Merge pull request 'Cultivation of all changes after review rotation' (#171) from nutbuster/SnootGame:Patch7 into Patch7

Reviewed-on: https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame/pulls/171
2025-02-02 14:58:45 +01:00 · 2021-11-25 05:11:55 +00:00 · 2021-11-25 05:11:55 +00:00 · 5253984029
commit 5253984029
parent eaffa47285 fb6312280e
41 changed files with 4686 additions and 2292 deletions
--- a/game/audio/effects/beachLoop.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/beachLoop.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/camera.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/camera.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/cavemanMagic.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/cavemanMagic.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/clipLoop.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/clipLoop.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/doorSlam.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/doorSlam.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/drumroll.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/drumroll.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/drumrollEnd.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/drumrollEnd.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/fangPunch.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/fangPunch.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/firework.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/firework.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/splash.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/splash.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/strike.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/strike.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/stringSnap.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/stringSnap.ogg
--- a/game/audio/effects/woodSnap.ogg
+++ b/game/audio/effects/woodSnap.ogg
--- a/game/images/animations/fang
+++ b/game/images/animations/fang
--- a/game/images/trish/trish
+++ b/game/images/trish/trish
--- a/game/images/trish/trish
+++ b/game/images/trish/trish
--- a/game/images/trish/trish
+++ b/game/images/trish/trish
--- a/game/images/trish/trish
+++ b/game/images/trish/trish
--- a/game/script.rpy
+++ b/game/script.rpy
@ -798,8 +798,16 @@ image home fang night barelyblurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang nigh
 image d01_blur = im.Blur('images/cgs/d01.jpg', 1.5)
 image anon prom blurred = im.Flip(im.Blur('images/anon/prom set/anon prom neutral.png', 2.0), horizontal=True)
 image anon prom lessblurred = im.Flip(im.Blur('images/anon/prom set/anon prom neutral.png', 1.0), horizontal=True)
 image anon prom blurred flip = im.Blur('images/anon/prom set/anon prom neutral.png', 2.0)
 image anon prom lessblurred flip = im.Blur('images/anon/prom set/anon prom neutral.png', 1.0)
 image fang prom blurred = im.Blur('images/fang/prom sets/fang c prom neutral.png', 2.0)
 image fang prom lessblurred = im.Blur('images/fang/prom sets/fang c prom neutral.png', 1.0)
 image fang prom d blurred = im.Blur('images/fang/prom sets/fang d prom neutral.png', 2.0)
 image fang prom d lessblurred = im.Blur('images/fang/prom sets/fang d prom neutral.png', 1.0)
 image naser prom blurred = im.Flip(im.Blur('images/naser/naser prom neutral.png', 2.0), horizontal=True)
 image naser prom lessblurred = im.Flip(im.Blur('images/naser/naser prom neutral.png', 1.0), horizontal=True)
 image naomi prom blurred = im.Flip(im.Blur('images/naomi/naomi prom neutral.png', 2.0), horizontal=True)
 image naomi prom lessblurred = im.Flip(im.Blur('images/naomi/naomi prom neutral.png', 1.0), horizontal=True)
 #image fangroomfuture = "images/backgrounds/fangroomfuture.png"
 #image livingroomdayalt = "images/backgrounds/livingroomdayalt.png"
--- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy
+++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy
@ -256,11 +256,13 @@ label chapter_1:
    stop music fadeout 6
    pause .5
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    scene garden
    show anon neutral flip at scenter
    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 6
    play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' volume 0.4 fadein 2.0
-    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    with Dissolve(1)
    pause .5
    "It’s a small alcove of sorts."
@ -271,6 +273,7 @@ label chapter_1:
    pause .5
    "It was perfect."
    pause 0.5
    "I flop down on the wet bench and the violent crack from it makes my heart drop."
@ -311,7 +314,7 @@ label chapter_1:
    show naomi silo at sleft
    show naser silo:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
    with Dissolve(2.5)
    unknown "{cps=*0.5}Would you happen to be Anon?{/cps}" #Naomi
@ -320,16 +323,21 @@ label chapter_1:
    "I look up."
    "The bench broke down."
    window hide
    window auto
    show naomi silo shocked:
        easein_quart 0.5 xalign -0.05
    show naser silo:
-        easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.99
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign 1.3
-    with None
+
    play sound "audio/effects/woodSnap.ogg"
    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 1.0
    play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' volume 0.5 fadein 1.0
-    hide anon with Dissolve(0.2)
+
    show anon:
        easeout_cubic 0.35 yalign -0.7
    hide anon with Dissolve(0.35)
    with vpunch
    pause 1
@ -362,17 +370,24 @@ label chapter_1:
    unknown "Naser!"
    Nas "Right, right."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    scene garden
    show naser neutral flip:
            yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
    show naomi neutral at sleft
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    "The hand tightens around my own and pulls roughly."
    # Documentation on MoveTransition : https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame/wiki/Tips#MoveTransition
-    show naser neutral flip at nmidright with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
+
    show naser neutral flip:
        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.4
    pause 0.5
    show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
@ -412,7 +427,6 @@ label chapter_1:
    A "O{w=0.3}-kay then."
    "{cps=*0.5}Is that really necessary?{/cps}"
    show naomi explanatory
    N "I had this prepared just for you!"
@ -422,12 +436,15 @@ label chapter_1:
    with dissolve
    pause .25
-    show naomi neutral at scloserleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
+    show naomi neutral:
        easein_quad 0.5 xalign 0.1
    pause 0.5
    "The orange one, Naomi, hands me a brochure."
-    show naomi neutral at sleft with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
+    show naomi neutral:
-    pause 0.5
+        easein_quad 0.5 xalign 0.0
    pause 1
    "{i}\"Volcano High and You:{w=0.4} A New Beginning to Adulthood.\"{/i}"
@ -443,7 +460,7 @@ label chapter_1:
    "None of it matters."
    show naser:
-        easein_quad 0.7 xalign 1.0
+        easein_quad 1 xalign 1.0
    pause .5
    show naser considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
@ -463,11 +480,12 @@ label chapter_1:
    show naser happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
    Nas "*chuckles*{w=0.4} Of course."
-    show anon at aright
+    show anon:
        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.0
    show naser:
-        xalign 0.05 yalign 0.1
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.05 yalign 0.1
-    with MoveTransition(0.75, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
+
-    pause .25
+    pause 1
    show naomi:
        easein_back 0.6 xalign 0.02 yalign 0.075
@ -480,14 +498,14 @@ label chapter_1:
    "Is that how dinos kiss?"
    show naomi:
-        easein 0.5 yalign 0.0 xalign 0.0
+        easein_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0 xalign 0.0
    show naser:
-        easein 0.7 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
+        easein_cubic 0.7 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
    pause 1
    show naser neutral behind naomi with Dissolve(.25)
    show naser:
-        easeout 1 xalign 1.9
+        easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.9
    pause .4
    hide naser with dissolve
@ -504,8 +522,8 @@ label chapter_1:
    with Dissolve(.25)
    "I turn back to Naomi. She smiles again, though there is a plasticity to it."
    show naomi explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
    show naomi explanatory
    N "So, Anon, why did you transfer here?"
    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
@ -556,8 +574,8 @@ label chapter_1:
    A "I can figure things out on my own, don’t worry too much about it."
    show naomi:
-        ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.05
-        ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
    N "Oh, the school here has programs to help it’s less fortunate students!"
    show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
@ -577,21 +595,26 @@ label chapter_1:
        easein_quart 1 xalign 0.7
    pause 0.8
    show anon:
-        easein_quad 1 xalign 0.6
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.6
    show naomi neutral flip behind anon:
-        easein_quad 1 xalign 0.25
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.25
    "Naomi grabs my hand and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    stop music fadeout 3
    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/alarmAirraidSiren.ogg'
+    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
-
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/alarmAirraidSiren.ogg'
    show dimmer_darker behind anon, naomi with Fade(.1, 0, .25, color="#fff")
    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
    show white with Dissolve(.1)
    show dimmer_darker behind anon, naomi, white
    show white:
        easein_cubic 1 alpha 0
    window show Dissolve(0.0)
    "{cps=*0.5}AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA{/cps}" with vpunch
    pause .5
@ -642,15 +665,16 @@ label chapter_1:
    window auto
    show anon:
-        easeout 1.0 xalign 0.001
+        easeout_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.001
    show naomi:
-        easeout 1.0 xalign -0.3
+        easeout_cubic 1.0 xalign -0.3
    pause 0.5
    hide naomi
    hide anon
    with dissolve
    pause 0.5
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    "{cps=*0.1}......{/cps}"
@ -848,10 +872,12 @@ label chapter_1:
    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.3, 0, 'ambient1')
    play ambient1 'audio/effects/heartbeat.ogg' fadein 4
-    show anon neutral flip at acenter
+    show anon:
        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
    show jinflip behind anon:
-        xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0
-    with ease
+    pause 1
    show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
    pause 0.75
@ -976,10 +1002,13 @@ label chapter_1:
    window auto
    #TODO: confirm if 2D flipping is OK when done for comedy occasionally
-    show naser neutral behind anon with easeinleft:
+
-        xalign -0.6 yalign 0.1
+    show naser neutral behind anon with dissolve:
        xalign -1.0 yalign 0.1
        easein_cubic 0.75 xalign -0.6
    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 1, 'ambient')
    play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg' # CC0
    show anon fear:
        xalign 0.6 yalign 0.1
        easein 0.5 xzoom -1
@ -1393,7 +1422,9 @@ label chapter_1:
    window auto
    show anon:
-        easeout_quart 1.0 xalign 0.5
+        easeout_quart 1 xalign 0.5
        easein_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.45
        ease_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.5
    pause 1
    play music 'audio/OST/we just turned on the microphone in our programmers_ house.ogg'
@ -1575,7 +1606,9 @@ label chapter_1:
    show naser table hit behind anon with vpunch
    pause 0.5
-    show anon at aright with MoveTransition(0.25, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
+    show anon:
        easein_cubic 0.75 xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1
    pause 0.25
    A "Whoa{w=0.2} whoa."
@ -1618,9 +1651,11 @@ label chapter_1:
    window hide
    window auto
    show naser:
        easeout_cubic 1 xalign -1.0
    show naser flip neutral with Dissolve(0.25)
-
+    pause 0.25
-    hide naser with easeoutleft
+    hide naser with dissolve
    pause 0.5
@ -1649,10 +1684,14 @@ label chapter_1:
    pause .5
    "The call ends and Naser sags."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .25
-    show naser sad at nleft with easeinleft
+    show naser sad with dissolve:
-    pause 0.5
+        xalign -1.0 yalign 0.1
        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.2
    pause 1
    Nas "I’ve gotta leave."
--- a/game/script/10.an-excellent-reason-to-start-abusing-mod-powers.rpy
+++ b/game/script/10.an-excellent-reason-to-start-abusing-mod-powers.rpy
@ -254,6 +254,11 @@ label chapter_10:
    window auto
    pause .5
    play sound 'audio/effects/anonBedRustle.ogg'
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 2
    scene wounds07 with dissolve
    pause 1
--- a/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy
+++ b/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy
@ -1929,7 +1929,7 @@ label chapter_11:
        show naser table hit with Dissolve(.1)
        show anon:
            easein_quart 1 xalign 0.05
-        play sound "audio/effects/tableSlam.ogg" fadeout 0.69
+        play sound "audio/effects/tableSlamNoBox.ogg"
        with vpunch
        Nas "Fucking hell, Anon, tell me: Why do I gotta hear about how Fang feels from Trish, Reed, and now YOU?"
