
     N "He is the perfect boyfriend!"
 
     N "And I am the perfect girlfriend!"
 
+    show naomi:
+        yalign 0.055
+        ease_cubic 0.13 xalign 0.392
+        ease_cubic 0.13 xalign 0.4
+        ease_cubic 0.18 xalign 0.395
+        ease_cubic 0.18 xalign 0.4
+        ease_cubic 0.28 xalign 0.397
+        ease_cubic 0.28 xalign 0.4
+        block:
+            ease_cubic 0.23 xalign 0.397
+            ease_cubic 0.23 xalign 0.4
+            repeat
+
     N "We’re supposed to have the perfect life together!"
 
     N "Wh-why does he want us to take a break in our relationship!?"
@@ -163,6 +215,10 @@ label chapter_x9:
     "Still{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}not like Naser’s going to be any better at this."
 
     "Fuck{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}guess it really comes down to me{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     show naomifangcg with dissolve
     play ambient1 ['<sync ambient>audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg', 'audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg'] fadein 5.0
     "I sit down next to Naomi on the curb."
@@ -342,6 +398,10 @@ label chapter_x9:
     "I can’t fucking stand Naomi’s bullshit anymore."
 
     "I stand up and for once look down on the salmon-toned asshole."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     hide fang
     scene home fang outside night
     with dissolve
@@ -381,10 +441,17 @@ label chapter_x9:
     F "You only wanted him for the prestige it would bring you!"
 
     show naomi:
-        ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.6
-        ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.7
+        ease_cubic 0.23 xalign 0.56
+    pause 0.22
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.7
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.0
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.1
+    with hpunch
 
-    "FUCK! Ow!" with hpunch
+    "FUCK! Ow!"
 
     "I can feel a searing heat on my cheek."
 
@@ -461,7 +528,7 @@ label chapter_x9:
     N "I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}I haven’t changed one bit{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
 
     show naomi:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign -0.5
+        ease_cubic 0.8 yalign -1.5
     pause 0.2
     hide naomi with dissolve
 
@@ -480,6 +547,8 @@ label chapter_x9:
     N "...Nothing{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
 
     pause 0.5
+    window hide
+    window auto
     hide fang with dissolve
     hide naomifangcg blur
     show naomifangcg
@@ -557,11 +626,20 @@ label chapter_x9:
     "Oh, Naomi must’ve called a taxi."
 
     scene home fang outside night
-    show naomi sad flip at sleft
+    show naomi sad flip:
+        xalign 0.7
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.5
+        pause .2
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.3
+        pause .2
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.15
+        pause .2
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.0
     with fade
     "I crank one eyelid open and see Naomi hesitantly moving to get in the backseat."
 
-    show naomi sad with dissolve
+    show naomi sad with dissolve:
+        xalign 0.0
     "She stops with her hand on the handle."
 
     N "Fang?"
@@ -640,7 +718,7 @@ label chapter_x9:
     "When I turn over to the cool side of my pillow my fingertips brush against the corner of my phone."
 
     "A break{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
-    show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg call_ended behind dimmer_lighter at scenter with dissolve:
+    show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg call_ended behind dimmer_lighter at scenter with easeinbottom:
         yalign -0.045
 
     "Before I can think otherwise, my fingers tap the number I’ve memorized by heart."
@@ -693,6 +771,7 @@ label chapter_x9:
     unknown "ANON I SWEAR TO GOD!"
 
     show fangphonevideocall bgnight anonangry with dissolve
+    with vpunch
     A "EAT A PLATE OF PENISES YOU COPPER PRICK!"
 
     "I can see his face start to turn pink."
@@ -708,14 +787,18 @@ label chapter_x9:
 
     A "Night Lucy."
 
+    window hide
+
     show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg call_ended with dissolve
     pause 3.0
 
-    show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg_black call_ended_poff behind dimmer_darker2 at scenter
+    show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg_black call_ended_poff behind dimmer_darker2
     hide dimmer_lighter
     with dissolve
     pause 0.5
 
+    window auto
+
     hide fangphonevideocall with easeoutbottom
     "My screen fades to black and drops down onto my sheets."
     show fang nonxmas pendant happy behind dimmer_darker2 at scenter
@@ -725,6 +808,8 @@ label chapter_x9:
 
     "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
 
+    window hide
+
     stop ambient fadeout 2.0
     stop music fadeout 3.0
     pause 3

game/storyline.rpy

@@ -73,11 +73,11 @@ label .ending:
     play music "audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg"
     call get_ending
     if _return == 4:
-        scene d_credits at Pan((0, 0),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
+        scene d_credits at Pan((0, -500),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
     elif _return == 3:
-        scene c_credits at Pan((0, 0),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
+        scene c_credits at Pan((0, -500),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
     else:
-        scene b_credits at Pan((0, 0),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
+        scene b_credits at Pan((0, -500),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
     pause
     stop music fadeout 5
     scene black with Dissolve(3)