finish first pass of chapter 1

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "It’s my first time living close to water."
 
-    "The idea of ‘marine layer’ is new to me,{w=0.5} but I do understand morning mist."
+    "The idea of ‘marine layer’ is new to me,{w=0.4} but I do understand morning mist."
 
     "This was like it, except infinitely more shitty."
 
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     with fade
 
     # play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' # already playing
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg'
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.2
 
     "Instead of using the main entrance Naomi led me to a side entrance.{w=0.7} Inside, the school looked like your stereotypical school hallway."
 
@@ -2216,26 +2216,25 @@ label chapter_1:
     label .finding_naser:
     
     scene hallway with Dissolve(1.5)
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
 
-    "Naser should be around here somewhere, I wanted to talk to him before class."
+    "Naser should be around here somewhere,{w=0.4} I wanted to talk to him before class."
 
     "There’s still a bit of time before the bell."
 
     "But where would Naser be hanging out about now?"
 
-    scene hallway
+    "Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.5} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa-{/cps}{nw}"
 
-    "Maybe near the cafeteria? This place serves breakfa-"
+    unknown "{cps=*0.25}WAOOOH!!{/cps}" with vpunch
 
-    unknown "WAOOOH!!"
+    "With the screech of a banshee,{w=0.3} a blur of purple launches itself onto an unsuspecting student."
-
-    "With the screech of a banshee, a blur of purple launches itself onto an unsuspecting student."
 
     "Everyone in the hallway pauses to watch as a midget of a triceratops attempts to bring down the taller raptor student."
 
-    unknown "IMMAKILLYOUTRIGGA!"
+    unknown "{b}{cps=*2}IMMAKILLYOUTRIGGA!{/cps}{/b}" with vpunch
 
-    "The student body collectively rolls their eyes and continues on, choosing to ignore the pissed off trigga as she finally forces the helpless guy to the floor and sits triumphantly on his chest."
+    "The student body collectively rolls their eyes and continues on,{w=0.3} choosing to ignore the pissed off trigga as she finally forces the helpless guy to the floor and sits triumphantly on his chest."
 
     "I’m pretty sure some would pay good money for this treatment."
 
@@ -2243,7 +2242,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     T "You were there last night weren’t you?!"
 
-    unknown "YES, ALRIGHT, I WAS! GET OFF ME YOU PSYCHO BITCH!"
+    unknown "YES,{w=0.2} ALRIGHT,{w=0.2} I WAS!{w=0.5} GET OFF ME YOU PSYCHO BITCH!"
 
     T "You owe my band an apology!"
 
@@ -2251,154 +2250,204 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     T "If it’s good enough."
 
-    unknown "ALRIGHT, ALRIGHT, I’M SORRY, JUST GET OFF!!"
+    unknown "ALRIGHT,{w=.2} ALRIGHT,{w=.2} I’M SORRY,{w=.4} JUST GET OFF!!"
 
-    "Wait, she’s in the band that played yesterday?"
+    "Wait,{w=0.3} she’s in the band that played yesterday?"
 
-
+    "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} Should get out of here."
-    stop music
-
-    "I… Should get out of here."
 
     "Last thing I need is whatever’s going on here."
 
-    "I discreetly slip away, down the nearest hall."
+    "I discreetly slip away,{w=0.2} down the nearest hall."
+
     scene black with fade
     scene hallway
-    show anon neutral flip at aright
+    show anon neutral flip at acenter
     with fade
-    A "That happen often…?"
+
-    show naser neutral flip at ncenter
+    A "That happen often{cps=*0.1}...?{/cps}"
-    show reed neutral at sleft
+
+    show naser neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.9
+    show reed neutral flip behind naser:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .25
+
     Nas "Does what happen often?"
 
-    show naser neutral at ncenter with dissolve
+    show anon fear:
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.3
 
     A "WAH!"
 
-    "Naser’s leaning against a set of lockers, along with that guy from before."
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
 
-    "The other one’s making a throat-slashing gesture, waving a palm across his neck."
+    # TODO: music?
 
-    A "Uhh… nothing important."
+    "Naser’s leaning against a set of lockers,{w=0.3} along with that guy from before."
 
-    show naser neutral flip at ncenter with dissolve
+    "The other one’s making a throat-slashing gesture,{w=0.3} waving a palm across his neck."
 
-    show reed explanatory with dissolve
+    A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} nothing important."
 
-    unknown "So as I was saying, bro…"
+    show reed:
+        easein_quart 0.8 xalign 1.1
+    pause 0.35
+    show reed neutral:
+        xalign 0.7
+    with dissolve
 
-    unknown "BXR, best tactic in the game, y’know?"
+    show reed explanatory
 
-    show reed neutral with dissolve
+    unknown "So as I was saying,{w=0.1} bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    show naser considering flip with dissolve
 
-    Nas "Erm, yeah... Makes sense, I guess?"
+    unknown "BXR,{w=0.4} best tactic in the game,{w=0.2} y’know?"
 
