all ch 13, 14 w C,D done - first pass

game/script.rpy

@@ -367,15 +367,21 @@ image schooloutside_blur:
    pause 1
    repeat
 
+#additional flips
+image naomi future flip = im.Flip('images/naomi/naomi future.png', horizontal=True)
+image fang d happy flip = im.Flip('images/fang/future sets/fang d happy.png', horizontal=True)
 
-#Dual actor sprites
+#Dual actor images
 image fangcarriesanon = "images/anon/Other/fanganoncarry.png"
+image fanganon_promdance = "images/anon/Other/dpromdance.png" 
 
 #additional CGs
 image gold_fang_home_prom_stars = "images/cgs/stair3.png" 
 image good_fang_home_prom_stars = "images/cgs/stair2.png"
 image other_fang_home_prom_stars = "images/cgs/stair1.png"
 
+#additional BGs
+image park_night = "images/backgrounds/park night.jpg"
 
 #WAOH ITS THE TITLE SCREEN!!!!
 label splashscreen:

game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy

@@ -1407,7 +1407,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Fang gasps and snaps back to reality."
 
     "I can see the embarrassed mirth playing across her beautiful eyes."
-    scene fang d ending preformance 4
+    scene fang d ending preformance 4 with dissolve
     "No thought at all, I press my lips against hers."
 
     "Behind me I can hear the audience’s cheers grow louder."
@@ -1425,8 +1425,135 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "There, picture-perfect."
     scene black with fade
     stop music fadeout 1.0
+    pause 0.5
     "..."
 
+    scene park_night with fade
+
+    "The cool night air feels absolutely amazing after we spent so long in the sweatbox of a gym."
+
+    show anon prom neutral at acenter with dissolve:
+        xalign 1.1 yalign -0.1 zoom 1.35 
+    show fang d prom happy with dissolve:
+        xpos -0.15 yalign -0.1 zoom 1.35
+
+    "When I had brought up calling the taxi to take us home, Fang insisted on walking instead."
+
+    "And I couldn’t turn her down after she gave me ‘the look’."
+
+    F "MMmmm. Feels fucking nice now."
+
+    "Her wings flutter, and surprises me when droplets of sweat are sent flying from them."
+
+    A "Yeah, nice and breezy."
+    show fang d prom happy:
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xpos 0.0
+
+
+    "My arm finds its way around her waist, and Fang takes the hint and starts walking closer with me."
+
+    "In companionable silence we find ourselves drifting nowhere near Fang’s home."
+
+    "The quiet streets of the town are lit well enough, yet provide a more interesting mystique to it."
+
+    "It’s as we pass by the park we had visited so many months ago that my phone buzzes in my pocket."
+
+    "...and Fang’s hip."
+
+    "The startled noise from Fang’s mouth was part eardrum shattering and part fucking hilarious."
+    pause 0.5
+    A "Bahahahahahaha!"
+
+    F "Shut up!"
+
+    "Her hip collides with mine, forcing my still buzzing phone roughly against my leg."
+
+    A "Hehehe, sorry. One sec."
+
+    "A check of it shows I'm getting dangerously close to my midnight curfew."
+
+    "Also, Reed had been texting me several pictures in rapid succession."
+
+    "All of them depict King Rex dancing with every girl I know except Fang."
+
+    "Even Naomi, with a face fueled by pure seethium."
+
+    "And Stella, with a blurred gray elbow barely in frame."
+
+    "{i}Reedman: yooooo i got my dances{/i}"
+
+    "{i}Reedman: also swing by the hospital some time, bring my backpack{/i}"
+
+    "He really does it to himself."
+
+    "Right, the curfew."
+
+    "Before I can pocket my phone, Fang stops my hand."
+
+    F "Anon…"
+
+    A "Hm?"
+
+    F "There’s something I wanted to do. Before we get home."
+
+    A "Where are you hiding your smokes? That dress doesn’t look like it has any pockets."
+
+    F "Not that."
+
+    F "Trish and Spears stole my slow dance."
+
+    "Oh."
+    pause 0.5
+    "Oh!"
+
+    A "O-out here though?"
+
+    F "Why not? No one else is here."
+
+    "I look around and see that she’s telling the truth."
+
+    A "W-well, okay? Any-"
+
+    "Before I can ask for a music request Fang yanks my phone out of my hand and is already looking for one online."
+
+    "The music is tiny and tinny coming out of my phone’s ratty speaker."
+
+    F "Okay, just like I saw with you and Trish…"
+
+    A "Wait, do YOU not know how to slow dance?"
+
+    F "I can improvise?"
+
+    "I chuckle as my hands finds its place on her hip and takes her other."
+
+    scene park_night with fade
+
+    show fanganon_promdance with dissolve:
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.2
+        pause 3
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos -0.2
+        pause 3
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.2
+        pause 3
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos -0.2
+        pause 3
+        repeat
+
+
+    A "Alright, I think she said like this…"
+
+    "I try to explain Trish’s instructions to Fang as we slowly move to the barely audible rhythm."
+
+    "And between the too-quiet music, the constant foot stomps from Fang, and my own idiocy giving bad instructions."
+
+    "We find ourselves in a close embrace beneath the streetlights, now just swaying along and loving each other’s company."
+
+    scene black with fade
+    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    pause 0.5
+    "..."
+
+
     label FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh:
     #Fast Times at Volcano High
     "{cps=*0.2}--  Two Weeks Later --{/cps}"
@@ -1496,7 +1623,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Reed emerges from the cloud as if nothing’s wrong."
 
