14D Choreography Overdo

game/script/14D.gold-ending.rpy

@@ -84,9 +84,9 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Hey Reed, what’s happening?"
 
-    A "You seem to certainly have uh…{w=0.2} changed."
+    A "You seem to certainly have uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} changed."
 
-    A "Why do you look like uh…{w=0.2} I don’t want to sound rude or anything, but…"
+    A "Why do you look like uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I don’t want to sound rude or anything, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "You look homeless, Reed."
 
@@ -98,22 +98,22 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     Re "What’d you say, man?"
 
-    A "What?{w=0.2} Nothing. No idea what you’re talking about."
+    A "What?{w=0.2} Nothing.{w=0.1} No idea what you’re talking about."
 
     A "So, how did you get to become the 'richest raptor in the world'?"
 
     Re "You wouldn’t believe it, man!"
 
-    Re "See, it all started with…"
+    Re "See, it all started with{cps=*.12}...{/cps}"
 
     "Reed proceeds to run his mouth off about a bunch of gibberish."
 
     "I cannot understand anything he's saying."
 
     "I think I heard ‘pharmaceutical business’ at one point?"
-    pause 0.3
+    pause 0.2
 
-    Re "...and then I was brought here by the birds, dude."
+    Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}and then I was brought here by the birds, dude."
 
     Re "So what’ve you been up to, man?"
 
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "It’s not as exciting as your story, honestly."
 
-    A "I just went off to college, got my bachelor’s, and now I’m just a sound engineer."
+    A "I just went off to college,{w=.1} got my bachelor’s,{w=.1} and now I’m just a sound engineer."
 
     Re "Sounds pretty sweet, dude."
     show reed future neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -136,7 +136,8 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "Definitely,{w=0.2} I need some air conditioning."
 
     "We quickly moved along to the gymnasium."
-    scene reunion with fade
+    pause .2
+    scene reunion with dissolve
     A "Man, it really hasn’t changed. Takes me back."
     show anond neutral at aleft
     show reed future explanatory flip at rright:
@@ -150,8 +151,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "No, didn’t know I had to."
 
     "Reed gestures to the sign-in table."
-    scene reunion with fade
+
-    show anond neutral at aleft with easeinleft
+    scene black with dissolve
+    scene reunion with dissolve
+
+    show anond neutral:
+        yalign 0.1
+        xalign -1.20
+        ease_cubic 2.1 xalign 0.3
     "The clerk is crouched behind the table sorting through a box."
 
     "I go over to write in my John Hancock and the person behind the counter stands up."
@@ -159,11 +166,19 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "My nose is assaulted by the pheronomes of perfumes that probably cost more than a years' salary."
 
     show naomi future at sright with dissolve
+    show naomi:
+        pause .1
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.12
+        ease_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
+
     N "Oh!"
 
-    N "Anon, you made it!"
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.85
 
-    A "Yeah, I did."
+    N "Anon,{w=.1} you made it!"
+
+    A "Yeah,{w=.1} I did."
 
     A "Life been treating you well?"
 
@@ -173,7 +188,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Real shame about his last presidential run."
 
-    N "Oh, he got over it."
+    N "Oh,{w=.1} he got over it."
 
     N "There’s always 2028!"
 
@@ -187,7 +202,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     N "No, I lost touch with him about three years ago."
 
-    A "Oh, sorry. How about work, then?"
+    A "Oh, sorry.{w=.2} How about work, then?"
 
     N "I haven’t been working, mostly staying back at home and looking after the kids."
 
@@ -205,19 +220,31 @@ label chapter_14D:
     stop music fadeout 3
     play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdInteriorLoop.ogg' fadein 3
 
+    scene black with Dissolve(0.5)
+    pause 1.0
     scene reunion
-    show anond neutral at aleft
+    show reed future neutral:
-    show reed future neutral flip at rcenter
+        xalign 0.0
-    with fade
+        yalign 0.1
+    show anond neutral:
+        yalign 0.1
+        xalign -0.3
+    with dissolve
     "I go rejoin Reed and we enter the gymnasium together."
 
     "The setup is rather similar to that prom night all those years ago, albeit without the foreign decor."
 
