diff --git a/game/script/10.0A.(KO_OP-ending).rpy b/game/script/10.0A.(KO_OP-ending).rpy
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-#TODO: transfer DaScript appropriately to this section
\ No newline at end of file
+#label BowlingForVolcanoHigh: - commented out 6/12/21 - redundant with new label/jump per chapter
+label chapter_10.0A:
+
+scene room anon day
+
+#Bowling for Volcano High
+
+"I wake up the next morning with my head cradled in my arms."
+play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
+
+"My back aches from the lack of proper bedding, but that’s hardly anything new."
+
+"Groggily, I pull myself to my feet."
+
+"I pull back the curtain to reveal that a thick sunday fog had rolled in overnight."
+
+"What time is it…?"
+
+"Guess I’ll check my phone…"
+
+show anonphone at scenter with moveinbottom
+
+"Ten AM, huh…"
+
+hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
+
+"Damn, I slept a while."
+
+"...Did Fang sleep well?"
+
+A "Fang, you up?"
+
+stop music
+
+"The bed is empty."
+
+A "Oh."
+
+"Wait a second."
+
+"My phone has seventy missed calls and over a hundred texts from Naser…"
+
+"That’s right, my phone was on silent last night for Prom."
+
+"He’s probably just worried about Fang, but by Raptor Jesus’ right nut man."
+
+"I open the most recent voicemail."
+
+FD "By Raptor Jesus’ left testicle if Fang is not home within the hour I will hunt you down and mount your head on my trophy wall! You will RUE the day that-"
+
+"Whoa."
+
+"Next one…"
+
+FD "Maybe I didn’t make myself fucking clear. You will be sleeping with the fishes if Lucy is not home in the morning. I have a particular set of-"
+
+"I’m starting to get the idea."
+
+"All the texts are written in a similar vein."
+
+"I try texting Fang to see if she got home safe."
+
+"Anon: hey, you alright?"
+
+"Anon: just noticed your dad was pretty livid last night"
+
+"Anon: he mustve been writing all night long"
+
+"...No immediate response."
+
+"Well, she’ll see it when she sees it."
+
+"S’not like I can do much else for Fang right now."
+
+"I take note of the mess that Fang created, a reminder of how badly I fucked up."
+
+"Fuck me. So this is what they mean by Prom Night disasters."
+
+"I always thought it was just a euphemism for teen pregnancies."
+
+"There’s laminate… something, splinters all over the floor from my dresser."
+
+"And a check inside my bathroom reveals that The Duke managed to crack my porcelain throne."
+
+"Shit. No way am I getting my deposit back now."
+
+"I check the controller carefully, only barely relieved that there’s no damage."
+
+"After I’ve swept up the bits of broken dresser I find I have no real clue what to do."
+
+"A check of my phone again shows that Fang’s at least seen my texts."
+
+"I sigh."
+
+"How do I make this up to her?"
+
+"I feel like a fucking heel right now."
+
+"It’ll take my mind off things at least."
+
+scene black with fade
+
+"..."
+
+"Master Grug, you mind telling me what you’re doing on that boat?"
+
+"Ooga booga, finish this fight."
+
+"Guess I’ll play the next one, I really don’t feel like doing anything else today."
+
+"..."
+
+scene room anon night with fade
+
+"Wake Grug when you need Grug."
+
+"Really wish I could just float away in an iceberg like Master Grug after last night."
+show anonphone with moveinbottom
+"I glance at my phone and realize I spent ten hours playing Rock Ring."
+
+"My mind was turned off for most of that, guess I just lost track of time."
+
+hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
+
+"I’m shaken from my thoughts by a knock at my door."
+
+"The door I forgot to lock."
+
+"Oh god, I’m gonna be murdered, butchered, my body parts sold on the black market and turned into some disgusting rhinorex’s sex toys."
+
+"Hopefully in that order."
+
+"Before I can search for my knife, the door opens to reveal…"
+
+show anon neutral at aleft
+show fang neutral flip at sright
+with dissolve
+
+play music "audio/OST/appreciating_the_scenery.ogg" fadein 1.0
+F "Anon? You- oh! Hey…"
+
+F "Uh… Why are you huddled in the fetal position?"
+
+A "Fang? Oh thank fuck."
+
+"I deflate, slumping lifelessly on my bed."
+
+A "I thought your dad was here to kill me."
+
+F "Ah. Yeah. Sorry."
+
+"Fang sets her backpack down on the kitchen table."
+
+F "So…"
+
+show anon sad with dissolve
+
+"Shit. Should have actually thought about what I should say to her."
+
+A "Fang, about last ni-"
+
+F "It’s fine."
+
+show anon neutral with dissolve
+
+A "-ight.. What?"
+
+F "It’s fine, Anon. I don’t blame you for what happened."
+
+"What."
+
+F "In fact, I’m sorry for overreacting last night."
+
+"There’s something about this all that is setting off alarms in my head."
+
+"I don’t know what kind though. Or why."
+
+A "I… What?"
+
+F "I said I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have blown up on you like last night."
+
+A "Even if it was my fault? I should have-"
+
+F "It isn’t, Anon."
+
+A "But-"
+
+show black with fade
+
+"My words are cut off. My mind goes completely blank."
+
+"Fang’s hands grip my dirty dress shirt tightly as her beak presses against my parted lips, her tongue invading my mouth."
+
+"She pulls away abruptly, leaving me confused and lightheaded."
+
+A "I..wha...Fang?"
+
+"Her hands guide me down onto my bed and she straddles my lap."
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+show black with fade
+
+
+"..."
+
+"Sometime in the night the bed shifts."
+play music "audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg" fadein 1.0
+
+"I hear the bathroom door close so I pay it no mind and drift back to sleep."
+
+"Eventually my internal clock wakes me up."
+
+scene room anon day with fade
+
+"Stretching and yawning, realize that it’s a lot brighter than normal."
+
+"Did I sleep in?"
+
+"The alarm clock on my table has been unplugged…"
+
+"I reach over to grab my phone to check the time."
+
+"Nine-o-two AM?"
+
+"Oh shit, Fang and I are beyond late."
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+"Wait, where is Fang?"
+
+"Her backpack is gone, too."
+
+"Oh come on, she went to school without me?!"
+
+"I rush to put my clothes on and get out the door as soon as possible."
+
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+"About halfway there my phone buzzes in my pocket."
+
+"Unread texts from Fang?"
+
+"{i}Fang: ♪ Control over my life you denied, And now death approaches from the sky, Why'd it be me you had to vilify? I guess this is Goodbye, Volcano High ♫{/i}"
+
+"The cryptic message stops me in my tracks."
+
+"Something is definitely wrong."
+
+"This almost reads like…"
+
+"The adrenaline pushes my feet back into a desperate bolt towards the school."
+
+scene outside school fog
+show anon neutral at aleft
+with fade
+
+"The whole time my mind floods with horrid worst-case scenarios."
+
+"I tell myself I’m just worrying, but my mad sprint betrays the lie."
+
+"As I approach the school, I notice a crowd through the haze."
+
+"Surely it’s just a drill."
+
+"The deceit is shattered when I see the crowd consists of students huddling and crying, with teachers quietly making sure everyone is accounted for."
+
+"...Where’s Fang?"
+
+"She has to be in this crowd."
+
+"There’s just a fire in the school that scared people."
+
+"She’s in this crowd somewhere."
+
+scene a02 with fade
+
+T "YOU!!"
+
+"The voice calls out through the silence for all to hear."
+
+"Trish moves to stand a dozen feet in front of me on the pavement."
+
+"A shaky finger directing malice towards me."
+
+"She’s redfaced, streams of tears running the mascara down her face."
+
+T "WHY DID YOU COME HERE?!?"
+
+"Blurred heads turn to the commotion."
+
+T "YOU BASTARD!!"
+
+T "WHY COULDN’T YOU JUST LEAVE US ALONE?!"
+
+T "NOW JUST LOOK WHAT HAPPENED!!"
+
+T "LOOK WHAT YOU’VE DONE!"
+
+T "ARE YOU HAPPY?"
+
+"I can’t say anything."
+
+"Is this really happening?"
+
+T "LEAVE US ALREADY!!"
+
+T "YOU SHOW UP, GET THEIR ATTENTION, AND NOW… AND NOW…!"
+
+"She chucks her phone through the air."
+
+"It misses by inches and smashes on the ground somewhere behind me."
+
+T "I WAS RIGHT ABOUT YOU THE WHOLE TIME!!"
+
+T "I WAS RIGHT ABOUT YOU!! YOU!!"
+
+"By now her tirade becomes incomprehensible screaming."
+
+"A teacher has to hold her back and try directing her to a nearby curb to sit."
+
+scene black with fade
+
+"...I don’t have time for this."
+
+"Where is Fang?"
+
+"I gotta get in that building."
+
+"I turn around and dash away into the fog as Trish is being consoled by a group of students."
+
+scene hallway with fade
+
+"The side door is still unlocked, and I’m able to slip in without being noticed."
+
+"The halls are silent, despite it all."
+
+"My footsteps clatter through the empty halls."
+
+"It’s third period now, Fang always talks about having to deal with Naomi in Econ."
+
+"That’s not on this floor, fuck!"
+
+scene black with fade
+
+"I pause when I reach the stairwell upwards."
+
+"I can’t say for sure what, but my instincts are screaming at me to not go up, to turn back now."
+
+"... I can’t."
+
+"My hand lightly glides along the handrail while I cautiously cross the stairs to the second floor."
+
+"The first thing that hits me is the smell."
+
+"That electric, almost metallic stench of wet ozone."
+
+"I’ve never been in a real fight before, but even so…"
+
+"It’s a smell everyone instinctively knows."
+
+"I couldn’t tell what sound I made, because I frankly don’t remember."
+
+"All I will ever remember from this is the sight of my former classmates splattered across the halls like bags of waste."
+
+scene a04 with fade
+
+"The spills and trails of blood tell the story of their final moments."
+
+"Two were trying to run and still remain face down in their final resting places."
+
+"One slumped from a locker, smearing his remains all the way down like a puppet string."
+
+"And the last one, who tried fighting back, now clumped in the middle of the hallway soaked in the collective pooling blood."
+
+"It was Naser."
+
+"This isn’t real, none of this is real."
+
+"I’m just having a nightmare after last nights’ episode."
+
+"Things are just fine, I’ll return to reality soon…"
+
+"..."
+
+"..."
+
+"..."
+
+"Please…"
+
+"...God...Damn it..."
+
+"...Where is Fang…?"
+
+"I just need to find her."
+
+"There’s one open door in the hall, the one closest to the battlefield."
+
+"I already know I’m not going to see her."
+
+"Fang hasn’t been in that room since she started."
+
+"The only thing in there is the huddled corpse of our student council president."
+
+"...Guess she didn’t get that ‘perfect highschool life’ in the end."
+
+"..."
+
+scene black with fade
+
+"The stairs."
+
+"There’s only one place she can be."
+
+"One place where she’d go."
+
+"When I turn back to the stairwell, something makes a wet thud behind me."
+
+"Somehow, Naser’s still alive."
+
+"He’s moved his arm in my direction, and still has the strength to move a bit."
+
+"His eyes meet mine for a moment."
+
+"Disappointment."
+
+"Sorrow."
+
+"Mourning."
+
+"..."
+
+"I can’t focus on him."
+
+"He’s got seconds left, anything I tried would just be a waste of time."
+
+"His hand makes a wet slap against the hard tiles one last time while I start up the stairs."
+
+"Somehow, the remaining two flights of stairs have gained another several hundred steps."
+
+"I haven’t seen who it was yet, it might not be her."
+
+"You know well it can only be her."
+
+"How could I have known this would happen? This isn’t my fault..!"
+
+"You had just as much a hand in this as she did."
+
+"Fang isn’t here. She’s at home being grilled by her father for seeing me again."
+
+"She’s behind that door with a loaded gun."
+
+"...How long have I been standing here, staring at the doorknob?"
+
+"...How much longer could I get away with putting it off?"
+
+"As it is, it’s not the worst case scenario."
+
+"Even if Naser and Naomi are gone…"
+
+"There’s a chance it’s not Fang up here."
+
+"I’d rather just stand here forever."
+
+"Relishing in the possibility that there’s some hope left."
+
+"However."
+
+"Time stops for no one."
+
+"Not even me."
+
+"The police sirens have been outside for a while."
+
+"I can’t ignore them any longer."
+
+"I owe Fang this much at least."
+
+"..."
+
+"The doorknob is still cold on my hand."
+
+"I turn it and exit to the rooftop."
+
+"In the dense morning fog the only thing to stand out is the silhouette."
+
+"One that I easily recognize."
+scene a10 with fade
+
+A "Fang."
+
+"She’s silent. I can’t even tell if she’s looking at me or not."
+
+A "Fang, please. Say something."
+
+"My legs feel leaden as I approach her."
+
+A "Fang. Come on. T-this is all…"
+
+"Slowly more and more details come too."
+
+"The revolver that hung limply from her fingers."
+
+"The splatter of blood on her pants."
+
+"Her wings with multiple bald patches on them."
+
+"And the sound of her ragged breaths."
+
+A "Fang…"
+
+"My fingers brush against her shoulder."
+scene black
+
+play sound "audio/effects/shot.ogg"
+
+A "ARGH!"
+
+"Hot, searing pain."
+
+"My left leg crumples under me."
+
+"As I fall I see Fang’s beautiful amber eyes."
+
+"They’re red and puffy, with makeup-less tears running freely down her cheeks."
+
+F "A-Anon… WHY ARE YOU-!"
+
+A "Aaaah… haaaah… Fang… Why…?"
+
+F "Y-you weren’t supposed to be here!"
+
+F "You shouldn’t have come here!"
+
+A "Fuck… Because… Because I love you! Haaaaaah."
+
+scene a10 with fade
+
+"I struggle to balance on my left leg. The hole in my shin dribbles blood down to the floor."
+
+"I don’t care though."
+
+"I hobble forward."
+
+"Fang steps back."
+
+F "S-stay back!"
+
+"The revolver clatters against the concrete, spent on ammo."
+
+A "Fang… please…"
+
+"A painful step forward."
+
+"She takes another back."
+
+F "Anon!"
+
+A "Just come downstairs with me… It’s not over, it doesn’t have to be this wa-"
+
+"With a crunch, my shin gives out completely, lurching me forward onto my hands and knees."
+
+scene black with fade
+
+"I have to keep going."
+
+"Even if it’s on my knees."
+
+"I can feel myself slowing."
+
+"My thoughts cloudy."
+
+"The blood loss..."
+
+"The pain is so intense, however."
+
+"It brings some clarity to my mind."
+
+"Enough that I can drag myself forward."
+
+A "Please, come down with me."
+
+F "Oh-oh god. Oh my god. S-stop…"
+
+"The sharp bone pokes and tears through my leg muscle."
+
+"I briefly look behind me, the trail is spilling out and making my other leg wet."
+
+"Bile rises up my throat at the sight."
+
+"I swallow hard and look back to Fang."
+
+"I have to reach her."
+
+"I can still fix this."
+
+"I can still save her."
+
+"Fang keeps backing away as I try to get closer, remaining out of my reach."
+
+"Fang stops and catches her balance."
+
+"Her foot is halfway over the edge."
+
+"We’ve reached the edge of the rooftop."
+
+"End of the line."
+
+A "Fang."
+
+A "Look at me."
+
+scene a11 with fade
+
+"Her head shakily turns from the concrete below to meet my eyes again."
+
+A "Back away from there, please."
+
+F "I-I… I…"
+
+A "It’s not over."
+
+A "Stay with me here, please."
+
+F "I…"
+
+A "Don’t leave me alone."
+
+"We stare for an eternity, all through the police’s screaming below."
+
+"Fang looks below once more, down the three story drop to the walkway below."
+
+"The walkway we’d passed through so many times to get to classes without a second thought."
+
+"The walkway we crossed daily with our friends through all our trials."
+
+A "Please…"
+
+"She looks to me again, less shakily this time."
+
+"The sides of her mouth curl into a warm smile."
+
+"The last of her tears falls."
+
+scene a12 with fade
+
+"She jumps."
+
+A "Fang!"
+
+"I can’t look over."
+
+"I don’t want to see it."
+
+"The authorities betray my final wish of death by bursting through the door at that exact minute."
+
+"I drift into unconsciousness when they start wrapping my leg."
+
+scene black with fade
+
+pause 5
+
+"..."
+
+"Three weeks pass."
+
+"Probably."
+
+"All I can remember is the sterile hospital room and an endless lineup of reporters."
+
+"The whole incident made national news."
+
+"Apparently I had become ‘the brave soul who took a bullet to stop a school shooting.’"
+
+"But to everyone I know I’m just the one who caused all this."
+
+"After I refused to answer the constant pestering enough, I was finally left in blissful solitude."
+
+"I expected a visit from Spears, or Reed, or Stella or someone."
+
+"But they never came."
+
+"I got discharged just yesterday."
+
+"I’ll need to stay on a crutch for a few months, but that’s hardly the wound I'm worried about."
+
+scene a13 with fade
+
+"...Her funeral was today."
+
+"I wasn’t invited, of course."
+
+"But I can’t just leave it either."
+
+"So I wait out of sight several hundreds of feet away for the remaining family members to trickle out of the crowd and go home."
+
+scene a14a with fade
+
+"The last figure lingers for over an hour."
+
+"If anyone, he’s the one who deserved this the least."
+
+"He was right the whole time, about me."
+
+"And here I am, defiling her grave with my presence."
+
+"Eventually, he too leaves."
+
+scene a15 with fade
+
+"The alternations of footsteps and the crutch make me feel more mechanical than human."
+
+"Then again, that may be true regardless of having a crutch."
+
+scene a14 with fade
+
+"The two graves are right next to each other."
+
+"Various flowers pollute the fresh mounds."
+
+"In memory of Naser. Loving son and brother."
+
+"... I’m sorry, man."
+
+"I hobble over to the other headstone."
+
+"{i}Here lies dearest Lucy. Heaven restores you in light.{/i}"
+
+"God damn it."
+
+"This is all my fault."
+
+"None of this would have happened if I noticed something was wrong."
+
+"If I just supported Fang more instead of getting into a fight."
+
+"If I never got between her and her friends by telling her how I felt."
+
+"If I never bothered Fang and just stayed to myself."
+
+"...If I never moved to Volcaldera in the first place."
+
+"Fuck."
+
+"And because of me Naomi and Naser and Fang and the others are gone."
+
+"Because I’m too fucking stupid to see any of the warning signs."
+
+"I should be crying right now."
+
+"I should be screaming to the world why I should have died instead."
+
+"But I instead I just feel…"
+
+"My final plea to Fang races through my head."
+#fade in wind blowing here
+play sound "audio/effects/wind.wav" loop volume 0.3
+"{i}Don’t leave me alone.{/i}"
+
+"I just feel completely and utterly and hopelessly alone."
+
+"The sprinkling rain stops."
+
+"Seems the world is tired of my monologuing."
+
+"Like Trish said, I’m just some nobody from the middle of nowhere."
+
+"And the only person I ever cared about is gone."
+
+"The split second I thought I was somebody, I ruined everything."
+
+"So now, I’m back to being nobody."
+
+"..."
+
+"It’s better this way."
