Merge remote-tracking branch 'Nio/choreo_ch7andup_basedonBowies' into bowieniocombo

game/script.rpy

@@ -587,6 +587,59 @@ image fang nonxmas pendant flip off happy = Composite(
    (0, 0), "amberpendant"
 )
 
+#phone gallery effect
+
+image anoninsideship = "images/other/phonegallery/anoninsideship.png"
+image anonmushroom = "images/other/phonegallery/anonmushroom.png"
+image fanghugsanonbylake = "images/other/phonegallery/fanghugsanonbylake.png"
+image fangrebel = "images/other/phonegallery/fangrebel.png"
+image museumbones = "images/other/phonegallery/museumbones.png"
+image peachesfangshy = "images/other/phonegallery/peachesfangshy.png"
+image reeddoesscienceclass = "images/other/phonegallery/reeddoesscience class.png"
+image rosastellacampsite = "images/other/phonegallery/rosastellacampsite.png"
+image trishgarden = "images/other/phonegallery/trishflower garden.png"
+image warship = "images/other/phonegallery/warship.png"
+image fangreedbandroom = "images/other/phonegallery/tfangreedbandroom.png"
+image fangtrishoutsideschool = "images/other/phonegallery/fangtrishoutside school.png"
+image reedkingrexauditorium = "images/other/phonegallery/reedkingrexauditorium.png"
+image reedtrishfanghallway = "images/other/phonegallery/reedtrishfanghallway.png"
+
+image fangphonegallery1:
+   "peachesfangshy" with dissolve
+   pause 2.0
+   "anonmushroom" with dissolve
+   pause 2.0
+   "warship" with dissolve
+   pause 2.0
+   "anoninsideship" with dissolve
+   pause 2.0
+   "fangrebel" with dissolve
+   pause 2.0
+   "museumbones" with dissolve
+   pause 2.0
+   repeat
+
+image fangphonegallery2:
+   "rosastellacampsite" with dissolve
+   pause 0.7
+   "reeddoesscienceclass" with dissolve
+   pause 0.7
+   "trishgarden" with dissolve
+   pause 0.7
+   "rosastellacampsite" with dissolve
+   pause 0.7
+   "reedkingrexauditorium" with dissolve
+   pause 0.7
+   "fangtrishoutsideschool" with dissolve
+   pause 0.7
+   "fangreedbandroom" with dissolve
+   pause 0.7
+   "reedtrishfanghallway" with dissolve
+   pause 0.7
+   repeat
+
+#end of phone gallery effect
+
 image chadshark flip = im.Flip("stella/chadshark.png", horizontal=True)
 image chadshark = "stella/chadshark.png"
 image naser tablehit = "naser/naser table hit.png"
@@ -616,6 +669,8 @@ image naomifangcg blur = im.Blur("images/cgs/naomifangcg.png", 1.5)
 image naomiletter = 'images/cgs/naomiletter.png'
 image ending_d_cg = 'images/cgs/golden ending.png'
 
+image photoviewfinder = 'images/other/photoviewfinder.png'
+
 image projector9_blur:
    "projector9 normal" with dissolve
    pause 1
@@ -637,7 +692,7 @@ image anonnight_videocall_bg = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/backgrounds/room a
 image fangphonebg = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/backgrounds/anonroomday2.png", 0.9),(400,40,576,920))
 image fpvcblack = im.Scale("images/other/black.png", 565, 1100)
 image call_ended = im.Scale("images/other/black.png", 656, 700)
-
+image caller_black = im.Scale("images/other/blackwtransp.png", 656, 700)
 
 #callers
 image anon_vc_neutral = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon neutral.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
@@ -654,13 +709,15 @@ image anonfangfor_phonebg = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/other/anon_fang_xmas.
 #fangphone effect - video call with Anon mainly
 layeredimage fangphonevideocall:
    group midlayer:
+   #  pos (370, -20)
       pos (370, -20)
       rotate 1
       attribute blackmid default:
          "fpvcblack"
 
    group talkerbg:
-      pos (446, -35)
+   #  pos (446, -35)
+      pos (440, -25)
       rotate 1
       # xzoom 1.3 #anon's cam is shitty?
       attribute bgday default:
@@ -673,10 +730,10 @@ layeredimage fangphonevideocall:
          "fangphonebg"
 
       attribute call_ended_bg_black:
-         "call_ended"
+         "caller_black"
 
    group talker:
-      pos (410, 65)
+      pos (417, 65)
       rotate 3
       attribute anonneutral:
          "anon_vc_neutral"
@@ -706,7 +763,13 @@ layeredimage fangphonevideocall:
          "anonfangfor_phonebg"
 
       attribute call_ended_poff:
-         "call_ended"
+         "caller_black"
+
+      attribute galleryapp1:
+         "fangphonegallery1"
+
+      attribute galleryapp2:
+         "fangphonegallery2"
 
    always:
       "fangphonelayer1"
@@ -718,6 +781,9 @@ layeredimage fangphonevideocall:
 #Dual actor images
 image fangcarriesanon = "images/anon/Other/fanganoncarry.png"
 image fanganon_promdance = "images/anon/Other/dpromdance.png"
+image fanganonhug = "images/fang/fullbody/fanganonhug.png"
+
+image anon smiley = "images/anon/base set/anon face happy.png"
 
 #additional CGs
 image gold_fang_home_prom_stars = "images/cgs/stair3.png"
@@ -725,9 +791,50 @@ image good_fang_home_prom_stars = "images/cgs/stair2.png"
 image other_fang_home_prom_stars = "images/cgs/stair1.png"
 image anonfang_xmasmorningbed = "images/cgs/anonchristmasmorning.png"
 
+#sepia effect for flashbacks
+image grainf0 = "images/other/grain/frame_00.png"
+image grainf1 = "images/other/grain/frame_01.png"
+image grainf2 = "images/other/grain/frame_08.png"
+image grainf3 = "images/other/grain/frame_09.png"
+image grainf4 = "images/other/grain/frame_10.png"
+image grainf5 = "images/other/grain/frame_13.png"
+
+image grain_effect:
+   "grainf0" with dissolve
+   pause 0.2
+   "grainf1" with dissolve
+   pause 0.2
+   "grainf2" with dissolve
+   pause 0.2
+   "grainf3" with dissolve
+   pause 0.2
+   "grainf4" with dissolve
+   pause 0.2
+   "grainf5" with dissolve
+   pause 0.2
+   repeat
+
+image sepiagarden = im.Sepia("images/backgrounds/garden.jpg")
+image sepiaanon neutral = im.Sepia("images/anon/base set/anon neutral.png")
+image sepiaanon concerned flip= im.Sepia(im.Flip("images/anon/base set/anon concerned.png", horizontal=True))
+image sepiaanon neutral flip= im.Sepia(im.Flip("images/anon/base set/anon neutral.png", horizontal=True))
+image sepiarosa neutral flip = im.Sepia(im.Flip("images/rosa/rosa neutral.png", horizontal=True))
+image sepiastella explanatory flip = im.Sepia(im.Flip("images/stella/stella explanatory.png", horizontal=True))
+image sepiastella unimpressed flip = im.Sepia(im.Flip("images/stella/stella unimpressed.png", horizontal=True))
+image sepiastella neutral flip = im.Sepia(im.Flip("images/stella/stella neutral.png", horizontal=True))
+image sepiafang happy = im.Sepia("images/fang/basic set/fang happy.png")
+image sepiafang sad = im.Sepia("images/fang/basic set/fang sad.png")
+image flashbacktitlecard = "images/other/grain/flashbacktitlecard.png"
+image flashbackfincard = "images/other/grain/flashbackfincard.png"
+
+
 #additional BGs
 image park_night = "images/backgrounds/park night.jpg"
 image home_fang_dim = "images/backgrounds/home fang dim.jpg"
+image bus_stop = "images/backgrounds/Bus_Stop.jpg"
+image hotel = "images/backgrounds/hotellobby.jpg"
+image airport = "images/backgrounds/airport.jpg"
+image fromairplane = "images/backgrounds/fromairplane.jpg"
 
 #WAOH ITS THE TITLE SCREEN!!!!
 label splashscreen:

game/script/12C.anon-fang-lovey-dovey.rpy

@@ -196,7 +196,18 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "Alone."
 
     "Despite being in a group of four."
-    scene garden with fade
+
+    show flashbacktitlecard
+    show grain_effect
+    with dissolve
+    pause 3.0
+    scene sepiagarden
+    show grain_effect 
+    show sepiastella explanatory flip behind grain_effect at sright:
+        xalign 0.8
+    show sepiaanon neutral behind grain_effect at acenter:
+        xalign 0.4
+    with fade
 
     "{i}Stella’s chattering with me about the esoteric while the school delinquents get the Orwellian treatment from Rosa, who swaps between helping Fang plant some kind of exotic flower I don’t know and barking orders.{/i}"
 
@@ -206,6 +217,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     A "{i}Right, right. Lunar eclipse. Is that the one where you can’t see the Moon or the one where you can’t see the sun?{/i}"
 
+    show sepiastella unimpressed flip with dissolve 
     St "{i}*sigh*{/i}"
 
     St "{i}It’s also called a Blood Moon for its color?{/i}"
@@ -216,28 +228,47 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     A "{i}But camping?{/i}"
 
+    show sepiastella neutral flip with dissolve 
+    show sepiarosa neutral flip behind grain_effect at sright with easeinright:
+        xalign 1.2
     Ro "{i}Oh, yes!{/i}"
-
+ 
     Ro "{i}My backyard is very big. Long bus ride to school.{/i}"
 
     Ro "{i}But I see the stars at night so well, so Stella has slumber parties often!{/i}"
 
+    show sepiafang happy behind grain_effect at sleft with easeinleft:
+        xalign -0.55
+
     Lucy "{i}Anon! We should go to!{/i}"
 
+    show sepiaanon neutral flip with dissolve
     A "{i}Wait what why?{/i}"
 
     Lucy "{i}We can go stargazing Anon. Just imagine it.{/i}"
 
+
     A "{i}But camping? Can’t we just-{/i}"
 
+    show sepiafang sad:
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign -0.1
+    show sepiaanon concerned flip with dissolve
     Lucy "{i}C’mon Anon. Don’t you want to watch the stars together with me?{/i}"
 
     "{i}Lucy’s pleading eyes lock onto mine.{/i}"
 
+    show sepiaanon neutral flip with dissolve
     A "{i}Alriiiiiight. As long as we have tents. I don’t wanna deal with insects.{/i}"
 
+    show sepiafang happy with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
     A "{i}As long as we have tents.{/i}{w=0.2} Me and my stupid fucking mouth."
 
