13C revision

game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy

@@ -2301,50 +2301,23 @@ label chapter_13C:
     show fang sad with dissolve
     "Lucy stirs like she just got stabbed in the heart."
 
-    Lucy "Fuck... that hurts like hell."
+    #I hate google docs, this is “” a mistake
+    Lucy "Fuck... that hurts like hell..."
 
-    Lucy "I’m the one who’s supposed to barge in and break us up!"
-    show anon neutral flip
-    show fang very sad
-    with dissolve
-    Lucy "...I've done it so many times..."
+    Lucy "It's... I...."
 
-    Lucy "But..."
+    Lucy  "Damn it, Anon..."
 
-    Lucy "The fucking allosaurus dickwad I had my first time with wasn't half as special as you."
-
-    Lucy "And I didn't just date boys, you know."
-
-    Lucy "I didn't limit my options, and I still think there was more to you!"
-
-    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
-    A "As in...?"
-
-    show fang unimpressed with dissolve
-    Lucy "You know I'm bi, right?"
-
-    A "..."
-
-    A "Like...?"
-
-    Lucy "Well, not really."
-
-    Lucy "Or rather, I don't know why I did it anymore..."
-
-    A "Lucy..."
+    Lucy "..."
 
     show fang angry with dissolve
     "Lucy grits her teeth in anger."
 
-    Lucy "It wasn't serious, okay!"
+    Lucy "I'm sorry, about all my bullshit!"
 
-    Lucy "Those people had problems that needed addressing."
+    Lucy "Please! T-that’s… that’s not me anymore…"
 
-    Lucy "That's not me!"
-
-    Lucy "Anon, please, don't ever think my parents ever--"
-
-    A "Lucy!"
+    Lucy "I can't go back to being that thing!"
 
     show fang surprised with dissolve
     "My voice causes my girlfriend to flinch."
@@ -2353,44 +2326,30 @@ label chapter_13C:
         ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
     "I move to place a hand on her shoulder."
     show fang sad with dissolve
-    A "Lucy… {w=0.5}It's okay..."
-
-    A "Your parents are cool."
-
-    A "I would never believe they’d hurt you."
+    A "Lucy…"
 
     "Lucy lets out a sigh."
 
-    Lucy "Anon… {w=0.5}I don't wanna dump all my baggage on you."
+    Lucy "Anon… {w=0.5}I wouldn't feel right going back to how I used to be."
 
     show fang anguish
     show anon concerned flip
     with dissolve
     Lucy "It's not right."
 
-    Lucy "And It was just a phase."
+    Lucy "It was just a phase! I swear!"
 
-    Lucy "I'll never do it again."
+    Lucy "I thought what I was donig was completely normal"
 
     Lucy "It was so humiliating..."
 
     Lucy "Naser might have known... {w=0.5}and he suffered so much because of it..."
 
-    Lucy "I can't imagine just how much more my parents would've hated me if they’d known the real truth."
+    Lucy "I can't imagine just how much more my parents would've hated if I stuck to being... being..."
 
-    Lucy "So just forget it."
+    Lucy "I don't even know who I used to be now."
 
-    Lucy "It was an obsession."
-
-    Lucy "One I was convinced would make me happy."
-
-    Lucy "But it was never meant to be."
-
-    Lucy "All those relationships were just about who had the most baggage they could dump on each other and gain the most pity points."
-
-    Lucy "And I always lost because I never had it that bad."
-
-    Lucy "I… {w=0.5}I was just an ungrateful slut."
+    Lucy "I… {w=0.5}I was just an ungrateful bitch..."
 
     show fang hiding with dissolve
     "Lucy lets out a groan and facepalms."