diff --git a/game/script.rpy b/game/script.rpy index 2dc198a..f1fdb87 100644 --- a/game/script.rpy +++ b/game/script.rpy @@ -260,10 +260,12 @@ image reed happy flip = im.Flip("reed/reed happy.png", horizontal=True) image reed happy sunglasses flip = im.Flip("reed/reed happy sunglasses.png", horizontal=True) image anon face happy flip = im.Flip("anon/base set/anon face happy.png", horizontal=True) image anon happy flip = im.Flip("anon/emotive set/anon happy.png", horizontal=True) +image anon grin flip = im.Flip("anon/base set/anon grin.png", horizontal=True) image trish future smug flip = im.Flip("trish/trish future smug.png", horizontal=True) image trish prom happy flip = im.Flip("trish/trish prom happy.png", horizontal=True) image stella happy flip = im.Flip("stella/stella happy.png", horizontal=True) image stella happy alt flip = im.Flip("stella/stella happy alt.png", horizontal=True) +image fangdad happy flip = im.Flip("fangparents/fangdad happy.png", horizontal=True) #fear flips image anon fear flip = im.Flip("anon/emotive set/anon fear.png", horizontal=True) @@ -321,12 +323,14 @@ image rosa prom closed flip = im.Flip("rosa/rosa prom closed.png", horizontal=Tr image reed sunglasses flip = im.Flip("reed/reed sunglasses.png", horizontal=True) image trish prom bass flip = im.Flip("trish/trish prom bass.png", horizontal=True) image trish smug flip = im.Flip("trish/trish smug.png", horizontal=True) +image naser smug flip = im.Flip("naser/naser smug.png", horizontal=True) image rosa future flip = im.Flip("rosa/rosa future.png", horizontal=True) image jinflip = im.Flip("other/jin.png", horizontal=True) image farnsworth flip = im.Flip("other/farnsworth.png", horizontal=True) image carldelewski flip = im.Flip("other/carldelewski.png", horizontal=True) image fangdad unimpressed flip = im.Flip("fangparents/fangdad unimpressed.png", horizontal=True) image naser handout flip = im.Flip("naser/naser handout.png", horizontal=True) +image naomi keikaku flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi keikaku.png", horizontal=True) # vfx image black = "#000" diff --git a/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy b/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy index a1645c9..a9637c4 100644 --- a/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy +++ b/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy @@ -1,500 +1,986 @@ label chapter_6: #Not A Date + pause 1 + scene room anon dark with fade - "-One Month Later-" - play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' fadein 1.0 + "{cps=*0.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}" + + pause .5 + play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' + pause .5 + "I’m laying in bed on a saturday morning." - "It’s been raining the last few days, so I’m stuck inside." + + "It’s been raining the last few days,{w=.4} so I’m stuck inside." + "Not like I had any other plans anyways." + pause .5 + "The forecast says it should clear up later today." - "There’s no new games out, and my backlog is just the perfect size of fuck that noise." + + "There’s no new games out,{w=.4} and my backlog is just the perfect size of fuck that noise." + "I don’t even feel like baiting on a certain basket weaving polynesian forum." + pause .5 + "The light of my phone is the only thing illuminating my hovel of a home." + "I scroll through the camera roll out of boredom." + "At least that’s what I tell myself." + pause .5 + "Interspersed through various memes and screenshots of homework assignments are pictures Fang has been sending." + "Over the last month I’ve been included more in Fang’s circle of friends." - #[CG of Fang having beaten Anon on a Primal Rage arcade cabinet] - "Ugh… My cred… I can feel it slipping away." - #[CG of Reed in his mascot outfit at one of Naser’s track meet] - "Hehehehe, Reed stole all the hotdogs that day." - #[CG of a selfie of Trish and Fang on the pier] - "I scroll past that one swiftly… god damn it Trish…" + + # B: these lines look like they've been updated in the script doc + "Never imagined I’d have so many actual pictures on it." + + "Each one brings a vivid memory to mind,{w=.4} usually an embarrassing one." + + "But there’s some other ones{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + "Like of me with the rest of the band just enjoying the atmosphere in the auditorium." + pause .5 + + # #[CG of Fang having beaten Anon on a Primal Rage arcade cabinet] + # "Ugh… My cred… I can feel it slipping away." + # #[CG of Reed in his mascot outfit at one of Naser’s track meet] + # "Hehehehe, Reed stole all the hotdogs that day." + # #[CG of a selfie of Trish and Fang on the pier] + # "I scroll past that one swiftly… god damn it Trish…" + "My perusal through old pictures is interrupted with a text." - "Fang: Looking for new band venue" - "Fang: Don’t feel like going alone" - "Fang: Do you want to come with?" - "...Alone…? No, shut the fuck up alarms." - "Anon: Why alone?" - "Fang: Trish has a horn appt and Reed is" - "A pause." - "Fang: Preoccupied." + pause .5 + + show anonphone with easeinbottom + pause .5 + + "Fang:{fast}{w=.3} Looking for new band venue" + + "Fang:{fast}{w=.3} Don’t feel like going alone" + pause .5 + + "Fang:{fast}{w=.3} Do you want to come with?" + pause .5 + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alone{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}{w=.4} No,{w=.2} shut the fuck up alarms." + + "Anon:{fast}{w=.3} Why alone?" + + "Fang:{fast}{w=.3} Trish has a horn appt and Reed is" + pause .5 + + #"A pause." + "{i}'Fang is typing...'{/i}{fast}" + pause .5 + + "Fang:{fast}{w=.3} Preoccupied." + pause .5 + #cut to Reed in bathroom cg - Re "...dude like… back to the story..." + Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Dude{w=.2} like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} back to the story{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 #cut back to Anon - "Anon: Alright, where we dropping?" - "Fang: Just show up at my place in like an hour" - "Fang: Need to go now" - "Anon: k" - stop music fadeout 1.0 + "Anon:{fast}{w=.3} Alright, where we dropping?" + + "Fang:{fast}{w=.3} Just show up at my place in like an hour" + + "Fang:{fast}{w=.3} Need to go now" + pause .5 + + "Anon:{fast}{w=.3} k" + stop music fadeout 4 + pause .5 + + hide anonphone with easeoutbottom + pause .5 + "This is fine." - play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0 + "It’s just helping a friend of mine find someplace for her band to play." + "A friend I have feelings for." + "And we’re alone." - scene room anon day + + play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0 + scene room anon day with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + "JUST HANGING OUT CALM DOWN ANON CALM THE FUCK DOWN." + pause .5 + "I boot up my computer and start a gacha thread on a taiwanese rum brewing blogsite." + "The soothing replies bring my heartbeat down to an acceptable level." + pause .5 + "To top it off I insult the mods and then report my own post so I know they have to see it." - "I am become Anon, Collector of (You)s and Poster of Shit." + pause .5 + + "I am become Anon,{w=.4} Collector of (You)s and Poster of Shit." + pause .5 + + stop music fadeout 4 "By now the rain has subsided." - "Still feeling refreshed, I grab my jacket and start making my way across town to Fang’s house." + + "Still feeling refreshed,{w=.4} I grab my jacket and start making my way across town to Fang’s house." + scene black with fade - "..." + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 1.0 - show anon neutral at aleft - "Passing through the snobby part of town to catch a bus, my thoughts begin intruding on me." + pause .5 + + "Passing through the snobby part of town to catch a bus,{w=.4} my thoughts begin intruding on me." + "Images of what’s to come pass before my eyes unwarranted." - "Looking for restaurants… because they’d be good venues of course!" - "Walking through the mall maybe? That’d be a good spot." + pause .5 + + "Looking for restaurants{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} because they’d be good venues of course!" + + "Walking through the mall maybe?{w=.4} That’d be a good spot." + "The day turns to night and the temperature drops." + "I offer Fang my coat and-" - "God damn it no this isn’t a daaa-" - "Oh shit my stop!" - "I scurry off the bus right as the doors are closing." - scene sidewalk - show anon neutral at aleft - with fade - "And I don’t forget to thank the driver." - "The bus stop is luckily only a block away from Fang’s neighborhood." - "There’s a few stores open, and a street vendor is gleefully setting up shop for the first time in a few days.." - "she calls out to me as I pass." - show tracy unimpressed at scenter - play music "audio/OST/Tracy was fired from her real job.ogg" fadein 1.0 - SV "Some storm, eh?" - show anon neutral at aleft - A "Oh, uh… Yeah. It was." - SV "People don’t usually take the bus here these days, where ya headed?" - A "Just… Over to the suburbs over there." - SV "Highschooler, taking the bus to the suburbs on a saturday…" - show tracy tease - SV "You’re going to see a girl, ain’tcha?" - A "How did…" - A "I mean, I am, but… I-it isn’t like that, you know?" - SV "Come onnnn, you can’t fool me." - SV "WAH-HA!! I’m certain it ain’t." - SV "At any rate, why not pick up a few ‘dogs to impress her?" - SV "We got ice cream too, if she’s an herbie." - A "Maybe later. I’ll keep it in mind." - "I turn to leave, behind me I hear the vendor mutter to herself." - show tracy neutral - SV "Ah, to be young and love again…" - scene skinrow - show anon neutral at aleft + pause .5 + + "God damn it no this isn’t a{w=.2} {cps=*.2}daaa-{/cps}" + stop music fadeout 1.0 + "Oh shit my stop!" + + play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorLoop.ogg' fadein 3 + pause .5 + + "I scurry off the bus right as the doors are closing." + + "And I don’t forget to thank the driver." + + # TODO: bus pneumatic hiss, followed by engine fading away into the distance? + + scene sidewalk + show anon neutral flip: + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1 + with fade + pause .5 + + "The bus stop is luckily only a block away from Fang’s neighborhood." + + "There’s a few stores open,{w=.4} and a street vendor is gleefully setting up shop for the first time in a few days.." + pause .5 + + "She calls out to me as I pass." + + show anon: + easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.1 + pause 1.5 + + stop ambient fadeout 3 + play music "audio/OST/Tracy was fired from her real job.ogg" + + SV "Some storm,{w=.5} eh?" + pause .5 + + show tracy unimpressed: + yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8 + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + + show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + + A "Oh,{w=.3} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} yeah.{w=.4} It was." + + SV "People don’t usually take the bus here these days,{w=.4} where ya headed?" + pause .5 + + A "Just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} over to the suburbs over there." + + SV "Highschooler,{w=.4} taking the bus to the suburbs on a Saturday{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + show tracy tease with Dissolve(.25) + SV "You’re going to see a girl,{w=.4} ain’t{w=.15}cha?" + + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.05 + pause .25 + A "How did{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + A "I mean,{w=.4} I am,{w=.2} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I-{w=.2}it isn’t like that,{w=.2} you know?" + + # B: line changed in script doc + SV "Come{cps=*.25} onnnn,{/cps}{w=.3} you can’t fool me." + # SV "WAH-HA!! I’m certain it ain’t." + + SV "At any rate,{w=.4} why not pick up a few ‘dogs to impress her?" + + SV "We got ice cream too,{w=.4} if she’s an herbie." + pause .5 + + A "Maybe later.{w=.4} I’ll keep it in mind." + pause .5 + + show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + "I turn to leave,{w=.4} behind me I hear the vendor mutter to herself." + + show anon: + easeout_cubic 1 xalign -0.15 + pause 1 + show anon: + easein_elastic 0.5 xalign -0.2 + show tracy neutral + SV "Ah,{w=.3} to be young and in love again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I pick up the pace." + + stop music fadeout 4 + show anon: + easeout 1 xalign -0.9 + hide anon with dissolve + pause .5 + scene black with fade - "... I pick up the pace." - "..." + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + "The difference between Fang’s neighborhood and my apartment complex is night and day." - "The smell of burnt tires doesn’t hang in the air. Instead it’s a mix of Cedar and wet pavement." + + "The smell of burnt tires doesn’t hang in the air.{w=.4} Instead it’s a mix of Cedar and wet pavement." + "The knife in my pocket feels excessive as an officer’s car passes by." - "I suppose to someone who's lived here it would seem normal, but to someone from bumfuck nowhere? The suburb felt decadent." + pause .5 + + "I suppose to someone who's lived here it would seem normal,{w=.4} but to someone from bumfuck nowhere?{w=.6} The suburb felt decadent." + pause .5 + + play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorloop.ogg' fadein 4 + + scene home fang outside with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 "Fang’s home is easy enough to find thanks to Gruugle maps’ images." - scene home fang outside - "It’s nice. Very nice actually. Two stories tall and with an expensive, if kinda scraped up, sports car in the drive-way." - "I approach the home, careful to hop up the spread stones that make up the walkway, in fear of trampling the well manicured yard." - "At last I’m at my destination. Fuck." - show anon neutral at aleft + + "It’s nice.{w=.5} Very nice actually.{w=.5} Two stories tall and with an expensive,{w=.2} if kinda scraped up,{w=.2} sports car in the drive-way." + + "I approach the home,{w=.4} careful to hop up the spread stones that make up the walkway,{w=.4} in fear of trampling the well manicured yard." + pause .5 + + "At last I’m at my destination.{w=.5} Fuck." + pause .5 + + show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve + pause .5 + "I stand frozen on the white porch now with the front door before me like the ramparts of a castle." - "Am I supposed to knock, or text her that I’m here?" - "Crap, I’ve never done anything like this before." - "Go with a friend to find a venue for a band, that is." + + "Am I supposed to knock,{w=.4} or text her that I’m here?" + pause .5 + + "Crap,{w=.4} I’ve never done anything like this before." + + "Go with a friend to find a venue for a band,{w=.4} that is." + pause .5 + menu: - "Knock": + + "Knock": + pause .5 "Before my knuckles reach the door it swings open." - "Text Fang": + + "Text Fang": + pause .5 "Before I can hit ‘Send’ the door swings open." - "What is this killing intent?!" - show fangdad neutral flip at scenter with moveinright + + stop ambient fadeout 1 + pause .5 play music "audio/OST/Prized Bowling Ball.ogg" fadein 1.0 - FD "Hm… You Anon?" + + # TODO: thunder or other sudden-but-lingering bassy rumble + show dimmer_light behind anon + show dimmer_darker behind anon + with vpunch + hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(1) + + "{cps=*.5}{i}What is this killing intent?!{/i}{/cps}" + pause .5 + + show fangdad neutral flip: + yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9 + show fangdad: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7 + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + + unknown "Hm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} you Anon?" + "Shitshitshitalarms shut the fuck up right now please I need to think." - A "Y-yeah, I’m Anon. P-pleased to m-meet you uh…" - FD "Executioner." + pause .5 + + A "Y-{w=.1}yeah,{w=.3} I’m Anon.{w=.4} P-{w=.2}pleased to m-{w=.4}meet you uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + + FD "{cps=*.3}Executioner.{/cps}" + pause .5 + + show dimmer_darker behind anon, fangdad with Dissolve(.25) + "My pants feel heavy and sodden." - show fangmom neutral flip at fmright with moveinright - FM "Honey, who is it?" - FM "OH! You must be Anon!" + pause .5 + + unknown "Honey,{w=.4} who is it?" + + hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(.25) + show fangmom: + yalign 0.0 xalign 1.5 + show fangmom neutral flip: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.95 + with dissolve + pause .5 + + FM "OH!{w=.4} You must be Anon!" + + hide dimmer_light with dissolve FM "Come in come in!" + + show fangmom behind anon + show fangdad behind fangmom + + show fangmom: + easein_cubic .75 xalign 0.35 + easeout 1 xalign 1.5 + pause .75 + + show anon: + easeout 1 xalign 1.5 + show anon fear + show fangmom neutral + with Dissolve(.25) + + hide anon + hide fangmom + with dissolve + pause .5 + + show fangdad unimpressed flip with dissolve + pause .5 + scene home fang day - "The petite ptero-matriarch drags me into her abode. I could see the patriarch’s jaw clench as Fang’s mother pushed me into the comfiest couch to ever exist." - FM "Oh you must forgive my little Lucy, she’s still getting ready for your date!" + show fangmom neutral: + yalign 0.0 xalign 0.4 + with Fade(1, 0, 1) + + "The petite ptero-matriarch drags me into her abode.{w=.5} I could see the patriarch’s jaw clench as Fang’s mother pushed me into the comfiest couch to ever exist." + pause .5 + + FM "Oh you must forgive my little Lucy,{w=.4} she’s still getting ready for your date!" + pause .5 + "Oh god I can feel iron-sights on my back." - "While she spoke a mile a minute I managed to catch some of the words. I ignored the latter, because this ISN’T a daaaa-" + pause .5 + + "While she spoke a mile a minute I managed to catch some of the words.{w=.5} I ignored the latter,{w=.4} because this{w=.2} ISN’T a {cps=*.3}daaaa-{/cps}" + "Isn’t THAT!" + pause .5 + "But-" - A "Ah, it’s uh, no trouble ma’am." - A "But uh… I thought her name was Fang." - "She titters, holding a hand over her sly smile." - FM "Oh that? My little tooth fairy always loves to re-invent herself." + + A "Ah,{w=.3} it’s uh,{w=.4} no trouble ma’am." + + A "But uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I thought her name was Fang." + + "She titters,{w=.4} holding a hand over her sly smile." + + FM "Oh that?{w=.4} My little tooth fairy always loves to re-invent herself." + "Her eyes gloss over as she’s pulled into her own memories." - FM "One moment she was the prettiest princess pirate, and now she’s some sort of rock and roll maestro! The imagination she has…" - show naser neutral flip at nright with moveinright + + FM "One moment she was the prettiest princess pirate,{w=.4} and now she’s some sort of rock and roll maestro!{w=.5} The {i}imagination{/i} she has{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + + show fangmom: + easeout 1 xalign -0.2 + show fangmom neutral flip with dissolve + hide fangmom with dissolve + pause .5 + Nas "Sup buddy." + + show naser neutral flip: + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3 + with dissolve + pause .5 + "I look across the coffee table to see Naser reclined in an equally plushy couch." + Nas "You good?" - "I breathe deeply, collecting my scrambled thoughts into a semi-coherent state." + pause .5 - A "I’m good… So uh… nice place." + "I breathe deeply,{w=.4} collecting my scrambled thoughts into a semi-coherent state." - "I look at the walls of the room, what little white I could see that wasn’t covered by the myriad of family photos." + A "I’m good{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} So uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} nice place." - "Huh… She really was a princess pirate at some point…" + "I look at the walls of the room,{w=.4} what little white I could see that wasn’t covered by the myriad of family photos." + pause .5 - show naomi neutral at scenter with moveinleft + "Huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} she really was a princess pirate at some point{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 - N "Home is where the heart is, as they say." + show naomi neutral: + yalign 0.0 xalign -0.25 + show naomi: + easein 1 xalign 0.4 + with dissolve + pause .5 - "SWEET RAPTOR JESUS ON THE CROSS!" + show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25) + N "Home is where the heart is,{w=.3} {nw}" + show naomi: + ease 0.25 yalign 0.05 + ease 0.25 yalign 0.0 + extend "as they say." - "Oh… is that a sin to think that with that cross hung behind Naser’s head?" + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' + "SWEET RAPTOR JESUS ON THE CROSS!" with vpunch + pause .5 - "I look back to see the Cream Queen of the Kremlin, a tray of the smallest cups I’ve ever seen in her arms." - - show naomi happy with dissolve - - N "Naser! Your mother made us some tea! Oh isn’t she the most wonderful woman!" + "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} is that a sin to think that with that cross hung behind Naser’s head?" show naomi neutral with dissolve + "I look back to see the Cream Queen of the Kremlin,{w=.4} a tray of the smallest cups I’ve ever seen in her arms." - Nas "Bleh… She knows I’m not a fan of that hot leaf juice…" + show naomi explanatory + N "Naser!{w=.4} Your mother made us some tea!{w=.4} Oh isn’t she the most wonderful woman!" + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) - "Naomi navigates around the couch and coffee table, setting the tray of treats and tea before us." + show naser unimpressed flip + Nas "Bleh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} she knows I’m not a fan of that hot leaf juice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - N "Would you like some, Anon?" + show naomi: + ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.2 + pause 1 + show naomi neutral flip with dissolve + "Naomi navigates around the couch and coffee table,{w=.4} setting the tray of treats and tea before us." - A "I’ll pass, thanks." + show naomi explanatory flip + N "Would you like some,{w=.2} Anon?" + show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + + A "I’ll pass,{w=.4} thanks." + pause .5 "Something’s not right with what just happened." "I look back to where Naomi was standing." + pause .5 "The entire opposing wall is covered in various hunting trophies." - "Two bears, a whole school of fish, a falcon, two deers…" + "Two bears,{w=.4} a whole school of fish,{w=.4} a falcon,{w=.4} two deers{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 "And a rhinoceros." + pause .5 - "... I may have made a huge mistake." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{cps=*.6}I may have made a huge mistake.{/cps}" + pause .5 - "The loveseat to the right of me scrapes forward into my field of view." + "The loveseat to the left of me scrapes forward into my field of view." - "Fang’s father leans back, carefully examining and polishing a golf club." + show fangdad unimpressed: + yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1 + show fangdad: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 + with dissolve + pause .5 + + "Fang’s father leans back,{w=.4} carefully examining and polishing a golf club." + pause .5 "Maybe I can turn his trophies into a conversation piece." - "Extend an olive branch, so to speak." + "Extend an olive branch,{w=.4} so to speak." + pause .5 A "What gun did you use to hunt these?" + pause .5 - show fangdad happy at sleft with moveinleft + show fangdad happy with dissolve + pause .5 FD "Gun?" + pause .5 "My hands fold into my lap and I stare a million yards into the wall clock ahead of me." + pause .5 - FD "So… Anon, was it?" + show fangdad neutral with Dissolve(.25) + FD "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Anon,{w=.3} was it?" - FD "You a big fan of Golf?" - - show naser considering flip + FD "You a big fan of golf?" + show naser sad flip with Dissolve(.25) "Naser dons a similar pose." + pause .5 - A "I’ve played minigolf before…" + A "I’ve played minigolf before{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 - show fangdad neutral + FD "That’s a good start,{w=.3} a good start{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - FD "That’s a good start, a good start…" + FD "Nothing beats the real thing,{w=.2} though." - FD "Nothing beats the real thing, though." - - FD "You ever play golf before, boy?" + FD "You ever play golf before,{w=.3} boy?" "Don't say Wii Golf don't say Wii Golf don't say Wii golf" - A "N-no, not on a proper green before." + A "N-{w=.1}no,{w=.3} not on a proper green before." + pause .5 "Nailed it." - show fangdad happy - - FD "Well, this is my favorite club right here. A 9 Iron." + show fangdad happy with dissolve + pause .5 + FD "Well,{w=.4} this is my favorite club right here.{w=.5} A 9 Iron." "He finishes polishing the head of the club and rotates it ever so slightly so I see my reflection in the metal." + pause .5 - FD "Now, Irons are by far the most common, and most useful out of your standard club set. Anywhere you need an extra...push, the Iron will do." + FD "Now,{w=.3} Irons are by far the most common,{w=.3} and most useful out of your standard club set.{w=.6} Anywhere you need an extra{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} push,{w=.4} the Iron will do." - "His gaze makes its way from the club to me as he lays it across his lap. I gulp and sink back into the couch in an attempt to hide among the cushions." + "His gaze makes its way from the club to me as he lays it across his lap.{w=.6} I gulp and sink back into the couch in an attempt to hide among the cushions." - FD "Of course, this is all due to the solid steel construction, and your own efforts." + FD "Of course,{w=.4} this is all due to the solid steel construction,{w=.4} and your own efforts." - FD "With the right quality club and technique, you can almost feel the ball cleaving in twain when you strike it…" + FD "With the right quality club and technique,{w=.4} you can almost feel the ball {i}cleaving in twain{/i} when you strike it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - FD "And I assure you, Anon, that my equipment is of the highest quality, and my technique is impeccable." + FD "And I assure you,{w=.4} Anon,{w=.4} that my equipment is of the highest quality,{w=.6} and my technique is impeccable." + pause .5 - "Fang’s father stands up, stepping on top of the sturdy coffee table. His club is lined up, and I can see my reflection in the impromptu ball." + show dimmer_darker behind fangdad: + alpha 0 + show dimmer_darker: + linear 1 alpha 1 + show fangdad: + ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.9 + pause 1 + show fangdad neutral flip with dissolve + "Fang’s father stands up,{w=.4} stepping on top of the sturdy coffee table.{w=.5} His club is lined up,{w=.3} and I can see my reflection in the impromptu ball." - "With well-practiced motions he demonstrates a perfect swing in the middle of a living room. I can practically feel the air slice in half as an image of the impossibly large pteradon stands over me with the club flashes momentarily." + "With well-practiced motions he demonstrates a perfect swing in the middle of a living room." + pause .5 - "Fang’s father laughs heartily, setting the murder tool aside as he reclaims his throne." + show fangdad unimpressed flip: + easeout_back 0.25 xalign 0.5 + easein_quart 1 xalign 0.2 + pause .25 + play sound 'audio/effects/slapsticksuperPunch.ogg' + show fangdad with Fade(0.05, 0, 0.05, color='#fff') + with hpunch + pause .5 - show naomi flip + "I can practically feel the air slice in half as an image of the impossibly large pteradon standing over me with the club flashes momentarily." + pause .5 + + hide dimmer_darker + show fangdad happy flip + with dissolve + pause .5 + show fangdad: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 + pause .25 + show fangdad happy with dissolve + "Fang’s father laughs heartily,{w=.4} setting the murder tool aside as he reclaims his throne." + + show naomi explanatory flip N "What fine form sir!" + show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 - FM "Dear!" - - show fangdad unimpressed + stop music fadeout 4 + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickpunch.ogg' + show naser neutral flip + show fangdad neutral: + easein_elastic 1 xalign 0.05 + FM "Dear!" with vpunch + pause .5 "Fang’s father flinches." + pause .5 - show fangdad neutral + show fangmom unimpressed: + yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5 + show fangmom: + easein 1 xalign -0.25 + with dissolve - show fangmom unimpressed at fmleft with moveinleft - - FM "How many times have I told you about intimidating suitors! This is the first boy our little Tooth Fairy has brought home!!" + FM "How many times have I told you about intimidating suitors!{w=.5} This is the first boy our little Tooth Fairy has brought home!!" + pause .5 FD "What about Reed?" "The father shrunk under the patented mother’s leer." + pause .5 - FM "You know that boy isn’t right, dear." + FM "You know that boy isn’t right,{w=.3} dear." - "I feel a smidgen of sympathy, but keep quiet to avoid similar treatment from her." + "I feel a smidgen of sympathy,{w=.4} but keep quiet to avoid similar treatment from her." + pause .5 + # TODO: review music choice? play music "audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg" fadein 1.0 - F "Oh my god Mom! Not in front of my friends!" + pause .5 - show fang angry at sleft behind naser with dissolve - - "Fang is at the foot of the stairway, frustration clear on her face." + F "Oh my god Mom!{w=.5} Not in front of my friends!" + show fangdad behind naser: + easein 1 xalign 0.575 + show fangmom: + easein 1 xalign 0.275 + show naser: + easein 1 xalign 1.4 + show naomi: + easein 1 xalign 1.25 + with None show fang angry: - xalign 1.4 yalign 0.0 - with move - show fang angry flip: + yalign 0.0 xalign -0.9 + show fang: + easein 1 xalign -0.6 + with dissolve + pause .5 - "I look to Fang with hands clasp together, silently pleading." + "Fang is at the foot of the stairway,{w=.4} frustration clear on her face." - N "Oh! Are you ready for your date now?" + "I look to Fang with hands clasp together,{w=.4} silently pleading." + pause .5 + + show naomi explanatory flip + N "Oh!{w=.5} Are you ready for your date now?" + pause .5 + + show fangmom: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.4 + show fangmom neutral flip + show fangdad neutral flip + show fang surprised + show naomi neutral flip + with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 "I lurch in my seat at that." - A "Ah, nah nah! We’re just-" + A "Ah,{w=.3} nah nah!{w=.4} {cps=*.4}We’re just-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" - show fang shocked flip - - F "N-no! We need to find a venue!" + show fang shocked with Dissolve(.25) + F "N-{w=.2}no!{w=.5} We need to find a venue!" + pause .5 FM "Just you two though?" + pause .5 - "Oh god no. Please, Raptor Jesus, I promise I’ll sacrifice a goat if you end this." + show fang unimpressed with dissolve - show naomi happy - show fang unimpressed flip - with dissolve + "Oh god no.{w=.5} Please,{w=.3} Raptor Jesus,{w=.4} I promise I’ll sacrifice a goat if you end this." + pause .5 + show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(.25) N "Why don’t we have a double date then!" - "...God, why have you abandoned me…?" + show dimmer_light behind fang, fangmom, fangdad, naser, naomi with dissolve + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}God,{w=.3} why have you abandoned me{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" "Buddha be a bro please!" + hide dimmer_light + show naomi neutral flip + with dissolve - show fangmom neutral + FM "I agree!{w=.5} Naser and Naomi can accompany you!" + pause .5 - FM "I agree! Naser and Naomi can accompany you!" - - "I am going to personally commit mass deicide." + show dimmer_darker behind fang, fangmom, fangdad, naser, naomi with Dissolve(.25) + "{cps=*2}I am going to personally commit mass deicide.{/cps}" + hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 FD "I agree." - show fangdad unimpressed - show naomi neutral - "He looks me dead in the eyes." - FD "More people means you’re less likely to do something reckless, after all." - - N "I dunno, I don’t think Fang would appreciate-" + show fangdad unimpressed flip + FD "More people means you’re less likely to do something reckless,{w=.3} after all." + pause .5 + + show naser unimpressed flip + Nas "I dunno,{w=.4} I don’t think Fang would appreciate-" + + show fangdad: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.8 + pause 1 + show fangdad: + easeout_back 1 xalign 1.5 + show naser: + easeout_back 1 xalign 2.8 + pause .25 + show naser shocked flip with Dissolve(.25) + hide fangdad + hide naser + with dissolve "Fang’s father puts his arm around Nasers’ shoulder and pulls him aside." + pause .5 - hide naser - hide fangdad - with moveoutleft - - - FM "You’d love going with your brother, right Fang?" + FM "You’d love going with your brother,{w=.4} right Fang?" + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) F "Absolutely not." F "I’m perfectly able to find somewhere to play without anyone’s help." F "Especially his." + pause .5 + + show fangmom: + easein 0.5 xalign 0.375 + FM "Come now,{w=.4} how many opportunities in your youth will you get to spend time all together like this?" - FM "Come now, how many opportunities in your youth will you get to spend time all together like this?" - + show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) F "Hopefully none." - FM "Aww, but you used to always spend time with little Naser…" + show fangmom: + ease 0.75 xalign 0.425 + ease 0.75 xalign 0.375 + repeat + FM "{cps=*.2}Aww,{/cps}{w=.3} but you used to {i}always{/i} spend time with little Naser{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Her eyes gloss over again." - + pause .5 + + show fangmom: + ease 0.75 xalign 0.4 FM "Like all those times you used to bathe together." + pause .5 - F "Mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooom!" + show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25) + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.7 + show fang hiding with Dissolve(.25) + pause .75 + show fang: + easein_back 0.5 xalign -0.6 + show fang sad with Dissolve(.25) + F "{i}Mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooom!{/i}" + pause .5 "Fang’s Father gives a loud pat on Naser’s back and he returns to the conversation." - show naser explanatory at nleft behind fangmom with moveinleft - show naomi neutral flip with dissolve + show naser sad flip behind naomi: + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.8 + show naser: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.4 + with dissolve + pause 1 - Nas "Yes, I think a group date is an excellent idea." + show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "Yes,{w=.3} I think a group date is an {w=.2}{i}excellent{/i}{w=.1} idea." - Nas "We should all go together." + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) + + Nas "We should {i}all{/i} go together." + pause .5 "Naser’s shaking like a leaf in a monsoon in the middle of an earthquake with a meteor hanging overhead." + pause .5 F "It’s not happening." - show fangdad unimpressed behind naser with moveinleft: - xalign -0.4 + show fangdad unimpressed flip behind naser, naomi: + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2 + show fangdad: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.65 + with dissolve + pause 1 FD "It is." + show fang angry with Dissolve(.25) "Fang and her dad lock eyes." + pause .5 + + show dimmer_light behind fang, fangmom, fangdad, naser, naomi + show naser sad flip + show naomi considering flip + with dissolve "The tension in the room mounts as the staredown draws on." + pause .5 "The moment long eternity finally ends though." "Eventually Fang flops her head back in defeat." - show fang considering flip + hide dimmer_light + show fang considering + with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 - F "Fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffine." + F "Fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffine." + + show fangdad neutral flip + show naomi neutral flip + with dissolve - F "Let’s just get out of here, Anon." + F "Let’s just get out of here,{w=.2} Anon." + pause .5 "Gladly." + pause .5 - show naomi happy with dissolve + show naomi: + ease 0.25 yalign 0.05 + ease 0.5 yalign 0.0 + show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 + show naomi: + easeout_back 1 xalign 2.2 + show naser: + easeout_back 1 xalign 2.8 "Naomi gives a little cheer and tugs the still catatonic Naser by the arm out the door." + pause .5 + stop music fadeout 5 scene black with fade "I give a polite goodbye to Fang’s Mother." "I extend a hand to Fang’s father and-" - "The eight bones of my palm are squeezed together, being ground into dust under the immense strength." + "The eight bones of my palm are squeezed together,{w=.4} being ground into dust under the immense strength." "The five bones joining my fingers to my palm threaten to splinter from the powerful grip." "The rest of my bones in my hand try to separate from the vicious shake that Fang’s father ends it with." + pause .5 "By the time I get outside everyone else is getting into the fancy and beat up car from before." - "Guess it was Nasers’." + "Guess it was Naser's." + pause .5 + play music "audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg" fadein 1.0 + pause .5 - N "Come on, Naser! The day is still young!" + N "Come on,{w=.3} Naser!{w=.5} The day is still young!" - "Naser, still mentally fried, is being goaded by Naomi into driving to the city." + "Naser,{w=.4} still mentally fried,{w=.4} is being goaded by Naomi into driving to the city." - "Eventually, he robotically enters the drivers’ seat." + "Eventually,{w=.4} he robotically enters the driver's seat." + pause .5 "Naomi ecstatically shoots into the shotgun seat." "Fang and I take the back seats." + pause .5 scene nascar day with fade + pause .5 - "Now that we’re getting this shitshow on the road, I should probably clarify with Fang about precisely what sort of venue she wants." + "Now that we’re getting this shitshow on the road,{w=.4} I should probably clarify with Fang about precisely what sort of venue she wants." "The split second I move my hand towards Fang to ask Naser chucks his jacket between us with lightning speed." - Nas "Whups, look out back there! Haha!" + Nas "Whups,{w=.2} look out back there!{w=.4} Haha!" + pause .5 "The look of pants-shitting fear on his face betrays his jovial tone." "Poor guy." + pause .5 - A "A-anyways, Fang." + A "A-{w=.2}anyways,{w=.3} Fang." "She looks over." A "What sort of place are we supposed to be looking for?" + pause .5 "Fang looks away for a minute with a finger under the end of her beak." "Is that supposed to be a thinking pose?" + pause .5 F "Some wide open space where people can stand or sit." F "Preferably with a mosh pit." + pause .5 - N "Oh, I know lots of places like that!" + N "Oh,{w=.4} I know lots of places like that!" A "Where?" N "They’re at the Gold Fern Galleria in the downtown shopping district!" + pause .5 F "No." + pause .5 N "Why ever not?" + pause .5 F "I’m not going to play around the ritzy area." F "There’s more stuck up assholes there than at school!" "Naomi shrugs and turns back to Naser." + pause .5 - N "In that case, we should just park in the middle of the city and work our way around." + N "In that case,{w=.4} we should just park in the middle of the city and work our way around." - F "...Sure. That’s fine." + F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Sure.{w=.4} That’s fine." - N "What do you think, Anon?" + N "What do you think,{w=.2} Anon?" - "I look at Fang. She’s preoccupied with watching the buildings fly past us." + "I look at Fang.{w=.4} She’s preoccupied with watching the buildings fly past us." + pause .5 "I shrug." - N "Alright then, to the city we go!" + N "Alright then,{w=.4} to the city we go!" - "Naomi turns the radio on, shattering my ears with the most nauseatingly upbeat love-song on max volume." + "Naomi turns the radio on,{w=.4} shattering my ears with the most nauseatingly upbeat love-song on max volume." - "I’m left to retch as the song violates my virgin ears with it’s too cheery tune." + "I’m left to retch as the song violates my virgin ears with it’s too-cheery tune." + pause .5 + stop music fadeout 3 + play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 4 scene sidewalk - show fang neutral at sleft show anon neutral: - xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1 - show naser neutral: - xalign 0.9 yalign 0.1 - show naomi neutral: - xalign 1.0 yalign 0.0 - with fade + xalign -0.15 yalign 0.1 + show fang unimpressed behind anon: + xalign 0.1 yalign 0.0 + show naser considering: + xalign 1.1 yalign 0.1 + show naomi neutral behind naser: + xalign 1.2 yalign 0.0 + with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 "In the city proper now I find myself with a new dilemma." + pause .5 "The group slowly makes its way down the sidewalk." - play music "audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg" fadein 1.0 - "Naser walks ahead and continues to look back at me, his expression anxious and worried." + "Naser walks ahead and continues to look back at me,{w=.4} his expression anxious and worried." "Fang refuses to speak and gives everyone and everything a vicious sneer." @@ -503,249 +989,379 @@ label chapter_6: "Won’t." "Shut the fuck up." - show naomi happy with dissolve - N "OH OH OH HOW ABOUT HERE! IT’S SO SPACIOUS AND THE FOOD IS TO DIE FOR- OOOOH I LOVE THAT RESTAURANT MAYBE WE CAN ASK THEM- OH AND THEN THERE’S THIS NICE CAFE AND THEY EVEN HAVE A PIANO-" + pause .5 + + show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25) + N "OH OH OH HOW ABOUT HERE!{w=.4} IT’S SO SPACIOUS AND THE FOOD IS TO DIE FOR-{w=.4} OOOOH I LOVE THAT RESTAURANT MAYBE WE CAN ASK THEM-{w=.4} OH AND THEN THERE’S THIS NICE CAFE AND THEY EVEN HAVE A PIANO-" "God this marmalade monster needs to die." - N "OH. MY. GOSH! It’s PERFECT!" + N "OH.{w=.3} MY.{w=.3} GOSH!{w=.5} {nw}" + show naomi: + ease 0.25 yalign 0.05 + ease 0.5 yalign 0.0 + repeat 2 + extend "It’s PERFECT!" - "Naomi stops the group before a large glass window. Past it is a large open room sparsely filled with miniscule round tables with candelabras set atop them." + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + "Naomi stops the group before a large glass window.{w=.4} Past it is a large open room sparsely filled with miniscule round tables with candelabras set atop them." + pause .5 - Nas "Isn’t this a bit too…" + show naser neutral with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "Isn’t this a bit too{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Ostentatious." - show fang angry with dissolve - + show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) F "Gaudy." - N "No way! It’s wide open! The tables can be rearranged to provide ample room for your audience!" - - show fang unimpressed with dissolve + show naomi: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.25 + show naomi explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) + N "No way!{w=.4} It’s wide open!{w=.4} The tables can be rearranged to provide ample room for your audience!" + show naomi neutral flip + show fang unimpressed + with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 "Fang looks unimpressed." + + show naomi explanatory flip + N "Come on,{w=.4} let’s go ask!" + show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - N "Come on, let’s go ask!" + show naomi: + easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.1 + pause .5 + show naomi: + easein 1 xalign 1.9 + show naser: + easein 1 xalign 2.5 + pause .25 + hide naser + hide naomi + with dissolve "The saurolophus wraps her arms around Naser’s and bodily drags him to the entrance." + pause .5 - F "Fuck me…" + F "Fuck me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 "Shutthefuckupbrain." + pause .5 A "Ten dollars we get kicked out." - F "No deal. You’re stating an inevitability, not a possibility." + show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) + F "No deal.{w=.5} You’re stating an inevitability,{w=.3} not a possibility." + pause .5 - "We follow behind the pair to find Naomi pestering the Maitre D’ for possible arrangements, cringing as the poor man just stares off into the middle distance while Naomi prattles on obliviously." + stop ambient fadeout 3 + show black with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 - show black with dissolve + "We follow behind the pair to find Naomi pestering the Maitre D’ for possible arrangements,{w=.5} cringing as the poor man just stares off into the middle distance while Naomi prattles on obliviously." N "-And if possible could you include maybe a dinner ticket option for-" - "The Maitre D’ looks towards us, or rather, Fang, and scowls." + "The Maitre D’ looks towards us,{w=.4} or rather,{w=.2} Fang,{w=.5} and scowls." + pause .5 - MaitD "Our esteemed establishment caters exclusively to those with an appreciation for fine culture, culinary and otherwise." + MaitD "Our esteemed establishment caters exclusively to those with an appreciation for fine culture,{w=.4} culinary and otherwise." - show naomi angry + MaitD "Might I recommend that you vacate the premises at once,{w=.4} or will you be requiring an escort?" + pause .5 - MaitD "Might I recommend that you vacate the premises at once, or will you be requiring an escort?" - - hide black with dissolve + play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 4 + hide black + show fang unimpressed + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 A "Where’s my ten bucks?" - show fang happy with dissolve + show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) + F "Up your ass,{w=.4} I told you no deal." - F "Up your ass, I told you no deal." + "Naser tugs a bit at Naomi’s arm,{w=.4} and she stomps back to the entrance in a huff with him following." - "Naser tugs a bit at Naomi’s arm, and she stomps back to the entrance in a huff with him following." + show naomi unimpressed flip: + yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2 + show naser unimpressed flip: + yalign 0.1 xalign 2.0 + show naomi unimpressed flip: + easein 1 xalign 0.7 + show naser unimpressed flip: + easein 1 xalign 1.5 + with dissolve + pause 1 - show naomi angry flip with dissolve - - N "Hmph! Fang, I’ve decided this place isn’t good enough!" + show naomi angry flip with Dissolve(.25) + N "Hmph!{w=.4} Fang,{w=.3} I’ve decided this place isn’t good enough!" + pause .5 "Sure." - show naser considering with dissolve + show naser considering flip with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "Don’t be mad Naomi,{w=.4} he isn’t worth getting upset about." - Nas "Don’t be mad Naomi, he isn’t worth getting upset about." + show naser neutral behind naomi + show naomi unimpressed + with dissolve + pause .5 + + F "Nah,{w=.4} he’s worth it.{w=.5} If it were me and the band they’d have one less tire on all their cars." - F "Nah, he’s worth it. If it were me and the band they’d have one less tire on all their cars." show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve "Naser raises an eyebrow back at Fang." + pause .5 + + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.05 show fang flip off happy with dissolve "She responds with a smirk and a middle finger." - scene black with fade - stop music fadeout 1.0 - "..." - scene skinrow - show fang angry at sleft - show anon neutral: - xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1 - show naser neutral: - xalign 0.9 yalign 0.1 - show naomi neutral: - xalign 0.7 yalign 0.0 - with fade + + stop ambient fadeout 4 + + scene black with Dissolve(1) + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + pause 1 + play music "audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg" fadein 1.0 + scene skinrow + show anon neutral: + xalign -0.15 yalign 0.1 + show fang angry behind anon: + xalign 0.15 yalign 0.0 + show naomi neutral behind fang: + xalign 0.7 yalign 0.0 + show naser neutral behind naomi: + xalign 1.6 yalign 0.1 + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + "We’ve been searching for a place for at least two hours now." - "Fang is barely holding herself together, judging from her angry muttering." + "Fang is barely holding herself together,{w=.4} judging from her angry muttering." - "A lot of muttering. Mostly including words like murder, knives, and particular genitals as pin cushions, with profanity taking up a good half of what escaped her beak." + "A lot of muttering.{w=.4} Mostly including words like murder,{w=.4} knives,{w=.4} and particular genitals as pin cushions,{w=.4} with profanity taking up a good half of what escaped her beak." - "I could see a blood vessel throbbing on her temple. This didn’t look good." + "I could see a blood vessel throbbing on her temple.{w=.4} This didn’t look good." + pause .5 - "I position myself slightly behind Fang, putting her between me and Naomi." + "I position myself slightly behind Fang,{w=.4} putting her between me and Naomi." + pause .5 - A "Hey Naomi, I got an idea!" + A "Hey Naomi,{w=.4} I got an idea!" - "Naomi spins on her heel towards the sound of my voice, and the giant grin on her stupid snout stiffens as she sees Fang’s looming aneurysm." + show naomi: + easein_cubic 1 xalign .65 + show naomi explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) + "Naomi spins on her heel towards the sound of my voice,{w=.4} and the giant grin on her stupid snout stiffens as she sees Fang’s looming aneurysm." + pause .25 - show naomi happy: - xoffset 0 - linear .5 xzoom -1.0 + show naomi considering flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 N "Maybe we should take a little break." - "..." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Luckily there’s a small park nearby." scene park - show fang angry flip: - xalign 0.9 yalign 0.0 - show anon neutral flip at sright show naser neutral: - xalign 0.1 yalign 0.0 + xalign 0.1 yalign 0.0 + show fang unimpressed flip: + yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9 + show anon neutral flip: + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.15 show naomi neutral: - xalign -0.1 yalign -0.1 - with fade + yalign 0.0 xalign -0.1 + with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 + "The four of us grab some drinks from a vending machine." - "Fang and I grab a knockoff brand of soda, Naomi got a bottle of water, and Naser bought a sports drink." + "Fang and I grab a knockoff brand of soda,{w=.4} Naomi got a bottle of water,{w=.4} and Naser bought a sports drink." + pause .5 - "We’re lucky to find an unoccupied picnic table with some shade, because the afternoon sun has turned the cool day into a sweltering hot one." + "We’re lucky to find an unoccupied picnic table with some shade,{w=.4} because the afternoon sun has turned the cool day into a sweltering hot one." - "Thank you, coastal weather." + "Thank you,{w=.4} coastal weather." + pause .5 - "We sit in near silence aside from Nasers’ audible chugging of his sports drink." + "We sit in near silence aside from Naser's audible chugging of his sports drink." - "He crushes the bottle in one hand and tosses it into a trash can five yards away, then looks to us with the smuggest grin to ever be seen on a beak." + "He crushes the bottle in one hand and tosses it into a trash can five yards away." + pause .25 + + show naser smug with Dissolve(.25) + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Then looks to us with the smuggest grin to ever be seen on a beak." + show anon grin flip with Dissolve(.25) A "Showoff." Nas "Yes." - N "Great shot, Naser!" - - Nas "Of course it was, babe." + show anon neutral flip + show naomi happy + with Dissolve(.25) + N "Great shot,{w=.3} Naser!" + show naomi neutral + show naser happy flip + with dissolve + Nas "Of course it was,{w=.2} babe." "Fang mock retches into the grass." + pause .25 - Nas "At any rate, I need to drain the snake." + show naser considering flip + show naomi neutral + with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "At any rate,{w=.4} I need to drain the snake." + pause .5 "What." + pause .5 - "Naser turns and gives a brief wave back to us, and makes his way to the public restroom on the other side of the park." + "Naser turns and gives a brief wave back to us,{w=.4} and makes his way to the public restroom on the other side of the park." + show naser neutral flip with dissolve + show naser: + easeout 1 xalign -1.5 + pause .25 hide naser with dissolve + pause 1 - N "Aww, his double-entendres are always so clever!" + show naomi explanatory + N "Aww,{w=.4} his double-entendres are always so clever!" + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) "Fang slaps a hand over her eyes." + pause .25 + show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) F "I need to go too." - N "Why? Something the matter?" + show naomi explanatory + N "Why?{w=.4} Something the matter?" + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) F "Monthly problems." + show naomi explanatory N "Do you have everything you need?" N "I have some extras stocked!" - N "I have regular, plastic, scented…" + N "I have regular,{w=.25} plastic,{w=.25} scented{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - N "Oh, what diameter do-" + N "Oh,{w=.4} {cps=*.7}what diameter do-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" + show fang angry flip F "Shut up now." + pause .5 - "Fang stomps away to the bathroom, leaving just the apricot asspain" + show naomi considering with dissolve + pause .25 - hide fang neutral flip with dissolve - stop music fadeout 1.0 - "...And me." + show fang: + easeout 1 xalign 2.5 + pause .2 + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) + hide fang with dissolve + "Fang stomps away to the bathroom,{w=.4} leaving just the apricot asspain{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - N "Do you need to use the restroom as well, Anon?" + play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoornatureloop.ogg' fadein 4 + stop music fadeout 4 + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}And me." + + show naomi neutral with dissolve + pause .25 + + N "Do you need to use the restroom as well,{w=.2} Anon?" + pause .5 "How tempting." - A "Well, now that you mention it, I-" - - N "Since it’s just the two of us, I’ve been wanting to ask for a while." - - N "How have things been going with Fang? Has she been well? Is there anything wrong?" + A "Well,{w=.3} now that you mention it,{w=.4} I-{w=.4}{nw}" play music "audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg" fadein 1.0 + stop ambient fadeout 3 + + show naomi explanatory + N "Since it’s just the two of us,{w=.4} I’ve been wanting to ask for a while." + + N "How have things been going with Fang?{w=.4} Has she been well?{w=.4} Is there anything wrong?" + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 A "Shouldn’t Naser know?" - N "Yes, Naser knows, but I figure I’d ask you as well." + show naomi considering + N "Yes,{w=.4} Naser knows,{w=.4} but I figure I’d ask you as well." + show naomi neutral N "Since the two of you spend so much time together and all." + pause .25 + show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25) N "I hear Naser talking all the time about how worried he is for Fang." - show naomi sad - - N "He’s such a good brother, isn’t he?" + N "He’s such a good brother,{w=.4} isn’t he?" + pause .5 "I’m just going to start filtering her." + pause .5 - N "I just get so worried for her sometimes, too." + N "I just get so worried for her sometimes,{w=.2} too." - N "Fang can just be so anti-social, you know?" + N "Fang can just be so anti-social,{w=.4} you know?" - N "And she’s always avoiding me, too." + N "And she’s always avoiding me,{w=.3} too." + pause .5 N "I never can get a read on how she feels." + show naomi considering N "Like when she was feeling upset a month or so ago." N "Or just after that concert she gave after winter break." + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 "Wait." "Rewind a bit." - show naomi neutral - A "How’d you know about how Fang felt sad a month ago?" - N "Oh, Naser told me!" + show naomi explanatory + N "Oh,{w=.4} Naser told me!" + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) - "..." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "The fuck is up with her?" - - show naomi considering + pause .5 A "Then why ask me?" + show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25) N "You keep on asking that question!" A "You keep on dodging that question." - show naomi keikaku + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + N "Hm?{w=.4} What am I dodging?" + pause .5 - N "Hm? What am I dodging?" - - show naomi neutral - - A "Fang clearly doesn’t like you, you say so yourself." + A "Fang clearly doesn’t like you,{w=.4} you say so yourself." A "Yet you keep asking me about her." @@ -753,149 +1369,218 @@ label chapter_6: A "Fang is his sister after all." - show naomi considering + show naomi explanatory with Dissolve(.25) + N "O-{w=.2}of course!{w=.4} It’s just I’d like to hear from you about her!" + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) - N "O-of course! It’s just I’d like to hear from you about her!" + A "Why me though?{w=.5} I don’t know anything about her,{w=.3} Naser knows Fang way better than I do." - A "Why me though? I don’t know anything about her, Naser knows Fang better than I do." - - show naomi happy - - N "Because you two have been getting so close! You’re even on a date right now Anon!" - - show naomi considering + show naomi: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 + show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25) + N "Because you two have been getting so close!{w=.4}{nw} " + show naomi: + ease 0.25 yalign 0.05 + ease 0.25 yalign 0.0 + extend "You’re even on a date right now Anon!" + pause .5 + show naomi considering with dissolve "Naomi’s pupils dilate and her eyes dance away from me." - N "In fact, you two make the cutest couple. Hahaha." + N "In fact,{w=.4} you two make the cutest couple.{w=.6} {cps=*.3}Hahaha.{/cps}" + pause .5 "It’s the first time Naomi’s looked anything other than happy." + stop music fadeout 4 + play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoornatureloop.ogg' fadein 5 + pause 1 + A "Are you up to something?" + pause .5 - show naomi shocked - + show naomi: + easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.1 + show naomi shocked with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 N "Why would I ever be up to something?" A "Because you’re not making any sense." + show naomi considering with dissolve + A "Naser knows her better than anyone else." A "But every time we talk you bring Fang up." + pause .5 A "Why?" + pause .5 - show naomi happy - + show naomi happy with dissolve + pause .25 N "I have every reason to care!" A "Why?" + pause .5 - N "Because-" - - show anon angry flip + N "{cps=*.4}Because-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" + stop ambient fadeout 5 + show anon angry flip with Dissolve(.25) A "Why?!" + pause .5 - show naomi unimpressed - - N "Because Naser wants to make Fang happy! A-and so do I, of course! ahahahaha!" - + show naomi unimpressed with dissolve + pause .25 + N "Because Naser wants to make Fang happy! {w=.7}{nw}" show naomi considering + extend "A-{w=.2}and so do I,{w=.2} of course!{w=.4} Ahahahaha!" - play music "audio/OST/sadist.ogg" fadein 1.0 - "Naomi’s laugh is hollow. Her eyes shifting side to side." + play music "audio/OST/sadist.ogg" fadein 1 + pause .5 + + show anon neutral flip with dissolve + pause .5 - N "I was only doing what I thought was best for both her and you, Anon." + "Naomi’s laugh is hollow.{w=.6} Her eyes shifting side to side." + pause .5 - "Wait." + show naomi explanatory with Dissolve(.25) + N "I was only doing what I thought was best for both her and you,{w=.3} Anon." + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 show anon neutral flip + show dimmer_darker behind naomi, anon with Dissolve(.25) + "Wait." + pause .5 - N "The first time I saw you, sitting on your own on that dirty old bench." + show naomi explanatory + N "The first time I saw you,{w=.4} sitting on your own on that dirty old bench." N "You looked like you needed someone to lean on." + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 - "No…" + "No{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - N "And with Fang..." + show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25) + N "And with Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) "I think back to all the times that the beige bitch had asked me about Fang." + pause .5 - N "{alpha=0.5}{i}What a great opportunity for real friendship Anon! I’m so happy for you!{/i}{/alpha}" + N "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"What a great opportunity for real friendship Anon!{w=.4} I’m so happy for you!\"{/i}{/alpha}" - Nas "{alpha=0.5}{i}...?{/i}{/alpha}" + Nas "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"...?\"{/i}{/alpha}" - A "{alpha=0.5}{i}...?{/i}{/alpha}" + A "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"...?\"{/i}{/alpha}" - N "{alpha=0.5}{i}If there’s anything Fang needs in these trying times, it’s a new friend to talk to!{/i}{/alpha}" + N "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"If there’s anything Fang needs in these trying times,{w=.4} it’s a new friend to talk to!\"{/i}{/alpha}" + pause .5 - "This entire time." + "{cps=*.3}This entire time.{/cps}" + pause .5 - N "{alpha=0.5}{i}Oh, you’re spending time with Fang?{/i}{/alpha}" + N "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Oh,{w=.4} you’re spending time with Fang?\"{/i}{/alpha}" - A "{alpha=0.5}{i}She just needed me for some feedback.{/i}{/alpha}" + A "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"She just needed me for some feedback.\"{/i}{/alpha}" - N "{alpha=0.5}{i}I see. I think it’s wonderful you’re making more friends here!{/i}{/alpha}" + N "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"I see.{w=.4} I think it’s wonderful you’re making more friends here!\"{/i}{/alpha}" - A "{alpha=0.5}{i}Could you really say we’re friends? We’ve only met two or three times.{/i}{/alpha}" + A "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Could you really say we’re friends?{w=.4} We’ve only met two or three times.\"{/i}{/alpha}" - N "{alpha=0.5}{i}I think you and Fang would make wonderful friends! She needs more friends like you!{/i}{/alpha}" + N "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"I think you and Fang would make wonderful friends!{w=.4} She needs more friends like you!\"{/i}{/alpha}" + pause .5 - "Fuck, why didn’t I notice?" + "{i}Fuck{/i},{w=.5} how didn’t I notice?" + pause .5 - "{alpha=0.5}{i}Naomi places a finger on her chin(?) for a moment and stares into space. Suddenly, her face lights up.{/i}{/alpha}" + "{alpha=0.75}{i}Naomi places a finger on her chin(?) for a moment and stares into space.{w=.5} Suddenly,{w=.4} her face lights up.{/i}{/alpha}" - N "{alpha=0.5}{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help? I’m sure she’d lend a hand!{/i}{/alpha}" + N "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Oh!{w=.4} What if you asked Fang for help?{w=.5} I’m sure she’d lend a hand!\"{/i}{/alpha}" - A "{alpha=0.5}{i}I dunno... She’s usually busy with her own work, and I don’t want to bother her more than I already do every day.{/i}{/alpha}" + A "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"I dunno{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} she’s usually busy with her own work,{w=.4} and I don’t want to bother her more than I already do every day.\"{/i}{/alpha}" - N "{alpha=0.5}{i}It can’t hurt to ask, though, right? Just a thought.{/i}{/alpha}" + N "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"It can’t hurt to ask,{w=.2} though,{w=.4} right?{w=.6} Just a thought.\"{/i}{/alpha}" + pause .5 - "That fucking bitch." + "{cps=*.3}That fucking{/cps}{w=.2} {i}bitch{/i}." + pause .5 + + # TODO: added from script doc, check if this is a flashback line or not + # N "I figured you two would be perfect for one another." "This entire time she’s been pushing me closer to Fang." + pause .5 "I must be the biggest fucking idiot." + pause .5 - show naomi neutral + show naomi explanatory + N "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Anon?{w=.5} You’ve been spacing out." + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 - N "‘Uh… Anon? You’ve been spacing out." + show dimmer_darker as dimmer_xtra behind anon, naomi with Dissolve(.25) + "{b}She played me like a god damned fiddle.