diff --git a/game/script/12C.anon-fang-lovey-dovey.rpy b/game/script/12C.anon-fang-lovey-dovey.rpy
index 9c7702e..39cf43a 100644
--- a/game/script/12C.anon-fang-lovey-dovey.rpy
+++ b/game/script/12C.anon-fang-lovey-dovey.rpy
@@ -605,8 +605,12 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "She giggles and lays down. Her head resting on my shoulder and her wing becoming a blanket as we look back to the stars."
 
     "We stay laying a while longer, keeping the red moon company."
-    scene black with fade
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    "..."
 
+    stop music fadeout 3.0
+    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
+    pause .5
+
+    "..."
+    pause 1
+    
     return
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy b/game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy
index 6a3b936..49f1697 100644
--- a/game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy
+++ b/game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy
@@ -478,7 +478,12 @@ label chapter_12D:
     "Except the sunburn."
 
     "Ow."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+    stop music fadeout 3.0
+    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
+    pause .5
+
     "..."
+    pause 1
 
     return
diff --git a/game/script/13.prom-night-intro.rpy b/game/script/13.prom-night-intro.rpy
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..2659cc3
--- /dev/null
+++ b/game/script/13.prom-night-intro.rpy
@@ -0,0 +1,404 @@
+label chapter_13:
+
+    #Prom intro
+    pause 1
+
+    "{cps=*.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    pause .5
+
+    "It’s prom night."
+
+    "My old man was kind enough to send over his old tuxedo from his time at high school."
+
+    "It took a bit of sewing, but I got it looking pretty good."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Judging by the wine stains on the sleeves, Dad’s made a lot of important announcements in this tuxedo."
+
+    "Gives it a bit of history, I guess."
+    pause .5
+
+    scene home fang outside night
+    show naomi prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.6
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    "When I arrive at Fang’s place with a cheap corsage I see the Pomegranate Parasite waiting outside the front door."
+
+    "Great."
+    pause .5
+
+    "And dear god, how can she move in that dress."
+
+    "The top half looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
+    pause .5
+
+    "And I'm one hundred percent certain there's nothing beneath the bottom half."
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.5
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
+    with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
+    N "Oh, I already knocked Anon."
+
+    N "Naser will be out in a moment to invite us in, I’m sure Fang will be getting ready too."
+
+    N "I’ve heard the two of you are going to prom together!"
+    pause .5
+
+    "Ladies and gentlemen, the next Sherlock Holmes."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "No, I just happen to be here in a suit to go golfing."
+
+    "I ignore her, focusing instead on not stabbing my palm even more on this flower’s thorns."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Fuck it, free is free."
+
+    "And nothing more free than a five finger discount from the neighbor’s yard."
+    pause .5
+
+    N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
+
+    A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
+
+    show naomi prom happy with dissolve
+    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
+
+    "I’ve already tuned her out."
+
+    pause .5
+    show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    "Naser opens the door."
+
+    show naser prom neutral behind naomi:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.3
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    show naomi prom neutral flip with dissolve
+
+    "Well if that isn’t the fanciest jacket I’ve seen in a while."
+
+    "It’s certainly better than the background of Avatar he always wears."
+    pause .5
+
+    Nas "Sorry to keep you waiting, Naomi."
+
+    show naser prom unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+    Nas "This thing is a nightmare to get over my wings."
+    pause .5
+
+    show naser prom happy with Dissolve(.25)
+    Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
+
+    "He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    pause .5
+
+    scene home fang night
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show naser prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3
+    show naomi prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
+    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    pause .5
+
+    "Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
+
+    FM "Oh! Oh! Is that Anon?"
+    pause .5
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 0.5
+
+    Nas "Here we go."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fangmom neutral:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
+    show fangmom:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    "The small pterodactyl comes out, a bowl she’s struggling to stir in her arms."
+
+    FM "My, aren’t you handsome."
+    pause .5
+
+    FM "Pictures! I need to get pictures of you and Lucy!"
+
+    "She sets the bowl aside on the coffee table to frantically search for a polaroid camera."
+
+    FM "To think Lucy would have such a wonderful young man to take her to prom!"
+    pause .5
+
+    show fangmom:
+        easein_back 1 xalign -0.2
+    FM "Aha! Found it. Hold still, dear."
+    pause .5
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg' ## CC0
+    pause .275
+
+    show white with Dissolve(.15)
+    pause .5
+
+    "ARGH! Like getting slapped in the face by the Sun’s dick!"
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon prom sad flip
+    show white:
+        linear 2 alpha 0
