fix Naser posessing naomi for a single line of dialogue

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -1160,6 +1160,8 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "She looks familiar."
 
+    pause 1.0
+
     I "The band doesn’t bother introducing themselves."
 
     play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg'
@@ -1356,6 +1358,8 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 1.0
 
+    pause 1
+
     Sp "{i}{cps=*0.6}You are not the only person in the world.{/cps}{/i}"
 
     I "Pfft.{w=0.5} Like I don’t already know that.{w=0.4} There’s like{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
@@ -1370,6 +1374,8 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "Naser’s Sis-"
 
+    pause 0.5
+
     I "Oh."
 
     I "Shit."
@@ -1381,6 +1387,8 @@ label chapter_1:
     #Meeting the Band
     I "{cps=*0.2}--The Next Day--{/cps}"
 
+    pause 0.5
+
     play sound "audio/effects/Alarm.ogg"
 
     I "{cps=*20}*BLEEP*{w=0.7} *BLEEP*{w=0.7} *BLEEP*{w=0.7} *BLEEP*{w=0.7} *BLEEP*{w=0.7} *BLEEP*{/cps}"
@@ -1415,6 +1423,8 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "With practiced movements I execute a proper combat roll from bed, tackling the floor and headbutting it into submission.{fast}{w=0.6} My foe defeated,{w=0.3} I groan in victory." with vpunch
 
+    pause 0.8
+    
     I "My new bed is half the size of what I’m used to."
 
     I "The hardwood{w=0.2} (or is it vinyl?){w=0.2} floor is cold as hell."
@@ -1422,7 +1432,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "From the purview of the floor,{w=0.4} I look around my room again."
 
     window hide
-    pause 1.0
+    pause 1.5
 
     I "A tiny one room apartment with only a computer,{w=0.3} bed,{w=0.3} television,{w=0.3} and fridge."
 
@@ -1479,15 +1489,16 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "I found another entrance at the side of the school that has less students on it.{w=0.4} The less the merrier."
 
-    I "I check my clock once again -{w=0.3} I’m early.{w=0.5} Fucking hell.{w=0.6} Should have shitposted a bit more."
+    I "I check my clock once again -{w=0.3} I’m early.{w=0.5} Fucking hell.{w} Should have shitposted a bit more."
 
     stop music fadeout 1
+    pause 1
 
     I "Why am I here so early again?"
 
     I "Think I had to do something."
 
-    play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1
+    play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 0.1
 
     I "Oh yeah."
 
@@ -1695,18 +1706,18 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     N "Don’t worry about it,{w=0.3} it’s nothing."
 
-    show naomi explanatory flip
+    show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(0.25)
 
     Nas "Y’know,{w=0.5} girl issues,{w=0.2} right?{w=0.5} {cps=*0.15}Haha...{/cps}"
 
-    show naomi neutral flip
-    show naser sad flip 
-    with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "{cps=*0.4}Sure...{/cps}"
 
     A "Sounds like she was grilling you about the concert."
 
+    show naser sad flip with dissolve
+
     Nas "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show naomi explanatory flip