rework ch3 Naser exhaustion scene

game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy

@@ -2,9 +2,10 @@
 
 label chapter_3:
 
-    scene black with fade
+    # SCENE 1 - Weapons of mass distraction
 
-    play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg'
+    play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' fadein 1
+    scene black with fade
 
     "{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}"
     scene classroom with fade
@@ -22,18 +23,19 @@ label chapter_3:
 
     "I don't even bother attempting the assignment,{w=.4} instead pretending my phone is a calculator and spending the first half shitposting about video games I haven’t played online."
 
+    stop music fadeout 2
     "The second half,{w=.4} interrupted by something pointy to the back of the dome."
     pause .5
 
     "*sshk*"
+    pause .5
 
     "I can feel something stuck between my chair and my back."
 
-    play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0
-
     "I fish around and pull out a crumpled paper airplane,{w=.4} a completed set of problems."
     pause .5
 
+    play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}this is Reed's.{w=.4} And it's{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "...done?{w=.5} Even the extra problems that I don't even bother with because they take another ten minutes each."
@@ -146,7 +148,7 @@ label chapter_3:
     "The tiny triceratops rolled her eyes dramatically."
 
     show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "Fang.{w=.4} Fang’s been talkin’ bout you."
+    T "Fang.{w=.5} Fang’s been talkin’ bout you."
     pause .5
 
     A "All good things,{w=.3} I’m sure."
@@ -444,96 +446,252 @@ label chapter_3:
 
     scene black with fade
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    # SCENE 2 - I can't believe Naser is fucking dead
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg' fadein 2
     scene cafeteria
     show anon neutral at aleft
     show naomi neutral flip at scenter
-    show naser neutral flip at nright
+    show naser unimpressed flip:
-
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
-    show cafeteria
+    with Fade(0,.5,1.5)
-    play music 'audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg'
+    pause .5
 
     "Naser ended up dragging me to sit with him and the magenta motormouth again."
-    "Naomi hovers over Naser, who currently has Gucci under his eyes."
+
-    Nas "So, I uh… Talked to the soccer team earlier."
+    "Naomi hovers over Naser,{w=.4} who currently has Gucci under his eyes."
+    pause .5
+
+    Nas "So,{w=.3} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Talked to the soccer team earlier."
+
     Nas "They’re going to make the first game after all."
-    N "Isn’t that great, Anon?"
+
-    A "..."
+    show naomi explanatory flip
-    Nas "I also… Got the L&L Club to finally take down their christmas decorations…"
+    N "Isn’t that great,{w=.2} Anon?"
-    Nas "So… The library’s clean again…"
+    show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    "Naser’s head lands in his chicken salad, then he jerks wide awake."
+
-    show naomi shocked flip
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show naser:
+        ease 1.5 xalign 1.125
+        ease 1.5 xalign 1.075
+        repeat
+
+    Nas "I also{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Got the L&L Club to finally take down their christmas decorations{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    Nas "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} The library’s clean again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    show naser:
+        easeout_quart 1 yalign -0.15 xalign 1.05
+    pause .5
+
+    "Naser’s head lands in his chicken salad,{w=.4} then he jerks wide awake."
+
+    show naomi behind anon:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.45
+    show naomi shocked with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
+    show naomi:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.55
     N "NASER!"
-    show naser shocked flip
+
+    show naser behind naomi:
+        easein_elastic 0.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
+    show naser shocked flip with Dissolve(.1)
+    with vpunch
     Nas "OH GOOD LORD NOT THE WATER-"
-    A "..."
+    pause .5
-    show naser sad flip
+
-    Nas "Ugh… Sorry."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    Nas "...Did you say something, Anon?"
+
-    show naomi unimpressed flip
+    show naser sad flip with Dissolve(1)
-    A "Naser, you look like you fell into another blender."
+    Nas "Ugh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Sorry."
-    A "What’s going on, big guy?"
+
-    Nas "Don’t worry about it…"
+    show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25)
-    Nas "Just some… Family problems last night…"
+    pause .25
+
+    show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Did you say something,{w=.2} Anon?"
+
+    A "Naser,{w=.4} you look like you fell into another blender."
+
+    show naomi behind naser:
+        easein 0.75 xalign 0.6
+    show naomi unimpressed flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    A "What’s going on,{w=.2} big guy?"
+    pause .5
+
+    Nas "Don’t worry about it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    Nas "Just some{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Family problems last night{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
     A "Like what?"
-    Nas "Ugh…"
+    pause .25
-    N "You don’t have to tell him if you don’t want to, dear."
+
-    show naomi happy flip with dissolve
+    show naser sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    Nas "Ugh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show naomi considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    N "You don’t have to tell him if you don’t want to,{w=.2} dear."
+
+    show naomi:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.58
+    show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
     N "Why don’t you wipe that alfredo sauce off your cute little face."
+
     "She’s so saccharine she’d give a third world country diabetes"
-    Nas "It’s my sister again…"
+    pause .5
+
+    Nas "It’s my sister again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
     "Why is it always his sister with him?"
-    show naomi unimpressed flip
+
-    N "Aww…"
+    show naomi sad with dissolve
-    Nas "I was going to sleep last night, when I heard something downstairs."
+    N "Aww{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    "...When did this turn into an interrogation?"
+
-    Nas "It was about one or two in the morning. I checked what it was, and…"
+    Nas "I was going to sleep last night,{w=.3} when I heard something downstairs."
-    Nas "Fang was just, standing in front of the microwave."
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}When did this turn into an interrogation?"
+
+    show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    Nas "It was about one or two in the morning.{w=.5} I checked what it was,{w=.3} and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show naser sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    Nas "Fang was just,{w=.5} standing in front of the microwave."
+
+    show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "Staring at the dino nuggets rotate inside."
+    pause .5
+
     "At one in the morning?"
+    pause .5
+
     Nas "At one in the morning."
-    show naomi neutral flip
+
-    N "This is a personal issue, isn’t it?"
+    show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25)
-    N "Wouldn’t you rather just be enjoying lunch with us?"
+    N "This is a personal issue,{w=.4} isn’t it?"
-    Nas "I just need advice from someone at this point, Naomi."
+
+    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    N "Wouldn’t you rather just be {nw}"
+    show naomi:
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
+    extend "enjoying lunch with us?"
+    pause .5
+
+    Nas "I just need advice from someone at this point,{w=.4} Naomi."
+
+    show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
     N "But from Anon?"
+
     A "But from me?"
-    show naomi considering flip
+
     "Naser continues."
-    Nas "I asked her what she was doing, and she just…"
+
-    Nas "Just says ‘fuck off…’, so I think ‘maybe dad will help’."
+    Nas "I asked her what she was doing,{w=.4} and she just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    Nas "...He didn’t."
+
-    Nas "...They just got into a shouting match."
+    show naser unimpressed flip
+    Nas "Just says 'fuck off...',{w=.4} so I think 'maybe dad will help'."
+
+    show naser sad flip
+    Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}He didn’t."
+
+    Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}They just got into a shouting match."
+
     Nas "Screamin’ bout her lack of control an’ dad was pissed an’-"
-    show naomi sad flip
+
+    show naser behind naomi
+    show naomi:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.675
+    show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25)
     N "Poor baby."
-    "Naomi wraps her arms around Naser’s head, cradling the tired pterosaur in her bosom."
+
+    "Naomi wraps her arms around Naser’s head,{w=.4} cradling the tired pterosaur in her bosom."
+
+    show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve
+    show naser:
+        easeout_quart 1 xalign 1.3 yalign -0.3
+    pause .5
     hide naser with dissolve
+    play sound 'audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg' 
+    with vpunch
+
     "There’s a rumbling snore and it’s clear that Naser has checked out."
-    A "...Riiiiiiiight…"
+
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{cps=*.5}Riiiiiiiight{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
     "Naomi looks distraught."
-    N "He’s always like this…"
+
-    N "But it’s been getting worse recently..."
+    N "He’s always like this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    N "But it’s been getting worse recently{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
     A "Going unconscious?"
-    N "Trying to help. Wearing himself ragged."
+
-    N "That Fang…"
+    show naomi considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    N "Trying to help.{w=.5} Wearing himself ragged."
+
+    show naomi unimpressed flip with dissolve
+    N "That Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    show naomi sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
     N "We should help Naser."
-    A "What, by talking to Fang?"
+
+    A "What,{w=.4} by talking to Fang?"
+
     N "By taking him to the nurses office."
+    pause .5
+
     "Ah fuck."
-    "Naomi looks at me with the biggest, wettest doe eyes possible."
+
-    A "Alright alright. He doesn’t look that heavy anyway."
+    show dimmer_darker behind anon, naomi:
+        alpha 0.0
+        linear 2.5 alpha 1
+    
+    show naomi:
+        easein 2 xalign 0.625
+    pause .25
+
+    "Naomi looks at me with the biggest,{w=.4} wettest doe eyes possible."
+
+    hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(.2)
+
+    A "Alright alright.{w=.4} He doesn’t look that heavy anyway."
+
     N "Only a hundred and sixty pounds."
-    A "How do you- nevermind."
+
+    A "How do you-{w=.4} nevermind."
+
     scene black with fade
-    "Naomi puts herself under Naser’s left arm, motioning me to take the other one."
+
+    "Naomi puts herself under Naser’s left arm,{w=.4} motioning me to take the other one."
+
     "I sling his arm around my back and-"
-    "GOOD LORD HE’S HEAVY."
+
-    N "Alright, the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side, near the front desk."
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
+    "GOOD LORD HE’S HEAVY." with vpunch
+    pause .5
+
+    N "Alright,{w=.4} the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side,{w=.4} near the front desk."
+
     stop music fadeout 1.0
-    "I’m clenching my face too much to be able to speak, I can only get a slight nod out."
+
-    "..."
+    "I’m clenching my face too much to be able to speak,{w=.4} I can only get a slight nod out."
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    # SCENE 3 - Steganography
+
     scene hallway with fade
     "After dropping Naser at the nurse and leaving before Naomi could argue with her about staying, the lunch bell rings."
     "With music at the ass end of the campus I have to sprint through the halls."