diff --git a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy index 8b8bcd2..e09a0a8 100644 --- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy +++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy @@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ label chapter_1: stop ambient fadeout 0.5 pause 0.5 - ###Maybe a good idea to have this song fade in, the silence from before clashes a bit. Though, I will hold off on implementing to see how the bench scene would feel with ambience. + #TODO: does the audio work with the new ambience? scene pathetic at Pan((0, 1031), (0, 0), 10.0) with dissolve play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' @@ -277,8 +277,7 @@ label chapter_1: with dissolve I "The hand tightens around my own and pulls roughly." - ###Naser moves up a bit here, is this intentional? Maybe make it a bit more subtle. - #changed to make it a bit more stubtle, but feel free to tweak as you please + #Documentation on MoveTransition : https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame/wiki/Tips#MoveTransition show naser neutral flip at nmidright with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp) @@ -485,7 +484,7 @@ label chapter_1: A "uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.4} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}" - ###might be wise to make this more abrupt and maybe fade in some music too + #TODO: suitable menacing ambience or music I "There’s whispers now.{w} The hushed tones,{w=0.4} silenced snickers,{w=0.4} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me." @@ -544,11 +543,11 @@ label chapter_1: I "I thought I had found a decent spot in the corner when disaster struck." - - # TODO: SFX of some kind + #TODO: confirm if 2D flipping is OK when done for comedy occasionally + #TODO: SFX of some kind show naser neutral behind anon with easeinleft: xalign -0.6 yalign 0.1 - stop ambient fadeout 0.25 # TODO: SFX, whoosh, whipcrack or something + stop ambient fadeout 0.25 show anon fear: xalign 0.6 yalign 0.1 easein 0.5 xzoom -1 @@ -558,7 +557,6 @@ label chapter_1: show anon fear flip: xzoom 1 - ###Artists and Writers were hesitant about flipping with zoom last time I did it. Might want to make another version in case they don't approve I "Said disaster was a hand grabbing my shoulder and turning me about." I "My plate of pizza shaped cardboard threatened to smear across my shirt." @@ -608,7 +606,7 @@ label chapter_1: A "{cps=*0.25}Suuuure{/cps}{cps=*0.1}..{/cps}" - ###Might be wise to pull out a different track. If you need more, our sound guy has plenty. + #TODO: music variation stop ambient fadeout 0.25 play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' @@ -626,7 +624,7 @@ label chapter_1: ease 0.35 yalign 0.0 repeat - N "SO!{w=0.5} What do you think of Volcano High!{w=0.3} How about your classes{w=0.3} You seem-" + N "SO!{w=0.5} What do you think of Volcano High!{w=0.3} How about your classes?{w=0.3} You seem-" I "I just nod along,{w=0.3} starting to not pay attention." @@ -699,6 +697,8 @@ label chapter_1: I "What." + show naomi neutral flip with dissolve + Nas "Fang’s gonna have some extra pizzas for the show.{w=0.5} You could take some home." A "I uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} dunno about concerts.{w=0.6} Not really one for public events like that." @@ -715,14 +715,13 @@ label chapter_1: A "{cps=*0.5}I’ll consider it.{/cps}" - show naomi: + show naomi explanatory flip: easein 0.4 xalign 0.9 - ###Naomi should change to her cheery expression quicker - - show naomi happy flip with dissolve N "Hey!{w=0.4} Don’t leave me out of the conversation!" + show naomi happy flip with dissolve + N "How about I help you pick out some cheap food after school?" N "I know some great vegan shops in the area!" @@ -971,7 +970,7 @@ label chapter_1: Sp "Oh,{w=0.4} I do need you to come by my office tomorrow for some paperwork." I "I nod and go back to the door where Naser is standing,{w=0.3} holding it open for the last of the audience to go inside." - ###Rock boing no longer plays in the auditorium + stop music fadeout 1.0 scene auditorium @@ -1104,7 +1103,7 @@ label chapter_1: show naser considering with dissolve - ###Might wanna get a different ring tone + #TODO: find generic (or joke) cellphone ringtone play sound 'audio/OST/ringtone.ogg' I "Naser’s phone rings.{w=0.4} He moves aside to answer it." @@ -1283,26 +1282,23 @@ label chapter_1: I "Pffft{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.2} That struck a chord with her." #(In-CG insult layers) - window hide $ i = 0 while i < 5: - $ showCG() - pause 1 - $ i = i + 1 - #(In-CG insult layers) - + $ showCG() + pause 1 + $ i = i + 1 + I "I watch as she grabs her bass and takes the arm of the purple one,{w=0.3} rushing off stage with the pink drummer." - ###stop le music, needs some fine tuning - # stop music fadeout 3.0 + scene black with fade window hide $ i = 0 while i < 3: - $ showCG() - pause 1 - $ i = i + 1 + $ showCG() + pause 1 + $ i = i + 1 I "Oh God I can’t take this,{w=0.3} I’m gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much,{w=0.5} I’m just gonna grab my pizza and leave" @@ -1841,15 +1837,14 @@ label chapter_1: # TODO: music here for Reed's intro? show naomi angry with Dissolve(0.25) - N "Is that contraband,{w=0.3} Reed?" - show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) show reed explanatory flip Re "Bro,{w=0.4} you’ve known I’m in a band for like,{w=0.4} a year now." - + + pause 0.6 show reed neutral flip show naomi angry: easein 0.25 xalign 0.1