From 8c3bf9e54ceeba7498e6c52aa1515a61ef68be31 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Sun, 20 Jun 2021 17:16:30 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework choreo for Anon's first class --- .../1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy | 159 ++++++++++++------ 1 file changed, 108 insertions(+), 51 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy index 134a4e1..2e9e42c 100644 --- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy +++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy @@ -173,9 +173,10 @@ label chapter_1: stop music fadeout 1.0 stop sound - stop audio + "On the side of the building is where I find sanctuary" + scene garden show anon neutral flip at scenter with fade @@ -263,7 +264,7 @@ label chapter_1: show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve - "The force is enough for my feet to get under me, stumbling back up to stand before the pair of strangers." + "The force is enough for my feet to get under me,{w=0.4} stumbling back up to stand before the pair of strangers." "It also felt like enough force to pull my arm out of its socket." @@ -284,6 +285,8 @@ label chapter_1: show naomi neutral at sleft hide naomiSilo with dissolve + + show anon neutral with dissolve Nas "We’re your welcoming committee." @@ -291,10 +294,13 @@ label chapter_1: "{cps=*0.5}Is that really necessary?{/cps}" + show naomi explanatory + N "I had this prepared just for you!" - show naomi neutral at scloserleft with ease - show naomi neutral at sleft with ease + show anon neutral flip with dissolve + show naomi neutral at scloserleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp) + show naomi neutral at sleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp) "The orange one,{w=0.3} Naomi hands me a brochure." @@ -316,7 +322,7 @@ label chapter_1: "Naser looks back to the school entrance.{w=0.5} I follow his eyes and see some people trying to lift a large speaker up the stairs of the school." - show naomi sad with dissolve + show naomi sad N "O-oh." @@ -349,8 +355,12 @@ label chapter_1: "I turn back to Naomi.{w=0.6} She smiles again,{w=0.4} though there is a plasticity to it." + show naomi explanatory + N "How about I show you the campus,{w=0.3} Anon?{w=0.6} We wouldn’t want you getting lost on your first day, now would we?" + show naomi neutral + A "Mm,{w=0.5} sounds good." scene hallway @@ -368,60 +378,107 @@ label chapter_1: "I pull the folded up sheet from my pocket and hand it to her.{w=0.6} She unfolds it delicately and scans the page thoroughly." + show naomi happy + N "Oh my gosh!{w=0.6} We share a home room Anon!" - "Oh wonderful." + show naomi neutral + + "{cps=*0.4}Oh wonderful.{/cps}" + + show naomi explanatory N "Speaking of,{w=0.3} class will be starting shortly.{w=0.5} Follow me.{w=0.5} Mr. Tsuki’s classroom is this way." + show naomi neutral # play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' # already playing, was it supposed to be silent for a bit here? - - "I follow after her to a classroom on the 2nd floor. The seats were being filled with students. I take one near the front, knowing I’ll have to introduce myself. I’ll probably be doing that for all my classes." - scene classroom with fade - "Fuck my life." - show anon neutral flip at aright - "The artificial ring of a bell blares from a speaker on the wall. With it everyone waits as the teacher finally enters the room and shuts the door." - show jinflip at sleft with dissolve - Tsuki "Ohayo gozaimasu curassu. Tudei yu habu e niu curassu-meito tsu Borukeino Hai" - "What" - Tsuki "Anon-kun puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu" - stop sound - "Naomi coughs and makes a subtle nod up." - "OH!" - stop sound - - stop audio - - stop music - - "I stood from my seat and faced the class. Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns. I inhale deep, willing my erratic heart to slow." - show anon neutral flip at acenter with move - show jinflip with move: - xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0 - show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve - A "Hey…" - "Again those eyes, just like three weeks ago." - A "My name is Anon. I uh…" - "Just like every day for the past four months." - A "I don’t really have any hobbies." - "I wanted to flee. Hide away. Anything to avoid those judging eyes." - N "Why did you transfer here?" - "My throat clenches. It’s an innocent question. But I think back again to it all." - A "uh… I…" - "There’s whispers now. The hushed tones, silenced snickers, blending with the everpresent stares. My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it. See the cold chill racing over me." - Tsuki "Anon-kun, yuu du natto habu tsu ansaa zattu" - "His words snap me out of my trance. Only Naomi was looking at me. The rest were preoccupied." - "Either talking about their winter break. Or catching up on sleep." - "They’ve all been ignoring me the entire time." - Tsuki "Puriizu retaano tsu yo shiito, Anon-kun. Hai, nao curassu-" - "That was nothing like my Japanese animes." - hide anon neutral with dissolve - "Mr. Tsuki continued on, drawing what little attention there was to himself. I sat down, finally feeling the blood that had caught in my legs rush up, leaving me lightheaded." - hide jinflip with dissolve - "And I probably have to do this for each class today?" - "Double fuck my life." scene black with fade + + "I follow after her to a classroom on the 2nd floor.{w=0.5} The seats were being filled with students.{w=0.5} I take one near the front,{w=0.3} knowing I’ll have to introduce myself.{w=0.5} I’ll probably be doing that for all my classes." + + "{cps=*0.4}Fuck my life.{/cps}" + + scene classroom with fade + + play sound "audio/effects/bell.ogg" + pause 3.0 + + show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve + + "The artificial ring of a bell blares from a speaker on the wall.{w=0.5} With it everyone waits as the teacher finally enters the room and shuts the door." + + show jinflip at sleft with dissolve + + Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Ohayo gozaimasu curassu.{w=0.7} Tudei yu habu e niu curassu-meito tsu Borukeino Hai{/cps}" + + "What" + + Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun{w=0.25} puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu{/cps}" + + "Naomi coughs and makes a subtle nod up." + + stop music fadeout 1.0 + + "OH!" + + "I stood from my seat and faced the class.{w=0.6} Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns.{w} I inhale deep,{w=0.4} willing my erratic heart to slow." + + show anon neutral flip at acenter + show jinflip: + xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0 + with ease + show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve + + A "Hey{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" + + "Again those eyes,{w=0.4} just like three weeks ago." + + A "My name is Anon.{w=0.6} I uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" + + "Just like every day for the past four months." + + A "I don’t really have any hobbies." + + "I wanted to flee.{w} Hide away.{w} Anything to avoid those judging eyes." + + N "Why did you transfer here?" + + "My throat clenches.{w=0.5} It’s an innocent question.{w=0.5} But I think back again to it all." + + A "uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}" + + "There’s whispers now.{w=0.75} The hushed tones,{w=0.3} silenced snickers,{w=0.3} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me." + + show jinflip: + xalign -0.1 yalign 0.0 + with ease + + Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun,{w=0.5} yuu du natto habu tsu ansaa zattu{/cps}" + + "His words snap me out of my trance.{w=0.5} Only Naomi was looking at me.{w=0.5} The rest were preoccupied." + + "Either talking about their winter break.{w=0.5} Or catching up on sleep." + + "They’ve all been ignoring me the entire time." + + Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Puriizu retaano tsu yo shiito,{w=0.3} Anon-kun.{w=0.5} Hai,{w=0.3} nao curassu-{/cps}" + + "That was nothing like my Japanese animes." + + hide anon neutral with dissolve + + "Mr. Tsuki continued on,{w=0.4} drawing what little attention there was to himself.{w=0.6} I sat down,{w=0.3} finally feeling the blood that had caught in my legs rush up,{w=0.3} leaving me lightheaded." + + hide jinflip with dissolve + + "And I probably have to do this for each class today?" + + "Double fuck my life." + + scene black with fade + "Awkward introduction after awkward introduction to classmates that couldn’t care less kept me anxious the whole morning." + scene cafeteria show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve