From e167ae404b256005dc68163076582cc5d262f4bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: CaveManon Date: Sat, 5 Jun 2021 17:33:49 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] fixed bullshit spelling, removed unneeded naomi autism --- game/script.rpy | 129 ++---------------------------------------------- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 126 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script.rpy b/game/script.rpy index d0368e4..1e079d8 100644 --- a/game/script.rpy +++ b/game/script.rpy @@ -1,4 +1,5 @@ #TODO +#The game needs something like a CG gallery, if only to track your progress. #remove sex #troll /adgd/ #idk debug lol @@ -8425,130 +8426,6 @@ N "Since it’s just the two of us, I’ve been wanting to ask for a while." N "How have things been going with Fang? Has she been well? Is there anything wrong?" -menu: - "Fine, I guess?": - jump FangIsFine - "Shouldn’t Naser know?": - jump NaomiReveal - -label FangIsFine: - -A "...Fine, I guess?" - -N "Just ‘fine’ Anon? Are you sure?" - -"There’s something in her tone of voice." - -A "...Are you implying something?" - -show naomi happy - -"Naomi smiles sweetly but there’s a wicked glint in her eyes." - -N "Well you were so nervous this morning. And you haven’t been saying much on this double date." - -"I feel my cheeks heat up." - -A "I-it isn’t a date! I’m just helping the band out is all!" - -show naomi keikaku - -N "But you want it to be a date." - -show naomi neutral - -"Her statement catches me off-guard." - -N "I know the date hasn’t been going to well so far-" - -show anon angry flip - -A "It isn’t a date, Naomi!" - -N "But I’m sure I can help you sweep that girl off her feet-" - -show anon neutral flip - -A "wha-" - -N "You’ve been doing a great job so far, all she needs is a little more-" - -show anon angry flip - -A "STOP." - -"The bottle in my hand is a crumpled mess, spilling fizzly liquid across my white knuckles." - -A "What. Did. You. Do." - -show naomi keikaku - -N "Me?" - -"Naomi titters into her hand." - -"Her serpentine green eyes harden." - -N "Nothing." - -A "Bullshit. You were the one to pull this double date shit. What the hell did you do." - -N "Hmmm…I did… Poor Fang needs all the help she can get after all." - -"I’m ready to lunge across this table." - -show naomi unimpressed - -N "Why, all I ever hear from my dear sweet Naser is how sad Fang is." - -show anon neutral flip - -N "How depressed Fang is." - -N "How lonely Fang is." - -N "Fang Fang Fang Fang." - -"She meets my glare with her own." - -show naomi keikaku - -N "All the time." - -N "So." - -N "I decided to fix her." - -A "‘Fix’ her?!" - -N "Oh, how simple a maiden’s heart is." - -N "All she really needs is someone in her life." - -N "To deal with her problems for her." - -N "To make her feel loved." - -N "You’ve been doing a wonderful job so far, Anon." - -A "And if I didn’t? What if I were to leave right now?" - -show naomi shocked - -N "And leave Fang here by herself?" - -show naomi neutral - -"..." - -"Fucking bitch" - -N "Ah, it’s written all over your face." - -N "I knew you two losers would be a match made in heaven." - -label NaomiReveal: - play music "audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg" fadein 1.0 A "Shouldn’t Naser know?" @@ -23332,7 +23209,7 @@ elif anonscore >= 3 and fangscore <=4: "I look at the crowd gathering around the stage." - "Principle Spears moves to the podium set there and taps on the microphone." + "Principal Spears moves to the podium set there and taps on the microphone." A "Yeah, good to go… speaking of." @@ -24070,7 +23947,7 @@ elif anonscore >= 3 and fangscore <=4: "Oh, this is my old path to school. Maybe I will get to see it after all." - F ":-let's turn away. To Moe's, or somewhere." + F "l-let's turn away. To Moe's, or somewhere." A "Aww, I wanted to see the school again though."