rework ch11 Reed FUBARs shit scenes

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@ -3746,99 +3746,175 @@ label chapter_11:
pause .5
"Fang texts me while Im walking to school the next day."
pause .5
"Fang: i slept like a rock last night lol"
show anonphone with easeinbottom
pause .5
"Fang: you feeling better too?"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} i slept like a rock last night lol"
"Anon: Yeah. Were your parents upset?"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} you feeling better too?"
pause .5
"Fang: im friggin"
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} Yeah. Were your parents upset?"
pause .5
"Fang: grounded from everything basically forever"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} im friggin"
"Anon: Uh oh."
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} grounded from everything basically forever"
pause .5
"Fang: my mom will forget in like a week lmao :V"
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} Uh oh."
pause .5
"Fang: see you in science as always, right?"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} my mom will forget in like a week lmao :V"
"Anon: Yeah, of course."
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} see you in science as always, right?"
pause .5
"Anon: What do you plan to do about your missing assignments?"
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} Yeah, of course."
"Fang: naser stayed up to help me with them."
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} What do you plan to do about your missing assignments?"
pause .5
"Fang: i think he did most of it though lol"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} naser stayed up to help me with them."
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} i think he did most of it though lol"
pause .5
show anon neutral behind anonphone:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5 alpha 0
show anon:
linear 0.5 alpha 1
hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
pause .5
"Warms my heart to see shes back to normal."
pause .5
"Wait, she still hasnt spoken with Trish."
pause .5
"I shouldnt be worried."
"But… when she called, Fang…"
show reed explanatory flip at sright with moveinright
"But{cps=*.1}...{/cps} when she called, Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
Re "Yo, Anon! Wait up!"
show reed neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign -0.8
show reed:
easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.4
with dissolve
"I instinctively start picking up the pace."
show anon:
easeout 1 xalign 1.2
pause .5
show reed considering with Dissolve(.15)
show anon:
easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.1
Re "Wait, man! I need to talk to you about Trish!"
pause .5
"Ugh. Well, I dont have a beef with Reed, cant hurt to talk."
A "What?"
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
pause .5
A "What?"
pause .5
show reed sad with dissolve
pause .5
show anon neutral at aleft
show reed sad flip
with dissolve
Re "Trishs been, like, super beat up over everything thats happened."
pause .5
A "So Ive heard."
pause .5
Re "So, you wouldnt mind if, uh"
Re "So, you wouldnt mind if, uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "No, Reed."
pause .5
show reed shocked flip with dissolve
show reed:
easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.25
show reed shocked with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Huh?"
show anon unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
A "Im not going to lure Fang into meeting Trish so she can try to fix their abusive relationship."
show reed considering flip with dissolve
pause .5
show reed:
easein_quart 1.5 xalign -0.35
show reed considering with dissolve
"Reed winces."
show reed neutral flip with dissolve
Re "Read me like a book, huh?"
pause .5
Re "Come on, man. Trishll be better this time, I know it."
Re "Just give it a chance, whats the worst that could happen."
show reed neutral with dissolve
"I hear the desperation in his voice."
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
"Hesitating, I sigh and roll my eyes."
pause .5
A "...Fine. But Im going to be there and were leaving the split second I can tell its not going well."
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Fine. But Im going to be there and were leaving the split second I can tell its not going well."
show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Oh man, youre a lifesaver! Just bring her over into the auditorium for lunch, Ill make sure Trish doesnt flake!"
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
show reed behind anon:
easeout 1 xalign 1.0
pause .2
hide reed with dissolve
"Reed excitedly jogs away to his homeroom."
hide reed with moveoutleft
"Thats the most relieved Id ever seen him."
pause .5
"Guess Trish really is sorry."
pause .5
scene classroom with Fade(1, 0, 1)
pause .5
"I give Fang the memo as I duck into class moments before the bell."
pause .5
"Fang: i dunno…"
show anonphone with easeinbottom
pause .5
"Fang: youll be there right? <:V"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} i dunno{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Anon: Of course I will."
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} youll be there right? <:V"
pause .5
"Fang: ill try not to get too worked up in anticipation then. :V"
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} Of course I will."
pause .5
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} ill try not to get too worked up in anticipation then. :V"
pause .5
hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
pause .5
play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomloop.ogg' fadein 1
stop music fadeout 4.0
"I sigh and glance at the clock."
"I feel like my moods been put in a guillotine now."
@ -3849,140 +3925,305 @@ label chapter_11:
"Even in science, where Fang and I could at least sit next to each other and talk didnt alleviate it."
"But Math"
"But Math{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Mr. Carleciidewski was unconscious at his desk, once again being of no help."
"Reed is now sitting behind me, and every time I glance back he smiles and nods."
pause .5
"Trish is nowhere to be seen."
pause .5
"The ticks of the clocks second hand are a countdown to doomsday and Im at the epicenter of it."
pause .5
play sound 'audio/effects/schoolbell.ogg'
pause .5
"The lunch bell blares loudly and I shuffle out from behind my desk."
scene cafeteria with fade
show reed explanatory flip at rcenter
show anon neutral at aleft
pause .5
"A powerful arm wraps around my shoulder, dragging me to the door."
Re "Cmon man, sooner we get our food the sooner we can put all this behind us."
stop music fadeout 1.0
play music 'audio/OST/sadist.ogg' fadein 1.0
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 3
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"Theres an edge of something to Reeds voice, making his words sound unnatural."
pause .5
play ambient 'audio/effects/teenagecafeterialoop.ogg' fadein 2
scene cafeteria
show reed neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign -0.3
show anon neutral behind reed:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.4
with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"My phone vibrates in my pocket."
pause .5
"When I reach for it Reed bumps me."
show reed:
easein_back 1 xalign -0.2
pause .3
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45
show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Whatcha want for lunch?"
