rework ch4 opening scene, add new cafeteria ambience

game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy

@@ -680,12 +680,11 @@ label chapter_3:
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
     I "GOOD LORD HE’S HEAVY." with vpunch
+    stop music fadeout 2
     pause .5
 
     N "Alright,{w=.4} the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side,{w=.4} near the front desk."
 
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-
     I "I’m clenching my face too much to be able to speak,{w=.4} I can only get a slight nod out."
 
     I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -742,8 +741,7 @@ label chapter_3:
     show anon:
         alpha 1 yalign 0.1
 
-
-    unknown "{cps=*.3}Judgement{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    unknown "{cps=*.25}Judgement{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show anon:
         easein 0.5 xalign 0.8
@@ -754,7 +752,7 @@ label chapter_3:
     show stella:
         easein 1 xalign 0.35
     show stella considering with Dissolve(.25)
-    unknown "Karma?{w=.6} No.{w=.6} No,{w=.4} maybe second chance?"
+    unknown "Karma?{w=.6} No.{w=.75} No,{w=.4} maybe second chance?"
 
     I "She draws closer,{w=.4} a contemplative expression on her face."
 
@@ -782,10 +780,10 @@ label chapter_3:
     pause .5
 
     A "Still lost."
-    pause .25
+    pause .5
 
-    show stella explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
-    unknown "It’s you.{w=.6} Your card.{w=.6} You are on the precipice of a great ordeal.{w=.6} Many difficult points of divergence and contention are coming your way.{w=.6} Reflect on them."
+    show stella explanatory
+    unknown "It’s you.{w=.6} Your card.{w=.75} You are on the precipice of a great ordeal.{w=.6} Many difficult points of divergence and contention are coming your way.{w=.75} Reflect on them."
     show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
     I "I think about asking the green weirdo to make sense,{w=.4} but the bell is about to ring."
@@ -1021,6 +1019,7 @@ label chapter_3:
 
     # TODO: cheesy record scratch?
     stop music fadeout 0.1
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 1
 
     I "Uhp"
 
@@ -1033,6 +1032,7 @@ label chapter_3:
     F "What was that?"
     pause .5
     
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
     play music 'audio/OST/fighter.ogg' fadein 1.0
     A "{cps=*.2}Nuthin’{/cps}"
 
@@ -1383,6 +1383,7 @@ label chapter_3:
 
     I "I don’t know what just happened."
 
+    # TODO: this track doesn't loop very gracefully
     play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 2
     pause .5
     show anon sad
@@ -1934,7 +1935,7 @@ label chapter_3:
     show trish surprised flip with Dissolve(.25)
     T "We what?!{w=.5} {nw}"
     show trish unimpressed flip
-    extend "Fang,{w=.4} from him!"
+    extend "Fang,{w=.4} from him?"
 
     # temporarily commented out due to script document disparity
     # Re "Like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} He’s alright but{cps=*.1}...{/cps} like, for real?"

game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy

@@ -1,13 +1,11 @@
 label chapter_4:
-    #Music class
 
-    play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 2
+    # CH 4 SCENE 1 - Anon is one slice of toast away from living an anime
     pause 1
 
-    I "-- The Following Monday Morning --"
-    pause .5
-
-    scene outside school fog with Fade(0,0,2)
+    play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 2
+    scene outside school fog with Fade(1,0,1)
+    I "{cps=*.3}-- The Following Monday Morning --{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     I "I haven’t been able to focus much lately."
@@ -15,83 +13,160 @@ label chapter_4:
 
     I "My original plan is in absolute tatters."
 
-    I "As opposed to staying silent and not facing any conflict, I’m now all buddy-buddy with the school reject club."
+    I "As opposed to staying silent and not facing any conflict,{w=.4} I’m now all buddy-buddy with the school reject club."
 
-    I "And then there’s Naser and Naomi as well, and all their issues…"
+    I "And then there’s Naser and Naomi as well,{w=.4} and all their issues{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    I "At any moment I feel I’m going to get found out."
+    I "At any moment I feel I'm going to get found out."
 
     I "Trish would certainly beat me senseless."
 
-    I "Fang might as well…"
+    I "Fang might as well{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     I "Definitely Naser."
     pause .5
 
-    I "All this shit happening, I can’t even get into my favorite hobby."
+    I "All this shit happening,{w=.4} I can’t even get into my favorite hobby."
 
     I "I don’t think I’ve made a single forum post in three days."
+    pause .5
 
     I "I stare down at my phone screen and see a sea of threads to post in."
 
-    I "And yet, I have nothing to say."
+    I "And yet,{w=.4} I have nothing to say."
     pause .5
 
-    I "Wait, it’s already seven?!"
+    I "Wait,{w=.3} it’s already seven?!"
 
-    I "Fuck me, I dragged my feet too much!"
+    I "Fuck me,{w=.4} I dragged my feet too much!"
 
     I "I sprint the rest of the way to school."
-    scene classroom with fade
-    I "Luckily, I’m able to slink into homeroom without the teacher molesting me for a tardy pass."
-    I "Classes tick by in the daily slog, and like all things, lunch eventually comes to pass."
-    scene cafeteria with dissolve
-    show anon neutral flip  at sright
-    I "I grab a packaged lunch from the omnivore line and begin looking for a place to sit."
-    I "By now it’s a foregone conclusion, I already know what happens next."
 
-    # TODO: play west coast kicking
+    scene classroom with fade
+
+    I "Luckily,{w=.3} I’m able to slink into homeroom without the teacher molesting me for a tardy pass."
+
+    I "Classes tick by in the daily slog,{w=.4} and like all things,{w=.4} lunch eventually comes to pass."
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCafeteriaLoop.ogg' fadein 2
+    scene cafeteria
+    show anon neutral at aright
+    with fade
+
+    I "I grab a packaged lunch from the omnivore line and begin looking for a place to sit."
+
+    I "By now it’s a foregone conclusion,{w=.4} I already know what happens next."
+    pause .25
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
+    play music 'audio/ost/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 1
+    pause .5
 
     N "Anon!"
+    pause .5
+
     I "Right on cue."
-    show naomi neutral at sleft with moveinleft
-    show naser neutral behind nanomi with moveinleft:
-       xalign 0.25 yalign -0.0
-    I "Naomi rushes over, followed by Naser. I’d really rather not deal with her anymore today."
-    N "Come on, Anon, let's continue our conversation from earlier!"
-    I "I need to think of something, and fast."
-    A "Err, sorry. I already promised Fang I’d be eating with her."
+
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+
+    show naomi neutral:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.75
+    show naomi:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.4
+    with dissolve
+    show naser neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -1
+    show naser:
+        easein 1.5 xalign -0.275
+    with dissolve
+    
+    I "Naomi rushes over,{w=.4} followed by Naser.{w=.6} I’d really rather not deal with her anymore today."
+
+    show naomi explanatory
+    N "Come on,{w=.2} Anon,{w=.4} let's continue our conversation from earlier!"
+    show naomi neutral
+
+    I "I need to think of something,{w=.4}  and fast."
+
+    A "Err,{w=.3} sorry.{w=.4} I already promised Fang I’d be eating with her."
+    pause .5
+
     I "Smooth."
-    N "Oh..."
-    I "Oh!"
-    I "I’m glad to hear you’re trying to be better friends with Fang!"
-    Nas "Well hey, this is a welcome surprise!"
-    A "Right. Actually, she doesn’t eat in the cafeteria, does she?"
-    Nas "Didn’t she tell you? She hangs out with her band in the auditorium."
+    pause .25
+
+    show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
+    N "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show naomi neutral
+    N "Oh!"
+
+    show naomi explanatory
+    N "I’m glad to hear you’re trying to be better friends with Fang!"
+    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    show naser happy
+    Nas "Well hey,{w=.4} this is a welcome surprise!"
+
+    A "Right.{w=.4} Actually,{w=.2} she doesn’t eat in the cafeteria,{w=.4} does she?"
+
+    show naser neutral
+    Nas "Didn’t she tell you?{w=.4} She hangs out with her band in the auditorium."
+
     A "She’s allowed to do that?"
-    N "I’ve asked Principal Spears before, he sees no issue with it."
-    A "Huh. Anyways, I uh… Don’t want to keep them waiting!"
+
+    show naser considering
+    N "I’ve asked Principal Spears before,{w=.4} he sees no issue with it."
+
+    A "Huh.{w=.4} Anyways,{w=.2} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Don’t want to keep them waiting!"
+
+    show naser happy
     Nas "See you."
+
+    show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
+    show naomi:
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
     N "Have fun!"
-    A "Right. Bye!"
-    hide naser with moveoutleft
-    hide naomi with moveoutleft
-    I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind in the cafeteria."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Right.{w=.3} Bye!"
+
+    show anon:
+        easeout 1 xalign 1.5
+    pause .1
+    show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    hide anon with dissolve
+
+    I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind."
     
     # TODO: scene door auditorium
     
-    scene auditorium
-    I "Now that i’m in front of the auditorium when it isn’t crowded for once, I can get a decent look around the foyer."
-    I "The walls are as vine-covered as anywhere else in the building, but the ones here have small magenta flowers blooming on them here and there."
-    I "I suppose there’s different kinds of vines, wouldn’t make much sense otherwise. Never really thought about it until now."
-    I "I peer into the small window in the door to see Fang’s gang lazing about within. Reed is messing with some box on a table, and Fang and Trish are sitting on the first row of seats chattering to each other."
-    I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit. Then I pull it open."
+    scene door auditorium with fade
 
-    # TODO: scene auditorium
+    I "Now that i’m in front of the auditorium when it isn’t crowded for once,{w=.4} I can get a decent look around the foyer."
+
+    I "The walls are as vine-covered as anywhere else in the building,{w=.4} but the ones here have small magenta flowers blooming on them here and there."
+
+    I "I suppose there’s different kinds of vines,{w=.4} wouldn’t make much sense otherwise.{w=.5} Never really thought about it until now."
+    pause .5
+
+    I "I open the door enough to see Fang’s gang lazing about within."
+
+    I "Reed is messing with some box on a table,{w=.4} and Fang and Trish are sitting on the first row of seats chattering to each other."
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+
+    I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit.{w=.4} Then I pull it open."
+
+    # CH 4 SCENE 2 -
+
+    scene auditorium with Dissolve(1)
 
     I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium, and immediately all three turn their heads and stare."
+
     I "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long. Eventually Fang calls out from her seat."
+
     show fang shocked at scenter with dissolve
 
     # TODO: sound direction says play She Fucks Human Men, resolve this
@@ -226,7 +301,7 @@ label chapter_4:
     I "Define a Treble clef?  I don’t know what a Treble clef is!  I don’t care about this shit, it won’t ever be useful."
     I "Fuck this, who can I cheat off of?"
     I "I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place."
-    N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}"
+    N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}" # TODO: is this from a previous line? If so can't find it
     I "I crane my head, looking for Fang. At her own desk she’s filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like she’s strumming honestly."
     I "Agh, and that’s another thing. Who the fuck made guitars?! Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck."
     I "Oh shit, she’s looking at me now."