From 65c5ad2be710bf6f1c47bbbde5cf93baaf00c235 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: nutbuster Date: Wed, 27 Oct 2021 15:53:56 +1100 Subject: [PATCH] Story Revision 13C FINAL --- ...13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy | 68 ++++++++++++------- 1 file changed, 42 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy index 4cee673..0e887ce 100644 --- a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy +++ b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy @@ -2286,13 +2286,13 @@ label chapter_13C: A "Back to the mosh pits, meeting strange people, having fun, maybe going for that solo career I know you can achieve." - A "You should leave your options open while I'm gone." - - A "I don't want to hold you back or make you waste time waiting for me." + A "..." show anon sad flip with dissolve A "...We might not even see each other again..." + A "I don't want to hold you back or make you waste time waiting for me." + A "But...{w=0.5} I'll never forget you, Lucy..." show fang surprised with dissolve @@ -2304,50 +2304,66 @@ label chapter_13C: #I hate google docs, this is “” a mistake Lucy "Fuck... that hurts like hell..." - Lucy "It's... I...." + Lucy "I’m the one who’s supposed to barge in and break us up!" - Lucy "Damn it, Anon..." + Lucy "Not You..." + + Lucy "But..." Lucy "..." + "She lets out a loud sigh." + + Lucy "...I’ve never told this to anyone other than Trish...{w=0.5} but there was this guy I dated back in my freshman year." + + Lucy "We only lasted a week though." + + Lucy "Same with the next, and the one after..." + + Lucy "..." + + Lucy "I’ve never had a relationship that’s lasted more than a week..." + + Lucy "Eventually, I gave up on dating..." + show fang angry with dissolve - "Lucy grits her teeth in anger." + "She grits her teeth in anger." - Lucy "I'm sorry, about all my bullshit!" + Lucy "Every time, I fucked it all up by dumping my baggage, or by being some social retard!" - Lucy "Please! T-that’s… that’s not me anymore…" + "She covers her face with her hands." - Lucy "I can't go back to being that thing!" + Lucy "Anon...{w=0.5} never wanted to dump all my baggage on you..." - show fang surprised with dissolve - "My voice causes my girlfriend to flinch." + Lucy "It's wasn’t right!" - show anon behind fang: - ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4 - "I move to place a hand on her shoulder." - show fang sad with dissolve - A "Lucy…" + #TODO: Choreography kino here + "I move to place a hand on Lucy's shoulder." - "Lucy lets out a sigh." + A "Lucy...{w=0.5} It's okay..." - Lucy "Anon… {w=0.5}I wouldn't feel right going back to how I used to be." + A "You can let it all out." + + "She takes a deep breath, then exhales." show fang anguish show anon concerned flip with dissolve - Lucy "It's not right." + Lucy "That thing I used to be... I never realized..." - Lucy "It was just a phase! I swear!" - - Lucy "I thought what I was doing was completely normal." - - Lucy "It was so humiliating..." + Lucy "It was so humiliating!" Lucy "Naser might have known... {w=0.5}and he suffered so much because of it..." - Lucy "I can't imagine just how much more my parents would've hated if I stuck to being... being..." + Lucy "I can't imagine just how much more my parents would've hated if they'd known the real truth." - Lucy "I don't even know who I used to be now." + Lucy "So just forget it." + + Lucy "It was an obsession." + + Lucy "One I was convinced would make me happy." + + Lucy "But it was never meant to be." Lucy "I… {w=0.5}I was just an ungrateful bitch..."