{/b}" + pause .5 - "She played me like a god damned fiddle!" - - show naser neutral behind naomi with moveinleft: - xalign 0.1 yalign 0.0 + show naser neutral behind naomi: + yalign 0.1 xalign -0.8 + show naser: + easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.1 + hide dimmer_xtra + with Dissolve(1.5) + pause .5 + show naser considering with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Did I miss something?" + pause .5 - "I look to Naser, who’s completely clueless to what Naomi has been doing for the past month." + "I look to Naser,{w=.4} who’s completely clueless to what Naomi has been doing for the past month." "Just like I was." + pause .5 "What would he do in this situation?" "He’s the boyscout here after all." + pause .5 "Fitting that the moral compass has a literal compass for a head." + pause .5 "I’m part of someone else’s plan." "Nothing I’ve done in the last several months was a conclusion reached on my own." + pause .5 "Are my feelings for Fang also just a tool for Naomi?" - stop music fadeout 1.0 + + stop music fadeout 4 + pause .5 + "What do I even do here?" + pause .5 menu: "Excuse Myself": - jump AnonExcusesHimself + pause .5 + hide dimmer_darker with dissolve + jump .AnonExcusesHimself "Wait for Fang": - jump AnonWaitsForFang + pause .5 + hide dimmer_darker with dissolve + jump .AnonWaitsForFang - label AnonExcusesHimself: + label .AnonExcusesHimself: - "I need to get away from here, fast." + "I need to get away from here,{w=.4} fast." + pause .5 A "Actually, I need to use the bathroom myself now." @@ -985,6 +1670,7 @@ label chapter_6: "The two of us peek from behind the building to make sure the coast is clear of any brothers or scheming persimmon piranhas." "The coast is clear." + # TODO: scene sidewalk F "I think I know where to look." @@ -1008,138 +1694,179 @@ label chapter_6: jump troodon - label AnonWaitsForFang: + + label .AnonWaitsForFang: $ anonscore += 1 - show naser neutral flip + pause 0.5 + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}No." play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0 - "... No." + pause 1 "It doesn’t matter if my feelings are being used." "They’re still real to me." + pause .5 "And I want to actually help her." "Right now that means helping her find a venue." "Even if it means being around the coral cunt." + pause .5 show naser explanatory flip with dissolve - - Nas "Hey, Naomi, did you know that thirteen percent of public restrooms…" + Nas "Hey,{w=.2} Naomi,{w=.4} did you know that thirteen percent of public restrooms{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Naser babbles with Naomi while we wait for Fang to return." - show naser neutral with dissolve - show fang neutral flip at sright with moveinright: - xalign 1.9 + pause .5 - F "Alright, I’m done taking a dump or whatever." + show naser considering flip with dissolve + pause .5 + + show fang unimpressed flip behind anon: + yalign 0.1 xalign 2.2 + show naser behind fang + show fang unimpressed flip: + easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.9 + with dissolve + pause 1 + + F "Alright,{w=.4} I’m done taking a dump or whatever." F "Let’s go." - Nas "Wait… Why do you smell like smoke?" + show naser neutral with dissolve + Nas "Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} why do you smell like smoke?" - F "Uh… I went to hong kong for a bit. Let’s go." + show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I went to hong kong for a bit.{w=.4} Let’s go." - Nas "You know you aren’t supposed to be smoking, Fang." + show naser unimpressed + Nas "You know you aren’t supposed to be smoking,{w=.3} Fang." - F "Just drop it, dork." + show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "Just drop it,{w=.3} dork." F "You don’t see me bringing up that leopard mankini you have in your closet." + pause .5 show naser annoyed show naomi shocked - with dissolve + with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 "Naser’s skin turns a noticeably lighter shade." + pause .25 + show anon grin flip with Dissolve(.25) A "That the only thing in the closet?" - show fang happy flip - - F "Oh, of fucking course not." + show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "Oh,{w=.3} of fucking course not." F "He’s also got this pink-" - show naser shocked with dissolve - - Nas "I’M GOING TO STOP YOU RIGHT THERE." + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg' + show naser shocked: + easein_elastic 1 xalign 0.05 + Nas "I’M GOING TO STOP YOU {i}RIGHT THERE{/i}.{fast}" with vpunch + show naser explanatory with Dissolve(.25) N "Why don’t we continue on now!" + pause .5 - "Naomi is holding a handkerchief to her nose, with a prominent splotch of red that’s steadily growing." + "Naomi is holding a handkerchief to her nose,{w=.4} with a prominent splotch of red that’s steadily growing." + show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) F "Fffffffffffffffffffffffffffiiiiinally." - "..." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 - scene skinrow with fade + scene sidewalk - show fang neutral at sleft - show anon neutral at aleft - show naser neutral flip: - xalign 1.2 - show naomi neutral: - xalign 0.6 yalign 0.0 - with dissolve + show fang unimpressed behind anon: + xalign -0.6 yalign 0.0 + show anon neutral behind fang: + xalign 0.3 yalign 0.1 + show naser unimpressed behind anon: + xalign 1.1 yalign 0.1 + show naomi neutral behind naser: + xalign 1.2 yalign 0.0 + with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 "Not even ten minutes later and we’re back where we started." show naomi happy with dissolve + N "-isn’t this one perfect!{w=.4} The stage is so well lit and-" - N "-isn’t this one perfect! The stage is so well lit and-" - + show fang angry with Dissolve(.25) "Fang seems seconds away from successful recreation of Jing Ke’s assassination of King Zheng." - "I know it’s wrong to poke a hornet’s nest, but…" + "I know it’s wrong to poke a hornet’s nest,{w=.4} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show naomi neutral - - A "Fang, you alright?" - - show fang angry with dissolve + A "Fang,{w=.3} you alright?" + pause .5 F "I hate everyone here." + pause .5 A "Ah." "Well then." "Fang’s about to commit homicide." + pause .5 - "I should ask Naser to just split off for a while…" + "I should ask Naser to just split off for a while{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "Naomi would back me up if I can convince her I’m taking Fang out on a d-EVENT." + "Naomi would back me up if I can convince her I’m taking Fang out on a d-{w=.6}EVENT." - "I really don’t want Naomi’s help, though." + "I really don’t want Naomi’s help,{w=.3} though." + pause .5 - "I could get Fang to ask Naser to break off, but uh…" + "I could get Fang to ask Naser to break off,{w=.4} but uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "She’s on the verge of fratricide too right now." + pause .5 - Nas "Hey, Anon, you alright?" + play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 5 + stop music fadeout 3 + + show naomi neutral + show naser considering + with dissolve + Nas "Hey,{w=.2} Anon,{w=.4} you alright?" A "Hm?" - + Nas "You’ve got this intense look on you." - A "Oh, sorry." + A "Oh,{w=.3} sorry." - A "Just… Trying to think of good places." + A "Just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} trying to think of good places." + pause .5 + stop ambient fadeout 3 play music "audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg" fadein 1.0 + pause .5 "Guess it’s now or never." + pause .5 menu: "Ask Naser": - jump AskNaser + pause .5 + jump .AskNaser "Ask Fang": - jump AskFang + pause .5 + jump .AskFang - label AskNaser: + label .AskNaser: A "Actually, Naser." @@ -1160,6 +1887,7 @@ label chapter_6: show naser explanatory flip "Naser’s brow grows slick with sweat." + pause .5 "Christ what did his dad tell him?" @@ -1171,9 +1899,9 @@ label chapter_6: "His eyes shift back, catching sight of Fang’s poorly withheld anger." - show naser angry flip + show naser sad flip - Nas "...Ugh…" + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Ugh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "It’s only a matter of time before things go nuclear." @@ -1181,9 +1909,9 @@ label chapter_6: show naser considering flip - Nas "..." + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - Nas "... Be that as it may…" + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Be that as it may{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show naser neutral flip @@ -1203,9 +1931,9 @@ label chapter_6: Nas "Anon just wanted to split the group for a bit." - N "..." + N "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - N "..." + N "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" N "That’s a wonderful idea!" @@ -1220,14 +1948,13 @@ label chapter_6: "Naser looks at me for a moment." show naser unimpressed flip - Nas "Yes." A "Wow." Nas "It’s true." - N "I mean..." + N "I mean{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "A) Go fuck yourselves." @@ -1239,15 +1966,15 @@ label chapter_6: show naser neutral flip - Nas "...You really think so?" + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You really think so?" N "Sure!" show naomi neutral - Nas "... You promise to not make it weird or anything, right?" + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You promise to not make it weird or anything, right?" - A "I-I… What? Whatever, no, of course not." + A "I-I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} What? Whatever, no, of course not." N "Seems it’s settled then!" @@ -1255,7 +1982,7 @@ label chapter_6: show naser considering flip - Nas "... Alright…" + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alright{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" Nas "I trust you, Anon." @@ -1283,238 +2010,334 @@ label chapter_6: F "You think I’d stop at a black eye?" - jump postAsking + jump .postAsking - label AskFang: + + label .AskFang: $ fangscore += 1 A "Don’t worry about it." + pause .5 - Nas "Alright…" + Nas "Alright{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show naser flip with dissolve - - "He looks ahead again, paying great attention to Naomi’s spergery." + show naser neutral with dissolve + "He looks ahead again,{w=.4} paying great attention to Naomi’s spergery." + pause .5 "I turn to Fang again." - A "Hey, if you don’t want to stay in a group, why don’t you ask Naser to split off for a while?" + show anon neutral flip with dissolve + pause .25 - show fang neutral with dissolve + A "Hey,{w=.3} if you don’t want to stay in a group,{w=.4} why don’t you ask Naser to split off for a while?" + show fang considering with dissolve + pause .25 F "Why me?" A "He’ll listen to you." A "Hes only doing this because your dad put him up to it." + pause .5 A "I think he trusts you enough to be willing to take Naomi elsewhere for a while." - show fang considering - - F "Hm…" + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) + F "Hm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "Give him a chance." "Fang looks in contemplation at Naser walking ahead of us." + pause .5 - F "Ehh, might as well try." + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) + F "Ehh,{w=.4} might as well try." + stop music fadeout 4 + play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 5 show fang happy with dissolve + F "Hey,{w=.4} Stephen Ha-{w=.15}Wing!" - F "Hey, Stephen Ha-Wing!" - - A "Wait, that’s not how-" - - show naser neutral flip with dissolve + A "Wait,{w=.3} {cps=*.5}that’s not how-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" + show naser considering with Dissolve(.2) Nas "Yeah?" + pause .5 - A "He responded to it?!" + A "{i}He responded to it?!