+
+$ quick_menu = False
+window hide
+play sound "audio/effects/wind.wav" loop volume 0.2
+play music "audio/OST/Sad!.ogg" fadein 1.0 volume 2.8 noloop
+pause 20
+stop sound fadeout 1.0
+scene black with fade
+pause 30
+scene 1of4 with fade
+pause 15
+$ renpy.quit()
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diff --git a/game/script/8.50A.fang-desperately-wants-to-win-prom-night.rpy b/game/script/8.50A.fang-desperately-wants-to-win-prom-night.rpy
index 59404db..d866555 100644
--- a/game/script/8.50A.fang-desperately-wants-to-win-prom-night.rpy
+++ b/game/script/8.50A.fang-desperately-wants-to-win-prom-night.rpy
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-#TODO: transfer DaScript appropriately to this section
\ No newline at end of file
+#label shooter: - commented out 6/12/21 - new format
+label chapter_8.50A:
+
+#Announcing a Plan | shooter
+show anon neutral at aleft
+show fang neutral at scenter
+
+"I help Fang through the first few questions until she says she has a good grasp on the concept."
+
+"Eventually I’m able to focus on my own work again, making steady progress through the remaining problems."
+
+"My mind wanders back to the idea of going to Prom."
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+"I honestly don’t feel like going."
+
+"Maybe Fang will feel the same about skipping prom and just going to the beach or something."
+
+play music 'audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg' fadein 1.0
+A "Hey Fang. Do-"
+
+"Something’s off with Fang, she’s gazing vacantly into space."
+
+"Her worksheet lies untouched in front of her."
+
+A "... Fang?"
+
+F "... I’ve decided."
+
+A "Huh?"
+
+show fang happy flip at scenter
+
+F "VVURM DRAMA has to play for the school at prom."
+
+F "It’s the only way that everyone will finally see our talent."
+
+A "Wait, your band? But I thought you broke off last mon-"
+
+F "Oh, don’t worry about that."
+
+F "Trish called with the idea last night and I apologized!"
+
+A "I-wait, you apologized?"
+
+F "Thinking about it again, leaving the band was something of an overreaction on my part."
+
+A "Overreaction? But she-"
+
+F "Trish has been my friend for a long time, and I shouldn’t have been so harsh on her."
+
+A "Uh… ye-"
+
+F "So the band’s back together!"
+
+F "Isn’t that great!?"
+
+A "I-I, uh, sure?"
+
+F "So you’ll go to prom to help us play, right?"
+
+"So much for avoiding it. Fuck me."
+
+A "Guess I don’t have much of a choice."
+
+A "You sure about Trish though?"
+
+A "She proba-"
+
+F "Oh, you can apologize to her at lunch today."
+stop music
+
+A "Wh-buh… What?!"
+
+play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
+A "Why in the seven fucks would I apologize to her?"
+
+A "The janitors have stopped washing my locker since it just gets more dicks drawn on it every day!"
+
+A "There’s more dicks on my locker than in a pride parade for fucks sake!"
+
+F "It’s easier than just letting it boil, right?"
+
+F "You should be more willing to forgive people."
+
+F "Come on, we both have limited friend groups."
+
+F "We can’t afford to burn bridges when we can just accept things, right?"
+
+"..."
+
+"When she puts it like that…"
+
+A "I… Whatever. Fine."
+
+"But how she put it."
+
+"Maybe it’s just me, but she seems a little…"
+
+"Frantic."
+
+F "Ohh, thank you so much Anon!"
+
+F "I’ll start looking for a good suit to wear!"
+
+"Fang yanks her phone out and starts looking through an online catalogue of androgynous formal wear."
+
+"Well, this can’t be a good sign."
+
+"Highlight of our time here at Volcano High indeed."
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+jump chapter_8.75A
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index 59404db..59051ca 100644
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@@ -1 +1,553 @@
-#TODO: transfer DaScript appropriately to this section
\ No newline at end of file
+label chapter_8.75A:
+
+#Lets all go to the Museum
+scene black with fade
+scene room anon dark with fade
+play music 'audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg' fadein 1.0
+
+"Later that night after school Fang texts me."
+
+"Fang: Alright i got a plan"
+
+"Anon: a plan?"
+
+"Fang: To make sure the concert goes off without a hitch"
+
+"Fang: First we need to learn right from the source"
+
+"Anon: the source?"
+
+"Fang: Theres an old museum of fine arts doing a special exhibit on music next week"
+
+"Fang: Lots of stories of bands pulling through last minute right?"
+
+"Fang: If we study from those old guys we’re guaranteed to do great!"
+
+"Anon: is it really that simple?"
+
+"Fang: Sure!"
+
+"Fang: Were gonna learn how old bands did well, were gonna play our music at prom, everyones gonna love us, and its gonna be great."
+
+"Anon: that’s a lot of ‘gonnas’"
+
+"Fang: And youre gonna come with me"
+
+"Anon: what about trish and reed?"
+
+"Fang: Sending them to a bunch of old record shops to cover more ground"
+
+"Fang: So itll  just be the two of us"
+
+"Anon: sounds like a plan."
+
+"Fang: Meet me at the galleria at three alright?"
+
+"Anon: i’ll be there."
+
+"I put my phone down and look around my room."
+
+"Do you need to dress special to go to museums…?"
+
+"... Not sure if that would be good enough."
+
+"It’s probably fine, I shouldn’t be getting so worked up."
+
+"I get to spend the whole day with Fang, after all."
+scene black with fade
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+"..."
+scene museum
+play music 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 1.0
+"The fine art museum turns out to be a relatively modern building right in the middle of the galleria."
+
+"Exactly the last kind of place I would expect Fang to be seen at."
+
+"I almost regret my decision not to wear my dirty dress clothes before seeing Fang already waiting for me by the entrance."
+
+"Seeing me approach, she drops her cigarette and grinds the butt to ash under her heel."
+
+F "Took you long enough."
+show anon neutral at aleft
+show fang happy flip at sright
+with dissolve
+"Here’s your one chance Anon don’t fuck it up."
+
+A "Kept you waiting, huh?"
+
+F "God, you’re such a dork. C’mon, the music exhibit is inside."
+
+"Thankfully admission to the museum was free."
+
+"She leads me by the hand through the front doors, and I immediately feel the temperature fall at least ten degrees."
+
+"Are museums always this cold?"
+scene museuminside
+show anon neutral at aleft
+show fang happy at sright
+"The music exhibit is all the way in the back of the museum, past several rooms of abstract modern art."
+
+F "What a bunch of junk."
+
+A "What, you don’t want to buy a painting made with dino egg yolks and whites for ten million?"
+
+F "What a steal!"
+
+A "What about a sheet of paper with an url to a picture of a fridge for fifty grand?"
+
+F "You’re messing with me."
+
+A "It’s true, I’ll show you when we get out of here."
+
+"We reach the exhibit hall with the big words ‘THE STYGY MOLDRIX EXPERIENCE’ hanging over the door."
+
+"Despite it being a limited time event on the life and times of a famous musician, there’s only a few dozen people here."
+
+F "Finally!"
+
+F "Alright, Anon, get ready to take notes!"
+
+A "Notes…?"
+
+"Fang grabs me by the forearm and rushes the two of us into the exhibit."
+
+"Once inside, she gives me her phone."
+
+F "Take pictures of everything for me, okay?"
+
+A "Dowhatnow? Uh, okay, sure…"
+
+F "Let’s start with… Uhh…"
+
+"She scans the room briefly before pointing giddily to a guitar hanging inside a case."
+
+"Despite being several decades old, the guitar was clearly well looked after."
+
+"The lacquer on the wood gleamed under the spotlights and the metal didn’t have a speck of rust on it."
+
+F "OH! OH! That!"
+
+A "What is it?"
+
+"She sprints over to the case and I have to catch up making sure I don’t drop her phone."
+
+F "It’s Stygy’s famous guitar!"
+
+F "It’s actually a right handed piece, but Stygy was left-handed but couldn’t afford a lefty guitar, so he re-strung a regular one so he could play it."
+
+F "This guitar was the one he used on his last show at an informal gig in some jazz club in London, a few days before he bit it while OD-ing on drugs."
+
+A "Yeah, that’s pretty cool."
+
+"I caught maybe half of that."
+
+"Either way, I snap several pictures from various angles while Fang continues her sermon."
+
+F "Alright, what’s next?"
+
+"She drags me along to the next display case, a few vacuum-sealed pages with various scribblings on them."
+
+F "And these are some letters he hand-wrote to his father! If my dad wasn’t such an asshole he could have pulled some strings and let us play in the precinct!"
+
+"I try keeping up with her ramblings while taking pictures, but somewhere along the way I lose her in the twisting corridors."
+
+A "Oops."
+
+"I stand in place looking around a bit, but she’s nowhere in sight."
+
+"She can’t have gone far, guess I’ll keep taking pictures of things."
+
+"My eyes are drawn to a monitor on the wall playing documentary footage."
+
+"It was a clip of Stygy playing the national anthem as a protest song or something."
+
+"It sounded kinda cool, I’ll give him that much."
+
+F "Ooh, that’s a good find, Anon!"
+
+"Fang’s voice makes me jump as she reappears out of nowhere."
+
+F "Maybe we could play something like that, show us as a champion of the common man!"
+
+A "...Yeah, my thoughts exactly. Glad I could help."
+
+F "I saw some good stuff in the next row over we can go check out. too."
+
+"She drags me away from the screen to whatever it is she wants to take ‘inspiration’ from."
+
+play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1.0
+"I’m glad she’s having fun and all, but…"
+
+"I wish this was more of a date than a research assignment."
+
+"But I guess she’d feel the same way if I bombarded her with anime."
+
+"She has her interests and I have mine."
+
+"Maybe after this I can take her to a restaurant."