     T "Reed... {w=0.2}*huff*... {w=0.2}Your car.... {w=0.2}*huff*..."
-    show reed explanatory at sleft with easeinleft
+    show reed explanatory at rleft with easeinleft
     Re "Oh yeah, you like it? It’s an electric!"
 
     show trish neutral at scenter with dissolve:
@@ -1540,7 +1667,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "She hunches into the car to get out the pizza boxes and starts striding towards us."
     show fang neutral flip behind anon with easeinright:
         xalign 0.45
-    show naser neutral flip with easeinright:
+    show naser neutral flip behind rosa with easeinright:
         xalign 0.85
     show fang neutral behind anon with dissolve
 
@@ -1797,14 +1924,14 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
      "Go to college":
 
-      A "Well… Spears convinced me to send out a couple application letters for college."
+      A "Well… {w=0.3}Spears convinced me to send out a couple application letters for college."
 
-      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music… maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
+      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music…{w=0.3} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
 
      "Not certain just yet":
       A "I’m not sure yet."
 
-      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music… maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
+      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music… {w=0.3}maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
 
     Re "Oh nice, dude! You can be the band’s sound technician when you’re done!"
 
@@ -1972,7 +2099,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "OOF!"
 
     "And sends me tumbling onto Reed’s present."
-    scene room anon day with dissolve
+    play sound "audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg"
+    scene room anon day with vpunch #dissolve
     "The new Metal Gear RAYmba Mk.II bumps against my face, turns, and continues eating the crumbs off my new carpet."
 
     "Even from the floor I can say that both were really thoughtful gifts."
@@ -2022,7 +2150,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Her beak rubs against me as she hums."
 
-    "Aw yes. Cuddles. Best way to spend a cold day."
+    "Aw yes.{w=0.3} Cuddles. Best way to spend a cold day."
 
     F "Damn right."
 
@@ -2148,7 +2276,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "I’ll sue them later."
 
     A "Alright, here I go."
-    scene room anon day
+    scene room anon day with fade
     "I zip the abomination on and step out of bed, the wall of cold stinging my toes."
     show anon monkey at aleft with dissolve
     A "Carbonara sound good?"
@@ -2187,7 +2315,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Fang grumbles and starts shifting in the bed, so I turn my attention to making the plates."
 
-    show anon monkey flip at aright
+    show anon monkey flip at aright with easeinright
 
     "I grab a few sodas from the fridge and place everything on the new rug for an indoor picnic setup."
 
@@ -2211,7 +2339,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     show fang christmas happy with dissolve
 
-    F "It’sh good. Like the uh, cheese."
+    F "It’sh good. Like the uh,{w=0.2} cheese."
 
     A "Why thank you."
 
@@ -2268,7 +2396,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "As the amber dangles in the air, it catches the light from outside and glows the same brilliant orange as her eyes."
 
