yet more ch1 tweaks

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -1477,7 +1477,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "Like a poorly oiled machine until it runs out of fuel with a noisy slurp."
 
-    I "Soon enough it's time to leave for school.{w=0.5} I grab my backpack and slide it over my shoulders.{w=0.5}  I take my jacket off the hanger and"
+    I "Soon enough it's time to leave for school.{w=0.5} I grab my backpack and slide it over my shoulders.{w} I take my jacket off the hanger and"
 
     show anon unimpressed with dissolve
 
@@ -1699,7 +1699,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     T "Screw you!"
 
-    show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    show naser neutral flip with dissolve
 
     T "Even if you weren’t trying to mess with Fang!"
 
@@ -1814,7 +1814,7 @@ label chapter_1:
         easein 0.25 xalign 0.1
     pause 0.25
 
-    N "No!{w=0.5} Contraband!{w=0.5} In your backpack!"
+    N "No!{w=0.5} {cps=*.4}{i}Contra{/i}band!{/cps}{w=0.5} In your backpack!"
 
     Re "{cps=*0.2}Hmmm...{/cps}{w=0.4}{nw}"
     show reed explanatory flip
@@ -1832,7 +1832,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Re "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}But we aren’t in Britain?"
 
-    show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+    show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.75)
 
     N "Ugh,{w=0.3} you’re impossible{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -2129,7 +2129,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     stop music 
     play ambient '<from 0.1 to 0.7>audio/effects/tinnitus.wav' fadein 5 volume 0.25 # TODO: use Spears yell + tinnitus SFX
 
-    Sp "NAOMI!!" with vpunch
+    Sp "{b}NAOMI!!{/b}" with vpunch
 
     pause 0.5
 
@@ -2421,6 +2421,8 @@ label chapter_1:
         easein_quad 0.5 xalign 1.7
     pause .5
 
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
+
     Nas "Crap,{w=0.3} can’t miss my homeroom today."
 
     Nas "Sorry,{w=0.4} it’ll have to wait a bit."
@@ -2437,6 +2439,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
     scene black with fade