x8 and x9 revamped

game/script/x8-naomi-tribulations.rpy

@@ -4,13 +4,12 @@ label chapter_x8:
     scene black with Dissolve(2)
     pause 1
 
+    play music "audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg" fadein 1.0
     scene livingroomdayalt
-    show fang nonxmas pendant neutral at sleft:
-        xzoom -1.0
-        xalign -0.2
     show naomi sad flip at scenter
     with Dissolve(1)
-    play music "audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    pause 0.5
+
     "I find myself worrying more and more."
 
     "With the night coming to a close everyone begins to leave Naser’s home."
@@ -18,118 +17,149 @@ label chapter_x8:
     "All his old teammates give him congratulatory hugs and back pats on their way out."
 
     "Even Chet and Stella, who’re the last to leave."
-    show fangdad unimpressed flip at sright with easeinright:
+    window hide
-        yalign 0.1
+    window auto
-    FD "Don’t think you’re getting out of cleaning, missy!"
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show naomi:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
+    pause 0.0001
+
+    show fang nonxmas pendant neutral at sleft:
+        xzoom -1.0
+        xalign -0.4
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
+    show fangdad unimpressed:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.6
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.3
+    with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+
+    FD "Don’t think you’re getting out of cleaning, missy!"
+    show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve
 
-    show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve:
-        xzoom 1.0
     F "{cps=*0.5}UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH{/cps}."
 
     show naomi considering flip with dissolve
     "I frown a little. After all this time, she still argues with her family?"
 
     "I was always taught to respect my elders by my parents."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.25
+
+
+    show naomi:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
+    show fang:
+        parallel:
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.4
+        parallel:
+            linear 0.5 alpha 0
+    show fangdad:
+        parallel:
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.6
+        parallel:
+            linear 0.5 alpha 0
+
+    show fangmom neutral flip with dissolve:
+        xalign 1.5
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
+
+    pause 0.5
 
-    show fangmom neutral flip at sright with easeinright
     FM "Naomi dear, you don’t have to-"
+    show naomi neutral with dissolve
 
-    show naomi neutral
-    with dissolve
     N "I insist, ma’am. I was the one to suggest the party, after all."
 
-    show fangmom neutral
+    show fangmom:
-    show fangdad neutral
+        easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.5
-    with dissolve
+    pause 0.4
-
+    hide fangmom neutral with dissolve
-    hide fangmom
+    pause 0.25
-    hide fangdad
-    with easeoutright
-    "I continue sweeping the detritus from the floor, making sure to focus on the nooks and crannies."
-
-    show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed with dissolve:
-        xzoom -1.0
 
     show naomi:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.8
+        ease_cubic 1.2 xalign 0.45
+        pause .2
+        ease_cubic 1.2 xalign 0.55
+        pause .4
+        repeat
+
+    "I continue sweeping the detritus from the floor, making sure to focus on the nooks and crannies."
+    pause 0.5
+
     "I try to focus on my task but{cps=*0.075}...{/cps}"
 
-    show naomi unimpressed with dissolve
+    show naomi considering with dissolve
     "My thoughts keep going back to how odd Naser has been acting."
 
-    show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed:
-        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign -0.36
-    pause 0.3
-    show naomi:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.6
     "When I had to keep Naser out so his family could set the party up he was{cps=*0.075}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Distant{cps=*0.075}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     "A part of me wants to say it’s just nerves."
 
     "After all, he’s going away to college."
 
     "Leaving his home."
-    show naomi:
+    pause 0.5
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.7
 
     "Even when I promised him that I’ll be with him so he won’t feel lonely."
 
     "He felt so stiff when I said that."
-
-    show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.1
-
     show naomi neutral with dissolve
+
     "I shake my head to clear my mind of these awful thoughts."
 
     "After all, Naser and I can talk about this once we move in together."
-
     show naomi happy with dissolve
-    show naomi:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
-    show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve:
-        xzoom -1.0
 
-    show fang nonxmas pendant angry:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.28
     "Aw, it’ll be as if we’re newlyweds."
 
     "That thought makes me a little giddy as I push the pile neatly into the dust pan."
-    show naser unimpressed flip at nright with dissolve:
+    pause 0.5
-        xalign 1.6
+
     "Yes, in fact maybe we can talk about our plans for our living arrangements now."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
 
-    show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed with dissolve:
-        xzoom -1.0
     show naomi:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.7
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve:
+        xalign 1.9
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.5
+    pause 0.5
+    show naomi neutral with dissolve
+
     N "Naser dear, I-"
-
     show naomi considering with dissolve
-    "Huh? Why is he making that face?"
 
+    "Huh? Why is he making that face?"
     show naomi explanatory with dissolve
+
     N "Is something the matter?"
 