+
+"We’re in a city, but there’s bound to be something relatively cheap nearby."
+
+"It’d be nice, talking about the pictures and things we’ve been taking over some burgers."
+
+"It’s only four-thirty now, it’ll be about dinner time by the time we get out, too."
+
+"Pretty decent timing, sounds like a good plan."
+
+"Fang drags me around a few more exhibits, cataloguing the various paraphernalia and stopping occasionally to obsess over some minor detail."
+
+"Eventually we loop back around to the entrance."
+
+"Fang looks back at the room we just came from."
+
+A "You about ready to go?"
+
+F "Maybe… Just trying to think if we missed anything…"
+
+A "I’m pretty sure we got everything, you could probably reconstruct the entire exhibit using only these pictures I took."
+
+F "I guess… Just can’t have this part of the plan go wrong, you know?"
+
+A "About that, I’m still not sure what your plan is meant to-"
+
+F "OH WAIT!"
+
+"She dashes off back into the room we just came in, leaving my words dangling from my mouth."
+
+"While I’m gone her phone buzzes."
+
+play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg' fadein 1.0
+"Trish: hey r u rdy to mt up lik u sad we wud?"
+
+"What…?"
+
+"It says these ebonics come from Trish, but I didn’t know they were meeting later…"
+
+"This’ll throw a huge wrench into my plan earlier…"
+
+F "Alright, sorry, I’m back."
+
+A "What was that about?"
+
+F "Sorry, had to hit up the gift shop."
+
+A "Oh."
+
+"That explains the fuck-ugly tie-dye monstrosity tide around her headcrest."
+
+A "You uh, got a text from Trish, I think."
+
+"I hand her back her phone."
+
+F "Oh! That’s right, I told her and Reed that we’d meet up after we were done with everything."
+
+A "...I see…"
+
+F "Right, so I’ll tell her we should meet at-"
+
+A "Actually, Fang, hold on a second…"
+
+F "Hm?"
+
+A "Before we all meet together, do you want to stop by a restaurant or something, just the two of us?"
+
+"She thinks to herself for a moment and smiles."
+
+F "Of course, I dragged you along this whole time after all."
+
+A "Don’t worry about it."
+
+A "I think I can get us something from that taco truck I saw on the way in."
+
+F "Alright, I’ll tell Trish to wait a bit."
+
+"Instead of Fang dragging me through the museum, we walked out casually hand in hand."
+
+"I think I saw that truck a block east from here…"
+
+A "By the way, do you take pollo or asada or what on your taco. Please don’t say leng-"
+
+F "Wait!!"
+
+"She stops dead in her tracks, head jerked to the side."
+
+A "Huh?"
+
+F "Look!"
+
+"I peer at where she’s pointing."
+
+"Some poster on the museum wall, it’s an advertisement for a documentary playing in the museum’s mini theater."
+
+"And… It’s a documentary on Stygy Moldrix."
+
+F "I didn’t see this on the way in, we have to see that too!"
+
+A "But what abou-"
+
+F "I know, I know, I’m sorry Anon…"
+
+"Her eyes plead with me for mercy."
+
+F "Just bear with me a while longer?"
+
+"I…"
+
+"Well, it’s not like the truck’s going anywhere, at least."
+
+A "... Fine. Let’s go…"
+
+F "Oh, thank you Anon!"
+
+A "Yeah, I know this means a lot to you."
+
+F "Come on, the next showing is in five minutes!"
+
+"Already I’m being dragged back inside."
+
+"I guess seeing a movie with Fang isn’t the worst thing in the world."
+scene black with fade
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+"..."
+scene theater with fade
+"Well this sucks."
+
+"I feel my stomach grumble for what feels like the fiftieth time, once again regretting not even buying an overpriced bag of popcorn."
+
+"Stealthily as I could, I check the time on my phone before the light can distract anyone else."
+
+"It’s been thirty-six minutes since the documentary started, only a few more to go before I can escape."
+
+"I glance over at Fang, who has been so engrossed in the film that she hasn’t so much as looked at me this entire time."
+
+"Resigning myself to my fate, my eyes return to the screen which is currently going on about Stygy’s fourth unfinished studio album."
+
+"How exciting."
+
+"I would have just slept through it if I knew Fang wouldn’t be upset with me."
+
+"Not just because of how interested she is in Stygy Moldrix, but because I wouldn’t be taking notes."
+
+"As the screen fades and the lights turn back on, I silently thank Raptor Jesus for ending my forty-minute torment."
+
+F "That was really good! A lot of ideas for the band!"
+
+A "Er… yeah, it was cool I guess."
+
+"Just please get me out of here."
+
+A "Now about that food truck…"
+
+F "Oh! I told Trish and Reed that we could meet at the Galleria food court, we can get something to eat there."
+
+"Really not looking forward to being anywhere near Trish but food is food."
+
+"Part of me just wants to call the date here and go home."
+
+"Not that it was ever much of a date to begin with."
+
+A "Alright, let’s go then."
+
+"At least I can talk to Reed about Rock Ring or something."
+
+"Fang smiles and leads me back out of the museum and towards the food court."
+
+"I still think this is a bad idea, I’m still not over what Trish did and I doubt her mind has changed much either."
+
+F "Stop being grumpy, Anon, you’re just hungry."
+
+"For fuck’s sake."
+
+A "Fang, someone filled my locker with a shit-ton of hentai they printed out last week. It’s not okay."
+
+F "That’s just some dumbass at school, we can get some food and it’ll be fine."
+scene foodcourt
+show fang neutral at aleft
+show anon neutral at aleft
+with fade
+"We round the corner and I immediately lock on to a certain triceratops."
+
+show reed sunglasses flip at rright:
+show trish neutral:
+xalign 0.8
+with dissolve
+
+"Trish and Reed were already eating at one of the tables."
+
+"Fuck that."
+
+A "I’m gonna go get something to eat first… You want anything?"
+
+F "Nah, I’m good. Not that hungry."
+
+"Extra order of fries it is."
+
+"I split off from Fang to find a place to get food from."
+
+scene foodcourt
+show anon neutral flip at aleft
+with fade
+
+play music 'audio/OST/sadist.ogg' fadein 1.0
+"I glance over my shoulder to see Fang saying something and hugging Trish, both of them turning to look over at me."
+
+"Trish looking significantly less enthused than Fang. No surprise there."
+
+"I stand in line for a Cretaceous Fried Chicken stand and order my food, savoring every moment I wait and don’t have to interact with Trish."
+
+"The moment doesn’t last long and I walk over to the table, food in hand."
+scene foodcourt
+show fang neutral at aleft
+show anon neutral at aleft
+show reed sunglasses flip at rright:
+show trish neutral flip:
+xalign 1.1
+with dissolve
+
+"I take the seat between Fang and Reed, which puts me straight across the table from Trish."
+
+"Of fucking course."
+
+"I place the basket of fries in front of Fang and she immediately starts digging in. So much for not being hungry."
+
+"Reed gives me a thumbs up, wearing his giant oversized sunglasses again."
+
+"While Trish is making a face somewhere in between judgemental and open contempt."
+
+show trish smug flip
+
+T "So what took you so long? He wasn’t wasting your time again, was he, Fang?"
+
+show trish neutral flip with dissolve
+
+"Welp time to clock out of that conversation."
+
+"I’m sure they can have a riveting discussion without me."
+
+"It’s just one meal after all, I can ignore Trish for an hour and then Fang and I can leave."
+
+"Digging into my basket of chicken tenders, I pull out my phone and head straight to the armenian graphic design forum."
+
+show anonphone with moveinbottom
+
+"There’s another Grugsnax thread I can shitpost in to pass the time."
+
+"Every once in a while I look up from my phone and catch Trish giving me a death glare before turning to look back at the others."
+
+"Before long my train of thought is broken by Fang saying… something."
+
+F "...so Anon, what do you think?"
+
+hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
+
+A "Uh, yeah. That sounds good?"
+
+F "Great! We can try Trish’s new song in the next rehearsal!"
+
+show trish smug flip with dissolve
+
+"Trish looks smug. What did I agree to?"
+
+T "I’m surprised you agreed to that, I would have thought you wanted us to play some anime song instead."
+
+"She’s just loving this, isn’t she."
+
+Re "Hey man, that sounds kinda fun."
+
+"Reed is qualed by Trish’s sneer."
+
+"Know what. I don’t care anymore."
+
+F "Maybe… But let’s talk about that later. I’m cravin’ a milkshake now."
+
+hide fang with dissolve
+
+"Fang gets up and turns to a nearby smoothie booth."
+
+"Leaving me here."
+
+"To deal with this. These."
+
+T "So, Anon…"
+
+"Her grin is just short of vicious."
+
+T "So happy you agreed to my idea."
+
+T "Guess you’re starting to get some good taste."
+
+T "Better than any of that weeb-pop trash you’ve got on your phone."
+
+"I pointedly ignore her. She’s trying to get a rise out of me."
+
+T "Maybe I’ll make a somebody out of you too."
+
+T "Maybe…"
+
+"My fist clenches tightly beneath the table."
+
+menu:
+"It's not worth it.":
+"I can see it now."
+"I've had about enough of this.":
+"Just before I get up I think through it one more time."
+
+"Her stupid horn jammed right in her eye."
+
+"I sigh."
+
+"My fist unfurls."
+
+A "Yeah, sure, whatever."
+
+"God this was a waste of a day."
+
+"Normally I would love just spending time with Fang, but she’s been so preoccupied with the band lately."
+
+"I don’t even know why she needed me today when all she did was drag me around."
+
+"And now being anywhere near Trish is the cherry on the shit sundae."
+
+"Fang returns a few moments later with a milkshake in her hand."
+
+show fang happy at sleft behind anon with dissolve
+
+F "What’d I miss?"