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
A "I uh… whatre they serving?"
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
A "I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} whatre they serving?"
"Another buzz in my pocket."
show reed considering with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Well I think its mystery meatloaf and pizza today."
"And another."
pause .5
show anon:
easein 1 xalign 0.5
show anon neutral with dissolve
A "One sec-"
show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Yo the lines moving."
show reed:
easein_back 1 xalign -0.1
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55
"Im bumped forward in line by Reed."
pause .5
"My phone is vibrating nonstop now."
show anon concerned flip with dissolve
A "Reed whatre you-"
show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.15)
Re "Just trying to get us some grub before we see Trish and Fang. Dont wanna do this on an empty stomach right?"
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
"I get my phone out at last to see-"
show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.15)
Re "Yo so the pizza right? Lets get the pizza."
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.6
show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
A "Reed what is with you right now?!"
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 3
show anon neutral with dissolve
pause .5
play music 'audio/ost/sage goes in all fields.ogg' fadein 1
# play music 'audio/ost/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1
show dimmer_darker behind anon, reed with dissolve
"I glance at my phones screen to see ten messages all from Fang."
pause .5
show reed:
easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.05
pause .2
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.75
hide dimmer_darker with dissolve
"Reed pushes me forward and my phone hits the floor."
show reed behind anon
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.0
pause .2
show anon angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
A "God damn it Reed!"
pause .5
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
show reed happy with Dissolve(.25)
Re "I got it Anon."
show reed:
easein_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.3
ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.05
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
"He scoops up my phone and pockets it."
Re "Food first, man, cmon."
A "Reed seriously what the fuck is up with you!"
pause .5
Re "What? Nothing, man, just us two getting some food. Right?"
A "... Give me back my phone, Reed."
pause 1
stop music fadeout 3
Re "..."
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Give me back my phone, Reed."
pause .5
Re "......"
show reed considering
Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps} "
Re "{cps=*.1}......{/cps} "
pause .5
play music 'audio/ost/sadist.ogg' fadein 1
show reed considering with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Sorry."
pause .5
"I drop my tray and make a break down the hall towards the auditorium."
hide anon neutral with moveoutright
hide reed with moveoutright
show anon:
easeout_back 1 xalign 2.0
show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
show reed:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
show reed shocked with Dissolve(.15)
pause .5
show reed:
easeout 0.75 xalign 1.3
pause .25
hide reed with dissolve
scene hallway with fade
"Reed is chasing close behind only a few feet behind me."
scene hallway
show anon neutral at acenter
Re "Anon, wait!!"
pause .5
"Think Im managing to outpace him."
"Just need to turn the corner and its on the other end of the hall."
pause .5
"I hear Reeds footsteps get further away, and stop for a split second."
"Did he give up?"
show anon neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.0
show anon:
easein_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.5
with dissolve
pause .5
play sound "audio/effects/firealarm.ogg" volume 0.3 loop
"Did he give up?"
pause .5
# TODO: this sound effect is a bit lackluster
play ambient "audio/effects/firealarm.ogg" loop
pause .5
"What the fu-?!"
pause .5
play ambient2 "audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg" fadein 1
show dimmer_darker behind anon with dissolve
"Water sprays from the ceiling and the halls are quickly crowded with screaming students running for their lives, the teachers trying fruitlessly to keep them calm."
pause .5
"Reed, you dirty bastard!!"
show anon pissed with Dissolve(.25)
"{i}Reed, you dirty bastard!!{/i}"
"Im shoved aside from all angles by the student body."
"Just a dozen more feet to the door-!"
pause .5
show anon:
easeout 1 xalign 1.5
pause .5
hide anon with dissolve
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 3
stop ambient2 fadeout 3
scene door auditorium with fade
pause .5
show anon neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.2
with dissolve
show anon sad with dissolve
pause .5
"I finally manage to get my hand on the handle and-"
show reed choke at scenter
show reed angry behind anon:
yalign 0.1 xalign -0.8
show reed:
easein .75 xalign -0.35
with dissolve
pause .25
show reed:
ease_back 1 yalign -0.1 xalign 0.1
hide anon
show reed choke
with dissolve
A "*Glk-!*"
show reed:
pause .5
easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.125
pause 0.25
easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.15
pause .5
easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.1
repeat
pause .5
Re "Sorry, man."
pause .5
"Hes got me in a chokehold with one arm."
stop sound
pause .5
Re "Convenient."
stop music fadeout 3.0
"Reed opens the door with one foot to look in."
pause .5
Re "Youll see, man. Its all going well."
"I can only watch the scene before me unfold."
pause .5
stop music fadeout 1.0
play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
scene hallway
scene auditorium
show trish angry at tleft
show fang sad flip at sright
with fade
with Fade(1, 0, 1)
pause 1
T "{i}WHY{/i} don't you want to talk about it?"
T "Please talk to me, {i}PLEASE{/i}."
T "It's been days, didn't you have enough time to think about it already?"
@ -3990,6 +4231,7 @@ label chapter_11:
F "Fuck off from my life, already!"
T "No, Fang, I won't! I helped you, remember? I wanna keep helping you."
show fang angry flip
F "You USED ME. YOU BETRAYED ME."