rework ch4 auditorium lunch scene, rename anon grin

game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 label chapter_4:
 
-    # CH 4 SCENE 1 - Anon is one slice of toast away from living an anime
+    # CH 4 SCENE 1 - Anon is just one slice of toast away from living an anime
     pause 1
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 2
@@ -140,7 +140,8 @@ label chapter_4:
 
     I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind."
 
-    # TODO: scene door auditorium
+
+    # CH 4 SCENE 2 - Trish continues to hate Anon's guts, more at 11
     
     scene door auditorium with fade
 
@@ -159,163 +160,382 @@ label chapter_4:
 
     I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit.{w=.4} Then I pull it open."
 
-    # CH 4 SCENE 2 -
-
     scene auditorium with Dissolve(1)
 
-    I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium, and immediately all three turn their heads and stare."
+    I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium,{w=.4} and immediately all three turn their heads and stare."
+    pause .75
 
-    I "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long. Eventually Fang calls out from her seat."
+    I "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long.{w=.5} Eventually Fang calls out from her seat."
 
-    show fang shocked at scenter with dissolve
+    # TODO: sound direction says play 'She Fucks Human Men', resolve this
+    # play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg'
+    play music 'audio/ost/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 2
+    pause .5
 
-    # TODO: sound direction says play She Fucks Human Men, resolve this
+    show fang surprised flip with Dissolve(1):
-    play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg'
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.3
+    pause 1
+
+    show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "What the hell are {i}you{/i} doing here,{w=.2} dweeb?"
+    show fang considering flip with dissolve
+
+    show anon:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5
+    show anon neutral:
+        easein 1 xalign -0.15
+    with dissolve
+    pause 1
 