+
+T "Just talking to White Knight about his taste in music."
+
+"Fuck this."
+
+"I can’t deal with this anymore."
+
+A "Shit, I just got a text from the post office. Says my dad’s prom suit came and I wanted to get there before it closed."
+
+A "Sorry to do this Fang, I gotta go. See you at school tomorrow."
+
+"I hate lying to Fang this way but I just can’t stand being around Trish any more."
+
+show fang sad with dissolve
+
+F "O-oh, it wasn’t anything I did, was it?"
+
+A "Everything’s fine, I just want to be ready for prom and your show."
+
+show fang neutral with dissolve
+
+"That seemed to put her at ease."
+
+F "Alright… we still have a bunch to talk about for the show. See you tomorrow, then."
+
+show reed happy sunglasses flip with dissolve
+
+Re "Peace, dude."
+
+"I give Fang a reassuring hug and promptly head towards the bus stop, not missing Trish’s dumb smug face as I pass her."
+scene black with fade
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+"God damn it."
+
+"..."
+
+jump chapter_9.0A
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--- a/game/script/9.0A.(fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen).rpy
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-#TODO: transfer DaScript appropriately to this section
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+label chapter_9.0A:
+
+scene home fang day
+show fang a prom happy flip at sright
+show fangmom neutral at fmleft
+show naomi prom neutral at scenter
+show anon prom neutral flip at aright
+with fade
+#Prom is Complicated
+scene black with fade
+
+"-One Month Later-"
+play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg' fadein 1.0
+
+"It’s prom night."
+
+"My old man was kind enough to send over his old tuxedo from his time at high school."
+
+"It took a bit of sewing, but I got it looking pretty good."
+
+"Judging by the wine stains on the sleeves, Dad’s made a lot of important announcements in this tuxedo."
+
+"Gives it a bit of history, I guess."
+
+scene home fang outside night
+show anon prom neutral at aleft
+show naomi prom neutral flip at sright
+with fade
+
+"When I arrive at Fang’s place with a cheap corsage I see the Pomegranate Parasite waiting outside the front door."
+
+"Great."
+
+"And dear god, how can she move in that dress."
+
+"It looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
+
+N "Oh, I already knocked Anon."
+
+N "Naser will be out in a moment to invite us in, I’m sure Fang will be getting ready too."
+
+N "I’ve heard the two of you are going to prom together!"
+
+"Ladies and gentlemen, the next Sherlock Holmes."
+
+A "No, I just happen to be here in a suit to go golfing."
+
+"I ignore her, focusing instead on not stabbing my palm even more on this flower’s thorns."
+
+"Fuck it, free is free."
+
+"And nothing more free than a five finger discount from the neighbor’s yard."
+
+N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
+
+A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
+
+N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
+
+show naomi prom happy flip
+
+"I’ve already tuned her out."
+
+show naser prom neutral at ncenter with dissolve
+
+"Naser opens the door."
+
+"Well if that isn’t the fanciest jacket I’ve seen in a while."
+
+"It’s certainly better than the background of Avatar he always wears."
+
+Nas "Sorry to keep you waiting, Naomi."
+
+Nas "This thing is a nightmare to get over my wings."
+
+show naser prom happy flip at ncenter with dissolve
+
+Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
+
+"He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
+play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 1.0
+
+scene home fang night
+show anon prom neutral at aleft
+show naser prom neutral at ncenter
+show naomi prom neutral at scenter
+with fade
+
+"Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
+
+show fangmom neutral flip at sright with moveinright
+
+FM "Oh! Oh! Is that Anon?"
+
+Nas "Here we go."
+
+"The small pterodactyl comes out, a bowl she’s struggling to stir in her arms."
+
+FM "My, aren’t you handsome."
+
+FM "Pictures! I need to get pictures of you and Lucy!"
+
+"She sets the bowl aside on the coffee table to frantically search for a polaroid camera."
+
+FM "To think Lucy would have such a wonderful young man to take her to prom!"
+
+FM "Aha! Found it. Hold still, dear."
+scene black with fade
+"ARGH! Like getting slapped in the face by the sun’s dick!"
+
+"I blink the blindness away. So that’s why Naser has those fucking aviators."
+
+scene home fang night
+show anon prom neutral at aleft
+show naser prom neutral at ncenter
+show naomi prom neutral at scenter
+show fangmom neutral flip at sright
+with fade
+
+FM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
+hide fangmom with moveoutleft
+FM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
+
+A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
+
+"I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
+
+hide anon with moveoutright
+
+scene black with fade
+
+scene home fang night with fade
+show anon prom neutral flip at aright
+
+"This thing must cost a fortune."
+
+"Fang’s dad is a police commissioner if I recall."
+
+"That explains the luxurious furnishings."
+
+"Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
+show fangdad neutral at sleft with dissolve
+FD "So…"
+
+"I hope I didn’t just ruin these slacks."
+
+A "Good evening, sir."
+
+A "I didn’t even see you in your chair, sir."
+
+A "My apologies."
+
+FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
+
+FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
+
+FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
+
+FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
+
+show fangmom unimpressed flip at fmcenter with dissolve
+
+FM "Sweetheart."
+
+FM "No. Intimidating. The Suitor."
+
+"The big guy deflates a bit in his chair."
+
+FD "Point is, don’t get any funny ideas."
+
+A "Yessir."
+
+hide fangdad with dissolve
+show naser prom neutral at nleft with moveinleft
+
+N "We’re all taking the NasCar, right?"
+
+Nas "Yeah, yeah."
+
+Nas "Once Fang gets down we’ll skedaddle."
+
+A "So until then we just sit and chill?"
+show naomi prom happy at sleft with moveinleft
+
+N "We could take more pictures!"
+
+"Please no."
+
+show fangmom neutral at fmcenter with moveinleft
+
+FM "Oh! I would love to make this a little photo op!"
+
+scene black with fade
+
+"Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
+
+"Fang’s mom decided to take pictures of every possible combination of us."
+
+"I don’t know which was worse, having to pose with Naomi or Fang’s dad digging his murder claws into my shoulder."
+
+"I’ve lost nearly all feeling in that arm."
+
+"Pretty sure that’ll leave a bruise worse than my accelerated hug with the stair bollard last month."
+
+"At least the pics with Naser were a nice reprieve."
+
+"We ended up looking like the blues brothers, standing side by side in fuck ugly suits."
+
+"Just as I was about to resign myself to premature blindness from the camera flash, my saviour arrives."
+
+F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+scene home fang night
+show fang a prom neutral:
+xalign -0.3
+show anon prom neutral flip at acenter
+with fade
+
+"Fang comes downstairs in a fancy getup."
+play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
+
+"It’s certainly… Less traditional than mine."
+
+"No less flattering though."
+
+"Legs for days and days."
+
+show fangmom unimpressed flip at fmright
+
+FM "Oh, I was hoping you would wear the dress I bought you sweetheart."
+
+F "Mooooom. This is better, it’s gender neutral formal wear!"
+
+"Looks more like she took some dickies and made them into some booty shorts."
+
+"Not that I’m complaining."
+
+"The word plump is quite apt right now."
+
+show naomi prom neutral flip with moveinright:
+xalign 1.2
+
+N "Oh, Fang…"
+
+N "That’s an… Interesting outfit you’re wearing."
+
+"Naomi side-eyes me a dagger."
+
+N "I thought you’d be wearing some kind of dress…"
+
+F "Nah, dresses aren’t my style."
+
+N "I-I see…"
+
+N "Well your outfit certainly… pairs well with Anon’s."
+
+show fang a prom angry
+with dissolve
+
+F "Oh I love your dress too, you look just like a giant pink dildo!"
+
+show naomi prom angry flip with dissolve
+
+FM "Lucy!"
+
+F "What did I say about that! I already told you, my name is Fang!"
+
+"Fang’s mom just sighs."
+
+FM "Okay, sorry, Fang. But please, you don’t need to use that kind of language towards guests!"
+
+F "...Whatever…"
+
+A "Maybe we should just go…"
+
+F "I’m not sharing a ride with her."
+
+N "Well, if you insist, Fang. Before you go… Anon, can I speak with you for a second?"
+
+"Before I can even say anything, Naomi’s dragging me by the shoulder into the kitchen."
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+scene kitchen
+show anon prom neutral at aleft
+show naomi prom angry flip at scenter
+with fade
+
+"She gives me a death stare for what seems like a solid minute before she begins yelling at me"
+
+N "What the hell is your problem, Anon?!"
+
+"I think it’s the first time I’ve ever heard Naomi raise her voice, or even swear."
+
+N "How in the fuck did you manage to make Fang worse?"
+
+A "I… What the hell are you talking about?"
+
+"Naomi begins to somehow look even more earth-shatteringly mad."
+
+N "I thought you were gonna make her better!"
+
+A "What the fuck do you mean, ‘make her better’?"
+
+N "It’s like you didn’t even try to help her."
+
+A "I did the best I could, okay!"
+
+A "I certainly did more than whatever you’ve ever done for her."
+
+A "And you know what, she’s her own person! If she’s happy, I’m happy."
+
+"Naomi’s face of sheer anger quickly turns to disgust."
+
+N "I can’t believe you. You really don’t get it."
+
+"Naomi sighs and walks away, shoving into my shoulder on the way out, completely disregarding my presence."
+
+N "Just go, get out of here."
+
+N "This conversation is over."
+
+hide naomi with dissolve
+
+"I can hear Fang arguing with her parents in the other room with Naomi not yelling at me anymore."
+
+"I place my hands in my pockets, turn around, and head back into the foyer."
+
+"My walking slows, and the hall feels like it stretches onwards for miles."
+
+"Could Naomi be right? About Fang?"
+
+"No, no, she can’t be right!"
