ch7 ready for rev

game/script/7.concert-day.rpy

@@ -9,6 +9,8 @@ transform shudder:
       linear 0.05 rotate -0.75    
       linear 0.07 rotate 0.75
 
+transform turnaround:
+    linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0
  
 #this needs the blurred transformation of the image in scirpt.rpy - I also just added a copy of moes pizza for this purpose, I think an image already defined as a scene might interfere with being also used as something else
 image moes_pizza_blur:
@@ -103,9 +105,10 @@ label chapter_7:
     "Impressed, I let out a low whistle."
     play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg' fadein 1.0
     show anon neutral at aleft
+    
+    St "I’m on time, right?"
     show stella neutral alt flip at sright
 
-    St "I’m on time, right?"
 
     "Where did she come from?"
 
@@ -164,7 +167,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     St "What’s your favorite anime? I {i}loooove{/i} PreCure!"
 
-    "Raptor Jesus on his cross of rock."
+    "Raptor Jesus{w=.4} on his {w=.4}cross {w=.4}of{w=.4} rock."
 
     "It takes all my strength not to physically cringe."
 
@@ -258,16 +261,17 @@ label chapter_7:
       xalign 0.0
       linear 0.5 rotate 90 yalign -0.5
 
-
-    "And then promptly trip."
-
     #anon fall
-    play sound 'audio/effects/anonDumbassFall.ogg' volume 1.0
+    play sound 'audio/effects/anonDumbassFall.ogg' volume 1.3
+    scene moebackrooms at shudder
     "*FWAP*"
 
+    
+    "And then promptly trip."
+
     A "Argh!"
 
-    hide anon
+    hide anon 
 
     "What the fuck was that?!"
 
@@ -276,7 +280,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     "That’s…"
 
     "Probably not good for the show."
-
+    scene moebackrooms
     show anon neutral at acenter with moveinbottom
 
     "I stand up and wipe the dust from my pants."
@@ -337,7 +341,9 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     "Before I can object, Trish turns away and runs after Reed who is huddled over the smoke machine, pungent fumes wafting from it’s exposed innards."
 
-    hide trish with moveoutleft
+    show trish at turnaround with dissolve
+    pause .3
+    hide trish with moveoutright
 
     "Well, seems like he’s got that handled."
 
@@ -438,7 +444,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     T "No one thinks that, loser."
 
-    A "Don’t you have something to be triggered about!"
+    A "Don’t you have something to be triggered about?"
 
     show trish fury flip with dissolve:
       xalign 0.5 yalign 10.0
@@ -509,7 +515,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
       "The crowd was cheering."
 
-      "Actually cheering this time."
+      "{i}Actually{/i} cheering this time."
       play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1.0
 
       "The bandmates’ faces light up, and they all glance at each other."
@@ -697,7 +703,7 @@ label chapter_7:
       "Fuck."
       stop music fadeout 1.0
 
-      "My jaw aches as I picture myself in Stella’s place, courtesy of one pissed of womanlet."
+      "My jaw aches as I picture myself in Stella’s place, courtesy of one pissed off womanlet."
 
       "Before I have the chance to escape I hear my one saving grace."
 
@@ -887,7 +893,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     A "You’ve only been playing together for a year?"
 
     Re "You know it man, crazy how time flies."
-
+    pause .3
     Re "Man, back then Trish had these crazy long horns and glasses."
 
     "Now there’s a thought. How would Trish even look with glasses?"
@@ -898,13 +904,13 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     A "She- what?"
 
-    Re "Er… Probably shouldn’t have mentioned that…"
+    Re "Er… {w=0.3}Probably shouldn’t have mentioned that…"
 
     A "Fang wasn’t herself?"
 
     Re "Honestly… That’s probably something to be left for Fang and Fang alone to talk about… Sorry."
 
-    A "Er… ri{cps=*0.7}iiiii{/cps}ght."
+    A "Er… ri{cps=*0.65}iiiii{/cps}ght."
 
     Re "Only thing that stayed the same was like... me and my carfe, bro."
 
@@ -971,15 +977,15 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     A "I didn’t say I was good at it. I was just clicking buttons and seeing what stuck."
 
-    A "And spoiler alert, nothing did."
+    A "And spoiler alert, {w=0.3} nothing did."
 
     "That got a giggle out of Fang and a look from Trish."
 
     T "By the way Anon, I saw you talking to that Stella girl before the concert. You have something going on there?"
 
     "I feel a pit in my stomach as a look of betrayal crosses Fang’s face."
-    play sound 'audio/effects/heartbeat.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    "Right into Trish’s trap, hook, line, sinker and rod."
+    
+    "Right into Trish’s trap, {w=0.2} hook, {w=0.2}line, {w=0.2}sinker and rod."
 
     menu:
       "Nyet.":
@@ -998,7 +1004,7 @@ label chapter_7:
          A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
       "No.":
          A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
-    stop sound fadeout 1.0
+    
     Re "Who?... Thought like, we were talkin’ bout whatsherface."
 
     T "The one with the Dino Duel cards."
@@ -1023,7 +1029,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1.0
     "SHIT."
-    play sound 'audio/effects/heartbeat.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    play sound 'audio/effects/heartbeat.ogg' loop fadein 1.0
     A "O-oh, I haven’t? Huh."
 
     F "Who really cares where you went to last?"
@@ -1074,7 +1080,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     T "We’re all friends here, after all."
 
     "Guess we are all friends at this point."
-
+    pause .5
     "To varying degrees."
 
     "I let a content smile creep onto my face." #WHAT THE FUCK ANON CANT SMILE WHAT THEW FUCK WHAT THE FUCK