{/i}" + pause .5 + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) F "Can you take your girlfriend and fuck off elsewhere?" F "Me and her just aren’t going to get along." F "And it’d cover more ground." - show naser explanatory flip with dissolve - "Naser slows down a bit." - Nas "I uh… Don’t think that’s a great idea." + show naser: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.95 + show naser neutral flip behind naomi with dissolve + pause .5 - Nas "We should stick together, right Naomi?" + show anon behind naser + show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} don’t think that’s a great idea." - show naomi sad with dissolve + Nas "We should stick together,{w=.4} right Naomi?" - N "Well…" + show naomi considering flip with dissolve + pause .25 + N "Well{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + show anon neutral with dissolve + pause .25 "Two can play this game you citrine psycho." "I look at Naomi and give her a subtle nod." - show naomi keikaku with dissolve + show naomi keikaku flip with dissolve + pause .25 + N "I think it’s a {i}wonderful{/i} idea,{w=.4} we can check in the Promenade!{w=.5} Oh I know this wonderful cafe and-" - N "I think it’s a wonderful idea, we can check in the Promenade! Oh I know this wonderful cafe and-" + F "Great.{w=.4} Now fuck off." + stop ambient fadeout 2 + play music 'audio/ost/bayside bumming it.ogg' + pause .5 - F "Great. Now fuck off." - scene askfang1 - Nas "H-hold on a second!" + show naser neutral flip with dissolve + show askfang1 with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 + Nas "H-{w=.3}hold on a second!" + pause .7 + + # Nas "Dad said anything that happens to Fang, he'll do to {i}me{/i}!" Nas "Dad said he’ll do to me anything that you do to Fang!" + pause .5 - F "...What…" - A "...What…" - N "...What…" + F "...What..." - Nas "Fang, you gotta promise to not let Anon do anything creepy." - scene askfang2 + A "...What..." + + N "...What..." + pause .5 + + Nas "Fang,{w=.4} you gotta promise to not let Anon do anything creepy." + pause .5 + + show askfang2 with Dissolve(.25) + pause 1 A "That’s fuckin’ rude." - scene askfang3 + pause .5 + + show askfang3 with Dissolve(0.25) pause 1 - scene askfang4 + # show askfang4 with Dissolve(0.15) + # pause 1 + show askfang5 with Dissolve(0.15) pause 1 - scene askfang5 - pause 1 - scene askfang6 + show askfang6 with Dissolve(0.15) + pause .5 + "Fang looks at me and grins wickedly." - scene askfang2 + pause .5 + Nas "Please Fang." + pause .5 #Le Sigh - scene askfang6 + # hide askfang4 + show askfang4 with Dissolve(0.25) + pause .25 F "I promise." F "Now go." + pause .5 "Naser gulps and nods." - scene askfang7 + pause .5 + + show askfang7 with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 Nas "You better not do anything creepy Anon!" + pause 1 - scene skinrow - show fang neutral at sleft - show anon neutral at aleft - show naser neutral flip at ncenter - show naomi neutral: - xalign 0.3 yalign 0.0 - pause 0.4 - show naser neutral - pause 0.4 - hide naomi with moveoutright - hide naser with moveoutright - show fang neutral: - linear 0.4 xalign 0.55 yalign 0.0 - show fang neutral flip + hide askfang1 + hide askfang2 + hide askfang3 + hide askfang4 + hide askfang5 + hide askfang6 + hide askfang7 + show anon concerned + show fang happy + show naser angry flip + show naomi neutral flip + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 - "With that Naser and Naomi leave, turning the corner onto another street." + show naomi: + easeout 1 xalign 1.9 + pause .2 + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + hide naomi with dissolve + pause .5 - jump postAsking + show naser: + easein 1 xalign 1.2 + pause 1.5 + show naser sad flip with dissolve + pause .5 + show naser: + easeout 1.5 xalign 2.5 + pause .25 + show naser sad with dissolve + hide naser with dissolve - label postAsking: - "..." - play music "audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg" fadein 1.0 + "With that Naser and Naomi leave,{w=.4} turning the corner onto another street." + show anon neutral with dissolve + + jump .postAsking + + + label .postAsking: + + stop music fadeout 3 + play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 4 + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Now it’s just the two of us." "Alone." + pause .5 - "Oh and there’s the alarms again. I think I’m finally starting to tune them out though." + "Oh and there’s the alarms again.{w=.4} I think I’m finally starting to tune them out though." + pause .5 - scene troodonconvergence1 with fade + stop ambient fadeout 3 + play music "audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg" fadein 1.0 + + scene troodonconvergence1 with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 "Fang reaches into her pocket and withdraws a crumpled back of cigarettes." + pause .5 A "Got a spare?" - "She shrugs half-heartedly, holding out the pack to me." + "She shrugs half-heartedly,{w=.4} holding out the pack to me." "There’s one left." "I hesitate." - scene troodonconvergence2 - "Fang tilts her head. Before she can pull her hand back I accept the last smoke." - scene troodonconvergence3 - "I bring the butt to my lips, feeling the pod within the filter." + pause .5 + + "Fang tilts her head.{w=.5} Before she can pull her hand back I accept the last smoke." + pause .5 + + "I bring the butt to my lips,{w=.4} feeling the pod within the filter." A "Figures you smoke menthols." - F "Oh shut up. And you better share, I don’t think I’ll be getting a fresh pack any time soon." + F "Oh shut up.{w=.5} And you better share,{w=.4} I don’t think I’ll be getting a fresh pack any time soon." - "She hands me her lighter, a little cheap pink Bic." + "She hands me her lighter,{w=.4} a little cheap pink Bic." + pause .5 - "It’s quick and easy, no wind to worry about as my thumb rolls over the top and the tiny ember of a flame sears the end of the cigarette." + "It’s quick and easy,{w=.4} no wind to worry about as my thumb rolls over the top and the tiny ember of a flame sears the end of the cigarette." "I pop the pod with my incisor and pull in slowly." - "The draw is smooth, with a hint of mint to it." + "The draw is smooth,{w=.4} with a hint of mint to it." + pause .5 "The cherry at the end burns dimly as I tap off the ash." - "The smoke exhaled is wispy, and I can feel my nerves ease." + "The smoke exhaled is wispy,{w=.4} and I can feel my nerves ease." + pause .5 - F "Ha, pussy." + F "Ha,{w=.4} pussy." + + A "It’s your last one,{w=.4} wanna savor it." - A "It’s your last one, wanna savor it." - scene troodonconvergence4 "I hand her back the cigarette." "‘It’s not an indirect kiss or anything like that’ I chant as a mantra." - "Her drag is harsher, burning up twice the amount." + scene troodonconvergence2 with dissolve + pause .5 - scene troodonconvergence2 + "Her drag is harsher,{w=.4} burning up twice the amount." - "She blows out hazy rings, one after another, as if signaling an indigenous Raptor tribe." + "She blows out hazy rings,{w=.4} one after another,{w=.4} as if signaling an indigenous Raptor tribe." + pause .5 A "Trying to show off now?" F "Bet you can’t do it." "Fang grins as she hands the stick back to me." + pause .5 A "You trigga-lipped it." - F "It’s still good, man." + F "It’s still good,{w=.2} man." - scene troodonconvergence3 + scene troodonconvergence3 with dissolve + pause .5 "The filter feels moist between my index and middle knuckles." - "I bring the smoke back to my lips, trying to ignore the wetness of it." + "I bring the smoke back to my lips,{w=.4} trying to ignore the wetness of it." - "I draw in even more, burning up another quarter of it." + "I draw in even more,{w=.4} burning up another quarter of it." + pause .5 "I can feel my skin prickle as I exhale a thicker fog." "I don’t know whether it’s because of the nicotine or whose lips I imagine I taste." + pause .5 "Fuck." + pause .5 - F "Ha, called it." + F "Ha,{w=.4} called it." - A "Mmm. Yeah, I can’t." + A "Mmm.{w=.4} Yeah,{w=.2} I can’t." - scene troodonconvergence4 + scene troodonconvergence4 with dissolve + pause .5 + + "Fang’s tail ticks a steady rhythm like a metronome as she takes one last,{w=.3} long drag." - "Fang’s tail ticks a steady rhythm like a metronome as she takes one last, long drag." - scene troodonconvergence5 "She blows out a thick cloud and drops the stump on the ground." + scene troodonconvergence5 with dissolve + "I stamp on the stub before she can, giving it a solid twist before kicking the dead end into the street." - scene troodonconvergence6 + pause .5 + + scene troodonconvergence6 with dissolve + pause .5 + A "So now what?" F "I think I know where we can look." + pause .5 A "Please tell me it’s not in this shitty Promenade place." - F "Nah, it’s Lil Tru." + F "Nah,{w=.4} it’s Lil' Tru." - A "...Where?" + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Where?" - F "Little Troodon. It’s near enough that we can walk there." + F "Little Troodon.{w=.4} It’s near enough that we can walk there." A "Why didn’t you mention it before?" @@ -1522,11 +2345,13 @@ label chapter_6: A "Ah." - "Fang leads the way, navigating us away from this overly expensive part of town." + "Fang leads the way,{w=.4} navigating us away from this overly expensive part of town." + pause .5 - scene black with fade + scene black with Fade(1, 0, 0) - "..." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 label troodon: scene little troodon with fade @@ -1579,6 +2404,7 @@ label chapter_6: "Not this again." + # TODO: bold HER?!?! F "HER?!?! You people are all the same! Thinking that you have to go off-" A "Fang!" @@ -1796,6 +2622,7 @@ label chapter_6: A "Honestly, do you blame him?" + # TODO: appreciating the atmosphere "Fang smirks." F "Maybe not." @@ -1987,6 +2814,7 @@ label chapter_6: A "Sure, leave me to deal with your Uncle." + # TODO: restaurant chatter "I force myself out of the booth and casually meander to the reception area." hide anon neutral with moveoutleft @@ -2003,6 +2831,8 @@ label chapter_6: Moe "Hahaha. Dat’s what I like ta hear!" Moe "Glad to make yas date, then." + + # TODO: music already faded out stop music fadeout 1.0 A "A-ah, uh… we aren’t-" play music "audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg" fadein 1.0 @@ -2272,6 +3102,7 @@ label chapter_6: "..." + # TODO: living room night scene home fang day with fade show fang neutral: xalign 0.3 yalign 0.0 @@ -2351,6 +3182,7 @@ label chapter_6: with fade stop music fadeout 1.0 + # TODO: night outdoor ambience, like crickets chirping etc.? "With that I exit the door. Once it’s closed I can feel all that bravado evaporate and my legs turn to jelly."