+
+"Fang is happy with herself, for once."
+
+"The arguing from the other room quickly and very loudly breaks my train of thought and I stride back to where everybody is gathered."
+
+scene home fang night
+
+show fangdad unimpressed at sleft
+show fang a prom angry flip at scenter
+show naomi prom angry flip:
+xalign 1.3
+FD "...That is no way to talk to your mother, young lady!"
+
+F "I’m not a fuckin’ lady, dad!"
+
+"Naomi’s leaned against a wall next to the entry to that hall."
+
+"She turns to me, with an expression of very intently restrained rage on her face."
+
+"Did I really do this, Naomi?"
+
+N "Maybe you should leave before this turns into a fight."
+
+"Naomi’s words were cold but probably true."
+
+show fang a prom angry with dissolve
+
+"Fang looked ready to set her house on fire until she caught me in the corner of her eye."
+
+hide fang with moveoutright
+
+"Without a word she grabbed me by the wrist and dragged me through the front door, guitar in her other hand."
+
+scene home fang outside night with fade
+show fang a prom angry at sleft
+show anon prom neutral flip at aright
+
+F "…’mme call a taxi or something."
+
+"We sit on the curb in silence until our ride arrives."
+
+"It’s the same velociraptor driver from before. Of course it is."
+
+"I open the door for Fang as she fits her guitar in the back seat."
+
+scene taxi night with fade
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+D "Ay, it’s my favorite couple again! How’s the leg, skinnie?"
+
+"The driver chuckles at his own remark."
+
+A "We’re doing fine, take us to Volcano high"
+
+D "Prom I’m guessing?  Ya’ two high school sweet-hearts should stay safe out there! Crazy worl’ out there innit’?"
+
+A "Yeah I guess..."
+
+D "Not too much party in you.  You sure you guys are going to prom?"
+
+A "We’re sure."
+
+D "Well, if you say so."
+
+"The cab starts down the street at what was easily twice the speed limit."
+
+"The engine is surprisingly quiet, and leaves the silence awkward between the three of us."
+
+"In the mirror, the Drivers’ eyes start showing a bit of concern."
+
+"He glances towards the radio."
+
+A "Please don’t."
+
+D "Mmm."
+
+"He gives a disappointed look through the reflection."
+
+D "..."
+
+D "You kids uh…"
+
+D "You feel like stopping by a restaurant or something by any chance?"
+
+D "I know a good Chinese place around here…"
+
+D "I can wait outside if you two want to, y’know… I won't even add onto the bill..."
+
+F "I’m on a schedule."
+
+F "We’ll pass."
+
+A "No Thanks."
+
+D "Sure, sure."
+
+"The Driver sighs a little"
+
+scene outside school night
+show fang a prom neutral at sleft
+show anon prom neutral flip at aright
+with fade
+
+"Eventually the cab pulls up to the school gymnasium, illuminated by the celebratory decorative string lights."
+
+"Fang opens her wallet to pay the toll."
+
+D "Uhh… Y’know what, it’s on the house this time, kids."
+
+A "Wait, really?"
+
+D "Sure, yeah."
+
+D "Just have fun, y’know, and uhh…"
+
+D "If you need a cab again, you know the number."
+
+F "We know, we know."
+
+F "Get lost."
+
+A "See you."
+
+"The taxi pulls away from the curb and rounds the corner back onto the main road."
+play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
+
+F "We still got about an hour before Spears told us to be on."
+
+A "Sounds like we got plenty of time."
+
+F "You’d be surprised. Come on."
+
+"I considered carrying the guitar case for her, but Fang is already a couple yards ahead power walking to Prom."
+
+"Fang leads the way to the school’s gymnasium. Her shoulders are tense and her wings are raised higher than usual."
+scene hallway
+show fang a prom neutral at sright
+show anon prom neutral at aleft
+with fade
+"I pick up the pace to try and catch up, but Fang’s long legs only moved faster."
+
+A "What song are you going to play?"
+
+F "Just something simple me and Trish wrote up, why?"
+
+A "Just curious about what's going to knock the prom out of the park, what about Reed?"
+
+F "He was busy."
+
+scene prom
+show fang a prom neutral at sleft
+show anon prom neutral at aleft
+with fade
+"The two of us go up to the entrance, the room filled with seniors, strobe lights and a very suspicious smelling fog."
+
+"Reed and Trish were over in a corner, both with red solo cups."
+
+"I didn’t need to question what was in Reed’s."
+
+"Reed noticed us first and waved us over."
+
+show trish prom neutral flip at tright
+show reed sunglasses flip at rright
+with dissolve
+Re "Yooo buddy, how's it going? Ready to see us kill it up on the stage?"
+
+A "Yeah man! Fang said you guys were going to keep it pretty simple with what's up there?"
+
+Re "Yeah, don’t want to do something super complex, just wanna keep it simple and cool for these guys."
+
+A "When are you guys starting?"
+
+Re "Forty-five minutes."
+
+F "Forty-five? Shit I thought we were later than that, we need to start getting prepped."
+
+scene bandroom
+show fang a prom neutral at sright
+show anon prom neutral at acenter
+show reed sunglasses at sleft
+show trish prom neutral at tright
+with fade
+"We hauled ass to Mr.Jingo’s room, where the band had stored their gear."
+
+"Reed’s drumset was in pieces and I helped him reassemble it while Trish and Fang tuned their guitars."
+stop music
+
+"{i}*TWANG*{/i}"
+
+show fang a prom angry with dissolve
+
+F "SHIT!"
+
+show trish prom sad flip with dissolve
+
+"I drop the snare drum I was holding."
+
+"Fang’s guitar string had snapped."
+
+play music 'audio/OST/Many Such Cases of Being So True.ogg' fadein 1.0
+"Trish and Fang look devastated."
+
+A "Don’t you have a spare?"
+
+show fang a prom sad with dissolve
+
+F "...At home…"
+
+T "There’s got to be some here! Reed! Anon! Look arou-"
+
+F "We don’t have time!"
+
+A "What? But-"
+
+Re "A spare guitar, maybe?"
+
+F "We do not have the time!"
+
+A "Look me and Reed can-"
+show fang a prom angry flip with dissolve
+F "ANON YOU’RE NOT HELPING!"
+
+F "Look Anon, we just need to focus right now."
+
+F "Just go outside so we can figure something out."
+
+"Her words cut straight through me."
+
+"She’s really kicking me out right now."
+
+show fang a prom neutral flip with dissolve
+
+F "Please, Anon?"
+
+"Reed is silent and I catch a glimpse of a smirking speciesist triceratops."
+
+"I begin to formulate a response, but just manage a small nod."
+
+A "I- Yeah… sure…"
+stop music fadeout 3.0
+
+hide anon neutral with moveoutright
+
+scene prom
+show anon prom neutral at sleft
+with fade
+play music "audio/effects/prom chatter loop 2.ogg" fadein 3.0
+"Fang hasn’t yelled at me like that since… the beginning of the semester."
+
+"But playing at prom seemed pretty important to Fang and who am I to interfere with that?"
+
+"I didn’t even want to be here in the first place, but…"
+
+"But I’m following Moe’s advice and supporting Fang, right?"
+
+"The music slams into me as I reenter the room, grating on my ears and thrumming roughly in my chest."
+
+"A quick pass of the punch bowl and I find the ideal spot."
+
+"In the darkened corner, where I can support the wall with my back and sip on my cheap punch."
+
+"My feet grow sore as I observe the other seniors having fun."
+
+"Every now and then one of them would point at me and snicker."
+
+"I simply hide my face behind my solo cup and try to drown out their judging eyes behind sugary water."
+
+show spears neutral flip at sright with moveinright
+
+Sp "Enjoying yourself, Anon?"
+
+"I nearly choke on the fruit punch."
+
+A "P-principal Spears! Uh… You’re chaperoning?"
+
+Sp "I wouldn’t ask any of the faculty to look after you lot."
+
+A "Hm…"
+
+Sp "You enjoying your prom?"
+
+menu:
+ "Could be worse":
+   A "Could be worse."
+ "Going great, actually":
+   A "Going great, Actually"
+
+Sp "Where’s your date, I thought I saw the two of you enter."
+
+Sp "Weren’t you all getting ready in the music room?"
+
+A "We were…"
+
+A "Something came up… She asked me to leave."
+
+Sp "Fang did?"
+
+A "Yeah, I was just getting in the way."
+
+Sp "I see."
+
+"The two of us stare into the crowd’s mindless frolicking in silence."
+
+Sp "Seems there’s something else on your mind, Anon."
+
+Sp "I can tell these things."
+
+A "Not really, it’s just that I’m respecting her boundaries."
+
+Sp "..."
+
+Sp "Are you sure that’s what’s really going on here?"
+
+"Ugh, here we go."
+
+Sp "Back when I was in the game, I learned a thing or two about-"
+
+"I sigh and tune out the massive man standing next to me."
+
+"I swirl the punch in my cup around before chugging the last of it."
+
+"...I just want to go home…"
+
+Sp "-ake responsibility and take it seriously."
+
+Sp "Relationships are a give and take sort of deal."
+
+Sp "Got it, Anon?"
+
+A "...Sure, sir. I’ll keep that in mind."
+
+"The principal sighs and leaves me."
+hide spears with moveoutleft
+"Everyone moves out of his way as he cuts his way across the room to the small stage."
+
+"The music fades until all that’s left is chatter."
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+"Spears takes to the stage with mic in hand for once."
+
+scene prom with dissolve
+show spears neutral at scenter
+Sp "Alright everyone. Before we end tonight’s prom we have a couple of items to take care of."
+
+Sp "First thing is-"
+
+"The principal pulls a tiny gold sheaf envelope from his lapel and holds it up for the audience to gawk at."