-    Nas "Anyways, Reed. I’m sorry for how things went last night, I didn’t think those assholes would laugh at you."
+    show reed neutral
+    show naser considering flip 
+    with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    Nas "Erm,{w=0.3} yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} Makes sense,{w=0.2} I guess?"
+
+    show naser unimpressed flip
+
+    Nas "Anyways,{w=0.1} Reed.{w=0.5} I’m sorry for how things went last night,{w=0.4} {cps=*.7}I didn’t think those assholes would laugh at you.{/cps}"
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 0.5
+    show dimmer_light behind anon, naser, reed with dissolve
 
     "Oh."
 
-    show reed unimpressed with dissolve
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    hide dimmer_light with dissolve
+    
+    show naser neutral flip
+    show reed unimpressed 
+    with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    Re "Nah man, s’cool."
+    Re "Nah man,{w=0.3} s’cool."
 
-    Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks, I don't know why a bunch of people came there to watch it"
+    Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks,{w=0.4} I don't know why a bunch of people came there to watch it"
 
-    Nas "Right... And you’re absolutely sure Trish is taking it okay?"
+    Nas "Right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} And you’re absolutely sure Trish is taking it okay?"
 
-    show reed explanatory with dissolve
+    show reed neutral
 
-    Re "Hell yeah, man. Nothin’ goin’ on in the Trish department at all."
+    Re "Hell yeah,{w=0.2} man.{w=0.5} Nothin’ goin’ on in the Trish department at all."
 
-    "Reed suddenly reaches into his pocket and retrieves his phone, tapping away at a shockingly long password."
+    "Reed suddenly reaches into his pocket and retrieves his phone,{w=0.3} tapping away at a shockingly long password."
 
-    show reed shocked with dissolve
+    show reed shocked:
+        easein 0.2 xalign 0.65
 
-    Re "Oh, sick! Right, gotta go. Catch you later, amigo."
+    Re "Oh,{w=0.2} sick!{w=0.6} Right,{w=0.1} gotta go.{w=0.5} Catch you later,{w=0.1} amigo."
 
-    hide reed with moveoutright
+    show naser considering flip behind reed
+    show reed neutral
+    hide reed with easeoutright
 
-    "The raptor bolts before Naser can respond, undoubtedly related to the triceratops."
+    pause 0.5
 
+    "The raptor bolts before Naser can respond,{w=0.4} undoubtedly related to the triceratops."
+
+    pause 0.75
+
+    show naser neutral flip with dissolve
     Nas "Weird guy."
 
-    A "Uh, Naser, I actually wanted to talk to-"
+    A "Uh,{w=0.3} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.4}I actually wanted to talk to-{/cps}{nw}"
 
-    "{i}DING-DONG BING-BONG{/i}"
+    window hide
+    stop ambient fadeout 0.5
+    pause 0.5
 
-    Nas "Crap, can’t miss my homeroom today."
+    "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.4}DONG{w=1.5} BING-{w=0.4}BONG{/i}{/cps}" # TODO: PA bell sfx
+    pause .25
 
-    Nas "Sorry, it’ll have to wait a bit."
+    show naser neutral flip:
+        easein_quad 0.5 xalign 1.7
+    pause .5
 
-    A "It… no, that’s fine."
+    Nas "Crap,{w=0.3} can’t miss my homeroom today."
+
+    Nas "Sorry,{w=0.4} it’ll have to wait a bit."
+
+    A "It{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.5} no,{w=0.3} that’s fine."
 
     A "See you later."
-    hide naser with moveoutleft
+    show naser behind anon:
+        easeout_quad 1.0 xalign 0.2
+    pause 0.5
+    hide naser with dissolve
 
-    stop music
     "Naser heads off down the hall and I go to my own homeroom."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
     scene black with fade
 
 
     label .postCavemanConference:
+    pause 0.5
 
     "The periods pass and eventually it’s lunchtime again."
 
-    "I’ve been focusing a bit less on class, and more on getting a routine down to avoid unwanted confrontation."
+    "I’ve been focusing a bit less on class,{w=0.3} and more on getting a routine down to avoid unwanted confrontation."
 
-    "It’s like it’s only me and the teacher in class, phasing out everyone else."
+    "It’s like it’s only me and the teacher in class,{w=0.3} phasing out everyone else."
 
     scene hallway
     show anon neutral at acenter
     with fade
-    "I follow the flow of students towards the lunchroom, mindlessly looking about the halls."
 