+    show flashbackfincard
+    show grain_effect
+    with dissolve
+    pause 3.0
+
     scene campsite
     show anon neutral at acenter
     with fade

game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy

@@ -1745,15 +1745,23 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "I nod in response."
 
-    #phone with changing pics effec goes here
+
+    pause 1.0
+
+    show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg_black call_ended_poff at scenter with easeinbottom
+    hide anon
+    hide fang 
+    with dissolve
     "We curl together on my bed, staring at Lucy’s phone app boot up."
 
+    show fangphonevideocall galleryapp1 with dissolve
     "The summer was well spent, Lucy and I got to go all over town."
 
     "A well documented series of escapades, from local Farmers’ Markets to a guided tour through a docked warship."
 
     "Lucy and I share frequent quips and anecdotes about our experiences."
 
+    show fangphonevideocall galleryapp2 with dissolve
     "Eventually, the timeline goes back far enough for some familiar faces to start showing up."
 
     "Unwelcome familiar faces that quickly get swiped past."
@@ -1763,9 +1771,14 @@ label chapter_13C:
     "I find it hard to describe, a mix of sorrow and longing and something I can’t put my finger on."
 
     A "Lucy?"
-
+    show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg_black call_ended_poff with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+    hide fangphonevideocall with easeoutbottom
     "My interjection snaps her out of her mood, and she sets her phone down gently on the empty computer desk."
 
+    show fang sad at sleft 
+    show anon neutral flip behind fang at acenter
+    with dissolve
     F "Sorry, I…"
 
     "Her eyes linger on the cellular device."
@@ -1777,7 +1790,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
     F "Or maybe I'll do it when I really feel like letting go was the best decision."
 
     "Lucy casts her gaze around the barren room."
-
+    show fang unimpressed with dissolve
     F "It's not really fair to delete them though."
 
     F "I could just forget about them."
@@ -1785,7 +1798,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
     F "I'm good at forgetting things on demand."
 
     "I take her hand and give it a reassuring squeeze."
-
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
     "Lucy sighs, and her exhaled breath seems to expel her mood."
 
     "I look at the clock and nearly jump." 
@@ -1794,18 +1807,31 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "Long enough that hunger once again finds us."
 
-
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+    hide anon with easeoutright
     "I move to the kitchen, and look through my minifridge."
 
-
     "There isn’t much left, just some green onions, a few pieces of beef, and five eggs."
 
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve 
+    pause 0.5
+    hide fang with easeoutleft
     "Meanwhile, Lucy looks through my pantry and cupboards for anything else to cook."
 
     "After a minute of searching, she comes across two cups of PachyMan Ramen just a week shy of their expiration dates."
 
+    show fang happy at sleft with easeinleft
     F "I’ve discovered a new recipe!"
 
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 2.0 xalign 2.5
+
+    stop music fadeout 2.0    
+    pause 1.5 
+    hide fang with dissolve
+
+    play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg" fadein 3.0
     "The meal prep doesn’t take too long for two adults."
 
     "It isn’t the most filling of dinners, but it would hold us over quite nicely until morning."
@@ -1814,41 +1840,84 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "I close my eyes for a bit, trying to get lost in my girlfriend’s warm embrace." 
 
+    show fang happy at scenter 
+    show anon neutral flip at aright:
+        xalign 0.9
+    with dissolve 
+    pause 1.5
+
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.6
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.5
     "Suddenly, I feel a jab on my ribs."
 
     "I look down at Lucy, who’s poking at my chest."
 
-    A "Uh, Lucy… what are you doing?"
+    A "Uh, Lucy… {w=0.5}what are you doing?"
 
-    F "Oh, just… making sure..."
+    F "Oh, just… {w=0.5}making sure..."
 
     A "Making sure of what?"
 
-    F "You know… that you’re all healed up."
+    F "You know… {w=0.5}that you’re all healed up."
 
-    A "Lucy… it’s been five and a half months since the accident. I think I’m pretty healed by this point."
+    A "Lucy… {w=0.5}it’s been five and a half months since the accident. I think I’m pretty healed by this point."
 
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.6
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.5
+        pause 0.7
+        repeat
     "Lucy doesn’t stop poking me."
 
     "If anything, she increases the ferocity of her pokes, going not just for my chest, but also for my stomach and my armpits."
 
     A "Lu-Lucy! Cut it out!"
 
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.6
+        ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.5
+        pause 0.2
+        repeat
     "I try to be stoic, but I can’t help but giggle as Lucy turns into a literal tickle monster."
 
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 0.7
+        ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 0.8
+        pause 0.3
+        repeat
+
     "I decide to return the favor by also poking at her, starting with her stomach, and gradually moving up to her chest and armpits."
 