-    show naser considering flip with dissolve
+    show naser considering flip
-    Nas "W-{w=.15}what? N-{w=.15}nah, nothing really."
+    show naomi neutral
+    with dissolve
+
+    Nas "W-{w=.15}what? N-{w=.15}nah, nothing really."
+    show naser considering flip with dissolve
 
-    show naser:
-        pause .6
-        "naser neutral flip"
-        pause .4
-        "naser considering flip"
-        repeat
     "He’s looking around the room, but there’s only me, Naser and Lucy here at the moment."
+    pause 0.5
 
     N "Naser, please, you’ve seemed troubled the entire day. What’s wrong?"
+    show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
 
-    show naomi neutral
-    show naser explanatory flip at nright with dissolve:
-        "naser explanatory flip"
-        xalign 1.6
     Nas "Nothing! Nothing at all Naomi!"
 
     Nas "Just uh{cps=*.15}...{/cps} ah, damn it{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
@@ -137,127 +167,215 @@ label chapter_x8:
     show naser sad flip with dissolve
     "Naser’s shoulders slump down and he heaves out a heavy sigh."
     stop music fadeout 5.0
+    pause 0.5
+
     Nas "I’ve been uh{cps=*.15}...{/cps} Thinking about this a lot, Naomi{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
 
     Nas "I uh{cps=*.15}...{/cps} Wanna take a break{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     "A break?"
+    pause 0.5
 
     N "That’s it? I mean, we only just started cleaning and-"
 
     Nas "No I mean, us."
+    pause 1
 
-    show naomi shocked with dissolve
     "What."
+    pause 0.5
 
     Nas "I think we need a break, Naomi."
     pause 0.5
+
+    show naomi:
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.4
+    show naomi shocked with dissolve
+
     "O-oh."
-    show naomi sad with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+
     "I{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
+    show naomi sad with dissolve
 
     N "I see{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
-
-
     show naser neckhold flip with dissolve
+
     Nas "Lucy and Anon are taking one, and I thought-"
+    pause 0.5
 
     "I gently set the broom against the wall."
+    pause 0.5
 
     N "Yes{cps=*.15}...{/cps} A break{cps=*.15}...{/cps} I{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
-
     show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
+
     Nas "I mean, I wanted to tell you sooner but-"
 
     N "I understand, Naser. After all, you always have the best ideas."
-    show naomi sad flip with dissolve
+    window hide
-    pause .2
+    window auto
+    pause 0.25
 
-    hide naomi with easeoutleft
+    show naomi:
+        easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.5
+    pause 0.9
+    hide naomi with dissolve
 
     show naser:
-        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.5
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.4
+    show naser explanatory with dissolve
+
     Nas "Wait, Naomi-"
 
-    show fang nonxmas pendant angry behind naser with dissolve:
+    hide fang
-        xzoom 1.0
+    show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve:
+        xalign -0.3
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
 
     F "God damn it Naser!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
+    #play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 2.0
+
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
+
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 2
+    scene home fang outside night
+    show naomi sad at scenter
+    with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 0.5
 
-    play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 2.0
-    scene home fang outside night with fade
-    show naomi sad flip at scenter
     "I slip out the door of Naser’s house."
-    pause 0.4
+    pause 0.5
+
     "A break{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
-    pause 0.4
+    pause 0.5
+
     "A break{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
     "But why?"
 
     "I’ve done everything right, right?"
 
     "Been the model girlfriend, right?"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
 
     show naomi:
-        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.4
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.6
-        pause .4
+        pause 0.5
-        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.3
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
+        pause 0.5
+        easein_cubic 2 xalign 0.75
+    pause 3.5
+
     "I carry myself down the driveway, trying to hold my thoughts together."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Spring is about over, but it’s cold."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Tears prick my eyes, but I suddenly don’t have the energy to wipe them off."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Everything was going wonderfully, but now it’s come shattering down."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show naomi:
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.8
+        pause 1
+        linear 0.045 yalign -0.002 
+        linear 0.045 yalign 0.002
+        linear 0.045 yalign -0.004 
+        linear 0.045 yalign 0.004
+        linear 0.045 yalign -0.005 
+        linear 0.045 yalign 0.005
+        linear 0.045 yalign -0.005 
+        linear 0.045 yalign 0.005
+        linear 0.045 yalign -0.005 
+        linear 0.045 yalign 0.005
+        linear 0.045 yalign -0.004 
+        linear 0.045 yalign 0.004
+        linear 0.045 yalign -0.002 
+        linear 0.045 yalign 0.002
+        pause 0.5
+        easeout_cubic 0.8 yalign -0.3
+        easein_back 0.5 yalign -0.5
+
+    pause 5.5
 
-    show naomi sad flip:
-        parallel:
-            ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.1
-        parallel:
-            ease_cubic 0.8 yalign -0.4
-            ease_cubic 1.2 yalign -0.5
     "When I reach the curb I crumple into my knees."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "I can’t even focus on a single calamitous thought with so many firing through me."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "The thought of being away from Naser, of things just ending{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 1
 
     N "{b}*sob*{/b}"
+    pause 1
 
-    stop music fadeout 2.0
     "{cps=*0.05}...{/cps}"
-    scene black with fade
+    pause 0.5
 
