rework Ask Naser segment

game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy

@@ -1868,23 +1868,35 @@ label chapter_6:
 
     label .AskNaser:
 
-    A "Actually, Naser."
+    A "Actually,{w=.3} Naser."
 
     Nas "Hm?"
 
+    show naser:
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.9
+    pause .5
+
     "Naser slows his gait so he’s walking next to me."
+    pause .5
 
     Nas "Something on your mind?"
 
+    show fang behind naser, naomi
+    show anon:
+        ease 1 xalign 0.375
+    show dimmer_lighter behind anon, naser with dissolve
     "I lean in and start whispering."
 
-    A "Yeah…"
+    A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "It may be a good idea to split into groups."
+    pause .5
 
-    Nas "Ha, you’re funny."
+    show naser:
+        easein 1 xalign 1.0
+    show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    show naser explanatory flip
+    Nas "Ha,{w=.4} you’re funny."
 
     "Naser’s brow grows slick with sweat."
     pause .5
@@ -1892,42 +1904,56 @@ label chapter_6:
     "Christ what did his dad tell him?"
 
     "This is gonna be difficult."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Take a look at her man."
 
     A "You know she doesn’t get along with Naomi."
 
-    "His eyes shift back, catching sight of Fang’s poorly withheld anger."
-
-    show naser sad flip
+    show naser neutral flip with dissolve
+    "His eyes shift back,{w=.4} catching sight of Fang’s poorly withheld anger."
+    pause .5
 
+    show naser sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Ugh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "It’s only a matter of time before things go nuclear."
 
-    A "And as much as I’d find a catfight amusing, neither of us want to see Fang and Naomi duke it out."
-
-    show naser considering flip
+    A "And as much as I’d find a catfight amusing,{w=.4} neither of us want to see Fang and Naomi duke it out."
 
+    show naser considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Be that as it may{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    show naser neutral flip
-
+    show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "We still can’t split."
 
+    show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "I’m supposed to be keeping an eye on you two right now."
 
-    show naomi happy with dissolve
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.65
+    pause .15
+    show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
+    show dimmer_lighter behind naomi
+    show naomi happy flip 
+    with Dissolve(.25)
+    show anon fear:
+        easein_quart 1 xalign 0.325
+    show naser neutral flip:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3
 
-    N "what are we whispering about?"
+    N "What are we whispering about?"
 
     "RAPTOR-JESUS FUCK."
 
-    "Naomi has circled around behind us and pokes her head between Naser and I."
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
 
-    Nas "Don’t worry about it, babe."
+    "Naomi has circled around behind us and pokes her head between Naser and I."
+    pause .5
+
+    Nas "Don’t worry about it,{w=.2} babe."
 
     Nas "Anon just wanted to split the group for a bit."
 
@@ -1935,78 +1961,114 @@ label chapter_6:
 
     N "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    show naomi:
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
+
     N "That’s a wonderful idea!"
+    show naomi neutral flip
+    show naser considering flip 
+    with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
 
-    show naomi neutral
-
-    Nas "But babe, you know I’m supposed to-"
+    Nas "But babe,{w=.3} {cps=*.6}you know I’m supposed to-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
 
+    show naomi explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
     N "I think you should trust Anon a bit more!"
+    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
 
     A "Do you really think I’m the frisky type?"
 
+    show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     "Naser looks at me for a moment."
+    pause .5
 
-    show naser unimpressed flip
+    show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "Yes."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Wow."
 
     Nas "It’s true."
+    pause .25
 
+    show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
     N "I mean{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "A) Go fuck yourselves."
+    A "A){w=.4} Go fuck yourselves."
 
-    A "And B) I’m not some degenerate."
+    A "And B){w=.4} I’m not some degenerate."
+    pause .5
 
     show naomi explanatory
+    N "Still,{w=.4} despite his looks,{w=.3} the Anon I know won’t end up doing anything weird!"
 
-    N "Still, despite his looks, the Anon I know won’t end up doing anything weird!"
-
-    show naser neutral flip
+    show naomi neutral
+    show naser neutral flip 
+    with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
 
     Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You really think so?"
 
     N "Sure!"
 
-    show naomi neutral
+    pause .25
+    show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You promise to not make it weird or anything, right?"
+    Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You promise to not make it weird or anything,{w=.4} right?"
 
-    A "I-I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} What? Whatever, no, of course not."
+    A "I-{w=.2}I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} What?{w=.4} Whatever,{w=.4} no,{w=.2} of course not."
 
+    show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
     N "Seems it’s settled then!"
 
-    N "Come on, Naser! We’ll go look on the east side of town!"
+    N "Come on,{w=.2} Naser!{w=.4} We’ll go look on the east side of town!"
 
+    show naomi neutral 
     show naser considering flip
+    with dissolve
 
     Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alright{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    Nas "I trust you, Anon."
-
-    show naser neutral
+    show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    Nas "I trust you,{w=.2} Anon."
 
+    hide dimmer_lighter with dissolve
+    show naser behind naomi
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 1.25 xalign 1.2
+    pause 1
+    show naomi:
+        easeout 1 xalign 2.1
+    show naser:
+        easeout 1 xalign 2.6
+    with None
+    show naser neutral 
+    show naomi keikaku
+    with dissolve
+    hide naomi
+    hide naser
+    with dissolve
+    
     "Naomi grabs Naser by the arm and leads him around a corner and onto another street."
 
     "Naser gives one last worried look back before he’s out of sight."
+    pause .5
 
-    hide naser
-    hide naomi
-    with moveoutright
-
+    show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     F "What were the three of you huddling about?"
 
-    "Fang was walking behind us this whole time? I didn’t notice."
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    "Fang was walking behind us this whole time?{w=.5} I didn’t notice."
 
-    A "Oh, I was just getting rid of them."
+    A "Oh,{w=.3} I was just getting rid of them."
 
     show fang happy with dissolve
-
-    F "Oh, man, you’re a lifesaver."
+    F "Oh,{w=.4} man,{w=.2} you’re a lifesaver."
 
     A "Seems like it was either this or someone ends up with a black eye."
+    pause .5
 
     F "You think I’d stop at a black eye?"
 
@@ -2099,6 +2161,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     "Two can play this game you citrine psycho."
 
     "I look at Naomi and give her a subtle nod."
+    pause .5
 
     show naomi keikaku flip with dissolve
     pause .25
@@ -2133,12 +2196,12 @@ label chapter_6:
     show askfang2 with Dissolve(.25)
     pause 1
     A "That’s fuckin’ rude."
-    pause .5
-
-    show askfang3 with Dissolve(0.25)
     pause 1
-    # show askfang4 with Dissolve(0.15)
-    # pause 1
+
+    show askfang3 with Dissolve(0.3)
+    pause 1
+    show askfang4 with Dissolve(0.15)
+    pause 1
     show askfang5 with Dissolve(0.15)
     pause 1
     show askfang6 with Dissolve(0.15)
@@ -2147,13 +2210,13 @@ label chapter_6:
     "Fang looks at me and grins wickedly."
     pause .5
 
-    Nas "Please Fang."
+    Nas "{cps=*.5}Please Fang.{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     #Le Sigh
-    # hide askfang4
+    hide askfang4
     show askfang4 with Dissolve(0.25)
-    pause .25
+    pause .5
     F "I promise."
 
     F "Now go."