+
+Sp "to announce Prom King and Queen."
+
+"Well this is a foregone conclusion."
+
+"A few students are already congratulating Naser as he’s led by the arm by his handler."
+
+Sp "A drum roll, please."
+
+"Reed steps onto the stage with a small block in his arms."
+
+"He smiles and nods, pressing one of the myriad of buttons on the block."
+
+"A mediocre recording of the drumline plays over the speakers as Spears clears his throat and tears open the envelope."
+
+Sp "And your winners."
+
+Sp "For the one Mil."
+
+Sp "Twenty-twenty class."
+
+Sp "Aaaaaare…."
+
+Sp "Naaaaaser aaaaand Naaaaoooomiiiiii!"
+
+"He tosses the paper over his shoulder and yanks out the crowns from a pocket inside his jacket."
+show spears neutral with moveinleft:
+ xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0
+show naser prom neutral at sleft with moveinleft
+show naomi prom neutral flip with moveinright:
+ xalign 0.9 yalign 0.0
+
+"Spears backs out of the spotlight, giving a polite applause to the pair as they rush onstage to accept."
+
+"The rest of the class is in a celebratory uproar."
+
+"Spears offers the crowns to Naomi, who puts the larger one on Naser’s crest to droop off, and then dons the tiara.."
+
+"The whole moment is picturesque, just like Naomi wanted."
+N "Thank you all so much, Volcano High!"
+
+N "This is such an honor to receive."
+
+N "My, I don’t really have a speech prepared. But…"
+
+N "In just one short year, we-"
+
+Sp "Alright, alright, let’s stay on schedule."
+show spears neutral at scenter with moveinright
+
+hide naomi
+hide naser
+with moveoutright
+
+Sp "I promised your parents we’d be out of here by ten."
+
+Sp "To close off this wonderful night, I’ve asked a student band to play a few bops for us."
+
+Sp "They’ve had their trials earlier in the year, but I think everyone deserves a second chance."
+
+Sp "Please welcome, VVURM DRAMA!!!!"
+
+"The audience’s applause decreases noticeably."
+
+hide spears with moveoutright
+
+unknown "Wait, again?"
+
+unknown "He was there last time, wasn’t he?"
+
+unknown "I’ll just start recording…"
+
+"Feh. Screw ‘em."
+
+"Fang’ll show them how much they’ve all improved."
+
+"I should be memorizing their faces now to make their dumbstruck expressions that much sweeter."
+
+"I know Fang can pull this off."
+
+"Reed wheels the drumkit onstage on a dolly, and Trish follows with her bass."
+
+"And then Fang comes on with her bass as well."
+
+play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1.0
+scene prom
+show anon prom neutral at scenter
+
+"Wait."
+
+"Wait no."
+
+"They couldn’t find a new string?!"
+
+"They’re just going to repeat the first concert?!"
+
+"What were they thinking?!"
+
+"The three finish making last minute preparations and give an anxious look at one another."
+
+"For a brief moment, Fang looks me right in the eyes."
+
+"I think we all know what’s about to happen."
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+"The band doesn’t bother introducing themselves. Instead Trish begins plucking her bass."
+
+"It all went tumbling down from there."
+play music 'audio/OST/its_the_piece_of_shit_you_asked_for.ogg' fadein 1.0
+
+scene prom fang fuck up a ending with fade
+
+"Just like before, Fang’s bass sounds horrifically wrong, far too heavy. She’s a guitarist using a fucking jazz bass, so of course it sounds horrid."
+
+"And then the vocals kicked in. Reed’s lyrical expertise was not on display here, no these sounded like they came from an edgy teen’s twitter page."
+
+"It’s horrific screeching, combined with the amelodious shredding on a bass creating a cacophony equal to hundreds of cats ritualistically sacrificed."
+stop music
+unknown "PFFFT AHAHAHA THEY STILL FUCKING SUCK AFTER SIX MONTHS!!"
+
+"The crowd’s cautious cheers were long gone, replaced by a symphony of ridicule."
+
+"The band’s already accepted their fate, both basses hang limply from their shoulder straps."
+
+"Then a few students start chucking balled up tissues at their heads."
+
+"Reed puts his hand on Trish’s shoulder and the two duck out."
+
+scene prom fang freak out a ending with fade
+
+"Fang stays a moment longer, the despair on her face manifesting through hot streams of tears."
+
+scene prom with fade
+
+"She turns to leave as well, trying to maintain a calm composure."
+
+"Then a student throws their red plastic cup of punch upstage."
+
+"It splashes against her head, drenching her suit in red dye and making her smash onto the floor."
+
+"A few more food articles follow while Fang scrambles to get up."
+
+"Shakily, she tries walking offstage again, only to be met with another makeshift water balloon."
+
+"The back of her suit shines a dull red in the stage lights, and she struggles to not slip again."
+
+show spears neutral at scenter with moveinleft
+
+"Spears rushes onstage and throws his coat over Fang."
+
+"Naser was about to jump off the stage and tackle someone."
+
+"Except Naomi had her arms around his waist."
+
+show spears angry at scenter with dissolve
+
+Sp "ENOUGH!"
+
+"The room goes completely silent aside from the sounds of Fang’s sprinting footsteps and sobbing."
+
+"Spear’s lazer gaze is directed at me."
+
+scene prom
+show anon prom neutral at scenter
+with fade
+
+"He jams his thumb in the direction of the exit Fang just took."
+
+scene black with fade
+
+"I slip out the side door towards the music room once again."
+
+"Trish and Reed were sitting in the far corner of the room, and Fang was nowhere to be seen."
+
+scene bandroom
+show trish prom sad flip at tright
+show reed sad flip:
+xalign 0.75
+show anon prom neutral at aleft
+
+Re "Hey, man…"
+
+T "Great, what do YOU want?"
+
+Re "Fang’s not here, dude."
+
+A "Where’d she go?"
+
+Re "Probably the auditorium."
+
+Re "To be alone."
+
+T "We’re doing fine too, not that you care. Asshole."
+
+A "You’re right, Trish."
+
+T "I, whu-"
+
+A "I don’t care, I need to find Fang. Now."
+
+show reed angry flip with dissolve
+
+Re "That was uncalled for, man."
+
+A "And so is this."
+
+scene black
+
+"*SLAM*"
+
+"It felt so satisfying to slam the door in their useless faces."
+
+"I turn around and leave, flipping off Trish through the window as I go."
+
+"She probably blames me for this show going wrong too."
+
+"That I sabotaged Fang’s guitar because it would make Trish look bad or something."
+
+scene door auditorium with fade
+
+"I run to the auditorium with only the sound of my footsteps echoing through the hallway."
+
+"I stop at the foyer to catch my breath."
+
+"My hands rest on the door, ready to push it open."
+
+"What do I even say to her?"
+
+"‘Just bear with it?’ ‘You still have friends?’"
+
+"All of that’s terrible."
+
+"At the same time, I can’t just stall here."
+
+"I push open the door softly."
+
+"The light spills through the foyer into the darkened chamber."
+
+"Spear’s jacket is thrown over one of the seats near me."
+
+"The door shuts behind me, leaving me in the dark."
+
+scene black with fade
+
+"I can only stand in the night-veiled room for my eyes to adjust."
+
+"From somewhere in the room, a faint sobbing echoes."
+
+A "Fang? You alright?"
+
+"Great opener. Fantastic."
+
+A "I mean, are you gonna be alright?"
+
+"The sobbing continues for a bit longer."
+
+F "... Nooo…"
+
+"I slowly follow her voice down the aisle, using the chairs as my guide."
+
+"By this point I can vaguely make out Fang sitting at the bottom of the stage."
+
+A "Fang?"
+
+"I’m standing before her now, and my eyes have adjusted just enough to make out some details of Fang’s face."
+
+"Such as her eyes looking… off…"
+
+A "Uh… Fang?"
+
+F "I didn’t fuck up."
+
+A "Huh?"
+
+F "I didn’t fuck up. Right, Anon?"
+
+A "...Nah… You did your best up there."
+
+"Fang’s voice started to take on a hiss."
+
+F "Yeah… Yeah… it’s all their fault. Right?"
+
+A "Whose?"
+
+F "Who the fuck else! Naser and that BITCH!"
+
+F "Fucking Naomi. She ruined this. She caused this all."
+
+F "If she had never come into my life."
+
+F "If she was never around Naser."
+
+F "If-"
+
+A "Fang!"
+
+"That startles Fang, making her mouth click shut."
+
+A "Look, forget all of that. It doesn’t matter. None of it matters."
+
+F "I-"
+
+A "Naomi doesn’t matter at all. She and her stupid plan don’t fucking matter."
+
+F "..."
+
+"My eyes have finally focused enough to make out the smashed bass at Fang’s feet."
+
+"I ignore it, instead reaching out for Fang’s shoulder."
+
+A "Hey…"
+
+A "I want you to do something for me, alright?"
+
+A "Just repeat after me."
+
+A "Alright?"
+
+"She doesn’t look at me, but nods her head a bit."
+
+A "It doesn’t matter."
+
+F "...it… It doesn’t matter."
+
+F "It doesn’t matter."
+
+"The hiss is back but I ignore it."
+
+F "It doesn’t matter."
+
+A "See? Feel better, right?"
+
+F "Y-yeah. I guess."
+
+F "Thanks, Anon."
+
+A "Good."
+
+A "So."
+
+A "Uh."
+
+F "...I don’t wanna be here."
+
+A "Oh."
+
+A "... Do you need me to walk you home?"
+
+F "..."
+
+F "Actually…"
+
+F "I uh…"
+
+F "Can I…"
+
+F "Stay at your place?"
+
+F "I… Don’t want to see Naser right now…"
+
+"I can feel my face practically glow at that thought."
+
+A "S-sure. Of course!"