+    show anon grin flip:
+        xalign 0.8 
+    show fang happy:
+        xalign 0.5
+    with dissolve
     "Finally, I hover a finger over her snoot, a mischievous grin spreading over my lips."
 
+    show fang surprised with dissolve
     "Lucy’s eyes widen."
 
 
-    F "Anon… Don’t you dare…"
+    F "Anon…{w=0.5} Don’t you dare…"
 
     "I let out a giggle as I poke her snoot."
 
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 0.7
+        ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 0.8
     A "Boop!"
 
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.65
+
+
+    hide anon 
+    hide fang 
+    with dissolve   
+    show fang hug at acenter with dissolve
+ 
     "That seems to do it, and Lucy pulls me closer to her, wrapping me in a tight and warm hug."
 
     "I return the embrace, tempted to resume my tickling assault, but far too comfortable in my ptero gf’s embrace to care about anything else in the world."
@@ -1892,11 +1961,16 @@ label chapter_13C:
     "I inch closer, and our lips meet..."
 
     "..."
+    stop music fadeout 2.0
+    scene black with fade 
 
+    scene emptyroomday
+    show anon neutral flip at acenter 
+    with fade 
     "All in all, it isn’t that bad a night at all."
 
     "..."
-
+    play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 2.0
     "I woke up absolutely spent." 
 
     "I’m covered in feathers, and Lucy’s ambrosia scent hangs heavy over the bed sheets." 
@@ -1905,8 +1979,11 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "Now she’s rummaging through my fridge for whatever food we have left."
 
+    hide anon with easeoutleft
+    play sound "audio/effects/shower.wav" fadein 1.0
     "Rather than waste time asking the obvious, I decide to hit the shower."
 
+    scene black with fade 
     "As the water strips away last night’s scents off me, I get to thinking how Lucy must be feeling right about now."
 
     "I imagine what tomorrow will be like, not just for me but also for Lucy."
@@ -1915,12 +1992,16 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "The third or fourth one this year...."
 
-    "from the non-binary thing, to the band, to the betreyal, and finally to having a human boyfriend..."
+    "From the non-binary thing, to the band, to the betreyal, and finally to having a human boyfriend..."
 
     "...Only to have him go so abruptly..."
 
     "I'm surprised she hasn't gone insane after all she’s endured."
+    stop sound fadeout 1.0
 
+    scene emptyroomday
+    show fang neutral flip at sright
+    with fade  
     "I open the bathroom door and see Lucy sitting on my bed, staring blankly at her phone and swiping across messages."
 
     A "What's up?"
@@ -1929,6 +2010,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     A "Ten bucks he leaves another set of skidmarks on the road outside."
 
+    show anon neutral at sleft with easeinleft
     "I sit next to her on the bed."
 
     A "What are you checking?"
@@ -1937,22 +2019,37 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     F "You know, it's weird. There's not enough pictures of you in here…."
 
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
     F "Hold on, let’s fix that!"
 
+    scene emptyroomday
+    show anon smiley at acenter  
+    show photoviewfinder
+    with fade
     "Lucy raises her phone and points its camera lens at me."
 
     F "Stop smiling! You look retarded."
-
+    show anon happy with dissolve 
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera_shutter_click.wav'
     "{i}click{/i}"
 
     F "Alright, cool."
 
+    scene emptyroomday
+    show anon neutral at aleft
+    show fang sad flip at scenter:
+        xalign 0.7
+    with fade
     "We go silent again for maybe a minute or two."
 
     "The overbearing silence’s broken when Lucy lets out a heavy sigh."
 
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.6
     F "...D-do you really have to go?"
 
+    stop music fadeout 5.0
+
     "I can’t help but let out a heavy sigh of my own."
 
     A "Today, I'll get on a bus and it'll be a Michael Tarpit movie for a few years."
@@ -1961,51 +2058,63 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "There’s a heavy silence between Lucy and me for a few seconds."
 
-    A "It... It still feels wrong to me, you know?." 
+    A "It... {w=0.5}It still feels wrong to me, you know?" 
 
     A "That I'm still too ‘new’ at this boyfriend stuff." 
 
     A "That I’ll never get the hang of it."
 
     A "That if only I had a few more months of practice… maybe I could be better at it..."
-
+    
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve 
+    play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 2.0
     "Lucy lets out a short snort."
 
-    F "I mean… you're not THAT bad at it… most of the time anyway..."
+    F "I mean…{w=0.5} you're not THAT bad at it… {w=0.5}most of the time anyway..."
 
     "I let out a single bitter chuckle."
 
     A "I must've been the single most boring guy you've ever dated..."
 
+    show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.33 xalign 0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.33 xalign 0.6
     "Lucy lightly punches me on the shoulder."
 
     F "That’s bullshit, and you know it!" 
 
     F "If anything, I'm the boring one!"
 
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve 
     "Lucy deflates as she grabs on to her right arm." 
 
     F "I mean, take away my spikes, wrist bands, and stompers and what do you have?"
 
     "The wonderful girl that single handedly changed my life?"
 