     "Young men and women mingle with small drinks and party foods across the floor."
 
-    Re "Man, those look good. Come over here, I’ll get you a drink, on me."
+    Re "Man, those look good.{w=.15} Come over here, I’ll get you a drink, on me."
 
-    "I follow him over to the minibar. Trish is sitting in one of the seats, huddled over an empty glass."
+    show anond:
+        pause .15
+        ease_cubic 0.90 xalign 0.05
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.85 xalign 0.25
+
+    "I follow him over to the minibar.{w=.15} Trish is sitting in one of the seats, huddled over an empty glass."
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -225,13 +252,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
     stop ambient fadeout 1
     play music "audio/OST/Ramo de Rosas.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
-    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed with easeinright:
+    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed:
-        xalign 0.75
+        xalign 2.3
+        easein_cubic 2.0 xalign 1.25
     pause .5
 
     "Rosa is pouring drinks for the few other drunkards when she spots us approach."
 
-    Ro "Oh! An-on, it is great to see you after all this time!"
+    Ro "Oh!{w=0.2} An-on, it is great to see you after all this time!"
 
     Ro "Please, sit and talk awhile!"
 
@@ -239,19 +267,21 @@ label chapter_14D:
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show reed future at rright:
+    show anond:
-        xalign 1.5
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign -0.1
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.15
     show rosa future flip at sright:
-        xalign 1.0
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 1.35
-    with ease
+    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter with dissolve:
-    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter with dissolve
+        xalign 0.75
     pause .5
 
     "She looks up from her sulking and her face lights up at the sight of us."
 
-    T "Anon! It’s been years!"
+    T "Anon!{w=0.3} It’s been years!"
 
-    A "Trish, Rosa, glad we found you here!"
+    A "Trish, Rosa,{w=0.2} glad we found you here!"
 
     Re "Come on man, we’ve been texting this whole time."
 
@@ -275,7 +305,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Rosa instinctively rubs her own horn."
 
-    A "H-hollow?"
+    A "H-{w=0.2}hollow?"
 
     T "Of course, I even got in contact with a sculptor and figured out how to make them whistle in the wind!"
 
@@ -295,7 +325,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     T "It’s not even that bloody, I only hire the best."
 
-    A "B-bloody?"
+    A "B-{w=0.2}bloody?"
 
     T "What, never had a piercing before? Same thing."
 
@@ -309,12 +339,25 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "I look up to see the one person I’m most anxious and excited to talk with again approaching."
 
     play music "audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    show anond neutral flip with ease:
-        xalign 0.1
     A "Fang! You’re here!"
-    show fang d shock with easeinleft:
+    show fang d shock:
-     xalign -0.7
+        xalign -2.2
-    F "Wha- {w=0.2}I- {w=0.2}dammit Anon, I told you to stop calling me that!"
+        easein_cubic 0.89 xalign -0.65
+    show anond:
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.15
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.725
+    show rosa:
+        ease_cubic 0.65 xalign 1.45
+    show trish:
+        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.875
+    with None
+
+    pause 0.0001
+    show reed future neutral flip with dissolve
+    show anond neutral flip with dissolve
+
+    F "Wha-{w=0.2} I-{w=0.2} dammit Anon,{w=0.2} I told you to stop calling me that!"
 
     Re "Isn’t that the name Lucy used back in senior year?"
 
@@ -332,7 +375,8 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
-    scene d03 with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
+    scene d03 with dissolve
 
     Re "C’mon, get over here. I’ll order us all another watchamacallit of drinks. It’s on me, the richest raptor in the {cps=*0.3}woooorld{/cps}!"
 
@@ -354,7 +398,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "I feel like we’re missing someone."
 
-    A "Where’s Spears? I could have sworn he would be here."
+    A "Where’s Spears?{w=.1} I could have sworn he would be here."
 
     Re "Nah man, he’s gone. I saw him on TV the other day, though."
 
@@ -364,7 +408,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     Re "He’s built a reputation for his gimmick of wrecking a car every ad he does."
 
-    A "I…{w=0.3} I see."
+    A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I see."
 
     "Oh god I thought that was a joke about slamming people into cars."
 