     "{cps=*0.2}--Two Years Prior--{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
 
     scene office spears
     show naomi unimpressed at sleft
     show spears neutral flip at sright:
         yalign 0.1
-    with fade
+    with Dissolve(1)
-    Sp "{cps=*.15}...{/cps} And lastly, here is your own desk to work at."
+    pause 0.5
+
+    Sp "{cps=*.15}...{/cps}And lastly, here is your own desk to work at."
 
     play sound "audio/effects/anonDeskSlam.ogg"
     "My principal slaps the top of an aged, yet official looking table furnished with a lamp and its own drawers." with vpunch
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Most students in any school would only ever be seated behind the regular ‘board on some sticks’ model, maybe one with a little cubbyhole built in for binders if the school were old enough."
+    show naomi considering with dissolve
 
     "But here I am, one of the lucky few{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
+    show naomi neutral with dissolve
 
     show naomi: #salute
-        linear 0.12 yalign 0.09
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.1
-        easein_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
 
     N "Thank you sir!"
 
+    show naomi: #salute
+        easein_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
+    pause 0.5
+    show naomi sad with dissolve
+
     "I should feel a lot more excited about winning the election, but{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
-    Sp "{cps=*.10}...{/cps} Naomi."
+    Sp "{cps=*.10}...{/cps}Naomi."
-
     show naomi shocked with dissolve
+
     "Uh oh, did he see me sulking?"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Sp "There may not have been many candidates, nor voters in deciding you should be the class president, but the fact remains that you won."
 
@@ -266,102 +384,145 @@ label chapter_x8:
     Sp "Don’t go underselling yourself."
 
     Sp "If you try, you can be good enough."
+    show naomi considering with dissolve
 
     N "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
-
+    pause 0.5
     show naomi neutral with dissolve
-    N "Thank you, Principal Spears. I’ll try."
 
+    N "Thank you, Principal Spears. I’ll try."
     show spears happy flip with dissolve
 
     show spears:
         ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.4
     "He gives me a warm smile and a pat on the shoulder and leaves to let me get acquainted with the new space."
 
-    hide spears with easeoutleft
+    show spears:
+        easeout_cubic 1 xalign -0.3
+    pause .4
+    hide spears with dissolve
+
     "Looks like there’s already a few forms to fill out{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Oh? There’s a letter in here, too{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     ##fade in cg
     #this one music pops on purpose
     play music 'audio/OST/good faith.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    scene naomiletter with fade
+
+    scene naomiletter with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.5
+
     N "It’s addressed to me, specifically?"
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Oops, I said that out loud."
 
     "Good thing there’s nobody here{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
 
     "But then what’s that drumming sound?"
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "Oh dear{w=0.5}, that’s my own feet."
+    "Oh dear, that’s my own feet."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "What am I getting so worked up over?"
 
     "It’s probably just a letter of congratulations."
 
     "Not that anyone other than Spears would even care about-"
+    pause 0.5
 
     "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}‘Dearest Naomi..’?"
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "Is this a joke?{w=0.5} Who would{cps=*.20}...{/cps}?"
+    "Is this a joke? Who would{cps=*.20}...{/cps}?"
+    pause 0.5
 
     "My eyes trace the paragraph multiple times before I realize I haven’t actually been reading it."
 
     "Then all of a sudden it all registers at once."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "There’s a loud squeal that echoes through the hallway."
     pause 0.5
+
     "Oh wait."
 
     "I cover my lips and I feel my entire face heat up."
 
     "That was me. I hope no one else heard that."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "But, but, but{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
+
     "Naser is{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
+
     "And I’m just{cps=*.10}...{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
     "Wouldn’t people look at him funny?"
 
     "Wouldn’t they look at me funny?"
 
     "After all, I’m just so...{w=0.5} so{cps=*.25}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     Sp "{alpha=*0.6}{i}Don’t go underselling yourself.{/i}{/alpha}"
 
     Sp "{alpha=*0.6}{i}If you try, you can be good enough.{/i}{/alpha}"
+    pause 0.5
 
     N "{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
     "No, I can do this."
 
     "For our date!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
 
     scene office spears
-    show naomi happy at scenter:
+    show naomi happy:
-        parallel:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
-            ease_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.3
+        block:
-            ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
+            ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.075
+            ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.125
             repeat
-        parallel:
+    with Dissolve(1)
-            ease_cubic 1.6 xalign 0.6
+
-            ease_cubic 1.6 xalign 0.4
+    #scene office spears
-            repeat
+    #show naomi happy at scenter:
-    with fade
+    #    parallel:
+    #        ease_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.3
+    #        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
+    #        repeat
+    #    parallel:
+    #        ease_cubic 1.6 xalign 0.6
+    #        ease_cubic 1.6 xalign 0.4
+    #        repeat
+    #with fade
 
     "I’ll go check out the library for romantic self-help books after school!"
+    show naomi:
+        easein_cubic 0.35 yalign 0.1
+        easeout_cubic 0.35 yalign 0.0
 
     "I’ll be the perfect girlfriend!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    scene black with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 0.5
 
     "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
-
+    window hide
-    stop ambient fadeout 2.0
+    window auto
-    stop music fadeout 3.0
     pause 2
-    scene black with fade
-    pause 1
     return