rework ch5 return to fang's house scene, add naser surprised sprite

game/script.rpy

@@ -313,6 +313,7 @@ image trish indignant flip = im.Flip("trish/trish indignant.png", horizontal=Tru
 #surprised flip
 image fang surprised flip = im.Flip("fang/basic set/fang surprised.png", horizontal=True)
 image trish surprised flip = im.Flip("trish/trish surprised.png", horizontal=True)
+image naser surprised flip = im.Flip("naser/naser surprised.png", horizontal=True)
 
 #other flips
 image spears happy flip = im.Flip("spears/spears happy.png", horizontal=True)

game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy

@@ -3621,7 +3621,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    "Good lord,{w=.4} I’m never going to be able to play golf again."
+    "Good lord,{w=.3} I’m never going to be able to play golf again."
 
     A "I’ll pass.{w=.5} It’s getting pretty dark."
     pause .5
@@ -3639,131 +3639,198 @@ label chapter_6:
     pause .5
 
     scene outside moes
-    show anon neutral at acenter
+    show anon neutral:
-    show fang happy flip at sright
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
+    show fang happy behind anon:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.4
+    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang is sitting on a bench in front of one of the restaurant windows."
 
-    "She’s humming to herself, and her tail is drumming eurobeat on the bench."
+    "She’s humming to herself,{w=.4} and her tail is drumming eurobeat on the bench."
 
     "I take a seat next to her."
+    pause .5
 
-    "By now the plaza has cooled down, most shops have closed and the only people still out are returning home after the long day."
+    "By now the plaza has cooled down,{w=.4} most shops have closed and the only people still out are returning home after the long day."
 
     "The two of us sit in companionable silence save for Fang’s humming and tail drumming."
 
     "Her mood is contagious and soon enough I’m humming with her."
+    pause .5
 
     "I already know the song."
 
     "It’s from the roof."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Except more… more…"
+    "Except more{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} more{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Happy."
+    pause .5
 
     "The scene is great."
 
     "Just Fang and I on a bench in the waning sunlight in the middle of a deserted plaza."
 
-    "Taking the moment in, I almost don’t notice Fang scooting closer to me."
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.325
+    pause .5
 
-    scene black with fade
+    "Taking the moment in,{w=.4} I almost don’t notice Fang scooting closer to me."
+    pause .5
 
-    "..."
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     # TODO: living room night
-    scene home fang day with fade
+    scene home fang night
-    show fang neutral:
+    show fang neutral flip:
-        xalign 0.3 yalign 0.0
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.6
-    show anon neutral:
+    show anon neutral flip:
-        xalign 0.2 yalign 0.0
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.875
-    show naser neutral behind naomi:
+    show naomi neutral flip:
-        xalign -0.3 yalign 0.0
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.075
-    show naomi neutral behind anon:
+    show naser neutral flip:
-        xalign -0.4 yalign 0.0
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.95
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
-    Nas "Mom! Dad! We’re home!"
+    Nas "Mom!{w=.2} Dad!{w=.3} We’re home!"
+    pause .5
 
     "The ride back to Fang’s house went by uneventfully."
 
-    show fangdad neutral flip:
-        xalign 0.9 yalign 0.25
-    show fangmom neutral flip at fmright
-
     "Fang and I didn’t talk about what happened so Naser didn’t have an aneurysm."
+    pause .5
 
-    FM "Oh! Welcome home, Naser dear!"
+    show fangdad neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5
+    show fangmom neutral:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.8
+    show fangdad:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    show fangmom:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.3
+    with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    FM "Oh!{w=.4} Welcome home,{w=.2} Naser dear!"
 
     FM "How did your date go?"
 
     FM "I’m just dying to know!"
+    pause .5
 
-    FD "I am also interested."
+    FD "{cps=*.4}I am also interested.{/cps}"
 
     "I don’t know how but he’s looking into the exact center of my pupils with no margin of error."
+    pause .5
 
-    FD "So, Ayy-non, how was your trip with my little girl?"
+    FD "So,{w=.3} Ayy-{w=.15}non,{w=.4} how was your trip with my little girl?"
 
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Dad!"
+    pause .5
 
     FM "Why don’t you go get ready for bed Lucy."
-
+    
+    show fang angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
     "Fang glowers."
 
     FD "Lucy your mom-"
 
-    "I look to Fang…"
+    "I look to Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Okay, yeah. It was a date."
+    "Okay,{w=.3} yeah.{w=.5} It was a date."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "It went well, sir."
+    A "It went well,{w=.2} sir."
+    pause .5
 
     FD "What did-"
 
-    A "We were able to find a venue, and I met Fang’s Uncle Moe."
+    A "We were able to find a venue,{w=.4} and I met Fang’s Uncle Moe."
-
+    pause .25
-    show fangdad unimpressed flip with dissolve
 
+    show fangdad:
+        easein_quart 1 xalign -0.05
+    show fangdad unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     "Fang’s dad sputters."
 
+    show fangdad:
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.0
     FD "I've half a mind of bringing you to the station boy!"
 
     FD "And the other half of testing my new nightsick on ya!"
 
-    FM "Dear! Not in front-"
+    show fangmom unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+    FM "Dear!{w=.4} Not in front-"
 
     A "I wouldn’t mind doing this again."
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang surprised with dissolve
+    show naser:
+        easein_quart 1 xalign 2.0
+    show fang:
+        easein_quart 1 xalign 0.5
+    with None
+    show fang surprised
+    show naser surprised flip
+    show naomi keikaku flip
+    show fangdad neutral
+    show fangmom neutral
+    with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .75
 
-    "Oh wow. The look on Fang’s face is really cute."
+    "Oh wow.{w=.5} The look on Fang’s face is really cute."
+
+    show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
 
     FM "Oh I’m so happy for you two!"
+    pause .5
 
     "I wave as I turn to the door."
 
     A "I’ll see you at school Fang."
+    pause .25
 
-    F "Y-yeah. You too, Anon!"
+    show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
+    F "Y-{w=.15}yeah.{w=.4} You too,{w=.2} Anon!"
+
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    show anon:
+        easeout 1 xalign 1.5
+    pause .2
+    show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    hide anon with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     scene home fang outside night
-    show anon neutral flip at aright
+    show anon neutral:
-    with fade
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
+    with Fade(1,0,1)
+    pause .5
+    # TODO: night outdoor ambience w/ nature, like crickets chirping etc.?
 
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    "With that I exit the door.{w=.5} Once it’s closed I can feel all that bravado evaporate and my legs turn to jelly."
-    # TODO: night outdoor ambience, like crickets chirping etc.?
+    pause .5
 
-    "With that I exit the door. Once it’s closed I can feel all that bravado evaporate and my legs turn to jelly."
+    "I think that’s enough excitement for one day.{w=.5} My first step forward towards the bus stop is so wobbly I worry I’ll end up in Fang’s Mom’s rose bush."
 
-    "I think that’s enough excitement for one day. My first step forward towards the bus stop is so wobbly I worry I’ll end up in Fang’s Mom’s rose bush."
+    "It would probably be a good idea to sit a bit and catch my breath before going home,{w=.4} and take a seat on the curb just outside Fang’s house."
-
+    pause .5
-    "It would probably be a good idea to sit a bit and catch my breath before going home, and take a seat on the curb just outside Fang’s house."
 
     "The door behind me slams open and I jerk around to see Naser being shoved down the steps."
 
     FD "-and don’t come back until you’re finished thinking!"
+
     play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    pause .5
 
     "The door slams again and I hear a morose sigh."
 
@@ -3778,10 +3845,12 @@ label chapter_6:
     A "Just catching my breath. Your dad’s a bit..."
 
     Nas "Harsh?"
+    pause .5
 
     A "Homicidal, but close enough."
 
     "Naser huffs and shoves his hands back into his pockets."
+    pause .5
 
     Nas "You know you’re the reason dad kicked me out, right?"
 
@@ -3792,16 +3861,19 @@ label chapter_6:
     "Sighing, Naser drops to sit on the curb next to me."
 
     "He kicks a rock clean across the road and into the neighbors’ mailbox."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Impressive."
 
     Nas "Hmph."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Getting kicked out really got you that down?"
 
     Nas "...Sure."
 
     A "Convincing. What’s the real answer?"
+    pause .5
 
     Nas "What’s it to you?"