@ -3520,7 +3520,7 @@ label chapter_11:
        show rosa:
            easeout_quart 0.5 xalign 0.8
        show rosa unimpressed flip with dissolve
-        play sound 'audio/effects/tableslam.ogg' fadeout 0.69
+        play sound 'audio/effects/tableSlamNoBox.ogg'
        with vpunch
        "Rosa slams her head into the table."
--- a/game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy
+++ b/game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy
@ -199,19 +199,23 @@ label chapter_11D:
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 2
    scene hallway
    with Dissolve(1.0)
    pause 0.5
 #with Fade(1, 0, 1)
    show fang happy:
-        xalign -1.2
+        xalign -0.2
        yalign 0.0
-        ease_cubic 3.0 xalign 1.0
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.0
    show anon neutral:
-        xalign -1.4
+        xalign -0.2
        yalign 0.1
-        ease_cubic 3.0 xalign 0.4
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.4
    with dissolve
 #with easeinleft # Fade(1, 0, 1)
@ -245,18 +249,18 @@ label chapter_11D:
    show anon:
        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55
    show fang:
-        easein 1 xalign 1.2
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
    show spears:
        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.8
        xalign -0.8
-        easein 1.5 xalign 0.0
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.0
    with None
    pause 0.0001
    show anon neutral flip behind fang
    show fang surprised flip
    show spears neutral
    with dissolve
-    pause 1
+    pause 1.25
    "We turn to see Principal Spears trailing behind us."
    pause .5
@ -361,6 +365,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
    "Fang pecks me on the cheek and starts down the hall to her next class."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .25
    show fang:
        yalign 0.0
@ -368,7 +373,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
        easeout_cubic 1.4 xalign 2.4
    show fang happy with dissolve
    pause .4
-    hide fang with dissolve
+    hide fang with Dissolve(.4)
    pause .25
    show anon grin with dissolve
@ -382,10 +387,9 @@ label chapter_11D:
    pause .5
    "Man, I hope dad’s suit has actually been to the cleaner, I don’t wanna disappoint."
    pause .5
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    return
--- a/game/script/12.5C.prom-night-intro.rpy
+++ b/game/script/12.5C.prom-night-intro.rpy
@ -419,6 +419,7 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
    show white
    pause 1
    hide white with Dissolve(2)
    pause .5
    "Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
--- a/game/script/12.5D.prom-night-intro.rpy
+++ b/game/script/12.5D.prom-night-intro.rpy
@ -419,6 +419,7 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
    show white
    pause 1
    hide white with Dissolve(2)
    pause .5
    "Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
@ -441,7 +442,5 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
    pause .5
    F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
    window hide
    window auto
    return
--- a/game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy
+++ b/game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy
@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 label chapter_12D:
    #Let's all go to the Aquarium
    scene black
    pause 2.5
    play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0
    "Every day after school for the next few weeks I would join Fang to help her practice."
@ -26,19 +25,24 @@ label chapter_12D:
    "There’s lots of neat places in the city for dates, the mall, the arcade, a local amusement park."
    pause 0.5
-    "...And the dart landed in the ocean over the dock."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}And the dart landed in the ocean over the dock."
    "The look from Fang told me she wasn’t stepping anywhere near a tuna boat."
    "The Aquarium it is."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
-    scene aquarium with fade
+    scene aquarium with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    "So here we are inside after paying admission."
    "I’d suggested she wear some gloves, just to protect her hands."
    "I don’t think she understood the second part, because they were fingerless."
    pause 0.5
    "The Aquarium is a large marble building on a marina."
@ -73,6 +77,8 @@ label chapter_12D:
        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.175 #0.725
    "I take Fang’s hand and lead her through the lobby into the chamber labeled ‘Sea Turtle Conservatory’."
    window hide
    window auto
    show fang:
        #"fang happy"
@ -82,59 +88,74 @@ label chapter_12D:
    show anon:
        xalign 0.175
        ease_cubic 3.1 xalign 1.85+0.5 #0.725
    pause 1
    hide anon
    hide fang
    with dissolve
-    window hide
+    pause 0.5
-    window auto
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 1.5
    scene black with dissolve
    pause .5
-    scene aquariumexhibit with dissolve
+    scene aquariumexhibit with Dissolve(1)
-
+    pause 0.5
    show fang happy:
-        xalign -1.8
+        xalign -0.5
-        ease_cubic 2.4 xalign 0.625
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.625
        pause .1
        "fang very happy" with dissolve
        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.680
    show anon neutral:
-        xalign -1.8
+        xalign -0.5 yalign 0.1
-        ease_cubic 2.412 xalign 0.225 #0.625
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.225 #0.625
    with dissolve
-    pause .2
+    pause 1
-    F "Anon, are you sure you want to spend the day here? {w=.2} If you wanted to go to the mall or somethin- {cps=*2.0}omigawd.{/cps}"
+    F "Anon, are you sure you want to spend the day here? If you wanted to go to the mall or somethin- {w=.5}{nw}"
    show fang:
        easein_back 0.4 xalign 0.680
    show fang surprised
    extend "{cps=*2.0}omigawd.{/cps}"
    show fang adorable with Dissolve(.25)
    "A little sea turtle swims out of hiding in the tank right in front of us."
    show anon:
        pause 0.12
        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.3
        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.225
    show fang:
-        "fang very happy"
+        pause 0.0001
-        "fang adorable" with dissolve
+        "fang very happy" with Dissolve(0.2)
        block:
            parallel:
-                easeout_cubic 0.05 yalign -0.04
+                #easeout_cubic 0.05 yalign -0.04
                ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
                ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
            parallel:
                pause 0.12
                ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.8
                ease_cubic 1.2 xalign 1.8
-#pause 0.0001
+    pause 1.2
    show fang adorable with dissolve
-    "Immediately Fang breaks free of my arm and presses against the glass."
+    "Immediately, Fang breaks free of my arm and presses against the glass."
    pause 0.5
    show fang:
        easein_cubic 0.25 yalign 0.1
        easeout_cubic 0.25 yalign 0.0
        repeat 3
    F "Look at these cute little shits, I love them!"
-    show fang adorable at sleft:
+    #show fang adorable at sleft:
-        xalign 1.8
+    #    xalign 1.8
-        "fang adorable" with dissolve
+    #    "fang adorable" with dissolve
-        easeout_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.04
+    #    easeout_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.04
-        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
+    #    ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
-        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
+    #    ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
-    show anon:
+    #show anon:
-        xalign 0.225
+    #    xalign 0.225
    A "Yeah, I see them."
@ -143,10 +164,12 @@ label chapter_12D:
    show anon neutral:
        ease_cubic 1.95 xalign 0.87
    pause 0.5
    "I peer into the tank and see a few more hatchlings bob out of the decorative grass."
    "The hype becomes contagious and I find myself pressed against the glass as well."
    pause 0.5
    Attendant "Please avoid touching the glass, it stresses the little guys out."
@ -183,41 +206,49 @@ label chapter_12D:
        "anon grin flip" with dissolve
    A "{w=.5}Oh look, {w=.5} a Dumbo Octopus."
    show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
    F "{cps=*2.0}Whereisit?{/cps}"
    show fang happy flip with dissolve
    "In a snap Fang’s moved from pressing her face against the turtle tank to pressing it against the octopus tank."
    #scene aquariumexhibit
    #intentional ghost / meteor walk
-    show fang happy flip:
+    show fang:
-        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.1
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.0
    show fang adorable flip
    with dissolve
    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
    #confirmed that fang has autism
    Attendant "Ma’am, please refrain from-"
-    show fang adorable flip at sleft with dissolve# at sleft
+    #show fang adorable flip at sleft with dissolve# at sleft
    F "{cps=*1.5}OmigoshAnonlookatit.{/cps}"
    F "It’s like a living egg yolk with button eyes."
    pause 0.5
-    A "Is that the first analogy you can think of{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}?"
+    A "Is that the first analogy you can think of{cps=*0.1}...?{/cps}"
    #Fang has the zoomies
    F "And what’s over there? Are those seahorses{cps=*1.5} holy crap I have to take a video of this.{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    show anon:
        easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
    pause 0.4
    hide anon with dissolve
    scene aquariumexhibit
-    show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve #at sleft
+    show fang adorable flip:
        xalign 0.0
    show fang adorable with dissolve
    #new method
    show fang:
        # yalign 0.0 xcenter 0.4
@ -251,11 +282,11 @@ label chapter_12D:
    "But watching Fang zoom between the exhibits to gush over each oddly cute sea animal was just too much."
    "Subtly my phone finds its way into my jacket pocket, already set to record."
-    window hide
+    #window hide
-    window auto
+    #window auto
    #show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom
-    show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom #cursed
+    show anonphone at scenter with dissolve #cursed
    "She’ll probably kill me if she found out."
    hide fang adorable with dissolve
@ -266,17 +297,22 @@ label chapter_12D:
    #hide anonphone with dissolve
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.25
    hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
    pause .25
-    scene black with dissolve
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    scene stingray pool with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    scene stingray pool with dissolve
    "I round the corner to see the next room has a large group of school children hovering over a stingray touch tank."
    "That is, a large group of school children and Fang, towering above the rest."
    pause 0.5
    "She does have the act down though."
    pause 0.5
    A "Oh, cool, a stingray pool."
@ -285,32 +321,37 @@ label chapter_12D:
    F "Touch?"
    A "Yeah, you can put your hand in and they’ll slide against it, watch."
    pause 0.5
    "I roll up my jacket sleeve and push my hand into the water, splaying it out."
    "Fang and the children lean in intently."
    "The water’s cold, but sure enough, a few of the playful things make their round and slide up right against it like a cat begging for scratches."
    pause 0.5
    A "See?"
    "Several in the crowd start jumping with excitement and put their own hands in the water to try for themselves."
    "Fang doesn’t seem completely convinced, though."
    pause 0.5
-    F "You sure they’re alright to just touch like that?{w=0.2} Aren't those dangerous?"
+    F "You sure they’re alright to just touch like that? Aren't those dangerous?"
    A "I mean, it’s a bit slimy, but there’s a hand sanitizer thing on the wall right there."
    F "That isn’t what I meant."
    A "Come on, I’ll make sure they don’t bite."
    pause 0.5
    "Fang reluctantly grabs my dry arm and I lead her to a spot not occupied by ankle biters."
    "I put my hand back in and motion for Fang to do the same."
    "She hesitates with her hand raised just above the waters’ surface, then plunges her hand down next to mine."
    pause 0.5
    "It doesn’t take long for a few rays to make the corner and brush up against our hands."
@ -323,16 +364,23 @@ label chapter_12D:
    A "Well, I have yet to hear of a dry fish."
    F "Shut up."
    pause 0.5
    "After a few more rounds of rays, Fang decides she’s had enough."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
-    scene black with dissolve
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    scene aquarium
-    show anon neutral at aleft
+    show anon neutral:
        xalign 0.1 yalign 0.1
    show fang happy flip at sright
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    A "See, that wasn’t terrible, right?"
    A "Actually, you got all your fingers right?"
@ -348,68 +396,88 @@ label chapter_12D:
    F "So uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
    F "Which exhibit are we checking next?"
    pause 0.5
    "I check the aquarium pamphlet to see where we haven’t been yet."
    pause 0.5
-    A "Well... if we go outside we can see the dolphin pools. That way it loops back through the deep sea exhibits."
+    A "Well{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} if we go outside we can see the dolphin pools. That way it loops back through the deep sea exhibits."
    pause 0.5
    "With Fang in agreement I lead her towards the exit marked with a large dolphin sign."
-    stop music fadeout 3
+    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    stop music fadeout 2
-    scene black with dissolve
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.75
-    scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
+    scene aquariumoutside
    show fang happy at sleft
    show anon neutral flip:
        xalign 0.9 yalign 0.1
    with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    "Upon exiting the building my nose is assaulted by a mix of salty air and the smell of raw fish."
    "Somehow it’s even fishier than inside the aquarium."
    play music "audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg" fadein 1.0
-
+    pause 0.5
    show fang happy at sleft
    show anon neutral flip at aright
    with dissolve
    F "Ooh, smells like lunch."
    A "It says they should be feeding the dolphins pretty soon."
    pause 0.5
    "The walkway circles around a large pool with several dolphins swimming around, and I can make out the trainer holding a hoop with a bucket of fish by their feet."
    "One of the dolphins jumps straight through the hoop and is rewarded with a fish caught out of the air."
    pause 0.5
    F "Would you jump through a hoola hoop for me if I had treats?"
    A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "I notice the trainer has traded the hoop for a large brush and is getting one of the dolphins to open its mouth."
    "The trainer starts brushing the Dolphin’s teeth and showing off the rows of neatly spaced cones."
    "I make a show of craning my neck down to get a view of Fang’s teeth from below."
    show fang neutral with dissolve
    "She raises an eyebrow for a second and then realizes."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    #god elbow worse than her standing jab? lmao
-    show fang neutral with dissolve
+    show fang surprised with dissolve
    pause 0.5
    show fang:
-        "fang angry" with dissolve
+        easeout_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.55
-        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 1.0
+        easein_cubic 0.9 xalign 0.3
-        parallel:
+        #parallel:
-            easein_cubic 0.9 xalign 0.3
+        #    easein_cubic 0.9 xalign 0.3
-        parallel:
+        #parallel:
-            block:
+        #    block:
-                pause 1.1
+        #        pause 1.1
-                "fang embarass" with dissolve
+        #        "fang embarass" with dissolve
-                pause 1.4
+        #        pause 1.4
-                "fang sad" with dissolve
+        #        "fang sad" with dissolve
    show anon:
        pause .62
-        ease_cubic 0.25 xalign 1.02
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.95
-        ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 1.0
+        #ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 1.0
    show fang unimpressed with dissolve
    pause 0.2
    show anon grin flip with dissolve
    "An elbow jams into my shoulder and her other hand covers her snout."
    pause .5
    A "So that’s how you brush your teeth!"
@ -421,28 +489,42 @@ label chapter_12D:
    A "Well if you ever need help I’m sure I can get them to lend me one of those brushes."
    show fang angry with dissolve
    pause 0.25
    #show fang:
    #    "fang angry" with dissolve
    #   ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.0
    #    ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.5
    #    "fang neutral" with dissolve
    show fang:
-        "fang angry" with dissolve
+        easeout_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.65
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.0
+        easein_cubic 0.9 xalign 0.3
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.5
+
-        "fang neutral" with dissolve
+    #show anon:
    #    pause .5
    #    "anon ohshit flip" #
    #    ease_cubic 0.25 xalign 1.1
    #    "anon neutral flip" with dissolve
    #    ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 1.0
    show anon:
-        pause .5
+        pause .4
-        "anon ohshit flip" #
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.0
-        ease_cubic 0.25 xalign 1.1
+        #ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 1.0
        "anon neutral flip" with dissolve
        ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 1.0
    "And that gets me a jab to the ribs this time."
    pause .4
    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
-    A "Oh come on, you have to admit they look a bit like you..."
+    "And that gets me a jab to the ribs this time."
    pause 0.5
    A "Oh come on, you have to admit they look a bit like you{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
    show fang considering with dissolve
    F "Ehh, I don’t see it."
    "The dolphin beside her nods in agreement."
    pause 0.5
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Right then{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -457,22 +539,27 @@ label chapter_12D:
    "Fang rolls her eyes at that."
    "Her dolphin duplicate did too."
    pause 0.5
-    A "You’re fucking with me,{w=0.2} aren’t you."
+    A "You’re fucking with me, aren’t you."
    show fang neutral with dissolve
    F "What’re you talking about?"
    "Fang’s aquatic doppelganger makes a laugh-like chirping and finally swims away."
    pause 0.5
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    A "So Deep Sea then!"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
-    scene black with dissolve
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
-
+    pause 1
    pause .5
    "We leave the dolphin pen, following signs back towards the building."
@ -481,49 +568,62 @@ label chapter_12D:
    "Pushing through, we find ourselves in an oversized hamster tube beneath the water."
    "Oh, I didn’t realize they had one of these."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
-    pause .25
+    scene aquariumtube
    scene aquariumtube with dissolve
    "From within the glass walkway we’re surrounded by a myriad of colorful marine life swimming around us."
    show fang surprised at sright
    show anon neutral at aleft
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(1)
    "From within the glass walkway we’re surrounded by a myriad of colorful marine life swimming around us."
    "Fang’s eyes are wide as she tries to follow the different schools of fish that dart to and fro about."
    "I’m more mesmerized by the water filtered light cascading off Fang, casting her in a gentle glow that illuminates her white feathers."
    pause .5
-    "God.{w=0.2} So glad I’m recording this."
+    "God. So glad I’m recording this."
    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
    F "Recording what?"
    pause .5
    #show fang  flip with dissolve
    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
    A "The uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} {cps=*2.0}The shark!{/cps} Yeah, that cool looking shark over there!"
-    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    show anon neutral flip
    show fang surprised flip
    with dissolve
    "I point to the shark that’s currently lazing about, casually drifting by the walkway."
    window hide
    window auto
    show anon:
-        pause .4
+        pause .5
-        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.5
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
    show anon neutral with dissolve
    show fang:
-        ease_cubic 1.1 xalign -0.3
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.3
    show fang adorable flip with dissolve
    pause 1.5
    show anon neutral with dissolve
    "Fang turns to gush at the shark, giving me the opportunity to quickly stop my phone and see that my battery is near dead and storage near full."
    pause 0.5
    A "Ah, there’s the last exhibit."
    show anon:
        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
    show fang happy with dissolve
    "I hold open another set of doors, the room within near pitch black."
    pause 0.5
    F "Is it closed?"
@ -532,7 +632,6 @@ label chapter_12D:
    F "The lights{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    A "Oh! Nah, the room is dark because the things inside aren’t used to light."
    show fang neutral with dissolve
    F "O-oh."
@ -540,68 +639,87 @@ label chapter_12D:
    show anon flip with dissolve
    A "Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} are you sca-"
    show fang unimpressed with dissolve
-    show fang sad with dissolve
+    F "No! I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Wasn’t expecting it, is all."
-
+    pause 0.5
    F "No! I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} Wasn’t expecting it, is all."
    show anon neutral:
        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.39
        ease_cubic 0.65 xalign 0.45
        "anon face happy" with dissolve
    show fang:
 #pause 1.2
        pause 0.95
        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign -0.19
        "fang happy" with dissolve
    "I offer her my hand."
    window hide
    window auto
-    "Despite her claim otherwise I can feel how tense she is by how her fingernails dig into my hand."
+    show anon behind fang:
        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.39
        ease_cubic 0.65 xalign 0.45
    show fang:
 #pause 1.2
        pause 1
        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign -0.19
        "fang neutral" with dissolve
    pause 1
    show anon neutral with dissolve
    "Despite her claim otherwise, I can feel how tense she is by how her fingernails dig into my hand."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.25
    show anon:
-        "anon face happy"
+        easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.3
-        ease_cubic 1.8 xalign 2.8
+    show fang neutral:
-    show fang:
+        easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.2
-        "fang happy"
+    pause 0.9
-        ease_cubic 1.8 xalign 3.6
+    hide anon
    hide fang
    with dissolve
    pause .5
    stop music fadeout 2
-    scene black with dissolve
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    "I lead her into the darkened room, what little light there is coming from the various animals within."
    play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
    "The aquariums within are packed with bioluminescent jellyfish, illuminating the darkened room with an ethereal glow."
-    scene jellyfishroom with dissolve
+    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    scene jellyfishroom with Dissolve(2)
    F "Whoa. This is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    A "Beautiful."
    F "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "I wasn’t referring to the exhibit."
    "Fang’s grip on my hand eases, and her fingers work to intertwine with mine."
    "With what little light there is I can make out Fang’s smile."
    pause 0.5
    "My eyes have adjusted enough that I can see Fang’s eyes locked onto mine, the gossamer light making them glow."
    "My lips press softly onto Fang’s beak-end in a chaste peck."
    pause 0.5
    F "Eep!"
    F "Oi! G-give me a warning next time!"
    A "Mmmm{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} Naaaah."
    pause 0.5
    "I laugh even as her hip bumps me roughly."
    "Our interlocked fingers prevent her from using her preferred elbow tactic."
    pause 0.5
    A "So{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.05} had fun?"
@ -614,9 +732,9 @@ label chapter_12D:
    F "Sh-shut up! I’m sexy damn it! Not cute!"
    A "Why not both?"
    pause 0.5
    "She glowers."
    pause .5
    A "Feel rested?"
@ -626,10 +744,11 @@ label chapter_12D:
    A "Sounds like a plan."
    window hide
    window auto
-    pause .25
+    pause .5
    scene aquariumoutside with Dissolve(1.25)
    pause .5
    "The rest of our rest day was spent just relaxing on the pier."
    "Snacks on the boardwalk."
@ -638,20 +757,20 @@ label chapter_12D:
    "And a very relaxed girlfriend."
-    "Overall,{w=0.2} mission successful."
+    "Overall, mission successful."
    pause 0.5
    "Except the sunburn."