-    "Passing by the athletic awards case, a decent amount of group photos have Naser front and center."
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1
+
+    "I follow the flow of students towards the lunchroom,{w=0.3} mindlessly looking about the halls."
+
+    "Passing by the athletic awards case,{w=0.3} a decent amount of group photos have Naser front and center."
 
     "Apparently this school is pretty well known for their track team."
 
-    "In a similar vein, Naomi is present in a good deal of the photos in the academic achievement case."
+    "In a similar vein,{w=0.2} Naomi is present in a good deal of the photos in the academic achievement case."
 
-    "The last case was reserved for general awards, I guess trophies that don’t belong anywhere else."
+    "The last case was reserved for general awards,{w=0.4} I guess trophies that don’t belong anywhere else."
 
     "The school has a few commendation awards for their efforts to stop bullying."
 
-    "Feh, they pass those around to every school."
+    "Feh,{w=0.4} they pass those around to every school."
 
-    "Looking around, there’s several posters on the walls here."
+    "Looking around,{w=0.2} there’s several posters on the walls here."
 
     "All simple slogans to stop the evil bully menace."
 
-    "A fat lot of good those did me at my old school…"
+    "A fat lot of good those did me at my old school{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "They always went all in with those efforts."
 
     "One time they even got the whole student body into the auditorium to watch a short movie."
 
-    "Some frail, pasty kid gets pestered by a chubby, buff bully."
+    "Some frail,{w=0.3} pasty kid gets pestered by a chubby,{w=0.3} buff bully."
 
-    "The kid ended up trying to run away and got hit by a car, with the credits scrolling over a scene in the hospital."
+    "The kid ended up trying to run away and got hit by a car,{w=0.4} with the credits scrolling over a scene in the hospital."
 
-    "Everyone in class just said things like ‘man, good thing I’m not like that bully.’, ‘yeah, if I ever see a bully like that I’ll help the kid!’"
+    "Everyone in class just said things like{w=0.3} \"Man,{w=0.2} good thing I’m not like that bully.\",{w=0.4} \"Yeah,{w=0.4} if I ever see a bully like that I’ll help the kid!\""
 
     "Then they went right back to talking about me."
 
     stop music
 
-    "... No use feeling bad about the past."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps} No use feeling bad about the past."
 
     scene cafeteria
     show anon neutral at acenter
     with fade
+
     "I’m here now."
 
     "With the lunch card in my possession I’m able to snag something actually edible."
 
-
+    "I should run the math on how much I’ll end up owing,{w=0.4} but I feel more like indulging myself."
-    "I should run the math on how much I’ll end up owing, but I feel more like indulging myself."
 
     menu:
         "Grab the cookies you fatass":
@@ -2411,107 +2460,164 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Looking around for a place to sit I see the aggravating creamsicle waving at me."
 
-
+    play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg' volume 0.75 fadein 0.05
-    play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg'
 
     "Next to her is Naser with a complicated expression."
 
-    Nas "{i}I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-{/i}"
+    Nas "{i}{cps=*.7}I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-{/cps}{/i}"
 
-    "Shit. I go and sit across from Naser and Naomi."
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
+
+    "Shit.{w=0.5} I go and sit across from Naser and Naomi."
 
     scene cafeteria
     show anon neutral at aleft
     show naomi neutral flip at sright
-    show naser sad flip:
+    show naser sad flip behind naomi:
-      xalign 0.4 yalign 0.0
+      xalign 0.7 yalign -0.1
     with fade
+
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show naomi explanatory flip
+
     N "I see you’re making use of the lunch card."
 
-    A "Yyyyeeeaaaaah…"
+    show naomi neutral flip
 
-    N "But all those sugars! All that is bad for your health, Anon. This school’s vegan options-"
+    A "{cps=*.4}Yyyyeeeaaaaah...{/cps}"
+
+    show naomi explanatory flip
+
+    N "But all those sugars!{w=0.5} All that is bad for your health,{w=0.2} Anon.{w=0.4} This school’s vegan options-"
 
     "I tune her out with the help of a crunchy sugar cookie."
 
+    show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
+
     "A glance at Naser and I notice that he’s just poking at his pasta."
 
-    N "Naser sweetie, you shouldn’t play with your food."
+    show naomi:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.95
+    pause 0.5
 
-    show naser neutral with dissolve
+    N "Naser sweetie,{w=0.4} you shouldn’t play with your food."
 
-    Nas "Huhwha- OH! Anon, what’s up?"
+    show naomi:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 1.0
+    pause 0.5
 
-    A "Not much. And you?"
+    show naser neutral flip
+    Nas "Huhwha-{w=0.6}{nw}"
+    show naser:
+        easein_quad 0.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.75
+    Nas "Huhwha-{fast} OH!{w} Anon,{w=0.4} what’s up?"
 
