add missing scene after bench scene, SFX uplift

LICENSE

@@ -6,4 +6,5 @@ WoodSnap.wav - "Snapping, Wooden Fence, N.wav" by InspectorJ (www.jshaw.co.uk) o
 firealarm.ogg - "School Fire Alarm" by Cullen Card 
 shot.ogg - "38 Caliber Gun Shot 5x" by Mike Koenig
 wind.wav - "Wind" by Mark DiAngelo
-punch.ogg - "Strong Punch" by Mike Koenig
+punch.ogg - "Strong Punch" by Mike Koenig
+menacing.ogg - "Scaryscape 01" by Suonho (soundcloud.com/suonho) of Freesound.org

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -295,20 +295,21 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     unknown "I'm glad we found you!"
 
-    A "...Who are you guys?{w} Why do you know my name?"
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Who are you guys?{w=0.4} Why do you know my name?"
 
     show anon neutral flip at acenter behind naser with dissolve
 
-    unknown "Where are my manners!{w=0.6} My name is Naomi,{w=0.4} student council president and your guide.{w=0.6} It’s my sincere pleasure to make your acquaintance Anon!"
+    unknown "Where are my manners!{w=0.6}{nw}"
+    N "Where are my manners!{fast} My name is Naomi,{w=0.4} student council president and your guide.{w=0.6} It’s my sincere pleasure to make your acquaintance Anon!"
 
     show naomi neutral at sleft
     hide naomiSilo
     with dissolve
 
-    show anon neutral with dissolve
-
     Nas "We’re your welcoming committee."
 
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
+
     A "O{w=0.3}-kay then."
 
     I "{cps=*0.5}Is that really necessary?{/cps}"
@@ -321,11 +322,12 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naomi neutral at scloserleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
     show naomi neutral at sleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
 
-    I "The orange one,{w=0.3} Naomi hands me a brochure."
+    I "The orange one,{w=0.3} Naomi,{w=0.3} hands me a brochure."
+    pause 0.5
 
     I "{i}\"Volcano High and You:{w=0.5} A New Beginning to Adulthood.\"{/i}"
 
-    I "The title alone makes me gag.{w=0.7} The pink one,{w=0.4} Naomi,{w=0.4} looks at me expectantly."
+    I "The title alone makes me gag.{w=0.7} The pink one,{w=0.3} Naomi,{w=0.3} looks at me expectantly."
 
     I "The brochure is full of the typical trivialities."
 
@@ -333,9 +335,10 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "None of it matters."
 
-    show naser considering flip:
-        xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1
-    with ease
+    show naser:
+        easein_quad 0.7 xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1
+    pause .7
+    show naser considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
     Nas "Babe,{w=0.4} I’ve got some things to take care of."
 
@@ -362,10 +365,12 @@ label chapter_1:
         easein 0.5 xalign 0.02
 
     I "Naser pulls her into a hug and nudges his muzzle against hers.{w=0.6} Is that how dinos kiss?"
+    pause .7
+
+    hide naser with Dissolve(0.75)
+
+    show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    hide naser
-    show anon neutral
-    with Dissolve(0.75)
 
     I "He leaves,{w=0.3} running quickly to assist with the heavy sound equipment."
 
@@ -379,50 +384,261 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "I turn back to Naomi.{w=0.6} She smiles again,{w=0.4} though there is a plasticity to it."
 
-    #TODO: extra scene content goes here
-
     show naomi explanatory
 
-    N "How about I show you the campus,{w=0.3} Anon?{w=0.6} We wouldn’t want you getting lost on your first day, now would we?"
+    N "So,{w=.3} Anon,{w=0.5} why did you transfer here?"
 
     show naomi neutral
 
-    A "Mm,{w=0.5} sounds good."
+    I "The question catches me off guard."
 