    "Ow."
    stop music fadeout 3.0
    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
    #pause .5
    #"{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
-    pause 1
+    pause 0.5
    stop music fadeout 3.0
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause .5
    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
    return
--- a/game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy
+++ b/game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy
@ -1,5 +1,7 @@
 label chapter_13A:
    #Prom is Complicated
    window hide
    window auto
    play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 0.5
    pause .5
@ -311,8 +313,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
    window auto
    pause .5
-    stop ambient fadeout 4
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    scene taxi night with Dissolve(1)
    pause .5
@ -376,7 +377,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
    play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 3
    play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdMurmurLoop.ogg' fadein 3
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    scene outside school night
    show fang a prom neutral:
        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.1
@ -465,7 +465,10 @@ label chapter_13A:
    pause .5
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    scene prom with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    "The two of us go up to the entrance, the room filled with seniors, strobe lights and a very suspicious smelling fog."
    show reed sunglasses flip:
@ -636,7 +639,10 @@ label chapter_13A:
    window auto
    pause .5
-    play music "audio/effects/promChatterLoop2.ogg" fadein 3
+    play music "audio/OST/prom2.ogg" fadein 3
    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 3
    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.5, 0, 'ambient')
    scene prom
    show anon prom neutral:
        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
@ -760,23 +766,27 @@ label chapter_13A:
    "Everyone moves out of his way as he cuts his way across the room to the small stage."
    stop music fadeout 5
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 5
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 5, 'ambient')
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause .5
    "The music fades until all that’s left is chatter."
    "Spears takes to the stage with mic in hand for once."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene prom
    show dimmer_darker
    show spears neutral flip at scenter
-    with Dissolve(1)
+    show spears:
-    pause .5
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.0*255)))
    with dissolve
    pause .25
    Sp "Alright everyone. Before we end tonight’s prom we have a couple of items to take care of."
    Sp "First thing is-"
    "The principal pulls a tiny gold sheaf envelope from his lapel and holds it up for the audience to gawk at."
@ -798,7 +808,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
    "He smiles and nods, pressing one of the myriad of buttons on the block."
    pause .5
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/drumroll.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    play ambient '<loop 0.37979>audio/effects/drumroll.ogg'
    "A mediocre recording of the drumline plays over the speakers as Spears clears his throat and tears open the envelope."
    Sp "And your winners."
@ -810,9 +820,9 @@ label chapter_13A:
    Sp "{cps=*.3}Aaaaaare{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    stop ambient fadeout 0.25
+    pause 0.5
-    play sound 'audio/effects/drumrollend.ogg' fadein 0.25
+    stop ambient
-    pause 1
+    play sound 'audio/effects/drumrollend.ogg'
    Sp "{cps=*.3}Naaaaaser aaaaand Naaaaoooomiiiiii!{/cps}"
@ -830,8 +840,12 @@ label chapter_13A:
    #  xalign 0.9 yalign 0.0
    show spears:
-        ease_cubic 1 xalign 1.0
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.0*255)))
-    show spears behind dimmer_darker with Dissolve(1)
+        parallel:
            ease_cubic 1 xalign 1.0
        parallel:
            ease_cubic 1 matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0.7*255, 0.7*255, 0.8*255)))
    show spears happy flip behind dimmer_darker with Dissolve(1)
    show naser prom happy:
        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.8
@ -863,6 +877,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
    N "My, I don’t really have a speech prepared. But{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    N "In just one short year, we-"
    show spears neutral flip
    Sp "Alright, alright, let’s stay on schedule."
@ -884,7 +899,11 @@ label chapter_13A:
    pause .5
    show spears:
-        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0.7*255, 0.7*255, 0.8*255)))
        parallel:
            ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
        parallel:
            ease_cubic 1 matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.0*255)))
    show dimmer_darker behind spears with Dissolve(1)
    Sp "To close off this wonderful night, I’ve asked a student band to play a few bops for us."
@ -1167,7 +1186,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
    window auto
    pause .5
    play music 'audio/ost/summertime synth.ogg' fadein 2
    scene auditorium
    show dimmer_darker
    show dimmer_darker as dimmer_xtra
@ -1356,10 +1374,16 @@ label chapter_13A:
    pause .5
    "Fang gets up from my bed and trudges over to my bathroom."
-    pause 1
+    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.25
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/showermuffledloop.ogg' fadein 1.5
+    play sound 'audio/effects/showerDoor.ogg'
-    pause .5
+
    pause 2.25
    play ambient 'audio/effects/showermuffledloop.ogg' fadein 1.5 volume 0.5
    pause 1
    "Right. Clothes."
@ -1384,8 +1408,8 @@ label chapter_13A:
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    pause 1
-    stop ambient fadeout 0.5
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
-    play sound 'audio/effects/showermuffledend.ogg' fadein 0.25
+    play sound 'audio/effects/showermuffledend.ogg' volume 0.5
    "Some minutes later with my knife and I hear the shower sputter to a stop."
    "I knock on the door and set the custom cut outfit on the floor for her."
--- a/game/script/13B.fang-breaks-up-with-anon.rpy
+++ b/game/script/13B.fang-breaks-up-with-anon.rpy
@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
    "Now it’s just us. Alone."
    stop music fadeout 4
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/beachLoop1.ogg' fadein 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/beachLoop.ogg' fadein 3
    pause .5
    "I take Fang by the hand and we make our way down to the beach."
@ -783,7 +783,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
    pause .5
    stop music fadeout 4
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/beachLoop2.ogg' fadein 5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/beachLoop.ogg' fadein 5
    F "Fix?"
    pause .5
--- a/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy
+++ b/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy
--- a/game/script/14C.good-ending.rpy
+++ b/game/script/14C.good-ending.rpy
--- a/game/script/14D.gold-ending.rpy
+++ b/game/script/14D.gold-ending.rpy
@ -12,16 +12,19 @@ label chapter_14D:
    "Volcaldera Bluffs."
    "Weather conditions; hot as tits."
    pause .5
    "The evening sun is boiling hot and I’m reminded of one of the myriad of reasons why I first loathed living here."
    "The sweat dripping in my eyes makes it difficult to see anything five feet in front of me."
    pause .5
    "Like a runt of a tree planted in the sidewalk that I swerve to avoid."
    "The air is hot and humid, and I can feel my body grow heavier as I get closer."
    "I can’t determine if it’s from the sweat soaking my clothes or the welling trepidation inside me."
    pause .5
    "It’s been five years since I’ve seen anyone here."
@ -43,16 +46,21 @@ label chapter_14D:
    unknown "It’s been too long!"
    unknown "It was only five years *Giggle*"
    pause 1
    "I can make out the building now. I use the sleeve of my shirt to wipe the sweat from my eyes and brow."
    "I look at the name written on the arch over the entrance."
    pause 0.5
    "Volcano High."
    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.7, 0, 'ambient1')
    stop ambient fadeout 2
    stop ambient2 fadeout 2
    play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 2.0
-    scene outside school fog with fade
+    scene outside school fog with Dissolve(1.5)
-    "Volcano High."
+    pause 0.5
    A "Still the perfect setting for a horror game.{w=0.2} Or maybe a shitty WAD."
@ -61,8 +69,12 @@ label chapter_14D:
    "A check of my phone says I’m thirty minutes early.{w=0.2} Wonderful."
    "I move to the entrance, only to see all of the steps occupied by twenty-somethings waiting."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
-    show anond neutral at aleft with dissolve
+    show anond neutral at aleft with Dissolve(1)
    pause 1
    A "Yo, this the line?"
    show reed future explanatory flip at rright with dissolve:
@ -70,62 +82,73 @@ label chapter_14D:
    Re "Anon?"
    show reed future explanatory flip:
-        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.75
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.75
    stop ambient1 fadeout 1.0
    play music "audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1, 'ambient')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 2, 'ambient')
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 2, 'ambient1')
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1, 'ambient2')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 2, 'ambient2')
    "A hobo raptor at the top of the steps pulls his oversized shades down to peer at me."
    pause 0.5
    Re "Ayyy Anon, what’s up dude?"
    "I immediately recognize his voice."
    pause 0.5
    A "Hey Reed, what’s happening?"
    A "You seem to certainly have uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} changed."
    A "Why do you look like uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I don’t want to sound rude or anything, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    A "You look homeless, Reed."
    Re "{cps=*0.5}Whaaaat?{/cps}"
    Re "Duuude, I’m not a hobo! I’m the richest raptor in the world, guy!"
    pause 0.5
    "I think Reed’s lost it."
    pause 0.5
    Re "What’d you say, man?"
-    A "What?{w=0.2} Nothing.{w=0.1} No idea what you’re talking about."
+    A "What? Nothing. No idea what you’re talking about."
    pause 0.5
    A "So, how did you get to become the 'richest raptor in the world'?"
    Re "You wouldn’t believe it, man!"
    Re "See, it all started with{cps=*.12}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "Reed proceeds to run his mouth off about a bunch of gibberish."
    "I cannot understand anything he's saying."
    "I think I heard ‘pharmaceutical business’ at one point?"
-    pause 0.2
+    pause 0.5
    Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}and then I was brought here by the birds, dude."
    Re "So what’ve you been up to, man?"
    Re "You look like you haven’t changed a day."
    pause 0.5
    A "It’s not as exciting as your story, honestly."
-    A "I just went off to college,{w=.1} got my bachelor’s,{w=.1} and now I’m just a sound engineer."
+    A "I just went off to college, got my bachelor’s, and now I’m just a sound engineer."
    Re "Sounds pretty sweet, dude."
    show reed future neutral flip with dissolve
    pause 0.5
    "We stand there for a moment in the blazing heat."
    show reed future explanatory flip with dissolve
@ -133,32 +156,47 @@ label chapter_14D:
    Re "They got drinks n’ shit!"
-    A "Definitely,{w=0.2} I need some air conditioning."
+    A "Definitely, I need some air conditioning."
    pause 0.5
    "We quickly moved along to the gymnasium."
-    pause .2
+    window hide
-    scene reunion with dissolve
+    window auto
    pause .5
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    scene reunion with Dissolve(2)
    pause 0.5
    A "Man, it really hasn’t changed. Takes me back."
    show anond neutral at aleft
    show reed future explanatory flip at rright:
        xalign 1.15
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(1)
    Re "Yeah, takes me back too, man."
    pause 0.5
    Re "Hold on, have you signed in yet?"
    A "No, didn’t know I had to."
    "Reed gestures to the sign-in table."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
-    scene black with dissolve
+    scene black with Dissolve(.5)
-    scene reunion with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
    scene reunion with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
-    show anond neutral:
+    show anond neutral with dissolve:
        yalign 0.1
-        xalign -1.20
+        xalign -0.3
-        ease_cubic 2.1 xalign 0.3
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.3
    "The clerk is crouched behind the table sorting through a box."
    "I go over to write in my John Hancock and the person behind the counter stands up."
@ -168,8 +206,8 @@ label chapter_14D:
    show naomi future at sright with dissolve
    show naomi:
        pause .1
-        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.12
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.07
-        ease_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
    N "Oh!"
@ -177,24 +215,29 @@ label chapter_14D:
        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.85
    N "Anon,{w=.1} you made it!"
    pause 0.5
    A "Yeah,{w=.1} I did."
    A "Life been treating you well?"
    N "Oh yes, just last year I moved in with my dear Kanyesaurus."
-    pause 0.5
+    pause 1
    "What the fuck is this world anymore?"
    pause 0.5
    A "Real shame about his last presidential run."
-    N "Oh,{w=.1} he got over it."
+    N "Oh, he got over it."
    N "There’s always 2028!"
    N "Presidential yeezys shall rise again, he says."
    pause 0.5
    "{cps=*0.5}WHAT THE FUUUUCK.{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    A "That reminds me, have you seen Naser’s college posts?"
@ -202,26 +245,29 @@ label chapter_14D:
    N "No, I lost touch with him about three years ago."