@@ -375,8 +419,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
     show anond neutral at aleft
     show reed future neutral flip at rcenter:
         xalign 0.6
-    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter:
+    show trish future neutral at tcenter:
-        xalign 0.8
+        xalign 0.75
+    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed:
+        xalign 1.3
     with dissolve
     "She goes up onstage and tests the microphone, getting everyone’s attention."
 
@@ -390,29 +436,25 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "She puts the mic back on its stand and jumps offstage."
 
-    show fang d happy with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.7
-
     "Reed pats my shoulder."
 
     Re "You got a ride home, man?"
 
     A "I can walk, but thanks."
 
-    show fang d happy flip with dissolve:
+    show fang d happy:
-     xalign -0.7
+        xalign -2.2
-    # pause 0.2
+        easein_cubic 1.11 xalign -0.65
-    hide fang d happy flip with easeoutleft
     "Lucy returns to the minibar, where Rosa is waiting with the last of the alcohol."
 
     T "There it is."
-    show rosa future flip at sright with easeinright:
+
-        xalign 1.3
+    show trish future neutral flip with dissolve
-    show fang d happy with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.7
 
     Re "Alright, great seeing you guys. I’ll bounce."
 
+    show trish future smug flip with dissolve
+
     T "We should all meet again for lunch sometime!"
 
     A "Yeah, absolutely. It’s been forever since I’ve been in town, would love to get a tour of what’s new."
@@ -431,7 +473,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     T "See you guys."
     hide trish with dissolve
-    Ro "Come visit me too, An-on. Stella and I would love to have you."
+    Ro "Come visit me too, An-on.{w=.1} Stella and I would love to have you."
 
     hide rosa with dissolve
 
@@ -445,10 +487,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
     N "Oh, don’t worry about it! It was nice getting to act like a class representative again."
 
     show naomi future flip at sright with dissolve
-    hide naomi future with easeoutright
+    show naomi:
+        easeout_cubic 1.0 xalign 2.75
+
     "The Plastic Persimmon waves and lets the door swing closed with an echoing *clang*."
 
-    A "Sooo… {w=0.3}Just the two of us…"
+    hide naomi
+
+    A "Sooo{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.1}Just the two of us{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "Damn you Anon and damn you Bill Withers."
 
@@ -458,7 +504,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Lucy holds up a plastic bag that *clink*s with each shake."
 
-    F "I was gonna offer you the last of these… {w=0.3}Buuuut…"
+    F "I was gonna offer you the last of these{cps=*.12}...{/cps} Buuuut{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Hey now, let’s not let those go to waste."
 
@@ -466,11 +512,11 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Rooftop?"
 
-    F "Rooftop. {w=0.3}Now."
+    F "Rooftop.{w=0.3} Now."
 
     "She leads the way through the darkened school hallways and stairwell."
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
 
     "I can picture all the old posters from my time here along the walls."
 
@@ -478,9 +524,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
     stop music fadeout 3.0
     play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     label kino:
-    scene roof night with fade
+    scene roof night with dissolve
     show fang d neutral at sleft
-    show anond neutral flip at sright
+    show anond neutral flip at sright:
+        xalign 0.8
     "The door is booted open and the night air has finally cooled down to something breathable now."
 
     "I turn to the ladder on the side of the stair enclosure and climb up."
@@ -492,11 +539,11 @@ label chapter_14D:
     play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "And with the stars above and no moon I would say the view is picturesque."
 
-    F "Oi, you gonna hog the drinks?"
+    F "Oi,{w=.1} you gonna hog the drinks?"
 
     "I take out a pair of bottles, using one to pop the cap off the other."
 
-    F "Show-off. They’re twist-offs, ya know."
+    F "Show-off.{w=.2} They’re twist-offs, ya know."
 
     "To prove her point she takes the capped one and simply twists it’s top off."
 
@@ -504,7 +551,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     show fang d happy with dissolve
 
-    F "Pfffft. Anyways."
+    F "Pfffft.{w=0.2} Anyways."
 
     A "A toast!"
 
@@ -518,7 +565,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Oh?"
 
-    "I’m already handing her a second bottle, knowing that she’ll finish her first with her next chug."
+    "I’m already handing her a second bottle,{w=.1} knowing that she’ll finish her first with her next chug."
 