-    scene hallway
-    show naomi neutral at sleft
-    show anon neutral flip at aright
-    with fade
+    show dimmer_light behind anon, naomi with Dissolve(1)
 
-    # play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' # already playing
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.2
+    I "I freeze like a deer caught in headlights,{w=0.4} scrambling to come up with any plausible answer."
 
-    I "Instead of using the main entrance Naomi led me to a side entrance.{w=0.7} Inside, the school looked like your stereotypical school hallway."
+    I "It’s an innocent question,{w=0.5} she can’t have known,{w=0.3} could she?"
 
-    I "Lockers and posters along the walls.{w=0.5} Doors interspersed equally all the way down.{w=0.5} More students milling about before class."
+    I "What did mom and pop put in the transfer request form when they shipped my ass here?"
 
-    N "Anon,{w=0.3} may I see your class schedule?"
+    hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    I "I pull the folded up sheet from my pocket and hand it to her.{w=0.6} She unfolds it delicately and scans the page thoroughly."
+    A "Uh...{w=0.4} I..."
 
-    show naomi happy with Dissolve(.2)
+    show naomi considering with dissolve
 
-    N "Oh my gosh!{w=0.6} We share a home room Anon!"
+    N "You uh,{w=0.4} don’t have to answer if you don’t want to."
 
-    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    show naomi neutral with dissolve
+
+    I "I focus my attention on the brochure out of embarrassment."
+    pause .5
+
+    I "Lunch!{w=.4} Right!{w=.5} I’m getting kinda hungry!{w=.4} What about something to eat?"
+
+    I "Yadda yadda,{w=.3} herbivore,{w=.3} vegan,{w=.3} tofu,{w=.45} {cps=*0.6}disgusting{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    I "Wait,{w=0.3} hold on{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    I "Carnivore line,{w=.4} Filet Mignon-{w=.6} what the fuck is wrong with this school?!"
+    pause .6
+
+    A "Is there a soup kitchen or something around here?"
+
+    show naomi sad with dissolve
+
+    N "Oh dear{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.7}{nw}"
+
+    show naomi explanatory
+
+    N "Oh dear...{fast} Anon,{w=.3} are you in need of financial assistance?"
+
+    show naomi neutral with dissolve
+
+    A "I can figure things out on my own,{w=.4} don’t worry too much about it."
+
+    show naomi:
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
+
+    N "Oh,{w=.3} the school here has programs to help it’s less fortunate students!"
+
+    show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    N "The principal here is great,{w=.5} come on,{w=.2} I’ll take you to him!"
+
+    show naomi neutral with dissolve
+
+    I "The absolute last thing I want to be doing is asking for handouts{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    A "{cps=*0.3}Actually,{w=.4} I-{/cps}{w=0.2}{nw}"
+
+    show naomi:
+        easein_quart 1 xalign 0.7
+    pause 0.8
+    show anon:
+        easein_quad 1 xalign 0.6
+    show naomi neutral flip behind anon:
+        easein_quad 1 xalign 0.25
+
+    I "Naomi grabs my hand and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    I "{cps=*0.4}Oh wonderful.{/cps}"
+    stop music fadeout 2
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/siren.ogg'
+    I "..."
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show dimmer_darker behind anon, naomi with Fade(.1, 0, .25, color="#fff")
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/punch.ogg'
+    I "{cps=*0.5}AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA{/cps}" with vpunch
+    pause .5
+
+    I "ALERT"
+
+    I "ALERT"
+
+    I "DEFCON LEVEL ONE!{w=0.5} DEFCON LEVEL ONE!"
+
+    I "FEMALE MAKING PHYSICAL CONTACT"
+
+    I "DO NOT PANIC"
+
+    I "DO NOT PANIC"
+    pause .5
+
+    I "GET A GRIP ON THE SITUATION"
+
+    I "THIS IS NAOMI."
+
+    I "SHE’S TAKING ME SOMEWHERE BY THE HAND{w=0.25} {size=-5}HAND{/size}{w=0.25} {size=-10}HAND{/size}{w=0.25} {size=-15}HAND{/size}"
+
+    I "SHE ALREADY HAS A BOYFRIEND DOESN’T SHE?"
+
+    I "WAIT"
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 0.5
+
+    I "SHE ALREADY HAS A BOYFRIEND"
+    pause .5
+
+    I "I AM SAFE."
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 1
+    hide dimmer_darker with dissolve
+
+    I "Okay,{w=.3} okay.{w=.5} Just stay silent and don’t make a mess of things."
+
+    show anon:
+        easeout 1.0 xalign 0.001
+    show naomi:
+        easeout 1.0 xalign -0.3
+    pause 0.5
+    hide naomi
+    hide anon
+    with dissolve
+
+    scene black with fade
+
+    I "{cps=*0.1}......{/cps}"
+
+    I "It’s so soft,{w=.4} and smooth,{w=.5} and surprisingly warm for scales."
+    pause 0.6
+
+    I "How lewd."
+
+    I "Day one and I’ve already fallen to such depraved lows as handholding."
+
+    scene hallway
+    show naomi neutral flip at sright
+    show anon neutral at acenter
+    with fade
+
+    N "Here we are Anon.{w=0.4} Principal Spears should be able to help with your money situation."
+    pause .5
+
+    I "Huwhat."
+
+    I "Oh.{w=0.4} Right."
+
+    show naomi neutral with dissolve
+
+    I "Naomi knocks on the door."
+    pause .5
+
+    unknown "State your business!" # Spears
 
     show naomi explanatory
 
-    N "Speaking of,{w=0.3} class will be starting shortly.{w=0.5} Follow me.{w=0.5} Mr. Tsuki’s classroom is this way."
-
+    N "The new student needs financial help,{w=0.3} Principal Spears."
     show naomi neutral
-    # play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' # already playing, was it supposed to be silent for a bit here?
+
+    pause 1
+
+    Sp "Lend him a five!"
+
+    N "I think he means the loan program,{w=0.3} sir."
+
+    Sp "Tell him to come in later,{w=0.4} I’m dealing with another student."
+    pause .65
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/punch.ogg'
+    unknown "-THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU MEAN I HAVE TO CLEAN UP AFTER?!" with vpunch # Fang
+
+    show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(1)
+
+    N "Tsk."
+
+    pause 0.5
+    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    I "The orange parasaurolophus’ expression quickly changes from{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} whatever that was{w=0.4} to that same smile she’s had up until now."
+
+    show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
+    show naomi explanatory flip
+
+    N "Well Anon,{w=0.4} why don’t I show you to class?{w=0.5} Home room should be starting soon."
+
+    show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    I "Right.{w=.3} Home room.{w=.4} I take out my crumpled schedule from my pocket."
+
+    I "Naomi takes the slip from me."
+
+    I "And blows my eardrums out with a squeal capable of shattering glass."
+
+    show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    N "We share first period and english together!{w=.6} Come on,{w=.3} I’ll introduce you to the class and you’ll be able to make all sorts of new friends!"
+
+    show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
+
+    pause 0.5
+    "{cps=*.2}Yay me.{/cps}"
+    
     scene black with fade
 
-    #TODO: extra scene content ends here
+    # SCENE UPDATED
+    # show naomi explanatory
+
+    # N "How about I show you the campus,{w=0.3} Anon?{w=0.6} We wouldn’t want you getting lost on your first day, now would we?"
+
+    # show naomi neutral
+
+    # A "Mm,{w=0.5} sounds good."
+
+    # scene hallway
+    # show naomi neutral at sleft
+    # show anon neutral flip at aright
+    # with fade
+
+    # # play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' # already playing
+    # play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.2
+
+    # I "Instead of using the main entrance Naomi led me to a side entrance.{w=0.7} Inside, the school looked like your stereotypical school hallway."
+
+    # I "Lockers and posters along the walls.{w=0.5} Doors interspersed equally all the way down.{w=0.5} More students milling about before class."
+
+    # N "Anon,{w=0.3} may I see your class schedule?"
+
+    # I "I pull the folded up sheet from my pocket and hand it to her.{w=0.6} She unfolds it delicately and scans the page thoroughly."
+
+    # show naomi happy with Dissolve(.2)
+
+    # N "Oh my gosh!{w=0.6} We share a home room Anon!"
+
+    # show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    # pause 0.5
+
+    # I "{cps=*0.4}Oh wonderful.{/cps}"
+
+    # show naomi explanatory
+
+    # N "Speaking of,{w=0.3} class will be starting shortly.{w=0.5} Follow me.{w=0.5} Mr. Tsuki’s classroom is this way."
+
+    # show naomi neutral
+    # # play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' # already playing, was it supposed to be silent for a bit here?
+    # scene black with fade
 
     I "I follow after her to a classroom on the 2nd floor.{w=0.5} The seats were being filled with students.{w=0.5} I take one near the front,{w=0.3} knowing I’ll have to introduce myself.{w=0.5} I’ll probably be doing that for all my classes."
 
@@ -430,9 +646,11 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     scene classroom with fade
 
+    stop music fadeout 0.5
     stop ambient
     play sound "audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg"
     pause 7
+    play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 0.5
 
     show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
 
@@ -462,6 +680,7 @@ label chapter_1:
         xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0
     with ease
     show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
+    pause 0.75
 
     A "Hey{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -472,26 +691,29 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "Just like every day for the past four months."
 
     A "I don’t really have any hobbies."
+    pause .5
 
     I "I wanted to flee.{w} Hide away.{w} Anything to avoid those judging eyes."
     pause .5
 
     N "{cps=*0.4}Why did you transfer here?{/cps}"
 
+    #TODO: 2spooky?
+    play music 'audio/effects/menacing.ogg' fadein 0.5 # Attribution 3.0, LICENSE updated
+
     show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(1)
 
     I "My throat clenches.{w} It’s an innocent question.{w=0.5} But I think back again to it all."
 
     A "uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.4} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
 
-    #TODO: suitable menacing ambience or music
-
     I "There’s whispers now.{w} The hushed tones,{w=0.4} silenced snickers,{w=0.4} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me."
 
     show dimmer_darker behind anon, jinflip with dissolve
 
     Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun,{w=0.5} yuu du natto habu tsu ansaa zattu{/cps}"
 
+    stop music fadeout 1
     hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(0.25)
     pause 0.5
 
@@ -547,7 +769,8 @@ label chapter_1:
     #TODO: SFX of some kind
     show naser neutral behind anon with easeinleft:
         xalign -0.6 yalign 0.1
-    stop ambient fadeout 0.25
+    stop ambient fadeout 0.5
+    play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg' # CC0
     show anon fear:
         xalign 0.6 yalign 0.1
         easein 0.5 xzoom -1
@@ -557,12 +780,14 @@ label chapter_1:
     show anon fear flip:
         xzoom 1
 
+    show dimmer_light behind anon, naser with dissolve
     I "Said disaster was a hand grabbing my shoulder and turning me about."
 
     I "My plate of pizza shaped cardboard threatened to smear across my shirt."
 
     I "I fought the momentum of the tray until the hand that had spun me stabilized it and me."
 
+    hide dimmer_light with dissolve
     play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
 
     show anon sad flip behind naser with Dissolve(0.25)
@@ -671,7 +896,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     # "I perk up at Naser’s interjection. Naomi looks disappointed for a second."
 
     # A "Not really,{w=0.4} just had to sign up for some handouts."
-    A "Not really,{w=0.4} just had to sign up for some handouts."
+    A "Not really,{w=0.4} just have to sign up for some handouts."
 
     show naomi sad flip with dissolve