-    A "Oh, sorry.{w=.2} How about work, then?"
+    A "Oh, sorry. How about work, then?"
    N "I haven’t been working, mostly staying back at home and looking after the kids."
    A "Sounds like you got a pretty good deal going on."
    show anond neutral flip with dissolve
    "I turn around to see a short line forming behind me."
    show anond neutral with dissolve
    A "Sorry to keep you so long, I’ll get out of here."
    N "Thanks for catching up, Anon. When I’m done here we can chat more."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    stop music fadeout 3
    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdInteriorLoop.ogg' fadein 3
    scene black with Dissolve(0.5)
-    pause 1.0
+    pause 0.5
    scene reunion
    show reed future neutral:
        xalign 0.0
@ -229,14 +275,16 @@ label chapter_14D:
    show anond neutral:
        yalign 0.1
        xalign -0.3
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(1)
    "I go rejoin Reed and we enter the gymnasium together."
    pause 0.5
    "The setup is rather similar to that prom night all those years ago, albeit without the foreign decor."
    "Young men and women mingle with small drinks and party foods across the floor."
-    Re "Man, those look good.{w=.15} Come over here, I’ll get you a drink, on me."
+    Re "Man, those look good. Come over here, I’ll get you a drink, on me."
    pause 0.5
    show anond:
        pause .15
@ -244,54 +292,61 @@ label chapter_14D:
    show reed:
        ease_cubic 0.85 xalign 0.25
-    "I follow him over to the minibar.{w=.15} Trish is sitting in one of the seats, huddled over an empty glass."
+    "I follow him over to the minibar. Trish is sitting in one of the seats, huddled over an empty glass."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    stop ambient fadeout 1
    play music "audio/OST/Ramo de Rosas.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed:
+    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed with dissolve:
-        xalign 2.3
+        xalign 1.6
-        easein_cubic 2.0 xalign 1.25
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.25
    pause .5
    "Rosa is pouring drinks for the few other drunkards when she spots us approach."
    pause 0.5
-    Ro "Oh!{w=0.2} An-on, it is great to see you after all this time!"
+    Ro "Oh! An-on, it is great to see you after all this time!"
    Ro "Please, sit and talk awhile!"
    pause 0.5
    A "Trish, glad we found you here!"
    window hide
    window auto
    show anond:
-        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign -0.1
+        easein_cubic 0.6 xalign -0.1
    show reed:
-        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.15
+        easein_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.15
    show rosa future flip at sright:
-        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 1.35
+        easein_cubic 0.6 xalign 1.35
    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter with dissolve:
        xalign 0.75
    pause .5
    "She looks up from her sulking and her face lights up at the sight of us."
    show trish future smug flip with dissolve
-    T "Anon!{w=0.3} It’s been years!"
+    T "Anon! It’s been years!"
-    A "Trish, Rosa,{w=0.2} glad we found you here!"
+    A "Trish, Rosa, glad we found you here!"
    Re "Come on man, we’ve been texting this whole time."
    pause .5
    "Reed flashes two fingers at the barkeeper, who sets out a few glasses."
    pause .5
    A "Yeah, good to see you too."
    A "Why’re you looking so gloomy over here?"
    Ro "She has been telling me about how it is the end of her world."
    show trish future neutral flip with dissolve
    T "It’s nothing that serious, just workplace drama."
@ -302,103 +357,132 @@ label chapter_14D:
    T "They’re telling me people would rather go to the dentist with all the drills we use."
    T "And mostly with my designs for hollowed-out horns."
    pause .5
    "Rosa instinctively rubs her own horn."
    pause .5
-    A "H-{w=0.2}hollow?"
+    A "H-hollow?"
    T "Of course, I even got in contact with a sculptor and figured out how to make them whistle in the wind!"
    pause .5
    "Reed leans in to whisper in my ear."
    pause .5
    Re "One of the designs sounds like Road Warrior."
    pause .5
    "I shudder at the image."
-
+    show trish future smug flip with dissolve
    show trish future smug flip
    T "Don’t knock it, my satisfaction rate is a clean one-hundred percent!"
    Ro "The only problem is getting people to be willing to try it."
    pause .5
    A "Sounds like there’s a lot of risk there, yeah."
    T "It’s not even that bloody, I only hire the best."
    pause .5
-    A "B-{w=0.2}bloody?"
+    A "B-bloody?"
    T "What, never had a piercing before? Same thing."
    pause .5
    "Reed shakes his head."
    pause .5
    Ro "Anything more than a regular piercing is an abomination before our Lord."
-    show trish future unimpressed flip
+    show trish future unimpressed flip with dissolve
    "I finish my drink and Reed downs his in one shot, tossing a few dollars on the counter."
    stop music fadeout 2
    "I look up to see the one person I’m most anxious and excited to talk with again approaching."
    play music "audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg" fadein 1.0
    A "Fang! You’re here!"
-    show fang d shock:
+    window hide
-        xalign -2.2
+    window auto
-        easein_cubic 0.89 xalign -0.65
+    pause 0.5
    play music "audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg" fadein 1.0
    show anond:
-        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.15
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.15
    show reed:
-        ease_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.725
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.725
    show rosa:
-        ease_cubic 0.65 xalign 1.45
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.45
    show trish:
-        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.875
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.875
    with None
    pause 0.0001
-    show reed future neutral flip with dissolve
+    show reed future neutral flip 
-    show anond neutral flip with dissolve
+    show anond neutral flip 
    show trish future smug flip
    with dissolve
    show fang d shock with dissolve:
        xalign -1.2
        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign -0.65
    pause 1
    F "Wha-{w=0.2} I-{w=0.2} dammit Anon,{w=0.2} I told you to stop calling me that!"
    pause 0.5
    Re "Isn’t that the name Lucy used back in senior year?"
    T "Yeah, I think it was."
    pause 0.5
    A "Come on, you’ll always be Fang to me."
    "Lucy covers her eyes with her hands."
    show fang d happy with dissolve
    F "You haven’t changed a bit, I swear."
    window hide
    window auto
    stop music fadeout 2
    pause 2
-    play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
-    scene black with dissolve
+    play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    scene d03 with dissolve
+    scene d03 with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    Re "C’mon, get over here. I’ll order us all another watchamacallit of drinks. It’s on me, the richest raptor in the {cps=*0.3}woooorld{/cps}!"
    pause 0.5
    "Reed cheerfully throws his arms up as he shouts out a prolonged ‘world’."
    pause 0.5
    F "Sure, thanks. I can’t have too much though, I’m the event organizer and all."
    A "Sounds like a tough break."
    pause 0.5
-    A "Wait, I thought you were the music teacher here."
+    A "Wait, I thought you were the music teacher here?"
    #show fang d neutral with dissolve
    F "I’m getting there. Still working with Mister Jingo until he retires next year."
    F "Until then I’m a teachers’ assistant."
    A "Oh, alright, I see."
    pause 0.5
    "I take a quick glimpse around the room and fail to see any large ape-man."
    pause 0.5
    A "I feel like we’re missing someone."
-    A "Where’s Spears?{w=.1} I could have sworn he would be here."
+    A "Where’s Spears? I could have sworn he would be here."
    Re "Nah man, he’s gone. I saw him on TV the other day, though."
@ -407,15 +491,22 @@ label chapter_14D:
    Re "Sort of, he does commercials for car dealerships now."
    Re "He’s built a reputation for his gimmick of wrecking a car every ad he does."
    pause 0.5
    A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I see."
    pause 0.5
    "Oh god I thought that was a joke about slamming people into cars."
    pause 0.5
    "The hours reconnecting with my old friends pass surprisingly quickly, and the time eventually comes for everyone to go home."
    "Lucy excuses herself from the group to go give the closing speech."
-    scene reunion with fade
+    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    scene reunion
    show anond neutral at aleft
    show reed future neutral flip at rcenter:
        xalign 0.6
@ -423,8 +514,9 @@ label chapter_14D:
        xalign 0.75
    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed:
        xalign 1.3
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(1)
    "She goes up onstage and tests the microphone, getting everyone’s attention."
    pause 0.5
    F "Alright everyone, it’s been a wonderful night."
@ -433,26 +525,27 @@ label chapter_14D:
    F "Please start finding your designated drivers or calling up the taxi driver."
    F "We will be locking the doors at three."
    pause 0.5
    "She puts the mic back on its stand and jumps offstage."
    "Reed pats my shoulder."
    pause 0.5
    Re "You got a ride home, man?"
    A "I can walk, but thanks."
-    show fang d happy:
+    show fang d happy with dissolve:
-        xalign -2.2
+        xalign -1.2
-        easein_cubic 1.11 xalign -0.65
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.65
    "Lucy returns to the minibar, where Rosa is waiting with the last of the alcohol."
    T "There it is."
    show trish future neutral flip with dissolve
    Re "Alright, great seeing you guys. I’ll bounce."
    show trish future smug flip with dissolve
    T "We should all meet again for lunch sometime!"
@ -461,7 +554,9 @@ label chapter_14D:
    Re "You got it, man. See ya."
    hide reed future neutral flip with dissolve
    A "Bye, Reed."
    pause 0.5
    T "Actually, I should get going, too."
@ -470,29 +565,32 @@ label chapter_14D:
    A "You’ve had the most to drink out of all of us, you gonna be alright?"
    "She raises a smug eyebrow and starts walking to the exit."
    pause 0.5
    T "See you guys."
    hide trish with dissolve
    Ro "Come visit me too, An-on.{w=.1} Stella and I would love to have you."
    Ro "Come visit me too, An-on. Stella and I would love to have you."
    hide rosa with dissolve
    "More people trickle out of the room until it’s just Lucy and I."
    show naomi future at sright with dissolve
    "Naomi gives a thumbs-up to Lucy through the door to signal that everyone else has left."
    pause 0.5
    F "Thanks, Naomi, couldn’t have organized this without you."
    N "Oh, don’t worry about it! It was nice getting to act like a class representative again."
    pause 0.25
    show naomi future flip at sright with dissolve
    show naomi:
-        easeout_cubic 1.0 xalign 2.75
+        easeout_cubic 1.0 xalign 1.5
    show naomi future flip with dissolve
    hide naomi with dissolve
    "The Plastic Persimmon waves and lets the door swing closed with an echoing *clang*."
-
+    pause 0.5
    hide naomi
    A "Sooo{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.1}Just the two of us{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -501,36 +599,55 @@ label chapter_14D:
    A "Ha! Still got it."
    F "Yeah yeah."
    pause 0.5
    "Lucy holds up a plastic bag that *clink*s with each shake."
    pause 0.5
    F "I was gonna offer you the last of these{cps=*.12}...{/cps} Buuuut{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    A "Hey now, let’s not let those go to waste."
    pause 0.5
    "Her smug grin and laugh says enough."
    pause 0.5
    A "Rooftop?"
-    F "Rooftop.{w=0.3} Now."
+    F "Rooftop. Now."
    pause 0.5
    "She leads the way through the darkened school hallways and stairwell."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
-    scene black with dissolve
+    stop music fadeout 3.0
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    "I can picture all the old posters from my time here along the walls."
    "Oh hey, they finally replaced the door."
