SFX & music tweaks, TODOs for missing scene after Anon meets Naser & Naomi

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "It’s the sounds that reach me first.{w} The chatter of people milling about."
 
     show rosaSilo at scenter
-    show stellaSilo at sright
+    show stellaSilo at nright
 
     unknown "Bro"
 
@@ -186,7 +186,6 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoor ambience.ogg' fadein 0.5 # public domain
-    ###maybe add some ambiance here?
     scene garden
     show anon neutral flip at scenter
     with fade
@@ -232,7 +231,8 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 1
 
     show naomi silo at sleft
-    show naser silo at sright
+    show naser silo:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
     with Dissolve(2.5)
 
     unknown "{cps=*0.5}Would you happen to be Anon?{/cps}" #Naomi
@@ -271,8 +271,9 @@ label chapter_1:
     Nas "Right,{w=0.3} right"
 
     scene garden
-    show naser neutral flip at sright
-    show naomiSilo at sleft # TODO: Naomi should be visible here
+    show naser neutral flip:
+            yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
+    show naomi neutral at sleft
     with dissolve
 
     I "The hand tightens around my own and pulls roughly."
@@ -379,6 +380,8 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "I turn back to Naomi.{w=0.6} She smiles again,{w=0.4} though there is a plasticity to it."
 
+    #TODO: extra scene content goes here
+
     show naomi explanatory
 
     N "How about I show you the campus,{w=0.3} Anon?{w=0.6} We wouldn’t want you getting lost on your first day, now would we?"
@@ -420,6 +423,8 @@ label chapter_1:
     # play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' # already playing, was it supposed to be silent for a bit here?
     scene black with fade
 
+    #TODO: extra scene content ends here
+
     I "I follow after her to a classroom on the 2nd floor.{w=0.5} The seats were being filled with students.{w=0.5} I take one near the front,{w=0.3} knowing I’ll have to introduce myself.{w=0.5} I’ll probably be doing that for all my classes."
 
     I "{cps=*0.4}Fuck my life.{/cps}"
@@ -621,13 +626,12 @@ label chapter_1:
         ease 0.35 yalign 0.0
         repeat
 
-    # N "SO!{w=0.5} How’d it go!{w=0.3} Did you like Spears?{w=0.3} Were you able to get what you need?"
-    N "SO!{w=0.5} How’d it go!{w=0.3} Did you meet Spears yet?{w=0.3} Do you have everything you need?"
-
-    show naomi neutral flip at sright with ease
+    N "SO!{w=0.5} What do you think of Volcano High!{w=0.3} How about your classes{w=0.3} You seem-"
 
     I "I just nod along,{w=0.3} starting to not pay attention."
 
+    show naomi neutral flip at sright with ease
+
     Nas "You looking forward to the rest of the day?"
 
     A "Not really."
@@ -669,7 +673,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     # "I perk up at Naser’s interjection. Naomi looks disappointed for a second."
 
     # A "Not really,{w=0.4} just had to sign up for some handouts."
-    A "Not really,{w=0.4} just need to sign up for some handouts."
+    A "Not really,{w=0.4} just had to sign up for some handouts."
 
     show naomi sad flip with dissolve
 
@@ -1956,7 +1960,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     A "How the fuck did I end up here?"
 
     pause 0.75
-    play music 'audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg' fadein 0.2
+    play music 'audio/ost/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg' fadein 0.5
     show reed neutral:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
     with Dissolve(1)
@@ -2316,6 +2320,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.5} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa-{/cps}{nw}"
 
+    play music 'audio/ost/Fuck You I Like To Ignore Problems.ogg'
     unknown "{cps=*0.25}WAOOOH!!{/cps}" with vpunch
 
     I "With the screech of a banshee,{w=0.3} a blur of purple launches itself onto an unsuspecting student."
@@ -2344,6 +2349,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "Wait,{w=0.3} she’s in the band that played yesterday?"
 
+    stop music fadeout 1
     I "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} Should get out of here."
 
     I "Last thing I need is whatever’s going on here."
@@ -2357,6 +2363,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     A "That happen often{cps=*0.1}...?{/cps}"
 
+    play music 'audio/ost/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 1
     show naser neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 1.9
     show reed neutral flip behind naser:
@@ -2373,20 +2380,25 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show anon neutral with dissolve
 
-    # TODO: music?
 
     I "Naser’s leaning against a set of lockers,{w=0.3} along with that guy from before."
 
     I "The other one’s making a throat-slashing gesture,{w=0.3} waving a palm across his neck."
 
+    pause 0.5
+
     A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} nothing important."
 
-    show reed:
-        easein_quart 0.8 xalign 1.1
-    pause 0.35
+    pause 0.5
+
     show reed neutral:
-        xalign 0.7
-    with dissolve
+        xalign 1
+    show reed:
+        easein_quart 0.8 xalign 0.7
+    pause 0.35
+    # show reed neutral:
+    #     xalign 0.7
+    # with dissolve
 
     show reed explanatory
 
@@ -2452,7 +2464,14 @@ label chapter_1:
     stop ambient fadeout 0.5
     pause 0.5
 
-    I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.4}DONG{w=1.5} BING-{w=0.4}BONG{/i}{/cps}" # TODO: PA bell sfx
+    stop music fadeout 0.1
+    pause 0.1
+
+    # TODO: ogg conversion
+    play sound 'audio/effects/ding_dong.ogg' volume 2 # CC0
+    I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.75}DONG{/i}{/cps}{w=1.5}{nw}"
+    play sound 'audio/effects/ding_dong.ogg' volume 2
+    I "{i}DING-DONG{fast} {cps=*20}BING-{w=0.75}BONG{/cps}{/i}"
     pause .25
 
     show naser neutral flip:
@@ -2460,6 +2479,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause .5
 
     play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    play music 'audio/ost/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 0.5
 
     Nas "Crap,{w=0.3} can’t miss my homeroom today."
 
@@ -2478,6 +2498,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     stop ambient fadeout 1
+    stop music fadeout 1
     scene black with fade