-    F "What the hell are you doing here, dweeb?"
-    hide fang shocked
-    show fang neutral at scenter
-    show anon neutral flip at sright
     A "Hiding from Naomi."
+    pause .25
+
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 2 yalign -0.1 xalign 1.35
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     I "Fang throws her head back and goes limp on the shitty wooden chair."
-    F "UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGHHHHHH, THAT BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH."
+
-    show fang considering
+    show fang angry flip
-    I "..."
+    F "{cps=*.7}UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGHHHHHH{/cps},{w=.2} THAT {cps=*.7}BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH{/cps}."
-    A "..."
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "..."
+    pause .5
-    A "..."
+
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.0 xalign 1.3
     I "Fang lifts her head back up."
-    show fang unimpressed with dissolve
+
-    F "Ffffffffine, you can stay."
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    I "I go sit a few yards away from Fang and Trish on the theater seat. Reed turns back to that device he was messing with before."
+    F "{cps=*.3}Ffffffffine{/cps},{w=.4} you can stay."
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.4
+
+    I "I go sit a few yards away from Fang and Trish on the theater seat.{w=.5} Reed turns back to that device he was messing with before."
+
     I "Looks like a projector?"
+    pause .5
+
     A "You don’t like Naomi?"
-    show fang angry with dissolve
+
-    F "What was your first fuckin’ clue? That stupid bitch, acting all high and mighty all the time."
+    show fang angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "Hey, Fang."
+    F "What was your first fuckin’ clue?{w=.5} That stupid bitch,{w=.4} acting all high and mighty all the time."
+    pause .5
+
+    T "Hey,{w=.4} Fang."
+    
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Oh look at me I’m super smart and nice to everyone and everyone likes me so if you disagree with me I get the moral high ground no matter what!"
+
     I "Fang lets out some combination of a snort and a sigh."
-    F "No different than Naser. What a couple."
+
-    F "Ugh, whatever. What was she doing to bother you?"
+    F "No different than Naser.{w=.4} What a couple."
-    A "She’s been pestering me about every little thing since school started. Granted, she’s been a big help in some cases, but jeez she’s overbearing sometimes."
+
-    show trish neutral at tleft with dissolve
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Ugh,{w=.4} whatever.{w=.5} What was she doing to bother you?"
+
+    A "She’s been pestering me about every little thing since school started.{w=.5} Granted,{w=.4} she’s been a big help in some cases,{w=.4} but jeez she’s overbearing sometimes."
+
     T "Fang?"
-    F "I’ll say. Sometime in the first semester she ended up helping me with a major science project. We only had a day to do the whole thing."
+    pause .5
+    
+    show anon:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.0 #0.4
+    show fang:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.65 #1.3
+    with None
+
+    show trish neutral flip:
+        yalign 0 xalign 1.35
+    show trish:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.9
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "I’ll say.{w=.4} Sometime in the first semester she ended up helping me with a major science project.{w=.4} We only had a day to do the whole thing."
+    pause .5
+
     A "You waited until the last day for a major grade?"
-    F "It… That doesn’t matter. Shut up."
+
-    F "Anyways, Naomi insisted on helping me, and I just went along with it. She ended up just bossing me around for eight hours."
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    show trish indignant
+    F "It{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} That doesn’t matter.{w=.4} Shut up."
+
+    show fang neutral flip
+    F "Anyways,{w=.4} Naomi insisted on helping me,{w=.3} and I just went along with it."
+    
+    show fang unimpressed flip
+    F "She ended up just bossing me around for eight hours."
+
+    show trish:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.95
+    show trish indignant flip with Dissolve(.25)
     T "HEY GUYS DID YOU FORGET I’M HERE TOO?!"
+
+    show trish neutral flip with dissolve
+    pause .25
+    show fang:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.6
+    show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
+
+    F "Oh,{w=.2} right.{w=.4} What were you talking about Trish?"
+
+    show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    I "Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack.{w=.4} She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it."
+
+    show trish happy flip
+    T "This!{w=.4} Tada!{w=.5} Our first poster!"
+    
+    show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25)
+    
+    pause .5
+
+    A "VVURM DRAMA?{w=.4} That’s an{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} interesting name{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} and what’s with the date on it?"
+
     show fang neutral flip with dissolve
-    F "Oh, right. What were you talking about Trish?"
+    pause .25
-    show trish neutral
+    F "{cps=*.5}Trish wants-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
-    I "Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack. She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it."
+
-    T "This! Tada! Our first poster!"
+    show trish smug flip
-    A "VVURM DRAMA? That’s an… interesting name… and what’s with the date on it?"
+    T "We need to have an actual show!{w=.4} Not some dumb school show.{w=.5} We need actual people who matter to show our genius to!"
-    F "Trish wants-"
+    pause .5
-    T "We need to have an actual show! Not some dumb school show. We need actual people who matter to show our genius to!"
+
-    I "Genius? More like retardation."
+    I "Genius?{w=.4} More like retardation."
-    show fang sad with dissolve
+
+    show fang sad with Dissolve(.25)
     F "I don’t know Trish."
-    A "Yeeeaaaaahhhh I’m with Fang on this one."
+    pause .5
-    show fang neutral
+
-    show trish unimpressed
+    A "{cps=*.4}Yeeeaaaaahhhh{/cps}{w=.2} {nw}"
+    show trish neutral flip
+    extend "I’m with Fang on this one."
+
+    show fang considering
+    show trish unimpressed flip
+    with Dissolve(.25)
     I "The glare Trish levels at me was akin to a very dull knife."
+
+    show trish:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.9
     T "You don’t even know how good we are!"
+
+    show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     T "That was simply a practice session!"
-    T "Since you’re Naser’s friend too, just know HE ruined our first concert. Right Fang?"
+    pause .25
-    F "Ugh, yeah. If he hadn’t invited all those cocksuckers…"
+
-    A "Still I think-"
+    show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    show trish angry with dissolve
+    T "Since you’re Naser’s friend too,{w=.4} just know HE ruined our first concert.{w=.5} Right Fang?"
-    T "It doesn’t matter what YOU think!"
+
-    I "Whoa, where did that come from."
+    show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
-    show fang happy with dissolve
+    F "Ugh,{w=.4} yeah.{w=.5} If he hadn’t invited all those cocksuckers{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    F "Let’s drop it for now. My tuna sandwich is getting cold."
+    show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
-    show trish smug
+    pause .25
+
+    A "Still {cps=*.4}I think-{w=.4}{nw}"
+
+    T "It doesn’t matter what {w=.1}{nw}"
+    show trish angry flip
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic .75 xalign -0.05
+    extend "YOU{w=.2} think!" with vpunch
+    show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
+    pause .25
+
+    I "Whoa,{w=.4} where did that come from."
+
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
+    pause .25
+    F "Let’s drop it for now.{w=.4} My tuna sandwich is getting cold."
+
+    show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25)
     I "Trish grins in victory."
-    Re "Dude… ya got told…"
+    pause .5
-    I "What the fuck am I doing? I’m dead if I out myself here outnumbered"
+
+    Re "{size=-10}Dude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} ya got told{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{/size}"
+
+    stop music fadeout 2
+    pause .25
+    show dimmer_light behind anon, trish with dissolve
+    pause .25
+
+    I "What the fuck am I doing?{w=.5} I’m dead if I out myself whilst outnumbered here"
 
     I "Trish tore at me like she knew I was there."
+    pause .5
 
     I "Had to happen EVENTUALLY."
 
-    I "I hope that’s not the case."
+    I "I pray that’s not the case."
-    show trish neutral
+    pause .5
-    I "I finally get to opening my omnivore lunch. A BLT, some chicken nuggets, and an orange."
+
+    play music 'audio/ost/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 1
+    hide dimmer_light 
+    show trish neutral flip
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    I "I finally get to opening my omnivore lunch.{w=.5} A BLT,{w=.3} some chicken nuggets,{w=.3} and an orange."
+
     I "I take my first bite of the sandwich and-"
+
     stop music fadeout 1.0
-    I "*DING-DONG BING-BONG*"
+    play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg'
+    I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
+    stop sound fadeout 1
+
     I "Are you kidding me."
+
     I "I cram as much of the sandwich into my mouth as I can and close the box."
-    I "Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room, and Trish makes for the exit with Fang. I follow after, cheeks still filled with food"
+
-    scene hallway with fade
+    I "Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room,{w=.3} and Trish makes for the exit with Fang."
-    show fang happy flip at scenter with dissolve
+    
-    show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
+    I "I follow after,{w=.4} cheeks still filled with food"
-    I "Next class is… Music, that’s right. I’ll be walking with Fang then."
 
 
-    show hallway
+    # CH 4 SCENE 3
-    play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg'
+
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 2
+    scene hallway with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+
+    pause .5
+
+    I "Next class is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Music,{w=.4} that’s right.{w=.5} I’ll be walking with Fang then."
 
     I "The three all wave each other goodbye and Fang turns towards our shared class."
+    pause .5
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
+    play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg'
     I "May as well make some small talk."
-    A "So, uh… What’s your favorite band, Fang?"
+
-    F "My favorite band, huh…"
+    show anon neutral:
-    F "Guess it’d be something like The Skinks… Maybe the Fossillies?"
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.1
-    A "‘Oi, tha’ ‘ere’s sum pre’ey bri’ish tayste, yeah?"
+    show fang neutral behind anon:
-    F "Pffft."
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    A "So,{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} What’s your favorite band,{w=.2} Fang?"
+
+    show fang considering flip with dissolve
+    F "My favorite band,{w=.3} huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Guess it’d be something like The Skinks{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Maybe the Fossillies?"
+
+    A "‘Oi,{w=.3} tha’ ‘ere’s sum pre’ey bri’ish tayste,{w=.4} yeah?"
+
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.975
+    show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "{cps=*.35}Pffft.{/cps}"
+
     I "She turns away to hide her snickers."
+
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
+    pause .25
+
     F "Shut it."
+
     F "I’m sure your favorite is much better."
-    A "I’m into…"
+    pause .5
-    #>>Boomer rock
+
-    #>>Obscure hipster shit
+    A "I’m into{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    #>>Anime openings and video game OSTs
+    pause .5
 
     menu:
         "Boomer rock":
-          jump regardlessofselect
+            pass
         "Obscure hipster shit":
-          jump regardlessofselect
+            pass
         "Anime openings and video game OSTs":
-          jump regardlessofselect
+            pass
 
-    label regardlessofselect:
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 1.05
     I "Fang holds a hand up to her beak."
-    F "AHAHAHAHAHAHHA. God you are such a dweeb"
-    I "I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin."
-    A "Least I don’t need a ‘loisence’ to listen to it."
-    F "Oi luv, didn’ share me taystes to get rallied on, bit rewd, innit?"
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    scene black with fade
-    I "The two of us banter with each other with increasingly strong british accents all the way to class."
-    scene classroom with fade
-    I "..."
 
+    F "{cps=*.4}AHAHAHAHAHAHHA.{/cps} {w=.5}{nw}"
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
+    extend "God you are such a dweeb"
+
+    show anon grin with dissolve
+    I "I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin."
+
+    A "Least I don’t need a ‘loisence’ to listen to it."
+    pause .5
+
+    F "Oi luv,{w=.3} didn’ share me taystes to get rallied on,{w=.5} bit rewd,{w=.2} innit?"
+    pause .25
+
+    scene black with fade
+    pause .5
+
+    I "The two of us banter with each other with increasingly strong british accents all the way to class."
+    pause .5
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+
+    scene bandroom with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    pause 1
+
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg'
-    show bandroom
 
-    I "ARGH!! This stupid-"
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
-    I "Define a Treble clef?  I don’t know what a Treble clef is!  I don’t care about this shit, it won’t ever be useful."
+    I "ARGH!! This stupid-" with vpunch
-    I "Fuck this, who can I cheat off of?"
+    pause .25
+
+    I "Define a Treble clef?{w=.5} I don’t know what a Treble clef is!{w=.5} I don’t care about this shit,{w=.3} it won’t ever be useful."
+
+    I "Fuck this,{w=.4} who can I cheat off of?"
+    pause .5
+
     I "I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place."
-    N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}" # TODO: is this from a previous line? If so can't find it
+
+    # TODO: this line doesn't occur until chapter 6
+    N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}"
+
     I "I crane my head, looking for Fang. At her own desk she’s filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like she’s strumming honestly."
+
     I "Agh, and that’s another thing. Who the fuck made guitars?! Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck."
+
     I "Oh shit, she’s looking at me now."
+
     I "She tilts her head and taps her sheet."
+
     I "OH!"
+
     I "I respond with an eyeroll and finger gun at my temple. My thumb hammer drops and I fake die in my seat."
+
     I "Fang shakes her head, returning to her assignment with a tiny smile gracing her beak."
+
     I "I look at the papers we need to finish. Fuck me, how the hell are we suppose to finish these by the end of class?!"
+
+    # TODO: this line doesn't occur until chapter 6
     N "It can’t hurt to ask, though, right?"
+
     I "Maybe the neon Nero had a good point."
+
     I "Still, interrupting her now might piss her off."
+
     I "FFFFFfuck. I’ll flip a coin."
-    #>>> Heads, ask Fang for help
-    #>>> Tails, leave Fang alone
 
     menu:
         "Heads, ask Fang for help":