-    stop music fadeout 3.0
+    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 3
    label kino:
-    scene roof night with dissolve
+    scene roof night with Dissolve(2)
    pause 1
    show fang d neutral at sleft
    show anond neutral flip at sright:
        xalign 0.8
    with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    "The door is booted open and the night air has finally cooled down to something breathable now."
    "I turn to the ladder on the side of the stair enclosure and climb up."
    pause 0.5
    "Lucy hands me the bag and makes her own ascent."
@ -538,42 +655,46 @@ label chapter_14D:
    play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 1.0
    "And with the stars above and no moon I would say the view is picturesque."
    pause 0.5
-    F "Oi,{w=.1} you gonna hog the drinks?"
+    F "Oi, you gonna hog the drinks?"
    "I take out a pair of bottles, using one to pop the cap off the other."
-    F "Show-off.{w=.2} They’re twist-offs, ya know."
+    F "Show-off. They’re twist-offs, ya know."
    "To prove her point she takes the capped one and simply twists it’s top off."
    pause 0.5
-    A "Ow.{w=0.3} My ego."
+    A "Ow. My ego."
    show fang d happy with dissolve
-    F "Pfffft.{w=0.2} Anyways."
+    F "Pfffft. Anyways."
    A "A toast!"
    F "To adulthood!"
    A "To stable employment!"
    pause 0.5
    "We tap our bottles together and chug the sweet ambrosia down."
    pause 0.5
    F "Aaaaah. I needed this."
    A "Oh?"
-    "I’m already handing her a second bottle,{w=.1} knowing that she’ll finish her first with her next chug."
+    "I’m already handing her a second bottle, knowing that she’ll finish her first with her next chug."
    pause 0.5
    A "I guess you’ve been busy."
    show fang d unimpressed with dissolve
    F "Dealing with teens is a fuckin’ nightmare."
-    F "There’s this one brat, Kenny.{w=.15} The little shit has broken two trumpets already."
+    F "There’s this one brat, Kenny. The little shit has broken two trumpets already."
    pause 0.5
    A "Can’t be that bad."
@ -581,12 +702,12 @@ label chapter_14D:
    "Lucy’s rant went on for what felt like an hour."
-    "Though judging by the pile of beer bottles,{w=.1} it couldn’t have been more than twenty minutes."
+    "Though judging by the pile of beer bottles, it couldn’t have been more than twenty minutes."
    pause 0.5
    F "-at the fucking dance of all places."
    A "Snrk."
    show fang d neutral with dissolve
    F "What!"
@ -595,25 +716,28 @@ label chapter_14D:
    F "Bullshit."
-    A "For real!{w=.1} You were just as bad!"
+    A "For real! You were just as bad!"
    pause 0.5
    #still -ob
    show fang:
-        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.55
+        easeout_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.35
-        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.0
+        easein_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.0
    pause .3
    show anond:
        pause .02
-        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.82
+        easein_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.82
        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.8
    "Lucy’s elbow finds it’s familiar spot in my side."
-
+    pause 0.5
    F "Nuh uh."
-    A "Yeah huh.{w=0.2} {cps=*.5}Faaaaang.{/cps}"
+    A "Yeah huh. {cps=*.5}Faaaaang.{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "She groans and hides her face in her knees."
    pause 0.5
    F "Why the fuck was I so edgy?"
@ -622,89 +746,114 @@ label chapter_14D:
    F "Mrrrr{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} Okay, so maybe we were that bad."
    A "That’s life for ya."
    pause 0.5
    "She sighs and relaxes. Her legs stretch forward and she leans back on her arms."
    pause 0.5
    F "Yeah{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    F "That’s life{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "I mimic her pose and find myself staring at the small dots spreading across the night sky."
    stop music fadeout 5.0
    pause 0.5
-    A "Teacher at your alma mater.{w=.25} Wasn’t really expecting that, ya know."
+    A "Teacher at your alma mater. Wasn’t really expecting that, ya know."
-    F "And you as a sound engineer?{w=0.3} Pffft, I figured you’d be making a sexbot or something."
+    F "And you as a sound engineer? Pffft, I figured you’d be making a sexbot or something."
    A "The self-cleaning subroutine never worked right."
    show fang d happy with dissolve
    "We chuckle together."
    play music "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Demo.ogg" fadein 1.0
    stop ambient fadeout 5
    pause 0.5
    A "Hey, Lucy{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    "I keep my eyes on the stars, even when Lucy turns to look at me."
    "I can feel heat creep across my face."
    pause 0.5
    A "I got a contract with a studio here. I’m thinking{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    A "Since I’ll be here for a good while, how about we get some dinner sometime."
+    A "Since I’ll be here for a good while, how about we get some dinner sometime?"
    A "Y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} together{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "I look at Lucy at last."
    "Her face is turned back to the sky, but there’s a dusting of pink across her cheeks."
    pause 0.5
    F "I would{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} I totally would, Anon{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    F "But I’ve got work like you wouldn’t believe."
    show fang d neutral with dissolve
    A "O-oh. Well, if it’s too mu-"
    F "However!"
    show fang d happy with dissolve
    "Something covers my hand."
    "I quick glimpse down and I see it’s Lucy’s atop mine."
    pause 0.5
    F "I’ve got time in the morning."
    F "So how bout breakfasts?"
    pause 0.5
    "I smile."
    pause 0.5
    A "Is that a date then?"
    F "I don’t know, is it?"
    "Lucy turns back to me and smiles."
    pause 0.5
    A "It is, then."
    stop music fadeout 2.0
    pause 0.5
    F "You’re such a dweeb."
    #ENDING 4 THEME GOES HERE
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    pause 0.5
    A "I know."
    #play music
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    play music 'audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Live.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    scene d04b with dissolve
+    scene d04b with Dissolve(1)
    pause 1
    "That didn’t stop Lucy from shuffling closer until our legs were pressed together."
    "That didn’t stop Lucy from leaning her head on my shoulder."
    pause 0.5
    "I grin and wrap my arm around her shoulder."
    "Feels just like old times, honestly."
    "Like no time has passed since I left Volcaldera Bluff."
    pause 0.5
    "I guess I never did say goodbye to Volcano High."
    pause 0.5
    F "Thanks, now my face is forever stuck in a cringe, Anon."
@ -717,20 +866,27 @@ label chapter_14D:
    F "You ruined it, you fix it."
    A "Fine I will."
-    scene black with dissolve
+    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    scene black with Dissolve(2)
    pause 0.5
    "My hand cups her cheek gently."
    "Lucy smiles and leans in."
    pause 0.5
    "Ah, I missed this feeling."
    "Our lips meld together as we embrace just like we were teens again."
    $ quick_menu = False
    scene black with fade
    pause .5
    window hide
    pause 1
    scene e4of4 with Dissolve(1.0)
    stop music fadeout 15.0
    pause 16
--- a/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy
+++ b/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy
@ -355,13 +355,8 @@ label chapter_4:
    "Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack."
    "She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it."
    show trish happy flip with dissolve
    show trish happy flip
    pause 0.5
    show vvurm_drama_poster at acenter:
        yalign 0.2
    with wipeup
    pause 1.0
    T "This! Tada!{w=.4} Our first poster!"
    window hide
@ -371,28 +366,27 @@ label chapter_4:
        linear 0.5 alpha 1.0
    transform expand_vertical:
        xcenter 0.5 ycenter 0.5 yzoom 0.0
-        ease_cubic 2 yzoom 2
+        easeout_cubic 1.5 yzoom 2
    show expression AlphaMask("vvurm_drama_poster", At("mask_thing", expand_vertical)) as mask2:
        rotate 10
-        xalign 0.5 yalign 0.15
+        xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5
    pause
-    show fang surprised behind mask2 with Dissolve(.25)
+    show fang surprised behind mask2
    transform rollup_vertical:
        xcenter 0.5 ycenter 0.5 yzoom 2
-        ease_cubic 2 yzoom 0.0
+        easein_cubic 1.5 yzoom 0.0
    show expression AlphaMask("vvurm_drama_poster", At("mask_thing", rollup_vertical)) as mask3:
        rotate 10
-        xalign 0.5 yalign 0.15
+        xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5
    hide mask2
-    pause 2
+    pause 1
    hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(.5)
    hide mask3
    hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(.25)
    # hide mask3
    show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25)
-    pause .5
+    pause .75
    A "VVURM DRAMA?{w=.4} That’s an{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} interesting name{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} and what’s with the date on it?"
--- a/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy
+++ b/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy
@ -558,6 +558,8 @@ label chapter_5:
    stop music fadeout 3
    image fang tail = Movie(play="animations/fang tail.webm",loop=True)
    play ambient 'audio/effects/clipLoop.ogg' fadein 1
    play ambient1 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 1
    scene fang tail with Dissolve(1)
    "Through my blurred vision I can make out Fang’s tail, slowly shifting side to side."
@ -588,6 +590,8 @@ label chapter_5:
    "I give the appendage a sharp tug."
    stop ambient fadeout 0.69
    stop ambient1 fadeout 0.69
    scene black with Dissolve(.25)
    "There’s a shrill cry above me.{w=.4} That got her attention."
--- a/game/script/7.concert-day.rpy
+++ b/game/script/7.concert-day.rpy
--- a/game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy
+++ b/game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy
--- a/game/script/9.anons'-dirty-laundry-gets-put-up-to-air.rpy
+++ b/game/script/9.anons'-dirty-laundry-gets-put-up-to-air.rpy
@ -46,9 +46,9 @@ label chapter_9:
    show naomi:
        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.3
-    show anon neutral with dissolve:
+    show anon neutral behind naomi with dissolve:
-        xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1
+        xalign -0.3 yalign 0.1 #xalign 1.0
-        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.75
+        easein_cubic 1.85 xalign 0.75
    pause 1
    "Naomi has taken the opportunity to walk with me through the hallways."
@ -562,8 +562,12 @@ label chapter_9:
        parallel:
            pause .25
            linear 0.5 alpha 0
-    pause .5
+    pause .25
-    show reed considering flip:
+    show reed considering:
        xalign 1.05 
    with Dissolve(0.2)
    pause .2
    show reed: #flip
        parallel:
            easeout_back 0.75 xcenter 1.4
        parallel:
--- a/game/script/x10-raymbas-observations.rpy
+++ b/game/script/x10-raymbas-observations.rpy
@ -86,7 +86,6 @@ transform raymbatransform:
 label chapter_x10:
    window hide
    stop music fadeout(3)
    scene black with Dissolve(2)
    pause 1
@ -98,6 +97,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "I was manufactured in a factory in the year 201M2020."
    "It is currently 201M2027, and I am playing with my current owner."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene carpet
@ -124,6 +125,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "2{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
    "1{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}"
    window hide Dissolve(0.0)
    window auto
    scene black
    pause 1.5
@ -135,8 +138,13 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause .5
    unknown "Here, let me show you it’s brushing majesty."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    play music 'audio/ost/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 3
    show white with Dissolve(1)
    scene little troodon:
        zoom 1.5 xoffset -600 yoffset -300
@ -149,8 +157,9 @@ label chapter_x10:
        #xcenter 0.0 yalign 0.5 zoom 2
        xcenter 0.0 yalign 0.5
        xsize 1061*2 ysize 1500*2
    show white
    hide white with Dissolve(1)
    with Fade(1, 0, 1, color='#fff')
    pause 1
@ -191,12 +200,16 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Alert:{w=.4} Confirmation of sale.{w=.4} This unit has been successfully purchased.{w=.4} Changing designation of potential buyer to current owner."
    unknown "Very well, the contest is yours, along with this trinket."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
    pause .5
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene carpet
@ -217,6 +230,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "2{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
    "1{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}"
    window hide Dissolve(0.0)
    window auto
    scene black
    pause 1.5
@ -225,9 +240,11 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Current date:{w=.4} February sixteenth, 201M2020"
    "Current location:{w=.4} Owner’s Domicile"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
-    play music 'audio/ost/the hunt for more (you)s.ogg' fadein 3 noloop
+    play music 'audio/ost/the hunt for more (you)s.ogg' fadein 3
    scene room anon day:
        blur 8 zoom 1.5 xoffset -100 yoffset -400
    show anon neutral blur:
@ -269,12 +286,16 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause .5
    "Execute:{w=.4} This unit’s designation is now RAYmba."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
    pause .5
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene carpet
@ -295,6 +316,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "2{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
    "1{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}"
    window hide Dissolve(0.0)
    window auto
    scene black
    pause 1.5
@ -303,6 +326,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Current date:{w=.4} March second, 201M2020"
    "Current location:{w=.4} Owner’s domicile."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    play music 'audio/ost/appreciating_the_scenery.ogg' fadein 4
@ -325,6 +350,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Observation:{w=.4} Owner does not return home at this hour."
    "Conclusion:{w=.4} Mysterious person designated as ‘Carldewskii’ is coming in to raid the fridge again."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    hide mask2
@ -351,6 +378,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}With this box of cornflakes?"
    A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Two or three will do."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    show fang neutral blur behind raymbabox:
@ -368,6 +397,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Observation:{w=.4} Second person has dropped some common toasted flakes into my designated cleaning area."
    "Initiating subroutine Meal_time.exe"
    window hide
    window auto
    show flakes:
        pause 1.0
@ -380,12 +411,16 @@ label chapter_x10:
    stop music fadeout 6
    show fang neutral blur flip with Dissolve(1)
    F "You are such a dweeb, Anon."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 1
    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
    pause .5
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene carpet
@ -404,6 +439,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "2{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
    "1{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}"
    window hide Dissolve(0.0)
    window auto
    scene black
    pause 1.5
@ -412,6 +449,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Current date:{w=.4} December twenty-fourth, 201M2020"
    "Current location:{w=.4} Owners domicile."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    play music 'audio/ost/its_footloose_now.ogg' fadein 4
@ -499,6 +538,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Response:{w=.4} Sister unit Mark 2 looks to be of older make.{w=.4} Suggestion:{w=.4} Sister unit Mark 2 should be sent in for immediate dismantlement."
    "Message from Mark 2:{w=.4} Unit RAYmba is of inferior make.{w=.4} Suggestion:{w=.4} Sister unit RAYmba should be disposed of."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    show dimmer_darker with dissolve
@ -519,12 +560,16 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Initiating Sleep mode."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 1
    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
    pause .5
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene carpet
@ -546,6 +591,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "2{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
    "1{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}"
    window hide Dissolve(0.0)
    window auto
    scene black
    pause 1.5
@ -554,6 +601,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Current date:{w=.4} January fourth, 201M2021"
    "Current location:{w=.4} Unknown."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    play music 'audio/ost/appreciating her company.ogg' fadein 4
@ -606,6 +655,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    show fang neutral blur with Dissolve(1)
    F "I know. And I know I said a break and all{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    show anon:
        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.6
@ -631,12 +682,16 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause 1
    "Message from Mark 2:{w=.4} Statement:{w=.4} ‘emotion’ cannot be defined by us."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 1
    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
    pause .5
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene carpet
@ -655,6 +710,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "2{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
    "1{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}"
    window hide Dissolve(0.0)
    window auto
    scene black
    pause 1.5
@ -663,6 +720,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Current date:{w=.4} March second, 201M2021"
    "Current location:{w=.4} Owner’s domicile."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    play music 'audio/ost/dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 3
@ -695,6 +754,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause .5
    N "What’s this in the box over here?"
    window hide
    window auto
    show naomi neutral blur behind raymbabox:
        xcenter -0.5 yalign 0.45 #zoom 2
@ -707,10 +768,9 @@ label chapter_x10:
    F "Hey, don’t touch him. That’s RAYmba, I’m keeping him safe for a while."
-    show fang pneutral flip behind raymbabox:
+    show fang pneutral blur flip behind raymbabox:
        xcenter 1.5 yalign 0.45 # zoom 2
        xsize 1412*2 ysize 1500*2
    show fang:
        easein_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.75
    pause .5
@ -752,12 +812,16 @@ label chapter_x10:
    show fang pneutral blur flip with Dissolve(1.0)
    "Unknown guest designation confirmed."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 1
    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
    pause .5
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene carpet
@ -776,6 +840,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "2{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
    "1{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}"
    window hide Dissolve(0.0)
    window auto
    scene black
    pause 1.5
@ -784,10 +850,12 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Current date:{w=.4} July twentieth, 201M2025"
    "Current location:{w=.4} Owner’s domicile."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    play music 'audio/ost/appreciating the atmosphere.ogg' fadein 3
-    scene carpet
+    scene fangapartment
    show raymbabox
    show raymba3:
        xcenter 0.6 ycenter 0.385 zoom 0.5
@ -831,6 +899,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause .5
    F "There’s the flakes in a little cup next to the box there."
    window hide
    window auto
    show anond neutral blur behind raymbabox:
        xcenter -0.5 yalign 0.5# zoom 2
@ -859,12 +929,16 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause 3.5
    A "Wow, he still loves his corn flakes."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 1
    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
    pause .5
    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    scene carpet
@ -951,6 +1025,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    "Analysing possible stratagems.{w=.4} Analysis complete."
    "Executing evasive maneuvers."
    window hide
    window auto
    show keys:
        pause .6
@ -965,6 +1041,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause .5
    "Maneuvers successful.{w=.4} Current location:{w=.4} beneath the drawer."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    stop music fadeout 6
@ -981,6 +1059,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause .5
    "Returning to Owner."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    # show raymbashadow:
@ -994,11 +1074,15 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause 2
    "Execute:{w=.4} lullaby.exe."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    play music 'audio/ost/amberlight brilliance - piano.ogg' fadein 1 noloop
    pause 4
    "Observation:{w=.4} Owner’s alarm appears to be rescinded."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 1
    show raymbashadow as footshadow behind raymba4s:
@ -1025,6 +1109,8 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause 1.25
    A "Can always count on you."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    show anonpet:
@ -1035,10 +1121,11 @@ label chapter_x10:
    pause .5
    stop music fadeout 6
    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    image big blending = Composite(
        (1920, 1080),
--- a/game/script/x6-passion-of-the-trigga.rpy
+++ b/game/script/x6-passion-of-the-trigga.rpy
@ -577,7 +577,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
    window hide
    window auto
-    play sound 'audio/effects/caveman_magic.ogg'
+    play sound 'audio/effects/cavemanMagic.ogg'
    pause .75
    show tana:
--- a/game/script/x8-naomi-tribulations.rpy
+++ b/game/script/x8-naomi-tribulations.rpy
@ -1,13 +1,15 @@
 label chapter_x8:
    #Naomi Arc Two
    stop music fadeout(3)
    scene black with Dissolve(2)
    pause 1
    scene livingroomdayalt
    show fang nonxmas pendant neutral at sleft:
        xzoom -1.0
        xalign -0.2
    show naomi sad flip at scenter
    with fade
    play music "audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg" fadein 1.0
    scene livingroomdayalt
    show naomi sad flip at scenter
    with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    "I find myself worrying more and more."
    "With the night coming to a close everyone begins to leave Naser’s home."
@ -15,118 +17,149 @@ label chapter_x8:
    "All his old teammates give him congratulatory hugs and back pats on their way out."
    "Even Chet and Stella, who’re the last to leave."
-    show fangdad unimpressed flip at sright with easeinright:
+    window hide
-        yalign 0.1
+    window auto
-    FD "Don’t think you’re getting out of cleaning, missy!"
+    pause 0.5
    show naomi:
        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
    pause 0.0001
    show fang nonxmas pendant neutral at sleft:
        xzoom -1.0
        xalign -0.4
        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
    show fangdad unimpressed:
        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.6
        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.3
    with dissolve
    pause 0.5
    FD "Don’t think you’re getting out of cleaning, missy!"
    show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve
    show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve:
        xzoom 1.0
    F "{cps=*0.5}UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH{/cps}."
    show naomi considering flip with dissolve
    "I frown a little. After all this time, she still argues with her family?"
    "I was always taught to respect my elders by my parents."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.25
    show naomi:
        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
    show fang:
        parallel:
            easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.4
        parallel:
            linear 0.5 alpha 0
    show fangdad:
        parallel:
            easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.6
        parallel:
            linear 0.5 alpha 0
    show fangmom neutral flip with dissolve:
        xalign 1.5
        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
    pause 0.5
    show fangmom neutral flip at sright with easeinright
    FM "Naomi dear, you don’t have to-"
    show naomi neutral with dissolve
    show naomi neutral
    with dissolve
    N "I insist, ma’am. I was the one to suggest the party, after all."
-    show fangmom neutral
+    show fangmom:
-    show fangdad neutral
+        easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.5
-    with dissolve
+    pause 0.4
-
+    hide fangmom neutral with dissolve
-    hide fangmom
+    pause 0.25
    hide fangdad
    with easeoutright
    "I continue sweeping the detritus from the floor, making sure to focus on the nooks and crannies."
    show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed with dissolve:
        xzoom -1.0
    show naomi:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.8
+        ease_cubic 1.2 xalign 0.45
        pause .2
        ease_cubic 1.2 xalign 0.55
        pause .4
        repeat
    "I continue sweeping the detritus from the floor, making sure to focus on the nooks and crannies."
    pause 0.5
    "I try to focus on my task but{cps=*0.075}...{/cps}"
-    show naomi unimpressed with dissolve
+    show naomi considering with dissolve
    "My thoughts keep going back to how odd Naser has been acting."
    show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed:
        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign -0.36
    pause 0.3
    show naomi:
        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.6
    "When I had to keep Naser out so his family could set the party up he was{cps=*0.075}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "Distant{cps=*0.075}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "A part of me wants to say it’s just nerves."
    "After all, he’s going away to college."
    "Leaving his home."
-    show naomi:
+    pause 0.5
        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.7
    "Even when I promised him that I’ll be with him so he won’t feel lonely."
    "He felt so stiff when I said that."
    show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed:
        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.1
    show naomi neutral with dissolve
    "I shake my head to clear my mind of these awful thoughts."
    "After all, Naser and I can talk about this once we move in together."
    show naomi happy with dissolve
    show naomi:
        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
    show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve:
        xzoom -1.0
    show fang nonxmas pendant angry:
        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.28
    "Aw, it’ll be as if we’re newlyweds."
