diff --git a/game/audio/effects/spearYellVoice.wav b/game/audio/effects/spearYellVoice.wav new file mode 100644 index 0000000..d6ad7c0 Binary files /dev/null and b/game/audio/effects/spearYellVoice.wav differ diff --git a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy index 39dd89e..dba5177 100644 --- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy +++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy @@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ label chapter_1: scene garden show naser neutral flip at sright - show naomiSilo at sleft + show naomiSilo at sleft # TODO: Naomi should be visible here with dissolve I "The hand tightens around my own and pulls roughly." @@ -530,11 +530,11 @@ label chapter_1: I "I thought I had found a decent spot in the corner when disaster struck." - stop ambient fadeout 0.25 # TODO: SFX of some kind show naser neutral behind anon with easeinleft: xalign -0.6 yalign 0.1 + stop ambient fadeout 0.25 # TODO: SFX, whoosh, whipcrack or something show anon fear: xalign 0.6 yalign 0.1 easein 0.5 xzoom -1 @@ -572,6 +572,7 @@ label chapter_1: show naser explanatory with Dissolve(0.2) Nas "...Yours?{fast}" + pause 0.5 I "I swear to all that is good and holy." @@ -599,7 +600,7 @@ label chapter_1: show anon neutral at aleft show naomi neutral flip at sright show naser neutral flip behind naomi: - xalign 0.7 yalign 0.0 + xalign 0.7 yalign 0.1 with fade I "Before I even sit down the barrage of questions begins." @@ -677,7 +678,7 @@ label chapter_1: Nas "Fang" A "Your brother or{cps=*0.2}...?{/cps}" - pause 0.1 + pause 0.5 Nas "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{cps=*0.3}Sibling.{/cps}" @@ -719,7 +720,7 @@ label chapter_1: I "Dinner and a show?{w=0.5} Sign me the fuck up." #TODO: Anon "signs the fuck up" twice - show naomi neutral flip + show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) A "So what do they play?" @@ -735,10 +736,12 @@ label chapter_1: A "Wh-{w=0.3} Well what genre?" + show naser considering flip with dissolve Nas "The good kind?" A "You don’t know,{w=0.3} do you." + show naser neutral flip Nas "Nope." I "Well,{w=0.3} free food is free food.{w=0.5} Sign me the fuck up" @@ -774,13 +777,18 @@ label chapter_1: easein 0.2 xalign 0.62 pause 0.75 ease 0.75 xalign 0.4 - pause 2.5 + pause 2 I "He tears the sandwich in two and hands me the larger half." Nas "Here,{w=0.35} Anon." + show naser sad flip behind naomi: + easein 1 xalign 0.7 + pause 1.2 + I "I will never forget your brave sacrifice." + pause 0.5 I "With that we all dig into our meal." @@ -856,13 +864,14 @@ label chapter_1: Nas "Well um{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" Nas "I mean,{w=0.4} kinda?" - pause 0.75 + pause 0.8 A "Glad I’m an only child." show naser angry with dissolve I "Naser glares at me." + pause .5 Nas "Fang’s still family.{fast}" @@ -1039,6 +1048,7 @@ label chapter_1: repeat I "Naser grasps at the air unsure what to think or do at the moment.{w=0.5} I think he’s angry" + pause .5 show naser at nleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp) play sound "audio/effects/Slam.ogg" volume 2.2 @@ -1109,6 +1119,7 @@ label chapter_1: I "The call ends and Naser sags." show naser sad at nleft with easeinleft + pause 0.5 Nas "I’ve gotta leave." @@ -1139,6 +1150,7 @@ label chapter_1: I "I enter the hall and take a seat in the back,{w=0.3} away from the rest of the crowd." scene black with fade + play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 2.0 I "The lights dim and the curtains are drawn open." @@ -1181,19 +1193,23 @@ label chapter_1: I "I fight the urge to cover my ears." I "I don’t know too much about music,{w=0.4} but even I know that you don’t use two basses in one band unless you know exactly what you’re doing." + pause 0.7 I "{cps=*0.3}Ooooooh nooooooo.{/cps}" I "{cps=*0.3}Ooooooooh{/cps} God." + pause 0.5 I "What were they thinking?!{fast}" with vpunch I "I looked back to the crowd to gauge their interest." I "Surely I’m not alone in thinking this is an absolute travesty." + pause 0.7 + unknown "{cps=*0.5}PFFFT AHAHAHA{/cps}{w=0.4} THEY STILL FUCKING SUCK!!" - play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' volume 1.7 fadein 2.0 + play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' volume 1.9 fadeout 0.1 fadein 0.1 #(In-CG insult layers) window hide @@ -1216,6 +1232,7 @@ label chapter_1: I "The drummer was inching off stage,{w=0.4} while the purple bassist was about to break down into tears." I "But the frontwoman stood there.{w=0.7} Stood her ground." + pause 1 #(In-CG insult layers) window hide @@ -1292,9 +1309,13 @@ label chapter_1: Sp "I’ve taught many students,{w=0.4} and I can tell these things." show spears: - easein_quart 1.0 xalign 0.5 + easein_quad .8 xalign 0.5 pause 1.0 - show anon fear flip + show anon fear flip: + easein_quart 0.25 yalign 0.05 + pause 0.1 + easein 0.5 yalign 0.1 + pause 1 I "His hand lands on my shoulder." @@ -1302,7 +1323,7 @@ label chapter_1: show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(1) - Sp "Listen here,{w=0.2} Anon.{w=0.7} {cps=*0.6}You are not the only person in the world.{/cps}" + Sp "Listen here,{w=0.3} Anon.{w} {cps=*0.6}You are not the only person in the world.{/cps}" Sp "Everyone’s fighting their own battles." @@ -1331,10 +1352,10 @@ label chapter_1: stop ambient fadeout 0.2 show spears angry flip with Fade(.1, 0, .25, color="#fff") + play sound "audio/effects/spearYellVoice.wav" with vpunch - - Sp "{b}{cps=*0.5}WHOSE SORRY ASS AM I GOING TO HAVE TO SUPLEX!{/cps}{/b}" # TODO: suitable SFX + Sp "{b}{cps=*0.5}WHOSE SORRY ASS AM I GOING TO HAVE TO SUPLEX!{/cps}{/b}" # TODO: suitable SFX, Spears yell? pause 0.5 @@ -2106,7 +2127,7 @@ label chapter_1: pause 0.75 stop music - play ambient 'audio/effects/tinnitus.wav' fadein 5 volume 0.25 + play ambient 'audio/effects/tinnitus.wav' fadein 5 volume 0.25 # TODO: use Spears yell + tinnitus SFX Sp "NAOMI!!" with vpunch @@ -2627,20 +2648,20 @@ label chapter_1: show naomi: easein 0.5 xalign 0.9 pause 0.5 - N "Naser! Please calm yourself!" - - I "{i}I realize now that I had been laughing with them.{/i}" + N "Naser!{w=0.4} Please calm yourself!" show naser: linear 0.2 xalign .7 + I "{i}I realize now that I had been laughing with them.{/i}" + A "I left after that.{w=0.5} Principal Spears was fucking pissed.{w=0.5} Even threatened to suplex them." show naser sad flip show naomi unimpressed flip with dissolve - I "Naser sags, emotionally spent." + I "Naser sags,{w=0.3} emotionally spent." show naser: easein_quart 1 yalign 0.05