From ac78a51e56ba04f1ae980acc216bd690a8432f27 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Mon, 12 Jul 2021 22:19:31 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework ch3 classroom scene --- ...p-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy | 521 ++++++++++++++---- 1 file changed, 416 insertions(+), 105 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy index 55397ec..6e1975e 100644 --- a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy +++ b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy @@ -1,159 +1,451 @@ -label chapter_3: - #Band Practice +# Band Practice - scene black +label chapter_3: + + scene black with fade play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' - "-One Week Later-" + "{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}" scene classroom with fade + # TODO: chatter + + "It's math.{w=.5} Bane of retards and lazy intellectuals alike." + + "And teachers too,{w=.4} judging by the lack of a certain coomer teacher." + + "Substitute today,{w=.4} which means busywork.{w=.5} Group problems busywork specifically." + + "Of course,{w=.3} I can't escape this any more than I could have escaped the lab partner assignment." - "It's math. Bane of retards and lazy intellectuals alike." - "And teachers too, judging by the lack of a certain coomer teacher." - "Substitute today, which means busywork. Group problems busywork specifically." - "Of course, I can't escape this any more than I could have escaped the lab partner assignment." "At least here I have the opportunity to just keep to myself for an hour." - "I don't even bother attempting the assignment, instead pretending my phone is a calculator and spending the first half shitposting about video games I haven’t played online." - "The second half, interrupted by something pointy to the back of the dome." + + "I don't even bother attempting the assignment,{w=.4} instead pretending my phone is a calculator and spending the first half shitposting about video games I haven’t played online." + + "The second half,{w=.4} interrupted by something pointy to the back of the dome." + pause .5 + "*sshk*" + "I can feel something stuck between my chair and my back." + play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0 - "I fish around and pull out a crumpled paper airplane, a completed set of problems." - "...this is Reed's. And it's..." - "...done? Even the extra problems that I don't even bother with because they take another ten minutes each." - "I turn around to see that technicolor burnout waving me over. He's sitting next to Trish." + + "I fish around and pull out a crumpled paper airplane,{w=.4} a completed set of problems." + pause .5 + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}this is Reed's.{w=.4} And it's{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + "...done?{w=.5} Even the extra problems that I don't even bother with because they take another ten minutes each." + + "I turn around to see that technicolor burnout waving me over.{w=.4} He's sitting next to Trish." + "She's giving me the evil eye." - "At least I think it's the evil eye. Whatever that expression is, it clashes with her smile." + + "At least I think it's the evil eye.{w=.5} Whatever that expression is,{w=.4} it clashes with her smile." + pause .5 + "Might as well see what they want." - "As I weave through the maze of desks squished together with partners more interested in their phones than the worksheet, I catch a hint of whatever Reed and Trish are talking about." - show reed unimpressed at scenter - show trish neutral flip at tright + pause .5 + + show reed unimpressed: + yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5 + show trish considering flip at sright + with Dissolve(1) + + "As I weave through the maze of desks squished together with partners more interested in their phones than the worksheet,{w=.4} I catch a hint of whatever Reed and Trish are talking about." + + Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Honesty is the best policy,{w=.3} eh?" + + Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Bad juju to keep somethin’ bottled up{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + + show anon neutral: + yalign 0.1 xalign -0.4 + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.01 with dissolve - show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve - Re "...Honesty is the best policy, eh?" - Re "...Bad juju to keep somethin’ bottled up..." - show reed neutral with dissolve - "Reed grabs hold of another chair and sets it on Trish's other side, nodding in my direction before taking a big pull from whatever he's got in that thermos on his desk." + + show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + + show reed neutral flip: + xalign 0.9 + with dissolve + pause .5 + + "Reed grabs hold of another chair and sets it on Trish's other side,{w=.4} nodding in my direction before taking a big pull from whatever he's got in that thermos on his desk." + "The widening of his pupils suggest its more than just Roarbucks cold brew in it." - show trish happy flip with dissolve - T "Hey, Anon!" + + show trish happy flip with Dissolve(.25) + T "Hey,{w=.2} Anon!" + A "You guys need something?" - T "Nah, just wanted to chat a bit since we got the time" + + T "Nah,{w=.3} just wanted to chat a bit since we got the time" show trish neutral flip with dissolve - "There’s something in her tone of voice…" + + "There’s something in her tone of voice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + " It’s like she's getting ready to gore me with those nubs she calls horns." - A "...Sure" - show reed explanatory with dissolve - Re "Imma let you two get to whatever… gonna go for a refill..." + pause .5 + + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Sure" + pause .5 + + show reed explanatory flip + Re "Imma let you two get to whatever{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} gonna go for a refill{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show reed neutral flip + "He shakes his thermos and heads for the door." + + + show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25): + xalign 0.5 + show reed: + ease_cubic 1 xalign 1.2 + show trish: + ease 0.6 xalign 0.85 + "What's in that anyway?" - Re "Don't ask..." + + pause .5 + + show reed considering + Re "Don't ask{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show reed neutral + pause .25 + + show reed: + easeout 0.5 xalign 1.5 hide reed with dissolve + pause .5 + "Fair enough." - "...Wait..." + pause .5 + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Fuck it." - show trish neutral flip at tcenter with move - T "So… Anon… You and Fang?" - A "...You and Fang what?" + pause .25 + + show trish neutral flip: + ease 1 xalign 0.6 + pause 1.5 + + T "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} You and Fang?" + pause .5 + + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You and Fang what?" + T "They’ve been talkin’ about you." + A "They?" - show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve + "The tiny triceratops rolled her eyes dramatically." - T "Fang. Fang’s been talkin’ bout you." - A "All good things, I’m sure." - "Fang’s been talking about me? That’s dumb." - "Oh yeah. The phones." + + show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + T "Fang.{w=.4} Fang’s been talkin’ bout you." + pause .5 + + A "All good things,{w=.3} I’m sure." + + show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve + + "Fang’s been talking about me?{w=.5} That’s dumb." + + "Oh yeah.{w=.4} The phones." + "All we’ve been doing is more labwork in science." + #[CG of mad scientist Anon with a railgun aimed at Dr. Fernsworth] #God I wish we had time for this CG + "Last Thursday I tried to remember how to make a railgun." - "To show I could, of course." - F "{i}Pfft, I could make one too.{/i}" - "She seemed unimpressed at the time, but…" + + "To show I could,{w=.4} of course." + pause .5 + + F "{i}Pfft,{w=.4} I could make one too.{/i}" + pause .5 + + "She seemed unimpressed at the time,{w=.4} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + hide dimmer_light with dissolve + A "Was it about making a railgun?" - T "Er… Yeah, it was." + + show trish explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) + T "Er{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Yeah,{w=.4} it was." + + show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.15) T "What exactly are you talking about with them?" + A "Just science stuff." - A "The railgun is just something I happen to know though, picked it up from an old game." - show trish neutral flip with dissolve + + A "The railgun is just something I happen to know though,{w=.4} picked it up from an old game." + + show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) "Trish raises an eyebrow." - T "...Right." + + T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Right." + A "Why do you ask?" + T "You learned to make a deadly weapon from a video game?" - show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve - "Her tone is flat. Unlike her chest." - A "I wouldn’t say deadl-" + + "Her tone is flat.{w=.5} Unlike her chest." + pause .5 + + A "{cps=*.4}I wouldn’t say deadl-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" + + show trish unimpressed flip T "Don’t interrupt." - show trish explanatory flip with dissolve + + show trish explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) T "Why would you think that it’s a good idea to make a weapon in class?" + T "How did you not get in trouble?" - A "Spears actually did talk to me, said something about the ‘great equaliser’." - show trish annoyed flip with dissolve + show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + + A "Spears actually did talk to me,{w=.4} said something about the 'great equaliser'." + pause .5 + + show trish annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25) "Trish grabs the bridge of her snout." + T "This is why men are useless." - "She continues to mutter to herself. All of it incoherent." - show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve + + "She continues to mutter to herself.{w=.4} All of it incoherent." + pause .5 + A "Is there a point?" - "She rounds back on me, anger painted clearly on her face." + + show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + "She rounds back on me,{w=.4} anger painted clearly on her face." + show trish angry flip with dissolve - T "Look, Anon, YOU may be into that stuff, but leave Fang out of it." - T "They have better things to do than… than…" + T "Look,{w=.4} Anon,{w=.5} YOU may be into that stuff,{w=.4} but leave Fang out of it." + + T "They have better things to do than{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.1} than{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + show trish: + easein_back .25 xalign 0.55 + show anon: + pause .25 + easein_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.025 T "Than play with some man-child’s lethal toys!" - show reed shocked flip at rright with dissolve - Re "Whoa… Harsh…" - show reed neutral flip with move: - xalign 1.1 - "Reed slumps into the seat next to Trish, sipping on his thermos of…" - Re "Just agua, bro…" - "Thermos of water…" - "What the-" - Re "What’d I miss?" - show trish explanatory with dissolve - T "I’m just trying to tell Anon here that he shouldn’t be telling Fang how to make a fuckin’ gun in school." - show reed explanatory flip with dissolve - Re "Why not?" - T "We’ve been over this." - Re "We have? When?" - T "Less than five minutes ago." - Re "Thought we were talkin’ about Anon?" - T "Yes!" - T "And specifically!" - T "We were talking about Anon’s gun!" - show trish neutral - show reed shocked flip + pause .5 + + show reed shocked flip: + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.8 + show reed: + easein 0.5 xalign 1.6 with dissolve - "Heads start to turn." - show reed happy with dissolve - "Reed grins at them all" - Re "Then how bout these guns?" - "Reed places his hands on the back of his head and flexes his biceps." - show trish unimpressed with dissolve - show trish angry with dissolve - show trish considering with dissolve - show trish angry with dissolve - "Trish’s face is a blur of emotions. At first confused, then fucking pissed, then aroused, then back to fucking pissed, all in the space of an attosecond." - T "Not those! The one he made with magnets!" + pause .5 + + Re "Whoa{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Harsh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.75) + pause .5 + + show reed flip: + easein_cubic 1.2 xalign 1.15 + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + + "Reed slumps into the seat next to Trish,{w=.4} sipping on his thermos of{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + show reed considering flip + Re "Just agua,{w=.2} bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed neutral flip - Re "But like… how do magnets work?" - "*DING-DONG BING-BONG.*" + + "Thermos of water{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + + "{cps=*.5}What the-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" + + Re "What’d I miss?" + + show trish explanatory flip + T "I’m just trying to tell Anon here that he shouldn’t be telling Fang how to make a fuckin’ gun in school." + show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 + + show reed explanatory flip + Re "Why not?" + show reed neutral flip + pause .25 + + show trish annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25) + T "We’ve been over this." + + Re "We have?{w=.4} When?" + + show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) + T "Less than five minutes ago." + + Re "Thought we were talkin’ about Anon?" + + show trish: + easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.425 + show reed behind trish + show trish indignant with Dissolve(.1) + T "Yes!" + + T "And specifically!" + + show reed shocked flip: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2 + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.055 #-0.025 + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' + show trish angry: + easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 0.45 #0.425 + T "We were talking about Anon’s gun!" with vpunch + + show trish unimpressed with dissolve + pause .25 + + "Heads start to turn." + pause .5 + + play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg' + show reed happy behind trish with Dissolve(.15): + xalign 0.8 + pause .5 + + "Reed grins at them all" + + Re "Then how bout {i}these{/i} guns?" + + "Reed places his hands on the back of his head and flexes his biceps." + pause .5 + + show trish neutral with Dissolve(.11) + show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(.11) + show trish angry with Dissolve(.11) + show trish considering with Dissolve(.11) + pause .1 + show trish: #0.45 + linear 0.05 xalign 0.455 + linear 0.05 xalign 0.45 + repeat + show trish angry with Dissolve(.25) + + show reed neutral flip with dissolve: + xalign 1.2 + + "Trish’s face is a blur of emotions.{w=.5} At first confused,{w=.4} then fucking pissed,{w=.4} then aroused,{w=.4} then back to fucking pissed,{w=.2} all in the space of an attosecond." + pause .25 + + T "Not those!{w=.6} {nw}" + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' + show reed shocked flip: + easein_cubic .5 xalign 1.3 + show anon: + easein_cubic .5 xalign -0.155 #-0.025 + show trish: + easein_elastic 0.75 xalign 0.425 + extend "The one he made with magnets!" with vpunch + pause .5 + + show reed unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + Re "But like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}" + show reed explanatory flip + extend "how do magnets work?" + show reed neutral flip + pause .5 + + stop music fadeout 1 + pause 0.1 + + play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg' + I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}" + pause 0.5 + play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0 + stop sound fadeout 1 + "All at once all the students giving the clock a blank stare stand to attention and file out the door." - T "I-I… Damn it, Reed!" - "Trish punches Reed in the shoulder, gives me another evil stare, and saunters out the room." - hide trish neutral flip with moveoutright + pause .5 + + show trish: #0.425 + linear 0.05 xalign 0.430 + linear 0.05 xalign 0.425 + repeat + T "I{w=.2}-I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=.75}{nw}" + show trish annoyed: + xalign 0.425 + easein 1 yalign -0.075 + extend "Damn it,{w=.1} Reed!" + + show trish: + easein 0.5 yalign 0.0 + show trish unimpressed with dissolve + pause .5 + + show trish behind reed: + easein_back 0.25 xalign 0.7 + pause .1 + play sound 'audio/effects/slapStickPunch.ogg' + show reed: + easein_cubic 0.25 xalign 1.325 + easein 0.5 xalign 1.3 + pause .5 + + show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + + "Trish punches Reed in the shoulder,{w=.4} gives me another evil stare,{w=.4} and saunters out the room." + pause .5 + + show trish: + easeout 1 xalign 1.5 + show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + hide trish with dissolve + pause .5 + + show reed: + ease_cubic 1.25 xalign 0.5 + pause .5 + show reed considering flip + pause .5 Re "Hey." - "Reed’s pats me on the shoulder." - show reed neutral flip at scenter with moveoutleft + + "Reed pats me on the shoulder." + pause .5 + + show anon behind reed + show reed: + easein 0.5 xalign 0.55 + show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25) Re "Bruh." - show reed happy flip + + show reed: + easeout 1 xalign 1.5 + pause .5 + hide reed with Dissolve(.5) + pause .5 + "He gives me a thumbs up and exits as well." - hide reed neutral flip with moveoutright - "Leaving only the substitute teacher, looking at me from her desk impatiently for me to leave." - stop music fadeout 1.0 - "Guess it’s her lunch period, too." - show anon neutral flip - hide anon neutral with moveoutleft + + "Leaving only the substitute teacher,{w=.4} looking at me from her desk impatiently for me to leave." + pause .5 + + stop music fadeout 3 + + "Guess it’s her lunch period,{w=.2} too." + + show anon: + easeout 1 xalign -0.9 + show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + hide anon with dissolve + pause .5 + scene black with fade + "..." + scene cafeteria show anon neutral at aleft show naomi neutral flip at scenter @@ -421,12 +713,17 @@ label chapter_3: play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' + + # TODO: SCENE hallway show hallway F "Hurry up, dweeb. If I can keep ahead of you while carrying two instruments, you can speedwalk." A "You sure you don’t want me to carry one?" F "Pfeh." "Fang is leading me back to the auditorium with both the acoustic guitar ‘borrowed’ from the music room and her bass in hand, one over each shoulder." + + # TODO: SCENE auditorium doors + "When we eventually get to the auditorium, Fang stops." "Is something wrong?" A "Uh, is everything-" @@ -439,6 +736,9 @@ label chapter_3: "..." A "FUCK!" F "Hurry up already." + + # TODO: SCENE auditorium + scene bandroom show reed neutral flip at rright show trish neutral at tcenter @@ -455,6 +755,9 @@ label chapter_3: show trish unimpressed "Trish squints in the spotlight, then finally notices me." show trish indignant + + # TODO: Punk revamp? + T "What-" T "What’s he doing here?!" "Fang slings both cases onto the stage, then climbs on herself." @@ -501,7 +804,11 @@ label chapter_3: F "Mm. Let’s just go through ‘I Need Meth Money By Tuesday Night And If I Don’t Get It I Will Stomp On Your Child’." "Don’t say ayy lmao." F "Three… Two... One.." + #half life flash bang + # TODO: stop music + # TODO: flash, black and tinnitus? + scene black pause 5 "My mind went blank." @@ -638,6 +945,7 @@ label chapter_3: "I feel a little disappointed that the show ended so soon." "Then I remember it’s not a show at all." + # TODO: play bayside revamp? play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' "And that I definitely won." @@ -671,6 +979,7 @@ label chapter_3: F "Wait!" F "We uh…" + # TODO: play appreciating the moment? play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' "I look to see her fidgeting onstage." @@ -694,6 +1003,8 @@ label chapter_3: "Fuck." + # TODO: play fighter? + "Ohfuckohshitfortheloveofallthatisholywhynow." A "I-I mean, uhh…"