+    pause .5
+
+    "I blink the blindness away. So that’s why Naser has those fucking aviators."
+    hide white
+    pause .5
+
+    FM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
+
+    FM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
+
+    show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
+    A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
+
+    show fangmom:
+        easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign -1.5
+    pause .2
+    show fangmom neutral flip with dissolve
+    hide fangmom with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        easein_back 1.5 xalign 0.4
+    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
+
+    "I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
+    pause .5
+
+    "This thing must cost a fortune."
+
+    "Fang’s dad is a police commissioner if I recall."
+
+    "That explains the luxurious furnishings."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fangdad neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    FD "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show anon:
+        easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.5
+    show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    "I hope I didn’t just ruin these slacks."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Good evening, sir."
+
+    A "I didn’t even see you in your chair, sir."
+
+    A "My apologies."
+    pause .5
+
+    FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
+
+    FD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
+
+    FD "You’d be surprised how effective staying quiet and stationary can be."
+
+    show fangdad happy with dissolve
+    FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
+    show fangdad unimpressed:
+        easein_elastic 1 xalign -0.05
+    FM "Sweetheart." with vpunch
+    pause .5
+
+    FM "No.{w=.3} Intimidating.{w=.3} The suitor."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fangdad:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.1
+    show fangdad neutral with dissolve 
+    "The big guy deflates a bit in his chair."
+
+    FD "Point is, don’t get any funny ideas."
+
+    A "Yessir."
+    pause .5
+
+    show naomi:
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
+    N "We’re all taking the NasCar, right?"
+
+    Nas "Yeah, yeah."
+
+    Nas "Once Fang gets down we’ll skedaddle."
+
+    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
+    A "So until then we just sit and chill?"
+    pause .5
+    
+    show naomi prom happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    N "We could take more pictures!"
+    pause .5
+
+    show dimmer_light behind fangdad, anon, naser, naomi with Dissolve(.25)
+    "{cps=*.3}Please no.{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+    
+    show dimmer_light:
+        linear 1 alpha 0
+
+    show fangmom neutral:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
+    show fangmom:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
+    with dissolve
+    FM "Oh! I would love to make this a little photo op!"
+    pause .5
+
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show naser prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
+    show anon prom sad flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show naomi prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show anon prom unimpressed flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show naomi prom happy flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show anon prom grin flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show naser prom happy flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show fangdad happy flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
+    show anon prom shock flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show fangmom unimpressed:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.2
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show fangdad neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.0
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show fangdad unimpressed flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
+    show fangmom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.6
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show fangmom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.15
+    show fangdad neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.2
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show naser prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
+    show naomi prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.05
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+ 
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene black with Fade(.1, 1, 2, color="#fff")
+
+    "Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
+
+    "Fang’s mom decided to take pictures of every possible combination of us."
+
+    "I don’t know which was worse, having to pose with Naomi or Fang’s dad digging his murder claws into my shoulder."
+
+    "I’ve lost nearly all feeling in that arm."
+
+    "Pretty sure that’ll leave a bruise worse than my accelerated hug with the stair bollard last month."
+    pause .5
+
+    "At least the pics with Naser were a nice reprieve."
+
+    "We ended up looking like the blues brothers, standing side by side in fuck ugly suits."
+    pause .5
+
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    "Just as I was about to resign myself to premature blindness from the camera flash, my saviour arrives."
+    pause .5
+
+    F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
+
+    return
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy b/game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy
index 5a929a8..bc8f352 100644
--- a/game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy
+++ b/game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy
@@ -1,404 +1,6 @@
 label chapter_13A:
     #Prom is Complicated
 
-    "{cps=*.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}"
-    pause .5
-
-    play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg' fadein 0.5
-    pause .5
-
-    "It’s prom night."
-
-    "My old man was kind enough to send over his old tuxedo from his time at high school."
-
-    "It took a bit of sewing, but I got it looking pretty good."
-    pause .5
-
-    "Judging by the wine stains on the sleeves, Dad’s made a lot of important announcements in this tuxedo."
-
-    "Gives it a bit of history, I guess."
-    pause .5
-
-    scene home fang outside night
-    show naomi prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.6
-    with Dissolve(1)
-    pause .5
-
-    "When I arrive at Fang’s place with a cheap corsage I see the Pomegranate Parasite waiting outside the front door."
-
-    "Great."
-    pause .5
-
-    "And dear god, how can she move in that dress."
-
-    "The top half looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
-    pause .5
-
-    "And I'm one hundred percent certain there's nothing beneath the bottom half."
-    pause .5
-
-    show anon prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.5
-    show anon:
-        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
-    with dissolve
-    pause .5
-
-    show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
-    N "Oh, I already knocked Anon."
-
-    N "Naser will be out in a moment to invite us in, I’m sure Fang will be getting ready too."
-
-    N "I’ve heard the two of you are going to prom together!"
-    pause .5
-
-    "Ladies and gentlemen, the next Sherlock Holmes."
-    pause .5
-
-    A "No, I just happen to be here in a suit to go golfing."
-
-    "I ignore her, focusing instead on not stabbing my palm even more on this flower’s thorns."
-    pause .5
-
-    "Fuck it, free is free."
-
-    "And nothing more free than a five finger discount from the neighbor’s yard."
-    pause .5
-
-    N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
-
-    A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
-
-    show naomi prom happy with dissolve
-    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
-
-    "I’ve already tuned her out."
-
-    pause .5
-    show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
-    pause .5
-
-    "Naser opens the door."
-
-    show naser prom neutral behind naomi:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.3
-    with Dissolve(1)
-    pause .5
-
-    show naomi prom neutral flip with dissolve
-
-    "Well if that isn’t the fanciest jacket I’ve seen in a while."
-
-    "It’s certainly better than the background of Avatar he always wears."
-    pause .5
-
-    Nas "Sorry to keep you waiting, Naomi."
-
-    show naser prom unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
-    Nas "This thing is a nightmare to get over my wings."
-    pause .5
-
-    show naser prom happy with Dissolve(.25)
-    Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
-
-    "He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
-    stop music fadeout 4
-    pause .5
-
-    scene home fang night
-    show anon prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    show naser prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3
-    show naomi prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
-    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
-    pause .5
-
-    "Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
-
-    FM "Oh! Oh! Is that Anon?"
-    pause .5
-
-    play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 0.5
-
-    Nas "Here we go."
-    pause .5
-
-    show fangmom neutral:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
-    show fangmom:
-        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
-    with dissolve
-    pause .5
-
-    "The small pterodactyl comes out, a bowl she’s struggling to stir in her arms."
-
-    FM "My, aren’t you handsome."
-    pause .5
-
-    FM "Pictures! I need to get pictures of you and Lucy!"
-
-    "She sets the bowl aside on the coffee table to frantically search for a polaroid camera."
-
-    FM "To think Lucy would have such a wonderful young man to take her to prom!"
-    pause .5
-
-    show fangmom:
-        easein_back 1 xalign -0.2
-    FM "Aha! Found it. Hold still, dear."
-    pause .5
-
-    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg' ## CC0
-    pause .275
-
-    show white with Dissolve(.15)
-    pause .5
-
-    "ARGH! Like getting slapped in the face by the Sun’s dick!"
-    pause .5
-
-    show anon prom sad flip
-    show white:
-        linear 2 alpha 0
-    pause .5
-
-    "I blink the blindness away. So that’s why Naser has those fucking aviators."
-    hide white
-    pause .5
-
-    FM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
-
-    FM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
-
-    show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
-    A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
-
-    show fangmom:
-        easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign -1.5
-    pause .2
-    show fangmom neutral flip with dissolve
-    hide fangmom with dissolve
-    pause .5
-
-    show anon:
-        easein_back 1.5 xalign 0.4
-    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
-
-    "I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
-    pause .5
-
-    "This thing must cost a fortune."
-
-    "Fang’s dad is a police commissioner if I recall."
-
-    "That explains the luxurious furnishings."
-    pause .5
-
-    "Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
-    pause .5
-
-    show fangdad neutral:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
-    with Dissolve(1)
-    pause .5
-
-    FD "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-
-    show anon:
-        easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.5
-    show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
-    pause .5
-
-    "I hope I didn’t just ruin these slacks."
-    pause .5
-
-    A "Good evening, sir."
-
-    A "I didn’t even see you in your chair, sir."
-
-    A "My apologies."
-    pause .5
-
-    FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
-
-    FD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
-
-    FD "You’d be surprised how effective staying quiet and stationary can be."
-
-    show fangdad happy with dissolve
-    FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
-
-    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
-    show fangdad unimpressed:
-        easein_elastic 1 xalign -0.05
-    FM "Sweetheart." with vpunch
-    pause .5
-
-    FM "No. Intimidating. The suitor."
-    pause .5
-
-    show fangdad:
-        ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.1
-    show fangdad neutral with dissolve 
-    "The big guy deflates a bit in his chair."
-
-    FD "Point is, don’t get any funny ideas."
-
-    A "Yessir."
-    pause .5
-
-    show naomi:
-        ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
-        ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
-    N "We’re all taking the NasCar, right?"
-
-    Nas "Yeah, yeah."
-
-    Nas "Once Fang gets down we’ll skedaddle."
-
-    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
-    A "So until then we just sit and chill?"
-    pause .5
-    
-    show naomi prom happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    N "We could take more pictures!"
-    pause .5
-
-    show dimmer_light behind fangdad, anon, naser, naomi with Dissolve(.25)
-    "{cps=*.3}Please no.{/cps}"
-    pause .5
-    
-    show dimmer_light:
-        linear 1 alpha 0
-
-    show fangmom neutral:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
-    show fangmom:
-        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
-    with dissolve
-    FM "Oh! I would love to make this a little photo op!"
-    pause .5
-
-    scene black with dissolve
-    pause .5
-    
-    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
-    pause .275
-    scene home fang night
-    show naser prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
-    show anon prom sad flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    show naomi prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
-
-    pause .25
-
-    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
-    pause .275
-    scene home fang night
-    show anon prom unimpressed flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    show naomi prom happy flip:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
-
-    pause .25
-
-    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
-    pause .275
-    scene home fang night
-    show anon prom grin flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    show naser prom happy flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
-
-    pause .25
-
-    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
-    pause .275
-    scene home fang night
-    show fangdad happy flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
-    show anon prom shock flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
-
-    pause .25
-
-    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
-    pause .275
-    scene home fang night
-    show fangmom unimpressed:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.2
-    show anon prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    show fangdad neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.0
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
-
-    pause .25
-
-    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
-    pause .275
-    scene home fang night
-    show anon prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    show fangdad unimpressed flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
-    show fangmom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.6
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
-
-    pause .25
-
-    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
-    pause .275
-    scene home fang night
-    show fangmom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.15
-    show fangdad neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.2
-    show anon prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    show naser prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
-    show naomi prom neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.05
-    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
- 
-    pause .25
-
-    play sound 'audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg'
-    pause .275
-    scene black with Fade(.1, 1, 2, color="#fff")
-
-    "Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
-
-    "Fang’s mom decided to take pictures of every possible combination of us."
-
-    "I don’t know which was worse, having to pose with Naomi or Fang’s dad digging his murder claws into my shoulder."
-
-    "I’ve lost nearly all feeling in that arm."
-
-    "Pretty sure that’ll leave a bruise worse than my accelerated hug with the stair bollard last month."
-    pause .5
-
-    "At least the pics with Naser were a nice reprieve."
-
-    "We ended up looking like the blues brothers, standing side by side in fuck ugly suits."
-    pause .5
-
-    stop music fadeout 4
-    "Just as I was about to resign myself to premature blindness from the camera flash, my saviour arrives."
-    pause .5
-
-    F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
-
     play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 0.5
     pause .5
 
diff --git a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy
index 902e203..5745b0e 100644
--- a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy
+++ b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy
@@ -1,248 +1,14 @@
 
 label chapter_13C:
+
     #Prom is Suprising
-    pause 3
-    scene black with fade
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    "{cps=*0.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}"
 
-    "It’s prom night."
-
-    "My old man was kind enough to send over his old tuxedo from his time at high school."
-
-    "It took a bit of sewing, but I got it looking pretty good."
-
-    "Judging by the wine stains on the sleeves, Dad’s made a lot of important announcements in this tuxedo."
-
-    "Gives it a bit of history, I guess."
-
-    scene home fang outside night
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft
-    show naomi prom neutral flip at sright
-    with fade
-
-    "When I arrive at Fang’s place with a cheap corsage I see the Pomegranate Parasite waiting outside the front door."
-
-    "Great."
-
-    "And dear god, how can she move in that dress."
-
-    "It looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
-
-    N "Oh, I already knocked Anon."
-
-    N "Naser will be out in a moment to invite us in, I’m sure Fang will be getting ready too."
-
-    N "I’ve heard the two of you are going to prom together!"
-
-    "Ladies and gentlemen,{w=0.3} the next Sherlock Holmes."
-
-    A "No, I just happen to be here in a suit to go golfing."
-
-    "I ignore her, focusing instead on not stabbing my palm even more on this flower’s thorns."
-
-    "Fuck it, free is free."
-
-    "And nothing more free than a five finger discount from the neighbor’s yard."
-
-    N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
-
-    A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
-
-    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. {w=0.2}Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
-
-    show naomi prom happy flip
-
-    "I’ve already tuned her out."
-
-    show naser prom neutral at ncenter with dissolve
-
-    "Naser opens the door."
-
-    "Well if that isn’t the fanciest jacket I’ve seen in a while."
-
-    "It’s certainly better than the background of Avatar he always wears."
-
-    Nas "Sorry to keep you waiting, Naomi."
-
-    Nas "This thing is a nightmare to get over my wings."
-
-    show naser prom happy flip at ncenter with dissolve
-
-    Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    play music "audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg" fadein 1.0
-    "He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
-
-    scene home fang night
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft
-    show naser prom neutral at ncenter
-    show naomi prom neutral at scenter
-    with fade
-
-    "Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
-
-    show fangmom neutral flip at sright with easeinright
-
-    FM "Oh! Oh! Is that Anon?"
-
-    Nas "Here we go."
-
-    "The small pterodactyl comes out, a bowl she’s struggling to stir in her arms."
-
-    FM "My, aren’t you handsome."
-
-    FM "Pictures!{w=0.2} I need to get pictures of you and Lucy!"
-
-    "She sets the bowl aside on the coffee table to frantically search for a polaroid camera."
-
-    FM "To think Lucy would have such a wonderful young man to take her to prom!"
-
-    FM "Aha! Found it.{w=0.3} Hold still, dear."
-
-    scene white with fade
-    show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
-    show black
-    show white
-    pause .01
-    show white with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
-    pause .01
-    scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night lessblurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night barelyblurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night
-    "ARGH! Like getting slapped in the face by the sun’s dick!"
-
-    "I blink the blindness away. So that’s why Naser has those fucking aviators."
-
-    # scene home fang night
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft
-    show naser prom neutral at ncenter
-    show naomi prom neutral at scenter
-    show fangmom neutral flip at sright
-    with fade
-
-    FM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
-    show fangmom neutral flip at sright:
-        ease_cubic 2.5 xpos -0.5
-    pause 2.0    
-    hide fangmom with dissolve 
-    FM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
-
-    A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
-
-    "I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
-
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft:
-        ease_cubic 2.5 xpos 1.5
-    pause 1.5
-    hide anon with dissolve
-
-    scene black with fade
-
-    scene home fang night 
-    show anon prom neutral flip at aright
-    with fade
-    "This thing must cost a fortune."
-
-    "Fang’s dad is a police commissioner if I recall."
-
-    "That explains the luxurious furnishings."
-
-    "Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
-    pause 0.5
-    show fangdadlarge at sleft with easeinleft:
-        xalign -0.5
-    FD "So…"
-
-    "I hope I didn’t just ruin these slacks."
-
-    A "Good evening, sir."
-
-    A "I didn’t even see you in your chair, sir."
-
-    A "My apologies."
-
-    FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
-
-    FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
-
-    FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
-
-    FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
-    hide fangdadlarge 
-    show fangdad neutral at sleft 
-    show fangmom unimpressed flip at fmcenter 
-    with dissolve
-
-    FM "Sweetheart."
-
-    FM "No.{w=0.2} Intimidating.{w=0.2} The Suitor."
-
-    "The big guy deflates a bit in his chair."
-
-    FD "Point is, don’t get any funny ideas."
-
-    A "Yessir."
-
-    hide fangdad with dissolve
-    show naser prom neutral at nleft with easeinleft
-
-    N "We’re all taking the NasCar, right?"
-
-    Nas "Yeah, yeah."
-
-    Nas "Once Fang gets down we’ll skedaddle."
-
-    A "So until then we just sit and chill?"
-    show naomi prom happy at sleft with easeinleft
-
-    N "We could take more pictures!"
-
-    "Please no."
-
-    show fangmom neutral at fmcenter with easeinleft
-
-    FM "Oh! I would love to make this a little photo op!"
-
-    scene white with fade
-    show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
-    show black
-    show white
-    pause .01
-    show white with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
-    pause .01
-    scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night lessblurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night barelyblurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night
-    "Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
-
-    "Fang’s mom decided to take pictures of every possible combination of us."
-
-    "I don’t know which was worse, having to pose with Naomi or Fang’s dad digging his murder claws into my shoulder."
-
-    "I’ve lost nearly all feeling in that arm."
-
-    "Pretty sure that’ll leave a bruise worse than my accelerated hug with the stair bollard last month."
-
-    "At least the pics with Naser were a nice reprieve."
-
-    "We ended up looking like the blues brothers, standing side by side in fuck ugly suits."
-
-    "Just as I was about to resign myself to premature blindness from the camera flash, my saviour arrives."
-
-    F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
     play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    show good_fang_home_prom_stars with fade
+    pause .5
+
+    scene stair2 with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 1
+    
     "Lucy comes downstairs in a white dress."
 
     "The back of the dress trails down the stairs behind her."
diff --git a/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy b/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy
index 4235d1e..f349d00 100644
--- a/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy
+++ b/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy
@@ -1,254 +1,19 @@
 label chapter_13D:
+
     #Prom is Memorable
-    scene black with fade
 
-    "{cps=*0.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}"
-    play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
-
-    "It’s prom night."
-
-    "My old man was kind enough to send over his old tuxedo from his time at high school."
-
-    "It took a bit of sewing, but I got it looking pretty good."
-
-    "Judging by the wine stains on the sleeves, Dad’s made a lot of important announcements in this tuxedo."
-
-    "Gives it a bit of history, I guess."
-
-    scene home fang outside night
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft
-    show naomi prom neutral flip at sright
-    with fade
-
-    "When I arrive at Fang’s place with a cheap corsage I see the Pomegranate Parasite waiting outside the front door."
-
-    "Great."
-
-    "And dear god, how can she move in that dress."
-
-    "It looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
-
-    N "Oh, I already knocked Anon."
-
-    N "Naser will be out in a moment to invite us in, I’m sure Fang will be getting ready too."
-
-    N "I’ve heard the two of you are going to prom together!"
-
-    "Ladies and gentlemen,{w=0.2} the next Sherlock Holmes."
-
-    A "No, I just happen to be here in a suit to go golfing."
-
-    "I ignore her, focusing instead on not stabbing my palm even more on this flower’s thorns."
-
-    "Fuck it, free is free."
-
-    "And nothing more free than a five finger discount from the neighbor’s yard."
-
-    N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
-
-    A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
-
-    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
-
-    show naomi prom happy flip
-
-    "I’ve already tuned her out."
-
-    show naser prom neutral at ncenter with dissolve
-
-    "Naser opens the door."
-
-    "Well if that isn’t the fanciest jacket I’ve seen in a while."
-
-    "It’s certainly better than the background of Avatar he always wears."
-
-    Nas "Sorry to keep you waiting, Naomi."
-
-    Nas "This thing is a nightmare to get over my wings."
-
-    show naser prom happy flip at ncenter with dissolve
-
-    Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
-
-    "He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
-
-    scene home fang night
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft
-    show naser prom neutral at ncenter
-    show naomi prom neutral at scenter
-    with fade
-
-    "Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
-
-    show fangmom neutral flip at sright with easeinright
-
-    FM "Oh! Oh! Is that Anon?"
-
-    Nas "Here we go."
-
-    "The small pterodactyl comes out, a bowl she’s struggling to stir in her arms."
-
-    FM "My, aren’t you handsome."
-
-    FM "Pictures! I need to get pictures of you and Lucy!"
-
-    "She sets the bowl aside on the coffee table to frantically search for a polaroid camera."
-
-    FM "To think Lucy would have such a wonderful young man to take her to prom!"
-
-    FM "Aha!{w=0.2} Found it. Hold still, dear."
-    scene white with fade
-    show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
-    show black
-    show white
-    pause .01
-    show white with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
-    pause .01
-    scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night lessblurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night barelyblurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night
-    "ARGH! Like getting slapped in the face by the sun’s dick!"
-
-    "I blink the blindness away. So that’s why Naser has those fucking aviators."
-
-    scene home fang night
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft
-    show naser prom neutral at ncenter
-    show naomi prom neutral at scenter
-    show fangmom neutral flip at sright
-    with fade
-
-    FM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
-    
-    show fangmom neutral flip at sright:
-        ease_cubic 2.5 xpos -0.5
-    pause 2.0    
-    hide fangmom with dissolve 
-
-    FM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
-
-    A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
-
-    "I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
-
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft:
-        ease_cubic 2.5 xpos 1.5
-    pause 1.5
-    hide anon with dissolve
-        
-    scene black with fade
-
-    scene home fang night with fade
-    show anon prom neutral flip at aright
-
-    "This thing must cost a fortune."
-
-    "Fang’s dad is a police commissioner if I recall."
-
-    "That explains the luxurious furnishings."
-
-    "Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
-    pause 0.5
-    show fangdadlarge at sleft with easeinleft:
-        xalign -0.5
-    FD "So…"
-
-    "I hope I didn’t just ruin these slacks."
-
-    A "Good evening, sir."
-
-    A "I didn’t even see you in your chair, sir."
-
-    A "My apologies."
-
-    FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
-
-    FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
-
-    FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
-
-    FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
-    hide fangdadlarge with dissolve
-    show fangdad neutral at sleft with dissolve
-    show fangmom unimpressed flip at fmcenter with dissolve
-
-    FM "Sweetheart."
-
-    FM "No.{w=0.1} Intimidating.{w=0.1} The Suitor."
-
-    "The big guy deflates a bit in his chair."
-
-    FD "Point is,{w=0.1} don’t get any funny ideas."
-
-    A "Yessir."
-
-    hide fangdad with dissolve
-    show naser prom neutral at nleft with easeinleft
-
-    N "We’re all taking the NasCar, right?"
-
-    Nas "Yeah, yeah."
-
-    Nas "Once Fang gets down we’ll skedaddle."
-
-    A "So until then we just sit and chill?"
-    show naomi prom happy at sleft with easeinleft
-
-    N "We could take more pictures!"
-
-    "Please no."
-
-    show fangmom neutral at fmcenter with easeinleft
-
-    FM "Oh! I would love to make this a little photo op!"
-
-    scene white with fade
-    show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
-    show black
-    show white
-    pause .01
-    show white with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
-    pause .01
-    scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night lessblurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night barelyblurred with dissolve
-    pause 0.1
-    scene home fang night
-
-    "Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
-
-    "Fang’s mom decided to take pictures of every possible combination of us."
-
-    "I don’t know which was worse, having to pose with Naomi or Fang’s dad digging his murder claws into my shoulder."
-
-    "I’ve lost nearly all feeling in that arm."
-
-    "Pretty sure that’ll leave a bruise worse than my accelerated hug with the stair bollard last month."
-
-    "At least the pics with Naser were a nice reprieve."
-
-    "We ended up looking like the blues brothers, standing side by side in fuck ugly suits."
-
-    "Just as I was about to resign myself to premature blindness from the camera flash, my saviour arrives."
-
-    F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
     play music "audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
     "Fang leans over the railing of the staircase."
+
     F "Nice suit! Did ya get it from the suit store?"
 
