ch6 tweaks from feedback

LICENSE

@@ -6,5 +6,5 @@ WoodSnap.wav - "Snapping, Wooden Fence, N.wav" by InspectorJ (www.jshaw.co.uk) o
 firealarm.ogg - "School Fire Alarm" by Cullen Card 
 shot.ogg - "38 Caliber Gun Shot 5x" by Mike Koenig
 wind.wav - "Wind" by Mark DiAngelo
-punch.ogg - "Strong Punch" by Mike Koenig
+rumble.ogg - "CinematicBoomNorm" by Herbert Boland
-menacing.ogg - "Scaryscape 01" by Suonho (soundcloud.com/suonho) of Freesound.org
+sizzle.ogg - "Hot Sizzling" by Mike Koenig

game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy

@@ -65,7 +65,11 @@ label chapter_6:
     "Fang:{fast}{w=.3} Do you want to come with?"
     pause .5
 
-    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alone{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}{w=.4} No,{w=.2} shut the fuck up alarms."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alone{nw}"
+    play sound 'audio/effects/alarmklaxonloop.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    extend "{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}{w=.4} No,{w=.2} shut the fuck up alarms."
+
+    stop sound fadeout 3
 
     "Anon:{fast}{w=.3} Why alone?"
 
@@ -82,6 +86,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     #cut to Reed in bathroom cg
     Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Dude{w=.2} like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} back to the story{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
+
     #cut back to Anon
     "Anon:{fast}{w=.3} Alright, where we dropping?"
 
@@ -179,11 +184,14 @@ label chapter_6:
 
     show anon:
         easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.1
-    pause 1.5
+    pause 1.25
 
     stop ambient fadeout 3
     play music "audio/OST/Tracy was fired from her real job.ogg"
 
+    show anon:
+        easein_back 1 xalign 0.1
+
     SV "Some storm,{w=.5} eh?"
     pause .5
 
@@ -226,7 +234,9 @@ label chapter_6:
     A "Maybe later.{w=.4} I’ll keep it in mind."
     pause .5
 
-    show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    show tracy unimpressed
+    show anon neutral flip 
+    with dissolve
     "I turn to leave,{w=.4} behind me I hear the vendor mutter to herself."
 
     show anon:
@@ -291,24 +301,29 @@ label chapter_6:
     menu:
 
         "Knock":
+            stop ambient fadeout 1
             pause .5
             "Before my knuckles reach the door it swings open."
 
         "Text Fang":
+            stop ambient fadeout 1
             pause .5
             "Before I can hit ‘Send’ the door swings open."
     
-    stop ambient fadeout 1
     pause .5
-    play music "audio/OST/Prized Bowling Ball.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    play music "audio/OST/Prized Bowling Ball.ogg" fadein 0.6
 
     # TODO: thunder or other sudden-but-lingering bassy rumble
+    play sound 'audio/effects/rumble.ogg'
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' fadein 1
     show dimmer_light behind anon 
     show dimmer_darker behind anon
     with vpunch
     hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(1)
 
     "{cps=*.5}{i}What is this killing intent?!{/i}{/cps}"
+    
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
     pause .5
 
     show fangdad neutral flip:
@@ -319,9 +334,14 @@ label chapter_6:
     pause .5
 
     unknown "Hm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} you Anon?"
+    
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/alarmclicheloop.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    show dimmer_lighter behind anon with Dissolve(.25)
 
     "Shitshitshitalarms shut the fuck up right now please I need to think."
-    pause .5
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
+    hide dimmer_lighter with dissolve
 
     A "Y-{w=.1}yeah,{w=.3} I’m Anon.{w=.4} P-{w=.2}pleased to m-{w=.4}meet you uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
@@ -1176,7 +1196,7 @@ label chapter_6:
 
     scene park
     show naser neutral:
-        xalign 0.1 yalign 0.0
+        xalign 0.1 yalign 0.1
     show fang unimpressed flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9 
     show anon neutral flip:
@@ -2249,7 +2269,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     Nas "Dad said he’ll do to {i}me{/i} anything that you do to Fang!"
     pause .5
 
-    "Anon, Fang & Naomi" "{cps=*.3}...What...{/cps}"
+    "Anon Fang & Naomi" "{cps=*.3}...What...{/cps}"
 
     # F "...What..."
     # A "...What..."
@@ -2257,7 +2277,7 @@ label chapter_6:
 
     pause .5
 
-    Nas "Fang,{w=.4} you gotta promise to not let Anon do anything creepy."
+    Nas "Fang,{w=.3} you gotta promise to not let Anon do anything creepy."
     pause .5
 
     show askfang2 with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -2345,9 +2365,13 @@ label chapter_6:
     "Now it’s just the two of us."
 
     "Alone."
-    pause .5
 
-    "Oh and there’s the alarms again.{w=.4} I think I’m finally starting to tune them out though."
+    play ambient2 'audio/effects/alarmklaxonloop.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    pause .5
+    
+    "Oh and there’s the alarms again.{w=.4} {nw}"
+    stop ambient2 fadeout 4
+    extend "I think I’m finally starting to tune them out though."
     pause .5
 
     stop ambient fadeout 3
@@ -2524,6 +2548,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     A "Living in the ass-end of this place,{w=.4} I’ve picked up a thing or two."
     pause .5
 
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient')
     show black with dissolve
     "The two of us check the sparsely located buildings one by one."
 
@@ -2533,6 +2558,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     "Several hours pass as both the sun and the temperature drops."
     pause .5
 
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 3, 'ambient')
     show fang unimpressed
     hide black with dissolve
     pause .5
@@ -2550,6 +2576,8 @@ label chapter_6:
     A "Still,{w=.4} we must have checked dozens of places by now."
 
     A "But why won’t anyone have a band?"
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 4
     play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 1.0
     pause .5
 
@@ -2650,7 +2678,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     "He puts the device on,{w=.3} and it whirrs to life,{w=.4} slowly crossing the screen."
     pause .5
 
-    "When it reaches the edge,{w=.3} it beeps and turned around,{w=.4} making a return trip to where it started."
+    "When it reaches the edge,{w=.3} it beeps and turns around,{w=.4} making a return trip to where it started."
 
     "After a few trips,{w=.4} the merchant turns the roomba off and gives us an expectant leer."
     pause .5
@@ -3032,7 +3060,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     show fang angry:
         easein_back 0.4 xalign 0.05
     pause .25
-    # TODO: possibly some kind of quick sizzle SFX?
+    play sound 'audio/effects/sizzle.ogg'
     show anon:
         easein_quart 1 xalign 0.95
     pause .1
@@ -3097,10 +3125,13 @@ label chapter_6:
     show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
     F "But the venue{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    stop music fadeout 4
     A "We still have time.{w=.5} So,{w=.4} pizza first and then we find a place for your show."
     pause .5
 
     Moe "Someone say pizza?"
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/Venetian Values.ogg' fadein 1
     pause .5
 
     show moe neutral flip behind fang:
@@ -3153,7 +3184,6 @@ label chapter_6:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.65
     Moe "Mister?{w=.5} Young punk ya don’ need ta be so formal."
 
-
     show anon:
         easein_back 1 xalign 0.75
     show moe: