diff --git a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy
index 55397ec..6e1975e 100644
--- a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy
+++ b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy
@@ -1,159 +1,451 @@
-label chapter_3:
- #Band Practice
+# Band Practice
- scene black
+label chapter_3:
+
+ scene black with fade
play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg'
- "-One Week Later-"
+ "{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}"
scene classroom with fade
+ # TODO: chatter
+
+ "It's math.{w=.5} Bane of retards and lazy intellectuals alike."
+
+ "And teachers too,{w=.4} judging by the lack of a certain coomer teacher."
+
+ "Substitute today,{w=.4} which means busywork.{w=.5} Group problems busywork specifically."
+
+ "Of course,{w=.3} I can't escape this any more than I could have escaped the lab partner assignment."
- "It's math. Bane of retards and lazy intellectuals alike."
- "And teachers too, judging by the lack of a certain coomer teacher."
- "Substitute today, which means busywork. Group problems busywork specifically."
- "Of course, I can't escape this any more than I could have escaped the lab partner assignment."
"At least here I have the opportunity to just keep to myself for an hour."
- "I don't even bother attempting the assignment, instead pretending my phone is a calculator and spending the first half shitposting about video games I haven’t played online."
- "The second half, interrupted by something pointy to the back of the dome."
+
+ "I don't even bother attempting the assignment,{w=.4} instead pretending my phone is a calculator and spending the first half shitposting about video games I haven’t played online."
+
+ "The second half,{w=.4} interrupted by something pointy to the back of the dome."
+ pause .5
+
"*sshk*"
+
"I can feel something stuck between my chair and my back."
+
play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0
- "I fish around and pull out a crumpled paper airplane, a completed set of problems."
- "...this is Reed's. And it's..."
- "...done? Even the extra problems that I don't even bother with because they take another ten minutes each."
- "I turn around to see that technicolor burnout waving me over. He's sitting next to Trish."
+
+ "I fish around and pull out a crumpled paper airplane,{w=.4} a completed set of problems."
+ pause .5
+
+ "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}this is Reed's.{w=.4} And it's{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+ "...done?{w=.5} Even the extra problems that I don't even bother with because they take another ten minutes each."
+
+ "I turn around to see that technicolor burnout waving me over.{w=.4} He's sitting next to Trish."
+
"She's giving me the evil eye."
- "At least I think it's the evil eye. Whatever that expression is, it clashes with her smile."
+
+ "At least I think it's the evil eye.{w=.5} Whatever that expression is,{w=.4} it clashes with her smile."
+ pause .5
+
"Might as well see what they want."
- "As I weave through the maze of desks squished together with partners more interested in their phones than the worksheet, I catch a hint of whatever Reed and Trish are talking about."
- show reed unimpressed at scenter
- show trish neutral flip at tright
+ pause .5
+
+ show reed unimpressed:
+ yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+ show trish considering flip at sright
+ with Dissolve(1)
+
+ "As I weave through the maze of desks squished together with partners more interested in their phones than the worksheet,{w=.4} I catch a hint of whatever Reed and Trish are talking about."
+
+ Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Honesty is the best policy,{w=.3} eh?"
+
+ Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Bad juju to keep somethin’ bottled up{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+ pause .5
+
+ show anon neutral:
+ yalign 0.1 xalign -0.4
+ show anon:
+ easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.01
with dissolve
- show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
- Re "...Honesty is the best policy, eh?"
- Re "...Bad juju to keep somethin’ bottled up..."
- show reed neutral with dissolve
- "Reed grabs hold of another chair and sets it on Trish's other side, nodding in my direction before taking a big pull from whatever he's got in that thermos on his desk."
+
+ show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+ pause .25
+
+ show reed neutral flip:
+ xalign 0.9
+ with dissolve
+ pause .5
+
+ "Reed grabs hold of another chair and sets it on Trish's other side,{w=.4} nodding in my direction before taking a big pull from whatever he's got in that thermos on his desk."
+
"The widening of his pupils suggest its more than just Roarbucks cold brew in it."
- show trish happy flip with dissolve
- T "Hey, Anon!"
+
+ show trish happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
+ T "Hey,{w=.2} Anon!"
+
A "You guys need something?"
- T "Nah, just wanted to chat a bit since we got the time"
+
+ T "Nah,{w=.3} just wanted to chat a bit since we got the time"
show trish neutral flip with dissolve
- "There’s something in her tone of voice…"
+
+ "There’s something in her tone of voice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
" It’s like she's getting ready to gore me with those nubs she calls horns."
- A "...Sure"
- show reed explanatory with dissolve
- Re "Imma let you two get to whatever… gonna go for a refill..."
+ pause .5
+
+ A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Sure"
+ pause .5
+
+ show reed explanatory flip
+ Re "Imma let you two get to whatever{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} gonna go for a refill{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+ show reed neutral flip
+
"He shakes his thermos and heads for the door."
+
+
+ show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25):
+ xalign 0.5
+ show reed:
+ ease_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
+ show trish:
+ ease 0.6 xalign 0.85
+
"What's in that anyway?"
- Re "Don't ask..."
+
+ pause .5
+
+ show reed considering
+ Re "Don't ask{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+ show reed neutral
+ pause .25
+
+ show reed:
+ easeout 0.5 xalign 1.5
hide reed with dissolve
+ pause .5
+
"Fair enough."
- "...Wait..."
+ pause .5
+
+ "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
"Fuck it."
- show trish neutral flip at tcenter with move
- T "So… Anon… You and Fang?"
- A "...You and Fang what?"
+ pause .25
+
+ show trish neutral flip:
+ ease 1 xalign 0.6
+ pause 1.5
+
+ T "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} You and Fang?"
+ pause .5
+
+ A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You and Fang what?"
+
T "They’ve been talkin’ about you."
+
A "They?"
- show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
+
"The tiny triceratops rolled her eyes dramatically."
- T "Fang. Fang’s been talkin’ bout you."
- A "All good things, I’m sure."
- "Fang’s been talking about me? That’s dumb."
- "Oh yeah. The phones."
+
+ show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+ T "Fang.{w=.4} Fang’s been talkin’ bout you."
+ pause .5
+
+ A "All good things,{w=.3} I’m sure."
+
+ show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve
+
+ "Fang’s been talking about me?{w=.5} That’s dumb."
+
+ "Oh yeah.{w=.4} The phones."
+
"All we’ve been doing is more labwork in science."
+
#[CG of mad scientist Anon with a railgun aimed at Dr. Fernsworth]
#God I wish we had time for this CG
+
"Last Thursday I tried to remember how to make a railgun."
- "To show I could, of course."
- F "{i}Pfft, I could make one too.{/i}"
- "She seemed unimpressed at the time, but…"
+
+ "To show I could,{w=.4} of course."
+ pause .5
+
+ F "{i}Pfft,{w=.4} I could make one too.{/i}"
+ pause .5
+
+ "She seemed unimpressed at the time,{w=.4} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+ hide dimmer_light with dissolve
+
A "Was it about making a railgun?"
- T "Er… Yeah, it was."
+
+ show trish explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
+ T "Er{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Yeah,{w=.4} it was."
+
+ show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.15)
T "What exactly are you talking about with them?"
+
A "Just science stuff."
- A "The railgun is just something I happen to know though, picked it up from an old game."
- show trish neutral flip with dissolve
+
+ A "The railgun is just something I happen to know though,{w=.4} picked it up from an old game."
+
+ show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
"Trish raises an eyebrow."
- T "...Right."
+
+ T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Right."
+
A "Why do you ask?"
+
T "You learned to make a deadly weapon from a video game?"
- show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
- "Her tone is flat. Unlike her chest."
- A "I wouldn’t say deadl-"
+
+ "Her tone is flat.{w=.5} Unlike her chest."
+ pause .5
+
+ A "{cps=*.4}I wouldn’t say deadl-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
+
+ show trish unimpressed flip
T "Don’t interrupt."
- show trish explanatory flip with dissolve
+
+ show trish explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
T "Why would you think that it’s a good idea to make a weapon in class?"
+
T "How did you not get in trouble?"
- A "Spears actually did talk to me, said something about the ‘great equaliser’."
- show trish annoyed flip with dissolve
+ show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
+ A "Spears actually did talk to me,{w=.4} said something about the 'great equaliser'."
+ pause .5
+
+ show trish annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25)
"Trish grabs the bridge of her snout."
+
T "This is why men are useless."
- "She continues to mutter to herself. All of it incoherent."
- show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
+
+ "She continues to mutter to herself.{w=.4} All of it incoherent."
+ pause .5
+
A "Is there a point?"
- "She rounds back on me, anger painted clearly on her face."
+
+ show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+ "She rounds back on me,{w=.4} anger painted clearly on her face."
+
show trish angry flip with dissolve
- T "Look, Anon, YOU may be into that stuff, but leave Fang out of it."
- T "They have better things to do than… than…"
+ T "Look,{w=.4} Anon,{w=.5} YOU may be into that stuff,{w=.4} but leave Fang out of it."
+
+ T "They have better things to do than{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.1} than{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+ show trish:
+ easein_back .25 xalign 0.55
+ show anon:
+ pause .25
+ easein_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.025
T "Than play with some man-child’s lethal toys!"
- show reed shocked flip at rright with dissolve
- Re "Whoa… Harsh…"
- show reed neutral flip with move:
- xalign 1.1
- "Reed slumps into the seat next to Trish, sipping on his thermos of…"
- Re "Just agua, bro…"
- "Thermos of water…"
- "What the-"
- Re "What’d I miss?"
- show trish explanatory with dissolve
- T "I’m just trying to tell Anon here that he shouldn’t be telling Fang how to make a fuckin’ gun in school."
- show reed explanatory flip with dissolve
- Re "Why not?"
- T "We’ve been over this."
- Re "We have? When?"
- T "Less than five minutes ago."
- Re "Thought we were talkin’ about Anon?"
- T "Yes!"
- T "And specifically!"
- T "We were talking about Anon’s gun!"
- show trish neutral
- show reed shocked flip
+ pause .5
+
+ show reed shocked flip:
+ yalign 0.1 xalign 1.8
+ show reed:
+ easein 0.5 xalign 1.6
with dissolve
- "Heads start to turn."
- show reed happy with dissolve
- "Reed grins at them all"
- Re "Then how bout these guns?"
- "Reed places his hands on the back of his head and flexes his biceps."
- show trish unimpressed with dissolve
- show trish angry with dissolve
- show trish considering with dissolve
- show trish angry with dissolve
- "Trish’s face is a blur of emotions. At first confused, then fucking pissed, then aroused, then back to fucking pissed, all in the space of an attosecond."
- T "Not those! The one he made with magnets!"
+ pause .5
+
+ Re "Whoa{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Harsh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+ show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.75)
+ pause .5
+
+ show reed flip:
+ easein_cubic 1.2 xalign 1.15
+ show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
+ "Reed slumps into the seat next to Trish,{w=.4} sipping on his thermos of{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+ show reed considering flip
+ Re "Just agua,{w=.2} bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show reed neutral flip
- Re "But like… how do magnets work?"
- "*DING-DONG BING-BONG.*"
+
+ "Thermos of water{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+ pause .5
+
+ "{cps=*.5}What the-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
+
+ Re "What’d I miss?"
+
+ show trish explanatory flip
+ T "I’m just trying to tell Anon here that he shouldn’t be telling Fang how to make a fuckin’ gun in school."
+ show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+ pause .5
+
+ show reed explanatory flip
+ Re "Why not?"
+ show reed neutral flip
+ pause .25
+
+ show trish annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+ T "We’ve been over this."
+
+ Re "We have?{w=.4} When?"
+
+ show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+ T "Less than five minutes ago."
+
+ Re "Thought we were talkin’ about Anon?"
+
+ show trish:
+ easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.425
+ show reed behind trish
+ show trish indignant with Dissolve(.1)
+ T "Yes!"
+
+ T "And specifically!"
+
+ show reed shocked flip:
+ easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
+ show anon:
+ easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.055 #-0.025
+ play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
+ show trish angry:
+ easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 0.45 #0.425
+ T "We were talking about Anon’s gun!" with vpunch
+
+ show trish unimpressed with dissolve
+ pause .25
+
+ "Heads start to turn."
+ pause .5
+
+ play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
+ show reed happy behind trish with Dissolve(.15):
+ xalign 0.8
+ pause .5
+
+ "Reed grins at them all"
+
+ Re "Then how bout {i}these{/i} guns?"
+
+ "Reed places his hands on the back of his head and flexes his biceps."
+ pause .5
+
+ show trish neutral with Dissolve(.11)
+ show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(.11)
+ show trish angry with Dissolve(.11)
+ show trish considering with Dissolve(.11)
+ pause .1
+ show trish: #0.45
+ linear 0.05 xalign 0.455
+ linear 0.05 xalign 0.45
+ repeat
+ show trish angry with Dissolve(.25)
+
+ show reed neutral flip with dissolve:
+ xalign 1.2
+
+ "Trish’s face is a blur of emotions.{w=.5} At first confused,{w=.4} then fucking pissed,{w=.4} then aroused,{w=.4} then back to fucking pissed,{w=.2} all in the space of an attosecond."
+ pause .25
+
+ T "Not those!{w=.6} {nw}"
+ play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
+ show reed shocked flip:
+ easein_cubic .5 xalign 1.3
+ show anon:
+ easein_cubic .5 xalign -0.155 #-0.025
+ show trish:
+ easein_elastic 0.75 xalign 0.425
+ extend "The one he made with magnets!" with vpunch
+ pause .5
+
+ show reed unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+ Re "But like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}"
+ show reed explanatory flip
+ extend "how do magnets work?"
+ show reed neutral flip
+ pause .5
+
+ stop music fadeout 1
+ pause 0.1
+
+ play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg'
+ I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
+ pause 0.5
+ play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0
+ stop sound fadeout 1
+
"All at once all the students giving the clock a blank stare stand to attention and file out the door."
- T "I-I… Damn it, Reed!"
- "Trish punches Reed in the shoulder, gives me another evil stare, and saunters out the room."
- hide trish neutral flip with moveoutright
+ pause .5
+
+ show trish: #0.425
+ linear 0.05 xalign 0.430
+ linear 0.05 xalign 0.425
+ repeat
+ T "I{w=.2}-I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=.75}{nw}"
+ show trish annoyed:
+ xalign 0.425
+ easein 1 yalign -0.075
+ extend "Damn it,{w=.1} Reed!"
+
+ show trish:
+ easein 0.5 yalign 0.0
+ show trish unimpressed with dissolve
+ pause .5
+
+ show trish behind reed:
+ easein_back 0.25 xalign 0.7
+ pause .1
+ play sound 'audio/effects/slapStickPunch.ogg'
+ show reed:
+ easein_cubic 0.25 xalign 1.325
+ easein 0.5 xalign 1.3
+ pause .5
+
+ show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
+ "Trish punches Reed in the shoulder,{w=.4} gives me another evil stare,{w=.4} and saunters out the room."
+ pause .5
+
+ show trish:
+ easeout 1 xalign 1.5
+ show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+ pause .25
+ hide trish with dissolve
+ pause .5
+
+ show reed:
+ ease_cubic 1.25 xalign 0.5
+ pause .5
+ show reed considering flip
+ pause .5
Re "Hey."
- "Reed’s pats me on the shoulder."
- show reed neutral flip at scenter with moveoutleft
+
+ "Reed pats me on the shoulder."
+ pause .5
+
+ show anon behind reed
+ show reed:
+ easein 0.5 xalign 0.55
+ show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Bruh."
- show reed happy flip
+
+ show reed:
+ easeout 1 xalign 1.5
+ pause .5
+ hide reed with Dissolve(.5)
+ pause .5
+
"He gives me a thumbs up and exits as well."
- hide reed neutral flip with moveoutright
- "Leaving only the substitute teacher, looking at me from her desk impatiently for me to leave."
- stop music fadeout 1.0
- "Guess it’s her lunch period, too."
- show anon neutral flip
- hide anon neutral with moveoutleft
+
+ "Leaving only the substitute teacher,{w=.4} looking at me from her desk impatiently for me to leave."
+ pause .5
+
+ stop music fadeout 3
+
+ "Guess it’s her lunch period,{w=.2} too."
+
+ show anon:
+ easeout 1 xalign -0.9
+ show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+ hide anon with dissolve
+ pause .5
+
scene black with fade
+
"..."
+
scene cafeteria
show anon neutral at aleft
show naomi neutral flip at scenter
@@ -421,12 +713,17 @@ label chapter_3:
play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg'
+
+ # TODO: SCENE hallway
show hallway
F "Hurry up, dweeb. If I can keep ahead of you while carrying two instruments, you can speedwalk."
A "You sure you don’t want me to carry one?"
F "Pfeh."
"Fang is leading me back to the auditorium with both the acoustic guitar ‘borrowed’ from the music room and her bass in hand, one over each shoulder."
+
+ # TODO: SCENE auditorium doors
+
"When we eventually get to the auditorium, Fang stops."
"Is something wrong?"
A "Uh, is everything-"
@@ -439,6 +736,9 @@ label chapter_3:
"..."
A "FUCK!"
F "Hurry up already."
+
+ # TODO: SCENE auditorium
+
scene bandroom
show reed neutral flip at rright
show trish neutral at tcenter
@@ -455,6 +755,9 @@ label chapter_3:
show trish unimpressed
"Trish squints in the spotlight, then finally notices me."
show trish indignant
+
+ # TODO: Punk revamp?
+
T "What-"
T "What’s he doing here?!"
"Fang slings both cases onto the stage, then climbs on herself."
@@ -501,7 +804,11 @@ label chapter_3:
F "Mm. Let’s just go through ‘I Need Meth Money By Tuesday Night And If I Don’t Get It I Will Stomp On Your Child’."
"Don’t say ayy lmao."
F "Three… Two... One.."
+
#half life flash bang
+ # TODO: stop music
+ # TODO: flash, black and tinnitus?
+
scene black
pause 5
"My mind went blank."
@@ -638,6 +945,7 @@ label chapter_3:
"I feel a little disappointed that the show ended so soon."
"Then I remember it’s not a show at all."
+ # TODO: play bayside revamp?
play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg'
"And that I definitely won."
@@ -671,6 +979,7 @@ label chapter_3:
F "Wait!"
F "We uh…"
+ # TODO: play appreciating the moment?
play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg'
"I look to see her fidgeting onstage."
@@ -694,6 +1003,8 @@ label chapter_3:
"Fuck."
+ # TODO: play fighter?
+
"Ohfuckohshitfortheloveofallthatisholywhynow."
A "I-I mean, uhh…"