-    F "Anon… it’s beautiful."
+    F "Anon…{w=0.3} it’s beautiful."
 
     A "Here."
 
@@ -2292,7 +2420,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Fang lets her hair down again and holds up the pendant."
 
-    F "This is… thank you, Anon."
+    F "This is… {w=0.3}thank you, Anon."
 
     A "The moment I saw it, I knew it would have been the perfect present."
 
@@ -2341,15 +2469,19 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "You expecting company?"
 
+    show anon monkey with dissolve
+
     "I give her a puzzled look in return before getting up and heading to the door."
 
-    show anon monkey with dissolve
+    hide anon monkey with easeoutright
 
     "My momentary fear of it being a potential addict or murderer are quelled upon opening the door, revealing-"
 
     A "Principal Spears? What are you doing here?"
-    show anon monkey with move:
+    show anon monkey flip at aright with easeinright:
         xalign 0.7
+    pause 0.1
+    show anon monkey with dissolve
     show spears neutral flip behind anon with easeinright:
         xalign 1.3
     "Our ex-principal is squeezed into the narrow hallway, holding a delicately wrapped gift in his hands."
@@ -2441,7 +2573,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "You got plans of your own, don’t you?"
 
-    F "Yeah. So…"
+    F "Yeah.{w=0.2} So…"
 
     A "So…"
 
@@ -2463,7 +2595,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Because ow, my fucking heart."
 
-    show fang pendant neutral
+    show fang pendant neutral with dissolve
 
     "Fang shakes her head from side to side slowly."
 
@@ -2483,7 +2615,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "So…"
 
-    F "I… Want to do some thinking."
+    F "I…{w=0.3} Want to do some thinking."
 
     A "More thinking? Wow, that’s new for you."
 
@@ -2527,11 +2659,11 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "True. That’s a few weeks to cram in all the cuddles I’ll be missing."
 
-    A "Cuddles or cuddles?"
+    A "Cuddles or {i}cuddles{/i}?"
 
     "Fang’s grin is just shy of mischievous."
 
-    F "On the bed. Now. I’m collecting on those cuddles right now."
+    F "On the bed.{w=0.2} Now.{w=0.2} I’m collecting on those cuddles right now."
 
     A "Yes ma’am."
 

game/script/14D.gold-ending.rpy

@@ -26,6 +26,9 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "I’ve kept in touch with all of them."
 
     "But to see them again in person?"
+    #renpy is jank so this doesn't do loop all that well buuut
+    #play sound "audio/effects/teenageCrowdLoop.ogg" fadein 2.0
+    $renpy.sound.play("audio/effects/teenageCrowdLoop.ogg", loop=True, fadein=2.0)
     pause 0.3
     "It’s the sounds that reach me first. The chatter of people milling about."
 
@@ -45,18 +48,22 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "The attempt at humouring myself just made me feel more anxious."
 
-    "A check of my phone says I’m thirty minutes early. Wonderful."
+    "A check of my phone says I’m thirty minutes early.{w=0.2} Wonderful."
 
     "I move to the entrance, only to see all of the steps occupied by twenty-somethings waiting."
 
     show anond neutral at aleft with dissolve
 
+    show reed future explanatory at rright with dissolve
 
     A "Yo, this the line?"
-    show reed future explanatory flip at rright
+    show reed future explanatory flip at rright with dissolve:
+        xalign 1.15
 
     Re "Anon?"
-
+    show reed future explanatory flip:
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.75
+    stop sound fadeout 1.0
     play music "audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "A hobo raptor at the top of the steps pulls his oversized shades down to peer at me."
 
@@ -121,8 +128,8 @@ label chapter_14D:
     scene reunion with fade
     A "Man, it really hasn’t changed. Takes me back."
     show anond neutral at aleft
-    show reed future explanatory flip at rright
+    show reed future explanatory flip at rright with dissolve:
-    with dissolve
+        xalign 1.15
 
     Re "Yeah, takes me back too, man."
 
@@ -132,14 +139,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Reed gestures to the sign-in table."
     scene reunion with fade
-    show anond neutral at aleft
+    show anond neutral at aleft with easeinleft
     "The clerk is crouched behind the table sorting through a box."
 