     A "I guess you’ve been busy."
 
@@ -526,7 +573,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Dealing with teens is a fuckin’ nightmare."
 
-    F "There’s this one brat, Kenny. The little shit has broken two trumpets already."
+    F "There’s this one brat, Kenny.{w=.15} The little shit has broken two trumpets already."
 
     A "Can’t be that bad."
 
@@ -534,7 +581,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Lucy’s rant went on for what felt like an hour."
 
-    "Though judging by the pile of beer bottles, it couldn’t have been more than twenty minutes."
+    "Though judging by the pile of beer bottles,{w=.1} it couldn’t have been more than twenty minutes."
 
     F "-at the fucking dance of all places."
 
@@ -548,13 +595,23 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Bullshit."
 
-    A "For real! You were just as bad!"
+    A "For real!{w=.1} You were just as bad!"
 
+    #still -ob
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.55
+        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.0
+    pause .3
+    show anond:
+        pause .02
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.82
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.8
     "Lucy’s elbow finds it’s familiar spot in my side."
 
+
     F "Nuh uh."
 
-    A "Yeah huh.{w=0.4} Faaaaang."
+    A "Yeah huh.{w=0.2} {cps=*.5}Faaaaang.{/cps}"
 
     "She groans and hides her face in her knees."
 
@@ -562,20 +619,20 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Trish."
 
-    F "Mrrrr… {w=0.3}Okay, so maybe we were that bad."
+    F "Mrrrr{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} Okay, so maybe we were that bad."
 
     A "That’s life for ya."
 
     "She sighs and relaxes. Her legs stretch forward and she leans back on her arms."
 
-    F "Yeah…"
+    F "Yeah{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "That’s life…"
+    F "That’s life{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     "I mimic her pose and find myself staring at the small dots spreading across the night sky."
     stop music fadeout 5.0
 
-    A "Teacher at your alma mater. Wasn’t really expecting that, ya know."
+    A "Teacher at your alma mater.{w=.25} Wasn’t really expecting that, ya know."
 
     F "And you as a sound engineer?{w=0.3} Pffft, I figured you’d be making a sexbot or something."
 
@@ -585,23 +642,23 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     play music "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Demo.ogg" fadein 1.0
     stop ambient fadeout 5
-    A "Hey, Lucy…"
+    A "Hey, Lucy{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I keep my eyes on the stars, even when Lucy turns to look at me."
 
     "I can feel heat creep across my face."
 
-    A "I got a contract with a studio here. I’m thinking…"
+    A "I got a contract with a studio here. I’m thinking{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Since I’ll be here for a good while, how about we get some dinner sometime."
 
-    A "Y’know…{w=0.3} together…"
+    A "Y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} together{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     "I look at Lucy at last."
 
     "Her face is turned back to the sky, but there’s a dusting of pink across her cheeks."
 
-    F "I would…{w=0.3} I totally would, Anon…"
+    F "I would{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} I totally would, Anon{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     F "But I’ve got work like you wouldn’t believe."
     show fang d neutral with dissolve
@@ -635,7 +692,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "I know."
     #play music
     play music 'audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Live.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    scene d04b with fade
+    scene d04b with dissolve
 
     "That didn’t stop Lucy from shuffling closer until our legs were pressed together."
 
@@ -651,7 +708,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Thanks, now my face is forever stuck in a cringe, Anon."
 
-    A "...Way to ruin the moment Fang."
+    A "{cps=*.2}...{/cps}Way to ruin the moment Fang."
 
     F "You ruined it first with your mumbling."
 
@@ -660,7 +717,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     F "You ruined it, you fix it."
 
     A "Fine I will."
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
     "My hand cups her cheek gently."
 
     "Lucy smiles and leans in."
@@ -668,11 +725,15 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "Ah, I missed this feeling."
 
     "Our lips meld together as we embrace just like we were teens again."
+
     $ quick_menu = False
+    scene black with fade
+    pause .5
+
     window hide
-    scene e4of4 with fade
+    scene e4of4 with Dissolve(1.0)
     stop music fadeout 15.0
     pause 16
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with Dissolve(1.0)
     pause 1
     return