+    scene gold_fang_home_prom_stars with Dissolve(2) 
+    pause 1
+
     "Holy shit, she can really rock that dress."
-    show gold_fang_home_prom_stars with fade 
-    
-    #Why isn't it him who's saying this
-    # "Fang's Dad" "Ahem."
     pause 2.0
+
     FD "Ahem."
     
     "Ah. {w=0.2}Shit."
@@ -420,7 +185,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
 
-    F "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
+    F "You’d be surprised how effective staying quiet and stationary can be."
 
     F "How close you can get to someone without them knowing you’re even there."
 
diff --git a/game/storyline.rpy b/game/storyline.rpy
index 5dac88e..b5a9844 100644
--- a/game/storyline.rpy
+++ b/game/storyline.rpy
@@ -21,44 +21,34 @@ label storyline:
     call chapter_9
     call chapter_10
     call chapter_11
-    #Ending Deciding
     call get_ending
     if _return == 4:
         call chapter_11D
         call chapter_12D
+        call chapter_13
         call chapter_13D
         call chapter_14D
     elif _return == 3:
         $ tradwife = True
         call chapter_11C
         call chapter_12C
+        call chapter_13
         call chapter_13C
         call chapter_14C
     elif _return == 2:
         call chapter_11B
         call chapter_12B
+        # no chapter_13 here since the scene is different enough to the other routes for everything to go into 13C
         call chapter_13B
         call chapter_14B
-    elif _return == 1:
+    else:
         call chapter_11A
         call chapter_12A
+        call chapter_13
         call chapter_13A
         call chapter_14A
         $ ending_image()
         $ renpy.quit()
-    else: # this block is redundant since we should never hit it
-        #>>ERROR HANDLING OH SWEET BABY JESUS SHIT HIT THE FAN
-        St "FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK"
-        A "What?"
-        St "Some dipshit developer made broken code and this is the error handling message..."
-        A "What?"
-        St "Basically the if/else statement that handles this shit has failed at catching the score, and someone fucked up."
-        A "Shit... what does that mean?"
-        St "Well... the games broken and will end soon"
-        A "Does this mean that the 3 fucks speedrunning have an easy way to beat the game?"
-        St "Yes, but you have to have something wrong with you to speedrun a visual novel beta"
-        "/dev/non" "well shit. Please do report this bug and all the choices you made that lead to this point. Something fucked up real bad"
-        #just liek maek gaem
     $ ending_image()
     call .ending
     return
@@ -73,7 +63,7 @@ label .ending:
     if tradwife:
        scene c10 with fade
        pause 20
-    if anonscore >= 4 and fangscore >= 4:
+    elif anonscore >= 4 and fangscore >= 4:
        scene ending_d_cg with fade
        pause 20 
     return