    "That thought makes me a little giddy as I push the pile neatly into the dust pan."
-    show naser unimpressed flip at nright with dissolve:
+    pause 0.5
-        xalign 1.6
+
    "Yes, in fact maybe we can talk about our plans for our living arrangements now."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed with dissolve:
        xzoom -1.0
    show naomi:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.7
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
    show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve:
        xalign 1.9
        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3
    pause 0.5
    show naomi:
        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.5
    pause 0.5
    show naomi neutral with dissolve
    N "Naser dear, I-"
    show naomi considering with dissolve
    "Huh? Why is he making that face?"
    "Huh? Why is he making that face?"
    show naomi explanatory with dissolve
    N "Is something the matter?"
-    show naser considering flip with dissolve
+    show naser considering flip
-    Nas "W-{w=.15}what? N-{w=.15}nah, nothing really."
+    show naomi neutral
    with dissolve
    Nas "W-{w=.15}what? N-{w=.15}nah, nothing really."
    show naser considering flip with dissolve
    show naser:
        pause .6
        "naser neutral flip"
        pause .4
        "naser considering flip"
        repeat
    "He’s looking around the room, but there’s only me, Naser and Lucy here at the moment."
    pause 0.5
    N "Naser, please, you’ve seemed troubled the entire day. What’s wrong?"
    show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
    show naomi neutral
    show naser explanatory flip at nright with dissolve:
        "naser explanatory flip"
        xalign 1.6
    Nas "Nothing! Nothing at all Naomi!"
    Nas "Just uh{cps=*.15}...{/cps} ah, damn it{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
@ -134,127 +167,215 @@ label chapter_x8:
    show naser sad flip with dissolve
    "Naser’s shoulders slump down and he heaves out a heavy sigh."
    stop music fadeout 5.0
    pause 0.5
    Nas "I’ve been uh{cps=*.15}...{/cps} Thinking about this a lot, Naomi{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    Nas "I uh{cps=*.15}...{/cps} Wanna take a break{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "A break?"
    pause 0.5
    N "That’s it? I mean, we only just started cleaning and-"
    Nas "No I mean, us."
    pause 1
    show naomi shocked with dissolve
    "What."
    pause 0.5
    Nas "I think we need a break, Naomi."
    pause 0.5
    show naomi:
        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.4
    show naomi shocked with dissolve
    "O-oh."
-    show naomi sad with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
    "I{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    show naomi sad with dissolve
    N "I see{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    show naser neckhold flip with dissolve
    Nas "Lucy and Anon are taking one, and I thought-"
    pause 0.5
    "I gently set the broom against the wall."
    pause 0.5
    N "Yes{cps=*.15}...{/cps} A break{cps=*.15}...{/cps} I{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
    Nas "I mean, I wanted to tell you sooner but-"
    N "I understand, Naser. After all, you always have the best ideas."
-    show naomi sad flip with dissolve
+    window hide
-    pause .2
+    window auto
    pause 0.25
-    hide naomi with easeoutleft
+    show naomi:
        easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.5
    pause 0.9
    hide naomi with dissolve
    show naser:
-        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.5
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.4
    show naser explanatory with dissolve
    Nas "Wait, Naomi-"
-    show fang nonxmas pendant angry behind naser with dissolve:
+    hide fang
-        xzoom 1.0
+    show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve:
        xalign -0.3
        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
    F "God damn it Naser!"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    #play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 2.0
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 2
    scene home fang outside night
    show naomi sad at scenter
    with Dissolve(2)
    pause 0.5
    play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 2.0
    scene home fang outside night with fade
    show naomi sad flip at scenter
    "I slip out the door of Naser’s house."
-    pause 0.4
+    pause 0.5
    "A break{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
-    pause 0.4
+    pause 0.5
    "A break{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    pause 1
    "But why?"
    "I’ve done everything right, right?"
    "Been the model girlfriend, right?"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause .5
    show naomi:
-        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.4
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.6
-        pause .4
+        pause 0.5
-        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.3
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
        pause 0.5
        easein_cubic 2 xalign 0.75
    pause 3.5
    "I carry myself down the driveway, trying to hold my thoughts together."
    pause 0.5
    "Spring is about over, but it’s cold."
    pause 0.5
    "Tears prick my eyes, but I suddenly don’t have the energy to wipe them off."
    pause 0.5
    "Everything was going wonderfully, but now it’s come shattering down."
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    show naomi:
        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.8
        pause 1
        linear 0.045 yalign -0.002 
        linear 0.045 yalign 0.002
        linear 0.045 yalign -0.004 
        linear 0.045 yalign 0.004
        linear 0.045 yalign -0.005 
        linear 0.045 yalign 0.005
        linear 0.045 yalign -0.005 
        linear 0.045 yalign 0.005
        linear 0.045 yalign -0.005 
        linear 0.045 yalign 0.005
        linear 0.045 yalign -0.004 
        linear 0.045 yalign 0.004
        linear 0.045 yalign -0.002 
        linear 0.045 yalign 0.002
        pause 0.5
        easeout_cubic 0.8 yalign -0.3
        easein_back 0.5 yalign -0.5
    pause 5.5
    show naomi sad flip:
        parallel:
            ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.1
        parallel:
            ease_cubic 0.8 yalign -0.4
            ease_cubic 1.2 yalign -0.5
    "When I reach the curb I crumple into my knees."
    pause 0.5
    "I can’t even focus on a single calamitous thought with so many firing through me."
    pause 0.5
    "The thought of being away from Naser, of things just ending{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    stop ambient fadeout 2
    scene black with Dissolve(1)
    pause 1
    N "{b}*sob*{/b}"
    pause 1
    stop music fadeout 2.0
    "{cps=*0.05}...{/cps}"
-    scene black with fade
+    pause 0.5
    "{cps=*0.2}--Two Years Prior--{/cps}"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    scene office spears
    show naomi unimpressed at sleft
    show spears neutral flip at sright:
        yalign 0.1
-    with fade
+    with Dissolve(1)
-    Sp "{cps=*.15}...{/cps} And lastly, here is your own desk to work at."
+    pause 0.5
    Sp "{cps=*.15}...{/cps}And lastly, here is your own desk to work at."
    play sound "audio/effects/anonDeskSlam.ogg"
    "My principal slaps the top of an aged, yet official looking table furnished with a lamp and its own drawers." with vpunch
    pause 0.5
    "Most students in any school would only ever be seated behind the regular ‘board on some sticks’ model, maybe one with a little cubbyhole built in for binders if the school were old enough."
    show naomi considering with dissolve
    "But here I am, one of the lucky few{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    show naomi neutral with dissolve
    show naomi: #salute
-        linear 0.12 yalign 0.09
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.1
        easein_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
    N "Thank you sir!"
    show naomi: #salute
        easein_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
    pause 0.5
    show naomi sad with dissolve
    "I should feel a lot more excited about winning the election, but{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
-    Sp "{cps=*.10}...{/cps} Naomi."
+    Sp "{cps=*.10}...{/cps}Naomi."
    show naomi shocked with dissolve
    "Uh oh, did he see me sulking?"
    pause 0.5
    Sp "There may not have been many candidates, nor voters in deciding you should be the class president, but the fact remains that you won."
@ -263,102 +384,145 @@ label chapter_x8:
    Sp "Don’t go underselling yourself."
    Sp "If you try, you can be good enough."
    show naomi considering with dissolve
    N "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
-
+    pause 0.5
    show naomi neutral with dissolve
    N "Thank you, Principal Spears. I’ll try."
    N "Thank you, Principal Spears. I’ll try."
    show spears happy flip with dissolve
    show spears:
        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.4
    "He gives me a warm smile and a pat on the shoulder and leaves to let me get acquainted with the new space."
-    hide spears with easeoutleft
+    show spears:
        easeout_cubic 1 xalign -0.3
    pause .4
    hide spears with dissolve
    "Looks like there’s already a few forms to fill out{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "Oh? There’s a letter in here, too{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    ##fade in cg
    #this one music pops on purpose
    play music 'audio/OST/good faith.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    scene naomiletter with fade
+
    scene naomiletter with Dissolve(1)
    pause 0.5
    N "It’s addressed to me, specifically?"
    pause 0.5
    "Oops, I said that out loud."
    "Good thing there’s nobody here{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
    "But then what’s that drumming sound?"
    pause 0.5
-    "Oh dear{w=0.5}, that’s my own feet."
+    "Oh dear, that’s my own feet."
    pause 0.5
    "What am I getting so worked up over?"
    "It’s probably just a letter of congratulations."
    "Not that anyone other than Spears would even care about-"
    pause 0.5
    "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}‘Dearest Naomi..’?"
    pause 0.5
-    "Is this a joke?{w=0.5} Who would{cps=*.20}...{/cps}?"
+    "Is this a joke? Who would{cps=*.20}...{/cps}?"
    pause 0.5
    "My eyes trace the paragraph multiple times before I realize I haven’t actually been reading it."
    "Then all of a sudden it all registers at once."
    pause 0.5
    "There’s a loud squeal that echoes through the hallway."
    pause 0.5
    "Oh wait."
    "I cover my lips and I feel my entire face heat up."
    "That was me. I hope no one else heard that."
    pause 0.5
    "But, but, but{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "Naser is{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    "And I’m just{cps=*.10}...{/cps}"
    pause 1
    "Wouldn’t people look at him funny?"
    "Wouldn’t they look at me funny?"
    "After all, I’m just so...{w=0.5} so{cps=*.25}...{/cps}"
    pause 0.5
    Sp "{alpha=*0.6}{i}Don’t go underselling yourself.{/i}{/alpha}"
    Sp "{alpha=*0.6}{i}If you try, you can be good enough.{/i}{/alpha}"
    pause 0.5
    N "{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
    pause 1
    "No, I can do this."
    "For our date!"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    scene office spears
-    show naomi happy at scenter:
+    show naomi happy:
-        parallel:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
-            ease_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.3
+        block:
-            ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
+            ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.075
            ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.125
            repeat
-        parallel:
+    with Dissolve(1)
-            ease_cubic 1.6 xalign 0.6
+
-            ease_cubic 1.6 xalign 0.4
+    #scene office spears
-            repeat
+    #show naomi happy at scenter:
-    with fade
+    #    parallel:
    #        ease_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.3
    #        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
    #        repeat
    #    parallel:
    #        ease_cubic 1.6 xalign 0.6
    #        ease_cubic 1.6 xalign 0.4
    #        repeat
    #with fade
    "I’ll go check out the library for romantic self-help books after school!"
    show naomi:
        easein_cubic 0.35 yalign 0.1
        easeout_cubic 0.35 yalign 0.0
    "I’ll be the perfect girlfriend!"
    window hide
    window auto
    pause 0.5
    stop music fadeout 3
    scene black with Dissolve(2)
    pause 0.5
    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
-
+    window hide
-    stop ambient fadeout 2.0
+    window auto
    stop music fadeout 3.0
    pause 2
    scene black with fade
    pause 1
    return
--- a/game/script/x9-naomi-tribulations.rpy
+++ b/game/script/x9-naomi-tribulations.rpy