+scene black with fade
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+A "Come on, let’s go home, Fang."
+
+"..."
+
+scene room anon dark
+
+"When I enter my apartment I remove my suit jacket and toss it on the floor unceremoniously."
+
+"I loosen the tie, but don’t bother to take it all the way off."
+
+"Fang collapses in my cot without a word."
+
+"Guess I’m sleeping on the floor tonight."
+
+A "You going to sleep already?"
+
+F "...Nooo…"
+
+"I frown as I see her hair sticky and clinging to her dumb dress shirt."
+
+A "Maybe you should take a shower. At least rinse the punch off."
+
+F "..."
+
+A "I’ve uh… I think I got some clothes for ya."
+
+F "...’kay…"
+
+"Fang gets up from my bed and trudges over to my bathroom."
+
+"Right. Clothes."
+
+"I open my closet and look at all my identical jackets."
+
+"Bulk buying seemed like a good idea at the time."
+
+"I take the spare dress shirt dad sent me. It’s super baggy even on me."
+
+"I think this was from that time I tried to cosplay."
+
+"I shudder at the memory."
+
+"I take that and some board shorts from my closet and kick it shut."
+
+"Okay I think this should… wait."
+
+"Wings and tail."
+
+"..."
+
+"Some minutes later with my knife and I hear the shower sputter to a stop."
+
+"I knock on the door and set the custom cut outfit on the floor for her."
+
+A "I set a change of clothes for you. Yell if you need me to do some more cutting."
+
+"With that I go back to my bed and consider what to do next."
+
+"Maybe a movie or something?"
+
+"Fuck. What would cheer her up."
+
+F "...Thanks…"
+
+scene roomthrash1 at Pan((0, 610),(0, 0), 30.0)
+
+"Fang plops down next to me, the hoodie falling down to her knees and hiding the shorts I gave her."
+
+"If only she wasn’t so depressed she’d look really cute right now."
+
+A "So… Wanna do something?"
+
+F "Play a game or something, I dunno…"
+
+F "I don’t want to sleep yet."
+
+A "Uhh… Sure…"
+
+"Fuck me sideways, what do I have that’s presentable to someone else…"
+
+"I got uhh… Kingdom he-no…"
+
+"Dark so-no…"
+
+"Senran- I feel retarded for even considering it, FUCK NO…"
+
+"Screw it, I'll just go with Rock Ring. That always calms you down."
+
+"Don’t get many opportunities these days to use The Duke, anyways."
+
+"I boot up the XROX and insert the Rock Ring 2 disc."
+scene roomthrash2 with dissolve
+"Fang flips over to see the TV as I take my spot on the floor sitting next to her."
+
+A "This one’s my favorite Rock Ring story."
+
+"I let the campaign intro play and turn to Fang."
+
+"She is just blankly staring at the screen, probably still thinking about earlier."
+
+A "You uhhh… wanna play first?"
+
+A "Might help take your mind off prom…"
+
+"Fang lets out a muffled sigh."
+
+F "I can just watch…"
+
+"I decide to skip the cutscenes and get right into the gameplay."
+
+"Repelling a bunch of dinosaurs from the volcano caves, easy enough."
+
+A "Playing with a torch and rock combo is the easiest way to kill enemies."
+
+A "Takes more skill than using a spear thrower at least."
+
+F "Yeah, cool…"
+
+F "Hey, Anon… You said something about Naomi having a ‘plan’ earlier. What did you mean by that?"
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+"Shit."
+
+"Uh oh, gotta tread real carefully here…"
+
+A "Thing is, uh… you know when I just transferred in and everything?"
+
+F "Yeah?"
+
+A "Well uh, Naomi kept… No, it’s nothing. Forget I said anything."
+
+"Fang sits up and is eye level with me."
+
+F "It’s not nothing. What. Did. She. Do?"
+
+A "Now’s not a good time, we should talk about it lat-"
+
+scene roomthrash3 with dissolve
+
+"Fang grabs me by the shirt collar with shaking fists."
+
+F "Tell me!"
+
+A "I-I-I can’t! Fang, get a hold of yourself!"
+
+scene roomthrash4 with dissolve
+
+"She jumps to her feet, carrying my shirt with her and lurching my head with it."
+F "DAMMIT ANON, WHAT HAVE YOU BEEN PLANNING WITH NAOMI?!"
+
+"Her free hand raises into a slashing position, clenched into a claw so her nails protrude like razors."
+
+F "TELL ME OR I’LL-"
+
+A "SHE PUT ME WITH YOU!"
+
+scene roomthrash5 with dissolve
+
+"All at once, Fang loses all energy in her body."
+
+"Her grip on my collar loosens and her clawed hand lowers."
+
+"All the tension has moved directly to her face."
+
+"I don’t think I’ve ever seen such a look of hopeless despair."
+
+"After what feels like a year of silence, I get the courage to stand again."
+
+A "..."
+
+A "...Naomi made it so the two of us were together."
+
+A "Naser’s always worrying about you, so she wanted to get his full attention…"
+
+A "...By trying to have someone ‘fix’ you."
+
+"Fang’s hands cradle her head, as though squeezing it hard enough would wake her up from this nightmare."
+
+A "Fang, I didn’t have any control over it…"
+
+A "You know I really do have feelings for you, I genuinely like you."
+
+A "It doesn’t matter what Naomi’s stupid ‘plans’ are, we still-"
+
+"Out of nowhere Fang’s energy returns into a fit of unrepressed rage."
+scene roomthrash6 with dissolve
+F "RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!"
+
+F "THAT STUPID BITCH!!"
+
+F "THAT, THAT, THAT GODDAMN SLUT!!"
+
+A "Fang! Calm down!"
+
+F "SHUT THE FUCK UP!!"
+
+F "YOU LITERAL, ACTUAL TOOL!!"
+
+"Fang, with no intention to vent her frustrations verbally, resorts to the next best thing."
+
+"Physical therapy."
+
+"The bedsheets are quickly discarded to the other side of the room in a clump."
+
+A "Fang, please!"
+
+"Fang is convulsing as though possessed, frantically looking for other things to ruin."
+
+"With a swift kick, the Duke is catapulted into the bathroom."
+
+A "Calm down! Don’t break anything!"
+
+"She starts kicking and punching the nearby shelf with all her might."
+
+A "Fang, stop, you’ll hurt yourself!"
+
+"My pleas are ignored, instead all I get are continued desperate grunts as she tries to pummel the wooden door."
+
+A "Fang, really, you need to stop-"
+
+"With one last scream, she punches clean through the shelf’s cabinet door, leaving a hole about the size of a football."
+
+A "THAT’S ENOUGH"
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+
+scene roomthrash7 with dissolve
+
+"While Fang is recoiling, I take the moment to grab her by the wrists and rush her over to sit on the bed."
+
+"Tears are streaming down her face as I shift my grip to her arms."
+
+F "I can’t even fall in love without HER interfering with it!"
+
+F "You don’t like me, you just wanted to change me to something I’m not to get Naomi off your back."
+scene roomthrash8 with dissolve
+A "That’s not true! Fang, listen to me. I do lo-"
+scene roomthrash9 with dissolve
+"The force makes me stumble back several feet."
+
+"Luckily, I manage to regain my balance before falling on my ass."
+
+"I raise my hands in a basic CQC stance."
+scene roomthrash10  with dissolve
+F "You took me away from my friends! You ruined our band!"
+
+A "What the hell are you talking about? I haven’t done any of that!"
+
+F "Well, Naomi is, and, and…"
+
+F "You’re just doing whatever Naomi wants!"
+
+A "Well then maybe Naomi had a point!"
+
+"A deafening silence permeates the room."
+
+"The malice radiating from Fang is as tense as a razor."
+
+scene roomthrash11 with dissolve
+
+"Eventually, the weight of the situation causes her to collapse into the bed completely."
+
+"Between sobs Fang tries squealing out more of her argument."
+
+F "Just-just shut up… I don’t…"
+
+F "I…"
+
+A "Here’s the reality, Fang."
+
+A "There are things about you that need fixing."
+
+A "That much I can agree with Naomi."
+
+A "And clearly, I can’t help you there."
+
+F "..."
+
+A "..."
+
+"Fang’s body tremors with her sobs."
+
+"Shit, was I too harsh on her?"
+
+A "Fang… I’m sorry."
+
+A "*sigh*"
+
+A "You’re right, I took you away from your friends and all that."
+
+A "I caused all this."
+
+F "No."
+
+F "You wish."
+
+F "That would be too much of an honor for you."
+
+play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
+"The phrase cuts to the bone."
+
+"I retrieve the bedsheets from the floor."
+
+A "Look…"
+
+A "You're tired, I'm tired, let's just sleep and think it over tomorrow"
+
+"As I drape the blanket over her shoulders, she reaches out to squeeze my hand."
+
+A "... I do love you, Fang."
+
+F "..."
+
+A "..."
+
+F "..."
+
+"She lets go."
+
+A "... Goodnight."
+
+"Fang curls into my blanket, staring at the wall away from me."
+scene room anon dark with fade
+"I hit the light switch and lie down across the room from the bed."
+
+"I’d use the felt blanket that exists in every house, but I’d frankly rather just sleep in my clothes."
+
+"The moonlight leaking through the curtain gives enough visibility for me to see Fang still silently weeping."
+
+"I watch from afar until her breathing becomes slow and rhythmic, the sort only achievable in a deep sleep."
+
+"What am I supposed to do about her?"
+
+"I’ll talk with her more about it in the morning…"
+
+"For now I’ll just try to get some shut-eye."
+
+"My heavy eyelids practically glue themselves shut, and I’m asleep within five minutes."
+stop music fadeout 1.0
+scene black with fade
+
+"..."
+
+jump chapter_10.0A
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