+    show fang surprised flip with dissolve
     F "Huh?"
 
+    show anon unimpressed with dissolve
     "God damned mumbling…"
 
-    A "I, uh.. I never really thought about it..."
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
+    A "I, uh...{w=0.5} I never really thought about it..."
 
     A "I suppose you trying hard at being tough was endearing to me. At least when you weren't physically assaulting me."
 
     A "There was something else though. I knew it when we were talking on the rooftop."
 
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
     F "I wish I knew what that was."
 
+    show fang hiding flip with dissolve
     "Lucy cringed, her hands moving to cover her face." 
 
     "Emotions warred across her face as she tried to form coherent words."
 
-    F "I-I can’t... can’t stop wondering what you saw in me back then..."
+    F "I-I can’t...{w=0.5} can’t stop wondering what you saw in me back then..."
 
     F "And all this time we've been hanging out, I still can’t comprehend why you stuck around us--me!"
 
@@ -2023,16 +2132,19 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "{i}I can't help but think that that must be how I looked on my first day.{/i}"
 
-    A "I think… I felt like you..."
-
+    A "I think… {w=0.5}I felt like you..."
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve
     "Lucy stares at me pleadingly with those beautiful citrine eyes of hers."
 
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.25
     A "For the longest time, I didn’t know who I really was or what I wanted to be…"
 
     "I tighten my grip on Lucy’s hand and stare deep into her eyes."
 
     A "Lucy whatever you want to do-"
 
+    show fang very sad with dissolve
     "Lucy, in response, glances away in what almost feels like shame."
 
     "Almost instantly, I realize why…"
@@ -2040,23 +2152,28 @@ label chapter_13C:
     T "{alpha=0.5}{i}IT WAS YOUR IDEA.{/i}{/alpha}"
 
     "The two of us wanted so badly to avoid the subject, and yet here I was dredging it up and twisting the metaphorical knife deeper into the wound."
-
-    A "I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to bring her up..."
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve
+    A "I’m sorry… {w=0.5}I didn’t mean to bring her up..."
 
     F "..."
 
-    F "...Please… Don't think about Trish that way."
+    F "...Please… {w=0.5}Don't think about Trish that way."
 
     F "She's not at fault. I'm just a fucking idiot..."
 
+    show anon concerned with dissolve
     A "Lucy..." 
 
-    A "I just... forget that I have to walk on eggshells around certain topics..."
+    A "I just...{w=0.5} forget that I have to walk on eggshells around certain topics..."
 
+    show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve
+
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.33 xalign 0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.33 xalign 0.6
     "Lucy puffs her cheeks and jabs me in the ribs."
 
     A "Ow!"
-
     "Lucy crosses her arms and lets out a single scoff."
 
     F "Like *I* have to be careful when I catch you muttering, watching the newest season of underage panty shot quest and having war flashbacks fits through the night?"
@@ -2072,43 +2189,61 @@ label chapter_13C:
     A "I moved on, ok? Just like how YOU moved on from that non-binary, liberal, Trish-militantism, right?"
 
     F "Who said I did?"
-
+    stop music fadeout 3.0
+    show fang sad with dissolve
     "Lucy unfolds her arms and puts her head on her hands."
 
     F "I..."
 
-    F "[i]*sigh*[/i]"
+    F "{i}*sigh*{/i}"
 
     F "I didn't work out as a tough person, I didn't work out as a big musician, and I sure as hell didn't work out as a lover, given how many exes I have..."
 
-    F "This whole thing with making everyone's lives around me hell, testing the waters with identifying my gender… it was a complete disaster..."
-
+    F "This whole thing with making everyone's lives around me hell, testing the waters with identifying my gender… {w=0.5}it was a complete disaster..."
+    show fang angry flip with dissolve
     F "You can't really compare the damage I did to myself to you jerking off to cartoons, okay?!"
-
+    
+    show fang shocked flip with dissolve
+    pause 0.3
+    show fang hiding flip with dissolve 
     "Lucy’s eyes widen in horror as she facepalms and falls back on the bed."
 
-    F "...Fuck... I might have said too much…" 
+    show fang very sad flip with dissolve
+    F "...Fuck...{w=0.5} I might have said too much…" 
 
     F "I already ruined our last day together with stories from when I was just a shit person..."
 
     "Lucy’s eyes start to shimmer."
 
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
     A "Hey! It's fun to compare!" 
 
     A "I still like you, so I guess girls have it easier."
 
     "Lucy picks herself up and gives me a narrowed-eyed stare."
-
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve
     F "You just ‘like’ me?"
 
+    show fang very sad with dissolve
     "Her eyes droop, and so do her shoulders."
 
     "I'm not certain if she's serious."
 
+    play music  "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance.ogg"
     "But suddenly she tosses herself into my arms."
 
+    hide anon
+    hide fang
+    with dissolve
+    show fang hug at scenter:
+        xzoom -1.0
+    with dissolve
     "She puts her whole weight into her embrace, almost like she wants to tackle me."
 
+    show fang hug:
+      ease_cubic 0.5 rotate -90 yalign -0.5
+    
+    hide fang hug with dissolve
     "I try to hold us both upright, but the awkward angle and the unevenness of the bed eventually causes us both to fall back into bed."
 
     "The world really disappears when we're like this. Something I’m infinitely glad for..."
@@ -2166,7 +2301,12 @@ label chapter_13C:
     F "So very, very much…"
 
     "..."
+    stop music fadeout 2.0
+    scene black with fade
 
+    scene emptyroomday
+    with fade 
+    play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 2.0
     "Naser somehow manages to defy our expectations by being late for once."
 
     "But that’s good, as it gives Lucy and I a chance to spend the next ten minutes gathering the last of my belongings and trashing what I couldn’t take."
@@ -2179,6 +2319,12 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "I try not to think too much about it as Lucy and I make our way outside."
 
+    scene skinrow
+    show fang sad at sleft:
+        xalign -0.2
+    show anon neutral at acenter 
+    with fade 
+
     "Naser isn’t here yet, so we end up standing by the apartment lobby with nothing but our thoughts."
 
     "A part of me thanked Naser for his lateness."
@@ -2189,12 +2335,14 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     F "...What am I going to do when you're gone?"
 
+    show anon neutral flip at acenter with dissolve 
     "Lucy’s words surprise me, but I’m ready with an answer this time."
 
     A "You'll make the right choices."
 
     A "You're the only smart person I know."
 
+    show fang unimpressed with dissolve 
     "Lucy gives me a deadpan look." 
 
     F "I’m being serious here, Anon."
@@ -2203,6 +2351,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     A "You're a goddamn Intellectual!"
 
+    show fang considering with dissolve 
     "Lucy bashfully turns her head away, appreciating the compliment."
 
     F "You know, the guys in the army aren't the smartest lot."
@@ -2211,6 +2360,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     F "I don't know if I'm supposed to be jealous or fearful."
 
+    show fang happy with dissolve
     "Lucy begins snickering."
 
     F "They're gonna send you back in a shoebox!" 
@@ -2231,6 +2381,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     A "You, on the other hand, seem eager to go back to that."
 
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
     F "What do you mean?"
 
     A "Back to the mosh pits, meeting strange people, having fun, maybe going for that solo career I know you can achieve."
@@ -2239,18 +2390,23 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     A "I don't want to hold you back or make you waste time waiting for me."
 
+    show anon sad flip with dissolve 
     A "...We might not even see each other again..."
 
-    A "But... I'll never forget you, Lucy..."
+    A "But...{w=0.5} I'll never forget you, Lucy..."
 
+    show fang surprised with dissolve 
     F "..."
 
+    show fang sad with dissolve
     "Lucy stirs like she just got stabbed in the heart."
 
     F "Fuck... that hurts like hell."
 
     F "I’m the one who’s supposed to barge in and break us up!"
-
+    show anon neutral flip
+    show fang very sad 
+    with dissolve
     F "...I've done it so many times..."
 
     F "But..." 
@@ -2261,8 +2417,10 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     F "I didn't limit my options, and I still think there was more to you!"
 
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve 
     A "As in...?"
 
+    show fang unimpressed with dissolve 
     F "You know I'm bi, right?"
 
     A "..."
@@ -2275,6 +2433,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     A "Lucy..."
 
+    show fang angry with dissolve 
     "Lucy grits her teeth in anger."
 
     F "It wasn't serious, okay!"
@@ -2287,20 +2446,26 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     A "Lucy!"
 
+    show fang surprised with dissolve 
     "My voice causes my girlfriend to flinch."
 
+    show anon behind fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
     "I move to place a hand on her shoulder." 
-
-    A "Lucy… It's okay..."
+    show fang sad with dissolve 
+    A "Lucy… {w=0.5}It's okay..."
 
     A "Your parents are cool." 
 
     A "I would never believe they’d hurt you."
-
+    
     "Lucy lets out a sigh."
 
-    F "Anon… I don't wanna dump all my baggage on you."
+    F "Anon… {w=0.5}I don't wanna dump all my baggage on you."
 
+    show fang anguish
+    show anon concerned flip
+    with dissolve
     F "It's not right."
 
     F "And It was just a phase."
@@ -2309,7 +2474,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     F "It was so humiliating..."
 
-    F "Naser might have known... and he suffered so much because of it..." 
+    F "Naser might have known... {w=0.5}and he suffered so much because of it..." 
 
     F "I can't imagine just how much more my parents would've hated me if they’d known the real truth."
 
@@ -2325,8 +2490,9 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     F "And I always lost because I never had it that bad." 
 
-    F "I… I was just an ungrateful slut."
+    F "I… {w=0.5}I was just an ungrateful slut."
 
+    show fang hiding with dissolve 
     "Lucy lets out a groan and facepalms."
 
     F "I don't know if I'll ever live this shit down!"
@@ -2340,9 +2506,11 @@ label chapter_13C:
     "I reach out and grab Lucy’s hand, squeezing it as tight as I can without causing her discomfort."
 
     "I consider saying something, but I ultimately decide against it."
-
+    show fang sad with dissolve
     "Instead, I only stare deeply and softly into Lucy’s citrine eyes."
+    play sound "audio/effects/71739__audible-edge__chrysler-lhs-tire-squeal-04-04-25-2009.ogg" fadein 3.0
 
+    show anon neutral with dissolve 
     "Before I can do anything else with my girlfriend, I hear the sound of tire screeching and the roar of an engine."
 
     "A familiar gray-toned car pulls up right next to us, stopping so abruptly that it leaves a set of skid marks."
@@ -2352,11 +2520,12 @@ label chapter_13C:
     "I motioned for her to keep it."
 
     "Something told me that where I was going, I wouldn’t be needing money."
-
+    stop sound fadeout 1.0
     "Soon as the car comes to a complete stop, it’s driver disembarks, all the while munching on the remains of a delectable-looking hot dog."
-
+    show naser explanatory flip at nright with easeinright
     Nas "Sorry I’m late guys. Decided to stop by Tracy’s hot dog cart to get something to eat, but she took a bit longer than usual."
 
+    show naser happy flip with dissolve
     "Naser chomps on the last of this meal and licks his fingers clean with a satisfied smile."
 
     Nas "Anyway, you two ready to go, or do you guys need a few more minutes?"
@@ -2364,18 +2533,19 @@ label chapter_13C:
     "I look at the time on my phone."
 
     "Much as I wanted time to stand still, the bus departing to boot camp would be leaving in less than an hour."
-
+    show anon concerned flip with dissolve 
     "I give Fang one last look, and she in turn looks at me."
 
     "We both know what needs to happen next."
 
     "Doesn’t make it any less painful…"
 
+    scene nascar day with fade
     "Without another word, Lucy and I get in the back of the NasCar."
 
     "Naser, without a moment of hesitation, floors the gas pedal, and he flies off down Skin Row’s small streets."
 
-    "A part of me bids my old neighborhood--shitty as it was--a final farewell."
+    "A part of me bids my old neighborhood - shitty as it was - a final farewell."
 
     "The drive towards the pick-up spot is quiet."
 
@@ -2383,10 +2553,20 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "Fifteen minutes of silent driving, and we arrive at my designated pick-up location."
 
+    scene bus_stop
+    show naser neutral at nright:
+        xalign 1.35
+    show anon neutral at acenter 
+    show fang sad at sleft
+    with dissolve 
+
     "The three of us get out of the NasCar and stand around the bus stop, waiting for the inevitable."
-
+    play ambient "audio/effects/windLightLoop.ogg" fadein 2.0
+    show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve 
+    pause 0.5 
+    hide fang with easeoutleft
     "Lucy mentioned needing to do something, heading into the office."
-
+    show naser considering flip with dissolve 
     "The silence between Naser and I is deafening."  
 
     "Naser suddenly clears his throat."
@@ -2394,8 +2574,8 @@ label chapter_13C:
     Nas "Listen, Anon…"
 
     A "Yeah?"
-
-    Nas "Uhh… you’re gonna be gone for a while."
+    show naser neutral flip with dissolve 
+    Nas "Uhh… {w=0.5}you’re gonna be gone for a while."
 
     A "... Yeah."
 
@@ -2403,62 +2583,72 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     Nas "..."
 
-    Nas "So uh… rifleman or infantry or whatever it’s called?"
+    Nas "So uh…{w=0.5} rifleman or infantry or whatever it’s called?"
 
     A "Huh?"
 
+    show naser explanatory flip with dissolve 
     Nas "What’re they gonna make you do? Something like digging ditches? N-not to come off as rude or anything."
 
     "I sigh and shake my head."
-
+    show naser neutral flip with dissolve
     "At least he was starting to catch his poor words now."
 
     A "I mean, yeah, I’ll be doing that too. But they had me take an ASVAB test. They want me to do some more mechanical stuff."
 
-    A "I think the code thing was 12K… 19K?"
+    A "I think the code thing was 12K…{w=0.5} 19K?"
 
     A "They were pushing me into being a tank guy."
-
+    show naser explanatory flip with dissolve 
     Nas "Can you even drive dude?"
 
     A "..."
 
+    show naser neutral flip with dissolve
     A "Anyway, I decided something more up my alley."
 
     "It’s kind of like shitposting. But more official. I think."
 
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show naser explanatory flip with dissolve 
     Nas "What’s shitposting?"
 
-    A "N-nevermind. The number thing is 46R."
+    A "N-nevermind.{w=0.5} The number thing is 46R."
 
+    show naser neutral with dissolve 
     "Naser nods his head and looks off."
 
     "Before the silence could set in again Naser speaks up, his voice carrying a tone of relief."
 
+    show naser considering with dissolve
     Nas "I’d been meaning to say for a while."
 
+    show naser neutral flip with dissolve
     Nas "Thanks, Anon. I mean it."
 
     Nas "I didn’t know what I was doing for a while."
 
     Nas "If you didn’t take the hit and get us together at Moe’s, I’d still be feeling sorry for myself like some loser."
 
-    Nas "Honestly… I’d still be that scared little kid stressing over being something I didn’t need to be."
+    Nas "Honestly… {w=0.5}I’d still be that scared little kid stressing over being something I didn’t need to be."
 
     A "I didn’t do much at all, it was Moe and Rosa really."
 
     A "It was you and Lucy that patched things up. And I’m glad you guys made amends."
 
+    show naser happy flip with dissolve 
     "Naser gives me a surprised look, but he smiles and nods."
 
     "We hear the unmistakable roar of a city bus overpowering the other cars as it turns onto the street."
 
     "It’s still a few lights away though, so Naser gets back in the drivers’ seat to leave Lucy and I alone."
+    show fang sad at sleft with dissolve
 
     "Lucy had come back at some point. I was kind of happy she kept quiet to give me and Naser our moment."
-
-    "All this time we avoided saying goodbye to each other but eventually it has to happen"
-
+    show anon neutral flip behind fang with dissolve
+    "All this time we avoided saying goodbye to each other but eventually it has to happen."
+    show naser neutral with dissolve
     A "Lucy."
 
     F "Anon..."
@@ -2496,6 +2686,11 @@ label chapter_13C:
     F "Ok. Good."
 
     "It's settled, then."
+    show fanganonhug at acenter
+    hide anon 
+    hide fang
+    hide naser  
+    with dissolve
 
     "We hugged once again, but she put some serious muscle into it. I reciprocate."
 
@@ -2507,40 +2702,70 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "The bus driver grows impatient and starts honking. The time has come."
 
+    hide fanganonhug 
+    show anon neutral flip at acenter 
+    show fang sad at sleft 
+    show naser neutral flip at nright:
+        xalign 1.35
+    with dissolve
     "Sure enough, I was still feeling Lucy's hug after we separated. Naser rolls down the window of the car."
-
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
     Nas "Good luck, man."
 
     A "Same, man."
 
     "I gripped his hand."
 
+    show naser:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.25
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 1.3
     "He squeezed my hand in return, and then recoiled. My grip was stronger than he was anticipating."
 
     "I got inside and waved back at them. I give the driver my regards and laid back, looking at my feet."
-
+    
+    hide anon with dissolve
     "I must've thought about a lot of things then, like what if I just jumped out the window and ran to her,"
-
-    "or if I would die and never see her again like in that green day music video, I looked back to see if I could still get a glimpse of her..."
+    #Green Day - translators note
+    "or if I would die and never see her again like in that Green Snoot music video, I looked back to see if I could still get a glimpse of her..."
 
     "...my eyes frantically search the small figures, and there she was."
 
+    show fang hiding at scenter:
+        xalign -0.1
+    show naser sad flip behind fang at ncenter 
+    with dissolve 
+
     "I caught her in mid-motion, crying in Naser's shoulders."
 
+    scene sidewalk with dissolve
     "And then the bus rounds a corner and they’re gone."
+    play music "audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg" fadein 2.0
 
+    scene black with dissolve
     "Vanished from each others’ lives."
 
+    scene white
+    show anon neutral flip at acenter 
+    show hotel behind anon 
+    with dissolve
     "I was dropped at a hotel with the other dudes, a surprisingly diverse crowd of humans and dinosaurs conversed."
 
+    #push transition, idk if it needs a hide
+    # hide hotel  
+    show airport behind anon
+    with dissolve
     "We waited there for another bus that took us to an airport."
 
+    show black behind anon 
+    with dissolve
     "I think I might have slept as soon as I sat on the airplane seat, because I don't remember the take-off or the drill."
-
+    
+    scene fromairplane with fade
     "I was fortunate enough to get a seat by the window, I flipped it up and saw a desert with a two-lane road cutting through."
 
     "I don't even know where I am now, only that I'm nowhere near Lucy."
 
+    scene black with fade 
     "God I hope I see her again."
 
     #end of new stuff

game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy

@@ -1174,7 +1174,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         "She reaches elbow-deep into her purse and pulls out a small flipbook."
 
         FM "Oh Lucy, this is my FAVORITE little picture of you and Naser!"
-
+        
         "She shoves the photo in my face that I immediately make out as a bathtub with an infant Fang and Naser playing in the water."
 
         show fang surprised with dissolve

game/script/x9-naomi-tribulations.rpy

@@ -71,14 +71,15 @@ label chapter_x9:
     with fade
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     play ambient 'audio/OST/good faith leadup piano.ogg' fadein 3.0
-    F "So...{w=0.3} what happened back there?"
+    F "So...{w=0.3}you...{w=0.3} okay?"
 
     show naomi sad flip:
         ease_cubic 0.2 yalign -0.45
         ease_cubic 0.2 yalign -0.5
     "Naomi doesn't reply."
 
-    "Rather, she keeps on sobbing like her whole world is falling apart."
+    # "Rather, she keeps on sobbing like her whole world is falling apart."
+    "She only keeps crying like her whole world's falling apart."
     #naomi sobbing motion
     show naomi sad flip:
         ease_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.45
@@ -112,7 +113,7 @@ label chapter_x9:
     "Somehow, her sobbing gets louder, to the point that I feel my ears start to ring. Any louder, and she’s going to give me tinnitus."
 
     show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve
-    F "NAOMI! What THE FUCK did you two tell each other!?"
+    F "NAOMI! Get a FUCKING grip!"
 
     show naomi sad at sleft with dissolve:
         yalign -0.5