rework ch11A

game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy

@@ -5116,7 +5116,7 @@ label chapter_11:
     show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
     F "You have a spare railgun in your backpack?"
 
-    show farnsworth:
+    show farnsworth concerned:
         easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.6
     with None
     show farnsworth with dissolve

game/script/11A.fang-desperately-wants-to-win-prom-night.rpy

@@ -1,54 +1,64 @@
 label chapter_11A:
     #Announcing a Plan | shooter
-    show anon neutral at aleft
-    show fang neutral at scenter
 
     "I help Fang through the first few questions until she says she has a good grasp on the concept."
 
     "Eventually I’m able to focus on my own work again, making steady progress through the remaining problems."
+    pause .5
 
     "My mind wanders back to the idea of going to Prom."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
 
     "I honestly don’t feel like going."
 
     "Maybe Fang will feel the same about skipping prom and just going to the beach or something."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Hey Fang. Do-"
 
     play music 'audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    A "Hey Fang. Do-"
+    pause .5
 
     "Something’s off with Fang, she’s gazing vacantly into space."
 
     "Her worksheet lies untouched in front of her."
 
-    A "... Fang?"
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Fang?"
+    pause .5
 
-    F "... I’ve decided."
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I’ve decided."
 
     A "Huh?"
-
+    pause .5
-    show fang happy flip at scenter
 
     F "VVURM DRAMA has to play for the school at prom."
 
     F "It’s the only way that everyone will finally see our talent."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Wait, your band? But I thought you broke off last mon-"
 
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
     F "Oh, don’t worry about that."
 
     F "Trish called with the idea last night and I apologized!"
+    pause .5
 
-    A "I-wait, you apologized?"
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    A "I-wait, {i}you{/i} apologized?"
 
+    show fang considering flip with dissolve
     F "Thinking about it again, leaving the band was something of an overreaction on my part."
 
     A "Overreaction? But she-"
-
+    
     F "Trish has been my friend for a long time, and I shouldn’t have been so harsh on her."
 
-    A "Uh… ye-"
+    A "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} ye-{w=.4}{nw}"
 
+    show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "So the band’s back together!"
 
     F "Isn’t that great!?"
@@ -56,6 +66,7 @@ label chapter_11A:
     A "I-I, uh, sure?"
 
     F "So you’ll go to prom to help us play, right?"
+    pause .5
 
     "So much for avoiding it. Fuck me."
 
@@ -63,49 +74,81 @@ label chapter_11A:
 
     A "You sure about Trish though?"
 
-    A "She proba-"
+    A "{cps=*.6}She proba-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
 
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Oh, you can apologize to her at lunch today."
-    stop music
+    stop music fadeout 0.5
+    pause 1
 
-    A "Wh-buh… What?!"
+    show anon:
+        easein_quart 1 xalign -0.1
+    show anon ohshit with Dissolve(.25)
+    A "Wh-buh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} What?!"
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 2
+    pause .5
 
-    play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
     A "Why in the seven fucks would I apologize to her?"
-
+    pause .5
+    
+    show anon unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     A "The janitors have stopped washing my locker since it just gets more dicks drawn on it every day!"
+    pause .5
 
     A "There’s more dicks on my locker than in a pride parade for fucks sake!"
 
+    show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve
     F "It’s easier than just letting it boil, right?"
 
     F "You should be more willing to forgive people."
 
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
     F "Come on, we both have limited friend groups."
 
     F "We can’t afford to burn bridges when we can just accept things, right?"
+    pause .5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "When she puts it like that…"
+    "When she puts it like that."
 
-    A "I… Whatever. Fine."
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
+    A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Whatever. Fine."
+
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05
+    pause .5
 
     "But how she put it."
 
-    "Maybe it’s just me, but she seems a little…"
+    "Maybe it’s just me, but she seems a little{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Frantic."
+    pause .5
 
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.4
+    show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Ohh, thank you so much Anon!"
 
     F "I’ll start looking for a good suit to wear!"
 
+    show fang happy with dissolve
     "Fang yanks her phone out and starts looking through an online catalogue of androgynous formal wear."
+    pause .5
 
     "Well, this can’t be a good sign."
 
-    "Highlight of our time here at Volcano High indeed."
+    "\"Highlight of our time here at Volcano High\" indeed."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    pause 1
+
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    '{cps=*.1}...{/cps}'
+    pause .5
 
     return