-    Nas "Yeah no, totally good!"
+    A "Not much.{w=0.5} And you?"
+
+    show naser happy flip
+    Nas "Yeah no,{w=0.3} totally good!"
 
     "His following laugh sounds hollow."
 
-    N "Naser…"
+    show naomi sad flip with dissolve
-    show naomi sad flip
+
-    show naser sad flip
+    N "Naser{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    with dissolve
+
-    Nas "Yeah yeah. It’s just…"
+    show naser sad flip with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+
+    Nas "Yeah{w=0.1} yeah.{w=0.5} It’s just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show naser angry flip with dissolve
 
-    Nas "Fang stayed home today. The concert was a shitshow and wanted to avoid everyone. I knew I shouldn’t have invited all those guys."
+    Nas "Fang stayed home today.{w=0.6} The concert was a shitshow and they wanted to avoid everyone.{w=0.7} I knew I shouldn’t have invited all those guys."
 
     show naser sad flip with dissolve
 
+    show naomi:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.95
+    pause 0.5
+
     "Naomi places a comforting hand on his shoulder."
 
-    A "I uh… Yeah… That crowd was harsh."
+    A "I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} That crowd was harsh."
 
     Nas "What happened after I left?"
 
     "Naser looks at me pitifully."
 
-    Nas "Trish gave me a general idea, but I have to know…"
+    Nas "Trish gave me a general idea,{w=0.3} but I have to know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    Sp "{i}You are not the only person in the world.{/i}"
+    pause .5
+    Sp "{cps=*.6}{i}You are not the only person in the world.{/i}{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Ah, shit."
+    "Ah,{w=0.4} shit."
 
-    A "The band never made it past the first song. Someone said they ‘still’ sucked. "
+    pause 0.75
 
-    show naser angry flip with dissolve
+    A "The band never made it past the first song.{w=0.6} Someone said they ‘still’ sucked."
-    show naomi shocked flip with dissolve
+
+    show naser angry flip:
+        easein_quad 0.5 xalign 0.7
+    pause 0.75
 
     "Naser grits his teeth."
 
-    A "Whoa whoa, calm down man."
+    show anon:
+        easein_quad 0.5 xalign -0.05
+    show naomi shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    Nas "What else? Did they say anything about Fang?!"
+    A "Whoa{w=0.1} whoa,{w=0.3} calm down man."
 
-    unknown "{i}NO ONE WOULD WANT TO FUCK YOU, BITCH!{/i}"
+    Nas "What else?{w=0.5} Did they say anything about Fang?!"
 
-    A "...Yeah… I don’t think you’d want to hear it though…"
+    unknown "{cps=*.7}{i}NO ONE WOULD WANT TO FUCK YOU,{w=0.3} BITCH!{/i}{/cps}"
 
-    Nas "And? What happened after! I’m gonna kick all their asses!"
+    A "{cps=*.4}...Yeah...{/cps}{w=0.4} I don’t think you’d want to hear it though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    Nas "And?{w=0.5} What happened after?!{w}{nw}"
+
+    show naser angry flip:
+        linear 0.05 xalign 0.695
+        linear 0.05 xalign 0.705
+        repeat
+
+    Nas "And? What happened after?!{fast} I’m gonna kick all their asses!" with vpunch
+
+    show naomi:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.9
+    pause 0.5
     N "Naser! Please calm yourself!"
 
     "{i}I realize now that I had been laughing with them.{/i}"
 
-    A "I left after that. Principal Spears was fucking pissed. Even threatened to suplex them."
+    show naser:
+        linear 0.2 xalign .7
+
+    A "I left after that.{w=0.5} Principal Spears was fucking pissed.{w=0.5} Even threatened to suplex them."
 
     show naser sad flip
     show naomi unimpressed flip
     with dissolve
+
     "Naser sags, emotionally spent."
 
-    Nas "Haaaaah.... Fuck… So that’s why she stayed home…"
+    show naser:
+        easein_quart 1 yalign 0.05
 
-    N "If Fang wishes to stay home then that is her prerogative. You just need to give her some time, Naser."
+    Nas "{cps=*.3}Haaaaah....{/cps}{w=0.3} Fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.5} So that’s why she stayed home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    show naomi considering flip with dissolve
+    show naomi considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    N "If Fang wishes to stay home then that is her prerogative.{w=0.6} You just need to give her some time,{w=0.3} Naser."
 
     "While she said that I noticed a strange expression cross over Naomi’s face."
 
-    Nas "I know babe. I just wish I could help them more."
+    Nas "I know babe.{w=.5} I just wish I could help them more."
 
-    A "Yeah. If you need any help Naser, I owe ya for the pizza."
+    A "Yeah.{w=0.4} If you need any help Naser,{w=0.4} I owe ya for the pizza."
 
+    # and CUT :^)
     return