     "I go over to write in my John Hancock and the person behind the counter stands up."
 
     "Seeing her in person now is like witnessing a possessed barbie doll."
 
-    show naomi future at sright
+    show naomi future at sright with dissolve
     N "Oh!"
 
     N "Anon, you made it!"
@@ -160,7 +167,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     N "Presidential yeezys shall rise again, he says."
 
-    "{cps=*0.5}WHAT THE FUUUUCK{/cps}"
+    "{cps=*0.5}WHAT THE FUUUUCK.{/cps}"
 
     A "That reminds me, have you seen Naser’s college posts?"
 
@@ -174,8 +181,12 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Sounds like you got a pretty good deal going on."
 
+    show anond neutral flip with dissolve
+
     "I turn around to see a short line forming behind me."
 
+    show anond neutral with dissolve
+
     A "Sorry to keep you so long, I’ll get out of here."
 
     N "Thanks for catching up, Anon. When I’m done here we can chat more."
@@ -204,9 +215,13 @@ label chapter_14D:
     Ro "Please, sit and talk awhile!"
 
     A "Trish, glad we found you here!"
-    show reed at rright with move
+
-    show rosa future flip at sright with move
+    show reed future at rright with ease:
+        xalign 1.5
+    show rosa future flip at sright with ease:
+        xalign 1.0
     show trish future neutral flip at tcenter with dissolve
+
     "She looks up from her sulking and her face lights up at the sight of us."
 
     T "Anon! It’s been years!"
@@ -268,10 +283,12 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "I look up to see the one person I’m most anxious and excited to talk with again approaching."
 
     play music "audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    show anond neutral flip with ease:
+        xalign 0.1
     A "Fang! You’re here!"
-    show fang d shock with dissolve:
+    show fang d shock with easeinleft:
      xalign -0.6
-    F "Wha- I- dammit Anon, I told you to stop calling me that!"
+    F "Wha- {w=0.2}I- {w=0.2}dammit Anon, I told you to stop calling me that!"
 
     Re "Isn’t that the name Lucy used back in senior year?"
 
@@ -287,9 +304,9 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     scene d03 with fade
 
-    Re "C’mon, get over here. I’ll order us all another watchamacallit of drinks. It’s on me, the richest raptor in the woooorld!"
+    Re "C’mon, get over here. I’ll order us all another watchamacallit of drinks. It’s on me, the richest raptor in the {cps=*0.3}woooorld{/cps}!"
 
-    "Reed cheerfully throws his arms up as he shouts out a prolonged ‘world’"
+    "Reed cheerfully throws his arms up as he shouts out a prolonged ‘world’."
 
     F "Sure, thanks. I can’t have too much though, I’m the event organizer and all."
 
@@ -317,7 +334,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     Re "He’s built a reputation for his gimmick of wrecking a car every ad he does."
 
-    A "I… I see."
+    A "I…{w=0.3} I see."
 
     "Oh god I thought that was a joke about slamming people into cars."
 
@@ -326,9 +343,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "Lucy excuses herself from the group to go give the closing speech."
     scene reunion with fade
     show anond neutral at aleft
-    show reed future at rright
+    show reed future neutral flip at rcenter:
-    show rosa future flip at sright
+        xalign 0.6
-    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter
+    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter:
+        xalign 0.8
     with dissolve
     "She goes up onstage and tests the microphone, getting everyone’s attention."
 
@@ -336,7 +354,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "You don’t have to go home, but you can’t stay here."
 
-    F "Please start finding your designated drivers or calling up the taxi driver left."
+    F "Please start finding your designated drivers or calling up the taxi driver."
 
     F "We will be locking the doors at three."
 
@@ -347,13 +365,21 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Reed pats my shoulder."
 
-    Re "You got a ride home man?"
+    Re "You got a ride home, man?"
 
     A "I can walk, but thanks."
 
-    "Lucy returns to the minibar and starts raiding the fridge for the last of the alcohol."
+    show fang d happy flip with dissolve:
+     xalign -0.6
+    # pause 0.2
+    hide fang d happy flip with easeoutleft
+    "Lucy returns to the minibar, where Rosa is waiting with the last of the alcohol."
 
     T "There it is."
+    show rosa future flip at sright with easeinright:
+        xalign 1.3
+    show fang d happy with easeinleft:
+     xalign -0.6
 
     Re "Alright, great seeing you guys. I’ll bounce."
 
@@ -362,35 +388,37 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "Yeah, absolutely. It’s been forever since I’ve been in town, would love to get a tour of what’s new."
 
     Re "You got it, man. See ya."
-    hide reed future explanatory with fade
+    hide reed future neutral flip with dissolve
     A "Bye, Reed."
-    hide reed future explanatory with easeoutleft
 
     T "Actually, I should get going, too."
 
     T "I don’t want to get stuck in traffic."
-    hide trish with dissolve
+    
     A "You’ve had the most to drink out of all of us, you gonna be alright?"
 
     "She raises a smug eyebrow and starts walking to the exit."
 
     T "See you guys."
-
+    hide trish with dissolve
     Ro "Come visit me too, An-on. Stella and I would love to have you."
 
     hide rosa with dissolve
 
     "More people trickle out of the room until it’s just Lucy and I."
 
+    show naomi future at sright with dissolve
     "Naomi gives a thumbs-up to Lucy through the door to signal that everyone else has left."
 
     F "Thanks, Naomi, couldn’t have organized this without you."
 
     N "Oh, don’t worry about it! It was nice getting to act like a class representative again."
 
+    show naomi future flip at sright with dissolve
+    hide naomi future with easeoutright
     "The Plastic Persimmon waves and lets the door swing closed with an echoing *clang*."
 
-    A "Sooo… Just the two of us…"
+    A "Sooo… {w=0.3}Just the two of us…"
 
     F "Damn you Anon and damn you Bill Withers."
 
@@ -400,7 +428,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Lucy holds up a plastic bag that *clink*s with each shake."
 
-    F "I was gonna offer you the last of these… Buuuut…"
+    F "I was gonna offer you the last of these… {w=0.3}Buuuut…"
 
     A "Hey now, let’s not let those go to waste."
 
@@ -408,7 +436,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Rooftop?"
 
-    F "Rooftop. Now."
+    F "Rooftop. {w=0.3}Now."
 
     "She leads the way through the darkened school hallways and stairwell."
 
@@ -417,8 +445,9 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "I can picture all the old posters from my time here along the walls."
 
     "Oh hey, they finally replaced the door."
+    stop music fadeout 3.0
     label kino:
-    scene roof night
+    scene roof night with fade
     show fang d neutral at sleft
     show anond neutral flip at sright
     "The door is booted open and the night air has finally cooled down to something breathable now."
@@ -440,7 +469,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "To prove her point she takes the capped one and simply twists it’s top off."
 
-    A "Ow. My ego."
+    A "Ow.{w=0.3} My ego."
 
     show fang d happy with dissolve
 
@@ -494,7 +523,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Nuh uh."
 
-    A "Yeah huh. Faaaaang."
+    A "Yeah huh.{w=0.4} Faaaaang."
 
     "She groans and hides her face in her knees."
 
@@ -502,7 +531,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Trish."
 
-    F "Mrrrr… Okay, so maybe we were that bad."
+    F "Mrrrr… {w=0.3}Okay, so maybe we were that bad."
 
     A "That’s life for ya."
 
@@ -517,7 +546,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Teacher at your alma mater. Wasn’t really expecting that, ya know."
 
-    F "And you as a sound engineer? Pffft, I figured you’d be making a sexbot or something."
+    F "And you as a sound engineer?{w=0.3} Pffft, I figured you’d be making a sexbot or something."
 
     A "The self-cleaning subroutine never worked right."
     show fang d happy with dissolve
@@ -534,13 +563,13 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Since I’ll be here for a good while, how about we get some dinner sometime."
 
-    A "Y’know… together…"
+    A "Y’know…{w=0.3} together…"
 
     "I look at Lucy at last."
 
     "Her face is turned back to the sky, but there’s a dusting of pink across her cheeks."
 
-    F "I would… I totally would, Anon…"
+    F "I would…{w=0.3} I totally would, Anon…"
 
     F "But I’ve got work like you wouldn’t believe."
     show fang d neutral with dissolve